For the
released Ep 25...
006.jpg and 007.jpg should be switched; if possible, not just their positions, but their file names as well (though it could wait for the compilation gallery, if necessary). (The raw volume 4 gallery is wrong, too.)
007.jpg
"I'm sorry, sorry." -> *cough cough*
"Jin Monster" -> "Yin Monster" (bottom-right)
006.jpg
"By
the chance they met and rescued
Shao, a nail-bird woman, from the hands of the Black Mamba."
(^notice strikeout (IMG:[
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"Thanks to Bobo
and Shao's great effort"...
008.jpg
*trotting* -> *snap* or *clack*...It's the sound of the case opening.
009.jpg
"Nee-chan
we're going to arrive soon at Shioka city, right?"
The last two bubbles...you've got plenty of room and the text is fairly small, so make the font size a bit larger. If the text has to be small to fit (more like the first two bubbles), then that's fine, but when you've got space like in these last two, make it a bit larger so it can be read easier. You should look through the rest of the chapter and see where else you can increase the font size, too. (I might also suggest the sfx, which are quite miniscule, but I also don't care as much about them.) At the very least, you might want to look for the bubbles with extra-large, bold fonts in them in the raw, and make sure those bubbles get extra-big (maybe bold) fonts as well in the edit.
010.jpg
"Jin Monster" -> "Yin Monster"
011.jpg
"
Maruchi, take care of the carriage."
(punctuation) "Got it, Nee-chan."
012.jpg
"Hyaa" -> *gasp*
022.jpg
"Maze, stop
its movement!"
AND! If you're going to split a word, like "move/ment", be sure to put a hyphen where it gets broken ("move-/ment").
(Nice font on "Giga Stapp". (IMG:[
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I'll check the 26 and 27 scripts tomorrow I think. Just so the editor doesn't have to reedit too much. Although that isn't to say the scripts (by the evidence of 25) should need a lot (the biggest thing is "Jin" -> "Yin", several of them being in 26).
This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Jul 27 2012, 05:07