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The second one I am unsure of. ん can sometimes mean る, correct?

Yes.
さわんなって = さわるなって
"(I said) don't touch it!"

I dunno, that's what I think it means too. "It's a crime to be a virgin.", something along those lines.

Well, we know what it translates to, but we don't know what it means. XD.

This post has been edited by amaimono: Mar 31 2014, 21:52

[Edited since I got some of my questions answered elsewhere]
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Continuing where I left off before, please, if you could, evaluate these translations. If you will only assist with a subset of these, please focus on #1-3 if you can.

1) Top right panel | も...勿論いいじゃない？そんな約束がなくでも友達だろ？ = I-isn’t that definitely a bad idea? Even without a promise like that, wouldn’t we be friends?
2) Middle right panel | この淫乱な巨乳はどんだ目線を集まってたか？= Have you taken a look at these huge lewd tits/boobs? [This sentence is VERY confusing to me.]
3) Top left panel | あの...一応俺も男なので...責任をとるから... = Um...since I'm (kind of) a guy/man...(and) since I'll be taking responsibility... [I don't understand how to translate 一応 here. Also, does the way he's saying this imply "Since I'm a guy, and I'm going to take responsibility, let date you", or something like that? Is that what he's going for?]

4) I had asked this before, but I want more clarification: Bottom left panel | ~~~けど、婚約が結んだ以上。。。 まず「ちょっと親しい友達」になってもいいよね！ = 「some previous stuff~~」, but since we’re tied/connected by the engagement (anyways)... We should first become “a little closer than ordinary friends”! [My issue: Does this imply that they still feel bound by the engagement? Or are they just "putiting on a front" so to speak to make it seem like they are still bound by the engagement? Or is it something else?]
5) How would you choose to translate 特別に in the very first panel? I have that sentence currently translated as "Should/Shall I keep doing it (especially) with my feet for you?".
6) How would you choose to translate きつい in the bottom right panel? I have that sentence currently translated as "This is bad! Since we did that stuff earlier, watching this is hard/intense."

OPTIONAL QUESTIONS REGARDING #2: Is なくでも a mistakenly written version of なくても? Is the 約束(promise) he is referring to the one about 友達になる(becoming friends) or the 婚約(engagement)?

Thank you whoever provides some assistance.

This post has been edited by Crystalium: Apr 4 2014, 05:56

amaimono to the rescue! ...or at least I hope so.

1) Top right panel | も...勿論いいじゃない？そんな約束がなくでも友達だろ？ = I-isn’t that definitely a bad idea? Even without a promise like that, wouldn’t we be friends?

"O-Of course! Even without such promises, we'll still be friends!"

2) Middle right panel | この淫乱な巨乳はどんだ目線を集まってたか？= Have you taken a look at these huge lewd tits/boobs? [This sentence is VERY confusing to me.]

どんだ(け) = どれだけ
"Just how many heads have these indecent big boobs turned?" Will need refining.

3) Top left panel | あの...一応俺も男なので...責任をとるから... = Um...since I'm (kind of) a guy/man...(and) since I'll be taking responsibility... [I don't understand how to translate 一応 here. Also, does the way he's saying this imply "Since I'm a guy, and I'm going to take responsibility, let date you", or something like that? Is that what he's going for?]

"Well, I'm a man too... I'll take a responsibility."
一応 is hardly translatable. It's used for self-deprecation/to sound humble. The last から doesn't translate to "since/because", but rather it gives an assurance that the speaker will do what he said.

4) I had asked this before, but I want more clarification: Bottom left panel | ~~~けど、婚約が結んだ以上。。。 まず「ちょっと親しい友達」になってもいいよね！ = 「some previous stuff~~」, but since we’re tied/connected by the engagement (anyways)... We should first become “a little closer than ordinary friends”! [My issue: Does this imply that they still feel bound by the engagement? Or are they just "putiting on a front" so to speak to make it seem like they are still bound by the engagement? Or is it something else?]

以上 translates to "on top of...". "But on top of us being engaged... You won't mind if we start out as 'intimate friends', will you?"

