[X] My Assistant

Script for early review of [Mental Specialist (Watanabe Yoshimasa)] 1 (Nadesico)>ENG page 260-273

Page 259 Title Cover

Yurika VS Megumi: Confrontation inside the ship

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Meg: Yurika, you're childhood friend with Akito but, how far is your relationship with him?
Yurika: Hm? Oh, yes!

Yurika: He's totally head over heel for me, he loves me more than anything
[SFX:　Po(ポ)]

Meg: Ah ... So... So how far did you two go? Like base A or Base C..?
Ah ... So... So how far did you two go? Like first base or third base?

Yurika: No! We're totally not like that! Our love is pure! We don't do lewd things!
[SFX:　Po(ぴー)]

Meg: Oohh, so that's it.. Our captain is a goody-goody!

Meg: What a relief!

Meg: I'll have you know, a--ll men for a fact, don't know how to act in bed
Yurika: Whaat?

Yuriko: But I don't know either how to act in bed
But I don’t know how to act in bed either.
[SFX: Uni~(うにー)]
Meg: Well that could be expected from you Captain. You're like such a pure and perfect "My lady"...
Well that would be expected from you Captain. You're like such a pure and perfect "My lady"...

Yuriko: Do you know a lot about sex, Meg?
Meg: What? Well..No.. I can't say that I know much.. I'm a virgin after all...

[SFX: Guun(ぐん) ; Biku(びく) cracking sound]
Yuriko: Meg! Please teach me everything you know!


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Meg: Ah.. What did I just got myself into..?
Ah.. What did I just get myself into..?
[SFX: Doki doki doki(ドキ　ドキ ドキ) heart throbbing]
Meg: I can't believe my heart's throbbing like this for the Captain...
I.. could I be lesbian..? ..Ah.. I might go for it too...

Meg: Aah..! Captain!
[SFX: Doka!(どかっ)]
Yurika: Ahh..!

[SFX: Purun(ぷるん ばっ) boobs giggling; Tapun(たぷん) boobs giggling]
Yurika: Aaah!

Meg: It's alright, Captain! I'll teach you what I know..
Meg: Whatever...
[SFX: Purun(ぷるん ばっ) boobs giggling]

[SFX: Gu!(ぐっ)]

Meg: Ah!!

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Meg: Ah!!
[SFX: Guchan(ぐちゃん)]
Yurika: AAaahh!!

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[SFX: Guchu Guchu(ぐちゅ ぐちゅ)]
Meg: Aah..! Y..Yes..It feels good..
Meg: Ca..Captain...

Yurika: Aaah! Meg... Somehow I feel something too...
[SFX: Tapun(たぷん) boobs giggling)
Yurika: It feels good..

Akito: Hey Yurika, where were you? You made me promise to see you and all
Akito: Hey Yurika, where were you? You made me promise I'd come and see you and all
[SFX: Ban(ばん)]

Akito: Urgh!?
[SFX: Kaku kaku(かく かく)
Both: Ah!

Akito: I..I see.. Yurika you were not..
I thought it was weird that you wouldn't let me have sex with you after being together for so long...
Thought: We only kissed when we were little... Even her forgot about it..
Thought: We only kissed when we were little... Although she forgot about it..
How did it come to this... Maybe I should have went gay too?
But Akatsuki is out of the question...
Akito: To think that you were from this side...
Akito: To think that you were leaning that way...

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Yurika: No, Akito! You're wrong!
[SFX: Sha Rarin(しゃ らりん)]

Yurika: I.. I didn't know anything about sex.. So I asked for Meg to teach me..
I.. I didn't know anything about sex.. So I asked Meg to teach me..
I was worried that if we had sex and I wasn't prepared..

Akito: Oh, Yurika.. You're such an idiot for worrying for such a thing
Oh, Yurika.. You're such an idiot for worrying about such a thing
I'm the same, you know? There's no way that it'll go perfectly on the first time, right? You don't need to worry about that
I'm the same, you know? There's no way that it'll go perfectly the first time, right? You don't need to worry about that
[SFX: kira kira(きら きら) sparkling]
Akito: Love is something built and growing together over time, right?
Love is something people build and grow together over time, right?
Yurika: Oh, Akito..

Yurika: Ahh... Incredible.. This is Akito's penis.. (penis is censured)

Yurika: Mmhh.. [SFX: Chu(ちゅっ) kissing sound)

Meg: Wai..Wait a minute, what are you two doing? You were just babbling some minutes ago that you didn't know anything and already a fellation?
Wai..Wait a minute, what are you two doing? You were just babbling some minutes ago that you didn't know anything about sex and you're already performing a fellatio?
[SFX: Chu chu(ちゅ ちゅっ) kissing sound)

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Yurika: Ah.. Hmm..
[SFX: Shu Shu Shu (しゅ しゅ しゅ)]
Yurika: Ahh.. Incredible.. I can feel your penis twitching.. Does it feel good?

Yurika: Do my tits feel good?
[SFX: Chupi Chupi(ちゅぴ ちゅぴ) variant of kissing sound]

Yurika: Aaahh..!
[SFX: Dopyun Dopyun Dopyun(どぴゅん どぴゅん どぴゅん) sound of jerking]

Yurika: Ah.. Akito..
Come.. For Akito.. Yurika will do anything you ask her for!
[SFX: Purun(ぷるん) ass giggling]

Akito: Yea..Yeah!! Yurika!

Yurika: Ahh..!
[SFX: Zuun(ズン)]

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[SFX: Chupu Kuchu(ちゅぷ くちゅ) pussy noise)

[SFX: Tapu Tapu(たぷ たぷ) pussy noise)
Yurika: Ah..! Hi..!

Akito: Ahh..! Yurika! That's incredibly good
[SFX: Pan pan(ぱん ぱん) thrusting on the ass sound)
Yurika: Ahh... Akito!
[SFX: Tapu Tapu(たぷ たぷ) pussy noise)

Yurika: Ahh.. Haa..!
[SFX: Tapun(たぷん) pussy noise]
[SFX: Momi momi(もみもみ) groping onomatopoeia]
Yurika: Akito.. I'm feeling it.. Ah.. Ahhh..!

Akito: Ku..! Yurika! I'm gonna cum!
Yurika: Ahh!
Yes, Akito come..!
Cum inside me! [SFX: Pan Pan(ぱん ぱん) thrusting on the ass sound)
[SFX: Tapun(たぷん)]
Yurika: Yurika is coming~~!

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Yurika: Ahh.. AAAAH!!
[SFX: Biku(びくっ) cracking sound]
[SFX: Dokun Doku Doku(どくん どく どく) jerking noise)

Akito: Mmhh..ah.. Haa..
[SFX: Puru(ぷるっ) giggling tits sound)
[SFX: Biku Biku(びく びく)]

Yurika: Haa.. Ahh..
Akito, you were really good
Yurika: Haa... Haa..

Akito: Yurika, you too

Meg: Hey! Stop being in your little world, you two!
[SFX: Tackle(タックル) literally the word tackle)
Meg: This time it's my turn!

Meg: I'll show you Akito for how long I've ever, ever loved you
Meg: I'll show you Akito how I have longed for you for a very, very long time
Akito: Wha..?

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Meg: A..Akito.. It'll also be my first time, please be gentle!
[SFX: Gu(ぐっ)]

[SFX: Zuun(ズン)]
Meg: Ahh..!

Meg: Aahh.. Amazing..
[SFX: Yusa Yusa(ゆっさ ゆっさ)
Meg: Akito's thing inside me...
[SFX: Tapun Tapun(たぷん たぷん)]

Akito: Hmm.. Megumi that feels good!
[SFX: Tapun Tapun(たぷん たぷん)]

Meg: Ahh.. Amazing.. It's my first time, but it's so good
Meg: Ahh!

Meg: Ahh.. Yes..! Ah..!
I'm coming!
Akito! [SFX: Pachun Kuchun(ぱちゅん くちゅん) moist pussy noise)
[SFX: Tapun(たぷん)]
Meg: Ahhh..!!

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Meg: AAAhhhh!
Meg: Aaaaaaaahh..!!
[SFX: Dokun Doku Doku(どくん どく どくっ) jerking sound)

[SFX: Cha(ちゃっ) flashing sound]
Minato: Hey! What's this ruckus about!

