[X] My Assistant

Can someone tell me what the untranslated text bubble says? Thanks in advance!

Page 9

こうしていま二人きりでいる間だけで良いのです。
(is she saying something like "she wants to close the gap between them" ? )
>She's saying something like "even if it's just for a short while, where two of us are alone together," "I want you to give me everything that you have."

オレの全部をシャルロットにあげるよ。
("I'll give all of me to Charlotte" is this correct? I mean, if there is a better interpretation I'll take it)
>It's correct, but sounds a little weird. I'd go with something like "I'll give you everything that I have, Charlotte."
Page 23

おマンコってこんな感触なんだ・・・
("this is how your pussy feels like.." or "this is how a pussy feels like.."?)
>It seems like he's losing his virginity, so the latter.

意気込んでばかりいて思い至らなかったなんて...
マスターの初めての人...なんだ...！
("This is the first time I see Master so eager and...." There is a "thinking" too but not sure how to add it to the sentence, "irrational" maybe? )
>She's saying that she was too eager. It's a liberal translation but below is what she means.
"I can't believe I was too excited to notice, but..." "I've become... Master's... first partner...!"

激しく動いて欲しいです・・・
("I want you to do me rough..." she says "to move" but maybe theres a better interpretation)
>How about "Please take me harder..."?

Page 27

わたしたら初めてなのにこんなに激しく交わって良いんでしょうか？
("Al thought It's my first time is it ok to feel good with rough sex?" I'm not sure about this one xd)
>She doesn't really say that she's feeling good. "Is it really okay to be so rough for my first time?"

ヤリ過ぎかもけどオレも全然治まらない・・・
>"I think we might have went overboard, but I can't stop myself either...!"

キスも交わりもあなたが最初で最後ですよ・・
(Is she saying that he's the first and the last one she's gonna kiss?)
>Yes.

でもあなたはきっとほかの誰かと添い遂げるのですね。
("But you'll find someone else..." I don't see how this is related to the previous sentence...)
>She's saying that he's going to be her first and last person, but she expects him to move on to find another person.

Page 32

ちょいちょい過去作「ブーディカさんと。」へのセルフオマなんとかを交えてみたり。
(The artist is talking about mixing this series with his previous work "boudica-san to"-those books are amazing, btw- ?)
> If you're asking for confirmation, yes, it seems like he's planning on adding Charlotte from this doujin as a "self homage" (probably a small cameo appearance) to his future "boudica-san" series.

また少々ネタバレですが、ライバルの多さに嘆きつつブーディカさんのアドバイス受けてるあたりもツボにハマ
り一役買ってもらう展開となりました。
(I'm not sure if hes explaining that he wanted to develop a situation where more rivals of Boudica ask her for an advice.... )
>To my understanding, Charlotte will be asking Boudica for advice about having too many rivals.

Thank you so much, good sir.

Just a tiny little line, please.

Can someone tell me what the untranslated text bubble says? Thanks in advance!

lit:
>Ehm… only that is…
>That… It's okay to forgive [him] this
>Come on

You see that this sounds strange. I don't know the context, but you should make it fit.
For example like this
>Ehm, that was a small misunderstanding…
>It wouldn't hurt to forgive him this.
>Come on

Just a tiny little line, please.

It's an expression to show dissatisfaction. Literally it's just "this". You can use as a copy of the start of the next bubble ("This…") or put some other phrase of rejection ("No way…").

lit:
>Ehm… only that is…
>That… It's okay to forgive [him] this
>Come on

You see that this sounds strange. I don't know the context, but you should make it fit.
For example like this
>Ehm, that was a small misunderstanding…
>It wouldn't hurt to forgive him this.
>Come on

Thank you so much for your help!

This post has been edited by bientaimon: Jul 28 2020, 23:36

Hey guys, I need help with this "introduction":

両親から虐待を受け １４歳で家出
犯罪にも手を染め
成人する頃 メビウスという組織に拾われる
というプロフィールを持つキッド
まあ 酷い目にもあってるでしょう

Are these lines in first person (Juli Kidman telling her life: [theevilwithin.fandom.com] https://theevilwithin.fandom.com/wiki/Juli_Kidman ) or third person (a narrator)?

