[X] My Assistant

hey guys. i have some free time on my hands, so i would like to contribute as an editor, if that's ok. i've attached the cleaned version of page 7/volume 9 to this post, so tell me what you think. i chose a page without captions, as there is no translation yet. (and i didn't decide on fonts yet either (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

Uh, yea. I don't mind you taking SS9. But I want to do the remaining volumes. Only because I did.... well, just about all of them (at least the ones Red posted).

If i'm reading the script right, there's a couple missing lines on the chalkboard.

If i'm reading the script right, there's a couple missing lines on the chalkboard.

fixed

Uh, yea. I don't mind you taking SS9. But I want to do the remaining volumes. Only because I did.... well, just about all of them (at least the ones Red posted).

i'm fine with that. i'll take ss9 then once the script is done.

https://e-hentai.org/g/492964/d2ee926283/

I noticed that you released an edited version.

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009.jpg
I added the missing translation from volume 7 to those bubbles.

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それで
時間をかせいで
そいつらの
エネじーも
吸い尽くして
やるか
We can get enough energy to do it, and completely suck their energy at the same
time!

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ファッションの
似合う
カオリナイト
Kaolinite
wearing
fashionable clothes

I noticed that I translated this wrongly, I only realized that after translating volume 9.

https://e-hentai.org/g/492964/d2ee926283/

I noticed that you released an edited version.

Yes, I thought we have already proofed it. But cool, nothing wrong with fixes...

There's the fixed pages.

There's the fixed pages.

Did someone do the proofreading of this series? I didn't see anyone commenting on forum about the translation.

Did someone do the proofreading of this series? I didn't see anyone commenting on forum about the translation.

There's never alot of PR'ing with this series. To be honest, I did have to correct quite a few lines here and there as I went along.

Blood does some proofing, and I try to read it, too (but I am not a native speaker, so there's stuff I miss).

Here is the translation of the volume 9 of Silent Saturn.
[goo.gl] http://goo.gl/xJeED

The translation of the volume 10 is also almost completed. I'll post it in a few days. After I review it.

Since I've published translation of the volume 9 and I'm mostly done with the volume 10.
I'm going to accept the bounty for volume 12. (Unless xenexegesis didn't start translating the volume 11 and he agrees to switch 12 for 11).

This post has been edited by piotr012: May 25 2012, 12:52

Wait, so where's SS 9?

Wait, so where's SS 9?

I guess it wasn't edited yet. Someone else is supposed to be doing this one.

well, i've already done a good part of the cleaning on ss9, but i saw the bounty being posted just a few minutes ago. (i thought it would be posted here, so i didn't check the bounty system).
by now it's already accepted by someone else, gotta talk to Red_Piotrus first on how to continue.

Any comments about translation of volume 9 would be welcomed (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Sorry about any confusion. No, waruituti is not editing, r3pt1le is. Waru guy is just a bounty spammer, he accepted it but never posted here nor sent me anything that wasn't spam-like.

The bounty is still open to be accepted and completed, presumably by r3pt1le

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5822

And yeah, I created it a while ago when I accidentally thought we had script for SS 9 and didn't announce it here... and I must have forgotten I did that.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: May 28 2012, 04:38

Sorry about any confusion. No, waruituti is not editing, r3pt1le is. Waru guy is just a bounty spammer, he accepted it but never posted here nor sent me anything that wasn't spam-like.

The bounty is still open to be accepted and completed, presumably by r3pt1le

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5822

And yeah, I created it a while ago when I accidentally thought we had script for SS 9 and didn't announce it here... and I must have forgotten I did that.

I looks like there are a lot of spammers (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Isn't that kind of annoying?

I can imagine it'd be annoying with editing bounties since it's more likely they could do it but don't. I do however get pissed with translation bounties but I also don't get my hopes high either if I don't recognize their name.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: May 28 2012, 07:09

so, i'm almost done cleaning volume 9 and can soon start with the typesetting. has there been any proofreading on the script/is there a corrected version yet? i found some things when looking over it (hotari instead of hotaru in the people section, "she know what is happening" instead of "she knows" near the end of 052.jpg), i'll try to correct those while i ts them. i'm not a native speaker though, so it would be nice if someone else could take a look at it as well.

secondly there is no page 2. i've adjusted the filenames already, and usually wouldn't add a blank page, but i'll leave that decision to you guys.

and lastly, credits:

CODE

art               Maki Hideto
                  Sawara Kazumitsu
                  Escaped Kyou-san
                  Ume-san
commissioned by   Red_Piotrus
translation       piotr012
edit              r3pt1le

did i miss anyone?

I have asked Blood who did some proofing of the SS series in the past if he would like to do it again. If he won't, I will, but I am also not a native speaker, so...