[X] My Assistant

Because: full color short Haruhi dojin, I've no idea why nobody translated it yet.

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Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.<br /><br />This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.<br /><br />Gallery link:https://e-hentai.org/g/15008/2c89312a58/<br[/url] /><br />If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post in the relevant forum thread (which has more details on the bounty): n/a<br /><br />Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.<br /><br />In addition to the carriers listed, you should post the translation in the forums.

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Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.

This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.

This is my 40th individual (no project) translation bounty. This release will be under an [EHCOVE] group tag. You (the translator) will be credited for your work on a credit page unless you want to be anonymous.

Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/15008/2c89312a58/

If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2-3 weeks and you are unresponsive, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.

Also:
* Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty;
* broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted;
* yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present;
* yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak);
* if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it;
* if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me);
* crappy editing will not be accepted;
* please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, as well as the name of any other major sponsors for the translation and editing (check bounties). Also, note this is an [EHCOVE] release, add a link to the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host, and invite readers to use our bounty system or join us as editors/translators. Sample credit pages: link;link, link and (now that's cool!) link;
* those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here);
* if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) );
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translation bounty finished by maipantsu

script: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?dc25s568qzlfgx4
pass: red

now looking for an editor, editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=7337

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here's the full script just in case


k kyon
i koizumi
h haruhi
m other students
y yuki
t tsuruya
b text box




t Three-Man Cell




002

panel1
b I'm gonna tell you how we got here.
b Sparing you the boring parts...

panel2
h Ha!
h Haa! Haa!
h Haa!

panel3
b Haruhi wants me to make a publicity video with her, or maybe we should call it with its name...
h Hnm!
h Hnn!
h Ahmp!
h Ah... Gh!
b It's an amateur porn movie with sex in it.

panel4
h ..!
h Damn it, Kyon! Why can't you get it hard enough? This is your fault!
sfx Ahm! (this is the sfx on the top left, spoken out in the next bubble)

panel5
h "Ahm"?




003

panel1
h Wha..?!

panel2
t Since you looked troubled, Harunyan, I though I'd come here and give you a hand!
h Give me a hand..? I can do this it on my own thank you very much!!

panel3
t But if you can't get a proper erection you two can't do it, you know?
t Auhm!
t Hnnm!
sfx Squeeze! (bubble sfx, at haruhi's hand)
h Uugh...




004

panel2
t Harunyan, since you seem to like Kyon's dick so much...
h I d-don't really like it that much, you know...
h Mumble mumble... (blue on bubble side)
t ...I'm gonna show you how to do it with Itsuki's one!

panel3
t Hahke ih ahh ihn hou houhsh! (take it all in your mouth!)
t Hn!

panel4
h Hnmp!
h Hnn!




005

panel1
t Hua!

panel2
m I can't hold back anymore!
t Aaaah!!

panel3
t Ah! (3x)
t Haa!
t Aah!
t Hn!
t Hn! Huaaah!! If you wanna stick it in just ask, ok?

panel4
t Ah! (2x)
sfx Squeeze! (her hand)
t Hyah!
t Ah! Ah! Ah! Yes!! Being fucked so hard by a dick really brings you back to life!




006

panel2
h Haa!
sfx Pinch!
g Aaah!!

panel3
y ...nd the nipples appear to be fully erected. Furthermore, blood is rushing to the clitoris: swelling confirmed.
y ...in order to reduce the defloration damage to a minimum you will have my continuated assistance.
h Hnn!
h Ha!
h Ah!
h ........!
b "It's ok to stick it in now", I guess...

panel4
h Ha!
h Hnn..!




007

panel1
h It hurts!
h It huuuurts!! Haaaa!
h Ah!
h Agh!

panel2
b So next is Yuki, huh...

panel3
y ...

panel4
y ..!!
b Looks like the first time is something painful for our Yuki too...