How would you translate some of those lines:

1. 犯罪にも手を染め

2. というプロフィールを持つキッド

3. まあ 酷い目にもあってるでしょう

Also, I don't get this line very well from the first panel:

メビウスの誘いを受けたものの

Thanks in advance.

Full page: https://e-hentai.org/s/5eccefbcbf/1577650-8

This post has been edited by Mr.MPD: Jul 29 2020, 02:55

Hey guys, I need help with this "introduction":

両親から虐待を受け １４歳で家出
犯罪にも手を染め
成人する頃 メビウスという組織に拾われる
というプロフィールを持つキッド
まあ 酷い目にもあってるでしょう

Are these lines in first person (Juli Kidman telling her life: [theevilwithin.fandom.com] https://theevilwithin.fandom.com/wiki/Juli_Kidman ) or third person (a narrator)?

How would you translate some of those lines:

1. 犯罪にも手を染め

2. というプロフィールを持つキッド

3. まあ 酷い目にもあってるでしょう

Also, I don't get this line very well from the first panel:

メビウスの誘いを受けたものの

Thanks in advance.

Full page: https://e-hentai.org/s/5eccefbcbf/1577650-8

The texts outside of box are in third person.

1. 犯罪にも手を染め
>Got involved in criminal activities.

2. というプロフィールを持つキッド
Such is Kid's profile.

3. まあ 酷い目にもあってるでしょう
Well, as such, she probably went through some tough situations.


I would suggest looking at "メビウスの誘いを受けたものの" from page 8 and "キッドは　ここにきてから食事は一度もしていなかった" from page 9 as a single sentence.

Something like "Although she was recruited by the "Moebius,"" "Kid couldn't eat a single time ever since she arrived 'Here.'"

One thing to note is that texts in the boxes on page 8 and 9 seems to be in 3rd person(referring to the character as "Kid"), but boxes after page 12 looks like they're in 1st person(using 私).
Personally, I would leave it as is, but keeping them in same perspective might look better.

This post has been edited by none123: Jul 29 2020, 08:20

Need some help with the dialogue in the 2 text boxes.



For the right one I got:

"I was worried that she would return to her home right away."


For the left one I got:

"But she seems to be happy to stay here with me."


Still I think there could be a better translation as this makes the dialogue a little bit confusing.

Any other suggestions?

This post has been edited by barry chan: Jul 29 2020, 10:24

Need some help with the dialogue in the 2 text boxes.



For the right one I got:

"I was worried that she would return to her home right away."
For the left one I got:

"But she seems to be happy to stay here with me."
Still I think there could be a better translation as this makes the dialogue a little bit confusing.

Any other suggestions?

I would need a bit more context to understand the tone

Maybe
"I was worried she'd go back home at some point"

The second phrases's literal translation is "it seems she did not hate it as she'd have lead you to believe"
Again, with no context it's really hard

I would need a bit more context to understand the tone

Maybe
"I was worried she'd go back home at some point"

The second phrases's literal translation is "it seems she did not hate it as she'd have lead you to believe"
Again, with no context it's really hard

She's basically a runaway girl the heroine, for letting her stay with the main mc she has to do sexual favours.

Which she wasn't fond about, because he forced into a swimsuit to have sex etc.

Basically the last panel indicates that the mc is surprised that the female heroine is still here after all that, and that the sex they had must have been better than the female character initially thought. Else she would have already left ages ago.

This post has been edited by barry chan: Jul 29 2020, 19:02

Need some help with the dialogue in the 2 text boxes.



For the right one I got:

"I was worried that she would return to her home right away."
For the left one I got:

"But she seems to be happy to stay here with me."
Still I think there could be a better translation as this makes the dialogue a little bit confusing.

Any other suggestions?

