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post Mar 2 2012, 11:43
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QUOTE(PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore @ Mar 1 2012, 18:31) *
By the way, do we realize that Dragon Pink is incomplete?
We have everything there is, and as far as I can tell, there's no intention to make more. So it's not incomplete, it just shuts down on a cliffhanger instead of on a happy lull in narrative. I've never been big on happy endings and assumptions they all lived happily ever after, so it's not a big difference to me.

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post Mar 2 2012, 12:40
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But it's not the kind of cliffhanger you'd think would end a series, with some vague fate for our heroes. They're right in the middle of an action-packed battle; it looks to me like there's supposed to be more story. But we'll see what everyone thinks when the translation reaches the end of volume 4.

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post Mar 2 2012, 12:47
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I'm sure there were more volumes planned, but if they were never made, we have to be content with what there is (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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post Mar 2 2012, 23:23
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What I am curious is, what is the story behind the series being dropped? Author decided he hates the characters? Copyright conflict? Personal conflict?
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post Mar 4 2012, 01:43
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Dunno your answers, Red. I tried a very little searching to no avail, and Itoyoko's home page has nothing about Dragon Pink at all.

Here's a down payment (?) on ep8-10. Ep 8 I'm all done with, and 9 & 10 are done except for a final once over...which I will do after some sleep. And this will definitely be much shorter than the full day+ that the SFX took me, here...

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Dragon Pink v2 - ep 8
Translator: PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore


If I don't explicitly say "NOTE", anything in parentheses is pretty much just some comment to the editor, full disclosure, whatever, just not meant as a tl note.

027.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

(no tl)

028.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Narration: Begin adventure

Pierce: Anh!

Pierce: Ah, ah!

Pierce: Yes!

Pierce: Nhhnn!

sfx (x2): *zu*
(zu = thrust)

Pierce: Bobo, you're wonderful.

sfx: *gui*
(gui = move)

Pierce: Eep!

029.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Pierce: Jeez, so rough, Bobo.

Pierce: Ah, ah, nn...

sfx: *zu*
(zu = thrust)

Pierce: Amaazing.  Yes...yes!

Pierce: Ah, ah!

Pierce: Ha, ha!

sfx (x2): *kuchu*
(kuchu = slup)

Pierce: Haa

030.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Pierce: Khyy......

Bobo: U-...Uga

Pierce: Khhuu......uu...uu......

Pierce: It's no good, I can't hold back......

sfx: *zun*
(zun = plunge)

Bobo: U!

Pierce: Bobo, please,

sfx: *bikun*
(bikun = twitch)

Pierce: cum with me~~~.

031.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Pierce: Ah, I'm cummingg!

sfx: *ban*
(ban = bang)

Girl: Excuse me, would there be travelling warriors in...here!?

Bobo: Nga!

Pierce: Urk!

sfx: *kyu*
(kyu = clench)

Girl: Eek!

Girl: I-...I'm so sorry!

032.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Fanny: Umm, my name is Fanny.

Fanny: My apologies for the sudden intrusion.

Pierce: So?  What do you want from us!?

sfx by Santa (x3): chuckle

sfx by Pink (x3): giggle

text right of Bobo: Pierce...owow...

Pierce: Shut your traps!  We didn't become like this on purpose!

background text, top: Gyahah(a~~)ha
background text, middle: Haha(hahaha)
background text, bottom: Hi(hi)hihi(hi)hihi

Fanny: M-......My apologies.

Narration: Pierce is undergoing vaginal spasms.

033.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Santa: So you're saying you want us to search for your missing sister!?

Fanny: Yes.  Yesterday, she went into the forest to the north, and hasn't come back since.

Fanny: Recently, there have been repeated occurrences of mysterious disappearances.  I'm worried about her.

Pierce: Still~, you just show up and ask us to check out this ominous place...

Fanny: Please.  If there's anything that I can do for you, I'll do it.

Santa: That makes it easy.  Your body will be price enough.

Pink: Santaa!

sfx: *baki*
(baki = whack)

text right of Santa: It was a joke!

034.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Fanny: *sob* *sob* My big sister is my only relative......

Fanny: If I lose her, I'll be all alone...Uu....uu......

Pink: Come here.  Don't cry.

Fanny: Boohoo

Pierce: I guess that's it, then.  Shall we go look for her sister?

Bobo: Uga.

Santa: Ahhh, Pierce-kun?  Where do you think you're gonna go with your vagina in a spasm?

Pierce: Santaa~~.

Pierce: Bomba!

sfx: *dokan*
(dokan = blam)

Santa: Gack

note below panel: Bomba....Pierce's explosive-type spell.

Pink: Idiot.

035.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Narration: Northern forest

sfx (x2): *kasa*
(kasa = rustle)

sfx (x2): *za*
(za = swish)

036.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

sfx (x2): *kopo*
(kopo = bloop)

sfx (x2): *kacha*
(kacha = clack)

Witch: Hohoho.  Finally, it is time.

Witch: When I plant this final seed in your body, it will be complete.

Witch: This will be the proof that my long toils have not been in vain.

Sister (thought): Someone, save me.

037.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Witch: And it is all thanks to you wandering in here yesterday with such exquisite timing.

