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post Feb 1 2018, 06:08
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Can someone please tell me what's going on here: [nhentai.net] https://nhentai.net/g/195425/168/
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post Feb 2 2018, 03:49
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This is the title of a chapter by Okina.

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How would you read it? and what does it mean?
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post Feb 2 2018, 06:14
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I need help with number 8:

ずっとよがりまくりのイキまくりじゃないか

Something like this maybe?
"She just keep on coming while being fucked so many times"

I want another opinion or suggestion.

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post Feb 2 2018, 10:26
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QUOTE(sauerkraut @ Feb 1 2018, 17:49) *

This is the title of a chapter by Okina.

(IMG:[i.gyazo.com] https://i.gyazo.com/44b9314e3c378722847471ea0ef87e24.png)

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How would you read it? and what does it mean?



Nikushoku no Kemono (or Kedamono). 肉蝕 isn't a real word, but is written with the characters for "meat, flesh" and "eclipse". The second kanji also forms 蝕む, "to be worm-eaten, to spoil, to gnaw at".

I would likely translate it as "The Beast that Gnaws at Flesh" or something like that.

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I need help with number 8:

ずっとよがりまくりのイキまくりじゃないか

Something like this maybe?
"She just keep on coming while being fucked so many times"

I want another opinion or suggestion.


よがる means "to express pleasure" or "to moan or groan in joy during sex". I would drop the "being fucked" part that isn't present in the original and replace it with something like "she just keeps on moaning and coming."
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post Feb 2 2018, 12:59
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Thanks Quilloasa!
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post Feb 3 2018, 05:13
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I need help with the end of the chapter. What's this in number 7?

どんだけせんずりこいてんですかっ

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post Feb 3 2018, 06:34
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QUOTE(bcmbbucks @ Feb 2 2018, 19:13) *

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I need help with the end of the chapter. What's this in number 7?

どんだけせんずりこいてんですかっ


Just how much are you masturbating!?
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post Feb 3 2018, 07:26
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Just how much are you masturbating!?


Thanks!
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post Feb 3 2018, 11:37
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can I know what this meaning?
それで
そのコンビニのバイトの子を、筆おろししたげたの
it's from
https://e-hentai.org/s/f97f594a62/1179535-74
thanks!
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post Feb 3 2018, 18:26
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QUOTE(Hyper_De @ Feb 3 2018, 11:37) *

can I know what this meaning?
それで
そのコンビニのバイトの子を、筆おろししたげたの
it's from
https://e-hentai.org/s/f97f594a62/1179535-74
thanks!


Something like, "And so, I gave the guy working at the convenience store his first sexual experience". The したげた at the end seems like a contraction of して and あげた to me.
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post Feb 5 2018, 08:08
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I need help with number 1,2, and 3.

This is the current translation https://e-hentai.org/s/058edfeea0/1129503-16
but I kinda want another opinion.
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post Feb 6 2018, 23:40
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QUOTE(bcmbbucks @ Feb 4 2018, 22:08) *

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I need help with number 1,2, and 3.

This is the current translation https://e-hentai.org/s/058edfeea0/1129503-16
but I kinda want another opinion.


2 doesn't really say anything about "stimulation." I'd probably go with something like, "It does feel good, but..." That said, it's not a critical error.
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post Feb 9 2018, 09:17
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Excuse me, can someone give me a translation of this text:

春裏麗

And of this too:

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Thanks.

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post Feb 9 2018, 12:31
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QUOTE(bcmbbucks @ Feb 5 2018, 08:08) *

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I need help with number 1,2, and 3.

This is the current translation https://e-hentai.org/s/058edfeea0/1129503-16
but I kinda want another opinion.

Depends what you're looking for.
A translation that's as close to the original as possible or one that still holds the gist of the original text?
If the latter, it's good enough. Maybe 2 will be a bit of a stretch but, as Quilloasa stated, and I agree here, it's not a critical error and, all in all, the gist of the idea is there. (Feeling the stimulation, at the very least, could be understood as feeling good, which is what the original text says).
If the former is what you want, I'd change 2 and 3 to
2; Though it feels good.... (or any alternative construction).
3: It feels like I'm endlessly eating the appetizer without ever getting to the the main dish.


QUOTE(Vile Mk 2 @ Feb 9 2018, 09:17) *

Excuse me, can someone give me a translation of this text:

春裏麗

And of this too:

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Thanks.

春裏麗 seems to be a name. No clue how to read it, though.
春裏 (the first and second kanjis) could be read as Chun Li but, as far as I'm aware, Chun-Li (SF character) is written as 春麗 (the first and the third).

As for the image:
From the back or the front (of the court, most likely), Mama Ace spikes furiously.
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post Feb 9 2018, 18:46
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Could someone help me with this:

予想以上 食い付きが いいじやね一か。。。っ
あ。。。わた…つ
とりあえず 若替えだ
もつ 楽しめる よラ な...つ

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post Feb 9 2018, 18:56
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please can someone translate this https://e-hentai.org/s/69cb495440/1182468-195
so i can complete this tankoubon!

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post Feb 9 2018, 22:34
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In this page:
https://e-hentai.org/s/1d27a0006d/1163485-11

In the last bubble it says:
しょ うがないな
勝手に壊れないように
繋いでおかないとね

What does the verb 繋ぐ mean here? is it about her connecting with her brother, or how he will tie her up? How would you translate it?
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post Feb 9 2018, 23:11
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https://e-hentai.org/s/843c13ed46/1163485-19
That's explained in next page; she's connected to some kind of machine.

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post Feb 9 2018, 23:51
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QUOTE(nonotan @ Feb 9 2018, 21:11) *

https://e-hentai.org/s/843c13ed46/1163485-19
That's explained in next page; she's connected to some kind of machine.

I figured it would be that, but the いでおかない conjugation confused me. How does it work in that sentence?

Also this line in the following page is giving me trouble:
https://e-hentai.org/s/843c13ed46/1163485-19

半年もった娘はいないけど

on the second to last balloon. What does it mean?

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post Feb 10 2018, 00:51
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QUOTE(sauerkraut @ Feb 9 2018, 23:51) *

I figured it would be that, but the いでおかない conjugation confused me. How does it work in that sentence?


There are four separate grammatical constructs in the sentence 繋いでおかないとね.

繋いで - 繋ぐ (to connect) in the positive te-form.
〜ておかない - 〜ておく (to do something in advance/for a future purpose/in preparation for/etc.) The base form of this is おく which comes from the verb 置く (to put) but takes on this special meaning when it's connected to a verb in the te-form. おかない is in the negative form.
〜と - ([when coupled with a negative verb] (must do 〜) which is a basic particle.
ね - (right?/don't you agree?/etc.) another basic particle.

The 〜ておく forms are very hard to translate. I'd say about half the time I don't really bother because doing so would just result in an awkward sentence. Sometimes I can reword the sentence slightly to try to capture the effect. Other times there's just no real way to express the concept in English while retaining a natural sounding sentence.

So your whole sentence is something like, "I have to be connected (to something) (for some future purpose) right?"

No matter what I've tried, my account is still in sad panda mode (maybe because it's been recently registered?) so I can't see the original context, but if she's connected to a machine like another poster said, I'd go with something like "It can't be helped, I have to stay connected to this machine all the time so I don't die/break." She literally says "So I don't break" but depending on how much of her is human vs. how much of her is machine, you could also translate that last part as "So I don't die" if that would be more natural in the given context.
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