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Hi, sorry, i don't use this forum at all so i didn't see the qc.

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I made all the changed to the script.

err i won't retypeset everything so changing the script after the chapter is edited is little pointless.
Are all the change in the quote accurate and i use this instead of the script ?

also p134 is from c23 ? i do not have the tl for this. I started the edit where the script started.

v2 with PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore QC : [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?r95rba5bcbjbczv

v2 with PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore QC : [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?r95rba5bcbjbczv

A couple things missed...

152.jpg

In the 4th panel, choose one of "biku"/*jolt*, and add a white outline on the text (like on "ooo" above it).

153.jpg

This is what the end pages for other chapters look like, with "/End" at the bottom. You can't just take it out, you need to put the English back in there, too.

also p134 is from c23 ? i do not have the tl for this. I started the edit where the script started.

It's at the end of the [goo.gl] episode 22 script. Could you do that page too, real quick?

err i won't retypeset everything so changing the script after the chapter is edited is little pointless.
Are all the change in the quote accurate and i use this instead of the script ?

Yeah, I tried to get to the scripts before anyone started on them, but I slowed down at one point...sorry about that.

Here's all the changes and the pages they're on, further tweaked in a couple of places for grammar so we don't have to catch those in QC later. Just do these.

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(old:  You are right. Even if we wanted to knock the living daylights out them, we won't be able to do it if they are dead.)
You are right.
They are not the kind of people to die even if they are beaten.

(old: TL NOTE Japanese people think that If you sneeze once, it means someone is talking or thinking about you; sneeze twice, it means someone is talking or thinking bad things about you.)
TL NOTE if you sneeze, supposedly someone's talking about you.

(old: Did Santa caught a cold? nyan)
Did you catch a cold, Santa?
nyan

138.jpg

(old: Right? We won't know whenever it's a boy or girl until it's born.)
Hey, I wonder whether a boy or a girl will be born.

(old: we...wewe well... *embarased*)
we-...we-we-
well...

(old: there is something there)
What could that be?

141.jpg

(old: ups)
oops

142.jpg

(old: Wa... wait.)
Well, wait.

143.jpg

(old: This Nail Bird-woman's is great.)
This Nail Bird-woman's place is great.  (OR: This Nail Bird-woman's vagina is great. )

144.jpg

(old: hey hey! Hurry up! I want to eat her already!)
Hey, hey! Focus! We are going to eat you!

145.jpg

(old: Oi!  In case you finished, throw her in my direction for me.)
Yep!
In case you finished,
put this inside her.

(old: In case pushing like that doesn't work, I'll have to use a skewer!)
Keep holding down her like that, I'll force this into her.

(old: Oi, I get it!)
Yep,
I get it!

148.jpg

(old: kuku)
kuwa

151.jpg

(old: Pierce will be able to hold it somehow.)
Pierce, endure it somehow.

(old: errr........ukku......)
Yes.....
...ukku......

153.jpg

(old: Ah. The smell of the fruit grown by the witch guides us.)
Ah. There is also a mellowed smell of the witch.

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Jun 7 2012, 03:31

Hi, sorry, i don't use this forum at all so i didn't see the qc.

I am pretty sure you can set up email notifications for PMs and watched threads.

v3 : [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?wd8k2291ng1dsch (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Thanks!

I am putting the current working version of Volume 3 in a dedicated gallery. Are we still missing a corrected version of any volume?

https://e-hentai.org/g/498560/fdea953161/

I'd appreciate any comments on whether the files there are the newest ones. I tried my best at keeping track of everything, and I think they are the latest I got, but I might have messed up (no complains, but when I get an archive with volume X and it includes a subfolder with "fixed files" for other volumes, and this happens several times, and from different people who label the files differently, errors can creep in...).

Also, I wanted to say that you guys are doing a wonderful job and I am proud that I can help at list a little with all the organizational stuff (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

One proofreading note: Shanko, I think you missed pagan on the credits.

New credits.

https://e-hentai.org/g/498560/fdea953161/

Well, real quick, it seems episode 24 (the end) is in the middle. It looks like image 116 is the final/total credits, and 117 is the start of episode 20.

v3 : [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?wd8k2291ng1dsch (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Sorry, I forgot to check the first page script...and I missed a couple others...so...
(EDIT: See also next post. Same QC, plus a few optional punctuation things.)

134.jpg

"I wonder...I wonder whether Pink and"...

..."then we will meet them again for sure..."

141.jpg

3rd panel, sfx: "reveal"

145.jpg

"Keep holding her down like that"...

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Jun 10 2012, 14:49

The working vol 3...

On a broader level...
1) Double-check the order (like ep24 being in the middle of the volume). The way my archive displayer shows it, it looks like different capitalization of the "hssn" part may be the problem. I'd suggest just fixing the filenames (either by using the same capitalization, or taking off the letters (and the underscore after them)); there are tools to make renaming easier.
2) Take out hssn_133credits.jpg (ep22 credits, currently image 192 (the last image)).
Otherwise, everything looks like what it should be (no mess ups like you were worried, Red).

