Here's the updated script for Futatsume Precure after PureEnergy's proofreading.
Gallery Link:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2687/cb80522ddc/Bounty Link:
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18862==== FILE BEGIN ====
Also, if there's a catch-phrase for where Honoka says Suteki, you can find and replace "lovely." I haven't seen the show, so I don't know if there's a common subtitle for that.
== Title: Futatsume Precure <> The Second Precure
== Page 1
> (Title at bottom of page) Futatsume Precure (^Same as above)
== Page 2
<< Frame 1
> No, noo...
> Stop it, Honoka
<< Frame 2
> Hey♡,
> Will you lick me? << Maybe "give me a lick" if that sounds better >>
<< Frame 3
> (Written) {Gui [Squelch]}
> {Kyuu [Clench]}
<< Frame 4
> Uahh
> Ah
> Ahhi << Pained >>
> Ah
> Ah
> (Written left) {Zubo [Fwump]}
> (Written bottom) {Bikun [Shock/Surprise]}
> (Bubble) {Pushu [Squirt]}
== Page 3
<< Frame 1
> Hey♡, Na-gi-sa << Maybe change "Hey" to "Will you?". >>
> {Hii [Eep]}
> It hurts!
> No!
> Ah!
> (Written, small) {Zubobobo Zubo [Whump, Fhwump]}
> (Written, big) {Goshu goshu goshu [Fwoom]} << Or "shoo" if it sounds OK >>
<< Frame 2
> I get it, I get it, so please stop
> Please, Please!
<< Frame 3
> Hmm? What do you get?
<< Frame 4
> (Sides of 1st bubble) {Hiku Hi [Sob Sob]}
> I'll lick you, Honoka,
> I'll do anything,
> (Right side of 3rd bubble) {Hi [Sob]}
> So please, stop it!
== Page 4
<< Frame 1
> Alright♡,
> Be gentle, okay?
<< Frame 2
> (Written to left of face) {Ha Ha [Hah Hah]} << Heavy breathing. Maybe "Huff" is better? >>
> {Gokun [Gulp]}
> (Written, Bottom Left) {Piku Pikun [Twitch Twitch]}
<< Frame 4
> {N [Ngh]}
> {N [Ngh]}
== Page 5
<< Frame 1
> {Ngu U Guu N N [Nguh Uh Guh Ngh Ngh]}
<< Frame 2
> (Written, right) {Gofu [Cough]}
> {N [Ngh]}
> {Un [Uhn]}
> (Written, middle top) {Jabu bubu [Splash]}
> (Written, middle bottom) {Jaruru [Fwoom]}
> {Gu Uu [Glug, guh]}
> {Uu [Uuh]}
<< Frame 3
> Yes, wrap your tongue around, ok?
> Ahh♡. Aren't you good, Nagisa. << Or flip order to "You're good, aren't you" if it sounds better >>
<< Frame 4
> (Right) {Ubu [Ubuh]}
> (Left) {Gu N [Guh Ngh]}
> (Bottom) {Boko [Bubble]}
> (Written, Bottom rightish) {Zubobo [Fwump]}
<< Frame 5
> {Fuu [Hah]} << Breath in, so maybe "Wheeze" instead >>
> {Nbu [Nbuh]} << Unable to breath again >>
> (Written, near racket) {Kokon kon kon [Clatter]}
== Page 6
<< Frame 1
> Very lovely, Nagisa♡
<< Frame 2
> ...gisa
> Nagisa
<< Frame 3
> Nagisa, where, where, where are you?
> Nagisa
<< Frame 4
> Oh dear, right when we were about to climax. << Alt: "Oh Dear," to "Ahh, too bad,"
> (Writen, right of second bubble) {Puha [Gasp]}
> Ho.. Honoka,
== Page 7
<< Frame 1
> Please, let's hide~ if we were seen like this...
> Oh my,
<< Frame 2
> By "this", do you mean in the restrooms on all fours sucking my dick?
> (Written, top, red) {Kaaa [Bluuuush]}
> Or the sight of Nagisa with a lacrosse stick in her pussy?
<< Frame 3
> N.. No, that's not what I mean, it's just...
> if someone saw your p-pe.. that thing growing out of you, wouldn't that be bad?
<< Frame 4
> Hmm...
<< Frame 5
> Well, if you beg me the right way,
> I'll keep it a secret.
== Page 8
<< Frame 1
> No way I can say something like that!
> Hmm? That doesn't matter to me.
<< Frame 2
> Nagisa?
<< Frame 3
> Hey, she'll find us.
> But... But...
<< Frame 4
> I bet the boys in class would find out all about this.
> Day after day, they'd come calling for you, saying "Fuck us too!" You'll end up getting fucked senseless in front, from behind, even in your mouth...
> Your endlessly gaping holes would be overflowing with more and more cum, even before the previous loads dry out...
> I.. I get it, I'll say it, I'll say it~ so stop. (Bottom of the 2 on the left)
== Page 9
<< Frame 1
> Please, Honoka, put your penis in me and make me all sloppy!
> I'm Honoka's naughty pet!
<< Frame 2
> Nagisa!?
