[X] My Assistant

I'll be taking up SS7 around the end of this weekend if no one else wants it.

Yay!

I'll be taking up SS7 around the end of this weekend if no one else wants it.

Did you ever take this up Kage?

Did you ever take this up Kage?

Yeah, but I've got a lot of distractions right now so I'm only about half-way done. I'm gonna try to just buckle down and finish it up soon.

So it's been quite a while- would anyone be terribly offended if I lowered my contribution to the bounty? I want to save up my credits and hath to start training. Unless Kage is really close then I won't touch what I added; otherwise I kind of want to use my hath for other things

If it isn't happening, it isn't happening...

Sorry for the long wait everyone, I just got over a really nasty flu. Here is the script for SSSSv7. As always, I'll be notified of responses here so all proofreading/comments/questions can be posted here or PM'ed to me. If you contributed to the bounty, I suggest you check your MoogleMail tomorrowish once the bounty claim goes through.
Best wishes.

 Silent_Saturn_SS_vol._07.txt ( 23.5k ) Number of downloads: 22

Well this should be fun. I'll wait for a good proofread of this before diving into it (hate redoing mistakes) so I'll keep watch. And Kage, before you start a new request, I'd like to harass you for a trans first (since it been a while of course) once you're up to it =3

editing bounty for SS7: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5594

translation bounty for SS8: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5595

as always, thanks to all involved for the hard work!

Praise the lord (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

I'm going to go ahead and read through this script and fix any grammar errors I find.

EDIT: Finished reading the script over~

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[left column]
=Manga
=Illustrations
=Illustrations
=Manga
=Illustrations

[right column]
=Maki Hideto, Sawara Kazumitsu
=Fred Kelly-san
=Yonigeya no Kyou-san
=Ume-san
=Maki Hideto, Sawara Kazumitsu

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=Front Cover, Back Cover
=Art: Maki Hideto
=Color: Sawara Kazumitsu

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=Episode 13: Elios
=Pega...sus...?
...?

P2
=...Um,
who are you...?


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=...So, who is this?
=No clue...

P2
=What? You don't know?
=...Yeah, but...

P3
=A horn...?

P4
=Is this one of those...
=y'know
=Ivermachines*...? (I place an asterisk here for a footnote to placed at the bottom of the page, to cite the anime it references.)

P5
=There's no way that's right...

P6
=Kyah!



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=Pegasus!?
=You were Pegasus?

P2
=Pegasus
=Pegasus!
=Mm...

P3
=Pegasus.
Thank god you came to.



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=This is...
Elysion...?

P4
=Ah
=Ehh!?
=Haa
=Haa
=Nnn...



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=*stretch*
=Hey
don't spread it open so wide.



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=Haa

P2
=Hotaru-chan...
=Haa
=Haa
=Haa
=Chibiusa-chan...


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=Nmaa
=Aaahh

P2
=Hotaru-chan
=Chibiusa-chan...

P3
=Ahh...

P4
=I know that...I shouldn't be peeping on them like this...but I...just can't look away...
=Haa
=Haa
=Hotaru-chan...
=Chibiusa-chan...


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=Pegasus! <3
=Eh? Small lady!?
When did you...?!
=Oh, Pegasus. You were looking at us

P2
=And look at how hard you got!
=Wh-what are you?!

P3
=Nggh <3

P4
=Small lady~~


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=Two...young ladies...are...
=This is naughty...Don't lick me there...
Ah!
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=Elyos, {Elios?}
come on. <3
=Hurry up <3

P2
=Haa

P3
=This is
Hotaru-chan's...
=Ahn <3
=And Chibiusa-chan's...
private parts...

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=Nnhaah

P2
=So this is the inside of my beautiful young ladies...
=No, that actually


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=belongs to me,

P2
=Elios-kun.

P3
=Whoaah


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=Whaaa
=How does my Golden Crystal feel?
I can't tell if you keep flapping your mouth around, put it into words.

P3
=*snap*
=Yes, sir.

P4
=What are...!?
Please stop, King!
=That's filthy, young ladies!

P5
=Ngha
Nooo


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=NEIGHHHH

P2
=Ah
=I wonder if he
=still remembers...

P3
=Why did I have
=such an awful nightmare...
=He looks weird.

