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Can someone translate these two pages?

https://e-hentai.org/s/cdc79cc98e/982444-4
https://e-hentai.org/s/2c4aa9d036/982444-5

Thank you so much!

One last help, so I can upload his image set. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

One last help, so I can upload his image set. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Did it all come out?

You're definitely not weird and I'd like to know too. I hope someone better qualified will give an answer, but in the meantime I'll at least share some options and thoughts.

- Anytime you see some ん, consider writing all or some of them as ms, rather than n. (or some similar guttural sounding letters)
Example: んんん -> mmmh. / Mmnh / Ghmnm/ Hmnn
- As shown above, adding some hs is ok.
Example: あううう -> Auuuh
- Dashes are probably not that used, but they are at least worth considering.
Example: ひぐうう -> Hi-guuuh
- Japanese can sometimes rely on vocals to convey pitch: い is high sounding, う low sounding for instance. In English capiTAL LETters are an option to consider.
Example: ひぐうう -> hGUuh

Thank you so much for your input. I definitely think that mmmm instead of nnnn is much better in english, and also H's in general seem to make the sounds look a lot more complete. Always felt like they were just missing something before and this helped me fix them a bit.

As another question, can anyone tell me what the 一体みしないと。。。 line here is getting at? I was checking through a translation and I submitted and noticed I missed it. I don't know what the み is supposed to be.

(IMG:[puu.sh] http://puu.sh/rWM78/eb517f8711.jpg)

Edit: Shit I'm an idiot. I spent 30 minutes staring at my transcript not realizing I typed it wrong and it's actually 一休 not 一体.

This post has been edited by Diddy_: Oct 27 2016, 02:43

Did it all come out?

Thanks, Mate. May H-God bless you abundantly.

Quite a few sentences beyond my abilities.

https://e-hentai.org/s/9439c0700e/795240-84
人当たりの良い性格で弟のオレから見てもけっこう美人と思える容姿に...
I can't get to know who has a nice character...

https://e-hentai.org/s/c21016f98d/795240-87
ドンッと 主張しつつも 少しも垂れない 張りのある肉付き
...と思わせつつも そこに下品さはなく 美しくさえある...
学内一の 尻ソムリエと言われる オレを唸らせる 素晴らしい尻だ さすが姉ちゃん...
Ass sommelier!? Expert on asses?

https://e-hentai.org/s/6fc99ccde8/795240-96
私...お尻でも イケちゃう娘 だったんだ...
Not sure what でも stands for so I can't read it.

Ah. Forgot this one.
https://e-hentai.org/s/842775c7cf/795240-100
同時にしぇめられりゃと ???

This post has been edited by bfrost: Oct 28 2016, 04:26

I'll mostly try to stay literal, so it's easier to reverse-engineer the structure.

https://e-hentai.org/s/9439c0700e/795240-84
人当たりの良い性格で弟のオレから見てもけっこう美人と思える容姿に...

She has a sociable personality, and her appearance is such that me, her brother, can still think of her as quite the beauty

https://e-hentai.org/s/c21016f98d/795240-87
ドンッと 主張しつつも 少しも垂れない 張りのある肉付き
[少し大きいかな]...と思わせつつも そこに下品さはなく 美しくさえある...
学内一の 尻ソムリエと言われる オレを唸らせる 素晴らしい尻だ さすが姉ちゃん...

Young tight meat, not caring about what I assert
'Isn't it pretty big?'... it makes me think that, but there's no vulgarity, only beauty...
A butt capable of making me, known throughout the school as the butt connoisseur, gasp in awe... No less from sis.

https://e-hentai.org/s/6fc99ccde8/795240-96
私...お尻でも イケちゃう娘 だったんだ...

I... I was a girl who can come even if it's (because of/through) her butt...
(お尻で・も)

https://e-hentai.org/s/842775c7cf/795240-100
同時にしぇめられりゃと

If you tease/ attack (both) at the same time
(しぇめられりゃ:　せめられりゃ:　せめられれば）

hey, about these lines:


私はもう堕ろすのイヤよ?
子供産めなくなっちゃう

I understand this as: "I don't want to abort. I'll become unable to give birth"

However they were translated as:

"Will you hate me if I tell you to pull out? I don't want to get pregnant"

What do you think?

