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Does anyone know what 湿気過多 her means?

https://e-hentai.org/s/bfb54b3fa0/1123980-181

Refering to showing lots of liquid in the art?

This post has been edited by N04h: Apr 13 2018, 09:47

two questions:

1) simple title translation

the TL who did the script seems inactive, can anyone help by translating to English the title of this dojin: マキマキの花びらペロペロしてもいいんだよ ? Not romaji, I need a nice English title to put in the gallery I am about to release, but Google Translate fails here with "It is okay to petal petals of Makimaki", lol...

[macross.wikia.com] Makina Nakajima is a character from the Macross Δ television series...She calls herself Makimaki. So literally it's something like "It's OK to lick Makimaki's petals" but I'd go with something more like, "It's OK to lick Makimaki's love petals" if it were me.

2) more challenging, it's a pain to figure out who's saying what, and there are few strange words here that add to the confusion

what do you think about the following (I've IDed the speakers, that was not in the TLed script), I've bolded the confusing parts, more context under the script

不潔なのです
???? presumably not Nekone: That's so impure (filthy? dirty?).

"That's so dirty!" or "That's gross!" is how I'd translate it.

そんな！？　ネコネさああん
Kiuru: Really!? That's cruel, Nekone-san!

I think this is just the translator taking some liberties. It's not wrong per se, he just added a word to explicitly say what the Japanese mostly implied. Though I would've gone with "That's so mean!"

I am rather unsure about the impure and weird/cruel parts at the end.

For context, Nosuri and Ougi are the incest siblings featured in the dojin and panel above. Their friends are the ones talking on the confusing panels below. Nekone is implied to have incest feelings for her older brother (who's not present there). Kiuru is not related by blood to Nekone, but he has a crush on her AND respects her older brother who is a role model for him (but I don't think he is implied to be bi or have a crush on him).

Anyway, the most confusing thing is - who's making the comment about impure, and how to properly translate Kiuru's last remark.

Unfortunately I'd have to spend a lot more time reading through the doujin to figure this out. Hopefully someone else will come along and do so. At least you have my comments on the other questions though. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

仲のいい姉弟を　そういう目で　見てるですか
presumably Nosuri or Ougi (doesn't matter which one)

Nekone.

不潔なのです
???? presumably not Nekone:

Nekone.

That's so impure (filthy? dirty?).[/b]

Not physically, but morally filthy/dirty.

Refering to showing lots of liquid in the art?

Seems so. That's a catchphrase, editor's or someone's impression of Bakuya's art style.

Thanks. For the last part, are we sure she is saying mean/cruel and not 'I am sorry'? That's what machine translation was saying, and it kind of makes more sense. Because I am not sure what's mean/cruel, but I can see Kiuru apologizing to Nekone, because he doesn't want to offend her.

Oh, if it helps anyone, here's the RAW + our latest edit of that page
[imgur.com] https://imgur.com/a/AEtBE

(yes, two bubbles need to be switched in the middle of the page...)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Apr 13 2018, 16:37

Second one:
娘連れ実家に帰った家のヨメとはえいら違いだ
The use of 実家 and 家 looks complicated to me to clearly figured out what the sense is.

Try splitting it like this: 娘連れ / 実家に帰った / 家のヨメ / とはえらい違いだ
Take your daughter / return to your parents' house / stay-at-home bride* / completely different from ~
"You're completely different from those wives* who take their daughters and go back home to live with their parents."
*Not really sure about this phrase, but the impression I get from 家の嫁 is that it's a wife that spends her time at home, with no job/children to raise.

Thanks for the first one !

Thanks for your help but I still can''t fit it correctly in the script... (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
I'll try to make the context clearer for the second sentence:
The guy (who's the husband's CEO) recognize her which brings us into a flashback, when the girl's husband is about to leave. At that time there's him, the girl and the husband. This sentence is a thinking not a direct speech.

家の嫁 --> my wife (guy's wife)

But isn't 家の嫁 --> wife/bride's house?

But isn't 家の嫁 --> wife/bride's house?

That would be 嫁の家 （よめのいえ）。 As was stated by another poster, 家の◯ （うちの◯）is a way of saying "my ~".