Witch: Well then, shall we get started?

sfx: *jara*
(jara = jangle)

sfx (x2): *jara*
(jara = jangle)

Sister: Mmm!  Mmm.

Witch: Now, if you struggle, you will get hurt.  We must get your underclothes off, after all.

sfx: *biririri*
(biririri = riiiip)

sfx: *jara*
(jara = jangle)

Sister: Mm...mm......please...stop......

sfx: *jara*
(jara = jangle)

038.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Witch: Now, I shall spread you open.

sfx: *kapa*
(kapa = open)

Sister: Mmm!

sfx: *zunu*
(zunu = insert)

Witch: Oh, you were a virgin?  Hi hi hi

sfx: *tara~~*
(tara = drip)

sfx: *pikupiku*
(pikupiku = wave)

sfx: *kacha*
(kacha = clack)

sfx: *kui*
(kui = press)

Sister: Mmaaa!

039.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Witch: Hii hi hi.  Now I have all 6 flesh dolls.

Sister: Mm~~~.

Right girl: Mmm......

Left girl: Agg...gh.

Pink: Hey, Santa.  We've gone pretty deep into the forest, haven't we?

Santa: With it this dark, it'll be hard to find anyone.

Pink: But we have to find her.  I feel so sorry for Fanny.

Santa: Yeah.

Pierce: Hey, I can see a small light over there.

040.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Pierce: I wonder why there's a house here so deep in the forest.

Santa: Something seems suspicious.  I'll go check it out.

sfx: *soro~*
(soro = slowly)

sfx: *koso*
(koso = peek)

Girl: Mm......

Santa: Holy mackerel.

Santa (thought): It looks like we struck gold.

Santa (thought): One of them may be Fanny's sister.

041.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

sfx: *hyun*
(hyun = woosh)

sfx: *ba*
(ba = dodge)

sfx (x2): *ka*
(ka = thok)

Witch: You saw, did you not?
Witch: If you have seen, you will not be leaving here.

Pierce: Who is this person!?

sfx (x2): *gasa*
(gasa = rustle)

Pink: Santa.

Santa: It looks like this is the culprit behind the mysterious disappearances.

Santa: Could we have you return the women?

Witch: Hi hi hi.  Not a chance.

Witch: Besides, it is already too late.

042.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Santa: We WILL have those women back!
(I want to emphasize "will", otherwise the line won't sound like I want it to.  It doesn't have to be caps, so long as it's clearly emphasized.)

Santa: Bobo!

Bobo: Uga!

sfx below bubble (x3): *da*
(da = run)

sfx: *ZAN*
(zan = lop)

Bobo: !!

Bobo: Wh-...What's this?

sfx: *karan*
(karan = miniature (Half guessing, and twisted around a bit, but close as I can get.))

Witch: Hihihi.  It is no use.

Witch: My body long ago withered away to nothing.

043.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Pink: Pierce, what is she!?

Pierce: This is troublesome.  She's a Slave Witch.  And a quite malevolent one, at that.

sfx: *su~*
(su = rise)

Witch: This time, I will be the one to attack.

sfx: *bo*
(bo = vwo)

Witch: I shall show you something interesting.

Witch: Heed me, my dolls, home to the seedlings rooted in thy flesh.

Witch: Ye shall become mine hands and feet.  Assemble unto me.

sfx (x3): *gacha*
(gacha = rattle)

sfx (top (of last panel), leftwards): *kacha*
(kacha = clack)

044.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Sister: Aa...aa......guh...uh...uh

sfx: *zu..zuruzuru*
(zu..zuruzuru = ss...slither)

Sister: Auuugh!

Sister: Uguuuh

sfx: *zuzuzu*
(zuzuzu = stretch)

Sister: Ugh......

sfx: *zuzozozo*
(zuzozozo = sliiip)

Santa: What just happened?

sfx: *gachan*
(gachan = crash)

Santa: Uwaah!

sfx: *dobaa*
(doba = pour)

Witch: Behold.

sfx (x2): *zaku*
(zaku = roil (I don't like the sounds it's "supposed" to be, so I'm actually riffing off one of them, here.))

sfx: *zozozo*
(zozozo = writhe (Not sure: half made up, half intuition.))

045.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Pink: Aaaah!

Bobo: Uga!?

Santa: Bweeh!?  The hell is that?

sfx: *ooooo*
(ooooo = rooooar)

Witch?: Union of living bodies, Slave Doll!

Narration: Slave Doll has appeared.

below Narration: Monster design/Moriki Yasuhiro (seriously)

046.jpg--------------------------------------------------------------

Witch: Fufufu.  Prepare yourselves.

sfx: *zuoooo*
(zuoooo = grroooar)

Witch: You shall fall prey to my Slave Doll.

Narration: Save game

DRAGON PINK VIII/End
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post Mar 4 2012, 10:52
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And that's ep9 & 10, as attachments this time. No need to bloat the thread's size, I think.

