[X] My Assistant

[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/folder/ggv41hbdjdkck/Photos

Is this acceptable?

Page 3: Whoops, communication failure! The Hah stuff looks good. The "TL Note:", on the other hand, is supposed to be right before the translator's note between the panels near the end. The full translator's note should read...

TL Note: "Frustration" used here could more literally be read as "desire denial"

The first box should go back to what it was before.


Everything else seems acceptable on my end.

UF

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/r9l8tlzd1pqn71o/0003a.jpg

Is this right?

Seems fine to me. Out of curiosity, is there a reason not to fix page 6? It didn't bother me personally, but Red_Piotrus may still want something done about it.

UF

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/ev06jnr7k3822u8/0006.jpg

sorry, forgot to upload.

Weather Report about to be released - I gather those were were the final changes. Minor proofreading comment by me: either Translated and Prooread by X or Translator and Proofreader X
Also I'd say Please check the forum and the bounties rather than singular bounty
And if we mention the bounties, how about adding a link to https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?search=ehcove

Still waiting for the tiny fixes for (C69) [Gadoujuku (Kawacchi Hirohiro)] Oppai Ippai Yume Oppai (Dragon Quest VIII) as noted here.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jan 28 2015, 14:26

Okay, first new project in a while.

Project: COMPLETE!

[Aun Kiki] Medea-hime (Ouma-san) vs Jessica ~Chagosu Ouji no Dorei Nikki~ (Dragon Quest VIII)



Original Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/452594/9848ee1446/
Bounty Link: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11806
Current Bounty: 20,000 credits + 20 hath
Script:  DQ_script.txt ( 5.54k ) Number of downloads: 47


So... I feel like I should apologize for translating this? The art sort of...isn't perfect. While I actually do like some of the ideas in here (Medea x Jessica = Super Hot), I feel for honesty's sake I should admit to doing this project because it was easy. It was sort of like some of the old Larvaturs .html "games" I used to translate (with shittier art).

Editors, this is the easiest 19-page project in the entire world. Aside from the cover page, the only editing is to replace the black bar at the bottom with ENG text instead of JAP. No bubbles, no sfx, no redraws, no cleaning, no NOTHING. You could have this whole thing done in two hours or less.

On another note, a big (and long overdue) thanks to Super Shanko for this gallery. It's been sitting in my folder for quite a while because I was debating whether or not it would be worth doing the sfx as well. Well, it's in the galleries now. If anyone's interested in doing the sfx, get in touch with me, though considering the page resolution I'm not really holding my breath. That said, Viper RSR is way too awesome to pass up. Expect to see more around here, and higher quality scans as well!

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Feb 15 2015, 18:37

editing bounty for this is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11806

Alright, I am done with Oppai Ippai Yumeippai. Now I need you guys to look through it to find any mistakes and such that need to be corrected. I think I did a good job considering it's my first time editing.

[mega.co.nz] Here is the link. If anything needs to be changed, just tell me. If there isn't any, then I'm going to go claim my first bounty. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/au746gcf1f61606/credit2b.jpg

new credit.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/au746gcf1f61606/credit2b.jpg

new credit.

All's good. Project released (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Alright, I am done with Oppai Ippai Yumeippai. Now I need you guys to look through it to find any mistakes and such that need to be corrected. I think I did a good job considering it's my first time editing.

[mega.co.nz] Here is the link. If anything needs to be changed, just tell me. If there isn't any, then I'm going to go claim my first bounty. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Seems fine to me. Credit page is ok. As soon as ulti gives us the green light I think we can release it.

Am I doing the QC? I assumed that was going to be BakaStratos. If he can't do it, I'll be able to do it, but I might not be able to make full comments until tomorrow night.

UF

Am I doing the QC? I assumed that was going to be BakaStratos. If he can't do it, I'll be able to do it, but I might not be able to make full comments until tomorrow night.

UF

Fine by me. It doesn't matter too much to me.

Alright, I am done with Oppai Ippai Yumeippai. Now I need you guys to look through it to find any mistakes and such that need to be corrected. I think I did a good job considering it's my first time editing.

