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Since part 1 is now in editing, time to start luring translators for part 2.

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This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Feb 23 2012, 18:14

oh god, I always loved this one (well, sans the incest at the beginning, but the Ran and Kazuha DP were fucking win ^^). My college is about to go on Christmas break, so I should be able to get this one relatively quickly. Before I accept though, could I get some details on the person who translated the first one? Was it either of the two people accepting it right now? Was it a ninja submission?

Nobody is currently working on P2, you are free to accept it. The ones accepting it are trolls. For P1 translator and editor info, see credits in that gallery.

I suspected they might be trolls, but just wanted to make sure on that. Well, I might not accept right away, as I anticipate a pretty big fansub project coming up, but with any luck, I can get that over with by next week.

Will be looking forward to it! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This a clarifying update that Yamato is still busy and the bounty is still open to any first taker.

This a clarifying update that Yamato is still busy and the bounty is still open to any first taker.

Is the translator position still open?

Yes; while there were several interested translators, none of them have time RIGHT NOW, and we have 4 volumes to do. So if you want to take the 2nd one, it's yours (don't forget to accept the bounty). When you've accepted it, I'll probably post the bounty for part 3, in case one of the other translators finds the time to work on the series (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Yes; while there were several interested translators, none of them have time RIGHT NOW, and we have 4 volumes to do. So if you want to take the 2nd one, it's yours (don't forget to accept the bounty). When you've accepted it, I'll probably post the bounty for part 3, in case one of the other translators finds the time to work on the series (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Sweet, I've claimed the bounty and I'll be working on the translation. If everything goes well, you'll get it within 2 weeks. I'll keep you posted.

Glad to hear that. Welcome to the EHCOVE!

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Feb 12 2012, 07:26

Glad to hear that. Welcome to the EHCOVE!

Done! Please check your pm. I did a basic spell-check but please have someone to proofread it.

Excellent. I'll post it here and edit myself with proofreading unless somebody posts comments before. Please feel free to claim the bounty.

Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5273

Title: Potemayo 2 (Potato Mayonnaise?? How is it relevant..?)

Note: Heiji, Shizuka and Kazuha speak Kansai-ben, which is commonly subbed with Southern American English.
You can change the wording/grammar according if needed.


Page 4

contents

Dangerous Vanilla Essence -- ZOL 5

Memorie's -- Yuri Akira 29

Wet Dreams -- Karakuribee 53


Page 5


Dangerous Vanilla Essence


Page 6

Shizuka: Heiji~, hey, Heiji!
What? It's summer vacation and you're a healthy young man! You're not going to slouch around when it's only noon, are you?

TV: Kyoubashi is a really awesome place!

Heiji: Hmm...

Shizuka: If you've nothing better to do, why don't you go to the beach with your mom?

Heiji: What kind of stupid idea is tha... *slurp*

Shizuka: How do I look?

*choke*


Page 7

Heiji: Wha!? Wh-wh-wh-what are you doing dressed like that!?

Shizuka: Your mom's still got it going on, don't you think? *squeeze*
You know, you father is always working and never spends any time on me... what else can I do but find myself a man at the beach? I'm so horny it's driving me crazy! *sits down*

Heiji: WHAT!?

Shizuka: How should I pose to get men to notice me on the beach? *twist twist*
*butt up* Maybe like this...?


Heiji: Cu...


Page 8

Heiji: Cut it out, damn!
You're just gonna be an embarrassment flaunting your saggy body like that! *unzip*
If you're so horny, then do me! *open* *flip*

Shizuka: hehe... You're such a good boy, Heiji. *touch*

Shizuka: *swallow* *suck* *squish*

Heiji: Hmmm...!

Shizuka: Hmmph.... Mmmfu... *pant pant* *squish squish* *pops out*


Page 9

Heiji: Look at these slutty boobs of yours... *pant pant pant pant* *pinch*

Shizuka: Guh....

*step step step*

Shizuka: Mmmhaa! *throb* *shoot*
So thick...it's been a while, hasn't it?

Heiji: Yeah, thanks to the old hag (obasan) who cleaned my room without asking
and threw away all my porn magazines and videos!


Shizuka: Fufufu... if you jerk off in your room alone... you're wasting the good stuff...
you can use my body whenever you want... *pant pant pant pant pant* *rub rub* *lick lick*


Page 10

*lick suck*

Heiji: You're so wet... what a pervert woman...
Hey, hey, don't suck so hard...