P4
=So then that's your true form, Pegasus?
=Yes.
=But why did you suddenly transform back into your normal form?

P5
=I was searching for the Deadmoon headquarters in this world
=when I felt a strong dark wavelength.

P6
=Although it was for but an instant, the reason why I am in this form is because my real body is out there
=And that, therefore, is undeniable proof that Deadmoon's base must be near there!
=So you went there?


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=Without a doubt
=Deadmoon is there!

P2
=So, we've now come to that place.

P3
=It should be right around there.
=Right near that Deadmoon Circus area.

P4
=Oh, by the Deadmoon Circus!
=Yep, the area around the Deadmoon Circus...

P5
=...is kind of...
suspicious...

P6
=Why didn't we notice this earlier?!
=I feel like this has happened before...


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=Okay, let's go, Usagi-san.
=Hotaru-chan...

P2
=How did you figure out I was Tsukino Usagi?
=Eh?
=I didn't think she believed she was disguised despite clearly displaying her entire face.

P3
=Why didn't we notice earlier?!
=Deja vu? {add accent marks}
=She seems to remember quite a bit about Mistress 9.

P4
=That's as close as you'll come!

P5
=I don't know how you figured it out but
=I can't believe you waltzed over here with just 3 of you.
=We're in quite a bad mood right now.

P6
=Did you think we wouldn't figure it out with that silly naming scheme?
=That's right. We figured it out long ago but were just keeping an eye on you!
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=Costume:
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=Costume:
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This is from the Magic Girl Academy show that the Skapaa Mystery Channel is currently running. The setting is pretty good but the main heroine is super ugly and not many people know about it... Rather, does anyone watch this show?...



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=Costume:
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=Costume:
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Blazer


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=Sailor Astarte
=I was only able to make one actual drawing out of the material given to me by Sahara Nagamiya. It's not like anyone else has drawn something like this (at least I think?) so I arranged her to look like what I think she would look like in the anime version... {the first sentence here is pretty messy so I left a detail out. if you want you can run it by another translator – Keep that sentence out}
=If I gather enough data for next time I might draw another one...it'll inevitably become something different though (lol).
=The image I started with was a Hotaru that was close to Mako-chan in height (164cm { 5'4" })...She really hit the spot because I've been really into tall girls recently!
=This page kind of ended up looking like an old postcard... {this line is also very messy. if you want you can run it by another translator – Keep that line out}
=Yonigeya no Kyou


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=Shiba Niitsuki-chan.
=This is her appearance when hiding(?) her identity as Sailor Astarte, she's a student of Tenth School or something.
It's no longer on the level looking similar Astarte...
I've never seen her move at all so...
I stuck with what I know!
(Watarida Youkufuu)


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=Everyone, let's all call for Sailor Moon!
=The hostess calls out, almost purposely.

P2
=The flat electronic beeping sound echoes from the cheap company-manufactured transformation toys.

P5
=The tension rises, they're on the edge of their seats...

P6
=Wait right there!



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=I am the pretty soldier of love and justice , Sailor Moon! (pretty close to actual intro speech)
=[background title box] Sailo {} on

P2
=I have arrived!!

P3
=I figured a Live Action Sailor Moon would be something like this...
=[tag] Substitute
=I think the Human Sign* looked something like this? {* = referencing obscure title "Totsugeki!! Human"}
=I'm guessing the last four episodes' titles will be:
"The End of the Hero, Sailor Moon"
"Chibi-moon, the Second Sailor Moon, Returns Home"
"Sailor Moon Mother and Child Adventures"
"Goodbye, Sailor Moon"
Maybe?

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="The Galaxy of Fessenden..."
Upon looking at the galaxy that
Hotaru had manifested,
Haruka uttered these words...
The ancient science-fiction
short story about a miniature galaxy and
the genius scientist Fessenden that
Edmond Hamilton wrote...
The fact that Haruka knows about
science-fiction that only old
true fans should know about
makes her...suspicious.

=It's been long out of print but 2004 saw a
short story collection by the same name produced. <3



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=He seems to be in a good mood today...
Bitey Luna P



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=Nnmm...
=Nn-...