008

panel1
h Ah!
h Haa!
h Hnn!
h Haaa... Hn! Hua! Ah! Aahn!!
h Hnn..! Hngh..! Hnaah! Ah! Ah! Uaaahnn!!

panel3
t Ahn!
t Huaa!!
m Aah..! Tsuruya, your tits are just amazing!!
t Ahaha! Hfanhyou! (Thank you!)
m Ugh... Your blowjob too, it's so wet..!




009

panel1
k I think it's time for me to join, but...
t Ha!
t Ahn! (top left)
t Hnah! (middle/thigh)
m Look, her ass is free.

panel2
m Is it ok if I put it in t-there?
sfx Stand! (nipple)
sfx Nod! (margin of panel)
t ...
t Ah!




010

panel1
t Ah!!
t Ghaaa!!
t Aah..! Ghood! Aaah!! Sho ghooood!!
t Haaa!
t Aaaaaaah!!
t My pussy and my ass are both being fucked so hard, so many dicks!

panel2
t Ahn... I'm gonna cum! I'm really gonna cum so...

panel3
t Guys..!
t Ha!
t Hnn!
t Hnah!
t ...give it to meee!!




011

panel1
h Nooooo! Not insideeeeee!!
h Haa!
h Ah!

panel2
y Your sperm... Is thick...
y ...the thickness is 2.7 times higher than when you masturbate...
k How do you know that?!

panel3
t Semeeen!
t Semen's coming out!
t Spurt it all out!

panel4
? Huu... Now I have a scene with everybody, right?
? ...there's still me.




012

panel1
k Eh?

panel2
h Kyon... This is everybody's publicity video...
h Don't forget that.

panel3
i Yeah, don't be scared, everything's going to be all right.
i I'll be gentle.

panel4
k S..!
k Stay away from meeeeeeeeee!!!

panel5
k Noooooooo..!

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: May 8 2013, 10:44

Any body picked up the editing bounty yet? I gladly will.

I'm a new editor and have finished the first three pages. Anybody have any comments or advice?
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This post has been edited by psudeonl: Mar 17 2013, 15:43

I think they look pretty good. I'll post a cross request in the editors thread (here), should get us more replies.

I'm only nitpicking so feel free to ignore me.

Panel 1
-first box, text takes up too much space and leaves no breathing room. Also break it so 'tell you' and 'how we' share a level.
-second box, text is slightly too high and uneven.

Panel 2
-first box, also a bit too big, and have 'a publicity' share a line.
-second box, have 'in it' share the bottom line.

Panel 3
-spiky bubble, try to realign text to contour bubble more (too squared)
-both bubbles, lines are a bit too high

Page 2, first panel
-drop the '!?' under the 'wha...'

Panel 2
-first bubble, perfect alignment only a bit too big (again, no breathing room)
-second bubble, put 'I can do' on same line

Panel 3
Align it like this: 'but if/ you can't get/ a proper/ erection/ you two can't/ do it you/ know?' Or basically more oval.

Last bubble, a bit too high.
Random: try to use different fonts to distinguish from text bubbles, moans, thought boxes, etc.

I've asked psudeonl for a progress report.

Hey, if you are not going to finish, I can split the bounty and give you a part of it, depending on how many pages you've done. Shame to waste whatever work you did, but I'd like to see this finished, so if you are not going to reply I'll open this for a new editor.

Ok, I am officially declaring psudeonl MIA and the bounty open to other editors. Sigh.

Here are the first 4 pages and if they seem OK, I'll finish it up as soon as you give me a reply. I don't know why the other editor didn't finish.

Sorry, though I put in the pictures.

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They seem ok for version 1, as I know that the transparent bubbles pseudonl was trying are much more difficult. That said, I will put up a second bounty for version 2 with such bubbles once this is done.

v1 is out https://e-hentai.org/g/600778/6fab779e4d/

missing credits, but I've waited 48h for them, will upload them when/if they are made

also, I got one of the interesting SFXs translated for v2 (see https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...&p=2654259)