Attached File  dragon_pink_v2_ep09.txt ( 6.89k ) Number of downloads: 19

Attached File  dragon_pink_v2_ep10.txt ( 5.97k ) Number of downloads: 17


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post Mar 4 2012, 11:04
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I'll take Chapter 10 (give's me cheap time to put it off)
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post Mar 4 2012, 11:48
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All right, I'll do chapter 8 and possibly chapter 9 if that's not being worked upon by time I finish chapter 8.
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post Mar 5 2012, 05:10
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Great. Translation bounty for ep 11: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5403
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Mar 5 2012, 04:10) *
Great. Translation bounty for ep 11: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5403


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Script for Episode 11:

QUOTE
p82
ドラゴンピンクアイデアコンテスト
Dragon Pink Idea Contest

第2回 第3回参加者名簿
Participant name register for the second and third contest

毎回たくさんの応募 本当にありがとう御座います。
Thank you very much for sending so many entries every time.

本来なら参加作品も掲載したいのですが、ページの
都合により名前のみとさせていただきます。
Normally, I would like to publish them, but due to page constraints I can only list the participants' names.

(Not a TL note, just a comment: Names are transliterated in the order given in the original Japanese, so in the case of a regular name, the surname will come first. In some cases the meaning has been added in parenthesis; use or ignore it as you please. Names where I had to purely guess at part of the reading are marked with (?).)
♡さくまむ       ♡糸 天         ♡田口 明広
Sakumamu
Ito Ama
Taguchi Akihiro
♡メンダー       ♡牧 まるくに      ♡ガイヤス
Mendaa
Maki Marukuni
Gaiyasu
♡宮之脇 秀継     ♡電王 フィイビ     ♡J・J
Miyanowaki Hidetsugu
Den'ou Phoebe
J.J
♡アヤノフ       ♡村中 秀一       ♡惟任 日向
Ayanof
Muranaka Shuuichi
Koretou Hinata
♡COLT PYTHON 357    ♡せすな         ♡小舘 みなほ
COLT PYTHON 357
Sesuna
Kodate Minaho
♡本間 渡       ♡吉田 美幸       ♡てるてる
Honma Wataru
Yoshida Miyuki
Teruteru
♡青野 六剛      ♡吉田 尚樹       ♡としまるくん
Aono Rokugou
Yoshida Naoki
Tosimaru-kun
♡黒井 竜       ♡まりちゃん       ♡あいすくりひむ
Kuroi Ryuu ("Black Dragon")
Mari-chan
Aisukurihimu (Close to "Ice Cream")
♡原田 誠       ♡ばぶるG        ♡宇宙戦士PC
Harada Makoto
Baburu G ("Bubble G")
Uchuu Senshi PC ("Space Warrior PC")
♡門前 貴弘      ♡ギャースカ 三太郎   ♡ケン玉ケンちゃん
Monzen Takahiro
Gyaasuka Santarou
Ken-tama Ken-chan
♡松岡 洋之      ♡森のうさぎ       ♡高 満
Matsuoka Hiroyuki
Mori no Usagi ("Rabbit of the forest")
Taka Mitsuru
♡犬井 学武      ♡えれちゃん       ♡にこぷんニセ
Inui Manabu
Ere-chan
Nikopun Nise
♡ヘビメタが好きだ   ♡M’s          ♡阿脩羅 樹
Hebimeta ga suki da ("I like heavy metal")
M's
Asura Itsuki
♡さなたむし なおき  ♡池田 強宏       ♡禊
Sanatamushi Naoki
Ikeda Takehiro
Misogi
♡中村 雅降      ♡池田 昌史       ♡ムース
Nakamura Masafuri (?)
Ikeda Masashi
Muusu ("Moose" or "Mousse")
♡佐々木 降之     ♡あまる めうす     ♡XYZ
Sasaki Otoshi
Amaru Meusu
XYZ
♡妖 美        ♡朱 龍         ♡MIYA
You Yoshimi
Shu Ryuu
MIYA
♡う゛ぁるどる     ♡ほるだ         ♡嶺本 人美
Varudoru ("Vardole")
Horuda
Minemoto Hitomi
♡佐鍋 明       ♡霜月☆辰猫        ♡丸木舟
Sanabe Akira (?)
Shimotsuki☆Tatsuneko
Marukibune ("Dugout Canoe")
♡直まやと       ♡河合のターくん     ♡バラン
Nao Mayato
Kawai no Taa-kun ("Taa-kun from Kawai")
Baran
♡片岡 宏之      ♡藤原 潤        ♡綺羅君
Kataoka Hiroyuki
Fujiwara Jun
Kira-kun
♡ディードリット    ♡おれ          ♡しんのすけ
Deedlit
Ore
Shinnosuke
♡和 希        ♡ばくれつ屋       ♡月見ちひろ
Kazu Nozomi
Bakuretu-ya
Tsukimi Chihiro
♡喜多川 歌麿     ♡千坂 けん       ♡MAYU
Kitagawa Utamaru
Chisaka Ken
MAYU
♡徳満 誠治      ♡黄泉火闘死等      ♡う〜すけ
Tokumitsu Seiji
Yomihitoushitou (?) (http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/browse/author/47060/)
Uusuke

以上、75名の皆様またその他読者の方々、これからも
頑張って連載いたしますので、よろしくお願いします。
To the above-mentioned 75 and all the other various readers: I'll keep on doing my best with this series from here on, so I gratefully look forward to your continued support.


p84
ぼうけんをはじめます
Begin adventure

やまもりのメシがあらわれた
A pile of food has appeared

パク パク
*munch* *munch*

あぜん
*dumbfounded*

ピアス よく食べるわねぇ
Pierce, you're sure eating a lot, huh?


p85
はぐ はぐ
*munch* *munch*

ええ なんかオナカすいちゃって
Yeah, somehow I'm starving.