Shizuka: Fufu...all hard and ready.

*spead*

Shizuka: Heiji~~ Hurry~ *pant pant*

Heiji: Who would've thought that you're the wife of the Superintendent Supervisor...

*slide in*

Heiji: There! How's this for you!
What is it like to have your son's penis rammed into the whole where you squeezed him out in the first place!?

Shizuka: Mmmffuuu!
Good! So good! *pant pant pant*
Churn me up all the way inside! *thrust*


Page 11

*step step step*

*thrust* *squish*

Shizuka: Ahh! Aahaa! Amazing! *pant pant pant*

Heiji: *pant pant* Guh... I'm, I'm coming...

Shizuka: *pant pant pant pant* Inside... come
come inside me..!
Heiji's cum...all of it... *squish* *thrust*
Ah!


Page 12

Shizuka: Shoot your cum inside me, all of it...! *throb* *squish*

*open*

Kazuha: Heiji! Ran went missing, but now she's...
back...
ugh....


Page 13

Kazuha: Waaaaaaaaahhh!

Sign: Karaoke

Ran: Really~~ so Hattori-kun's been keeping such a secret... *gulp gulp*

Kazuha: Stupid Heiji, I can't believe he's like that...

Sonoko: (singing) Gah~ gah~ gah~ monkey dance~ is so passe~ What's hot now~ is~

Kazuha: *gulp* So maybe she's beautiful and sexy, but you OWN MOTHER~!?

Ran: Calm down~ anyway, stay in Tokyo all you want until you feel better, okay?

Sonoko: That's right! We have to celebrate our reunion with Ran finally!

Kazuha: Speaking of it, where have you been all this time, Ran-chan?

Ran: Hmm? Well, yeah, a lot happened.

Ran: When I came back, both dad and Conan-kun have disappeared, and the office belongs to someone else now~ but anyway I did whatever I could and managed to make enough money.

Kazuha: Huh...


Page 14

Man: Yo, Ran, A new girl, did you say?

Ran: You're soooo late~~ I'm all tired from the waiting~~!

Man: Hehe... sorry...

Kazuha: Who, who are these people...? You friends?

Ran: Oh, just my boy-toys! Their brains are like that of monkeys, but they sure can fuck like monkeys too! Wanna try? *fondle fondle*

Man: Ehehe, A pony-tail, huh? So innocent and fresh~ *grab* *spread*

Kazuha: Huh? Wa, wait...

My, my body... I can't move...

*spread*


Page 15


Kazuha: So...Sonoko-chan!

Sonoko: Aaahhaaaa..... *thrust*

Ran: Looks like the drug I mixed into your alcohol is working. Anyway, let's inject some "Neuro" into you.

*whoosh*

Kazuha: Argh...
*faint* Ra...Ran-chan, why are you with these guys.... why...why have you...changed... so much...?

Ran: I've stopped constantly worrying about everything. It's not like Shinichi will come back no matter how long I wait... so as long as I get you enjoy life now, there's no point thinking about the future, don't you think?

*slide*


Page 16

Kazuha: But, but that's.... No....no.... *shake*

Man: Woah! So huge! Awesome!

Kazuha: Ugh...

*suck*

Kazuha: No! *suck suck* *fondle*
Ah... no.. not there... sttoooppp!!
Ahh....ahh...

What, what's this feeling...

Ran: Fufu... you seem confused... don't worry, you will feel even better...

*thrust thrust thrust*


Page 17

Ran: *thrust thrust* *squish* So good! Harder! Deeper! *pant pant* Ahh...

Sonoko: *suck* Mmph! Mmmfu! *thrust thrust*
Aha! *splat* *shoot*
Hyah! Mmhaa! *flinch* *throb*


Page 18

Sonoko: More...gimme more... *pant pant* *spills*

Man: Geez, nothing can make this woman stop...
And she's supposed to be daughter of the wealthy tycoon. What a lady she is. (more accurately, Zaibatsu meaning insanely big and influential company that practically owns part of Japan. See: [en.wikipedia.org] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zaibatsu)

Kazuha: No... stop... don't...
lick anymore... it's driving me crazy... ahh..!

*lick lick lick*

Ran: Fufu, you came already?

