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post Jan 13 2013, 21:11
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post Jan 13 2013, 23:49
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QUOTE(KCzz15 @ Jan 13 2013, 13:11) *

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The "PM me first before accepting or the claim is rejected" thing is a standard clause that almost everyone just adds to their posts whenever they create a bounty, I've seen it around all the time in almost every new bounty I've checked. I'd just be surprised if red didn't have it as a standard clause too.

Honestly, it's kinda late to cry over spilt milk. Red did have a chance to reject my involvement.. I pm'ed him asking for details of how he'd like to handle the delivery of the bounty. He could've said no thanks right then and there before it went viral and before I claimed the bounty (which would've sucked for me, since I was done already), but he told me it was fine to upload it. I did. And then I claimed the bounty.
He said himself it was fair and square on my part. I wasn't intentionally ninja-ing you. As I've explained already.. it was complete chance that I saw an unaccepted bounty in one of my yearly visits to the bounty page.

What are you suggesting anyway? Now I know you WANTED to do it, but by chance I ended up doing it before you. Now you're looking for loopholes to make the claim invalid? Great. My first bounty and it's a mess. Thanks for that.
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post Jan 14 2013, 00:45
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post Jan 14 2013, 16:13
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I guess we should be giving advice: got something edited, post it or get Red to post it and update with gallery updates later...

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post Jan 14 2013, 16:43
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QUOTE(Death Grunty @ Jan 13 2013, 16:49) *

Honestly, it's kinda late to cry over spilt milk. Red did have a chance to reject my involvement.. I pm'ed him asking for details of how he'd like to handle the delivery of the bounty. He could've said no thanks right then and there before it went viral and before I claimed the bounty (which would've sucked for me, since I was done already), but he told me it was fine to upload it. I did. And then I claimed the bounty.
He said himself it was fair and square on my part. I wasn't intentionally ninja-ing you. As I've explained already.. it was complete chance that I saw an unaccepted bounty in one of my yearly visits to the bounty page.


Well, you said it was done; it would not be fair for me to tell you you wasted your time and effort.

It is so rare that the editor PMs me with a ready script AND at the same time there is another one wanting to do so that I really don't think there is a need to change the rules, although I am open for suggestions. If I was asked "can I do it", I'd have told you to talk to KCzz15. But as I was faced with a done deal, there was little for me do other than to screw one editor - and I think it's more fair to screw the one who hasn't started working on it yet than the other way around.

KCzz15, I don't see why you are so upset. You have not started working on this chapter yet, so it's not like you have lost any time or such. I/we appreciate your past editing on this, but s$@% happens, and let's agree that it happened not because anyone wanted to screw someone here but because of some bad luck and imperfect programming (bounty system).

QUOTE(PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore @ Jan 13 2013, 03:28) *

FWIW, if no one else does, I will get to them eventually. I'm just not sure when that'll be.


Now, the only thing that I want to know is whether we want to wait for People to tackle those pages before releasing this last chapter or not? I'd say let's not wait with the final chapter, but we can wait a while for the final volume release, and hope we can get those pages done before than. (and KCzz15, if you want, I can reserve this editing for you, and I am sure me and Dlag can put some bounty for it, too).

How does that sound?
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post Jan 15 2013, 09:30
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jan 14 2013, 15:43) *

KCzz15, I don't see why you are so upset. You have not started working on this chapter yet, so it's not like you have lost any time or such. I/we appreciate your past editing on this, but s$@% happens, and let's agree that it happened not because anyone wanted to screw someone here but because of some bad luck and imperfect programming (bounty system).
I understood that he actually finished editing them weeks ago and was just waiting for information what to put on the final credits page?

QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jan 14 2013, 15:43) *
(and KCzz15, if you want, I can reserve this editing for you, and I am sure me and Dlag can put some bounty for it, too).