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=Nightmarish Paintrain {tl: the original is a play on words because it is spelled as pain+to obtain+train, but read as a common compound word that means a train ride used to commute to school}



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=*Bzzz*
=*Bbzzz*


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=[box] She does this kind of thing every night so she seems to not get turned on in the middle of the day...

P2
=I'm King Chibiusa
=of Chibiusaland!!
=Quit bumming around in your silly dream and wake up!!


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=Here
take a good look at it going in and out of your insides. (I have a different translation for this image. I had it translated by another translator and got, “Here, look closely at how my cock is jabbing in and out of your own pussy”. I rather like the line I have, but go with what you want).
=Nhaa...



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=Episode 14 "Guardian"

P2
=Hm...

P3
=They've come.

P4
=We have guests.
=I would like you all to meet them.



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=I'm the guardian, Nell.

P4
=And I am Kai.

P5
=And I am Deen.


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=And I am Anoe.

P4
=And I am Ten <3.

P5
=Professor...Who are these people?



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=I'm glad you are well,
Nekonnell.

P2
=Also,
Toden, Doorknobder, Undohkai
and Uchoten.

P3
=Daimons!?

P4
=Correct. We were previously Daimons in the Death Busters.
=At that time

P5
=Only a few Daimons were left alive after that battle...
=Sailor Saturn then appeared in front of us and gave us three choices.



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=Three choices?
=Yes.

P2
=One: we could forget our positions as warriors and return to "the source". {warriors=>Senshi if the mythos makes sense that way}
=Two: we could limit ourselves to this incarnation as Daimons.
=And Three: we could be reborn as new warriors known as Guardians and continue to fight. {warriors=>Senshi if the mythos makes sense that way}
=She declared... {feel free to omit this line, it's one character in the japanese source so it's kind of hard to fit an english line to it} (I suggest switching this up to the front, before listing the three choices)

P3
=And so we decided.
=We would be reborn as Guardians and fight in Saturn-sama's stead.

P4
=I see. So that's why you've all become new warriors. {warriors=>Senshi if the mythos makes sense that way}

P5
=Ah...No, um...
=Uhenshu was fed up with working so he returned to the source and
Scar said he wanted to search for his soul's hometown and must be out there wandering somewhere as a Daimon still.
=That's so him...
=You said it.
=[text] Those silly Daimons...


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=So, will you fight alongside us, then?
=...No...

P2
=Our current bodies were given to us by Saturn-sama.
Saturn-sama is currently following the enemy by herself. Also-

P3
=Seeing as she is separated from Hotaru-sama, the amount of time that Saturn-sama herself can fight is limited.
=[text right] Kinda like a capsule monster?
=[text left] Shh
=We must carry out our duty in place of our master.

P4
=So that's why you were protecting Hotaru.
=Thank you.
=Don't thank us...
=Besides-

P5
=Such serious looks don't suit you well, Professor.
=C'mon, smile.
=Fuhahaha


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=Everyone~

P2
=This is bad.
=Chibiusa and Hotaru-chan were taken by Deadmoon...
Please, lend me your strength.

P3
=Eh?
What about their protectors?

P4
=Um...Whose turn was it to protect them?
=Regardless, all 5 of us are gathered here so...

P5
=If we're all here then that means
=no one is guarding them!
=[text small] ...How like them...

P6
=We shouldn't be standing around yelling!
=Let's go, everyone!
=OKAY


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=*dig* {sfx of the rope being tight}
=*dig* {sfx of the rope being tight}
=*dig* {sfx of the rope being tight}

P4
=*clink*
=*clink*



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=You two are now our prisoners.
=If the other Sailor Senshi show up we'll use you as hostages, but-

P2
=until then we'll use you as toys.

P3
=Just how should we play with these?
=Our two new toys <3


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=I honestly wanted to do some things to Sailor Moon, too...
=PallaPalla's disappointed...

P2
=That's because you two twits blasted the crap out of her without thinking about it!!
=Waaah
=[text one line above left-pallapalla's head] There!
=[text other in smoke] Big explosion!
=[sailor moon line in corner] Kyah

P3
=Quit your griping over there.
=Kyaah

P4
=Whaaa
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=I mean, they now know that this is where we are and all.

P2
=Yeah, yeah.
=They'll be back with all their friends.

