[X] My Assistant

Last one. Mainly that smaller box.

[puu.sh] http://puu.sh/5L8E0.jpg

Last one. Mainly that smaller box.

[puu.sh] http://puu.sh/5L8E0.jpg

彼女が俺の手を握っているときだけでも
どうか

Even if it's only when she's holding my hand,
please.

Or you can rearrange and use "Somehow" instead of "please".

Thanks for the quick aid guys~

[www.raw.senmanga.com] http://www.senmanga.com/Aku_no_Hana/52/30
what does she say? Sadly the bubble was empty in the translation i read

This post has been edited by surted: Dec 18 2013, 01:12

ごゆっくりどうぞ

Please take your time.

ごゆっくりどうぞ

Please take your time.

Tyvm (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Some help please?

From this page:

「たしかに…小夏の言い分も最もだな…」「 もう少し出番は先だと思ってたんだけどな…」

For the first part, 最も throws me off. Does it just mean "very important" here? As for the second, I'm not sure how to make sense of もう少し出番は先だ. "A little bit before your turn"?

Thanks in advance.

Edit: Ah, okay. Dang, もう少し出番は先だ seems awfully abstract (though I suppose it makes sense). Well anyway, thanks for the help Thira. Much appreciated!

This post has been edited by freudia: Dec 18 2013, 19:14

For the first part, 最も throws me off. Does it just mean "very important" here?

The author's mistake.
It's not "最も" but "尤も" and means "understandable/justifiable/natural".

As for the second, I'm not sure how to make sense of もう少し出番は先だ. "A little bit before your turn"?

"もう少し出番は先だと思ってたんだけどな…" = "I thought I can use these a little later but..."

Two questions.
First, what's the meaning of ぬっぷり　（ぬっぷりとしたイイ穴だ）?

Second,　what's written in the (??) part:
要素なんてー（？？）だって残っちゃいない


Thanks

First, what's the meaning of ぬっぷり　（ぬっぷりとしたイイ穴だ）?

Maybe, "ぬる+ぷり" = "wet/slimy and plump".

要素なんてー（？？）だって残っちゃいない

"1ミリ" (= 1mm).

Hi, I'm back again. I'd like some help with these sentences. Most of these are very quick to answer:
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Two times in this doujin (last panel of page 2 for example), some conjugated form of the word 犯す is used, but the furigana uses やる. So would you suggest "fuck (me/you)" or "do (me/you)"? Or are the both the same?

Page 4:
3rd-panel -- ち...ちんこなんてただの肉の棒だ...: "A-a dick or whatever is just a meat stick..."
3rd-panel -- 誰のイチモツでもさほど違いはねーよ: "Doesn’t matter whose it is, they aren’t that different!" [This is the part that confuses me significantly.]

Page 5:
Last-panel -- た...たりめえだ: "T-that's enough!" [I am unfamiliar with this expression. Did I translate it right?]

Page 7:
2nd-last-panel -- 歯を食しばッて快楽を溜込めッ!: "You’re clenching/grinding your teeth and building up pleasure!" [Is he implying a cause-effect relationship in this sentence? So like "When you grind your teeth, you build up pleasure!" or something like that? Or is it as I wrote?]

Page 9:
3rd-panel -- 匂いが顔に...: Is this "The smell's on my face..." or is it an interruption of 顔に泥を塗る or 顔に紅葉を散らす, so like "This smell is making me blush" or "This smell is embarrassing me"?

Page 13:
礼には及ばん: Does Senketsu say this as "No need to thank me"? Or does Aikurou say this as “I need to thank you”?
役者は揃った。ソファーで足を開いてくれ: "We’ve become actors. Now, go spread your legs on the sofa." [It's the "We've become actors" part that is confusing me. Am I misunderstanding him? What does he mean by that?]

Page 14:
2nd-panel -- フン! この流子様がちんぽなんかに負けるかよッ!: "Hmph! Ya’ think this Ryuuko-sama [What is a good way to translate talking about yourself like this in the 3rd-person?] is gonna lose/succumb to your damn dick!?"

Page 21:
1st-speaking-panel -- 中古丈もと言う: "I say it’s just old fashioned." [Not convinced this is correct.]
Middle-panel -- ざまーみろ鬼龍院ッ！エッチでは先越そしてやッたぜッ!: "Watch yourself, Kiryuuin! Now I’ve surpassed you with sex!" [How is this translation?]

This post has been edited by Crystalium: Dec 24 2013, 02:02

I can't read handwritten part of
https://e-hentai.org/r/5d686fd5651ff72c88...9221-95/095.jpg

"かっ"
"かおっほろぅ アジがっっ"
"アジが"
"しみれて"
"くるろっ"
"ブタっ"
"し"
"ちゅう～"

"あぁ…っ"
"でっ"
"でるのっ? ね?"
"アツぃ"
"のぅ"
"おっしるぅ"
"ミルくうぅ っ"

"かおっほろぅ アジがっっ"
what does that even mean

"かおっほろぅ アジがっっ"
what does that even mean

Need the context and/or the background to solve it.

original chapter here
https://e-hentai.org/s/21c4c6ef93/629221-79

Just my quick take on this. Anyone's welcome to correct me.

Two times in this doujin (last panel of page 2 for example), some conjugated form of the word 犯す is used, but the furigana uses やる. So would you suggest "fuck (me/you)" or "do (me/you)"? Or are the both the same?

Since やる can mean many things, they simply write it as 犯る so it clears up the meaning. Translate it into what feels more appropriate for the situation, you can't always get 1 to 1 translations. For example I would use something like "you just want to do it with me, don't you" in page 2 because Ryuuko seems a bit awkward about it.

