[X] My Assistant

I'm assuming i can be brought up to speed on everything (namely the romanizations of names and perhaps other little series-specific things like that) in this thread, correct?

It looks like the only big things for episode 28 are the beginning and end lines. You can check other released chapters for how those were done (though I've still yet to check the latest chapter). Names you should likewise be able to find in previous releases if you're not sure.

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Oct 10 2012, 19:57

Glad to see this picked up. If in doubt, ask here and we will try to help!

Glad to see this picked up. If in doubt, ask here and we will try to help!

Could you post all the links to "our" translations? Under the "Dragon Pink" tag, i can only seem to find the untranslated versions, though i found one of the translated versions on our side

Second question: Delta-sama is the woman the mask guy is fighting, correct? Context there is kind of screwy on who is conveying apologies to whom depending on whether or not she is Delta-sama...

And the servant's name is Maes, right?

This post has been edited by Ogodei-Khan: Oct 11 2012, 03:45

The site has a generic search function beyond tags... (And those tags are faded out for a reason; they're not "good" tags, so they're blacklisted and not taggable anymore, which means of course they won't be on recent galleries.)

Delta should be the princess, Maze her servant.

Search for "dragon pink", you should see all galleries. Some may be fjorded.

Gotcha. I found them pretty easily in Scandinavia. Ep 27 was the one i really needed to read, made it very clear how i should translate those first few pages.

Now up through page 13 (of 20). Should be done in an hour or two. Spending a lot of time trying to find TV that isn't MLB post-season or the Vice-Presidential debate

Edit: I'm now complete. There's only one word-choice note which might be significant if and only if a plot point goes a certain way that i was unable to ascertain, namely the identity of the monsters, Gold and Silver, who the old man alluded to in Ep 26. At one point Silver refers to Anne as "daughter," but in a way that would mean "daughter of an honorable family" more than "daughter" in the familial sense. Daughter wouldn't work there at all in English, so i went with "my child," which keeps the ambiguity, but is less literal, since they seem to be running with the possibility that Gold and/or Silver *are* Anne/Maruchi's parents, which i don't know because i didn't read ahead.

I like where this plot is going, though, even out-of-context. Seems like some Lesbian succubi action is going to go down here, with a possible transformation/corruption element involved? I approve of all of that...

Someone should look it over to see if i've gotten the "voice" of any characters wrong, however.

Crazy file extension rules. I'll dump it here:

Dragon Pink Episode 28 Script:

Page 62:
Top: Start the Adventure
A: Oouh
B: Princess!
SFX: Byuuuuu (not sure about this one. Energy?)

Page 63:
SFX: Suuuu (Hiss)
A: It’s fine if this rude person knows.
SFX: Shaaaaaa (Hiss)
SFX: Pita (sternness? Standing firm?)

Page 64:
A: Why didn’t you move?
B: My purpose is now complete.
C: My apologies, Delta-sama.
D: Tsk, how insolent.
E: Maze, lend me your cape!
F: Yes ma’am…
G: Now, shall you show me around?
SFX: Bah (“flap”)
H: Certainly, ma’am.

Page 65:
SFX: Chatter chatter
A: There’s a tremendous turnout for the festival, Gold Nee-san.
B: Indeed, thanks to that, prey isn’t hard to come by.
C: Fu Fu Fu, tomorrow will be fun, Silver.
D: Uhh… Uhh…

Page 66:
SFX: Gsh Gsh (sliminess)
A: Hah
B: Hah
C: Ahh… So good…
D: Ahh… Kfuuu
E: Oohh…

Page 67:
A: Nha!
B: Nha!
C: Ahhhh!
D: I’m… going to cum!
E: Ahh!
F: Kahh!
G: Cumming!

Page 68:
SFX: Dopu Dopu (Splooge)
A: Phew…
SFX: Doro (Ooze)
B: Fufufu, thanks for filling me up.
C: We’re done with you now.
D: P-please help me…

Page 69:
A: Geh!
SFX: Zashu (strike)
B: Ahh-Ahh, I’m stuffed, that makes five already.
C: I’d be fine with catching more.
D: You’re right. Let’s go look for some new prey.

Page 70:
A: Impossible… could that be?
B: It looks like I’ll have to verify this…
C: I’m going to step out a moment, Nee-san.
D: Where to?

Page 71:
SFX: Dissolving
A: I found something good…
B: SFX: Chatter/Clatter
C: This street is especially lively, huh?
D: But it’s pretty damn crowded.
E: Anyway, how about you two get along a little better?
SFX: Glare

Page 72:
A: It’s no use.
B: Talking to them is pointless, Santa Nii-Chan.
C: Who cares, let’s go!
D: That looks like a neat shop over there!
SFX: Don (Bang)
E: Ow!
F: Mm…
G: Damn brat, you shouldn’t be zippin’ around like that!
SFX: Batsu (smack)
H: Waah!
I: Hmph, pay attention.
J: March!