5) How would you choose to translate 特別に in the very first panel? I have that sentence currently translated as "Should/Shall I keep doing it (especially) with my feet for you?".
6) How would you choose to translate きつい in the bottom right panel? I have that sentence currently translated as "This is bad! Since we did that stuff earlier, watching this is hard/intense."

I'm at work so I can't open the gallery, but 特別に = specially / just on this occasion.

OPTIONAL QUESTIONS REGARDING #2: Is なくでも a mistakenly written version of なくても?

They're basically the same. You use なくても after verb and なくでも after object noun. ...or maybe not. You can use なくても after object noun too by adding じゃ.

Is the 約束(promise) he is referring to the one about 友達になる(becoming friends) or the 婚約(engagement)?

The engagement, I'd suspect. Unless they exchanged promises when they were kids or something like that.

This post has been edited by amaimono: Apr 4 2014, 11:12

First of all:
"そんな約束がなくでも友達だろ?"
"この淫乱な巨乳はどんだ目線を集まってたか?"
"婚約が結んだ以上"
Like I already mentioned, these are weird sentences.

Should be:
"そんな約束がなくでも友達だろ?"
"この淫乱な巨乳はどんだけ目線を集めてたか?"
"婚約を結んだ以上"

Have you taken a look at these huge lewd tits/boobs?[/color] [This sentence is VERY confusing to me.]

"(Have you realized that) how many heads were turned to the lewd tits?"

[I don't understand how to translate 一応 here. Also, does the way he's saying this imply "Since I'm a guy, and I'm going to take responsibility, let date you", or something like that? Is that what he's going for?]

This "一応" means "you know...".
He doesn't memtion anything concrete.
Like:
"I'll do it(/take responsibility) till the end."
Means, since he deflowered her, he'll satisfy/marry with her.

[My issue: Does this imply that they still feel bound by the engagement? Or are they just "putiting on a front" so to speak to make it seem like they are still bound by the engagement? Or is it something else?]

She claims it as a right (to become closer), also as an excuse, of course.

I have that sentence currently translated as "Should/Shall I keep doing it (especially) with my feet for you?".

"I'll keep the footjob as a special service for you!"

Is the 約束(promise) he is referring to the one about 友達になる(becoming friends) or the 婚約(engagement)?

"そんな約束" = "the promise" = "engagement" here.

This "一応" means "you know...".

Ah... That's clever.

Well I took a break from the loli manga and decided to work on his Lucky Start doujin instead. I think I am pretty much done with it but there are a few things I have to reword better etc (as well as the editing). I got a few bubbles I want some help with though.



The ones I am unsure about:
エ*ズのセールで
買ってきたんだよ
Is エ*ズ the name of a store? So she is saying "I bought them at E'zu's store" or "I bought them in a sale at E*zu's"?


まだまだ
あるよ
This is "there is still more to come", right?


I could need some help with the last two panels as well. The one on the right is Kagami saying that it's a joke product, and then reading a label on the box saying it's not intended for anything other than as a joke, right?

I don't get the last panel though. I have no idea what "[押すなよ?押すなよ?]" means. I think she is saying something along the lines of "they always write that in the instructions" but the rest I don't get.


I am going to need some more help with the loli manga I asked about before as well. If anyone is interested in proof reading it (might be done on Sunday or Monday) then that would be great, because I am unsure about quite a few things in it.

Is エ*ズ the name of a store? So she is saying "I bought them at E'zu's store" or "I bought them in a sale at E*zu's"?

A cipher for "[www.ms-online.co.jp] エムズ".

This is "there is still more to come", right?

Yes.
Or, "I bought more."

I could need some help with the last two panels as well. The one on the right is Kagami saying that it's a joke product, and then reading a label on the box saying it's not intended for anything other than as a joke, right?

Refer this post.
Since most of the sex toys are illegal in Japan, explanations like that on the products (as excuses).

I don't get the last panel though. I have no idea what "[押すなよ?押すなよ?]" means. I think she is saying something along the lines of "they always write that in the instructions" but the rest I don't get.

It refers typical "fall-down-comedy (farce)" in Japan.
"押すなよ? 押すなよ? (Don't push me! Don't push me!)" is famous "lead-in" for the "fall-down-comedy" which means "push for it" as a hint.

