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post Jan 3 2018, 10:52
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QUOTE(nonotan @ Jan 3 2018, 00:03) *

Propagation (of 元ネタ/the source of parody)
The artist afraids that the readers might not know the original story of the parody, and at the same time he hopes his work let the readers know the original story.


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post Jan 3 2018, 11:21
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QUOTE(N04h @ Jan 3 2018, 06:00) *

But in the previous panel she calls her a guest (お客さま).



QUOTE(nonotan @ Jan 3 2018, 10:03) *

It's probably a typo, because it's pretty strange that such a fanciful word suddenly appears in that scene, and it does not fit the story at all.... but I can't detect the word the artist really wanted to type.
However, I think it's almost safe to regard a typo as guest/お客/お客さま for translation, and it would not harm the story/TL.


Then it's probably just a type.
Because the first is Mazoku and the second is Kazoku. The 'M' and 'K' keys are neighbors and that's the only difference between the two works.
If we follow this, the guy could be saying that she's not just a family member, she's an important family member, though I don't know if this fits with what happens/is spoken later.

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post Jan 5 2018, 00:55
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Thanks

One more:

What is english word for 感応 here?

https://e-hentai.org/s/bf73857850/971173-15
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post Jan 5 2018, 08:08
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Hello.

I was just trying to parse the second to last panel of https://e-hentai.org/s/3ac61b5d31/150210-5, so I could look up the words.

However, I just can't figure out the correct word divisions. The problem sentence is:

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ガマンしなきや いーじゃん.



Looking at the available Spanish translation, I think the phrase should mean something like "Well, don't do it/ you don't do it"?

Finally, does this phrase have anything to do with either patience/self control or Cowper's fluid?

Thank you.

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post Jan 5 2018, 10:40
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QUOTE(N04h @ Jan 5 2018, 07:55) *

What is english word for 感応 here?

https://e-hentai.org/s/bf73857850/971173-15

The dictionary would tell you that it means "induction" (none of the other readings make sense in this case) but even induction isn't right here. Knowing the context of the bubbles-- that she's explaining to this guy why she's telling him to forget about her-- I'd probably personally TL the bubbles like, "You've seen the truth about me, right? About my past..." The word "induction" can also mean "to bring forward", so while the English definition is a bit awkward, you could say it means something like introduced information, particularly since the と particle is in there. (Bolded segment is the word in question as I've chosen to interpret it.)

QUOTE(ru4 @ Jan 5 2018, 15:08) *

I was just trying to parse the second to last panel of https://e-hentai.org/s/3ac61b5d31/150210-5, so I could look up the words. [Snip]

The Spanish translation ignores a bit of what the guy's saying in those preceding panels. 「ガマンしなきゃいーじゃん」 in that context looks like her response to what the guy said in the previous panel, and I'd probably translate it as "So don't, then." You're right in that it has to do with self-control, which is what 「我慢(ガマン)」is doing there.
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post Jan 5 2018, 15:19
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QUOTE(N04h @ Jan 4 2018, 22:55) *
What is english word for 感応 here?
感応(-して, -現象) seems to be a special word of GE. You'll see it again in the rest part (and later books?).
It may be better to use the term already used in the subtitles of anime or games, if the average GE fans know much about it. (I don't know the sub of that term really exists, though.)
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post Jan 5 2018, 17:49
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QUOTE(@Inkblot @ Jan 5 2018, 03:40) *

...The Spanish translation ignores a bit of what the guy's saying in those preceding panels. 「ガマンしなきゃいーじゃん」 in that context looks like her response to what the guy said in the previous panel, and I'd probably translate it as "So don't, then." You're right in that it has to do with self-control, which is what 「我慢(ガマン)」is doing there.


Thank you for the answer!

So, would a more literal translation be something like:

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我慢 (self-control) しな (don't [rude commmand]) き (mind/spirit) や (slight disappointment [emphatic sentence particle]) いい (fine) じゃん (then).


or is kiya just an expression?

Again, thank you for the help.

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post Jan 6 2018, 06:04
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can someone please help me with the top 3 bubbles?
https://e-hentai.org/s/81b8df67db/876671-5

scenario is MC's friend wants MC to sleep with the friend's wife to help the friend get it up from jealousy.
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post Jan 6 2018, 07:05
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QUOTE(ru4 @ Jan 6 2018, 00:49) *

So, would a more literal translation be something like:
or is kiya just an expression?