Kazuha: Ah.... ah... *tremble tremble*

*pull*

Kazuha: no time to rest just yet, here comes the main event of the day ~


Page 19

Ran: You're going to feel real good soon...
Just relax.

*squish squish*

Sonoko: C'mon~~ hurry~

Man: Haha...what a nice piece of ass... makes me wanna suck on it. *press*

Kazuha: augh..!

*slide slide slide*

Kazuha: Aaah!


Page 20

*slide slide slide*

Sonoko: Eeeek!

*slide slide*

Ran: Aahfu!

*squish squish* *thrust thrust*

Girls: Haah! Aagh! Aaha!


Page 21

*thrust thrust* *squish*

A...amazing...!

*pant pant*

It's my first time, and yet...

Man: Hey hey, just had your cherry popped and it's feelin' good already~?

Kazuha: *pant pant * Ahaa, Ahfuu!

Man: This Neuro Tamer stuff sure is strong~!

Ran: *pant pant* fufu, don't think too hard, just enjoy it.

Sonokoa; *pant pant* That's right. Hattori-kun fools around too, so you can just do the same, Kazuha-chan.

Kazuha: *haaa*

Man: Here you go, Kazuha-chan, lesson one on how you can use your mouth~

*touch*


Page 22

I...why am I sucking on this thing without resisting...? *suck*

I wonder if Heiji will like it if I do this to him...

*squish squish* *suck* *thrust thrust*

*splat* *shoot*

*shoot shoot*

*shoot*

Kazuha: Mmmm, mmgah. *throb* *gulp*

I swallowed it...

a man I don't even know...

Man: I'm coming.


Page 23

*throb throb*

So hot...!

I can feel shivers down my spine...

Sonoko: come on me! Make me sticky all over~

Ran: This is not enough... spread my asshole too! *sticks up*

Sonoko: Me too~! Quickly~!

Man: Same for you too, right? Kazuha-chan?

Kazuha: Huh? No, but I'm not... *press*


Page 24

*slide in*

Kazuha: Aaagguuhh...!

Amazing... my mind.... is going blank...

Ran: ahha! *thrust*

Sonoko: Hiiiii-ah!


Page 25

Girls: Ah, ah, ah, ah!

Man: one an heiress and the other the superintendent's daughter, huh...
So, what are we gonna do with them?

Ran: This is perfect timing. At a secret spot nearby, a huge party is going to be held where the organization's sympathizers who are also VIPs in the finance world will attend. I was told to bring as many women as possible along.

Man: Wow, sounds like great fun! I wanna go too~

Ran: You maggots should be grateful for the chance to taste the scraps off the table already.

What on earth...

Am I doing...?


Page 26

label: 1-B Haibara


Page 27

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Page 28

Potemayo


Page 29

Memorie's II

Yuri Akira (could be "Yuu" instead of "Akira", please verify if you can)


Page 30

After P.E., sixth period on Friday, it's our weekly fun time.


Page 31

A secret between the two of us, that no one else knows


Page 32

It's Miwako's ritual to begin the preparation from morning.


Page 33

It's hard to bear and she's fill~ed with juice


Page 34

And sometimes, it's so good she'd come right away...


Page 35

lower right: And when Miwako's like that

upper left: she gets a small present


Page 36

How's this? Do you like it?


Page 37

I call it "Mother Turtle Play"


Page 38

It feels nice when the balls roll inside you, right?


Page 39

All~~ right, it's about time to give birth


Page 40

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Page 41

Wah!

There are so many!


Page 42

It's important to care for the mom after birth


Page 43

How was it...?

You still have a dreamy look on your face


Page 44

In that case


Page 45

I'll make the dream even better


Page 46

Oh!

Miwako is retaliating!


Page 47

Here!

A counterattack!


Page 48

Aahn! More on the hips, Freddy~! (it's taken from a parody porn movie "Nightmare on Dyke Street". The line's the slogan on the Japanese package. I have no idea how it is relevant...)
(link: [www.amazon.co.jp] http://www.amazon.co.jp/%E3%82%A8%E3%83%AD.../dp/B0040V53XO)

Page 49

What?

You can't hold yourself up anymore?