ピアス そんなに食うとふとるぞ
Pierce, you'll get fat, if you stuff your face like that.

ピクッ
*flinch*

ひぇ〜っ ドピャァァ
Hieee! Dopyaaa!

バリバリ
*crackle* *crackle*

サイバス
Psy Burst!

あ〜〜 オイシかった
Aaah! That was delicious!

ピアス オナカ大丈夫?
Pierce, is your stomach okay?

ウ……
Uh...


p86
ほら言わんこっちゃない
See? I told you so.

ピンク ついてってやれよ
Pink, go with her!

うん
Yes.

ピアス 大丈夫かな?
Pierce... I wonder if she's okay.

ありゃ食い過ぎだよ
She just ate too much!

ところで村の連中の話だと
By the way, I heard this from some villagers...

ここから東にある湖は 別名桃色湖と呼ばれているらしい
It seems like the lake to the east of here is also called the pink lake.

すると そこに桃色ドラゴンに関する手掛かりがあるかもしれんな!
So there might be a clue related to the pink dragon there!

うむ その可能性が高いと思う 例の地図にも載っていたしな
Yeah, I think that's quite likely. It's written on the map too.

ただ その湖にはどうやらとんでもねぇバケモノが住んでるらしい
However, at that lake, there apparently lives a terrible monster.

こいつは 気をひきしめないといかんというわけだな
So that means that it better brace itself, huh?

そういことだ
You got it.


p87
ここまで来たんだ がんばろうぜ
We came this far, so let's do our best!

うえ……えっ……
Ueh... Eh...

ザー
*pour*

ピアス しっかりして
Pierce, hang in there!

ありがと ピンク だいぶ楽になったわ
Thank you, Pink. I'm feeling much better.

どうしたの ピアス あなたらしくもない
What's the matter, Pierce? This isn't like you.

はっ……
Hah....

ピアス あなたもしかして
Pierce, could it be...

ドキッ
*ba-dump*


p88
過食症じゃない!?
You have bulimia, don't you!?

ドボン
*plosh*

ピンク
Pink!

ザ バ
*splash*

ワー ウソウソ ごめんなさい
Waaah, I'm kidding, I'm kidding. I'm sorry!

え?
Eh?

ピンク あたしね
You know, Pink...

もう2ヵ月あれがないの
I haven't had you-know-what for two months...

あれがないって言うと まさか?
You-know-what... could it be?

そら苦しいわ。
That's gotta hurt!

便秘
Constipation!

ヒョエーー
Hyoeeeh!

バキ
*bam*

ドアホ
You giant idiot!


p89:
もじ もじ
*fidget* *fidget*

ニヒヒヒ
Nihihihi

お〜〜 遅かったなぁ
Oooh. That took a while.

ピアス 大丈夫かぁ!?
Pierce, are you okay!?

あのね ボボ……
Uhm, Bobo, I...

ピアスの奴 何 赤くなってんだ?
What's with that Pierce, she's blushing?

へへへ
Hehehe

ボボ…… ピアスね……
Bobo... You see, Pierce...

ピアス…… お…お前おめでたってまさか……
A matter for congratulation... P-Pierce... Could it be...


p90
コクン
*nod*

ピアス でかしたぁ
Pierce, you did it!

ガバ
*grabs*

キャッ
Kya!

ボボ…… そんなに振りまわさないで
Bobo... Don't swing me around like that.

あ…スマン つい……
Ah... Sorry, couldn't help it...


p91
やぁ びっくりしたぜ
Wow, that was surprising!

よかったわね ピアス
That's great, Pierce!

はははは
Hahahaha

ポッ
*blush*

カーッ
*blush*

よし今日はお祝いだ パーッと飲むぞう
All right, we'll celebrate today! Let's get sloshed!

わぁ 賛成
Yay! Let's do it!

あ〜〜 つかれたぁ
Aaah... I'm tired.

ヒック ちょっと飲み過ぎちゃった
*hick* I drank a bit too much.


p92
ねぇ サンタ
Hey, Santa.

ん!?
Mh!?

あのね…ピアスを見てたらなんかあたしも赤ちゃんほしくなっちゃった
You know... When I saw Pierce like that, somehow I also ended up wanting a baby.

何 言ってんだよ
What are you saying?

赤ちゃんはお前一人でたくさんだ
As far as babies go, you're enough of one yourself.

もう……
Jeez...

サンタ……
Santa...


p93
ねぇ…サンタァ しよう
Hey... Santaaa, let's do it.

ペルッ
*lick*

あ…あん……
Ah... Ahn...

あふ…
Afu...


p94
ガバァ
*push*

きゃっ
Kya!

あ……ダメェ……
Ah... Dooon't...

チロ チロ
*lick* *lick*

はあ
Haa!