Meg: Akito is mine!
Yurika: What are you saying Meg. I've been dating Akito for 14years!
Yurika: What are you saying Meg. I've been dating Akito for 14 years! // space needed after 14
[SFX: Oro Oro(オロ オロ)]

Minato: Hey! Quarelling over a man, you two are really shameful
[SFX: Sa(さっ)]
Minato: Wouldn't it be awesome if everyone could get along and love each other!

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Minato: Hmm..
[SFX: Zunu(ずぬっ)]

Minato: Haha.. I'll teach a way so that you can all love each other
Minato: Haha.. I'll teach you a way so that you can all love each other
Megumi, show your ass to me!

[SFX: Gu(ぐっ)]
Meg: Wha..? I..In there!
[SFX: Biku(びくっ)]

[SFX: Zuuuun(ズ ン)
Meg: Ah..!!

Minato: Ha...
Hmm..!

Minato: Akito, do the cowgirl with the Captain
[SFX: Tapun Tapun(たぷん たぷん) boobs giggling]

Akito: Wha..? Okay!

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Yurika: Hmm...
[SFX: Zupun(ズプン)]

Yurika: What should we do now?

Minato: Haha.. Enjoy the four of us together

Minato: Here
[SFX: Zupuu(ずぷっ)]
Minato: What a splendid cock you grew Megumi (penis is censured)
And you'll rape the Captain ass with it
Meg: Wha..?!
[SFX: GU(ぐっ)]

The three girls: AAAhhh..!!!
[SFX: Biku(びくっ)]
[SFX: Zuun(ズン)]

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[SFX: Pan pan pan(ぱん ぱん ぱん) Thrusting on the ass sound)
The three girls: AAHHhhh!!

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Minato: So? How does it feel to have the four of us connected together?
[SFX: Kuchun Pachun(くちゅん ぱちゅん) moist pussy noise)

[SFX: Pan pan(ぱん ぱん) thrusting on the ass sound)]
Meg: AAhh..! It feels good.. AAhh..!

Yurika: AAhhh! Akito~!
[SFX: Yusa yusa(ゆさゆさ)]

[SFX: Tapu Tapu(たぷ たぷ) boobs giggling]
Akito: W..well... That's not really surprising, but, having the three of them on top of me is quite heavy...
146kg..

Minato: Oh..yes! Ahh!

Meg: I'm..I'm coming

Yurika: Ahh! Akito~!

RuriRuri: ..................
[On the door: Yurika's Room]
Voice: Aahaah.. I'm coming~~

RuriRuri: What a bunch of idiots...
[SFX: Boso(ボソ)]

[Page note: The end]

This post has been edited by kuruwasan: Aug 6 2018, 14:58

Doing Nadenade DL ch1

TL script for (C90) [Jagabata (Oimo)] Himitsu no Tokkun (Macross Delta)
https://e-hentai.org/g/974531/7ec7b5766a/

Page 2

かんぱーい！！
Cheers!

ねぇ、ところで見た！？
Hey, did you see it!?

見た見た！あの２人また仲良さそうに歩いてたわね
I did! Those two walked together again like they were so intimate, right?

やっぱり通い妻説は...あら、お疲れ様～
She probably lives separated from him...ah, thank you for the hard work~

おつかれ～
Thanks for the hard work~

Page 3

ねぇ、あの二人の姿が見えないけど、やっぱり...
Hey, I can't find those two, so they really...

ミラミラとハヤハヤ？　２人とも夜も飛行訓錬漬けみたいだよー
Mira-Mira and Haya-Haya? Those two seem to immerse themselves in special night flight training...

夜の特訓...
Special night training...

ふーん、夜の特訓ね
Hmmm, special night training, huh.

夜の特訓！！？？
Special night training!!??

とういうことは今頃あの二人は...!
So now that means they are...!

Page 4

ん...
Mm...

んっ
Mm

んっ
Mm

はぁ...
Haa...

はぁ...
Haa...

おいミラージュ、もういいって...
Oi, Mirage, you can stop now...

んっ
Mm

んふっ
Mmph

夜の特訓はまだこれからですよ
The special night training hasn't even begun yet.

やべっ...
This is bad...

Page 5

んっ！！
Mmm!!

んぅぅ
Mmm ooh

はぁ
Haa

んっ
Mmm

全く...
Really...

はぁ...
Haa...

はぁ...
Haa...

飲まされるこっちの身にもなってください！
You should care about the person who has to swallow all of it!

Page 6

い、勢いよく出ちゃったもんは仕方ないだろ！
I-I can't help it! It came out so strong!

つーかこれ、飛行訓錬と関係あるのかよ？
Anyway, does this have anything to do with special flight training?

私もそう思います！
I'm wondering about that too!

しかしアラド隊長によるとこれもコンビネーションを高める訓練の一貫なんだとか
But according to Captain Arad, this is part of a special training to improve our combination, or something.

胡散臭ぇ...
That sounds fishy...

わ、私だってそう思います！！
E-even I do agree!!

とっとと終わらせますからこんな訓練!
Let's just finish this special training quickly!

Page 7

お前が上になるのか
So you're on top?

ええ、そうよ...私はあなたの上官ですから
Yes, that's right...since I am your superior, after all.

ん...っ
Mm...mm

ふぅ...
fuuh...

しっかり事前に勉強したんだから
I already studied about this before doing the real thing...

私だって...!
Even I could do this...!

はぁ...
Haa...

はぁ...
Haa...

...っ！
...mmph!

Page 8

はぁっ
Haah

はぁ...っ
Haa...hh

くっ
Kuh

さっきから主導権握られて
She's in control from the beginning...

このままやられっぱなしのもつまんねーな...
If things stay like this, it'll feel boring...

お前の動きは教科書どおりだ
You move exactly according to textbook.

Page 9

ハヤテ准尉、上官に楯突く気ですか...っ！
Officer Hayate, are you trying to defy your superior's orders...mmph!

あ
Ah

ああああっ
Aaaaaaahhhh

Page 10

はぁ...
Haa...

へへっどうだミラージュ教官
Hehe, how is it, Instructor Mirage?

はぁ...
Haa...

今度はこっちの番だぜ！
Now it's my turn!

はぁ...っ
Haa...hh

はぁ...
Haa...

...くっ
...kuh

ああああっ
Aaaaahhhh

馬鹿っ
Fool!

はぁ
Haa

激しすぎっ
You're going too hard!

Page 11

あ
Ah

あ
Ah

あ
Ah

ミラージュ教官殿腰の動きが止まってるぜ？
Honorable Instructor Mirage, your hips has stopped moving, you know?

こんな時だけ教官呼びして
For you to call me "Instructor" at times like this...

Page 12

メッサーの言ってた通りだな
It's just like what Messer said.

はぁ
Haa

はぁ
Haa

教科書通りの動きじゃつまらないだろ？
It's boring to move just according to textbook, right?

ん
Mm

んっ
Mmm

はーーっ
Haah

はーーー
Haaa

ひっ
Hii

耳は駄目...っ！
No...not my ears!

あ
Ah

あ
Ah

Page 13

はぁっ
Haah

はーっ
Haah

はぁっ
Haaah

ハヤテぇ...っ
Hayate...

はぁ...
Haa...

あ
Ah

あ
Ah

あ
Ah

あ
Ah

もっと近くに...
Come closer...

Page 14

んっ
Mmm

あっ
Ah

はぁ
Haa

ハヤテ...
Hayate...

あ
Ah

はぁーーっ
Haah

あ
Ah

あっ
Ahh

もう、駄目....
Oh, no...

Page 15

あっっ
Ahhh

あぁ～～～
Aaaaaahhh

ビュルル
splurt

Page 17

へへっこういう特訓なら悪くねーかもな
Hehe, this kind of special training isn't bad, I think.

はぁ...
Haaa....

はぁ...
Haaa....

また宜しく頼むぜミラージュ教官
I look forward doing this with you again, Instructor Mirage.

.....ばか...
....Fool...

なんて事になってたりしてー！
Maybe that's happening right now!

その頃のハヤテとミラージュ
Meanwhile, at Hayato and Mirage's place.

ハックション！
Achoo!

また猫ですか？
Is it cats again?

This is a recurring PA. EHCOVE is now tracking status of various projects through a Google Spreadhseet. PM me for view/access if you want (link also visible to any EHCOVE member in our subforum).

Accepting : https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18301

Accepting : https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18301

Mata Hari sakaba de amaetai! / I want to be spoiled at Mata Hari’s bar!

Translator notes: There are no panels with physical lines, but you can kinda see it’s separated, so I separated with numbers as if there were lines.