I'm gonna get picky about (terminal) punctuation, just because I noticed it now. But by the same token, I didn't notice it before; i.e., if you want to ignore those (the qc's labeled "punctuation"), it's not a huge deal. There may be some I've ignored on purpose, but it's also possible I just missed something, so if you're wondering about something, feel free to ask.

-----EPISODE 17 ([www.mediafire.com] FIXED)

008.jpg

Wow, I really overlooked this one...the text in the bottom-right should be:
"With a sudden change of events, Pierce defeated Semen and his group with a magical attack.
The party obtained the Short Sword that came out of Semen."

020.jpg

You left a quotation mark at the end of Pink's 2nd bubble (in the top-left).

023.jpg

..."If you sell sell my armor, sword and"...

punctuation...
009.jpg: "May.", "Yes."
012.jpg: "Yes.", "By all means."
015.jpg: ..."already."
018.jpg: "Damn!"


-----EPISODE 18

punctuation...
027.jpg: "Maze." It's vertical, that'd probably just be weird no matter how you tried to add the period.
034.jpg: "Maze."


-----EPISODE 19

punctuation...
048.jpg: ..."It huurts."
060.jpg: "Excuse me."


-----EPISODE 20 (fixed...)

067.jpg (FIXED)

"Do they realize that this is Pubic Castle?"

068.jpg (FIXED)

suggest: *wind blowing* -> *howl* ...I think I passed on this before, and even now I could almost leave it alone, so if you don't want to do this one now, then that's alright.


-----EPISODE 21 (fixed...)

punctuation...
103.jpg (FIXED): "That's...That's my limit." (or exclamation point)


-----EPISODE 22 (fixed...)

119.jpg (FIXED)

Actually, all Santa says in that bubble is "Souzenkan!". Not "kill him with this" or anything else.


-----EPISODE 23 ([www.mediafire.com] FIXED)
This is the same as ver 3, so I'll just copy those fixes down here...

134.jpg

"I wonder...I wonder whether Pink and"...

..."then we will meet them again for sure..."

141.jpg

3rd panel, sfx: "reveal"

145.jpg

"Keep holding her down like that"...

punctuation...
137.jpg: "Ah!", "What's wrong, Pierce?"
141.jpg: "Nooo!"


-----EPISODE 24 ([www.mediafire.com] FIXED)

156.jpg

"It's still too early to tell."...

171.jpg

..."for my sake, you..."

(And...I'm not inclined to care greatly about the end material, after all...(the accuracy, I mean). So I'm just going to check what's there.)

178.jpg?
(I'll get to this.)

183.jpg

"Sushinetaa" -> "sushi"

Credits.jpg

"A part of"...

punctuation...
155.jpg: ..."dangerous."
156.jpg: "I see."
163.jpg: ..."This one is weak."
167.jpg: "Yo...You escaped death."

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Jun 16 2012, 21:49

And here are my fixes.

The Hawk's eyes strike again! @_@

Here's mine: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?shkxkdkgn3r5l9x

...And that leaves 18 and 19, which are only punctuation so not a huge deal necessarily; and 23, which still has a little more than just punctuation.

And the macro stuff, like removing the ep22 credits and fixing the order.

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Jun 10 2012, 22:29

The macro stuff will be fixed in the next update to the gallery, when I hope to make it public. Just waiting for the other fixes first.

v4 with PeopleDon'tDance fixes : [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?hvblc77mbb2fal3

Yup, it looks good.

Whether you want to wait for the corrections in 18 and 19, or just integrate these last big fixes and make the volume public, that's up to you Red. The 18 & 19 bits aren't a huge deal, and if they come along later you can always update it then.

Ok, here's the gallery with all the changes received so far.

https://e-hentai.org/g/502840/be58baf97a/

The remaining minor changes to Chapters 18 and 19 are kjoif's, and he is not replying to my PMs, so... shrug.

As a reminder, translation bounty for first chapter of the last volume is here:

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5881

I assume piotr012 plans to tackle it soon?

Ok, here's the gallery with all the changes received so far.

https://e-hentai.org/g/502840/be58baf97a/

The remaining minor changes to Chapters 18 and 19 are kjoif's, and he is not replying to my PMs, so... shrug.

As a reminder, translation bounty for first chapter of the last volume is here:

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5881

I assume piotr012 plans to tackle it soon?

I was quite busy doing non e-hentai related stuff.
Now, I'm going to have a lot of free time.
I want to finish the silent saturn 10 the day after tomorrow.
I'm going to do the chapter 25 of Dragon Pink this weekend.

xx

This post has been edited by haxorexhaxorex: Jun 26 2012, 17:56

Since my old account doesn't work anymore (piotr012). I'll do the translation from this account from now on.

Doesn't work anymore, why? I think you should straighten the matter out with Tenboro, if the account is still present, since multiple account users are banned when detected.

xx

This post has been edited by haxorexhaxorex: Jun 26 2012, 17:56

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