はあ
Haa!

あっ…… いじっちゃ いやぁ
Ah... Don't toy around with meee.


p95
洪水だな こりゃ
It's a real flood.

バカ
You idiot.

ねぇ はやくぅ
Hey, huuurry.

何をしてほしいのかな?
I wonder, what do you want me to do?

あ〜ん じらさないで
Aahn, don't tease me.

我慢できなぁい 入れてぇ ねぇ…サンタァ
I can't take it anymooore. Put it iiin. Come on... Santaaa.

チニャ チニャ
*squish* *squish*


p96
今日は趣向を変えてみたいか
Want to try something different today?

ゴソッ ゴソッ
*rummage* *rummage*

道具屋でめずらしいもんを手に入れたんだ
I got my hands on something rare at the item shop.

なあに
What is it?

リビングロープさ!
A Living Rope!

ひぇ〜〜
Hieeeh!

シュルル
*snake*

やぁ〜ん 何これぇ
Nooo! What is this!?

ヒュン ヒュン
*swoosh* *swoosh*


p97
くひいい きつい!
Kuhiii, it's tight!

ギリリ
*tighten*

ギリリ
*tighten*

このリビングロープはもがけばもがくほどきつくしまるんだ
This Living Rope gets tighter the more you struggle.

あ〜ん そんなぁ
Aahn, no waaay.

あ〜ん
Aahn!

ゴロン
*roll over*

そおら
There!


p98
ああん 苦しいよォ
Aahn, it hurts!

ギシ ギシ
*creak* *creak*

プニュッ
*squeeze*

いやがってるわりには興奮してるじゃないか
For hating it you are quite aroused, aren't you?

あふ……あ…ん
Afu... Ah... Mh...

ズイ
*thrust*

ほうら ピンク
Pink, look!

はあはあ
Haa, haa...


p99
ちゅぱ ちゅぱ
*suck* *suck*

ペロッ
*lick*

ピンク お前ずいぶんHになったな
Pink, you've become quite the pervert.

え〜〜そんなことないもん
Eeeh? No, way I did.

ブー
*sulk*

さあ 尻を向けな
Come, move your ass over here.

あん
Ahn!


p100
グイッ
*grab*

クチュ
*squish*

あん
Ahn!

ズニュ ズニュ
*thrust* *thrust*

あう
Auh!

あくう
Akhuuh!

んあ んあ
Mhah, mhah...


p101
はあ
Haa!

ズチュ ズチュ
*squish* *squish*

はあ
Haa!

サンタァ いい
Santaaa, it's so good!

い……いくう
I-... I'm comiiing!

あくう
Akhuuh!

ビクン
*twitch*

ビクン
*twitch*

あう
Auh!


p102
ヒク ヒク
*twitch* *twitch*

はあ
Haa!

はあ
Haa!

SAVEします
SAVE GAME

DRAGON PINK XI/おわり
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Script for episode 12:
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p104
ぼうけんをはじめます
Begin adventure

じょうさいのまち ゲタシ
Fortress City Getashi

クイクイ
*clatter* *clatter*

ガヤガヤ
*chatter* *chatter*


p105
今 俺達がいるのはここら辺だ
We are in this area now.

ガサガサ
*rustle*

へえ もうずいぶん来たんだ
Heeeh? We've come quite far already.

この地図だと東の湖に手掛かりがありそうなんだが
According to this map, there seems to be a clue at the lake east of here, but...

とりあえずメシにするか
For now, let's eat!

ワーイ ネコマンマ ネコマンマ
Yaaay! Cat food! Cat food!

オーイ ねえちゃん メシと なんか飲み物くれぇ
Hey there! Nee-chan, bring us food and something to drink!

ハーイ
Yeees!

お待ちどう様
Here you are.

待ってました
We've been waiting.


p106
ひゃあ 食った 食った
Hyaa! I'm full, I'm full.

プハー
Phew!

なかなかおいしかったわね
That was pretty good, huh?

お客さん お勘定全部で200ゴートね
That'll be 200 gorts in total.

はい はい
Yes, yes...

ぇ〜っと サイフはっと
Let's see, my wallet, uh...

あれ?
Huh?

ガーン ガーン
*shock*

サイフ落としたァ
I lost my wallet!


p107
エ〜ッ
Eeeh!?

あんた達 ただ食いする気かい
You guys trying to dine and dash?

いやあ そんなわけじゃあないんだけど
No, we wouldn't do something like that, it's just...

じゃあ 200ゴート耳をそろえて出してもらおうか
Then pay up those 200 gorts, will ya?

ピンク ちょっとの辛抱だぞ!
Pink, hold out here for bit!

へっ!?
He!?

サンタのバカァ
Santa, you jerk!


p108
明日までに金を持って来ないとこいつを売っちまうからな
If you don't come back with the money by tomorrow, I'll sell this one off, got it?

うえ〜ん
Ueeen!

ガチャガチャ
*clack* *clack*

ピンク 待ってろよ
Pink, wait for us!

ウガ
Uga!

やっぱ サイテーの男ね
As always, he's the worst kind of guy.

とは 言ったものの中々 金になる様な獲物がいねぇなあ
That said, there doesn't seem to be any prey around that you could make to money.

