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I am bountifying this as a while ago LS said he is also interested in seeing this done. Also, this is an experimental bounty, as in - this dojin has several stories, and instead of making one bounty for all of them I am putting separate bounties for each story.

Bounties:
* story 1 (pages 3-20. 18 pages total including ToC and one credit): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5937
(page 21 has no text)
* story 2 (pages 22-31, 10 pages total including one credit): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5938
* story 3 (pages 32-74, 33 pages total): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5939
* story 4 (pages 75-95. 21 pages total incuding one credot): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5940
* story 5 (pages 96-107 11 credit pages, I am willing to accept a cursory summary here for the pages that are not story - realistically I don't expect anybody would care to translate 10 walls-of texts (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5941

Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.

This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.

This is my 41st individual (no project) translation bounty. This release will be under an [EHCOVE] group tag. You (the translator) will be credited for your work on a credit page unless you want to be anonymous.

Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/27857/d52fcb5c39/

If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2-3 weeks and you are unresponsive, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.

Also:
* Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty;
* broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted;
* yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present;
* yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak);
* if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it;
* if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me);
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* those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here);
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This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jun 14 2012, 02:23

Story #3 gets my support~

I'm posting the script for part 2. As a reminder, we agreed that the author rant on page 31 would not be translated (per our PMs). I have accepted the bounty. If I haven't heard from you on issues, I will put in my claim on Sunday.

UF



Fujishima Spirits, part 2 [22-30], version 1.0
by ultimaflaral

"Alt:" = Alternative translation, based on your preferences
"Lit:" = More literal translation, if you want to keep a more authentic feeling (at the usual expense of good english)

NOTE: the page numbers used here are GALLERY page numbers. the actual numbers on the pages are 1 off.

NOTE2: Per PM, not translating the author rant (i.e. page 31)




Page 22

----Ah.

[sfx bubble] twitch

[sfx bubble] lick

Ah! Good...!

Morisato-kun, won't Bell-chan be worried about you?


Page 23

Staying for overtime so often... Aahn!

Chihiro-san--

[sfx = rub rub]

You were the one to ask me about overtime, right?[heart]

But overtime like this isn't a bother at all.

Wow, nice view! [heart]


Page 24

Well then, what should we do? [lit: could also be "I do", japanese is often vague like that]

[Freetext] Okay, she's used to it. [lit: broken in]

I guess I have a job to do too, huh.

[sfx bubble] slurp!

[sfx bubble] sluuuuurp!

Ei! Ei![heart] [meaningless sounds. alt: Here! or Take that!]

[sfx = squelch, wet stickiness]

Nnh, nnnnh--!


Page 25

H-Hang on... Motosuwa-kun...

Too intense...! Ah! Aau!

[sfx bubble] Gucha [sticky sound again]

[top left] Ah!

[bottom right] Aau!

[bottom left sfx bubble] buchau! [Squeeelch!]

[2 sfx bubbles = squelching sounds]

Ah-! Be a little more gentle...aah!

[tini part of the bubble] lick!

[bigger part of the buble] ...aabu!... [sound of something in her mouth]

Bbh!

Aah!

Haaah!

[tiny tiny freetext = lick! and gucha [sticky sound]]


Page 26

Hah! Aah...! Gosh...! Haah!

[same bubble, left] Aabu! [alt: Aaabh!]

Uuu...! I'm coming...

Nnnnh...!

[sfx = splurt, splurt!]

Gulp...gulp

[white sfx = drip!]

[2 sfx bubbles = slurp!, 3rd white sfx bubble = drip!, black sfx = twitch]

Cumming before me, that's awful!

[sfx = press!]


Page 27

Aah...!

[white sfx = prod!]

Nnnh...!

[white sfx = Slide in]

Ah-----!

Aaaah!

Haah!

[right sfx = zucha! [squelchy sound], left sfx = jicha! [similar]]

Nnnah![heart]

Ku-----! Y-You're tightening up~~!

