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Ok, thanks.

Me again,
Can I have help on this sentence please,

デカさに似合わず感度も良好か！

I'm specially struggling on the "デカさ"
Tell me if you need context informations.

This post has been edited by Comoop: Aug 20 2017, 12:09

デカさ is "hugeness" (でかい turned into a noun).

Literal translation: Unsuited to its big size (bigness), the sensitivity is good too!

デカさ is "hugeness" (でかい turned into a noun).

Literal translation: Unsuited to its big size (bigness), the sensitivity is good too!

Thanks ! But why dekai isn't writed in hiragana ?

Right now I'm translating one work, but I'm having trouble with punctuation and choosing the appropriate variant for the title.
Original: 戦隊ヒーロー最弱ダメ彼氏から黒ビッチGAL彼女を奪姦レイプ
Here are the variants:
Bitchy Gyaru Girlfriend of Her Loser Boyfriend, Weakest Sentai Hero, Kidnapped and Raped.
Bitchy Gyaru, Girlfriend of the Sentai Hero, Weakest Loser, Kidnapped and Raped.
Weakest Loser Sentai Hero's Girlfriend, Bitchy Gyaru, Kidnapped and Raped.
Which one would you pick? What are your variants?

But why dekai isn't writed in hiragana ?

Usually katakana is used to emphasise a particular quality of something - you often see this being the case with the word "dekai" because "dekai" itself is usually only used to emphasise size in the first place (as opposed to "ookii" and "okisa" or "takai" and "takasa" etc etc).

Right now I'm translating one work, but I'm having trouble with punctuation and choosing the appropriate variant for the title.
Original: 戦隊ヒーロー最弱ダメ彼氏から黒ビッチGAL彼女を奪姦レイプ
Here are the variants:
Bitchy Gyaru Girlfriend of Her Loser Boyfriend, Weakest Sentai Hero, Kidnapped and Raped.
Bitchy Gyaru, Girlfriend of the Sentai Hero, Weakest Loser, Kidnapped and Raped.
Weakest Loser Sentai Hero's Girlfriend, Bitchy Gyaru, Kidnapped and Raped.
Which one would you pick? What are your variants?

"Bitchy" has different connotations in English than what the term ビッチ implies (which is closer to "slut").

Also it's not entirely obvious but is 最弱ダメ彼氏 the actual hero name? Or is it just a descriptor along with 戦隊ヒーロー?

Okay thank you !

Usually katakana is used to emphasise a particular quality of something - you often see this being the case with the word "dekai" because "dekai" itself is usually only used to emphasise size in the first place (as opposed to "ookii" and "okisa" or "takai" and "takasa" etc etc).
"Bitchy" has different connotations in English than what the term ビッチ implies (which is closer to "slut").

Also it's not entirely obvious but is 最弱ダメ彼氏 the actual hero name? Or is it just a descriptor along with 戦隊ヒーロー?

It's a descriptor (ダメ彼氏) by which the narraion goes. His actual name is Red. I think 'bitchy' is a bit closer to the truth, given the context of the story.

Then just try to keep the title as plain and simple as possible.

e.g. anything along the lines of "the <slutty/bitchy/whatever> gyaru girlfriend of the weakest loser sentai hero is kidnapped and raped"

To be honest, I don't think it matters what you choose as long as it's obvious what it means.

Then just try to keep the title as plain and simple as possible.

e.g. anything along the lines of "the <slutty/bitchy/whatever> gyaru girlfriend of the weakest loser sentai hero is kidnapped and raped"

To be honest, I don't think it matters what you choose as long as it's obvious what it means.

Thanks.

今日は私として頂け-

昨日頂けなかった王子のおちんぽ...

プロットの段階ではナナリーとドッペルゲンガーでやってたんですが、
結晶のカケラでちょうどナナリー二人目が出ましてピンときたので.

内容の変更、正直書き上がるとは思いませんでした。

Can I get some help with these lines? The "ピンときた" bit is especially confusing to me. Thanks.

Bit of context.

This post has been edited by frontsex: Aug 24 2017, 07:18

Can someone help me with this line?

親譲りの超絶倫で部長になった。

I'm not sure how I should read 超絶倫 Is it 超絶 倫, 超 絶倫 or is 超絶倫 a word itself?

今日は私として頂け-

昨日頂けなかった王子のおちんぽ...

Today I'll receive as myself
The prince's dick that I couldn't receive yesterday...

(I'm considering these lines are together and that the second line actually comes first in the original)

プロットの段階ではナナリーとドッペルゲンガーでやってたんですが、
結晶のカケラでちょうどナナリー二人目が出ましてピンときたので.

内容の変更、正直書き上がるとは思いませんでした。

Can I get some help with these lines? The "ピンときた" bit is especially confusing to me. Thanks.

(I'm assuming this is part of the author's note and not the story itself.)
At the plotting stage I was going with Nanari and the doppelganger but as the parts came to be, the second Nanari appeared and it all come together.

I honestly didn't think I'd finish writing the modifications.

超+絶倫
超 being an amplifier, meaning "very" or "extremely", and 絶倫 (depending on the context) could refer to a strong sex drive/libido, in addition to its standard definition.

snip

Tyvm sir/ma'am.

So I'm retypesetting an old scanlation, and I found out that the original translators forgot that page 7 of the work existed.
So... if anyone is willing enough to translate this page for me, I'd appreciate it.

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Roughly the following

…もしお金でなつきの時間買えるんやったら…うちはきっと破産してしますなあ…
If I could buy your time with money... I'd definitely go broke...
(Lit. says "Natsuki's time" but assuming Natsuki is the one being spoken to)

(SFX) ムカ
Angered/Annoyed

はあ!?お前さあ…冗談でもそういうことは…
Huh!? Listen here... Even as a joke, that's...

割とケッペキ
Rather pure.

…て
... Hey.

(SFX) つーん
Glum/Sulky

…え？
... Eh?

何でコイツいきなりスネてんだ？
Why is she the one sulking all of a sudden?

逆ギレ？
Aren't I the victim here? // Shouldn't I be the one who's angry?

(SFX) ぷく―――っ
Steaming

好き放題されたの私なのに…？
Even though I'm the one she's been playing with...? // Even though she's been doing whatever she wants to do with me...?

ってか…
Anyway...

…もしかしてお前―――
... Are you perhaps... // Did you perhaps
(Depends on what's said next)

*SNIP*

Thank you.

Any clue wth the kanji is? I can read の子宮, but the characters before that are a mystery. It's a shot in the dark but I came up with 兄巨孚し. It definitely doesn't make any sense though, I must be missing something.



This post has been edited by nikkuh: Aug 29 2017, 10:30

With the second and third, you were close - it's definitely 巨乳. But I'm not sure how the first character relates to it. I would have guessed it was 兄 but that doesn't make a lot of sense unless it's unrelated - hard to tell without context.

Any clue wth the kanji is? I can read の子宮, but the characters before that are a mystery. It's a shot in the dark but I came up with 兄巨孚し. It definitely doesn't make any sense though, I must be missing something.

ロリ巨乳の子宮