Page 73:
A: Oi, dumbfuck.
B: What’d you say, punk?
SFX (left): Baki! (Crack)
SFX (right): Gusha! (groin attack!)
C: Guahhh!
SFX: Batan (crash)
D: Hmph, serves you right.

Page 74:
A: Nee-chan and Pink make a good combo, don’t they?
B: Well, they are like close companions, aren’t they?
SFX: Glance
C: Heh Heh
SFX: Clip Clop
D: Nee-chan, it’s about time you went to help gramps.
E: Ah, you’re right, Maruchi, why don’t you show Santa and the others around?

Page 75:
A: Okay then, I’ll see you all later!
B: See ya!
C: I’m starting to like Anne a little, nya.
SFX: Grin
D: Why am I still going “Nya Nya?!?” Geez!
SFX: Rustle

Page 76:
SFX: Clack Clack Clack
A: If I don’t get there fast, Gramps is gonna be mad at me…
B: Y-you’re…?
SFX: Wind

Page 77:
A: Good day, my child. (the word here is literally “daughter,” being “daughter of a respected family,” but this wouldn’t fit in English at all, unless prior allusion to Anne’s parents turning into monsters having something to do with Gold and Silver, then daughter would work).
SFX: Splort
B: Kyaaaahhh!
SFX: Absorption

Page 78:
A: Welcome back, Silver.
B: I’m back, Nee-san.
C: I wonder, what kind of souvenir have you brought me?

Page 79:
A: Ouh
SFX: Drop
B: I found one of the cat-girl’s comrades in the market.
C: Hmm… sounds intriguing. What do you intend to do?
D: There are many things I’d like to ask her.
E: Perhaps I shall make her into my toy.
F: Hieee

Page 80:
A: That’s a good idea, Silver.
B: Noooo!!!
Black Bar: Save Game
Bottom (Japanese): End.

This post has been edited by Ogodei-Khan: Oct 12 2012, 04:47

Looks good. Kczz15, are you going to edit this?

For all interested parties, DP bounties are listed here

Looks good. Kczz15, are you going to edit this?

For all interested parties, DP bounties are listed here

Don't worry, I have every intention to do so.

Thanks for the PM alert through, I'm subscribed to get instant Emails of activity in this thread but for some reason it's not sent me an Email to let me know of posts in the last day.

This post has been edited by KCzz15: Oct 12 2012, 11:31

Good day. I have accepted the translation bounty for chapter 29. Will see if I can have it completed in a day or two.

Sounds good, go ahead.

Can we get an update on editing of 28?

Sounds good, go ahead.

Can we get an update on editing of 28?

That's what i was wondering. I was waiting until 28 came out before i would even pick up the bounty for 29 (snooze i lose, i guess...), but it's been a while, hasn't it?

It has been.

I do suggest interested translators put dibs on the translations, occasionally they are hot, and also, it's not a problem to wait for an editor - usually it is the other way around.

If the perfect editing is to take as long as chapter 28 for each chapter, I'd consider putting up a separate editing bounties for a less perfect one...

I was able to get the time to do this earlier than expected.

CODE

85

Box: Begin Adventure

Perhaps I should make her my toy.

That's a splendid idea.

Fufufu.
Anne: What are you going to do to me!?


86-87

(no text)


88

You are the girl from Bolg's shop.
Is that cat-girl your friend?

Anne: Who are you people?
Anne: Let me go home!

Anne: Oww-- That hurts!

sfx: *stretch*
Anne: Ahhh!

Answer my question. Who is that cat-girl?
You will regret it if you do not tell us.



89

Anne: I don't know anything about her!
Anne:　They just saved us when we were attacked by a Yin monster!

Fuu~n, is that so.
Will they be participating in the festival tomorrow?

Anne: I wouldn't know that. Why don't you just ask them yourself!

It seems you do not know how to speak properly. (Alt: It seems that you lack etiquitte.)

Silver, why don't we show her body how to cooperate.

Yes, let's.


90

sfx (bubble): くすくす *giggle*

Anne: Kyaaaaa!!


91

sfx: ドタ *thud*

Anne: Oww!!

Anne: Waaaa!

Anne: Nooooo!!!

sfx: *whooosh*


92

sfx: *whooosh*

Anne: Ah!

Fufufu, you cannot escape.

Anne:Nooo! Somebody save meeee!!
sfx: ズル *drag*
sfx: ズル *drag*


93

Nee-san, can you release a Yin fish?
Fufufu, very well.

I will give you a specially made one..
Ah.

sfx:くに　*prod*
Haaa...

sfx:くち *rub*
sfx:くちゅ *rub*
Ahh, aaah...

sfx:ちゅ *smack*
sfx:くぱっ　*spread*
Aguu...