Page 50

You're


Page 51

such a baby


Page 52

What a troublesome

little kitten

Miwako: That's a LIE!

best friend: I told you, you're
a born 'neko'. (neko meaning bottom, the girl's role in a gay relationship)

Man: So it's really true, Miwa-chan...


Page 53

Wet dream

Karakuribee


Page 54

This is the wet dream I had

Ran: Here, look.
I'm all wet like this.

*squish squish*

Ran: Hey, can you here it?
The naughty sound that I'm making


Page 55

Ran: Put your finger in me...yeah.... deeper...
Ah!
Aaah!

*squish squish*

Ran: Touch my clitoris too...ah!


Page 56

*spread* *squish*

Ran: More...
Harder...
Ah!
Hmm!

Ran: yes, like that.

*slick*

Ran: Oooh, that's good.

*squish squish*


Page 57

Ran: My, my ass
my asshole too...
ah! Yeah, finger me harder

*twirl twirl*

Ran: Hmmm! This is great! *haah* *Ah*

Ran: Ah, I'm gonna, *jerk jerk jerk*
I'm gonna pee...

*splash*


Page 58


This is the wet dream I had

*lick lick*

Ran: Hmmm, Mmmph.
How many days have you been holding it in?
You're so hard already. *slide slide*

Ran: *suck* Mmm, Mmmph.
*suck suck* Fuu, mmm.


Page 59

*shoot*

Ran: Ahn!
Mmm, mmm. *throb throb*

*gulp*

*flinch flinch*

Ran: No.... this is not enough...


Page 60

Ran: I want more wee-wees. Hmmm, mmmph.

Ran: *squish squish lick lick lick* Come all over me,
make me all dirty


Page 61

Ran: *suck* Mmm, more.... mmm.

Ran: Fuummmm, mmm, *suck*, more... more...


Page 62

This is the wet dream I had

Ran: mmmm, mmmm.
*fuuuu*


Page 63

Ran: mmmmm, mmmph.

*slide*

*vibrate

*tear*

*stick*

Ran: mmha, mmmmm, mmmmph.


page 64

Ran: mm, mmm, mmmph.

*vibrate*

Ran: mmmmm-! *vibrate*

Ran: *pull* Hmm!


Page 65

*vibrate*

Ran: Mmm, haa, mmmph.

Ran: *squish* Mmm! Mmmmphhhmmm-!


Page 66


This is the wet dream I had

Ran: Pl, please.
please allow me to
put your thick long wee-wee inside me.
Mmm.
*slide slide* Mmmm!


Page 67

ran: Ahh! So thick...

*thrust thrust thrust*

Ran: Mmmha... Ah!

*thrust thrust8


Page 68

Ran: *pant pant* Amazing...
This is great... this wee-wee is the best! haaa, ah!
Ah! Haah!


Page 69

Ran: Haah, mmm.
*thrust thrust*
Ran: More, fuck me harder and deeper!
*thrust thrust*
Aaah! mmmhaa!


Page 70

Ran: Eh? No, not the ass... *press*
*pres press press* FFuuaaahhh...
Aaah, hhaaa, hhaa, mmmm, haah, noooo....


page 71

NO TEXT


Page 72


This is the wet dream I had

Sorry. I ran our of time...


Page 73

ZOL

Well... this turned out to be even worse than our last book, I'm so sorry about it. Maybe it's finally time to seriously consider the future direction of my doujin activities...
so, what am I gonna do?

under pic: dunno why but it's Alpenrose.


Page 74

This is the story script that made me realize the importance of "self-management" more than any other scripts in history...
Human is the kind of creature that becomes lazy if you let him... (am I making it sound like someone else's problem?) After the Winter comiket, I thought I'd give myself a break and started Ragnarok Online, and before I knew it, it's May already! I promise I'll improve my "self-management' this winter...yes. (sweat)


Page 75

Umm...it's "kuribee".
My manga this round.... is a mess...sorry.
Moreover, I couldn't only manage 20 pages...
Oh, but, when I was drawing this manga, I made some new discoveries, so please look forward to my next work... but really.... sorry...

-> Akari who's challenging the art of "women's figure GO"
by going naked and placing stones on her abdomen.


If I can read "Hikaru no Go" now, I'd be happy...


