[X] My Assistant

Fixed V1 uploaded: https://e-hentai.org/g/428413/374a1875e4/

033.jpg still has the unedited bubble (Super Shanko sent me the fixed page).
122.jpg and its double spread still say "damage fight".
141.jpg and its double spread still say "damage fight" (this one, lightshader forgot, but I've got them, too, now).
Here's those images: [www.megaupload.com] http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HGQ9FNOD .

033.jpg still has the unedited bubble (Super Shanko sent me the fixed page).
122.jpg and its double spread still say "damage fight".
141.jpg and its double spread still say "damage fight" (this one, lightshader forgot, but I've got them, too, now).
Here's those images: [www.megaupload.com] http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HGQ9FNOD .

Not sure why p.33 was uploaded wrong, I am pretty sure I uploaded what I got in the big archive. I blame the gremlins. 122 I got both versions, so I had to chose one, and I guess I chose the wrong thing. Will ask next time (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Hopefully this is the last one to be fixed: https://e-hentai.org/g/428604/c7ef83e393/

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Nov 1 2011, 18:35

Great job with this one guys!!
Lets hope we'll see it completed one day.
I'd gladly chip in if I wasn't swamped with my own projects.
I want to work on another great work from Itoyoko - Let's Kurumi just need to raise some credits for it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Cheers

So... any plans to continue with Volume 2? I'd add to it.

You already did: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4700

People's has it on to-do list when he finds time, feel free to bug him. I think some other translator said something similar to me, I'd have to check my PMs. But nobody has actually started work on it, so it is still very much open.

C'mon, people... (or People (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)).

Ah, ok.

Well, just wanted to make sure the topic isn't completely forgotten. It's been months...

Ep 7 script.

CODE

Dragon Pink v2 - ep 7
Translator: PeopleDon'tDanceNoMore


If I don't explicitly say "NOTE", anything in parentheses is pretty much just some comment to the editor, full disclosure, whatever, but not meant as a tl note.

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Title@right: The story up to now

narration@top, right: The king of a certain country gathered together four youngsters with no connection to each other.

narration@top, left: He then ordered these youngsters to retrieve the pink sphere from the pink dragon.

narration@middle, right: The hero, Santa's, first course of action was to throw Pink onto a bed and take her virginity so as to leave behind no regrets.
("Throw onto a bed" is some creative license on my part, because "push her down/over" doesn't work very prettily.)

Pink: It hurts, it huuurts.

narration@middle, left: This is how Pink's strange and weirdly unfortunate journey began.

narration@bottom: Pink and her 3 companions would overcome numerous hardships by way of cunning and courage.

Pierce: Embryo

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narration@top, right: There were also times when they endured feelings of bitter sorrow.

Serving girl: Aren't you just a *slave*?
("slave" is in the larger, red font.)

narration@top, left: At such times, Pink turned her heart from these matters by having sex.

sfx above Pink: Ah ah!

narration@middle: One day, in the village of Talamu, they learned of the pink cavern.  They penetrated the pink cavern, only to find the Slave Queen and her minions lying in wait.

Slave Queen: You may call me your Queen!

sfx by whip: *byuu*
(byuu = swish)

narration@bottom, right: Overcoming their injuries, they finally managed to defeat the Slave Queen.

sfx by head: *pon*
(pon = plop)

text left of head: That wasn't called for!

narration@bottom, left: And they obtained a map to the pink dragon.

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Narration: Begin adventure

Narration: Tajifu Town

Pink: Hey~, Santa.  I want some new clothes.

Pink: These clothes are all worn out.  How about it?

Santa: *Nope.*  It'd be a waste.
("Nope" is in large font.)

Pink: C'mon~~.  I want 'em, I want 'em.  I want new clothes.

Pierce: Santa, buy something for her!

Pink: Santa, you *cheapskate*.
("Cheapskate" is in the large, pink font.)

Santa: Argh, you nags!  Fine!

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Narration: Armorer

Attendant: Welcome.

Pink: I want this one.

Santa: We can't afford anything too expensive!

Narration: Slaves cannot equip these clothes.

Pink: Eh!?

Pink: Then I guess I'll go with this!

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Narration: You cannot equip those clothes either.

Pink: You're kidding~.

(Compass directions in parentheses.)
Pink (NE): This?

Pink (SE): That?

Pink (NW): These clothes?

Pink (NE): Those?