Page 4:
3rd-panel -- ち...ちんこなんてただの肉の棒だ...: "A-a dick or whatever is just a meat stick..."
3rd-panel -- 誰のイチモツでもさほど違いはねーよ: "Doesn’t matter whose it is, they aren’t that different!" [This is the part that confuses me significantly.]

3rd-panel -- ち...ちんこなんてただの肉の棒だ...: なんて doesn't mean "or whatever", its just a way to emphasize that a dick is "no big deal", and doesn't really translate in a nice way. Just drop it all together: "A-a dick is just a meat stick..."
3rd-panel – 誰のイチモツでもさほど違いはねーよ: イチモツ is just another way to say penis, so choose your favorite dick synonym. "No big difference, no matter who's dong it is"

Page 5:
Last-panel -- た...たりめえだ: "T-that's enough!" [I am unfamiliar with this expression. Did I translate it right?]

たりめえだ=当たり前だ. So it's something like "O-of cource it is!"

Page 7:
2nd-last-panel -- 歯を食しばッて快楽を溜込めッ!: "You’re clenching/grinding your teeth and building up pleasure!" [Is he implying a cause-effect relationship in this sentence? So like "When you grind your teeth, you build up pleasure!" or something like that? Or is it as I wrote?]

"Clench your teeth and /build the pleasure up/let the pleasure build up/". It's connected to the next bubble where he tells her to "release it all at once".

Page 9:
3rd-panel -- 匂いが顔に...: Is this "The smell's on my face..." or is it an interruption of 顔に泥を塗る or 顔に紅葉を散らす, so like "This smell is making me blush" or "This smell is embarrassing me"?

It's simply about the smell getting on her face, no need to read too deep into it.

Page 13:
礼には及ばん: Does Senketsu say this as "No need to thank me"? Or does Aikurou say this as “I need to thank you”?
役者は揃った。ソファーで足を開いてくれ: "We’ve become actors. Now, go spread your legs on the sofa." [It's the "We've become actors" part that is confusing me. Am I misunderstanding him? What does he mean by that?]

礼には及ばん: No need to thank me
役者は揃った: 役者は揃った is kind of like "Actors are all here -> we can now start the play". He just means something like "We are all set".

Page 14:
2nd-panel -- フン! この流子様がちんぽなんかに負けるかよッ!: "Hmph! Ya’ think this Ryuuko-sama [What is a good way to translate talking about yourself like this in the 3rd-person?] is gonna lose/succumb to your damn dick!?"

Don't know, isn't it good enough as it is? You don't have to always translate the 3rd person thing though, do it case by case.

Page 21:
1st-speaking-panel -- 中古丈とも言う: "I say it’s just old fashioned." [Not convinced this is correct.]
Middle-panel -- ざまーみろ鬼龍院ッ！エッチでは先越そしてやッたぜッ!: "Watch yourself, Kiryuuin! Now I’ve surpassed you with sex!" [How is this translation?]

1st-speaking-panel – 中古女もと言う: /You could also say you're/You could also call them/(this really depends on how you translated the previous bubble)/ a /second-hand/used/ woman.
Middle-panel – ざまーみろ鬼龍院ッ！エッチでは先越してやッたぜッ!: More or less correct. I'd go with something like: "In your face, Kiryuuin! Got ahead of you in sex!"

This post has been edited by yobi00: Dec 24 2013, 22:47

Page 9:
3rd-panel -- 匂いが顔に...: Is this "The smell's on my face..." or is it an interruption of 顔に泥を塗る or 顔に紅葉を散らす, so like "This smell is making me blush" or "This smell is embarrassing me"?

What yobi00 said, though if you leave it as "The smell on my face is..." you leave room for deeper digging by the reader, just like it is in Japanese.

Page 14:
2nd-panel -- フン! この流子様がちんぽなんかに負けるかよッ!: "Hmph! Ya’ think this Ryuuko-sama [What is a good way to translate talking about yourself like this in the 3rd-person?] is gonna lose/succumb to your damn dick!?"

"Hmph! As if I, Ryuuko-sama, would lose to a dick!" (Or use cock, instead o dick, just for puns purposes).

This post has been edited by shadow_moon: Dec 24 2013, 21:27

3rd-panel -- ち...ちんこなんてただの肉の棒だ...: なんて doesn't mean "or whatever", its just a way to emphasize that a dick is "no big deal", and doesn't really translate in a nice way. Just drop it all together: "A-a dick is just a meat stick..."

Where I come from, adding "or whatever" to a noun or phrase does exactly what you said: it emphasizes that the noun or phrase is no big deal. But yeah, I could just drop it.

1st-speaking-panel – 中古女もと言う: /You could also say you're/You could also call them/(this really depends on how you translated the previous bubble)/ a /second-hand/used/ woman.

Ohh, OK. That makes a lot more sense. I couldn't see that character too well.

Thanks for your other advice on the other sentences as well. I have no issues about those now.

What yobi00 said, though if you leave it as "The smell's on my face is..." you leave room for deeper digging by the reader, just like it is in Japanese.
"Hmph! As if I, Ryuuko-sama, would lose to a dick!" (Or use cock, instead o dick, just for puns purposes).

Those do seem to work well as translations.
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Thank you yobi00 and shadow_moon. You guys have been very helpful as always.

This post has been edited by Crystalium: Dec 24 2013, 21:31

original chapter here
https://e-hentai.org/s/21c4c6ef93/629221-79

Jeez, still moonrunes.

Maybe "ここの味", "顔から味" or something?