Page 76


Since we started Conan doujinshis, we've now reached our third book
!
Honestly we are worried that we don't know how long the story can keep on, but truth be told we're just going to see where it will take us in the end... (sweat). But then, this time, apart from Mr. Yuri, the schedules of the other 2 authors are really tight, so even as I'm writing this message, I don't actually know if we have publish the book on time... ><
But if you can read this message, it must mean we made it in the end... (Oh! But then, even if we published this in time for shops, it might not mean I made to to the comiket...!)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Feb 13 2012, 05:41

I'm gonna try to take a look at proofing this tomorrow. Red, could you PM me the raw TL? I'd like to have that and your proof.

My proofreading comments:

* page 9

obasan should be in some TL comments

* Page 10 "What is it like to have your son's penis rammed into the whole where you squeezed him out in the first place!?

hole not whole

and "from which" rather than "where"

* Page 15

"Neuro" -> drop the "", we used Neuro-Tamers in the first volume without quotation marks

"...so as long as I get you enjoy life now, there's no point thinking about the future, don't you think?" ->

"so as long as I get tp enjoy life now, there's no point to thinking about the future, don't you think?"

* p. 16

"the wealthy tycoon" -> ..."a wealthy tycoon"

Zaibatsu comment should go into some TL note

* p. 25

"one an heiress" -> "one a heiress"

"I was told to bring as many women as possible along" -> "I was told to bring along as many women as possible"

* p. 29

"Yuri Akira (could be "Yuu" instead of "Akira", please verify if you can)"

??

* Page 48

Another good TL comment, please preserve all TL comments in the editing somehow

* page 52

same

* p. 54

"Ran: Hey, can you here it?

hear not here

* p. 75

"Moreover, I couldn't only manage 20 pages..."

either could or change only to even

My edited proof, including some of Red's comments.

Title: Potemayo vol. 2

Note: Heiji, Shizuka and Kazuha speak Kansai-ben, which is commonly subbed with Southern American English.
You can change the wording/grammar according if needed.


Page 4

contents

Dangerous Vanilla Essence -- ZOL 5

Memorie's -- Yuri Tooru 29

Wet Dreams -- Karakuribee 53


Page 5

Dangerous Vanilla Essence


Page 6

Shizuka: Heiji~
Hey, Heiji!
What? It's summer vacation and you're a healthy young man! You're not going to laze around when it's only noon, are you?

TV: Kyoubashi is a really awesome place!

Heiji: Hmm...

Shizuka: If you've nothing better to do, why don't you go to the beach with your mom?

Heiji: What kind of stupid idea is tha... *slurp*

Shizuka: How do I look?

*choke*


Page 7

Heiji: Wha!? Wh-wh-wh-what are you doing dressed like that!?

Shizuka: Your mom's still got it going on, don't you think? *squeeze*
You know, your father is always working and never spends any time with me... What else can I do but find myself a man at the beach? I'm so horny it's driving me crazy! *sits down*

Heiji: WHAT!?

Shizuka: How should I pose to get men to notice me on the beach? *twist twist*

*butt up* Maybe like this...?

Heiji: Cu...


Page 8

Heiji: Cut it out, damn!

You're just gonna be an embarrassment flaunting your saggy body like that! *unzip*

If you're so horny, then do me! *open* *flip*

Shizuka: Hehe...
You're such a good boy, Heiji. *touch*

Shizuka: *swallow* *suck* *squish*

Heiji: Hmmm...!

Shizuka: Hmmph.... Mmmfu... *pant pant* *squish squish* *pops out*


Page 9

Heiji: Look at these slutty boobs of yours... *pant pant pant pant* *pinch*

Shizuka: Guh....

*step step step*

Shizuka: Mmmhaa! *throb* *shoot*

So thick... It's been a while, hasn't it?

Heiji: Yeah, thanks to the old hag* who cleaned my room without asking and threw away all my porn magazines and videos!
*Insert TL note: He says obasan, which generally means an older lady but the nuance can differ due to context.

Shizuka: Fufufu... If you jerk off in your room alone... you're wasting the good stuff...
You can use my body whenever you want... *pant pant pant pant pant* *rub rub* *lick lick*


Page 10

*lick suck*

Heiji: You're so wet... What a perverted woman...

Hey, hey, don't suck so hard...

Shizuka: Fufu... All hard and ready.

*spead*

Shizuka: Heiji~~ Hurry~ *pant pant*

Heiji: Who would've thought that you're the wife of the Superintendent Supervisor...

