[X] My Assistant

Episode 26 qc...
(I didn't do quite as well as I would have hoped, proofreading it before. >_< )

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I guess you actually enlarged that heart...but it looks really blurry, so I'd suggest just using the original size and maybe centering it in the empty space (or whatever looks best).

"Maize" -> "Maze"

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"Ow pain!!" (where'd this come from?) -> either "It hurts!" (original line) or just "Ow!!"

"other's people farms" -> "other people's farms"

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par/ti/ci/pate, so if you have to split it (Santa, at the bottom), do it in one of those places, not after 'part'.

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"om nom nom" -> "chomp" or "bite" or approximately anything but "om nom nom"

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This is chapter (or episode) 26, not 25...

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Aug 22 2012, 13:55

"Ow pain!!" (where'd this come from?) -> either "It hurts!" (original line) or just "Ow!!"

"Hurts!" wasn't going to fit under any acceptable circumstance, I needed a simile of some sort that would. *shrug* There were two others like that too, notably one for Maize (maze?) and him sitting down to eat. I'm no miracle worker I've got to make the best of a bad bubble if I can't really enlarge it ;_;

"om nom nom" -> "chomp" or "bite" or approximately anything but "om nom nom"

I'll go change that now, that was for shits & giggles since it popped into my head and I just had to do it, the gods of comedy commanded me so.

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This post has been edited by KCzz15: Aug 22 2012, 15:18

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Acceptable?


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(that's what I get for copy pasting from the c25 credits)

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Acceptable?

Uhh...that would really be better if you could just copy the original heart. Or if the heart is anywhere else in the rest of the chapter, unaltered, you might copy it from there.

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And maybe lower "I'm Pink." A common thing i've noticed is that edits will have the floating heart sit in it's original place and place the text next to it, even if it leaves it pushed to one side. My general rule has always been "screw that!" and move the heart to accomodate the text.

Bounties for DP.

Translation:
* translation for Chapter 28: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6333
* translation for Chapter 29: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6334
* translation for Chapter 30: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6335
* translation for Chapter 31: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6336
* translation for Chapter 32: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6337
* translation for final credits: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6338

Editing:
* editing for Chapter 27: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6199
* editing for Chapter 28: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6339

Will post the remaining editing bounties when I see translations coming in.

Added to bounties.

The last two bounties for DP are marked Chapter 32. Also I'd like to take up the editing for 31/32 since it's the end, and maybe 30.

Also I'd like to take up the editing for 31/32 since it's the end, and maybe 30.

I'm pretty sure the series already has an editor, and also that 30 / 31 / 32 aren't even close to being translated yet.

I'm pretty sure the series already has an editor, and also that 30 / 31 / 32 aren't even close to being translated yet.

That means I can stop editing episode 28? I was just waiting for the translations to typeset.

This post has been edited by Zumato: Aug 23 2012, 23:54

That means I can stop doing episode 28? I was just waiting for the translations.

What?

I'm pretty sure the series already has an editor, and also that 30 / 31 / 32 aren't even close to being translated yet.

I'm aware of that. I'm picking the ones that are far off so I can worry about my own stuff for the time being. On top of that, I was the first editor for volume 1 and did some chapters for the other volumes so I wanna contribute something to the last(?) volume too.... plus I need the hath.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Aug 24 2012, 00:00

I'm aware of that. I'm picking the ones that are far off so I can worry about my own stuff for the time being. On top of that, I was the first editor for volume 1 and did some chapters for the other volumes so I wanna contribute something to the last(?) volume too.... plus I need the hath.

I'm already working on volume 4, I've already cleaned volume 4 except for a redraw or two, I also need the hath, and I intend to guard my territory.

If you want it that badly though, it can be done over my dead body... if you like?

I'm already working on volume 4, I've already cleaned volume 4 except for a redraw or two, I also need the hath, and I intend to guard my territory.

If you want it that badly though, it can be done over my dead body... if you like?

Wow....I was just editing it for the practice. This is more cutthroat than stock market trading.

I'm already working on volume 4, I've already cleaned volume 4 except for a redraw or two, I also need the hath, and I intend to guard my territory.

If you want it that badly though, it can be done over my dead body... if you like?

Well, it'd be weird to kill another member over editing rights, but since it's not my project i'll have to leave it to Red to decide.

Wow....I was just editing it for the practice. This is more cutthroat than stock market trading.

Now that's not so bad (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Shoot me a PM, I can offer you advice on how to clean and stuff if you like?
(Just... stay away from my bounties if you know what's good for you <.< )

Well, it'd be weird to kill another member over editing rights, but since it's not my project i'll have to leave it to Red to decide.

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I didn't read that manga, but I somehow think blondie wins, so i'll back down from Dragon Pink.... Just my own friendly advice: (IMG:[img696.imageshack.us] http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2610/52510006.jpg)

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You stay away from dragon pink, and Silent Saturn and all future Saturn volumes are all yours.