You're way off the mark. For starters, it isn't きや, it's きゃ. Second, 「きゃ」is a shortening of 「ければ」, which is part of a grammar structure that attaches to the negative short form of a verb, the verb in this case being 「我慢する」. Its meaning is "without doing something". Third, 「いーじゃん」is a dialectic shortening of 「いいじゃない」, a rhetorical way asking of something is okay (a la "It's pretty good, isn't it).

A literal translation would be 我慢しなきゃ(if you don't hold back)いーじゃん(that's fine, isn't it). You're trying to break it down into segments that aren't present in the original.
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post Jan 6 2018, 07:49
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QUOTE(@Inkblot @ Jan 6 2018, 00:05) *

You're way off the mark. For starters, it isn't きや, it's きゃ. Second, 「きゃ」is a shortening of 「ければ」, which is part of a grammar structure that attaches to the negative short form of a verb, the verb in this case being 「我慢する」. Its meaning is "without doing something". Third, 「いーじゃん」is a dialectic shortening of 「いいじゃない」, a rhetorical way asking of something is okay (a la "It's pretty good, isn't it).

A literal translation would be 我慢しなきゃ(if you don't hold back)いーじゃん(that's fine, isn't it). You're trying to break it down into segments that aren't present in the original.


Thank you for the breakdown.

Felt might have been overreaching. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)
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post Jan 6 2018, 21:50
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Hiya, need a little help with this phrase here:

今日は勝手にイッたらだめだぞ

It's that "Ittara" that's tripping me up, I know it's a verb, but don't know which. Any ideas?
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post Jan 6 2018, 22:21
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QUOTE(megasean3000 @ Jan 6 2018, 22:50) *

Hiya, need a little help with this phrase here:

今日は勝手にイッたらだめだぞ

It's that "Ittara" that's tripping me up, I know it's a verb, but don't know which. Any ideas?

Should be the -ra (if) form of itta, past tense of iku, imho.
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post Jan 7 2018, 05:58
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Having some trouble with this

奥の奥までどしーんて突かれて
しかもそのままドビュドビューって

and

ズボズボしたいよねー

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post Jan 7 2018, 09:13
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QUOTE(flano @ Jan 7 2018, 05:58) *

Having some trouble with this

奥の奥までどしーんて突かれて
しかもそのままドビュドビューって

and

ズボズボしたいよねー

Thank you in advanced

"どしーん", "ドビュドビュー" and "ズボズボ" are onomatopoeias being used to describe whatever is happening.
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post Jan 7 2018, 21:58
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Yosh, could someone help me on this one please: (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/unsure.gif)
ちょっと本気出したらお店の人みたいって。。。
context: a girl speaking about her first time having sex with her boyfriend which was a bad experience
Is it something like:
"We could have done it seriously if we were in his renting."
I'm specially struggling about the meaning of "お店の人”.

Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
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post Jan 8 2018, 08:39
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QUOTE(Comoop @ Jan 8 2018, 08:58) *

Yosh, could someone help me on this one please: (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/unsure.gif)
ちょっと本気出したらお店の人みたいって。。。
context: a girl speaking about her first time having sex with her boyfriend which was a bad experience
Is it something like:
"We could have done it seriously if we were in his renting."
I'm specially struggling about the meaning of "お店の人”.

Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

Maybe talking about a prostitute/brothel.

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post Jan 8 2018, 08:53
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QUOTE(Comoop @ Jan 8 2018, 04:58) *

Yosh, could someone help me on this one please: (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/unsure.gif)
ちょっと本気出したらお店の人みたいって。。。
context: a girl speaking about her first time having sex with her boyfriend which was a bad experience
Is it something like:
"We could have done it seriously if we were in his renting."
I'm specially struggling about the meaning of "お店の人”.

Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

Any chance you could link to the page? I'm seeing grammar structures in the original Japanese that aren't at all present in your translation, which makes me think there's contextual information in previous dialogue that I'm missing.
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post Jan 8 2018, 21:52
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I need help with these three lines.

ショタっぽいプレイにならないようにと
拡張路線で行ったんですが消しが人るとも-
なんだかねえ...

Context -> https://e-hentai.org/s/557f8ddae4/1163579-25

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post Jan 10 2018, 02:13
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Need some help translating this one:

もうどうにかなっちゃいそうだよ
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post Jan 10 2018, 22:34
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Need help translating this! From Kancolle's doujin

キラ付けくらいちゃんと随伴艦付けてくださいよ!

What is キラ付け? Is it something about sparkling? (i've searched the wikia, yet I'm not still sure)
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