QUOTE(Thira @ Jul 11 2015, 18:17)
All the explanations have been done already...
Why do you split hairs to the trivial things that the author doesn't mention?
What do you mean the author doesn't mention? You yourself have been repeatedly saying "(like this)" and I have been repeatedly asking "What does "this" refer to? What pages is/are "this?". Are you saying that you just don't know what "this" is? It matters knowing what "this" is (if at all possible) because if you don't, you don't know why he is writing the new story. It's not splitting hairs.
QUOTE(Thira @ Jul 11 2015, 18:17)
Since "typical (stereotyped) unhappy storyline (like this)" is "あんまりくらい" as "エロマンガ", he'll
get rid of the stress by issuing simple (storyless) "エロマンガ".
Look, do you agree with me that the line のもアレなので implies that there was a reason that he wrote the new story, as opposed to it just being a random whim of his? If you agree that there is a reason, do you agree the that reason is because either all or some part of pages 2-28 are あんまりくらい? If you agree with that, what I am asking is, what section specifically are あんまりくらい to the author (pages 2-27, 2-28, or just page 28). If you know specifically what pages he is referring to by あんまりくらい, let me know please. If you do not know whether the part refereed to by あんまりくらい, then let me know that it cannot be identified what part he is specifically referring to.
If you are for some reason having difficulty understanding what the important nuiance I am harking on is, or simply do not understand why your explanation has not be satisfactory clear, I will attempt once more to tackle it from another angle:
If page 28 did not exist and was not included in the book, would the あんまりくらい segment still make sense?And if you are saying that あんまりくらい does not refer anything in page 2-28, then I simply do not understand whatsoever the meaning of that sentence. Roughly speaking, I interpreted it as "Since being too dark (in the story) isn't good, I'm going to draw another story of them in another world line just having sex in a normal setting." If あんまりくらい is just a general thing and doesn't have any relevance or relation to any of the events in pages 2-28, why did he bother saying it? It's like saying "Since leaves are green, I'm going to draw a new story". Certainly the あんまりくらい part has to be relevant to (perhaps a subset of) pages 2-28 in some way, otherwise he could have just wrote 別の世界線的なただえろえろするだけのやつをもういっかいかきます and be done with it.
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If you are simply tired of responding to my questions, then you can just answer the bold portion with a "yes" or "no" if you'd like. As from that answer, I will be able to derive most of what I was trying to understand.
This post has been edited by Crystalium: Jul 12 2015, 01:11
Random translation help
Jul 12 2015, 00:39