P3
=Wait, isn't that really bad?
=Oh no, now the old lady's gonna yell at us again.
=PallaPalla hates punishment!
=Do-don't get so worked up...for now-

P4
=Even if they show up we'll deny it up and down.
=Until then let's enjoy ourselves with our toys.



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=Kyaah
=Noo
What are you doing!?

P2
=PallaPalla's gonna start us off.
=I'll make sure to give you plenty of balls, okay? <3
=Stop, they won't fit.
=They wo-
They won't fit in!!


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=Aaaahhh...

P2
=St-stop!!
My stomach and...my butt...they're...!

P3
=We'll be putting ours in here. {this line looks like it's meant for P3 but the contents mean it's supposed to be in P2, it's just poorly placed}
=Nghaah!



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=Nooo!
Don't look!!

P2
=It won't stop!
It's all...
It's all coming out!!



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=My, my. We put all of those in there for you. You shouldn't be expelling them so soon.
=I'll just have to use my "stamen" to cork you up. <3

P2
=Ghaaahh
=Me too <3

P3
=Stop, take it out!
=Ngh
=I...I'm still in the middle of...letting it out...



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=Noo, stop. It's scraping my edges! (Should be “scraping up my insides”? What edges would be getting scraped?)

P3
=Noo!
It hurts!


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=Aaahhh!!


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=Sailor Planet
ATTACK!

P3
=To be continued. {lit. continued next time}


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=Next time!
This is the key to victory!!

P2
=Afterword
=Maki: So it looks like this time we ended up leaving a whole year in between this and volume 6.
=Sawara: Even though there was a compilation and "Lime Book" we seem to have failed..
=Maki: As to be expected from not doing this for a year, we've totally forgotten where we wanted to take this.
=Sawara: Because of that (or not) this volume has a slightly different feel.
=Maki: This book's construction ended up being solid at its best and stereotypical at its worst but I decided that even though there are some shifts from the first manga to the second, and even in the illustrations, that we should still bring them all together.


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=Sawara: Especially the first one, I'm kind of a bondage specialist so it was pretty different from the norm.
=Maki: We've heard requests to see non-SM content so we tried it out for once.
=Sawara: Well that kind of softcore stuff is pretty much dominating almost half of the mainstream male-targeted doujinshi. That's just another reason why we went into such a niche fetish style.
=Maki: So we went ahead and drew this up but all throughout I realized that on top of just liking bondage, if I'm not drawing something that's tied up, it just doesn't feel like I'm drawing anything erotic at all, so it was pretty tough to get it together.
=Sawara: Well if you look at it this way, we don't feel like we're drawing anything erotic, but we needed to convey eroticism to the reader so our focus shifted to the expressions and poses drawn and increased their quality. You can't have your cake and eat it too.
=Maki: That said, we gave it our all, all that's left is how the readers receive it. Pegasus got a little out of control.
=Sawara: The second manga was pretty standard fare.
=Maki: Rather, the frustration pent up from drawing the first manga exploded and turned it into something kind of harsh.
=Sawara: As far as the illustrations go, after drawing two or three pictures for the original plan, which was outdoor bondage-pet-walking, I was drawing the one with the rope bound around her crotch. Out of sheer interest I put her inside of a train car and this instantly opened my eyes and the whole thing became a train-based set.
=Maki: Because of that we ended up drawing the beginning and ending of them last.
=Sawara: But this is not a molester set...I wonder what genre this would be filtered into? Either way, for molester stuff there's always the ever-influential Black Dog so I think the supply side of the supply/demand for it is at a good point.
=Maki & Sawara: Well, we'll leave it at this for now. Let's meet in the next volume! Until then.


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=[upper] Canceled cover
=[lower] She's naked because we decided against this drawing before even drawing her costume. We weren't sure which way to go, though.


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=Colophon

=Release Date: 2004/8/14
=Publisher: Maki Hideto, Sawara Kazumitsu
=Group: Thirty Saver Street 2D Shooting

=Contact: Post 319-1222
=Kushi, Hitachi, Ibaraki 3-18-8
=Address to Satou Hiroshi or Sawara Kazumitsu
=*Don't abbreviate anything.
=*Send only sealed letters.