Aaah!

[sfx are gucha! and zucha [wet squelchy sounds]]

[sfx bubble] Zucha! [wet squelchy sound]

[upper left] Aaau!

I-It's no good, I'm already going to cum!

Aah!

Oooouuuu! [alt: Ooooohhh!]

[sfx = squelch and splurt]



Page 28

Aaaauuu!

Haaaah![heart]

[upper left sfx = intense!, mid right sfx = nuchu [squelch], bottom left = nupu [splurt]

Chihiro-san... I still...

That's no good... We're out of time...

But... it felt good, really good...! [Keiichi]

[left sfx bubble = jyapu [splurt?], right sfx bubble = gucha! [squelch]]


Page 29

Aau! More violentlyyyy!

[sfx bubble = gucha [squelching sound]]

Aaah!

[sfx bubble = zucha [squelching sound]]

[white sfx = tremble, tremble!]

Aaah!

[same bubble] Aaaaah, I'm cumming!

Hah...

[same bubble, below] Aaau...

sfx = wobbling!

...Ah!...

[sfx bubble = chapo... [sticky withdrawing sound, plop?]


Page 30


Keiichi-san, I brought you an evening snack.

O-Oh my--! [lit: A-Ara--] H-How thoughtful~! [sweat symbols]

M-My bad...! I-I was about to go home~~!

Good evening, Mr. Elephant. [lit: Zou-san]. [tiny text = want an apple? [lit: eat an apple?]]

[small font for side note]* TL Note: the elephant metaphor for his junk is fairly common in Japan

Actually~~ I'd be fine with just a plum...[sweat marks] [tininer text on the end = just kidding...]

[small font for side note]* TL Note: "plum" = ume, as in umeboshi, a pickled plum. I point it out since it's really an apricot, but years of anime tropes have set "plum" in stone.

[tiny text at bottom left] The end

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 28 2014, 01:22

[Note: the elephant metaphor for his junk is fairly common in Japan]

[Note: "plum" = ume, as in umeboshi, a pickled plum. I point it out since it's really an apricot, but
years of anime tropes have set "plum" in stone.]

Proofreading notes: none, but I'd convert both the above notes into TL notes with an asterix and a small font note on said page.

Editing bounty posted: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=9994

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Mar 26 2014, 07:32

Proofreading notes: none, but I'd convert both the above notes into TL notes with an asterix and a small font note on said page.

Editing bounty posted: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=9994

Done and done.

UF

hey am new and wondering if i can do the editing

sure, please post a sample here when you are done with a page or two

I'll work on this one. that's it if you haven't heard from the previous editor.

Go ahead, it's been over a month since last activity here,

I've just about finished translating the first story (Sakura Taisen). I still need to do the author rant, but everything else is complete. I'll post the script in a bit.

UF


EDIT: Okay, here we go. This is the script for the first Sakura Taisen story in Fujishima Spirits 3, which includes both the table of contents and the author rant. The only thing worth mentioning is a particular bit of clever punning. The protagonist of Sakura Taisen is a man named Ogami. Ogami's name uses the kanji for "great" and "god." Those same two kanji used in the exact same way can instead be read as O-kami, great god, which a devout Japanese Christian might well call the Christian God. This leads to some obvious punning at the end, though every reference to Ogami by the devout woman is somewhat suspect.

Barring questions and concerns, I'll put in my claim in a couple of days or whenever an editing bounty goes up, whichever occurs first.

