[X] My Assistant

I don't mind at all. If you want (LS), I can give you the level i've been using for this so far (for consistency), after that it's alll you.

That's good idea. What chapter are you working on right now? I'll use same fonts to preserve consistency as well.

Chapter 5, and so far i've only been using wild words for dialogue and jack armstrong for sfx, and [www.mediafire.com] this level setting, after that it's just whatever looks good.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Oct 19 2011, 05:29

By the way, it seems that we skipped a middle credit page between episodes 4 and 5: here. Will one of our translators step up to the challenge and work on it? I don't want to call it part of bounty for eps 4 or 5, but just like with the Silent Saturn series, I'd like to have all the credit pages translated. I am hoping somebody will tackle this for the extra mention in credits or such (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

I was bored. Here you go.

First 4-koma:

CODE

(1) This was how Pink was born.

Komatsu-san. This time I'll draw an RPG-story manga, but I thought I'll add a slave mode.

Hmm~ That's terrible, but that can be funny, hahahaha.

I haven't really decided on the name for the main heroine.

Idiot! If the title is "Dragon Pink," then she should obviously be "Pink!"

Is this kind of design okay Komatsu-san!?

Too weak! Her skin should obviously be brown! Put some tone on her!

(As a result...)

D... damn it. I'm the one who has to do the tones.

No matter how much tone I put it doesn't end!! Pink you idiot!

(What!)

Title in the middle:

CODE

I am Komatsu
Great Violence Assistant

By Itoyoko

Second 4-koma:

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(2) Noborito's Day and Night

(When Komatsu-san came to be my assistant...)

(Orange) //The text on the table Ito is writing on. Probably meant to show he's writing on an crate or box used for oranges

{doki} //thump

Hey Itoyoko, I'm starving. Go order some pizza.

Eh~ I don't want to eat pizza.

Shut up! If you don't order I'll throw the ink on the manuscript.

(A different time)

{doki} //thump

(Orange)

Hey Itoyoko I'm starving. I want to eat sushi.

Sushi is expensive!

If it's not sushi I'll cut the manuscript to pieces.

(This was how Dragon Pink was sent to press each month.)

Terrible art on the bottom:

CODE

Pink's Art Classroom

Mean Santa

Uhyohyohyo

I'm sad~

Pink

It's Pierce-san!

Pierce

Unga~

Bobo

If it's all right with SS, I'll get started on chapter 6 tomorrow (after I finish my current editing bounty task).

And thanks for the level, too.

I was bored. Here you go.

You are my hero (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

If it's all right with SS, I'll get started on chapter 6 tomorrow (after I finish my current editing bounty task).

Just that 6 is not translated yet (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) You could do the comment page above for the final release, if you want, but for now that's all we have (I am assuming SS is finishing episode 5?).

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 20 2011, 01:45

Dragon Pink Ch5 is done! Light, i'm leaving the rest (and that upper page) to you.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Oct 20 2011, 10:13

I was bored. Here you go.

(IMG:https://forums.e-hentai.org/style_images/ambience/folder_post_icons/icon14.gif)

released: https://e-hentai.org/g/424324/f95c4208ac/

some translation comments

p.87 - what is written on the clothe piece that the monster is wearing? His name? We should probably translate and edit this in

p.91 - note - magical armor would make more sense than cursed armor, who puts cursed armor on on purpose?

released: https://e-hentai.org/g/424324/f95c4208ac/

some translation comments

p.87 - what is written on the clothe piece that the monster is wearing? His name? We should probably translate and edit this in

p.91 - note - magical armor would make more sense than cursed armor, who puts cursed armor on on purpose?

p. 87 - 編集命: I would go with "editorial decree;" looks like Itoyoko is poking fun at his editor.

p. 91 - It's definitely supposed to be "cursed armor," but I'm not sure I've translated the sentence right, I found it very confusing.

who puts cursed armor on on purpose?

Cursed equipment has its place in RPGs. An example of this would be the Cursed Ring in FFVII.

Cursed equipment has its place in RPGs. An example of this would be the Cursed Ring in FFVII.

Hmm, I remember that one. Still, it is uncommon... but unless anybody has any other comments on the translation, I guess we will keep it as it is?

Btw, the part about them mistaking that armor for cursed armor... well, wtf, IT IS CURSED.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 21 2011, 02:10

No problem, SS. I didn't have jack armstrong , so I used augie instead.

Anyhow, I finished the credit page, will send it to Red along with the other editing bounty I'm doing for him.

Hmm, I remember that one. Still, it is uncommon... but unless anybody has any other comments on the translation, I guess we will keep it as it is?

Btw, the part about them mistaking that armor for cursed armor... well, wtf, IT IS CURSED.

I think when the girls thought it was "cursed" they didn't expect it to run off thier naughtiness. I'm not sure why anyone would want cursed items to begin with, but i'm guessing its a more powerful magical item(?)

they put the armour on without realising it was cursed.

they put the armour on without realising it was cursed.

That's what I'd think, but that's not what the translation implies. (direct page link, see bottom)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 21 2011, 06:25

Here's my translation.

SlaveKnight
A monster created as a result of the cursed armor fusing with a woman who mistakenly equips it.

Here's my translation.

SlaveKnight
A monster created as a result of the cursed armor fusing with a woman who mistakenly equips it.

Yep.

In old RPGs cursed items decreased stats, and so usually couldn't be taken off.

Thank you for translating this comic. I have enjoyed it so far.