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So how is this gonna work? We just fix the pages we worked on and submit them to Red? Any sort of font standardization or stuff like that?

Almost done editing, just one thing:
Wouldn't money pouch fit better? And also, since we're replacing "wallet" I'll replace them on page 106 while I'm at it too.

I didn't think about other instances...good catch. "Pouch"? Meh, pouch somehow has a different image than purse to me (when after "money"), so I like purse better, but dictionaries tell me pouch would be accurate, too. jfji552?

How about "Over 10 or 20 women have been driven to madness by it"?

My problem with this and the original line is just that "10 or 20" in this line sounds illogical...I think? Or something...odd, definitely. I'd kind of rather say "10 and 20" in this or the original line, but that's a little weird in its own right.

I can overlook that part of the line, though, since it's hard for me to define why I think it's odd.

So how is this gonna work? We just fix the pages we worked on and submit them to Red? Any sort of font standardization or stuff like that?

If you want to standardize, talk to the other editors. It's not much of an issue in my mind...

I didn't think about other instances...good catch. "Pouch"? Meh, pouch somehow has a different image than purse to me (when after "money"), so I like purse better, but dictionaries tell me pouch would be accurate, too. jfji552?

I prefer "pouch", due to American English having this purse=handbag stuff going on, although the "money" qualifier mitigates this.

My problem with this and the original line is just that "10 or 20" in this line sounds illogical...I think? Or something...odd, definitely. I'd kind of rather say "10 and 20" in this or the original line, but that's a little weird in its own right.
I can overlook that part of the line, though, since it's hard for me to define why I think it's odd.

It is a bit odd. We could probably just cut out the "10 or" from the original line and not lose much accuracy, but I don't think it sounds strange enough to do that, so let's just leave the line as is.
Another option might be "10 or even 20". "10 and 20" sounds worse to me, since it could be interpreted as addition on a bad day, and would be pretty much equivalent to just "20" anyway.

This post has been edited by jfji552: Mar 22 2012, 07:27

I think we can go with money purse: [en.wikipedia.org] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coin_purse

Sounds exactly what we have in here.

As for 10 & 20, "10 or even 20" would work since Semen seems to be dramatizing here.

Made all the suggested changes. Still couldn't find a good font for pg204 though, but I did add the <3 in. Also fixed a few flaws in the images (mainly scanlines I missed)

You can also use this: ※

Use what?

This post has been edited by Kaosumx: Mar 23 2012, 04:26

Use what?

That was just the ※ character used there, in case you wanted to retype it instead of fitting your text to the existing one. Never mind.

That was just the ※ character used there, in case you wanted to retype it instead of fitting your text to the existing one. Never mind.

Ok. It's just that all I see is a blank space there so I was curious.

That little star thing. It's used usually in the colophon to mark/check the different lines like this.

That little star thing. It's used usually in the colophon to mark/check the different lines like this.

Eh that gallery is fjorded. Norway doesn't like me enough to let me in to see it.

EDIT - doesn't matter anyways. I know what you guys meant.

This post has been edited by Kaosumx: Mar 23 2012, 04:58

I have received fixed version of episode 16, but I am waiting for other fixes discussed here before replacing all chapter galleries with the collected volume one.

I'm still waiting for the consensus over whatever to call the money (bag, pouch, purse) and the "10 and 20" complication. As soon as they're resolved, you'll have the fixed chapters from me.

I'm still waiting for the consensus over whatever to call the money (bag, pouch, purse) and the "10 and 20" complication. As soon as they're resolved, you'll have the fixed chapters from me.

Let's go with "money purse" and "More than 10 or even 20 women have been droven to madness by it.", although I think the latter could be left as is just as well. Your choice, I'd say.

Okay, I went with both of your input. Do we know if the remaining chapters beside 11-12 & 14-16 needs to be fixed?

"More than 10 or even 20 women have been droven to madness by it."

"driven" (with an 'i')

Emergency fix performed!



This post has been edited by lightshader: Mar 27 2012, 03:37

Any updates? Could we maybe get a full tally for what you do and don't have updates for on ep 7 - 16, Red? And/or, maybe editors can chime in with which chapters they've sent fixes for and we can get a tally that way. For anyone who hasn't done the fixes yet, maybe we should send PMs...

(Reminder: list of fixes for 7-16 back here (should be entirely up-to-date with the current conversation).)


And I'll plug the other request for a couple of volume 1 fixes one more time...
-Ep 4, pg60: "Psy Burst"
-Ep 6, pg106: "Ener Psy Burst"
A reward for these can be made available on request.

I got updated versions of chapters 11, 12, 14, 15, 16 (185, 189, 195-200, 203-204, 213-214). For the first 4 all filesizes/hashes were changed.

So, in other words, no changes have been made to chapters 8, 9, 10 and 13.

For your convenience, the fixed chapters are here, if anybody would like to check up on them (and for the record, I have no problem with archives being shared here, this is a very much collaborative project).

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?98dn98de99bzkgu

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?1so1sam57fabhlc

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Apr 1 2012, 05:47

So, in other words, no changes have been made to chapters 8, 9, 10 and 13.

Alright. If these are the only chapters that need fixing. I'll do them after I finish this edit for GjG, and i''ll do those V1 fixes People mentioned (and a final credit page).

In the mean time, i'll need the link/list of need fixes and an updated list of trans, editors, PR's, final thoughts, etc. to make sure everything's included.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Apr 1 2012, 05:57

In the mean time, i'll need the link/list of need fixes

All fixes for 7-16 are in here, with the earlier episodes (7-12) being quoted in the latter half of the post.

This post has been edited by PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore: Apr 1 2012, 06:42

And since I was the editor for chapter 6, naturally I should make any fixes necessary, so here it is.

Just to make sure, when you said chapters 7-8, you mean chapters 7-8 of volume 2, not the "fake" chapters 7-8 of volume 1 which featured that SciFi story? I was the editor for that SciFi story, so if there's any other mistakes that's been overlooked let me know and I'll correct them.