[X] My Assistant

Here's my translation.

SlaveKnight
A monster created as a result of the cursed armor fusing with a woman who mistakenly equips it.

That makes more sense... what do you think, rookie?

In old RPGs cursed items decreased stats, and so usually couldn't be taken off.

That. I was really surprised to find the Cursed Ring in FF7 (which I played only quite recently) to work in a different way (and be unequipable).

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 21 2011, 16:37

That makes more sense... what do you think, rookie?

Looks good to me. I think I broke the sentence down the wrong way when I went through it the first time, and I do remember not being confident in my initial translation. Madao's version does seem to make more sense.

Edit: Have any other translators confirmed that they are doing episode 6? I can tackle it if no one has stepped up; I don't want to do episodes 7+8 because they aren't related to the main story.

This post has been edited by rookie84: Oct 21 2011, 17:40

as far as I know, watisit mentioned he wanted to do 6-8.

Thank you for translating this comic. I have enjoyed it so far.

Heeey, a fan (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) You're welcome!

Edit: Have any other translators confirmed that they are doing episode 6? I can tackle it if no one has stepped up; I don't want to do episodes 7+8 because they aren't related to the main story.

as far as I know, watisit mentioned he wanted to do 6-8.

I also got a PM from somebody named Ibelin saying they'd like to work on that soon. I directed them both to here, asking them to post clearly if and when they'd start on it. So far, they have not done so, so as far as I am concerned, that means THEY HAVE NOT STARTED WORKING ON THAT YET.

Still, being nice to translators and avoid wasting effort benefits all of us. Tell you what. I'll PM them now, with a link to this post. If they do not say they are ready to begin the translation on 6 right now, it's yours, rookie. And maybe we can divide them nicely, say, you take 6, and they take 7 and 8? This would be a win-win-win-win, as far as I am concerned (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Oh, and LS sent me the edited page 79. I'll probably include it with the next upload (ch.6). It's not like the order matters that much for the credit page... and it will be in the right place when we are (I am...) replacing all the individual galleries with the collected volume 1 one.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 22 2011, 02:23

I will take Chap. 8 for the moment.
Challenge accepted:)

Since there're others willing to step up, i guess i'll stop. The SFX are giving me way too much trouble, and i'm only available on weekends mostly.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?0xsb855q39b7p52

Here's what i have so far. Hope it helps the next person.

I guess I'll go ahead and claim episode 6 then. Here you go:

CODE

< > = page number
{ } = SFX
// = translator comment and SFX translation
( ) = outside text box

<101>

{gashan} //crash

H... help me.

Fufufu, as long as you don't kill the girls, you can't beat us.

What are you going to do?

Take this!

{jakin} //gleam

<102>

Uwooooh!

<103>

{zan} //slash

What!?

<104>

Gya--!

{zuba} //slice

{gashan} //crash

!

You chopped the hostage.

There's no way we'll die here!

Sorry, but it's as he says.

<105>

I will at least send you to heaven instantly.

{babababa} //crackle crackle

Noo, I don't want to die~!

Keep babbling, little girl! We'll cut you to pieces!

{gukua} //whistle

{zuaa} //sudden

<106>

I'm sorry.

Ena Saibas! //Looks like nonsense words to me. I don't know if this spell is supposed to mean anything.

Now, let's go look for Pink and the others.

<107>

{bashin} //smack

(Hiee!)

(Haa Haa)

You're pretty obstinate, aren't you.

{gui} //grab

Pierce, Bobo, hurry up!

Ow!

Girl, you really have lots of wounds from my torment.

<108>

Catgirl, I'll give you something wonderful.

The venom coming out of the bumps of this dildo cobra is strong and makes you feel so good it'll drive you crazy.

{toro} //secreting

{hyun} //shift

{kuwa} //seethe

No!

Uguh!

{bushu} //steam

Gufuh!

Stop it!

<109>

Stop! I said stop!

Guh!

Kukkukuku

{zuru} //pull out

Goho //cough

Now, I'll let your lower mouth have its fill as well.

{nuru} //slip

Hiee! It feels gross!

Kya!

{chiro} //flutter

<110>

Aaah! Noo!

{zuryu} //thrust

{zoku zoku} //shiver shiver

Uwaaah!

{biku biku} //twitch twitch

A--h!

{zuryu zuryu} //thrust thrust

{bikun} //spasm

{bisha} //splash

Oh my, you wet yourself?

Uuh...

<111>

Kuha!

Your body is honest.

{pu} //pucker

Ouch! Ouch!

{gyu} //squeeze

You're starting to feel good, right!?

Looks like the poison is circulating throughout your body.

{hiku hiku} //shake shake

{bikun bikun} //spasm spasm

Your clit has swelled up this much.

{puchii} //snap

Higiih!

<112>

Aaauuh!

{zuryu zuryu} //thrust thrust

Nhaaah! Ah!

Auh! I'm becoming strange.

{gunyu gunyu} //plunge plunge

Fufufu, I love it whenever I see a slave writhing in agony!

<113>

Pink! Pink, get a hold of yourself!

(Hah)

Ugh!

Oh, you bit your tongue to stay conscious!?

Well then, I'll teach you something good.

When the dildo cobra finishes secreting its venom,

Spikes come out of its bumps.

{bishu} //spike

<114>

!

{zaku} //shock

Aga... gah...

{guku buku} //bubble bubble

Hohoho, looks like it had an effect on you.