UF




NOTE: After scratching my head over this for a few days, I can only conclude that the doujin author is often saying the ENGLISH word "exorcist" when he means "exorcism." For what it's worth, exorcism doesn't seem to have made it into the language as a loan word anyway.

page 03

* Egokoro Muyuu *** 3, 22, 77, 78
* Aono Rokugou *** 5-21 (Exorcist in Paris) + Column Cut
* Ara Tenjin *** 23-32 (untitled)
* Toumi Haruka *** 33-75 (Live to Love: Just Whose Wish Is It?)
* Izumi Hiro 4gou *** 76
* Bach *** 79-98 (Chapter 130: Two Hours Ago)
* Doushin *** 99-102 (First Doujin Story)

[gray text in background = FS 3]

Recruiting *** 105
Comments *** 103-104
Publication Info *** 106
Survey *** 107-108
All Edits *** By DUN!


Page 004

Hmmm (lit: Fumu), magnificent.


Page 005

Everyone, welcome! Tonight, please enjoy your time here at the Chattes Noires!*

[TL Note: The name appears to be either a reference to or a mistranslation of "Le Chat Noir," perhaps the world's first modern cabaret club. The name means "Black Cat."]

[3rd panel sfx = Pachi [clapping]]

So the target is this girl. [lit: aim, as a noun]


Page 006

I see... So you're a reporter for a magazine... [lit: for a publisher, but wouldn't say that in Eng]

So you mean it's like this? [as in, like what she is about to say in the NEXT bubbles]

[both bubbles here, split where you like] You were so impressed by my show that you absolutely have to have me feature in your magazine...

But... For me to actually appear in print... [lit: in a "book," but it's a magazine] Is that really okay?

What are you saying...? You already let us watch that marvelous show...

That's right! As I was watching, my lower bod...I mean, my heart was really throbbing!

If all those who are yet unsaved can come to know you, surely they will all be greatly encouraged.

My...! [alt: Oh my...!]

I understand! If you are satisfied with one such as me...then of course!

[sfx = gu! [clenching hands]]

In that case, photos... [VERY small fragment of a sentence, alt: how about some photos...]

[sfx = nita [grin/sneer]]


page 007

Wonderful, wonderful Erika-san!

[sfx = pasha [snapping photos]]

This time pull on your tail even harder!

[left panel]...Li...Like this?

[right panel] This is a little embarrassing...

[sfx = kyuu~~! [Pulling]]

[left panel, white sfx = Purun [boince/boing]

[bottom right panel] What are you saying!? This is for all those who are yet unsaved! Please stick out your hips more!!

Y...Yes

[bottom right sfx = doki [Ba-bump, heart], sfx on ass = kyuu kyuu~~![heart] [pulling]]

AAAH!!

!

[sfx = Twitch!]


page 008

Wha!?

What is this, what is this!?

A demon coming from my lower body...!

...

[sfx = throb]

AAAH!

AAAH!

Oh no! A demon coming from my body as well!!

......

[both sfx = throb]

NO! [lit: was in English] If Erika-san doesn't exorcise me down here soon as well,

[att] at this rate I'll be doing a creepy spider-walk down a staircase!! [lit: I'll be doing a spider walk. Apparently that reversed backbend down the staircase scene from The Exorcist was called a spider walk. I don't think many people would know that, so I've included a little extra to explain the context.]

Eeh...!? B-But, I've never done a demon exorcism before.

Hurry! It is impossible that you would be unable to do this!

You'll be fine, I'll walk you through it myself... So go on!!

...Y-Yes...


page 009

You listening? These here! These are what you need for the exorcism!!

[sfx = puni! [poke]]

Well then, excuse me...Here I go. Please drive out the demon lurking inside me.

[black sfx = slip!, white sfx = Mugyu [squeeze]]

Hyi! !

For a exorcist to succeed, it was necessary to find one like you, with an incredible body and pious Christian spirit.

[sfx = Slide]

And more than anything else, your spirited service is greatly important to us... Well then, please rub our sacks as well!!

Aah...! T-That hurts! Is this sort of thing...really necessary?

[sfx = squeeze + lick]

What are you saying!? I have had many demon-possessed people exorcised like this! (BIG LIE) Come on! Please take it in your mouth!


Page 010

Uuu...! Uuuu! The demon inside of me is in pain... D...Do it harder!!

