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> [COMPLETED] [Red's 28th Individual Bounty] (C73) [Studio Katsudon (Manabe Jouji)] Kemono-tachi no Bansan 3 (Monster Princess | Princess Resurrection), Job: 23 pages. Reward: 25,000 C + 25 Hath

 
post Nov 4 2011, 02:52
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Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.

This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.

This is my 28th individual (no project) translation bounty.

Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/122127/de463945e4/

If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post in the relevant forum thread (which has more details on the bounty):

Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.

In addition to the carriers listed, you can also just post the translation in the forums.

Also:
* Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty;
* broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted;
* yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present;
* yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak);
* if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it;
* if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me);
* crappy editing will not be accepted;
* please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, and the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host. Sample credit page: link;
* those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here);
* if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) );

Helpful links for the translators: Guide for New & Potential Translators, Japanese slang, a guide on Japanese onomatopoeia (Tonigobe), [www.writtensound.com] www.writtensound.com, Bad translations. Examples of.

Helpful links for the editors: Comprehensive editing guide, Your Tips for Manga Editing!

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post Feb 16 2012, 15:15
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Anything you need just tell me!

P4:
What...is this smell?

What smell?

Hime! (or mi-lady or princess)

Ah~it's like the animal's stinky smell.

Forget about that.
Call Lisa over here, it's about time for dinner.

Ah ok.

Wow Hime.
Such a bad taste.

What are you talking about?

I’m only trying to get rid of the annoying tasks…

Lisa~
Time to eat~
Lisa~!

Can I come in?

Whoa! Smells good…!
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P5:
(all sounds effects)
Mmm~ahh!

P6:
L…Lisa?!
What in the world are you…!!

H…Hero~

I can’t…

My body…it burning…
And I’m on it too! (I’m doing itby myself already)

No matter how I do it, it won’t go away!
Damn it!

P7:
Could…could this be this female werewolf’s estrus? (found this word by dictionary: mating season, period of heat)

S…so this smell…is luring the men…

Ah~ makes me feel dizzy…

A…anyways, Lisa!
I’m gonna try to make you better.

Don’t…don’t come any closer!
Don’t touch me!
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P8:
Y…you stupid…
That’s why I told you…

P9:
Whoa! Wait a sec! Lisa!
That’s…

S…shut up!
You saw me shoot out water… (can’t find the word for it)
And yours is…

Look~!

It’s this big and hard already.

あう…
姫~
Ah~ Hime~
You know this would happen…that’s why you sent me~

P10:
Ah! Lisa’s tongue is so good!

I can feel the end of her throat…?!
The moving tongue…feels so good!

Like it’s sucking everything in…
It’s making my mind blank~~~!

P11:
Lisa!
I can’t hold it anymore!
I’m cumming!

O…OK! Let it out!
All…I will drink all of it!

P12:
Ah~ forget it!
It’s not even going away!

I guess you have to come in after all!

Eh?!

Stop finding excuses and take of your clothes!

You don’t think you could get away after making me this wet, do you?

N…no! It was way too alluring!

Whatever! Just get on with it!

I’ll give you a nice petting after with my puffy paws!
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P13:
Stop standing there…
Please…quickly~!

Lisa…

This is my first time seeing Lisa like this…

So cute…<3

If you lick there…I’m gonna…!

Lisa’s vagina…smells good…

S…shut up!

P14:
Ah…
There…

It’s so much…

Ughh…I’m losing power…!

P15:
You…stupid…
This is not…how I want!

Ah~ why do you keep doing it!

You made me come…

With my butt hole.

P16:
入れたいっ!!
I wanna go in.

リサの中に!
Inside Lisa!

んあっ
いきなりかぁ!
Mmm~ ahh!
So suddenly!

P17:
(all sound effects)
Ahh!!!

P18:
ヒロぉ…っ!
Hero…!

More…give me more!

そう
奥に…っ!!
Yes!
Deeper…!

Give me all you’ve got!
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P19:
Amazing…!
It’s unbelievable!

Lisa’s inside…
So warm and wet…

I…I’m cumming!

P20:
You cummed so much…Hero…

It’s…it’s not over yet, Lisa!

Eh?

Now I can’t stop!

H…Hero…
You…

I can still go for more!
Inside of Lisa!

P21:
So deep…!
Mmm…ahh!

Haa…!
All the way to the end…

I…if you keep going like this…

I…!!

P22:
(all sound effects)
Mmm~ ahh!

P23:
Uh…
It’s…

I’m so sorry!
It’s…
Because you were so cute and attractive…
I couldn’t resist…
I did it all the way…!

Listen~
Hero

You know if a wolf did it once, it’ll be loyal forever~ <3

Eh…it means…

Hmm…?

Alright~
Food~ food~!

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post Feb 16 2012, 22:13
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Looks quite good. Needs p.3, p.29 and I think page numbering is slightly off (script should end with p.23 not p.22..)?
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post Feb 17 2012, 11:14
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Here are P3 and P29.
P22 is actually P23 because P22 is all sound effects. I've already changed that above.

P3:
This is the new title “Kedamono-tachi no Bansan” series established by Manabe Jouji in 2007. After Riru from Majipoka, and Arufu from Nanoha series, the 3rd is based on Monster Princess. I just noticed that, from the start of my beast girl series, all 3 heroines are wolf girls. Isn’t that a coincidence?

I only know about the Monster Princess anime series. This book is basically based on the anime. I did this without reading the original series. Well, there’s no specific reason why I didn’t read the original series. Even though it’s an anime, the artwork looks kind of rough. If you don’t watch it carefully, you might not even get 1/3 of it. Lisa’s debut is making me cry…or something like that.

My next possible target is Mao from the Shining…something series. She will be the candidate for my next beast girl series. I can not tell you anymore further information… Maybe I will encounter more incredible artworks later on.

What kind of beast-eared characters will I get to see next year? If there’s nothing then I’ll go for the cat-ears~

P29:
[Cut: Gandaman]

PUBLICATION: Studio Katsudon
PUBLISHER: Manabe Jouji
CONTACT: (postal code) 176-0011
Tokyo, Renma, Toyotamajou 1-10-10-802
PRINT: Sunrise
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Looks good. Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5307

Proofreading notes:

I am not sure why you sometimes keep the original text?

I'd use TL notes for hime and estrus. I'd add a TL note for Hero that it is a name, too.

P9: "You saw me shoot out water… (can’t find the word for it)" - squirt?



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post Feb 20 2012, 20:56
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Since TZ forgot to mention it here and I got a query from another editor: he is editing this dojin.

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post Feb 21 2012, 06:53
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I'm forgot, so sorry...
I finished it and sent Red the archive.
The translator ks198688 didn't translate a lot of moan bubbles =.=
It's good thing they are all in hiragana (can't read kanji XP)
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Will post soon. Few tweaks, I just realized that the female character name is not Lisa but Riza (confirmed by Wikipedia and our character tags). Doh!
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And done: https://e-hentai.org/g/467831/9efd234200/
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