How does that sound?
Sure, I can put up some bounty. However, I'd rather not give exclusivity on it to someone who takes many times as long to complete the work than other people, and gets emotional about the consequences of the time passing. I could finance it as an alternative version, but if in the meantime someone comes along and offers to edit it without all the artsy perfect edit stuff and putting months of his life into it, I'd prefer to be able to go with the practical person as well.

Besides, it seems he took his toys and went to some other sandbox already...
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post Jan 15 2013, 10:11
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QUOTE(Dlaglacz @ Jan 15 2013, 01:30) *

I understood that he actually finished editing them weeks ago and was just waiting for information what to put on the final credits page?

Sure, I can put up some bounty. However, I'd rather not give exclusivity on it to someone who takes many times as long to complete the work than other people, and gets emotional about the consequences of the time passing. I could finance it as an alternative version, but if in the meantime someone comes along and offers to edit it without all the artsy perfect edit stuff and putting months of his life into it, I'd prefer to be able to go with the practical person as well.

Besides, it seems he took his toys and went to some other sandbox already...


I think I mentioned something to him a while back about it being better if this had been a group effort like the previous volumes.
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post Jan 19 2013, 18:36
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I've checked all the previous chapters now. The QC for the episodes (except 25 which was finished) is below.

I hadn't actually looked at the extras stuff before, but I have now, and I don't feel like tackling that at the moment. So if you can fix the rest (or not, w/e), then you should probably put out the volume with whatever you currently have for the Extras. And maybe someday I'll come back and make a bounty for the unedited stuff (maybe...some of the text is really faint =/ ).

A general...issue is, it looks like KCzz15 decided that all of the jagged bubbles should have a bold font, regardless of whether it was bolded originally in the raw. Sometimes this works alright (like where I originally missed it entirely in the first couple of chapters), other times it's unnecessary and a bit distracting IMO. But, being so pervasive, I decided to just ignore it all in my QC. =/ It'd practically require an entire reedit to "fix".

EPISODE 26

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Switch in previously provided corrected pages for the pages still containing mistakes in the current gallery. Corrected pages so far include [internetfreaks.org] 028.jpg, [internetfreaks.org] 029.jpg, and [internetfreaks.org] 036.jpg.

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Santa's last bubble: "participate" should be split at one of these places: par/ti/ci/pate.

EPISODE 27

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Santa's 1st bubble: final punctuation (".").

048.jpg
Santa's 1st bubble: final punctuation (".").
Anne's 1st bubble: the first sentence ("didn't you figure it out"...) should end with "?".

049.jpg
Maze's 1st bubble: "alright" should probably be split "al/right" so it can actually fit in the bubble.

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Maruchi's 1st bubble: "Afterall" -> "After all"
Pink's 1st bubble: "thing" -> "things"

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Anne's 1st bubble: is the same line as from the last bubble on the previous page. The correct line is "Santa-san, do your best tomorrow."

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Maze's first line -> "meet the landlord so easily."

EPISODE 28

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"Start the Adventure" -> "Begin Adventure"

067.jpg
"It's fine if this rude person knows." -> "I shall take the price of your insolence out of your hide."

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"My apologies, Delta-sama." -> "I wished to make amends."

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This page has a different resolution than the other pages. (It appears to have only been cropped somewhat from the original raw page.)

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2nd bubble (after "geh"): ..."I'm stuffed, "... -> ..."What a waste. "...
"I'd be fine with catching more." -> "We can always catch more."

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The "But" at the beginning of "But it's pretty damn crowded." (by Santa) is not necessary.

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4th bubble: "That looks like a"... -> "There's a"...
last bubble: "March" -> "Maruchi"

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SFX "clip"/"clop" -> "claaang"/"clooong" (it's probably a big bell being rung)

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Pink's 2nd bubble: "Why am I still going 'nya nya?!?'" -> "What are you two grinning for?!?"

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The font in the last bubble could be somewhat bigger. That's a lot of white space. You could even perhaps hyphenate the "Nooooo" and make the font even bigger, or maybe even put it vertical...?

