[X] My Assistant

Thanks yobi00 for checking those over. Later on today, I will post the second half, so if possible I'd be grateful if someone looks at that too when I post them.

Here is the second half of my question for this doujin. As per a suggestion, I will write out the whole sentence in addition to linking the page. Hope you can look them over please.

Page 16:
イッたあと京介の顔見ると「なんでこんな奴のこと考えてオナしてたんだろ」…勝手にイラついてシカトして…
| After I came, I saw Kyousuke’s face and thought “Why was it that I thought about and masturbated to that person [aka “him”]”…yet I ostracized/ignored him without thinking about it…

だって…あんたが　あたしのマ…マンコに見惚れてたとか…クンニで興奮したとか…恥ずかしことさらっと言う
からでしょ！| But…you…doing things like being fascinated by my pu...pussy, or getting aroused/excited from licking my pussy ~~~~[confusing stuff] !

あたしだけ意地張ってるみたいでバカらしくなかったダケ | I just didn’t want to give in as if I was an idiot.

Page 18:
うん…最後外に出してくれれば平気 | うん: Yea…last time I went out for that, I was unsettled

Page 21:
だから…痛くて泣いてたんじゃないよ… | So…it wasn’t painful and I didn’t cry [Am I translating this wrong, or is she contradicting herself]

Page 22:
色々考えてたら頭の中ぐちゃぐちゃになっちゃって…気付いたら泣いてた | When I tried to think about various things, my inside of head got all mushy…when I noticed it, I cried

Page 28
あたしも同じだよ…する前にも言ったじゃん後悔なんてしてない | ……He’s the same as me ~~~~[confusing line]

Page 29
謝って何とかなることじゃないけど…その…なんつーか… | I want to [confusing sentence, something about apologizing]
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And here is a little more I found in the first part after I looked it over:
Page 10:
洗濯カゴ漁ってな | Looking through the laundry basket [the phrasing or tense is weird in my sentence]

Page 12:
実際あんた引いてたじゃん...あたしのマンコ見て固まっててさ... | The fact is, Kyousuke was repulsed [I’m pretty sure I making a mistake here]. You’re looking at my pussy and ~~~.

Page 13:
じゃあ...あたしにきを使ってクン二してくれたわけじゃない...とか？ | Well then, it’s not like he attended to me and did licked my pussy…things like that?

Page 14: I am very confident I got this one correct
京介にクン二してもらう妄想したりして...オナして...イッて...マジ　キモイよね | Things like having daydreams of getting cunnilingus [or “getting my pussy licked”] from Kyousuke…masturbating…cumming……seriously, it's kind of disgusting

This post has been edited by Crystalium: Dec 3 2013, 13:06

Hello,
I had some questions about this story: (https://e-hentai.org/s/77408f6bcb/302940-176)
It would be nice if someone could tell me if my TL for the following sentences are ok or not:

1. https://e-hentai.org/s/c1d66d0214/302940-178, 4th panel, 3rd bubble
お互い大人になって　昔みたいに　年上のお姉ちゃん　ってワケには　いかないわよねぇ
-> "Now that both of you have grown up, you can't just see her as your "senior onee-chan" anymore, can you?"

2. https://e-hentai.org/s/c1d66d0214/302940-178, last panel
そもそも - あの親にも老後　というものがある　長男の現実… ->
"To begin with, - she should really start to act her age. Being the eldest son is a pain..."

3. https://e-hentai.org/s/c0243d5c65/302940-186, 4th panel
う　うん…　教室がある日は　今でも…
-> "Y-yeah... On days she gives lessons, I do it here..."

It'd be really nice if someone could take a look at them.


@Crystalium
I just had a look at some sentences which I believe to understand to some extent:

Page 18:
うん…最後外に出してくれれば平気 | うん: Yea…last time I went out for that, I was unsettled

I think this would be simply "Yeah...if you take it out in the last moment, then it'll be fine." (or "shoot it out in the last moment"), since in the previous sentence he asked for confirmation if it's ok to not use a condom.

Page 21:
だから…痛くて泣いてたんじゃないよ… | So…it wasn’t painful and I didn’t cry [Am I translating this wrong, or is she contradicting herself]

This also gets more clearer with the previous sentence(s), imho: Kyousuke asked if it hurts, she says something like 'I can't really tell if it's pain or some tingling feeling of pleasure' and then in this sentence she says "Therefore...I'm not crying because of pain...". Then the following sentence makes it clearer: "Those are...tears of joy".

Page 29
謝って何とかなることじゃないけど…その…なんつーか… | I want to [confusing sentence, something about apologizing]

I think it's something like "I know this isn't something that can forgiven by just apologizing, but...well...how should I put it..."

This post has been edited by mumei-chan: Dec 3 2013, 15:24

そもそも - あの親にも老後　というものがある　長男の現実… ->
"To begin with, - she should really start to act her age. Being the eldest son is a pain..."

It's like:
"As I'm her eldest son, after all, it's pain to take care of her when she becomes old..."

It's like:
"As I'm her eldest son, after all, it's pain to take care of her when she becomes old..."

Ah, ok, so the whole "あの親にも老後　というものがある" is connected to "長男の現実", if I understood you correctly.
Thanks a lot! :-)

Uhm, about the other sentences, were they ok?

Uhm, about the other sentences, were they ok?

Seems ok.
But, I think "a close older girl" or something is better than "your senior onee-chan".

Is there any meaningful difference between 親類 and 親族?

This post has been edited by shadow_moon: Dec 3 2013, 18:11

Seems ok.
But, I think "a close older girl" or something is better than "your senior onee-chan".

Ok, thanks! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Is there any meaningful difference between 親類 and 親族?

"親類" is a more casual word.
"親族" means a more narrow sense and often used as a legal term.