I was so worried if she would return to her home anytime soon.

But it seems she doesn’t mind after all.



This post has been edited by xrx.3: Jul 29 2020, 18:49

I would absolutely love it if someone could translate these pages (180-184). 180 has already been translated so only 4 remain. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

https://e-hentai.org/s/0409a5bc29/1694890-180

Can anyone help me identify what's in these bubbles?

(IMG:[i.imgur.com] https://i.imgur.com/CEWLpVc.png)

So far I have:

Right: 無職転生(?)マジ最高！
Middle: 戦国好きならさなろうの戦国子町マジ
Left: No idea aside from 名作にござる

Please and thank you.

Can anyone help me identify what's in these bubbles?

(IMG:[i.imgur.com] https://i.imgur.com/CEWLpVc.png)

So far I have:

Right: 無職転生(?)マジ最高！
Middle: 戦国好きならさなろうの戦国子町マジ
Left: No idea aside from 名作にござる

Please and thank you.

1.無職転生(?)マジ最高！
>This is correct

2. 戦国好きならさなろうの戦国子町マジ
>戦国好きならさなろうの戦国小町マジ勧め(It looks like 子 but it seems to be an author's mistake.)

3. No idea aside from 名作にござる
>淡海乃海も隠れし名作にござる

無職転生, 戦国小町, and 淡海乃海 are titles of japanese web novels that were published as full light novels.


無職転生(Mushoku Tensei) - [ncode.syosetu.com] https://ncode.syosetu.com/n9669bk/ (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mushoku_Tensei)
戦国小町(Sengoku Komachi) - [ncode.syosetu.com] https://ncode.syosetu.com/n8406bm/
淡海乃海(Oumi no umi) - [ncode.syosetu.com] https://ncode.syosetu.com/n9975de/

This post has been edited by none123: Jul 30 2020, 07:18

1.無職転生(?)マジ最高！
>This is correct

2. 戦国好きならさなろうの戦国子町マジ
>戦国好きならさなろうの戦国小町マジ勧め(It looks like 子 but it seems to be an author's mistake.)

3. No idea aside from 名作にござる
>淡海乃海も隠れし名作にござる

無職転生, 戦国小町, and 淡海乃海 are titles of japanese web novels that were published as full light novels.
無職転生(Mushoku Tensei) - [ncode.syosetu.com] https://ncode.syosetu.com/n9669bk/ (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mushoku_Tensei)
戦国小町(Sengoku Komachi) - [ncode.syosetu.com] https://ncode.syosetu.com/n8406bm/
淡海乃海(Oumi no umi) - [ncode.syosetu.com] https://ncode.syosetu.com/n9975de/

Thanks a bunch! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I know "The Original Bondage Fairies" has been translated to English, but as I'm trying to make my Japanese learning a bit more "interesting", I tried to translate Bondage Fairies for myself, and found that they have some untranslated Puns in there.

One pun that I'm currently stuck with has to do with the name of an Earthworm called 次郎長

After the worm is done "drinking" from Pfil's pussy, Masha says:

なーなー
ミミズの次郎長って
いいシャレだと
思わない？

I'd translate it as
"Hey, don't you think calling him Jirosho is a good joke/pun?"



This is probably "dad joke" territory and/or a really stupid pun. But I just can't understand it.

In the English Translation by Dark Horse Comics, the worm is called "The Cleaner".
And if I search for 次郎長, I find pages about a Shimizu no Jirosho (https://www.ndl.go.jp/portrait/e/datas/278.html).

Could Shimizu (Clear water) have something to do with the pun?

This post has been edited by Anon24/7: Jul 30 2020, 13:33

Hi, can anyone tell me whether the untranslated line says "Will the boy help too?" or "Are we going to help the boy too?" Thanks in advance!

I know "The Original Bondage Fairies" has been translated to English, but as I'm trying to make my Japanese learning a bit more "interesting", I tried to translate Bondage Fairies for myself, and found that they have some untranslated Puns in there.