=All persons younger than 18, please refrain.
=Copies with missing pages or pages out of order will be replaced while supplies last.
=Unauthorized reproduction of this work is forbidden. Just a warning. Mmkay?



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[back cover]

This was a really great script to read. There are hardly any grammar errors at all. I wish all SS scripts were this enjoyable to read!

I thought about changing Elios to Helios, but they're pretty much the same name, so it doesn't really matter unless someone nitpicks. Again, this was great to read.

This post has been edited by Bloodmare: Apr 13 2012, 06:19

editing bounty for SS7: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5594

translation bounty for SS8: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=5595

Added to these.

I'll translate the Silent Saturn SS vol. 8 if no one is doing it. Does the bounty include translating SFX an the postscript?

Yes. Like with previous volumes. See here, for example: https://e-hentai.org/g/422413/cbef9d3c89/

Thanks, I'll start by writing down all names used in volume 7 and maybe volume 6. I'll start translating once I'm done with it.

Why the volume 7 wasn't fully translated? What has happened to the preview section (pages 7 and 8)? Did the previous translation forgot to translate those 2 pages?
I wanted to confirm the vocabulary that is used there, since they also appear in chapter's 8 previous. They don't seem to appear anywhere else in the text.

Hmm, maybe I should postpone translation of volume 8, until translation of volume 7 is completed.

I think 7 is still undergoing some final revisions...

If there is anything missing, I am sure KG could add it if we ping him.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Apr 29 2012, 07:45

KG? Did you mean KageSennin?

Oh, well. I managed to translate the preface without it. If he posts his preface then I'll update mine and to make sure that I use the same translation.

This post has been edited by piotr012: Apr 29 2012, 14:54

I think 7 is still undergoing some final revisions...

If there is anything missing, I am sure KG could add it if we ping him.

I don't need it right now, so there is no need to hurry. I'm half done with volume 8. So I'm actually not blocked anymore due to lack of the complete volume 7 translation. I'll have to update my translation to match the one used in volume 7, once the translation is completed.
First few lines on the volume 7 and 8 are the same, and I intend to keep it that way.

Kage said he will have it ready soon.

Sorry, looks like I forgot to mark those pages to go back and translate and missed them when revising the script somehow... Anyway, here's the translation for them:

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=Previously on Hotaru and Chibiusa

=[top-right text] The core Sailor Senshi continue their rough battle against the Dead Moon Circus and their secret tactics.
However, disregarding (?) that fact the inhabitants of the Kaiou House including the new (and popular) one enjoy their peaceful days...
  Although, this is not to say that forces of evil were not closing in on them, as well.
  Hotaru and Chibiusa were attacked by the Amazoness Quartet and their Lemures but the unidentified warriors once again stepped in to save them.

=[top-left box 1] Nggh
=[top-left box 2 ]Nghh
=[top-left box 3] *Glsch*
=[top-left box 4] *Bbuh*

=[bottom-right box 1] Our Master would most likely forgive us to do so.
=[bottom-right box 2] Tomorrow...
  We will be back with our companions.

=[bottom-left text] The unknown warriors took action alongside the other Sailor Saturn that exists separate from Hotaru, and upon returning Hotaru and Chibiusa to their home they encountered Professor Tomoe and were convinced to promise they would reveal their identities.



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=Elsewhere, Nehelenia was becoming impatient at being unable to capture Pegasus and took her frustration out on the Amazoness Quartet.  The large shadowy figure that resurrected her continues to close in on the Solar System...
  "Galaxia." She controls the army that continues to conquer the Universe and she has invaded every star system between them and the Solar System in order to control all of the Universe's Star Seeds.
  The Earth, the Sailor Senshi, and even Usagi-chan, who is also Sailor Moon and is currently too busy happily having her way with Chibiusa, had no clue that this was happening.

=Having regained consciousness during Usagi's punishment Chibiusa suddenly leapt off into the other room after feeling Pegasus' strong and radiant presence but found only a familiar-looking boy that she had never seen before...

=[bottom-right box 1] Pega...
=[bottom-right box 2] ...sus...?

piotr012, if you have any questions on character names or concepts or whatever feel free to PM me and I'll tell you what I know. Usually a google search will prevail, though.

This post has been edited by KageSennin: May 1 2012, 03:07