めんどくさいから このまま逃げちまおうぜ!
What a bother, let's just run away and leave her!

サンタァ あんた 何考えてんの
Santaaa! What are you thinking!?

ウガ
Uga!

冗談 冗談 だってば
I kid! I kid, I'm telling you!


p109
ザッザッザッ
*rustle* *rustle* *rustle*

ザッザッザッ
*rustle* *rustle* *rustle*

ザッザッ
*rustle* *rustle*

なんかずいぶん森の奥まで来ちまったなあ
We've gone pretty deep into the forest, huh?

ん?
Hm?

やった ハニームーンだ
Great! A Honeymoon!

ハニームーンがミツをすっている
Honeymoon is sucking nectar.

チロチロ
*lick* *lick*

ハニームーンの蜜は高値で売れるからな
You can sell Honeymoon honey for a good price, you know?

こねこね
*knead*

トリモチをこねている
He's kneading birdlime.


p110
よ〜く狙って
Aim well...

ギリギリ
*pull*

パシッ
*psh*

ビュン
*whizz*

ヒューン
*whoosh*

ウキャー
Ukya!

ベチャ
*splurp*

大当たりィ
Bull's eye!

さて 蜜を取れなきゃ
Now we have to take her honey.

ピアス 少し 髪の毛をくれよ ヒモにするから
Pierce, give me a few of your hairs! I'll use them as strings.

いいわよ
Sure!


p111
ウピー ウピー
Upii! Upii!

さてと
Let's see...

ピッ
Pi!

プッ
*pluck*

アウッ
Auh!

くにゅ くにゅ
*rub* *rub*

はあ はあ
Haa, haa...


p112
ふむ そろそろ いいかな
Hmm, good, I guess we're getting there...

サンタァ ヌメリタケ取って来たわよ
Santaaa! We went and got some Numeritake!
(Note: Numeritake, literally Slimy Shroom, is another name for the Nameko (pholiota nameko) mushroom.)

ザッザッ
*rustle* *rustle*

おう
Great!

こいつは催淫効果があってハニームーンの蜜取りには不可欠なんだ
These are indispensable for taking a Honeymoon's honey. They work like an aphrodisiac on them.

ピー ピー
Pii! Pii!

ググ
*squish*

キピーッ
Kipii!

ズブッ
*thrust*


p113
アギィィ
Agiii!

なんか ちょっとかわいそうね
Somehow, I feel a bit bad for her.

クニクニ
*wiggle*

はあ はあ
Haa, haa...

ピッ
Pi!

キー キー
Kii! Kii!


p114
だいぶヌメリタケが効いてきたな
The Numeritake is quite effective.

後ろの穴にも もう一つ入れてっと
Let's put another one in the hole at her back.

キキ
Kiki!

プルプル
*wobble*

ズブ
*thrust*

キー
Kii!

クピィー
Kupiii!

クピィ……
Kupii...


p115
ウピー ウピー
Upii! Upii!

くりくり
*wiggle*

ブルブル
*wobble*

ピキィ
Pikii!

おっ 出て来た 出て来た
Ah! There it comes, there it comes!

チョロチョロ
*trickle* *trickle*

ヒック ヒック
*sob* *sob*

こんだけ蜜が取れりゃあ 十分だ
That's all the honey we need.

ひどいことして悪かったな
Sorry for doing something terrible to you.

ピー ピー
Pii! Pii!


p116
気をつけて帰れよ!
Take care and go home!

ふらふら
*flutter* *flutter*

さっ はやくもどろうぜ
Come, let's hurry back.

ウガ
Uga!

ピンク 泣いてんじゃないかしら
I wonder if Pink's crying.

エーーッ ピンクを売りとばしたァ!?
Eeeh!? You sold Pink off!?


p117
ポリポリ
*scratch* *scratch*

やあ 悪いな まさか あんた達が本当にもどって来るとは思わなかったからよォ
Well, sorry about that. I really didn't expect you guys would come back, ya see.

ちょうどドレイをほしがってるドレイ商人が来たもんで5000ゴートもくれるっていうからよ 売っちまったんだ

There just was a slave trader right there. He wanted a slave and he said he'd give me as much as 5000 gorts. So I sold her off.

ヒッ
Hi!

キラッ
*glint*

バカヤローー なんてことしやがる どこのドレイ商人だ さっさと教えろ!
You damn idiot! The hell you're doing!? Where is that slave trader? Tell me, quick!

ヒイッ となり村のクナガオのドレイ商人だよ
Hii! It's the slave trader in the neighboring village, Kunagao!

ドッ
*thud*

ピアス ボボ 行くぞ
Pierce! Bobo! Let's go!


p118
クナガオのむら
Village Kunagao

こらあ ここから出せえ
Hey! Let me out of here!

ガタガタ
*rattle* *rattle*

出しなさいよォ
Let me out!

ほう こいつは威勢がいいな
Hooh, this one's lively.

グビッ
*gulp*

まあ いきがってられるのも今のうちさ 自分の運命を知ればな
Oh well, she wouldn't keep acting strong for long, if she knew what's in store for her.


p119
あたし達 生け贄にされるのよ
We'll be used as sacrifices.