Also this other line from a different work:

くせぇわき毛マン毛のオプション付よ
The speaker is a girl describing her own hairy body.
How would you translate that オプション付?

hey, about these lines:
私はもう堕ろすのイヤよ?
子供産めなくなっちゃう

I understand this as: "I don't want to abort. I'll become unable to give birth"

However they were translated as:

"Will you hate me if I tell you to pull out? I don't want to get pregnant"

What do you think?

Also this other line from a different work:

くせぇわき毛マン毛のオプション付よ
The speaker is a girl describing her own hairy body.
How would you translate that オプション付?

Seems like for the first part the person just translated wrong unless their were some lines which absolutely wouldn't make sense in English but I doubt it.

For オプション付, I would say its a phrase you would see a lot if you browse a deri heri (Japanese Call Girl Service). In the general sense, it means that those "options" are "on the table" for a particular girl if you pay a certain price range. For this one, it almost seems like maybe whatever dude she's with gets off on her pussy/armpit stink and she's ready for either. Wouldn't want to give a full translation without more context though.

This post has been edited by JuliusWinnfield: Oct 28 2016, 14:16

hey, about these lines:
私はもう堕ろすのイヤよ?
子供産めなくなっちゃう

I understand this as: "I don't want to abort. I'll become unable to give birth"

However they were translated as:

"Will you hate me if I tell you to pull out? I don't want to get pregnant"

What do you think?

Also this other line from a different work:

くせぇわき毛マン毛のオプション付よ
The speaker is a girl describing her own hairy body.
How would you translate that オプション付?

Option can also mean a-la-carte in a sense. As an example, here's the "Option Price Table" from a call girl service I looked up in Tokyo.

オプション \料金
つば・パンチラ・他 \500-
足コキ・オナホ・他 \1,000-
コスプレ生着替え・他 \1,500-
乳首舐め・他 \2,000-
生乳たっち・他 \3,000-
オールヌード・他 \4,000-
ディープキス・他 \5,000-

Thanks pundeiu. It's still not 100% crystal-clear to me at the moment but I should be able to handle those lines now.

Hello,
Can someone please translated this page for me.

Reading the page and rereading the sentence, I'm not so sure of my previous interpretation...
It could be something like,
I'd happily give myself to her, if only I were a woman...
(Implied reasoning being, he's attracted by her but doesn't want to lose man pride or something)
Sorry for flip flopping, hope this still somewhat helps.

Don't worry, I think there's a possibility that the author could have wanted to maintain certain ambiguity about that. I saw a meme with 操を捧げる that had a girl readingly taking her clothes off, so I guess it used the meaning of giving one's virginity away.

Seems like for the first part the person just translated wrong unless their were some lines which absolutely wouldn't make sense in English but I doubt it.

For オプション付, I would say its a phrase you would see a lot if you browse a deri heri (Japanese Call Girl Service). In the general sense, it means that those "options" are "on the table" for a particular girl if you pay a certain price range. For this one, it almost seems like maybe whatever dude she's with gets off on her pussy/armpit stink and she's ready for either. Wouldn't want to give a full translation without more context though.

Thanks for the info, man. That works for me (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Hello,
Can someone please translated this page for me.

Please, I really need this page.

Please, I really need this page.

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=171495
In this thread people are more inclined to help out other translators in need, or editors needing little things (titles or bubbles translators missed).
For a whole page or more, you would probably have better luck making a separate thread on the Translation Request forum.

秀郷
Hide-gou? (his real name is Hideyoshi)

秀郷
Hide-gou? (his real name is Hideyoshi)

I saw Hidesato when I looked it up in the dictionary.

Probably a pretty easy question but...what the hell is the deal with 犯す...it seems like it means "to rape" a lot of the time but also just "to fuck forcefully" other times. Do you guys just choose which to emphasize based on context?

秀郷
Hide-gou? (his real name is Hideyoshi)

Could that be a typo? That really seems to want to be an honorific suffix, and 卿　happens to be one: きょう, sir/lord.