> (Written) {Gacha [Kachunk]}
<< Frame 3
> (Between the frames) Are you here? Are you here? Are you here?
> (Written, between the frames) {Pota Potapota [Drip, Drip drip]}
<< Frame 4
> Nagisa
> (Written near legs) {Buru Buru [Shake]}
== Page 10
<< Frame 1
> {Bubu gu guu n ng fugu [Bubuh guh guhh nguh nghh fuguh]} << I just put all the sounds in one thing >>
> (Written, small on bottom) {Zupo Zubo Zubo [Whump]}
> (Written, big on bottom) {Pon pon pon [Pound]}
<< Frame 2
> (Written) {Go go gobu go [Fwhump, Whump]}
<< Frame 3
> {Guu ubu [Guu ubu]} << Muffled moaning >>
> (Written, bottom left) {Yusa Yusa [Shake]}
== Page 11
<< Frame 1
> Nagisa's pussy feels so good << Maybe "your" instead of "Nagisa's"? >>
> {U Fuu [Uh fuu]}
> (Written, large at bottom) {Poko poko poko [Fwabap?/Fwump]}
> (Written, small beside left leg) {Gaku gaku [Wobble]}
<< Frame 2 (Black panel with white dots)
> (Written) {Zubu Bubu [Fwump]}
> Hot and very lovely♡
<< Frame 3
> (Written, large) {Gi gi gi [Creak creak creak]}
> Honoka... Honoka
> P.. Please, don't talk out loud, Shiho will find us if she hears you. << Maybe remove "out loud" or change to "so loudly"? >>
<< Frame 4
> ....
> Hmmm
<< Frame 5
> { [Prickle]}
== Page 12
<< Frame 1
> There♡
> {Zubu [Wham]}
<< Frame 2
> {Hyaa [Squeal/Scream]} << Maybe "Ahhh!" or something would be fitting cause it's in a bubble >>
<< Frame 3
> (Written) {Ba [Shush]}
<< Frame 5 (At the shoe)
> Nagisa?
<< Frame 6
> Ho.. Honoka, Honoka!
> Ahh♡. If you tighten like that, I won't last!
> (Written) {Jupu Zupu Pu [Jwump, Fwump, Fwump]}
== Page 13
<< Frame 1
> Ah, I'm going to come {Maybe just "Ah, I'm coming"}
> Let's come, Nagisa
> (Written) {Buru Buru [Shudder]}
<< Frame 2 (Second on the right)
> Coming? Hono..
<< Frame 3 (Top left)
> N... No, don't!
> Stop, no!
<< Frame 4 (Bottom right)
> Please don't come!
> No, pull out, pull out!
> (Written) {Gari gari gari [Skrrr]}
<< Frame 5
> What? I can't hear♡
> Please, please!
> (Written, above) {Guchun buchu ju [Shlop, Fwop]}
> (Written, medium below) {Biku [Shudder]}
== Page 14
<< Frame 1
> Ahh, I'm coming♡
> (Written, large, bottom) {Poko Poko Poko [Fwabap?/Fwump]}
> (Written, small, bottom) {yubu bu [Shlop]}
<< Frame 2
> I'm gushing out loads into Nagisa's pussy.
> Nooo, outside... outside!
<< Frame 3
> Ahh♡
> Ah. Ahh... Ah.
== Page 15
<< Frame 1
> Ah
> (Written) {Dopu dopu dopu [Drip]}
<< Frame 2
> Oh,
> Ahh...
> No...
> (Written, under face) {Hiku hiku [Sob sob]}
> (Written, top right) The hot cum,
> (Written, top left) Honoka's cum is flowing in.
<< Frame 3
> Nooo
> (Written, right) {Gopo gopo [Gurgle]}
> (Written, left) {Dopu [Burble]}
<< Frame 4
> (Written, middle) {Chapo [Fwunk]}
> (Written, bottom) {Patata [Dripdripdrip]}
<< Frame 5
> Mean...
> You're so mean, Honoka...
== Page 16
<< Frame 1
> Against my will... Even though it was my first,
> I lost my virginity in the bathroom. << Maybe add "school bathroom" >>
> (In bubble) {Pyu [Squirt]}
> (Written) {Boto boto [Drip drip]}
<< Frame 2
> You still have a long way to go, Nagisa♡
> I'll come over and over again for you, in your ass and in your mouth,
> Even if you black out, I'll keep raping you.
> And that will make us really close friends.
== Page 17
<< Frame 1
> I love you, Nagisa♡
> (Left) Nobody's looking, it's been awhile since we've had time alone, Mepo. << Mepple is shortened to Mepo in the text, maybe there's a common shortening. >>
> (Right) No.. Don't touch there, Mipo << Same here with the names >>
<< Text at the bottom
This time the pages are arranged as 8 pages of "Hitotsume Precure", and 16 pages of "Futatsume Precure". Precure is an unusually fitting anime for me. Maybe the old opening and fascinating contents are the real cause behind this...
I already have two chapters, so I want to make a book.
Credits:
(Blurred Area)
(English Text: 2004.08.13 presented by Yasue Tajima)
Printing: Sigmark << I'm not sure, I couldn't find any info about them >>
==== FILE END ====
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