Thanks for the first one !

Thanks for your help but I still can''t fit it correctly in the script... (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
I'll try to make the context clearer for the second sentence:
The guy (who's the husband's CEO) recognize her which brings us into a flashback, when the girl's husband is about to leave. At that time there's him, the girl and the husband. This sentence is a thinking not a direct speech.

Ah, got it. If he's thinking it, he's probably comparing her to his own wife (assuming he has/had one), in which case it'd be "She's completely different from my wife, who took our daughter and went back to her parents' house."

Thanks. For the last part, are we sure she is saying mean/cruel and not 'I am sorry'? That's what machine translation was saying, and it kind of makes more sense. Because I am not sure what's mean/cruel, but I can see Kiuru apologizing to Nekone, because he doesn't want to offend her.

Oh, if it helps anyone, here's the RAW + our latest edit of that page
[imgur.com] https://imgur.com/a/AEtBE

(yes, two bubbles need to be switched in the middle of the page...)

Yeah, that's not "I'm sorry". It's an over-the-top reaction to Nekone not liking it like he does. An alternative could be something like "How could you, Nekoneee"

Can you help me with the tanslation of this text, please?:



Also I need the translation of this title:

春裏麗

It's from this gallery:

https://e-hentai.org/g/1131060/5f808b1c38/

It's suppose that be somemething like "Chun Li Li" But I want your opinion.

Thanks.

Can you help me with the tanslation of this text, please?:

Something like, "My classmate's mother has a really sexy body!"

Also I need the translation of this title:

春裏麗

It's from this gallery:

https://e-hentai.org/g/1131060/5f808b1c38/

It's suppose that be somemething like "Chun Li Li" But I want your opinion.

Thanks.

The kanji normally used to write Chun-Li are 春麗 and the 裏 inserted between them means "rear", "back", or "behind" and can also carry the nuance of "hidden".

It's really hard to translate titles like that, because it depends so much on the story. Something like "The Hidden Side of Chun-Li" would be the most natural sounding title, but it may not fit the story. "Chun-Li's backside" or "Chun-Li from behind" might also work if the plot is mostly just about her having sex.

Thank you very much, jeddite-eht!

Thank you very much, jeddite-eht!

You're welcome! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

romaji translation of the title only please https://e-hentai.org/s/09c3dc9d52/1090086-114

This post has been edited by cocblockula: Apr 17 2018, 20:23

Excuse me, it's me again, I need the translation of this text, please:

母子相姦断面描写妊娠

It's this:



Edit: Do you talk with me, N04h?

This post has been edited by Vile Mk 2: Apr 18 2018, 06:32

never mind

This post has been edited by N04h: Apr 18 2018, 01:04

is this a rewrite?

RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/492205/0adc464ef1/

TL? https://e-hentai.org/g/36496/ff35624ad3/

pages are out of order and mirrored

Excuse me, it's me again, I need the translation of this text, please:

母子相姦断面描写妊娠

It's this:



Edit: Do you talk with me, N04h?

Mother son incest cutaway drawing pregnant

To Red piotrus:

Yes it is, I don't know very much japanese, but the title is a wrong translation, one page is missing, the pages are reflected (Left is right and right is left) and To end, in the description says that that is a rewritte.

To N0h4:

Thank you very much.

This post has been edited by Vile Mk 2: Apr 18 2018, 09:32

What is this チャッ or チカッ SFX?

Guessing it's *flash*

This post has been edited by N04h: Apr 19 2018, 01:13

What is this チャッ or チカッ SFX?

Guessing it's *flash*

Around the eyes it looks like the image is on a screen, so "flash" would be right. Or perhaps crackle, or some static-y sound.

is this a rewrite?

RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/492205/0adc464ef1/

TL? https://e-hentai.org/g/36496/ff35624ad3/

pages are out of order and mirrored

What is the definition of "rewrite"? The wiki doesn't say how much text must be rewritten for it to count.

About 80% of it is an (incredibly poor and, in some places, entirely inaccurate) attempt at translating the original text - it shows some (regardless of how little) effort at trying to translate the original text.

The other 20% or so (including the title, possibly) is rewritten (it has nothing in common with the original text).