EPISODE 29

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Minor: that split "Nooo/oo!!!" should probably be hyphenated...

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Remove "a" in "That girl was a untouched."

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Either erase the raw text in Maruchi's thought bubble, or write "Equal" over it.

EPISODE 30

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Could Labia's first line split possibly fit like "my /subor/dinate's"? Having three hyphens in there is a bit much, so it would be nice to avoid that if possible. But if it is unavoidable, "subordinate" should be split in one of these places: "sub/ordi/nate".

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The 1st bubble should have a period at the end.
In the 2nd bubble, "unsightly" should be split "unsight/ly" (or you could do something like ..."(the) un/sightly /side"..., since you've got some vertical room).

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"born poor cat-girl" -> "born in poverty cat-girl" (like in vol 3 (the "cursed" part isn't in this one))

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"I am not merely here to guide." -> "I am but your humble guide."

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"Then I can trust you on this matter?" -> "Does that mean you've decided to trust me?"

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Pink's unedited/untranslated bubble: "Hey, hey."

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"It wouldn't do any good to fight the princess even if she had sold her." -> "It wouldn't do any good to fight the princess in her current state."

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The "*dramatically*" SFX (top-left) is basically upside-down...rotate it 180 degrees and it should be much more readable.

EPISODE 31

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A bunch of bubbles are missing punctuation at the end...
130.jpg: 1st bubble, "."
131.jpg: 2nd bubble, "."; last bubble, "!"
133.jpg: 2nd to last bubble, "."
136.jpg: 1st bubble, "." or "!"
137.jpg: 1st bubble, "."
138.jpg: all bubbles, "."
140.jpg: Delta, Maze, and Maruchi's bubbles, "."
143.jpg: last bubble, "."

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Labia's 2nd bubble: "safetly" -> "safely"

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Labia's bubble: "tournamant" -> "tournament"

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Anne: "undersand" -> "understand." (with punctuation)

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Technically, the first two bubbles should be switched. (Which is also easier to read correctly, IMO.)

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"My armor's getting angry too!" -> "You little...Now I'm mad!"

EPISODE 32

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This page is a different resolution than the rest.

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Maruchi: "Your" -> "You're"

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Santa's 2nd bubble: "concious" -> "conscious." (with punctuation)
Labia's 2nd bubble should also be punctuated ("!").
Labia's last 2 bubbles should actually be reversed.

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"Slaveel" -> "the Slave Eel"

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1st bubble: there should be a comma after "O gods of white".

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Punctuation at the end of Delta's 2nd bubble (".").

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1st bubble: "namevis" -> "name is"
Punctuation at the end of Labia's bubbles (".").

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Punctuation at end of Anne's 1st bubble ("."), and a comma after "Pink".

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"Slaveel" -> "Slave Eel"

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post Jan 27 2013, 14:33
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All right, so who will edit the final volume with the final fixes? (thanks, Peeps!)

final editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=7259
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post Feb 1 2013, 20:27
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jan 27 2013, 06:33) *

All right, so who will edit the final volume with the final fixes? (thanks, Peeps!)

final editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=7259

I'll try to finish it on Sunday. Maybe we'll get the bounty for the final credits I did ACCEPTED once you've uploaded the whole volume. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/rolleyes.gif)
I'm doing a bounty for G Just G before this though.

That said, if you don't want ME to do it I'll withdraw my accept.

Oh yeah, any idea which fonts the previous editor used? I haven't looked at them yet, but I expect this will become an issue once I start so it would be nice if anybody knew. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)
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post Feb 1 2013, 23:51
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Best thing to do, coordinate with Super Shanko who has been the senior editor on most of the DP saga. Thanks!
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post Feb 2 2013, 00:35
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Feb 1 2013, 15:51) *

Best thing to do, coordinate with Super Shanko who has been the senior editor on most of the DP saga. Thanks!