Page2
1
[This is Mata Hari’s bar]
Hello and welcome to the Mata Hari’s bar 💙
[A place that’s always crowded with adventurers 💙]
Will you have drinks ? Beer ? Or …
2
Will you stay?
[ And a place where there are many encounters and “bonding”]
Page3
1
First, is the bath. I’ll go ahead and wash your body okay? 💙
[ If you stay here a lot, or give us large tips / I will personally offer you “ service”]
Now I’ll wash your back “directly”
Nh 💙 Nh 💙 Nh 💙
2
Oh my… Mister, what’s wrong? I’m just washing your body 💙
You’re breathing so roughly… And moans are escaping your mouth 💙
[This is really popular, and so many customers come here just for this 💙]
Page4
1
Okay, let’s get it out 💙
Please blow a huge load, with my hands stroking your dick so loud and tight 💙 (tn: Real translation is something approximately : “let’s go ahead and blow your load like * cumming sfx* with your penis being washed like *washing/stroking sfx* and feeling so good while I stroke your dick like * stroking sfx* “ yeah… it dfoesn’t translate into English so good because in Enhlish you don’t really use onomatopoeia in the middle of sentences, so I would really recommend just changing here to something along the lines of what I wrote.)
2
Ah
Ufufu did it feel good?
Let’s go back to your room and have dinner
Page5
1
Ah 💙 Ah 💙 Ah 💙
2
Anh Anh Anh 💙 Mister 💙 does dinner💙 Feel good 💙
Anh Ah 💙 The dinner is 💙 A secret to the store okay 💙 / Although 💙 Ah 💙 The owner is 💙 Me Anh Ah 💙
Ah 💙 Ah 💙
Please eat 💙 to your heart’s content 💙 Ah Ah 💙
Page6
1
Anh Ah 💙 Yes 💙 So rough 💙
Ah Ah 💙 Raw is so good 💙
Raw sex 💙 Feels soooo good 💙
2
Nnh 💙
Nchh 💙
Nmh 💙
Nh 💙
Nmh Leroh 💙 You can go ahead and cum like this 💙 / I might get pregnant since we’re having raw sex though 💙
Go ahead and shoot all your semen into me 💙 Don’t 💙 Worry about anything 💙
Page 7
1
Funhhhh 💙
2
Misteeer 💙 If you stick your tongue inside so roughly and cum, my fertility(tn: pregnancy rate might work) will riiise 💙
I did tell you to cum without worrying, but I didn’t tell you to make me 100% pregnant 💙 💙
3
*cumminng noises*
Haah Haah 💙 Thank you for using me
Please come again whenever you like 💙

Accepted and editing this bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18427

Completed, sent and published
(C90) [Jagabata (Oimo)] Himitsu no Tokkun | Secret Training (Macross Delta) [English] [EHCOVE]

This post has been edited by gansta: Aug 16 2018, 03:38

I'll take the bounty for the bakemonogatari doujin "haitenai": https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18180

Edit1: Add missing word

Hello, I'd like to claim the EHCOVE [Konpal Style (Saeki Hijiri)] Three and Two (AIR) > Eng 10p bounty.

Please review the following script and let me know if there are any issues with it. I'll do my best to correct any errors.

Thank you.


pg 01

n/t

pg 02

n/t

pg 03

n/t

pg 04

HERE! It's Time

こんちゃっす、さえきひじりです。
ようやっとCGで表紙を創ってみました。
CGは楽だし早いしきれいだし…と
友人に言われ何度もチャレンジ
したものの自分の塗り方が出来ずに
四苦八苦しとります。
CGはいろんな事ができるけど
自由度が高すぎて機能が全然
使いきれなくて…めちゃくちゃ
時間がかかってしまいました。
おかげでまんがが…まんがが〜(ToT)
またどたばたした創りですが…
よろしければどうぞ…です。　（ガクッ…)

Hello! I'm Saeki Hijiri.
I finally tried my hand at using a CG program to make the illustration on the cover.
My friends kept telling me that CG programs are easy and fast to use, and that you can make really nice looking drawings with them, but I found that it was actually really hard to use them.
You can do a lot of things with CG programs, but I'm much better at freehand drawing so it took me way to much time to draw the cover.
Thanks to that the comic is... well... (ToT)
It's mostly just a gag comic, but I still hope you like it. (*nervous*)

pg 05

この絵は去年
初めて描いた観鈴ちん。
一年前とはいえ物凄く
時代を感じます…（＾＾；
ていうかイラストの
ストックが無い〜！

This is the first picture of Misuzu that I drew last year.
It really does look like it was drawn from way back then. (^ ^;
That also means I don't have any left in stock to sell!

pg 06

がちゃ
*door opening*

ただいま〜
I'm home!

あ〜、往人くんがお茶飲んでる
Ah- Yukito, you're drinking some tea?

あ〜、　ひろ〜　こんぱるりゅうだ
Oh, Hiro. You're drinking it Konparu style. [TL note1]

どん
*thump*

君は妹のハイセンスな冗談を見殺しにするつもりか？
You aren't going to laugh at my little sister's highly refined sense of humor?

きゅぴん
*angry stare*

ずす
*sip*

ずい
*pointing finger*

.......ケラケラケラ
.......Hahahaha

TL note1: "Konparu style" is a style of Noh plays that are known for using taiko drums as an accompaniment. I have no idea what the joke here is supposed to be though, and neither does Yukito it seems.

pg 07

うわわっ…
Whoa!

*ばっしゅ〜ん*
*splash*

お〜い
Hey

何一人で水遊びなんかし始めてんだ。
So you decided to start playing around in the water now?

ふえ〜〜〜ん　遊んでなんかないよぉ　往人くんのいじわるぅ
Fweeeh! I'm not playing around! Stop teasing me.

ほら、早く上がれ　いつまでも入っていると風邪引くぞ
Come on. Hurry and get out. If you stay in there you'll catch a cold.

うん…
OK

pg 08

まったく…
Geez

*ちら*
*boobs jiggling*

うぬぬ…
Ahhhh...

ふええ〜、水浸しになっちゃったよ　せっかく夏風邪がなおったとこなのに
Fweeeh... I'm soaking wet! And I just got over a summer cold too.

*ぼたぼた*
*drip drip*

*どき*
*heartbeat*

う〜寒いよぉ　体がひえひえになちゃったよぉ
Ah, it's so cold. My body's already shivering.

つん
*nipple poking at cloth*

pg 09

佳乃…
Kano...

わゎっ!?
Wha-!

ぎゅっ
*grab*

ほら…　こうすれば寒くなくなるだろ
Here. If I do this, it'll warm you up.

だっ…ダメだよ　往人くん…　こんなことしちゃぁ
W- Wait! Yukito... don't touch me there.

*かあっ*
*blushing*

お前は本当に着やせするタイプなんだの
You look really slender in those wet clothes.

聖がいつもお前の体自慢している理由がわかったよ
I know that you're proud of your body.

ふぁ…
Fwa...

ぞく
*shake*

とくん　とくん
*heartbeats*

えっとね…
Uhh...

体の表面じゃなくて中の方をあっためてほしいな
Do you want me to warm you up from the inside out?

pg 10

んっ
Uhh...

ふーっ
*exhale*

はあぁ
Haa

くりゅ
*twisting*

ねぇ…　往人くん
Hey, Yukito.

お姉ちゃんと三人でずっと仲良く暮らしていようよ
I want the three of us to live together for a long time and really get to know each other.

往人くんはお給料が入ったらこの町から出て行っちゃうの？
You're not going to move away as soon as you find a job are you?

安心しろ　しがらくはお前のボディガードとして住むつもりだ
Don't worry. I'm planning on staying here and being your bodyguard.

くにゅくにゅ
*rub rub*

ピク
*shake*

んは…!!　くん…っ
Mm- Haa!! Guh...

pg 11

ちゅく
*schlork*

くにゅ
*rub*

佳乃…　いくぞ…
Kano, I'm gonna put it in.

ズ
*thrust*

はぁ…ん!!
Haaah!

ふああぁっ
Fwaa!

んっ
Mmm!

あくっ…
Guh...

ヌヂュ
*schlorp*

あっ…
Ah...

入ってる
It's in.

往人くんのが私の中でビクビク動いているよぉ
I can feel you throbbing inside of me.