Narration: This store has no clothes for a *cat slave*.
("cat slave" is emphasized.)

sfx going behind Pink: *ga~~n*
(gan = despair)

Santa: Hey, Pink, hold up.

sfx: *gishi*
(gishi = creak)

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Narration: Tajifu Inn

sfx (x2): *goshi*
(goshi = scrub)

sfx (x2): *pan*
(pan = fwap)

sfx: *pasa*
(pasa = flop)

Santa: Don't worry about it, Pink.  I'm sure there'll be some in the next town.

Pink: I'm not worrying.

Santa: Sheesh, what are you pouting for, stupid?

Pink: I am not pouting.

Pink: Uu!  Uu...

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Pink: Uu, uu!
(If anyone thinks this looks really stupid, I'm entirely open to suggestions.)

Pink: Waaaah

Santa: What's wrong?  Don't cry.

Pink: Bwaaah

Santa: H- Hey!

sfx: *gaba*
(gaba = glomp)

Pink: Santaa!

Pink: I hate it, I hate it, I hate it!  I hate being a slave!

sfx (x2): *hikku*
(hikku = sob)

Pink: Being discriminated against, left and right!  I'm sick of it~.

Santa: Pink.

Pink: Santaa.  Bwaaaah

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sfx (x2): *po*
(po = drip)

sfx: *za~~*
(za~ = pouring)

sfx: *chu*
(chu = smooch)

Pink: Make love to me.

Santa: Pink.

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Pink: Santa, please...

Pink: don't ever abandon me, okay?

Santa: Idiot!

Pink: Sorry.

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Pink: HMM

sfx bubble: *pero*
(pero = lick)

Pink: Anh, Santa, it's dirty.

Pink (lower-right): Ah!

Pink: Aah, no!

sfx (x2): *chupa*
(chupa = slurp)

Pink: Haa haa

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Pink: No, it's so embarrassing.

Pink: Ah, ah!

Pink: Ah, khaa!

Santa: Pink, raise your butt.

sfx: *kui*
(kui = taut (May also refer to her tail curling.))

Pink: Okay......HMMM

Santa: I'm putting it in.

sfx: *nyuu*
(nyuu = moving in)

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sfx: *zunu*
(zunu = shoop)

Pink: HMEW

sfx (x2): *kupu*
(kupu = slop)

Pink: Ah, ah!

sfx (x2): *zunyu*
(zunyu = slide)

Pink: Ah, yes, yes!

Santa: Kk

Pink: Anh

sfx (x2): *chuku*
(chuku = chk)

Pink: Ah......Ah ah.

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Pink: Ah!  Really go-  -od......

sfx (x2): *chu*
(chu = ch)

Pink: Haa

Pink: Haa

Pink: Ah!

Pink: Anh......mm......

Santa: Mm......!

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Pink (right): Anh, anh

Pink: Haa, haa

Pink: So full, so full MEW

sfx: *zunyu~*
(zunyu = slide)

Pink: Aah!

Pink: Yes!

sfx (x2): *kunyu*
(kunyu = grind)

sfx (x2): *biku*
(biku = twitch)

Pink: Santaa, it's good......I'm cumming!

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Pink: HMMEW

sfx (x2): *pikun*
(pikun = jerk)

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Pink: Zzz
Pink: Zzz

Pink: Mmm
Pink: Mmm
(She's sound asleep.  Maybe "Hmm" instead.  Otherwise, I don't know what else to use besides repeating "zzz".)

sfx: *goso..*
(goso = slip)

sfx (x2): *kacha*
(kacha = clack)

Santa: If I've got a tiger-striped pelt, I should be able to work something out.

sfx: *chirin*
(chirin = tinkle)

sfx: *tatatata*
(ta = jog)

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Santa: Huff

Santa: Huff

Santa: Huff huff.  Of all things, to think I'd run into a big guy like this.

sfx: grrrr

sfx: grarrr

Narration: Santa is fighting a Hell Tiger.

sfx: rawrrr

Santa: Woooooh!

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sfx: *bu~~~n*
(bun = swish)

sfx (right): arrr

sfx: *doga*
(doga = thunk)

Santa: Haa!

sfx: *zan*
(zan = lop)

Santa: Huff huff

sfx: *dosa*
(dosa = whump)

Santa: Bobo......

Bobo: Santa, that was cold of you.

Santa: Sorry, you were a big help.