Ha! Even after doing a few chapters, i'm still called upon for guidance! For the bulk of it I only used Wild Words for main dialogue and Jack Armstrong for SFX. I might've used a random font here and there for minor, but that's just a personal choice of the moment where any font will do.

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Nice to see this finally moving again (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Guys...
I've had my [ITOYOKO] Let's Kurumi bounty up for nearly a year now and no one wants to translate it for the offered reward (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
I also feel a bit less strongly about it than before, so I'll be canceling the bounty in a few days moving my resources to other more important projects.

If anyone wants to take over and fund it go right ahead.
I still want to read it so I'll be happy to edit it.

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post Feb 2 2013, 18:24
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I'd rather you keep your bounty. I have some bounties that've been waiting for 2 years, it's a gamble. If you keep it up, eventually it will get done.
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post Feb 2 2013, 20:39
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QUOTE(Lunatic2 @ Feb 2 2013, 07:59) *

Nice to see this finally moving again (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Guys...
I've had my [ITOYOKO] Let's Kurumi bounty up for nearly a year now and no one wants to translate it for the offered reward (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
I also feel a bit less strongly about it than before, so I'll be canceling the bounty in a few days moving my resources to other more important projects.

If anyone wants to take over and fund it go right ahead.
I still want to read it so I'll be happy to edit it.

Cheers


Why not break it into chunks? It's been working for Red so far.
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What I mean is I have a very low funds income, basically just from my gold aura, and Kurumi is no longer my top priority as it used to be. So I want to take away all of my funds accept for the initial one and use it elsewhere.
I didn't want to screw with Dlaglacz suddenly making him the main sponsor of my project, so I thought canceling it is the best choice.
but I guess I'll check with him and if he is ok with being the main sponsor, then I will change the bounty to just the first 2 chapters or so.
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I'm ok with it. Not expecting to spend a lot of time on the site in the future, but as long as it's not me managing the bounties and coordinating the work, I'd still like to see it translated.
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post Feb 4 2013, 13:51
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QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Feb 2 2013, 13:39) *

Why not break it into chunks? It's been working for Red so far.


Well, so-so. I still haven't had a whisper of interest in the OMG dojin. (https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5937 and other parts)

Not saying it doesn't work, just that frankly I am not seeing (despite what we would thought) that smaller is more popular. Heck, I have a 12-page translation that is slowly approaching a year... https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6015
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QUOTE(Death Grunty @ Feb 1 2013, 12:27) *

I'll try to finish it on Sunday. Maybe we'll get the bounty for the final credits I did ACCEPTED once you've uploaded the whole volume. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/rolleyes.gif)
I'm doing a bounty for G Just G before this though.

That said, if you don't want ME to do it I'll withdraw my accept.

Oh yeah, any idea which fonts the previous editor used? I haven't looked at them yet, but I expect this will become an issue once I start so it would be nice if anybody knew. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Feb 1 2013, 16:35) *

Ha! Even after doing a few chapters, i'm still called upon for guidance! For the bulk of it I only used Wild Words for main dialogue and Jack Armstrong for SFX. I might've used a random font here and there for minor, but that's just a personal choice of the moment where any font will do.

I knew it'd come down to this after all. KCzz15 didn't use Wild Words. And I'm really bad at recognizing fonts.
I had planned to start and finish this last Sunday but the bounty I did for G Just G took longer than I had anticipated. So my plan today was to do this from start to finish but now I'm stuck.
Does anybody know which fonts KCzz15 used? I'd ask him... but.. you know..
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QUOTE(Death Grunty @ Feb 7 2013, 12:16) *

I knew it'd come down to this after all. KCzz15 didn't use Wild Words. And I'm really bad at recognizing fonts.
I had planned to start and finish this last Sunday but the bounty I did for G Just G took longer than I had anticipated. So my plan today was to do this from start to finish but now I'm stuck.
Does anybody know which fonts KCzz15 used? I'd ask him... but.. you know..


It looks like he only used Wild Words.
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