ぐちゅ
*schlorp*

つぷ
*thrust*

pg 12

んっ…はっ　ふあぁ…、　あっ…　はぁ…、　はあぁ…
Mmm, ha- fwa- ah- haaa-

ジュッ
*schklorp*

ズリュッ
*thrust*

ギュム
*grab*

ん…くっ　かっ…　佳乃…　もう…
Mmm... Geh... K- Kano... I'm gonna...

ずりゅ
*thrust*

ぐちゅ
*schlorp*

はふあぁ…　往人くん…　往人くん!!
Ha-fwaah! Yukito! Yukito!!

pg 13

んあっ、　くうぅ、　はああぁ!!
Mmm...ah! Guh. Haaah!

ジュっッ
*schklorp*

ビュッ
*hard thrust*

ビュク
*shooting cum hard*

んふっ
Mmm, ah.

ヤベッ
Damn

ワッ、ワリィ、中に出しちまった
I accidentally came inside you.

ちゅぷ
*schlorp*

んっ…　大丈夫だよぉ
Mmm... don't worry.

お姉ちゃんはねぇ、記憶喪失から出産、避妊処置まで　へのカッパなんだよ
My sister has had me on birth control ever since I started having my memory lapses.

……　そっ、それは冗談のつもりでもかなり笑えない冗談だな…
That was supposed to be a joke, but I guess it's not a joke that's easy to laugh at...

pg 14

またここか…
Back here again?

おっさんぽ　おっさんぽ
Let's go for a stroll!

変わらないのがいいんだよぉ
It's nice that everything's still the same here.

とおつき〜
October~

しゅた
*sudden stop*

とおか!!（十月十日）
Tenth!

しるっ
*turning head*

ずるっ
*blank stare*

何か俺はお前に一生　この町からでられない　魔法にかけられた　ような気がするよ…
Why do I get the feeling that you put a spell on me keeping me from ever leaving this village and getting away from you...

きゃーっ
*scream*

T/L note: I have no idea what Kano's trying to say here or what kind of joke she's trying to make. Given how non-plussed Yukito is, I don't think what she says here is really supposed to make all that much sense.

pg 15

うぐぅ、まったくもって
ダメダメな内容です…。
佳乃りんの愛くるしいさが
全くもって生きてな〜い。
佳乃りんの話し方の電磁
波が僕の脳に　ぴぴぴ…
ガリガリ…（ノイズ含む）
と来たので、今回はいつ
にも増やしてダジャレノリ
で作れたのは…、おもし
かったのですが…。
しっかし最近は自分がま
んが描きに向いていない
わかりきった事実をまざ
まざとみせつけられてへ
コんでいます。こんな状
態が続いているから僕の
同人活動も方向転換をし
なくちゃいけない時期で
すね。はぁ〜、どうしよ
っかなぁ〜。

Bleh, this story is total garbage.
Kano's cuteness just doesn't come out in the story at all.
Even though her characteristic style of speech was echoing in my brain like a radio wave (with tons of other noise and static too) I found it interesting that I was able to come up with some more puns this time around.
But nowadays I'm not really drawing manga much anymore.
I suppose it's pretty obvious that I'm really overwhelmed with stuff right now.
If this continues for much longer, I'll have no choice but to stop makin doujins and find something else to do with my time.
Man... what should I do...


pg 16

Postscript

あうぅ…、もう時間がない
の…。毎回毎回こんな感じ
で申し訳ないです。
今回も蒼井みなとくんとた
かはしたけしくんにはお世
話になりっぱなしです。今
回はちょっと新しい作業方
法をとったからみんなのサ
ポートを受けまくりでした。
しかもおいらのパソコンさ
んは忙しいときに不機嫌に
なるし…。え〜ん、お願い
だから動いてくれよ〜と何
度もモニター前で拝んでい
る情けない姿がいろんな人
に目撃されて恥ずかしかっ
たです。
うわわわゎ、もうこれ以上
粘れないです。ん〜と、今
回は作業中コーヒーは床に
ぶちまきませんでした。そ
んかわりカーペットに派手
黒インクをぶちまけたので
打撃としては今回の方がで
かかったです。次回はなん
の液体をこぼすのかな？と
今からビクビクしているさ
えきひじりでした。

Ahhh, I don't have time to write this...
I'm sorry, it's been like this every time hasn't it?
I still owe a ton of thanks to Aoi Minato and Takahashi Takeshi for all their help as usual.
You guys keep giving me so much support, especially this time around where I tried using a new way of drawing everything.
But I think my PC tech support people got a little annoyed with me constantly calling them all the time...
Soooooo, because I was always asking them for help so much, I was embarrassed when I thought of how pathetic I would've looked had anyone seen me when I was bowing my head in thanks to them while I was just sitting in front of my computer monitor talking on the phone with them...
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Hold up! I'm gonna stop here.
By the way, I managed to not spill my coffee on the floor while I was making it this time! Instead, I managed to spill some jet black ink on the carpet, so it was much worse this time around.
Man, what am I gonna spill next time? I'm afraid of what it might be...
Anyway, thanks for reading!


pg 17

奥付
Publisher's notes

誌名
Magazine Name

Three and Two
Three and Two

2001年12月30日発行
Published December 30th, 2001

発行所
Publishing Office

金春流
Konparuryuu (Konpal Style)

発行者
Publisher

さえきひじり
Saeki Hijiri

印刷所
Printing Office

しまや出版
Shimaya Publishing

18歳未満の方の購入を禁じます。
Sale of this book to those under 18 is prohibited.

pg 18

n/t

This post has been edited by jeddite-eht: Aug 14 2018, 14:09

Accepting and edting this bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18481

Completed, sent and published
(C61) [Konpal Style (Saeki Hijiri)] Three and Two (AIR) [English] [EHCOVE]

This post has been edited by gansta: Sep 10 2018, 17:29

Here's the script for this bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18180

Blank line indicates change of speaker
Each line represents a different speech bubble

Page 1 (Title Page)
Title: Not inside/ Not inserted

Page 2
Araragi Senpai, what are you doing all of a sudden!?
My body's not really prepared, so to speak...

Well, well,
What are you saying? Kanbaru-senpai, isn't your heart prepared?
Don't worry. I just want to figure out whether you're wearing panties
or not under those spats.
My actions are totally grounded in intellectual curiosity.

Well, if you say that, then I'll cooperate, Araragi-senpai.
Then, is it ok if I take them off?

You've ruined it!

Page 3
Even so, Araragi-senapai,
I'm just saying, you're always rejecting my advances, so what's gotten into you all of a sudden?
.........
Ah, I got it.
Being neglected by Senjougahara-senpai has really taken its toll, hasn't it?

N-no! It's nothing like that. Actually I-

You don't have to pretend, Araragi-senpai. Senjougahara-senpai told me, "Use your body to satisfy Araragi-kun for a little while. I'm counting on you."

Huh?

Well, if you say that, then I get it, Araragi-senpai. That sexuality, er rather, intellectual curiosity,
satisfy it to your heart's content with this body.
Haa
Haa
Literally, I'm devoting myself to you. (Translator note: The word for "devote" is made up of the words for "stick/adhere" and "body", which refers to how the spats are adhering to her body)

Page 4
How is it, Araragi-senpai?
Can you ascertain whether or not I'm wearing panties underneath my spats?
Hah

Not at all, Kanbaru.
Unfortunately, it seems like the sensations on my fingertips are really dull.

Hah
I see... Then there's no other way than to check other spots.
I can't help but get excited.

SFX: trembling
SFX: squish
SFX: rub

T-that's good, Araragi-senpai!
Hah
More!
Examine it more roughly!
Hah
Hah
Hah

SFX: trembling

Page 5
I'm embarassed, Kanbaru.

Haaaaa

I couldn't even figure it out with my tongue.

Haaaaa

I see...
But it's too early to give up, Araragi-senpai.
You still haven't used your most sensitive tool. Use that to check please!
Haaaaa

SFX: Press
SFX: Squish

Nnn

So my cute kouhai can only say that much huh, can't be helped.

fu

But, don't be mistaken, Kanbaru-kouhai. This is purely resulting from my investigative spirit.
fufu.

Hah
Hah
Haa
That's unexpectedly serious of you, Araragi-senpai.

SFX: doki doki (Sound of tachycardia)

SFX: grind
SFX: grind

Auu

When seeing me brandish such a brutal thing as this, even Senjougahara-senpai gets scared.

Wait!
Don't do that!

Page 6:
I see... Well, looks like I'll just have to check by tearing it off.