*slide in*

Heiji: There! How's this for you!
What is it like to have your son's penis rammed into the hole where you squeezed him out of in the first place!?

Shizuka: Mmmffuuu!

Good! So good! *pant pant pant*
Churn me up all the way inside! *thrust*


Page 11

*step step step*

*thrust* *squish*

Shizuka: Ahh!
Aahaa!
Amazing!
*pant pant pant*

Heiji: *pant pant* Guh... I'm, I'm coming...

Shizuka: *pant pant pant pant* Inside... come
come inside me..!
Heiji's cum... all of it... *squish* *thrust*

Ah!


Page 12

Shizuka: Shoot your cum inside me, all of it...! *throb* *squish*

*open*

Kazuha: Heiji! Ran went missing, but now she's...

back...

ugh....


Page 13

Kazuha: Waaaaaaaaahhh!

Sign: Karaoke

Ran: Really~~ So Hattori-kun's been keeping such a secret... *gulp gulp*

Kazuha: Stupid Heiji, I can't believe he's like that...

Sonoko: (singing) Gah~ gah~ gah~ monkey dance~ is so passe~ What's hot now~ is~

Kazuha: *gulp* So maybe she's beautiful and sexy, but your OWN MOTHER~!?

Ran: Calm down~ Anyway, stay in Tokyo all you want until you feel better, okay?

Sonoko: That's right! We have to celebrate our reunion with Ran finally!

Kazuha: Speaking of which, where have you been all this time, Ran-chan?

Ran: Hmm? Well, yeah, a lot happened.

Ran: When I came back, both dad and Conan-kun had disappeared, and the office belongs to someone else now~ But anyway, I did whatever I could and managed to make enough money.

Kazuha: Huh...


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Man: Yo, Ran, a new girl, you said?

Ran: You're soooo late~~ I'm all tired from the waiting~~!

Man: Hehe... sorry...

Kazuha: Who, who are these people...? Your friends?

Ran: Oh, just my boy-toys!
Their brains are like that of monkeys, but they sure can fuck like monkeys too! Wanna try? *fondle fondle*

Man: Ehehe, a pony-tail, huh? So innocent and fresh~ *grab* *spread*

Kazuha: Huh? Wa, wait...

My, my body... I can't move...

*spread*


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Kazuha: So...Sonoko-chan!

Sonoko: Aaahhaaaa..... *thrust*

Ran: Looks like the drug I mixed into your alcohol is working. Anyway, let's inject some Neuro into you.

*whoosh*

Kazuha: Argh...

*faint* Ra...Ran-chan, why are you with these guys.... Why...why have you...changed... so much...?

Ran: I've stopped constantly worrying about everything. It's not like Shinichi will come back no matter how long I wait... So as long as I get to enjoy life now, there's no point in thinking about the future, don't you think?

*slide*


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Kazuha: But, but that's.... No....no.... *shake*

Man: Whoa! So huge! Awesome!

Kazuha: Ugh...

*suck*

Kazuha: No! *suck suck* *fondle*
Ah... no... not there... sttoooppp!!

Ahh... ahh...

What, what's this feeling...

Ran: Fufu, you seem confused... Don't worry, you will feel even better...

*thrust thrust thrust*


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Ran: *thrust thrust* *squish* So good!
Harder! Deeper!
*pant pant*
Ahh...

Sonoko: *suck* Mmph!
Mmmfu! *thrust thrust*

Aha! *splat* *shoot*

Hyah! Mmhaa! *flinch* *throb*


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Sonoko: More... Gimme more... *pant pant* *spills*

Man: Geez, nothing can make this woman stop...
And she's supposed to be the daughter of a wealthy tycoon*. What a lady she is.
*Insert TL note: He says zaibatsu, which are huge, family-run, monopoly-like conglomerates. See: [en.wikipedia.org] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zaibatsu

Kazuha: No... stop... don't...
lick anymore... it's driving me crazy... ahh..!

*lick lick lick*

Ran: Fufu, you came already?

Kazuha: Ah.... ah... *tremble tremble*

*pull*

Man: No time to rest just yet, here comes the main event of the day~


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Ran: You're going to feel real good soon...
Just relax.

*squish squish*

Sonoko: C'mon~~ Hurry~

Man: Haha... What a nice piece of ass... makes me wanna suck on it. *press*

Kazuha: Augh..!