ボソ
*mumble*

えっ!?
Eh!?

月に一度 この村の神殿にいる魔物に生け贄を差し出して儀式をしているわ
Once a month, there is a ceremony in which sacrifices are offered to the demons in the temple of this village.

この村は魔物をあがめているのよ
This village worships demons.

そんな…… ひどい……
No way... That's terrible...

わああ 出して 出して
Waah! Let me out! Let me out!

たすけてよォ 死にたくなぁい
Heeelp! I don't want to diiie!

さっきから ギャーギャーと
You've been making a racket for quite a while.

うるさいぞ 少し ヤキを入れてやる
It's annoying! I'll teach you some discipline.


p120
へへへ この酒は60度の強力な奴だ
Hehehe, this is some strong 60 proof stuff.

ほら 飲めよ
Come on, drink!

グイ
*shove*

うぐう
Uguuh!

ゲホ
Cough!

ゲホ
Cough!

グビグビ
*gulp* *gulp*

ヴー
Uuh!

ウグー
Uguuh!

ゲホ
Cough!

ゲホ
Cough!

よく効くだろ この酒
Powerful stuff, right? This booze.

カーッ
*blush*


p121
ここにはいろいろ拷問道具があってよ
I have various torture instruments here!

ドレイを調教する時にも使うのさ
I also use them, when I break in slaves.

キャー
Kyaa!

ビリリリリ
*riiiip*

服は邪魔だからな
Your clothes are in the way!

ブチッ
*tear*

グッ
Guh!

しばらくこいつに乗ってな!
Ride this one for a while!

ガバ
*grab*


p122
ああああ
Aaaah!

ズキーン
*sharp pain*

メリメリ
*tear* *tear*

ツー
*smooth*

少しは身にしみただろ
It dug a bit into your body, huh?

ぐひい
Guhii!

SAVEします
SAVE GAME

DRAGON PINK XII/おわり
Dragon Pink XII/End


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Script for episode 13:
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p124
ぼうけんをはじめます
Begin adventure

んぎぃ
Ngii!

いやあ 痛ぁい…痛ぁい
Nooo! It huuurts... It huuurts!

ジャラ ジャラ
*cling* *cling*

ガラ ガラ
*rattle* *rattle*

プチュ プチュ
*squish* *squish*

みぎゃあ
Migyaa!


p125
へへへ メス猫 どうだい クサリの味は
Hehehe, how do the chains taste, you female cat?

ヂャラ ヂャラ
*rattle* *rattle*

あ〜〜ん 許してぇ
Aaahn! Let me off!

もぞもぞ
*squirm* *squirm*

ほれぇ
There!

ヂャラ ヂャラ
*rattle* *rattle*

はぎゃあ
Hagyaa!

ジャラリ
*ching*

そら もういっちょう
There! And once more!

グイッ
*jerk*


p126
ビキン
*twitch*

あががが
Agagaga!

プシャーッ
*splash*

こいつ 漏らしやがったな!
She fucking leaked, this one!

おい そろそろ儀式の準備を始めるぞ
Hey! It's about time to begin preparing the ceremony!

へい わかりやして
Yeah, got it!

ちっ 少しは懲りただろう
Tch! Learned your lessen, did you?

はあはあ
Haa, haa...


p127
ほら お前も来るんだ!
Hey, you're coming too!

おら さっさと歩け
Come on, walk, quick!

ビリリリ
*riiiip*

きゃあ
Kyaa!

ドサ
*thud*

パシ
*grab*

おら おとなしくな 今 縛ってやるからよ
Come on, be a good girl, 'cause I'll tie you up now!

ひっ
Hi!


p128
ズン
*loom*

おお 水の魔神 ユアリースラ様 また今宵も貢ぎ物を持ってまいりました
Ooh demon goddess of the water, Yuarislime-sama! Tonight, we have brought you tribute once again!

どうぞ 心ゆくまでお楽しみ下され
Here, please enjoy it to your heart's content.


p129
さあ ドレイを供えるのだ
Come now, present the slaves.

いやあ
Nooo!

おとなしくしろ!
Be quiet!


p130
さあ 我らが神の洗礼を受けるがいい
Now you shall undergo the baptism of the goddess.

ガチャン
*click*

バタン
*thud*

開けてぇ 開けてぇ
Open it! Open it!

ドン
*thud*

お願い…い出してよう
Please... Open iiit!

ズズズ
*slump*

ピアス…… ボボ…… サンタァ……
Pierce... Bobo... Santaaa...


p131
ククク 今宵の獲物は生きがよさそうね
Kukuku, tonight's prey seems lively.

コポ
*swirl*

ひい!
Hii!

ザパア
*splash*

ユアリースラがあらわれた
Yuarislime has appeared

ぎゃっ
Gya!


p132
ふふふ かわいいねぇ 食べてしまいたいねぇ
Fufufu, aren't you cute? I want to eat you all up.

コポコポ
*swirl*

くすくす
*chuckle*

ひぃ……
Hii...

あっ 冷たい やめてぇ
Ah! It's cold! Stooop!

ヒヤァァ
*icy*

うぐぅ
Uguu!