Hah
Ah

SFX: ripping cloth
SFX: squish

With this, Araragi-senpai's found out that I'm an exhibitionist who doesn't wear panties under my spats!
Hii

SFX: Insertion/slide in

Penetrating me so suddenly from behind, Araragi-senpai you're such an animal!
Aaa

I could have guessed that you weren't wearing anything up here either! You perverted girl!!

AAA

Being raped and abused by Araragi-senpai is a dream come true!

SFX: Sliding motion (x4)

Abuse me more!

SFX: squeeze

Page 7:
Aaa I can't take it! I'm getting close, Kanbaru!!

Yah
Haah
Hah
Hah, you're so rough, Araragi-senpai! I can feel you reaching my womb!

SFX: wobble (x4)
SFX: penetrate (x3)

Heh
Hah
If you keep going, I'm gonna go crazy!

I'm gonna come, Kanbaru!

Hah
You quickshot!

Shut the fuck up!!

SFX: smack (x2)
SFX: spurt/pump (x2)

Hin!

Page 8:
Haaaa
I'm... something is...

SFX: gurgle

Nnn

As expected of Araragi-senpai. Even though you only came once, it's still coming out.

.....

SFX: (near her pussy) ooze

Ahn
Fuu
Aaaa, even though it was my first time, I totally got fucked...
Fuu

SFX: falling/drip (x2)

Haa

Don't say stuff like that, Kanbaru-san.
U-uhm, Kanbaru-san? This might be a little late, but to Senjougahara this might be...

Don't finish that sentence, Araragi-senpai.
It's not like I'll tell anybody that you "trained me like an animal", right? (sarcasm)

SFX: Evil smile

Na-!
What kind of savage eroge character are you making me out to be!?

Aa, how bothersome, it seems like someone as loose mouthed as me with definitely tell someone or other.
I wonder if someone will shut my mouth with their dick...
fufufufufu. Right? Araragi-senpai...

Page 9:
Afterword

Hey, it's BANG-YOU.

This time, I tried drawing Suruga Kanbaru of Bakemonogatari.
Originally, she's a very visually striking character, and when she emerged in anime culture I grew even more interested in her.
But for some reason I never really drew her before, though I finally got around to it.

If we're talking about Bakemonogatari, I'm also interested in Karen, and I couldn't decide until the end.
This time, Kanbaru ended up being the winner.

Nevertheless, it's unfortunate that some of Kanbaru's remarkable and interesting dialogue got cut out (Translator note: I think he's referring to the light novels here)
Well, when recording Araragi and Kanbaru's dialogue in each episode,
of course it can't be helped that the dialogue continues to pile up...

Other than that it seems that there are tons of reasons for not recording some parts! (Translator note: he's refering to the lewd dialogue in the light novels, and how it wouldn't be acceptable to put in the anime)



 Haitenai.txt ( 5.29k ) Number of downloads: 7


This post has been edited by ZedsShadow: Aug 26 2018, 07:53

Hello, I'm posting the script to claim the EHCOVE [Yowatari Kouba (Jet Yowatari)] Kairakuten (Suisei no Gargantia)>ENG 13p bounty.

Please let me know if there are any issues with the script and I'll fix them as soon as I can.

Thank you.

Edit1: Fixed some minor typos and reworded some things.
Edit2: Added title translation

Title
海楽天
Ocean Paradise

pg01

n/t

pg02

Presented by よわたり工場
Presented by Yowatari Kouba

pg03

凪の日
Lazy Days

ザザァ…
*waves breaking*

TL note1: Ledo, the male protagonist in this story, does not speak the same language as the two women. He makes many grammatical mistakes and has a strong accent. Any ungrammatical sentences said by him were also present in the original Japanese.

TL note to the typesetter: When this is typeset, the typesetter should endeavor to use a different font to accentuate his speech the same way as was done with katakana in the Japanese. Either italicizing his speech, or typesetting it with a different font. Preferably one that looks "shakey" or otherwise conveys his speech as having a strong accent.

He also speaks to himself, and to the AI in his mecha (his AI is named "Chamber") in his own native language. I've typeset those lines with [brackets] around them. Those bubbles should be typeset with a different font from the above because he's speaking his own native language then.

Finally, when his AI is speaking to him, I have put that speech in <angle brackets>. That speech would ideally be rendered in yet another font, preferably something robotic looking.

18歳未満の方の閲覧、購入は禁止させていただきます。
Viewing or purchase of this comic by those under age 18 is hereby prohibited.

pg04

ザザァ
*waves breaking*

パチ
*eyes snap open*

ん…
Huh?

おや？
Oh

残念
Sorry

レドの奴　起きちまったな
We woke you up didn't we.

ベローズニ　エイミー…
Bellows... with Amy

ドキドキ
*heartbeat*

一体…　ドウシ…タンダ？
What do you doing?

もじもじ
*shy*

pg05

いやな〜　宇宙人でも性欲とかあるのかな〜って
And you said he wouldn't have any sexual drive because he's an alien.

エイミーの奴がさぁ…　アハハ
Isn't that right? Ahahah!

カァ
*blush*

え!?
What!?

私そんなこと言ってないよ！
I didn't say anything like that!

ベローズこそ
You're the one who'd say something like that!

レドのアソコがどーなってるのかなって
What I said was I was wondering what he looked like "down there".

あれ？そうだっけ？
Oh, really?

そんな事よりレドのパンツ
OK then, lets grab his pants...

めしとったり
and take them off!

オイ！　アソコ…とはナンダ
Hey! What is meaning of "down there"?

ナゼズボンヲ
And why you grab pants?

チョッ…マッ
Wai- sto-

おお
Whoa!

ズン
*staring in awe*

銀河同盟
Galactic Alliance

pg06

ぎゅっ
*grab*

ほらみろ
Hey, check this out!

ちろっ
*licking breasts*

やっぱり私の思ったとおり　なかなかの大きさじゃないか
Just like I thought. It's huge.

賭けは　エイミーの負けだな
Looks like you lost our bet, Amy.

ちょっと　なにやってるのよ　ベローズ
Wait, what are you doing Bellows?

ギシ
*penis sliding between breasts*

えー？そんなの決まってんだろ〜　こんなイケメン滅多に　サルベージできねぇんだから
It looks like it belongs right here between these doesn't it? Someone as handsome as you never needs to work down in the bilge doing salvage work, do you?.

ひとつ　いただいちゃおうかと思ってな〜　んふっ
Here, lemme do something nice for you.

ぺろ
*lick*

レド〜
Ledo

ほれほれ〜　宇宙にこういう　技はあるのかな〜
Did they teach you how to do this in outer space?

ぷちゃぴちゃ
*wet and squishy*

れろ
*licking*

ぎゅう〜
*grab*

グッ
*grab*

ナゼソンナ所を刺激スル必要が
Why must you are touching there?

pg07

ぺろっ
*licking*

ちゅぱっ
*sucking*

あや〜？　もしかしてお前　まだアレなのか〜？
Huh? You still haven't done "that"?

ぎゅ
*squeeze*

？チェインバー…
[? Chamber]

「アレ」とはなんだ？
[What is she referring to when she says, "that"?]

レロレロ
*licking*

「アレ」とは女性の生殖行為を行った事がない　未成熟な男性　通称「チェリーボイ」を指すものと推測される

<In this case, I believe that "that" refers to one not having had previously engaged in sexual intercourse with a woman. Men who have not matured to that level are often called "cherry boys" in the local vernacular.>

はむっ
*glomp*

チェリー？　なぜ今果物の学名がでてくるんだ？
["Cherry"? Why do they use the name of a fruit for something like that?]

ちゅ〜
*kiss*

ビクン
*shock*

く…
Guh!

pg08

はぁ
Haa

ぴちゃ
*smack*

んむっ
Mmm

くちゃ
*smack*

バッ
*grab*

ちょっと　ベローズばっかりずるい
W- Wait up! Don't hog him all to yourself!

レドが初めてなら　わ、私だって！
If this is really his first time, then I wanna be a part of it too!

ぺろっ
*licking*

ドキドキ
*heartbeat*

エイミーまで…　いったいどうた？…
What are you doing, Amy?

グイ
*press*

くっ…　これは…
I- I'm...

