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@Zumato, jantch: Thanks to you both. Turns out jantch did the jacket better, while Zumato did below the girl's leg better. I combined them to get an optimum version:


I've moogle'd you guys each 5k C + 5 hath via HV. Another 5k C + 5 hath will go to anyone who does the last page.

I completely missed the jacket, my bad.

My pitiful attempt at the second.
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I completely missed the jacket, my bad.

I missed the heart on the heel.

I can't figure out what the details are in the lower left of the second page. Could I have a link to the raw so I could check the other pages for context?

I missed the heart on the heel.

I can't figure out what the details are in the lower left of the second page. Could I have a link to the raw so I could check the other pages for context?

Here you go.

It looks like that thing in the lower left is the bag that the tail was in at the start of the story.

I put a version of the second page at [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?w23b92u11a9u33o

The bag still looks strange, so hopefully some text will end up obscuring the right edge.

I cheated; I used Zumato's version and redid the bottom 35% or so (the lower left panel with the bag and the stuff to the right of that), so feel free to give the credits to him, even if you use my version.

@Zumato, jantch: thanks for both your efforts, you guys saved me a lot of time. I'm not going about to start being stingy with pretend money, so I've moogle'd both of you 5k C + 5 hath.

I ended up doing some clean-up on the first couple of panelsof the second page. It may be too late, but if you want it, it's at [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?qevs5u4ewp2x84z

It looks like that thing in the lower left is the bag that the tail was in at the start of the story.

I put a version of the second page at [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?w23b92u11a9u33o

The bag still looks strange, so hopefully some text will end up obscuring the right edge.

I cheated; I used Zumato's version and redid the bottom 35% or so (the lower left panel with the bag and the stuff to the right of that), so feel free to give the credits to him, even if you use my version.

I did mine in hurry and for fun. If you improved on it, that's perfectly fine with me. It's all for the greater good.

it's been a while, but I've two new open editing bounties, see those threads for details

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=38574 (on hold, pending a new script, probably not ready for editing till September)

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=65637

usually my bounties are first come first served but I am reserving one for our newcomer Zumato till the end of the week unless he declines it

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 3 2012, 04:55

Making use of stupid mistake #1
Would like a decent cleaner for Onnasenshi-san ni Onegai (5K+5H)

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 30 2012, 09:42

Making use of stupid mistake #2
Would like a decent cleaner for the word bubbles for Toudori (5K+5H)

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 30 2012, 09:46

Someone wanna edit this, or just clean it. Either way, 5K+5H.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 30 2012, 09:50

Please remove this. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/dry.gif)

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 30 2012, 09:46

Sorry for the delay, but here's the first one.



The second one will be simple since I don't have to worry about her skin, so i'll have it by the end of the day, along with the boring reasons of why it took so long. If you want me to touch this up, let me know.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 30 2012, 09:28

Sorry for the delay, but here's the first one.



The second one will be simple since I don't have to worry about her skin, so i'll have it by the end of the day, along with the boring reasons of why it took so long. If you want me to touch this up, let me know.

Sweet! Looks good to me. I guess you were so excited at finishing this you couldn't resist posting multiple times that you were done (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

.....God damn IE!

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 31 2012, 08:00

And here's the second one. Done in one go if you can believe that!

Here: [postimage.org] http://postimage.org/image/lt5hnh2yn/

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 31 2012, 08:06

Note to whomever it may concern: It seems that the double post was caused when I tried adding an attachement, and resubmitted it twice =/

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 31 2012, 08:03

Looks great! Thanks a lot! Lemme know what you want translated in exchange, I'll start working on it after I've posted the story.

Making use of stupid mistake #1
Would like a decent cleaner for Onnasenshi-san ni Onegai (5K+5H)

I'll start on this when I get home today.

I'll start on this when I get home today.

Here ya go.

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