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Be that as it may, the point was that its meaning is not strictly "negative", which definition 3 clearly illustrates.

The point is that, "たまらない" is more emotional/subjective ("for me") expression.
So you'd better to choose more emotional/subjective translation.

This post has been edited by Thira: Jul 16 2013, 01:51

The point is that, "たまらない" is more emotional/subjective ("for me") expression.
So you'd better to choose more emotional/subjective translation.

It seems to me like all the suggested translations so far have been subjective words/expressions...

Just a question about Surugaya. On [www.suruga-ya.jp] this section of the site, is it selling second hand stuff, or is it basically the we'll buy your old stuff section, like [www.suruga-ya.jp] this for example?

Everything under that last tab is looking to buy your used stuff.

Everything under that last tab is looking to buy your used stuff.

*Many bad words*....

Thanks Krymsun. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Jul 17 2013, 22:41

I hate that we can't delete posts. Anyway, I have another script in need of checking for this. I can already tell I would have to tweak it, but is it complete trash?

Milk Doll
order : rigth to left, up to down

page 1
bubble 1 : Unn...
bubble 2 : tonight, the concentration of miasma is rather strong isn't it?
bubble 3 : .... who's there?
bubble 4 : pachuri...
bubble 5 : Lemiria... what's wrong? at this late.
bubble 6 : wait... Lemiria...

page 2
bubble 1 : th..that is... i am starving again.
bubble 2 : I want Pachuri's...
bubble 3 : Even though you just drunk so much yesterday...
bubble 4 : Do you want to drink mine so much..?
bubble 5 : it can't be helped isn't it...
bubble 6 : alright, I was also stretched than usual tonight
bubble 7 : raw blood is not very good, but for Limeria it is quite a feast isn't it...
bubble 7 : the most component of breast milk is blood...

page 3
bubble 1 : Pachiri's breast is amazing... doing this... lifting it from bottom
bubble 2 : so many milk clogged up... please circulated it using your palm
bubble 3 : Aahn... nn.. <3,don't tease it like that.. it's already...seems to go out soon...<3
bubble 4 upper : then,I'll drink Pachiri's milk gladly
bubble 4 bottom : nnn....nnn...fuuuu....
bubble 5 : amazing...you drink it hard...my chest become much much lighter

page 2
bubble 7 : raw blood is not very good, but for Limeria it is quite a feast isn't it...
bubble 7 : the most component of breast milk is blood...

The translator seems to have taken these two left-to-right ("backwards"). And the upper line (which should actually be the last bubble) is saying that Remilia doesn't handle raw blood that well so breast milk should be "a feast".

page 3
bubble 2 : so many milk clogged up... please circulated it using your palm

"please circulate it using your palm" is "I can tell through my palms".


Besides that, the other parts are alright. If you clean those other parts up, they'll be just fine.

I suck at handwritten kanji, yet again. What's the first thing on the phone, top left panel? PLease~ I guess the second one is 切.

Looks like 通話 to me.

Definitely makes sense. Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I'm confused with the conversation at the end of this page. I don't know what 壁越し is really supposed to mean. By the look of it I came up with:
- Can you tell how my fingers are in you by looking over your shoulder?
- There are two fingers in each of my holes, pussy and ass.
- {can't get why she's saying that...}

I'm not even sure about who the second line belongs to. In short, I'm lost.

This post has been edited by bfrost: Jul 23 2013, 02:19

I don't know what 壁越し is really supposed to mean.

This "壁" means "the wall between the vagina and the anal".

So, this "壁越しに指が当たってるのわかる?" is like:
"Do you feel my fingers are touching others on the other side of the wall (between the vagina and the anal)?"

I'm not even sure about who the second line belongs to. In short, I'm lost.

This line is not Koume's.

Hm, glad I asked. Thanks~

Hello, I'm having a hard time trying to define the meaning of this sentence:

ホラ聡史！ 玉ついてんの！？ from [sadpanda.us] Here middle panel.

Is she asking Satoshi about his balls/courage or something along those lines?

Really lost here, so any help would be greatly appreciated.

Is she asking Satoshi about his balls/courage or something along those lines?

Right.
Just she talks about "his balls (bravery, courage, chutzpah, or brazenness)".

Thanks a lot! Thira, wasnt sure if "tama" could be taken as courage/bravery .

Hi everyone!

Once again, I'm stuck because of a sentence that doesn't make sense to me.

I'm currently translating this and, on the third page, I can't make sense out of the top-left box.

Well, it's not exactly that I can't make sense out of it, but rather that the translation I come up with is contradictory with the context.
Here's my rough translation:

As you can see, it's not at the level at which she can be called a "若妻", and Ui is much more mature than she looks, so I'm actually the one who ends up being spoiled.

First of all, it seems obvious to me that 若妻 is something that can be said of someone up to a certain age. I searched a bit on the Internet, and it seems that the vast majority of people agree on the fact that the age up to which a woman can be called a 若妻 is somewhere between 18 and 25.
Now, it seems fairly obvious, from the fact that she's wearing her middle school uniform (and also because, later in the doujin, the guy says she's just old enough to get pregnant), that she's at the very most 16. Therefore, I fail to see how she can't be called a 若妻...
Also, it seems to me the けど here is misused, because both parts of the sentence seem to go in the same direction (that is to say, that Ui isn't that young (both physically and mentally), so he can do her)...

I think I must have fucked up the grammar somewhere, but I don't see where, and I've read the sentence over and over again... I would greatly appreciate if some kind soul would help me...

Hi guys! I'm in need of some help as well (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I've received the script for the chapter starting here

The script I was given is [link removed]

Could someone do a quick skim and verify the script quality? Feel free to reply via through here or through private PM (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by Slobber: Jul 26 2013, 06:11

I can't make sense out of the top-left box.

"若妻ってレベルじゃない" means "beyond 'young wife'-level".
So, "見ての通り若妻ってレベルじゃないけど" means "though, as you see, she's too young to be called as a 'young wife', " or something.

Could someone do a quick skim and verify the script quality?

There are many mistranslations not only on sentences but also on words.

I seem to have another new guy sending me a script for this.

 Hybrid_School_Office_Translation.txt ( 9.77k ) Number of downloads: 48


What's the verdict with this one guys?