Bobo: More importantly,

Bobo: you're going to make clothes for Pink out of his pelt, right?  I'll help.

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Santa: Ouch!

sfx: *chiku*
(chiku = prick)

Bobo: Santa, let me see that.

sfx: *suisui*
(suisui = smooth)

Santa: Bobo, you've got some weird skills, you know?

Santa: By the way, what happened to Pierce?

Bobo: She's snoring up a storm in her sleep.

sfx: *su~pi~*
(su/pi = zzz/hyoo (?? I'm thinking of the whistling sound some cartoon characters make when they sleep.))

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Pink: Yawwn

sfx by Santa: Zzz Zzz

Pink: Huh?

sfx by Santa: Zzz

Pink: Wah, such cute clothes.

sfx: *pasa*
(pasa = rustle)

Pink: Hn!?

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Pink (thought): Thank you.

Pink: Hehehe

Pierce: Oh, Pink, isn't that cute?

Bobo: Uga.

Santa: Clothes make the girl, huh?

Pink: Santa, you meanie.

Narration: Save game

DRAGON PINK VII/End

Glad to see this thread alive again!

editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5389

translating bounty for next chapter (8): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5390

editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5389

translating bounty for next chapter (8): https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5390

Added to them.

By the way, do we realize that Dragon Pink is incomplete?

Also, I'm doing all 3 chapters of this next arc at once, so maybe you could put up the next couple of tl bounties, too. ...Or edit the current one to include all 3, and up its reward? Whatever works. I've finished a pass on ep8, as good as finished a pass on ep9, and now I'm going to get some sleep. I think I can finish up all 3 chapters tomorrow (most of what's left undone in ep8 and 9 is the SFX).

Incomplete how?

Editing works for me, less posting. I'll update it and chip in my 50+50 (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Please make sure to accept the bounty so nobody else tries to work on it.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Mar 1 2012, 19:45

Incomplete as in there's no "The End."

Incomplete as in there's no "The End."

That sucks. Anyway, i'll take the editing for Chapter 8 and we'll go from there.

Ummm, https://e-hentai.org/g/18677/ccb45c61d7/ seems complete to me. But, as it is longer than 200 pages, if you have the view set for 200 pages like I, you still will have to click to the second page of gallery to view the last few pages, including the end credits and ToC.

If that's not what you meant, I am still missing something.

Slaps his head. Or do you mean that the four volumes of Dragon Pink we have do not finish the story? Are we missing Volume 5, or has it been abandoned by the author?

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Mar 2 2012, 01:14

Just quick check... has Super Shanko already gotten started on editing of chapter 7? I'd accepted the bounty before I noticed his intention to do so. If he's already gotten started, I can do the next chapter 8 instead...

Actually on second thought, he can go ahead and do it. I'll just wait for the next editing bounty. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by lightshader: Mar 2 2012, 01:24

No, actually I thought you had started on Ch7 so I took up that pesky Kiddy Grade doujin. I don't mind doing chapter 8, if I do chapter 7, it won't be for a few more days since I have 2 other things I wanna do for Lixef and lasserine first.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Mar 2 2012, 01:29

LOL. It so happens that when I thought you were working on the ch 7, I went on to start cleaning the backgrounds of that "pesky kiddy grade" doujin (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif)

Well, I can forward you the cleaned pages if you want. I've done 9 pages so far. It's still a nightmare to clean, though...

This post has been edited by lightshader: Mar 2 2012, 03:15

Slaps his head. Or do you mean that the four volumes of Dragon Pink we have do not finish the story? Are we missing Volume 5, or has it been abandoned by the author?

This part, mostly. Volume 4 ends on a cliffhanger. I have no idea what Itoyoko's intentions for the series may be.

Well, maybe by the time we are done with V4, V5 will be released. That said, V4 dates to 1994, so I think the series has been abandoned. Perhaps somebody who can navigate the Japanese Internet could find out more about why it was abandoned, and if there are any signs of change?

LOL. It so happens that when I thought you were working on the ch 7, I went on to start cleaning the backgrounds of that "pesky kiddy grade" doujin (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif)

Well, I can forward you the cleaned pages if you want. I've done 9 pages so far. It's still a nightmare to clean, though...

Boy, it's like an 80's sitcom here. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif) Alright, i'll take KG when it's done, work on Ch7 and leave Ch8 to you. I think that'll work.