彼女もまた男性との　生殖行為を行った事のない　「バージン」であると推測される
<When a male or a female has not yet engaged in sexual intercourse with another, they are said to be a "virgin".>

はむ
*glomping cock*

ドキドキ
*heartbeat*

? 今度はなぜ　オリーブオイルの　話が出てくる？
[Why are you talking about olive oil now? Are olives related to cherries somehow?]

pg09

はあんっ
Haaahn

あっ
Ah

レドっ
Ledo

うぅ…
Ooooh...

ビク
*shakes*

ドプッ
*cumming*

レド少尉の心拍数上昇　脳波にオルガズムの波長を確認
<2nd Lieutenant Ledo's heartrate is increasing. Brainwaves indicative of orgasm confirmed.>

レド少尉から排出された　精子細胞が女性らの身体に　付着したものと推測される
<The fluid you ejected onto the two women contains your sperm cells.>

体外への付着のため　着床および妊娠の確立は　0％と予見する
<The probability of successful implantation or conception is 0% due to the fact that it only made external contact with their bodies.>

ぴちゃ
*splat*

ああ
Ahh

べっとり
*sticky*

これがレドの…
This is Ledo's...

pg10

はあ…
Haa

はあ…
Haa

ぼ〜
Blushing

なんだ…　この倦怠感は　オレは一体
[What's happening... Why do I feel so tired?]

こんな…行為で…　集中力が…　乱れる…なんた
[Why did this cause me to lose my ability to focus and concentrate?]

ハアハア
*panting*

解析完了　それは旧文明における　繁殖行為を行った際に　発生する特有の　倦怠感である
<Analysis complete. It's characteristic of the previous ways of our civilisation. When humans propagate their numbers in this manner, physical weariness occurs.>

異性との接触および　彼女らのフェロモンの影響により　レド少尉の海馬へ性的本能が　伝達されたものと推測
される
<When you make physical contact with the opposite sex or are influenced by their pheromones, it activates the sexual instincts in your hippocampus.>

本能…だと？　俺達にもこんな原始的な　本能が存在していたのか？
[Hippocampus? What's that? Do I really have such a primitive instinct remaining in my body?]

ああ
Ahh

レド……
Ledo...

ギシ

ドキドキ
*heartbeat*

もじもじ
*shy fidgeting*

ほお〜らレド　今度は私達を気持ちよく　してくれよぉ
Hey Ledo, now it's your turn to make us feel good!

pg11

レドやさしく…ね
Ledo, put it in slowly.

グッ
*grab*

アア　了解…シタ…
Yes. I have understood.

ん…ああっ　すごいよレドのここ…　びくんびくんって…　まるで　クジライカみたい
Mmm... Aah　Wow. You're twitching inside of me. It feels like a Godzilla-squid's tentacle.

ちゅっ
*smack*

ジュプ
*schlick*

あんっ
Ahh

ぎゅっ
*grab*

ビクン
*twitching*

なにっ!?　オレの身体にヒディアーズと　同一の反応…だと？
What!? Is she reacting like that because she thinks that part of me looks like a Hideauze?

TL note: The Hideauze are the antagonists in this series. They are humanoid aliens with tentacle-like appendages. Cf. [suisei-no-gargantia.wikia.com] http://suisei-no-gargantia.wikia.com/wiki/Hideauze

否定する　彼女は生殖器官を刺激され　一種のトランス状態である　ゆえに対象物を正常に認識することが出来
ない状態と推測される
<Negative. When a female's sexual organs are stimulated, they go into a trance-like state. Therefore, their perception of the world around them is altered.>

どきどき
*heartbeat*

pg12

ああんコラ　エイミーだけずるいぞ
Hey, not so fast! Don't hog him all to yourself!

ハアハア
*panting*

あたしにも〜
Do me too!

ズン
*thrusting*

はぁん
Haaaah

ゾク
*shake*

たぷん
*jiggle*

やっぱりイイ男に抱かれるってのは　最高だよなあ
Making love with such a handsome man is the best!

サルベージ室にはろくな男がいないからな
There aren't any good men working down in the salvage room.

それにこのフィット感……　くせになりそうだ
I'm gonna want to do this all the time...

ほらぁ
Hey Ledo

もっと激しくしてもいいぞ　レドぉ
Try pumping her harder.

チェインバー　彼女はなんといっている？
[Chamber, what are they saying?]

彼女はレド少尉の行為に満足し　その行為をより激しく行う事を要求している
<They're unsatisfied with your current rate of speed and power. They're demanding that you move your hips faster and more forcefully.>

ひゃん
Hyaan

レド
Ledo

ダメッ
More!

pg13

くっ
Guh!

ビク
*shudder*

また何か…　来る…
[Something's coming out again...]

エイミー
Amy!

ベローズ
Bellows!

はっ
Haa!

ドプッ
*spurt*

ああっ　レドぉ　　一緒に〜
Ah, Ledo! Let's come together!

ああっ…
Ahh

んくっ　イっちゃ…
Mmm, I'm coming...

ピュ
*spurt*

貴君らの脳波に　オルガズムの波長を感知
<Brainwaves indicative of orgasm detected in both subjects.>

三者共にこれまでの最大値を計測
<Highest levels yet of said brainwaves detected in all three subjects.>

ひゃあん
Hyaaan

pg14

ヒック
*twitch*

ふう〜　初めてのわりにはよかったぞレド
Ahhh, my first time was even better than I expected.

カラ〜ン
*beach chair creaking*

なあ…　まだ走りないだろ？　もっとやろ〜？
Can you go again? Or do you need a rest?

ハアハア
*panting*

うう…チェインバー　なんだ…この　何ともいえない虚無感と　背徳感は…
[Guh... Chamber. What is this... I feel like I'm nothing... like I've been corrupted somehow...]

・・・解析完了　その虚無感は性行為の終了時に認識される病状　通称賢者タイムと推測される
<...Analysis complete. I estimate that the feeling of nothingness results from the aftereffects of intercourse.>

一時的な性欲喪失状態であるため　生命を脅かす程の危険性は　ないものと判断される
<A human's judgment is significantly impaired and their vulnerability to danger is increased while in a state of sexual desire. To that end, a temporary loss of sexual desire after engaging in intercourse is a protective countermeasure to ensure survival of the species.>

危険なし…　そう…なのか
[To avoid danger... I see...]

ドロー
*dripping*

レド少尉に警告　現在ベローズの口腔から　アルコール反応が検出されている　その影響により彼女の思考は一
時的に　麻痺していたものと推測される
<2nd lieutenant Ledo, I must caution you. I am detecting traces of alcohol in Bellows' oral cavity. I believe her current, temporary state of mental impairment is due to its effects.>

アルコールそれでか…
[Is alcohol really that powerful?]

ザザァ…
*waves breaking*

ピピッ
*beep beep*

×-3752より通信機に交信あり　「リア充爆発しろ」と言っている
<I have just received a communique from X-3752. It says, "I hope you enjoy yourself on Earth!">

TL note: X-3752 is Kugel's Striker's AI code.

pg15

パイロット支援啓発インターフェイスシステム
Pilot-enhanced interface system

K-6821チェインバー
K-6821 Chamber

この空と海の全てが、
あなたに可能性をもたらすだろう。
生存せよ。探求せよ。
その生命に、最大の成果を期待する。
You can bring everything in
the land and sea to you.
Live! Pursue life!
Always do you best to live your life to the fullest!

pg16

奥付

印刷
Printer

プリンとウォーク様
Printworks

サークル
Circle

よわたり工場
Yowatari Kouba

発行日
First published

2013　08　10
August 10th, 2013

発行者
Publisher

ジェット
Jet

Atogaki
Afterword

どうもジェットです。
今回はガルガンティア本です。
本編が予想以上に綺麗なラストを
迎えたので最終回を観終わっても気分爽快で
久々にスカッとしましたよ。
Thank you for reading. I'm Jet Yowatari.
I decided to make a Gargantia doujin this time.
The finale of the series was much nicer than I expected, so I was really happy at how it turned out. I felt relieved that it turned out so well.

はぁ…それにしてもチェインバー可愛いよ
チェインバー。
中盤あたりの言動をかなり疑って
観ててこめんよ m(_ _)m
最後の特攻シーンなんかも AI物の宿命とはいえ
ストレートに来てくれて感動したよ
やっぱり言って欲しい台詞をちゃんと言ってくれる
王道ストーリーはいいね。
Hmm... nevertheless, Chamber is really cute.
Ah, Chamber...
I really doubted that his words and actions during the middle part of the anime storyline suited his personality, and I'm sorry about that.
In the scene in the finale where he does a suicide attack, it may have ultimately been his fate to pass like that, but it still moved me greatly.