One pun that I'm currently stuck with has to do with the name of an Earthworm called 次郎長

After the worm is done "drinking" from Pfil's pussy, Masha says:

なーなー
ミミズの次郎長って
いいシャレだと
思わない？

I'd translate it as
"Hey, don't you think calling him Jirosho is a good joke/pun?"



This is probably "dad joke" territory and/or a really stupid pun. But I just can't understand it.

In the English Translation by Dark Horse Comics, the worm is called "The Cleaner".
And if I search for 次郎長, I find pages about a Shimizu no Jirosho (https://www.ndl.go.jp/portrait/e/datas/278.html).

Could Shimizu (Clear water) have something to do with the pun?

I think it's just a very simple pun of "Shimizu no Jirosho" vs "Mimizu no jirosho"

I found another, older translation whlie I was looking for the english translation(https://e-hentai.org/s/5cefe9cbf6/27662-30), and I feel like it was handled very well here.

Please, I need some help with the characters I'm missing (Or I didn't get right) Thanks!

https://e-hentai.org/s/c505de45d6/1677610-25

ご購入ありがとうございます！！今回はコミケ開催されなたので、エアコミケになってしまいましたね。それに
しても遅れての発となってしまいました・・・。ただその分いつもより時間そかけて制作できたかと思います。
とにかく長い時間この原槁と向き今ってまった！！少しでき楽んでいただけたらとても嬉しいです。そしてここ
最近のおイェ事のお知らせです。

温泉旅館ものです！！
ぜひ見て下さい

コミックエグゼ25号
修学旅行やり直し

うりぼうざっか店
UNDER WEARS 4

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この後も色々とお仕事が入ってまして、また発表できるタイミングそ見つけてお知らせします。
FANBOXやPIXIVもやっているので、ぜひ見て下さいね。今年も商業も同入も頑張りますので何卒ヨロシクお願いいた�
��ます！！

髪のモウェーグが しっかたです・・・でも楽しく　けまったー！

Please, I need some help with the characters I'm missing (Or I didn't get right) Thanks!

https://e-hentai.org/s/c505de45d6/1677610-25

ご購入ありがとうございます！！今回はコミケ開催されなたので、エアコミケになってしまいましたね。それに
しても遅れての発となってしまいました・・・。ただその分いつもより時間そかけて制作できたかと思います。
とにかく長い時間この原槁と向き今ってまった！！少しでき楽んでいただけたらとても嬉しいです。そしてここ
最近のおイェ事のお知らせです。

温泉旅館ものです！！
ぜひ見て下さい

コミックエグゼ25号
修学旅行やり直し

うりぼうざっか店
UNDER WEARS 4

くろタイツWIDE
この後も色々とお仕事が入ってまして、また発表できるタイミングそ見つけてお知らせします。
FANBOXやPIXIVもやっているので、ぜひ見て下さいね。今年も商業も同入も頑張りますので何卒ヨロシクお願いいた�
��ます！！

髪のモウェーグが しっかたです・・・でも楽しく　けまったー！

ご購入ありがとうございます！！今回はコミケ開催されなかったので、エアコミケになってしまいましたね。そ
れにしても遅れての発刊となってしまいました・・・。ただその分いつもより時間をかけて制作できたかと思い
ます。
とにかく長い時間この原稿と向き合ってました！！少しでも楽しんでいただけたらとても嬉しいです。そしてこ
こ最近のお仕事のお知らせです。

温泉旅館ものです！！
ぜひ見て下さい

コミックエグゼ25号
修学旅行やり直し漫画掲載

うりぼうざっか店
UNDER WEARS 4　参加

くろタイツWIDE　参加
この後も色々とお仕事が入ってまして、また発表できるタイミングそ見つけてお知らせします。
FANBOXやPIXIVもやっているので、ぜひ見て下さいね。今年も商業も同人も頑張りますので何卒ヨロシクお願いいた�
��ます！！

髪の毛ウェーブが難しかったです・・・でも楽しく描けましたー！