[sfx = prod + smack]

Hyii!!

P...! Please stop! Please don't press into those spots!! You'll change the shape of my boobs!!

Uu!

Mh!

[sfx = slip...]

Ah...! Aaah! E-Erika-san, j-just a bit more!!

You've weakened the demon considerably. Lick down there even more!

[black sfsx = pressing, white sfx = thrusting]

I-Is that true...? Right here? Should I flutter my tongue here along the tip?

Uaah!


Page 11

Kyaa! O-Oh no...! What is this?

[sfx = various forms of splurt]

ERIKAAAAA~~! I'm...c-cummiiiing! Please turn your face this way!

Hah, hah... With this, has the exorcism succeeded?

[sfx = jiggle]

How marvelous!

[att] Erika-san, it was a big success! All those sudden, rude words just now were actuall from the demons inside us.

[att] They were commanding us to speak them. Please forgive us.

However, there is still one finishing touch left to do!

[black sfx = wipe, white sfx = point, finger popping out]


page 12

Let us seal the demon in you down here!!

[sfx = point!]

With Erika-san's insides, it can be purified!

[sfx = Gleam, sparkle, glow]

Whether this will succeed depends on the qualities you have as a Christian!

Do...Do you really need me to...

Would you doubt a fellow believer of your own God!?! [lit: the same god]

[sfx = Guooooh!]

I understand! We've already started, so we can't stop now! I will do my best!! [NOTE: original Jap uses a sort of difficult expression, saying essentially that the situation is a boat that has already set sail.]

[sfx = clench]

Oi, oi, distrust us a little. [sweat mark]

Well, it's nice that she's going to fuck us though.


page 013

[gray sfx = Suck]

Yeah. [lit: Un. assuming its the dude. could be a random sound??]

Mmmh [lit: Kumu, dick-in-mouth sound]

Yes, yes... Erika-san, do it just like that.

In order to perfectly seal away the demon,

it is necessary to raise the level of excitement to an extreme state. Excuse me... Haammh! [NOTE: whose "excitement" needs to be raised is unclear. Could be the men's, could be hers.] [lit: last sound = Hamu, usually a sound for sticking something in your mouth]

[black sfx = lick + Squeeeze, smallish white sfx = squeeeze~~]

Uuuu! Forgive us. All of our demons are taking us over again. [lit: coming to the forefront]

[white sfx = slurp, gray sfx = another slurping-esque noise]

Come on, you slutty cat! [lit: mesu neko, female cat, derogatory] This time suck on mine!!

[white sfx near bottom = prod, sfx bubble = rub rub

Kuuu~~~~! Even just through your tights, your soft flesh is too freaking much!


page 014

Keke! These are the big tits I've been waiting for. I'm going to get a good taste!

[sfx = Rip!]

Ah! Shit! You sneaky bastard, doing it by yourself!

Then how about this!!

[att] There!

Kyaa!

[sfx = Riiiip]

Kukuku... If you want to seal me, then spread your ass out yourself!

Hyo~! Geez, this is unbelievable. To think the star of the cabaret would be performing these erotic services![heart]

[bottom right] Uuuu...! Someone, save me!

That's it, keep it up until I can see those wrinkles. [alt: inner folds]

[gray sfx = Guchu...]


page 015

Okay, here I come! I always wanted to try having sex all at once with you![music note]

[sfx = thrust]

O-OOOWWWWW!

Auuuu!

Pussy, pussy~![music note]

[sfx = shove!]

P-Please, forgive me!

Come on! It's time for your sucker!! [alt: pacifier]

[sfx = shove]

[4th panel sfx = yank, lower sfx = thrust thrust thrust]

It hurts... my stomach really hurts...! Ogami-san, please save me...!

Hyo~![music note] It's slipping in all the way to the root!


page 016

Uu!

Ah!