[mega.co.nz] Here is the link. If anything needs to be changed, just tell me. If there isn't any, then I'm going to go claim my first bounty. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Here are some proofreading and QC suggestions:

Page 01: You may want to put a title translation on the cover.
Page 04, panel 4: Adjust the typesetting so that the word "everyone" isn't split. There's enough space available for it to fit the bubble.
Page 05, panel 3: The word "elasticity" is misspelled.
Page 07, panel 2: Italicize the bold-faced "is" for emphasis.
Page 07, panel 2: You may want to use "will happen soon" instead of "is pretty soon".
Page 08, panel 1: Remove the unnecessary dash ("-") after the word "T-that..."
Page 12, panel 2: Change it to: This "mysterious fluid" has an incredibly powerful aphrodisiac effect...
Page 19, panel 2: Change "besides" to "as well".
Page 20, panel 1: Change "born as a princess" to "born a princess"
Page 20, panel 1: It should be "whom I will marry", not "who I will marry".
Page 21, panel 1: Instead of "bodily", "carnal" might be a better choice of word.
Page 23, panel 2: Instead of "fall", "succumb" might be a better choice of word.
Page 26, panel 1: You might want to use "That guy may be a bit of a bonehead," instead of "That guy is a bit of a bonehead usually,"
Page 26, panel 1: It should be "I and the rest", not "me and the rest".

Agree with all Meow_Pao's comments, but I would leave the very last one alone. Jessica speaks in a very plain, straightforward manner. I agree that "me and the rest" is not grammatically correct, but I feel it's appropriate in a sort of casual spoken English sort of sense.

It's wonderful to meet you, by the way, Meow_Pao. I'm already grinning at the thought of having more dedicated proofreaders!

UF

Another new translation!


PROJECT COMPLETE!

(C85) [Esebateira (Shibuki)] Konzen Koushou (Persona 3)



Gallery Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/667782/caa942faa9/
Bounty Link: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11815
Current Bounty Amount: 30,000 credits + 30 hath
Script:  Persona.txt ( 10.51k ) Number of downloads: 41


This is my second Persona project, though my other was for Persona 4. While Persona 4 is unquestionably a stronger game over all, I always did have a little fondness for Mitsuru. All the love interests in the game were a little cookie-cutter, but her story elements were far and away the most interesting. I like the art here, particularly the character design, and while the story didn't go quite the way I expected when I started out, it was decent enough.

Editors, this project is 21 pages long and the scan quality and resolution are great (which is NOT always true for my stuff...).

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 21 2015, 16:11

Ok, did the corrections to Oppai Ippai Yumeippai. [mega.co.nz] Here is the link to it.

If there's anything else that needs to be corrected, just tell me.

Ok, did the corrections to Oppai Ippai Yumeippai. [mega.co.nz] Here is the link to it.

If there's anything else that needs to be corrected, just tell me.

Looks OK to me. I thought that page 5, panel 1 contained an untranslated speech bubble, but a check on the raw showed that the author left it blank.

Incidentally, the name I use is meow_pao -- but I do find meow-pow to be rather amusing. You don't really have to correct the credits page on my account.

Looks OK to me. I thought that page 5, panel 1 contained an untranslated speech bubble, but a check on the raw showed that the author left it blank.

Incidentally, the name I use is meow_pao -- but I do find meow-pow to be rather amusing. You don't really have to correct the credits page on my account.

Whoops. I didn't even notice that I misspelled it. I was more concerned with the fact that the font I was using didn't have an underscore. But if you're fine with it...

Another new Script!! Wooooooo!


PROJECT COMPLETE!

(C86) [Orange Typhoon (Yamada Enako)] Change Round (One Piece)



Gallery Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/773879/e54d018123/
Script:  One_Piece.txt ( 9.66k ) Number of downloads: 48


This sort of project is just so refreshing. Most of you probably don't know, but translating can be an incredibly BORING job. Most stuff in the galleries spend 15% of their pages on introduction and set up, 80% on the sex, and another 5% to wrap up. Sex itself has little meaningful text, and much of it is trite and overused. So when something like Change Round comes up, it's a breath of fresh air. A meaningful story is a rare treasure around here. Note that this is a sequel to "Change Over" by the same artist. You will need to read that one to understand this one.

Editors, this project is 30 pages long. The scan quality is regrettable, but most of the pages aren't that heavy on bubbles or sfx.

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 21 2015, 16:11

Since I'm free now and no one else seems to be taking this, I'd like to edit [Aun Kiki] Medea-hime (Ouma-san) vs Jessica ~Chagosu Ouji no Dorei Nikki~ (Dragon Quest VIII). Should I accept the bounty?