This post has been edited by Thira: Apr 5 2014, 09:07

It refers typical "fall-down-comedy (farce)" in Japan.
"押すなよ? 押すなよ? (Don't push me! Don't push me!)" is famous "lead-in" for the "fall-down-comedy" which means "push for it" as a hint.

Oh OK. So how would you translate that bubble? I still don't quite get it.

ふふーん！　先輩のさっきの言葉聴いてなかったの?
Hmph! Didn't you hear what senpai just said?

先輩は私と別れないって
She wouldn't leave me!

ってことはあんたと別れるって事
So that means she's leaving you!

―じゃないよ？
But it doesn't?

Help on the last line? How would you phrase it?

Help on the last line? How would you phrase it?

Change the question mark to exclamation? (assuming it was the guy who said it)

Could someone help me for one line? From this page, third panel second box:

「三年飛ばしで　入ってきたってのは　伊達じゃなかった　わけだ」

The first part I figure is like "(In) the three years that flew by since she arrived here", but I'm completely stumped by "伊達じゃなかったわけだ".

@amaimono
Really? That was the only thing I could guess, but it didn't especially make sense to me. Thanks then.

@Thira
Oh, okay. So I misunderstood the first part of it too. Whew, glad you told me. Thanks!

This post has been edited by freudia: Apr 11 2014, 19:19

@amaimono - You're right. I'm assuming it's the other girl who said it. Might as well, thanks.

This post has been edited by Ser Maggot: Apr 11 2014, 06:44

The first part I figure is like "(In) the three years that passed by since she arrived here", but I'm completely stumped by "伊達じゃなかったわけだ".

"...wasn't just for show."

「三年飛ばしで　入ってきたってのは　伊達じゃなかった　わけだ」

"She has not came here with skipped three grades for nothing."

This isn't really a translation request, I just want to know what characters are displayed on this one, it just messed up my head too much already, I think I spent almost a couple hours trying to figure it out:

(IMG:[ist2-2.filesor.com] http://ist2-2.filesor.com/pimpandhost.com/1/_/_/_/1/2/5/3/z/253z1/sample.JPG)

I know I suck.

Thank you very much.

Best Regards.

This post has been edited by hentaieyebr: Apr 15 2014, 03:33

It would appear to say 極太診察

It would appear to say 極太診察

I think you're right ^^

Thank you very much.

Best Regards.

Hello, can anyone tell me the name of the artist found here? Thank you.

Edit: Thanks freudia!

@mumei - freudia helped me out but thank you for taking your time to help me nonetheless. You posting here means you're not quitting on translating, right? Right!? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by Ser Maggot: Apr 21 2014, 01:04

Never mind, had my question answered elsewhere.

This post has been edited by freudia: Apr 20 2014, 19:24

I had a question regarding https://e-hentai.org/s/dedf1a5321/551772-84, about the huge bubble on the 3rd panel which is merged from 3 bubbles. What exactly is the girl saying there? Is she talking about herself in the third person? Or about the boy?
Context is, that 4 years ago, the boy went to an abandoned building to read porn books which someone left there, but there was also the girl there, and they did some naughty things (no sex though) and promised to continue with what they did exactly 4 years later. In these 4 years, they almost had no contact with each other, so basically now they are meeting the first time since 4 years.

The first bubble is mostly clear, she's just mentioning the boy. For the second and third bubble, I'm thinking it could be something like "I (the girl) was thinking that what if he (the boy) couldn't forget about the girl (herself), worried endlessly, and thought "I'll assault some other girl!" and called out some other girl to a street at night, but then he comes to his senses, and thinks "Why don't I just confess to her?" to stir up his bursting feelings(?)."
So it's like she's saying that she was worried he'd end up with some other girl, in a very very roundabout way. But then again, I'm not sure at all, so please help me out with this! :-)


@Ser Maggot
In case the question hadn't been answered yet, from the contents page (https://e-hentai.org/s/df6f3f3e1d/66115-319), it seems the artist is "Tenjiku Rounin".

This post has been edited by mumei-chan: Apr 20 2014, 21:45