*slide slide slide*

Kazuha: Aaah!


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*slide slide slide*

Sonoko: Eeeek!

*slide slide*

Ran: Aahfu!

*squish squish* *thrust thrust*

Girls: Haah!
Aagh!
Aaha!


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*thrust thrust* *squish*

A...amazing...!

*pant pant*

It's my first time, and yet...

Man: Hey hey, just had your cherry popped and it's feelin' good already~?

Kazuha: *pant pant * Ahaa, Ahfuu!

Man: This Neuro-Tamer stuff sure is strong~!

Ran: *pant pant* Fufu, don't think too hard, just enjoy it.

Sonoko: *pant pant* That's right. Hattori-kun fools around too, so you can just do the same, Kazuha-chan.

Kazuha: *haaa*

Man: Here you go, Kazuha-chan, lesson one on how you can use your mouth~

*touch*


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I... Why am I sucking on this thing without resisting...? *suck*

I wonder if Heiji will like it if I do this to him...

*squish squish* *suck* *thrust thrust*

*splat* *shoot*

*shoot shoot*

*shoot*

Kazuha: Mmmm, mmgah. *throb* *gulp*

I swallowed it...

A man I don't even know...

Man: I'm coming.


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*throb throb*

So hot...!

I can feel shivers down my spine...

Sonoko: Come on me! Make me sticky all over~

Ran: This is not enough... Spread my asshole too! *sticks up*

Sonoko: Me too~! Quickly~!

Man: Same for you too, right, Kazuha-chan?

Kazuha: Huh? No, but I'm not... *press*


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*slide in*

Kazuha: Aaagguuhh...!

Amazing... my mind.... is going blank...

Ran: Ahha! *thrust*

Sonoko: Hiiiii-ah!


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Girls: Ah!
Ah!
Ah!
Ah!

Man: One is an heiress and the other is the superintendent's daughter, huh... So, what are we gonna do with them?

Ran: This is perfect timing. At a secret place nearby, a huge party is going to be held where the Organization's supporters who are also VIPs in the financial world will attend. I was told to bring along as many women as possible.

Man: Wow, sounds like great fun! I wanna go too~

Ran: You maggots should be grateful for the chance to taste the scraps off the table already.

What on earth...
Am I doing...?


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label: 1-B Haibara


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Potemayo


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Memorie's II

Yuri Tooru**
**This is how the author's name was transcribed in Memorie's I from Potemay volume 1.


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After P.E., sixth period on Friday, it's our weekly fun time.


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A secret between the two of us that no one else knows.


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It's Miwako's ritual to begin the preparation from morning.


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It's hard to bear and she's fill~ed with juice


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And sometimes, it's so good that she'd come right away...


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lower right: And when Miwako's like that

upper left: she gets a small present.


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How's this? Do you like it?


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I call it "Mother Turtle Play".


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It feels nice when the balls roll inside you, right?


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All~~ right, it's about time to give birth~


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Wah~! There are so many~!


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It's important to care for the mom after birth~


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How was it...?

You still have a dreamy look on your face


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In that case


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I'll make the dream even better


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Oh!

Miwako is retaliating~!


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Here! A counterattack~!


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Aahn!
More on the hips, Freddy~!*
*Insert TL note: From a parody porn movie "Nightmare on Dyke Street". The line's the slogan on the Japanese package.

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What?

You can't hold yourself up anymore?


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You're


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such a baby.


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What a troublesome

little kitten.

Miwako: That's a LIE!

best friend: I told you, you're
a born 'neko'*.
*Insert TL note: Neko meaning the bottom, or the feminine role, in a same-sex relationship.

Man: So it's really true, Miwa-chan...


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Wet Dream

Karakuribee


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This is the wet dream I had

Ran: Here, look.
I'm all wet like this.

*squish squish*

Ran: Hey, can you hear it? The naughty sound that I'm making.


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Ran: Put your finger in me... Yeah.... Deeper...

Ah!
Aaah!

*squish squish*

Ran: Touch my clitoris too... ah!


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*spread* *squish*

Ran: More...
Harder...
Ah!
Hmm!

Ran: Yes, like that.

*slick*

Ran: Oooh, that's good.

*squish squish*


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Ran: My, my ass
my asshole too...