ゴボッ
*swirl*

こらぁ バケモノやめなさいよう
Heeey! You monster, stop iiit!


p133
ふふふ 待っておいで 次はお前の番だからね
Fufufu, you just wait! It shall be your turn next.

痛い
Ouch!

ドサッ
*thud*

あ…あわわ
Ah... Awawa...

さあて お前から吸わせてもらおうか
Now then, shall I absorb you?

ひぁぁ
Hiaah!

ズニュー
*shlip*

あ…そんな 入って来る どんどん入って来る
Ah... No way! She's entering me! She's steadily going inside me!

ズブズブ
*squish* *squish*


p134
ぎゃああぁ
Gyaaaa!

ビチュ
*splish*

ズリュズリュ
*squish*

ふらふら
*stagger*

あ…あが……
Ah... Aga...

た…助けて ねぇ…助けて
H-... Help me! Please... help me!

あ…ああ
Ah... Aah!

グハァ
Guhaa!

ゴボ
*pour*


p135
バシャア
*splash*

ぎゃあああ
Gyaaaa!

ビチャビチャ
*splish* *splish*

ふふん やっぱり若い娘は生気があって美味しいわぁ
Fufun, the life force of a young girl is delicious as always!

ピチャ
*drip*


p136
さあて ふたり目をいただこうかしら
Well then, shall I devour the second one now?

あ…やめて……
Ah... Don't...

うぇ〜ん サンタァ
Ueehn, Santaaa!

クー
Kuuh!

ドガドガン
*bam* whack*

クー
Kuuh!

何ごとだあ!?
What's that!?


p137
ぎゃあ
Gyaa!

バン
*slam*

ピンク 大丈夫かぁ
Pink! You okay!?

サンタァ
Santaaa!

サンタァ 重ぉいよォ
Santaaa, it's heaaavy!

ムギュ
*squeeze*

あっ 悪い悪い
Ah! Sorry, sorry.

よくも私の邪魔をしてくれたね 覚悟おし
How dare you get in my way? Prepare yourself!

ガーゴイル
Gargoyles!


p138
ガーゴイルがあらわれた
Gargoyles have appeared

さあ やっておしまい
Now end them!

ズズン
*thunder*

くそ 新手か いくずボボ
Crap, new enemies? Let's go, Bobo!

ウガ
Uga!

クエエエ
Kueee!

ギィィィン
*creeeak*

くっ
Kuh!


p139
ギギギギ
*creeeak*

ちい なんてバカ力だ!
Damn, what ridiculous strength!

ガシーン
*grab*

ググググ
*tense*

むおう
Muooh!

ダァーーッ
Daaah!

ブーン
*whoosh*

ダーーン
*crash*


p140
すりゃあ
Suryaa!

ズシャア
*slash*

クエエエ
Kueee!

ピアス 今だぁ
Pierce, now!

まかして
Leave it to me!

全てのゆれ動く固まりよ 我が波動に答えよ
All mass in swaying motion, answer to my wave!

キィィィィン
*diiiiing*

カッ
*crack*

ルーイン
Ruin!


p141
パキーン
*craaack*

バラバラ
*scatter*

なんとガーゴイルをいとも簡単に倒すとは
That you would destroy the gargoyles so easily...

今日のところはおとなしくひきさがるが
For today I shall withdraw peacefully, but...

ズブズブ
*squish* *squish*

ズプ
*splish*

いずれ このカリは返させてもらうぞ
Before long, I shall make you pay for this!

あっ この野郎 待ちやがれ
Ah! You bastard, stop!


p142
あたしねェ きっと サンタが助けてくれると信じてたんだよ
I was knew for sure that you'd come and rescue me, Santa.

エッ!?
Eh!?

俺はお前がいなくなるとタダでSEXできなくて困るんだよなぁ
I was just worried that I couldn't have sex for free anymore, if you disappeared.

あ〜〜っ サンタってば ひど〜い
Aaah! Jeez, you are terrible, Santa!

ボカボカ
*whack* *whack*

いて バカ 冗談冗談だってば
Ouch! You idiot! I'm kidding! I'm kidding, I'm telling you!

SAVEします
SAVE GAME

DRAGON PINK XIII/おわり
Dragon Pink XIII/End


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post Mar 8 2012, 21:18
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Wow, can you say express?

Ok. Editing for 13: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5424

Translation for 14: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5423
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post Mar 8 2012, 21:32
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Hey Red, I believe you responded to my "Don't Know Other Languages" thread and noted that editing might be the way to go. Do you think it would be all right if I accepted one of your bounties, knowing that it might take me a little bit to figure out what I'm doing?

I need a training bounty! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)
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post Mar 8 2012, 21:42
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QUOTE(WoopsE @ Mar 8 2012, 14:32) *

Hey Red, I believe you responded to my "Don't Know Other Languages" thread and noted that editing might be the way to go. Do you think it would be all right if I accepted one of your bounties, knowing that it might take me a little bit to figure out what I'm doing?

I need a training bounty! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)


As a trainee editor, I would suggest you work with experienced editors like LS and SS. Try a few pages, run it by them (you can do it on the forums in our editing thread). When they think your work is good, accept an editing bounty. But first, do show us some of your samples.
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