[panel 1 sfx = Guchu, panel 2 sfx = Zuchu, panel 3 sfx = shove + slurp]

F-For them to insist on partnering with me all at once like this... M-My body is starting to become strange...!

[sfx = stroke]

Uuu! Erika...Erikaaa...! If you make that sexy face...I...I will...!!


Page 017 (NOTE: the editor should consider making 17-18 a doublespread, since we're missing part of the picture like this)

Aaah! Somehow everyone's hot stuff is filling up my insides!!

[thick sfx = Splurt!, smaller sfx = Spurt]

Yaa! S-So hooooot!!

Take this! Everyone is cumming inside you!!


Page 018

Uaaah!

[sfx = Slurp!]

Uhyaa~ I came, I let it all out~!

[white sfx = Gurgle...]

Thank you, Erika-san...

Hah...

[5th panel sfx = Hahahahaha]

And so, that's basically what happened this time.

Being able to help other people, it truly is a wonderful thing.

......

...That means...

AAAH!!


page 019

At the same time, at the capital...

[sfx = squelch...]

Yah...! Haahn!

Oh no! Ogami-san... Don't touch me down there...!

I...I believe...

I believe in Ogami-san!! [Note: This is something of a pun. Ogami's name uses the kanji for "Great" and "God." As it happens, those two kanji also form the word O-kami (great god), which is what a devout Christian might well call God in Japan. The humor is that Sakura almost looks and reads just like she is saying she believes in God, but in fact she is referring to a person.]

Sakura was masturbating.

[freetext] AAAAHN! [heart]

And back in Paris...

Uaaah...Erika-kun!!

Aahaa~an! Ogami-saaa~an!


page 020

Hello, thish ish Aono. [NOT MY TYPO, author misspells "desu" as "debu." Unsure if this is author error or just him playing around]

These days, after doing nothing but tiny Loli-tits, huge tits seem really nostalgic.

My next material was supposed to be DOA2 [note: Dead or Alive, presumably], but since I didn't have anything new to use for material after finally finishing up my CG collection, I decided to play Sakura Taisen 3. [emoticon]

Actually, the the truth is that I barely made it half-way through the game, which I bought solely for the Kitty-Cat Costume. It's true.

I think manga [note: as opposed to CG, etc] naturally suits me in that I can draw from my innermost self, making it quite simple.

It's already pretty unusual for me to like a main character. I like Lobelia a fair bit too, so I thought I might draw her by herself in the cabaret, but I passed on that for now! (The biggest reason is that I haven't actually gotten to the point in the game where Lobelia even shows up [emoticon])







This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Aug 21 2014, 04:44

excellent!

editing bounty posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10889

The story from page 32-74 is now complete. I'm attaching the script here. This is actually my second draft for this script, since I wanted to go back and tighten up the dialogue to better fit with these low-res scans. There's nothing big to say upfront really. The only minor thing is to note that Skuld calls Belldandy "Onee-sama" and Urd "Nee-san." There's also one or two TL Notes I think.

MORE IMPORTANTLY, I now recommend that the title for this chapter be translated as Just Whose Wish Was This? This fits the context of the story a bit better. Note that this change needs to be made on the table of contents page as well.

As per usual, I'm always happy to answer questions about the script. If there are no problems, I'll put in my claim on Friday or whenever an editing bounty is started, whichever comes first.

UF



 Fujishima_Spirits_3___3_tight.txt ( 23.83k ) Number of downloads: 106
Original Gallery Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/27857/d52fcb5c39/

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Sep 17 2014, 07:09

Editing bounty posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11100

Ulti is not interested in the remaining two stories, so those TL bounties are open to other TLs.

story 3 has been TLed by ulti at our thread

editing bounty is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11397

UF said on the thread to post here if someone's interested in editing. I'd like to do the bounty for this one. But... I think it's gonna be for the 'Translate-for-Edit" option. I'll wait for clarification and confirmation.

Sounds good (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)