"親類" is a more casual word.
"親族" means a more narrow sense and often used as a legal term.

Doesn't seem like it's a difference easy to convey in English and I guess not too much will be lost if "relative" is used for both. Or maybe use "blood related" for 親族 and "relative" for 親類?

@Crystalium
I just had a look at some sentences which I believe to understand to some extent:

I think this would be simply "Yeah...if you take it out in the last moment, then it'll be fine." (or "shoot it out in the last moment"), since in the previous sentence he asked for confirmation if it's ok to not use a condom.
This also gets more clearer with the previous sentence(s), imho: Kyousuke asked if it hurts, she says something like 'I can't really tell if it's pain or some tingling feeling of pleasure' and then in this sentence she says "Therefore...I'm not crying because of pain...". Then the following sentence makes it clearer: "Those are...tears of joy".
I think it's something like "I know this isn't something that can forgiven by just apologizing, but...well...how should I put it..."

Thanks mumei-chan, that is helpful.

Doesn't seem like it's a difference easy to convey in English and I guess not too much will be lost if "relative" is used for both. Or maybe use "blood related" for 親族 and "relative" for 親類?

Maybe better to see some examples:

"親類" = "relative"
"親類縁者" = "kith and kin"

"親族" = "kin / kinfolk / group of relatives"
"親族会議" = "family council"

You can say "親類の家に泊まる(stay in relatives' home)", but can't say "親族の～".

I'm having some trouble with this one right now:
「派手ナ攻撃ハ大体囮ダッテ、バッチャガ言ッテタ」

For context: One character was attacking the speaker with a fancy attack, while another one came from behind. The speaker knocked her out right before that line.

This is what I get from it so far:
"That fancy attack was a pretty good distraction, ???, I told you so."

The first part makes sense, but the second part has me kind of stumped. I can't figure out what "バッチャガ言う" is supposed to mean. Any insight would be greatly appreciated.

This post has been edited by jfji552: Dec 4 2013, 07:47

「派手ナ攻撃ハ大体囮ダッテ、バッチャガ言ッテタ」

"バッチャ" = "婆ちゃん(grandma)"
So, the line means like:
"Most of the time, showy attacks are feints, grandma said".

"お婆ちゃんが言ってた" is often used for mentioning generic theories or precepts jokingly.

"バッチャ" = "婆ちゃん(grandma)"
So, the line means like:
"Most of the time, showy attacks are feints, grandma said".

"お婆ちゃんが言ってた" is often used for mentioning generic theories or precepts jokingly.

Thanks a lot!

Sorry, some help please? From this story:

Page 192, 1st panel
「家族ぐるみの付き合いでウチの母などは ~ などと気安い調子であるのだが」
Not sure how to phrase this. Is "Our families have close ties so my mom said (to my childhood friend) something like ~ in a friendly manner to her, but" okay?

Page 193, 5th panel
「男（こっち）は女（そっち）に遠慮してるっつーのに」
Is that a finished thought, or is he cut off by the girl midway? Does the つー (という) mean something like "they say" in this situation? e.g. "They say men restrain themselves from women, but despite this--"

Finally Page 210, last panel
「今度も仲良くいかがわしい行為に耽りたい所存」
My guess is "Getting along as usual, I want to indulge her in the indecent acts she comes up with." but I'm not certain, and that also sounds awkward.

edit: Thanks shadow_moon and Thira! That helps a lot.

>It's 今後 and not 今度.
OTL

This post has been edited by freudia: Dec 5 2013, 04:02

Let' see...

Page 192, 1st panel
「家族ぐるみの付き合いでウチの母などは ~ などと気安い調子であるのだが」
Not sure how to phrase this. Is "Our families have close ties so my mom said (to my childhood friend) something like ~ in a friendly manner to her, but" okay?

Maybe something like:
"Our families are really close so my mom probably told her <mom's speech> or so in a familiar tone"

Finally Page 210, last panel
「今度も仲良くいかがわしい行為に耽りたい所存」
My guess is "Getting along as usual, I want to indulge her in the indecent acts she comes up with." but I'm not certain, and that also sounds awkward.

It's 今後 and not 今度.
"Getting along from now on with the intention of indulging in some indecent act".

Not really sure about the second one so I'll refrain from giving an opinion.

「家族ぐるみの付き合いでウチの母などは ~ などと気安い調子であるのだが」

It's like:
"Our families are close as my mon often says like '～' to her familiarly."

「男（こっち）は女（そっち）に遠慮してるっつーのに」

This "というのに" means "even though / in spite of" or like that.

「今度も仲良くいかがわしい行為に耽りたい所存」

It's like:
"I wish to continue keeping and indulging in this indecent relations happily."

Wonder if anybody could give some opinion on an ambiguous line.

There's a busty woman wearing a school swimsuit, with some ムチムチ sounds around her. There's a guy there too (not shown in the page), and they'll be having sex in the next page. The guy is thinking/saying the next lines to himself in a single box:

スク水に包まれた
XXXのたまらない躰
もうはちきれそうだ

Who is the last line directed to? At first I thought that the guy was talking about himself and it meant something like
もう（俺の息子が）はちきれそうだ,
but if the lines make s a single sentence then it would more like
XXXのたまらない躰（が）もうはちきれそうだ
and I'm starting to think that this is the case.
Any ideas?

よろしくお願いします　m(_ _)m

スク水に包まれた
XXXのたまらない躰
もうはちきれそうだ

Who is the last line directed to? At first I thought that the guy was talking about himself and it meant something like
もう（俺の息子が）はちきれそうだ,
but if the lines make s a single sentence then it would more like
XXXのたまらない躰（が）もうはちきれそうだ
and I'm starting to think that this is the case.

Basically, the second one.
But also a metaphor of the first one.