Ah! Yeah, finger me harder

*twirl twirl*

Ran: Hmmm! This is great!
Haah
Ah

Ran: Ah, I'm gonna... *jerk jerk jerk*
I'm gonna pee...

*splash*


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This is the wet dream I had

*lick lick*

Ran: Hmmm
Mmmph

How many days have you been holding it in?
You're so hard already. *slide slide*

Ran: Mmm
*suck*
Mmmph

*suck suck*
Fuu
Mmm


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*shoot*

Ran: Ahn!

Mmm
Mmm *throb throb*

*gulp*

*flinch flinch*

Ran: No.... This is not enough...


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Ran: I want more wee-wees.
Hmmm
Mmmph

Ran: *squish squish lick lick lick*
Come all over me...
...make me all dirty.


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Ran: *suck* Mmm
More...
Mmm

Ran: Fuummmm
Mmm
*suck*
More...
More...


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This is the wet dream I had

Ran: Mmmmm
Mmmm

*fuuuu*


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Ran: Mmmmm
Mmmph

*slide*

*vibrate

*tear*

*stick*

Ran: Mmha
Mmmmm
Mmmmph


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Ran: Mm
Mmm
Mmmph

*vibrate*

Ran: Mmmmm-! *vibrate*

Ran: *pull* Hmm!


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*vibrate*

Ran: Mmm
Haa
Mmmph

Ran: *squish*
Mmm!
Mmmmphhhmmm-!


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This is the wet dream I had

Ran: Pl, please.

Please allow me to
put your thick long wee-wee inside me.

Mmm.

*slide slide*
Mmmm!


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Ran: Ahh! So thick...

*thrust thrust thrust*

Ran: Mmmha...
Ah!

*thrust thrust*


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Ran: *pant pant*
Amazing...

This is great... This wee-wee is the best!
Haaa
Ah!

Ah!
Haah!


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Ran: Haah
Mmm.

*thrust thrust*

Ran: More! Fuck me harder and deeper!

*thrust thrust*
Aaah!
Mmmhaa!


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Ran: Eh?
No, not the ass...

*press*

*pres press press*

FFuuaaahhh...

Aaah
Hhaaa
Hhaa
Mmmm
Haah
Noooo....


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This is the wet dream I had

Sorry. I ran out of time...


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ZOL

Well... this turned out to be even worse than our last book, I'm so sorry about it. Maybe it's finally time to seriously consider the future direction of my doujin activities...

So, what am I gonna do?

under pic: Dunno why but it's Alpenrose.


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This is the story script that made me realize the importance of "self-management" more than any other scripts in history...
Humans are the kind of creatures that becomes lazy if you let them... (Am I making it sound like someone else's problem?)
After the Winter Comiket, I thought I'd give myself a break and started Ragnarok Online, and before I knew it, it's May already! I promise I'll improve my "self-management" this winter...yes. (sweat)
Yuri Tooru


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Umm...it's "kuribee".
My manga this round.... is a mess... sorry.
Moreover, I could only manage 20 pages...
Oh, but, when I was drawing this manga, I made some new discoveries, so please look forward to my next work... but really.... sorry...

-> Akari who's challenging the art of "women's figure Go*" by going naked and placing the stones on her abdomen.
*Insert TL note: A Japanese board game similar to Reversi/Othello. See: [en.wikipedia.org] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Go_(game)

If I can read "Hikaru no Go" now, I'd be happy...


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Since we started Conan doujinshis, we've now reached our third book~! Honestly, we are worried that we don't know how long the story can keep on, but truth be told we're just going to see where it will take us in the end... (sweat). But then, this time, apart from Yuri-san, the schedules of the other 2 authors are really tight, so even as I'm writing this message, I don't actually know if we can publish the book on time... ><
But if you can read this message, it must mean we made it in the end... (Oh! But then, even if we published this in time for shops, it might not mean I made to the Comiket...!)

Excellent. Note to editor: please include mal as a proofreader in credits!

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Feb 16 2012, 02:10

I can do the editing if no one's interested - I've been wanting to see this translated for a while.

I can do the editing if no one's interested - I've been wanting to see this translated for a while.

You are welcome to it, nobody else have stepped forward so far (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Please accept the bounty when you are sure you want to work on it.

Alright then, I'll start working on it.

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