94

sfx:ビュルツ *splurt*
Ahh! Ahhh!
Ah, here it comes!!

sfx:ドロー *gloop*

sfx:ビチャ *splash*
Fish: Chichi!
Fish: Chii!

sfx:ピチ *flop*
sfx:ピチ *flop*
Cute isn't it?
Fish: Chii!!
Fish: Chii!

We're going to put this inside of you.
sfx: *lick*


95

Anne: Ah... Hiii...!

sfx:ぐいっ *shove*
Anne: Uguu!! (yes, uguu)

Now, lift your butt.

sfx:ズブウ *ram*
Anne: Gyaaa!!


96

sfx:シュルルルル *snake* (alt: wriggle or slide)
Fish: Chii!!

Anne: No, stop! It hurts!!
Anne: Nnngii!!

Anne: Gyaaaaa!!!


97

That girl was a untouched.
How pitiful that her first was a Yin monster.

Anne: It hurts! It hurts so much!
sfx:ドタ *thud*
sfx:バタ *slam*

sfx:ビビビ *slap* (alt: writhe    I think it is supposed to be the tail snapping around or slapping on her thighs)

Anne: Aaaah! Aaaahh!

Anne: It's tearing me! It's splitting me apart!

Anne: Ggihiii!!


98

sfx: *whish*
Anne: Uuaaa!!

Anne: Aaaaah!!

sfx:ぐちゃ *squish* (alt: squelch or similarly appropriated intercourse sfx)
Fish: Chii!
Fish: Chichichi!

Anne: Kuu... uuuu...!

Anne: Gugyaaaa!!!
99

(no text)

100

Fufufu, it seems it has gotten accustomed to her body.
She looks so cute smeared in blood.

This girl will be very useful.
Yes. Why don't we play with her a little bit longer.


101

Maru: Jii-chan, we're back.

Jii: Hey there, welcome back everyone. Did you like the city?

Maru: Huh? Where's Nee-chan?

Jii: Wasn't she with you?

Maru: Eeeeeeeh? She should have been back before us.
Maru:　Maybe she got sidetracked somewhere?

102

sfx: ガタン *clack*
sfx: チリン *ring*

Maru: Nee-chan?

Maze: We have returned.


sfx: *blush*
Maru: Eh? Excuse me, but who are you?

San: Delta, why are you transformed? (alt: what made you transform?)
Pink: Did something happen, nya?


103

Maru: Delta? Transformed?
Bubble: Equals

Maru: Eeeeh!?
Delta: Fufufu.

Del: I'll explain later, Maruchi.

Del: Santa, Pink, both of you come with me. We need to talk.
San: Did something happen?

sfx: *blush*
Maru: Ha...

sfx: *open*
Maru: Hm?

104

Anne: I'm home.

Box: Save game

edit: I'm also available to edit, these chapters or others. If Ogodei-Khan or KCzz15 want to TL or edit these then I will pass on the rest of these bounties.

This post has been edited by somewhen: Oct 26 2012, 10:20

If the perfect editing is to take as long as chapter 28 for each chapter, I'd consider putting up a separate editing bounties for a less perfect one...

Well, no, I am sorry to say what we need is an editor who can get things done in a reasonable amount of time, not two different edits. Kcz has accepted the bounty for 28, and as he is presumably working on it, I am fine with that for a while longer, but bounties 29+ (listed here) are open and unless Kcz can promise a more speedy turn over I am going to declare them open to anyone who can promise an <2 weeks delivery.

This year I had two other bounties that took several months to EDIT (both outside Cove editors). This is ridiculous, and I am going to clearly insist on <2 weeks editing time in all my future bounties (unless we are dealing with some 100+ pages monstrosity).

Well, no, I am sorry to say what we need is an editor who can get things done in a reasonable amount of time, not two different edits. Kcz has accepted the bounty for 28, and as he is presumably working on it, I am fine with that for a while longer, but bounties 29+ (listed here) are open and unless Kcz can promise a more speedy turn over I am going to declare them open to anyone who can promise an <2 weeks delivery.

This year I had two other bounties that took several months to EDIT (both outside Cove editors). This is ridiculous, and I am going to clearly insist on <2 weeks editing time in all my future bounties (unless we are dealing with some 100+ pages monstrosity).

To be honest, since these are only about 20 pages, doing a single chapter should take no more than a few hours overall let alone two weeks. If ch29 becomes available, i'll take it.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Oct 29 2012, 12:52

SS is doing chp29 then
i want to do chp 30
and if i do it which font
i have to use or can i chose with which one i go

So far it's been wild words for the text/sfx so I'll probably resume that for consistency.

ah ok thx then i go with wild words like i always do xd

Hm. I'll get to work on the TL for 30 then. Expect it in a few days.