チェインバーの最後のセリフもなかなか
沁みる。
「その生命に最大の成果を期待する」って
もうお母さんモードじゃないですかヤダー。
自分もこんな支援啓発プログラムが欲しいよー
声は藤村さんで(>へ<)えー
The last words he said also struck right at my core.
"Always do you best to live your life to the fullest!"
I was so bummed out that he wouldn't be able to be there for Ledo anymore.
I want an AI that looks after me as much as Chamber did for him.
And I want his voice to sound like Fujimura's too! (>_<)

兎にも角にも本当良いアニメ作品でした。
最後、表紙のチェインバーは時間の都合で
描くかどうか悩みましたが
描いといて良かったです。
時間かかった分締め切りギリギリですがね…（笑）
ではでは、次の新刊でお会いしましょう。
At any rate, the anime was really a work of art.
Lastly, I wasn't sure if I'd even have the time to draw the version of Chamber that appeared on the cover.
I'm so glad that I was able to finish it.
I just barely managed to do so right before the deadline. *laughs*
Well then... I look forward to speaking to you again in my next doujin!

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page 5


ザッ
za-

*step*/*woosh*/*howl*


page 6

どうしても私と一緒にヴァンス家に帰ってもらうよお姉ちゃん
doushitemo watashi to issho ni bansu ie ni kaettemorau yo onee-chan

I'll do whatever it takes to bring you back to the Vance household with me onee-chan


悪いけどそれはできないわエリナ
warui kedo sore wa dekinaiwa erina

I'm afraid that's not going to happen ‌Elina


それなら，力づくで聞いてもらうしかないなあ
sorenara,chikaradzuku de kiite morau shikanai naa

Then I have no choice but to make you listen by force

スチャッ
sucha-

*slide*


望むところよ！
nozomu tokoro yo!

Bring it on!

シャァァッ SFX for something slicing the air
shaaa-

*draw*


page 7


いくわよエリナ！！
iku wa yo erina!!

Here I come, Elina!!


はあああっ！！
haaaa-!!


page 8


ギイイイィ
giiiii
*PING*


イイイイイン
iiiiin
*Shiiiing*


シュバババ
shu bababa

*swoosh* *whoosh*whoosh*whoosh*


ガガガガッ
*clank*clank*clank*clank*


page 9


ザッ
za

*step*


ザザザザザ
zazazazaza

*step*step*step*step*step/*tap*tap*tap*tap*tap*


ブンッ
bun-

*swing*


バッ
ba-

*fwoosh*/*duck*


page 10


キッ
ki-

*glint*


バッ
ba-

*leap*


もらったぁっ！！
morattaa-!!

I've got you!!/you're mine now!!/you're open!!


page 11


ギン！
gin!

*glare*


ヒュッ
hyu-

*swish*


page 12


!!

ガキイン！
gakiin!

*clash*


きゃん！！
kyan!!

meowch!!


くっ
ku-

ugh-


ガバッ
gaba-

*rise*/*rising*


ピタリ
pitari

*stop*

うっ
u-

oof


page 13


勝負あったわね
shoubu atta wane

Looks like I win


う。。。
u...

uwu


ふ，ふふふ。。。
fu,fufufu...

?


勝ったと思うのはまだ早いんじゃない？
katta toomou nowa mada hayai~njyanai?

Don't you think it's a little early to be celebrating?


お姉ちゃん？
onee-chan?


えっ。。。
e-...

eh-...


page 15


！！

ガキイン！
gakin!

*clang!*/*crash!*


バチバチバチ
bachibachibachi

*crackle*crackle*crackle*/*bzzz*bzzz*bzzz*


ああああッ！！
aaaa-!!

ahhhh-!!


page 16


ザッ！
za-!

*stand*


ク，クロデット。。。
ku,kurodetto...

C-Claudette...


お姉さま。。。
onee-sama...


ガクッ
gaku-

*collaspe*

ドサッ
dosa-

*thud*


page 17



ふふっ やったねクローデットお姉さま
fufu- yatta ne kuroodetto onee-sama

fufu- We did it Claudette onee-sama


これで。。。任務，完了。。。
kore de...ninmu,kanryou...

We've completed our mission...


完了？ちがうよクローデットお姉さま
kanryou? chigau yo kuroodetto onee-sama

Completed? What are you saying, Claudette onee-sama


これからが本番じゃない。。。ふふ。。。
kore kara ga honban jyanai...fufu...

We're just getting started...fufu...


page 18


うう。。。
uu...

mm...


はっ！
ha-!


こ，これはっ。。。！
ko,kore wa-...!

T-this is-...!


気がついた？レイナお姉ちゃん？
kigatsuita? reina onee-chan

You've come to? Reina onee-chan?


エリナっ！どういうつもりっ！
erina-! douiutsumori-!

Elina-! Whats the meaning of this-!


page 19


勝負に負けたくらいじゃ素直にヴァンス家に戻ってくれないでしょ？ お姉ちゃん
shoubu ni maketa kuraijya sunao ni vansu ie ni modotte kurenai desho? onee-chan

Eventhough you lost, you still won't accompany me home right? onee-chan


カチャ
kacha

*click*

だから。。。
dakara...

In that case...


シュルルッ
shururu-

*loosen*/*undo*


お姉ちゃんが素直にエリナに従ってくれるようにしちゃうの♡
onee-chan ga sunao ni erina ni shitagatte kureru youni shichauno♡

Elina'll have to thoroughly discipline onee-chan♡


page 20


エ，エリナ。。。何を。。。
e,erina...nani o...

E-Elina...What are...


クローデットお姉さま最後の一枚を脱がせちゃって
kuroodetto oneesama saigo no ichimai o nugasechatte

Remove the last piece, Claudette onee-sama


あ，やっ！
a,ya-!

Ah,sto-!

スッ。。。
su-...

*lean*

クイッ
kui-

*tug*

シュルル。。。
shururu...

*snake* /*slip*


こ，こんな。。。やめて。。。
ko-konna...yamete...

S-stop...this...


page 21


これはヴァンス家に伝わる媚薬♡ これでお姉ちゃんをエリナの虜にしちゃうの♡
kore wa vansu ie ni tsutawaru biyaku♡ kore de onee-chan o erina no toriko ni shichau no♡

This is an aphrodisiac from the Vance Household♡ I'll use this to make onee-chan my slave♡


スチャ
sucha

suca/sucar


ひゃうっ
hyau-

hyau/eek


トローッ
doroo-

*drip*


こうやって塗り広げて。。。
kouyatte nurihirogete

Spread it all around...


ヌチャッ ヌチャッ ヌチャッ
nucha- nucha- nucha-

*stroke*stroke*stroke*

プルン
purun

*quiver*


あンッ
an-

Ahn


page 22


だんだん気持ちよくなってきたでしょう。。。♡
dondon kimochiyokunatte kita deshou...♡

You're staring to get aroused aren't you...♡


ヌリュッ ヌリュッ ヌリュッ
nuryu- nuryu- nuryu-

*slimey*/*slippery*/*greasing*


は。。。あぁんっ。。。
ha...aan-...

hah...ahhn...


はうっ！
hau-!

ビクッ！
biku-!

*jolt*/*shudder*


軽くイッちゃったんだね♡ お姉ちゃん。。。ふふ。。。
karaku icchatan dane♡ onee-chan...fufu...

You just came a little♡ Onee-chan...fufu...


page 23


エ，エリナ。。。お願い。。。もうやめて。。。
e,erina...onegai...mou yamete...

E-Elina...Please...Enough already...


ダメ♡ お姉ちゃんの弱いトコもっと責めちゃうんだから♡
dame♡ onee-chan no yowai toko motto semechaun dakara♡

No way♡ I wanna tease onee-chan's weak spot more♡


はぁんっ！
haan-!

キュッ！ギュッ！
*squeeze*/*pinch*


page 24


ギュッギュッ
gyu-gyu-

*squeeze*/*grope*/*press*

あンっ，あンっ!
an-,an-!

ahn! ahn!


ふふ。。。こうやって乳腺を揉まれると気持ちいいでしょう？
fufu...kouyatte nyuusen o momareru to kimochi ii deshou?

fufu...It feels good when I squeeze your tits, right?


ビクッ
biku-

*jolt*/*flinch*

ダ，ダメ。。。エリナそれ以上したら。。。ああっ！
da,dame...erina sore ijyou shitara...aa-!

