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I need help with this sentence:
たとえ後々の不利益があったとしても、あの程度の画像ならいくらでも取り繕うことはできる。

Here is the page for context:

Thank you McHarddrive!

This post has been edited by shakuganaexa: Nov 20 2017, 03:04

I need help with this sentence:
たとえ後々の不利益があったとしても、あの程度の画像ならいくらでも取り繕うことはできる。

Thank you!

"You can cover up an image that trivial all you want, even if you might suffer some detriment later on."

That's my wild guess without any context to go with.

This post has been edited by McHarddrive: Nov 18 2017, 15:57

I don't really know where to ask this, couldn't find a dedicated thread and if there is one feel free to point me there - but is Mon-Mon on some sort of blacklist? I've noticed there are virtually no translations of it despite plenty of works available.

This post has been edited by Hoshiboshi: Nov 20 2017, 15:39

good day. i'm in need of a little help. i was QCing a script for my translator and then the translator disappeared and their inbox filled up so i'm literally out of options in contacting them. i've even sent them messages on HentaiVerse. i've smoothed the script out quite a bit i just need help on a few pages before i believe this work is release-ready. this script has been sitting on the back burner since August or so.

Primarily need a check on the accuracy of the translation

https://e-hentai.org/s/b8754dc14d/854510-1 <- was not translated. would be appreciated.

https://e-hentai.org/s/12e23be264/854510-2 <- middle right bubble. red text.
i have:
"You wanted to borrow Ueno, right Akira? You can grab it from my room."

https://e-hentai.org/s/2750a7f7e7/854510-3 <- top left and mid right
i have:
Eh!? Wait! It's dangerous out here! We'll get foun-
NNDDDD!

https://e-hentai.org/s/86077587eb/854510-12 cellphone
i have:
Ken-Chan (star)
Where are you, mum?

i also have:
Your son is calling you Naomi
"Calling" seems inaccurate in this context. Contacting maybe? Or did the son start calling her after he texted her?

i also have:
Let's fuck all the way to the day of full moon Naomi
I have no idea what was meant on this line. I believe it's last bubble on the page spoken by the guy

thanks!

https://e-hentai.org/s/b8754dc14d/854510-1 <- was not translated. would be appreciated.

おまけ♥　(spread across both sides of the woman) = "Omake♥"
ジュース = juice
そういえばおばさんの名前は直美です！ = Oh, yeah... The lady's name is Naomi!

"You wanted to borrow Ueno, right Akira? You can grab it from my room."

Way off... It's something like "Ueno~ If there's a game you want to borrow, just take it from my room." where Ueno is likely the family name of the one the mother is calling "Akira".

https://e-hentai.org/s/2750a7f7e7/854510-3 <- top left and mid right
i have:
Eh!? Wait! It's dangerous out here! We'll get foun-
NNDDDD!

It's not entirely accurate but not an awful translation.

The first bubble doesn't quite say "it's dangerous out here" - it just says "if we do it here", but the intent is basically the same.
I personally wouldn't have gone with "we'll get found" since the implied meaning is more like "we'll be noticed" / "he'll find out".
The second bubble is just a standard moan (literally "nhiii") - it's not 100% accurate to make it a continuation of the previous bubble but it's not like it matters, really.

Ken-Chan (star)
Where are you, mum?

Close enough. Literally: "When are you coming (home), mum?"
Or "mom" if you're American and want to butcher the English language, I suppose...

i also have:
Your son is calling you Naomi
"Calling" seems inaccurate in this context. Contacting maybe? Or did the son start calling her after he texted her?

No, you're correct here. Contacting is what it says.

You could also just go with "Your son (texted/messaged) you, Naomi." / "Your son is trying to get in touch with you, Naomi." or something if you want, since it sounds more natural here than "your son contacted you".

Let's fuck all the way to the day of full moon Naomi

Literally just says "Let's fuck until the sun rises tomorrow, Naomi!!" or if you prefer "Let's fuck all night long, Naomi!!"



To be honest, I'd be worried about the translation quality of the rest of it, given these lines, but eh...

This post has been edited by rqwrqw: Nov 23 2017, 12:27

yeah that sounds pretty bad. i guess the script is a dud then. thanks for your time rqwrqw =)

Thanks for your help, rqwrqw!

I'm at loss on this line now. I can't find an appropriate translation for it.