It's just like heaven and hell.

{pota pota} //drip drip

{zuru zuru} //pull out

{zuzuzuzu} //slip slip

Santaa...

{gura} //stagger

<115>

{dosa} //thud

{garagara} //clatter clatter

Uwaah!

Santaa, Pink!

{doga} //boom

What!

Fire!

{ba} //bam

<116>

{buwa} //explode

Thanks, Pierce!

{buchi buchi} //rip rip

{kuru kuru} //spin spin

{suta} //land

Snake woman! How dare you do as you like!

Kuh...

What's with this spirit!?

Pink, Pink! Hold on!

P... Pierce.

I'll pay you back 100-fold!

{gogogogogo} //threatening

<117>

Hmph!

{cha} //unsheathe

{gasha} //crash

Ooooh!

The sword is dancing.

What are you trying to do!?

Prepare yourself, snake woman!

{bu~n} // swish

Soukenzan Kekkajin! //Best I can tell, this can be transliterated as Blade of Honor Slash, Blossom of Blood Attack!

<118>

{zuzuzuzu} //rush rush

Hiee!

{zan} //slash

Gya--!

<119>

{shuuuu} //mist

Slave Queen had a map.

Serves you right.

(haa haa haa)

{gogogogogo} //rumble rumble

What's this, the cavern has started to collapse!

We're getting out of here!

<120>

{dodododo} //running

Phew...

{zuzuzuzu} //sudden movement

At the inn.

Santa, you're nice today.

So annoying-- shut up and eat.

He's stubborn as always!

Save

Dragon Pink VI/End

This post has been edited by rookie84: Oct 22 2011, 17:58

I will take Chap. 8 for the moment.
Challenge accepted:)

Thanks. I've increased the bounty more than the others since it has all those pesky credit pages to deal with.

Since there're others willing to step up, i guess i'll stop. The SFX are giving me way too much trouble, and i'm only available on weekends mostly.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?0xsb855q39b7p52

Here's what i have so far. Hope it helps the next person.

Thanks for your efforts. You may want to look through other bounties, for ones with fewer SFXes. Hopefully you'll find something more to your liking.

Reminder of editing for 6 bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4438

New editing for 7 and 8 bounties:

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4687
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4686

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 22 2011, 18:00

I'll start on the editing bounty for chapter 6 tomorrow.

EDIT: Scratch that, I've already started on the editing.

And also: hah, just realized that I've hit post count of 666. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif)

This post has been edited by lightshader: Oct 23 2011, 01:40

I'll start on the editing bounty for chapter 6 tomorrow.

EDIT: Scratch that, I've already started on the editing.

And also: hah, just realized that I've hit post count of 666. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif)

Evil grin (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

I'm almost done, all of pages are edited and typeset, with one exception.

One of SFX wasn't translated, on page 106:

<106>

I'm sorry.

Ena Saibas! //Looks like nonsense words to me. I don't know if this spell is supposed to mean anything.

missing sfx translation here

Now, let's go look for Pink and the others.

This post has been edited by lightshader: Oct 23 2011, 04:27

Whoops...

{babababa} jolt //basically, the sound of a lightning strike. If you can think of something that sounds better, use that instead.

Would "crackle" work? It's the only lighting/electric strike/damage sfx I can think of at the moment.

Sure, that sounds fine to me. Of course, the final decision is up to Red.

Sure, that sounds fine to me. Of course, the final decision is up to Red.

Crackle is good, and hey, I am not a translator, I can only offer some bystander comments here. In the end, people who can read kanji and such are the ones with most valid comments to make on those issues.

Episode 6 posted: https://e-hentai.org/g/425381/bdc29caf11/ (I switched two pages, 101 and 102, to make them look nicer, since it's a double page... what do you think? I did the same to episode 4 - https://e-hentai.org/g/416746/4c11d71dbc/ )

Bounty for REAL EPISODE 7 posted: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4700

Real, since as rookie noted, the DAMAGE FLIGHT are not real DP episodes, and table of contents of volume 2 starts at episode 7. Hopefully this won't prove too confusing...

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 24 2011, 00:53

Episode 6 posted: https://e-hentai.org/g/425381/bdc29caf11/ (I switched two pages, 101 and 102, to make them look nicer, since it's a double page... what do you think? I did the same to episode 4 - https://e-hentai.org/g/416746/4c11d71dbc/ )

It seems that the entirety of volume 1 is now translated. The whole set likely can be replaced by a single gallery containing the whole translated volume, so I advise to rearrange the galleries into this form.

It seems that the entirety of volume 1 is now translated. The whole set likely can be replaced by a single gallery containing the whole translated volume, so I advise to rearrange the galleries into this form.

We still need Damage Fight 1 and 2, with the end credits.

Chapter 8 complete, pending your approval (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Chapter 8 complete, pending your approval (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

[hotfile.com] http://hotfile.com/dl/133228683/04a8bf2/141-160.doc for the convenience of others

Could you add the SFXes? We have been doing this for the other chapters, and I'd hate to set a precedent for lowering our standards. You are also welcome to post the translation here directly, also your way of doing them, with pictures, is interesting. I'll let the editors comment on that, I have no preference myself, but then I am not the one doing the editing.

But, please note that this bounty also includes the credits. As, clearly labelled in the bounty description, "pages 141-the end, including all the credits)". That means pages 161 till the end.

No hurry, as somebody still needs to tackle the previous chapter before we can post this one.