力抜きなさい

It's on the last panel of
https://e-hentai.org/s/967bebe249/12977-113

"Don't tense up" or something

"Don't tense up" or something

Cool, thanks.

I might be coming back here a couple of times because the thing I'm trying to translate is pretty wordy @_@

いまどき俺としかエッチしたことないってゆうのが珍しいってママ友に笑われたとかって...

Source: https://e-hentai.org/s/009b214a8e/876671-54 (4th panel, 1st bubble)

It seems like he's referring to something his wife said that made it seem like she wanted to try having sex with other men. I believe the first part says something like "Nowadays, I'm the only one you can have sex with...", but then the "tte yuu no ga" phrase onwards is tough for me to translate.

This post has been edited by Mx4_1204: Nov 26 2017, 15:09

I might be coming back here a couple of times because the thing I'm trying to translate is pretty wordy @_@

いまどき俺としかエッチしたことないってゆうのが珍しいってママ友に笑われたとかって...

Source: https://e-hentai.org/s/009b214a8e/876671-54 (4th panel, 1st bubble)

It seems like he's referring to something his wife said that made it seem like she wanted to try having sex with other men. I believe the first part says something like "Nowadays, I'm the only one you can have sex with...", but then the "tte yuu no ga" phrase onwards is tough for me to translate.

Something like "Didn't your momfriends laugh at you and say that it's unusual to only have had sex with [your husband/me/one guy] this day and age?"

The part prior to "っていうのが" is a statement or fact, and according to her momfriends, that fact/statement is so 珍しい that they couldn't help but laugh.

This post has been edited by McHarddrive: Nov 26 2017, 15:51

@McHarddrive Ok, now I get it. Thanks!

One more question about the line. What does the "とかって" at the end mean?

And another short one about some of the lines on the previous page. The word "ネチっこい" (nechikkoi) is used a lot to describe how she likes various sex acts (kissing, cunnilingus, fellatio). Dictionary says it means "stubborn" or "persistent", but I was wondering if it meant something else within this context, because "stubborn" doesn't work super well in English.

Yosh

I don't get this one:
でも一人で抱え込むこともあるから。。。
大事にしてやってよ
What means あるから in the sentence?

the sentence before: 私と違って要領良くてしっかり者で。。。
context: unmarried older sister talking to her married little sister through phone.

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寝て起きたらさめる。。。から。。。
だから。。。ね？
context: drunk girl saying this after sex

Moreover, in the doujin they say a lot "寝るまで”　（the 2 having sex) I don't understand what it means.
Hope you could help me (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/rolleyes.gif)

This post has been edited by Comoop: Nov 28 2017, 00:48

Yosh

I don't get this one:
でも一人で抱え込むこともあるから。。。
大事にしてやってよ
What means あるから in the sentence?

the sentence before: 私と違って要領良くてしっかり者で。。。
context: unmarried older sister talking to her married little sister through phone.

から is just the particle (i.e. because, since, so, etc.)
ある is the verb for the rest of the sentence

抱え込む = to take on/assume responsibility for (literally, it means embrace)
so 抱え込むこと would be "something you are handling or are responsible for"
「でも一人で抱え込むこともあるから。。。」 would be something like "But there are also things I have to handle on my own, so..."

The second line is a standard line (大事にする) which means "to take care of something". Adding "てやる" would indicate that they are asking the other person to care of something/someone. I'm not quite sure what the something/someone is, or if it's just a generic "Take care of yourself". You might be able to fill that in yourself with context.

寝て起きたらさめる。。。から。。。
だから。。。ね？
context: drunk girl saying this after sex

寝て起きたらさめる => When I wake up, I will be sober

It'd be something like "Because ... when I wake up, I'll be sober ... so ... y'know?"

Moreover, in the doujin they say a lot "寝るまで" (the 2 having sex) I don't understand what it means.
Hope you could help me (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/rolleyes.gif)

寝るまで => Until I go to/fall asleep

Can anyone read that small writing on the last panel?

After ふえーん



This post has been edited by N04h: Dec 1 2017, 12:31

Looks to me like ふえーん　なんかうれてないー

Looks to me like ふえーん　なんかうれてないー

Doesn't really make sense?

the second word looks like うんこ

Can anyone read that small writing on the last panel?

After ふえーん

なんかうれしくないー

なんかうれしくないー

yeah, this must be it, thanks.