Elina s-stop...any more and I'll...Aah-!


なにがダメなの？
nani ga damenano?

Stop doing what?


はぅんっ！
haun-!

ギュッ ギュッ
*squeeze*/*grope*/*fondle*


page 25

で，出ちゃう。。。出ちゃうよぉ。。。んあうっ！
de,dechau...dechau yoo...nau-!

It's co-coming out...gonna come out...na~u-!


ビクン。。。
bikun...

*blush*


何が出ちゃうのお姉ちゃん？
nani ga dechau no onee-chan?

What's coming out,onee-chan?


ビク
biku

*tremble*/*shudder*

はうぅっ！
hauu-!


んああっ出るうっ！！
naa-deruu-!!

Nghaa- its coming-!!


ドクン！
dokun!

*heartbeat*/*ba-dump*


page 26


あああっ！！
aaa-!!

ビュクッ ビュクッ ビュルッ ビュクッ
byuku- byuku- byuru- byuku-

*spurt*splurt*twitch*spurt*


エッチな体。。。気持ちよくなると母乳が出ちゃうのね♡
ecchi na karada...kimochiyoku naru to bonyuu(miruku) ga dechau none♡

What a perverted body...Milk comes out when you're horny♡



あうう。。。
auu...


もっと搾ってあげる♡
motto shibotte ageru♡

I'll milk you dry♡


ピュッ ギュッ！
pyu- gyu-!

*squeeze* *spurt*

あンっ！
an-!

ahn-!


page 27


ドピュッ！ ドピュッ！
dopyu- dopyu-!

*splurt* *splurt*
*SPURT*

んああっ！
naa-!

Nghaa-!


エリナお願い。。。もう許して。。。
erina onegai...mou yurushite...

Elina please...Let me go already...


なに言ってるのこんなに感じてるくせに。。。
nani itteru no konna ni kanjiteru kuse ni...

You say that but you're clearly enjoying yourself...


ふふ。。。
fufu...

*giggle*...


んっ。。。！
n-...!

mmph...!


チュプ。。。チュ。。。クチュ。。。
chupu...chu...kuchu...

*smooch*kiss*smack*


んう。。。
nu...


page 28


お姉ちゃんのおっぱい母乳吸ってあげる。。。
onee-chan no oppai bonyuu(miruku) suute ageru...

I'll suck out onee-chan's breastmilk...
I'm going to suck out onee-chan's breastmilk...


チュプッ！
chupu-!

*suck*

あぁん！
aan!

ahn!


ちゅうううっ！
chuuuu-!

*kisssss*

はひぃっ！
hahii-!

じゅるるるっ
jyurururu-

*droool*


どんどん母乳出てくる。。。おいしいよ。。。♡
dondon miruku detekuru...oishii yo...♡

Milk keeps flowing out...delicious...♡


ゴクンゴクン
gokungokun

*gulp*swallow*


あン！あぁン！
an! aan!


page 29


全部搾ってあげるから 思いっ切りイッちゃって。。。
zenbu shibotte ageru kara omoi-kiri ichatte...

I'll milk you throughly, so feel free to cum...



い，いやあっ！
i,iyaa-!

N-noo!



ギュウウウッ！
gyuuuu-!

*squeeeeeze*

あひいっ！
ahii-!

Eeek!


プシャアアアァ！
pushuaaaaa!

*pssssssh*

くはあああん！！
kuhaaaan!!


page 30


ビクビクッ！ ピュッ ピュッ ブルッ
biku biku-! byu- byu- buru-

*shudder*/*tremble*/*twitch* *splurt*splurt* *shiver*/*shudder*


ハァハア。。。エ，エリナ。。。もうこれ以上は。。。
haa haa...e,erina...mou kore ijyou wa...

Hah...Hah...E-elina...that's enough...no more...


今度はこっちを気持ちよくしてあげるね。。。♡
kondo wa kocchi o komochiyoku shite ageru ne...♡

Next, I'll make you feel good down here...♡
Now/This time


グイッ
gui-

*pull*/*spread*


page 31


ピチュ。。。チュプ。。。
pichu...chupu...

*drip*...*kiss*/*lap*/*lick*/*sip*


あッ あぁン！
a- aan!

ah ahn!


クチュ。。。チュルッ。。。
kuchu...churu-...

*rub*/*fondle* *slurp*


や，やめて エリナっ！そんなトコっ！
ya,yamete erina! sonna toko-!

S-stop it Elina! Not there-!


クリトリスの方が感じる，お姉ちゃん？
kuritorisu no hou ga kanjiru,onee-chan?

Want me to lick your clitoris instead, onee-chan?


チュ。。。
chu...

*kiss*/*lap*/*mlem*


はうっ！
hau!


それとも膣口？
soretomo chitsuko(kocchi)?

Or here maybe?


レロレロッ
rerorero

*laplap*/*mlemmlem*


ひあうっ！
hiau-!

Eek!/hau-!


page 32


エ，エリナ。。。あっ。。。
e,erina...a-...

E-elina...ah-...


こっちも敏感だねお姉ちゃん♡
kocchi mo binkan dane onee-chan♡

You're sensitive down here too,onee-chan♡


ね，エリナのことも気持ちよくして。。。
ne,erina no koto mo kimochiyoku shite...

Hey~/Ne~ Make Elina feel good too...


スッ。。。
su-...

*lean*/*mount*/*pass*/*hover*


page 33


あっ。。。んむっ。。。
a-...nmu-...

Ah...mmfh...



ほら，お姉ちゃんも舐めて。。。早くしないとイカせちゃうよ♡
hora,onee-chan mo namete...hayaku shinai to ikasechau yo♡

C'mon, hurry up and lick me too, onee-chan...I'll make you cum again if you don't♡




あ，あンっエリナぁ。。。！
a,an- erinaa...!

Ah, ahn- Elinaa...!


ピクン
bikun

*twitch*/*flinch*


んんっ ちゅぷ。。。んちゅ。。。
nn- chupu...nchu...

mmh- suck...kiss...


クチュ。。。チュプ。。。
kuchu...chupu...

*stroke*...*kiss*...


あぁんっ！！
aan-!!

aahn-!!


ビクン！
bikun!

*jolt*


page 34


いいよぉ。。。お姉ちゃん。。。♡
iiyoo...onee-chan...♡

Keep going...onee-chan...♡


チュク。。。
chuku...

*lick*


んっ，んんっ はぁん。。。！
n-,nn- haan...!

mm,mmh haahn...!


ピチャ ピチャ
picha picha

*splash*splash*


くぅん。。。あんっ。。。！
kuun...an-...!


チュプ チュプッ
chupu chupu-

*kiss* *suck*


はあっ。。。はあっ。。。
haa-...haa-...

*hah*/*huff*...

クチュ。。。
kuchu...

*stroke*


page 35


あっ あうん。。。エリナぁ。。。
a- aun...erinaa...

Ah- auu~n...Elina...


イクの？お姉ちゃん イッちゃうの？
iku no? onee-chan ichau no?

Are you about to cum? Onee-chan?


一緒にイこうお姉ちゃん。。。♡
issho ni ikou oneechan...♡

Let's cum together onee-chan...♡


チュパッ チュパッ
chupa- chupa-

*kiss* *kiss*


あああっ！んんっ！
aaa-! nn-!

aaahh-! ngh-!


ビクッ チュクッ チュクッ
biku- chuku- chuku-

*twitch*/*shudder* *lick*lick*


page 36


ビクゥッ!! ビクビクッ！！
bikuu-!! biku biku

*spasm* *twitch*twitch*

あぁあんっ！！
aaan-!!

AaAHN-!!


はあぁあっ！！
haaaa-!!

HAAaA-!!


page 37


お姉ちゃん。。。♡
onee-chan...♡


エリナ。。。
erina...

Elina...


んっ。。。
n-...

ngh/mmh...


はあっ。。。
haa-...

*hah*/*huff*


シュルルッ。。。
shururu-...

*loosen*/*undo*/*undone*


エ，エリナ。。。わたし。。。
e,erina...watashi...

E-elina...I...


page 38


もっとして欲しいんでしょお姉ちゃん。。。♡
motto shite hoshiin desho onee-chan...♡

You want even more,right? Onee-chan...♡


クスッ
kusu-

heh/scoff

カチャ
kacha

*clack*/*clink*


今日のために用意したコレを使ってあげる。。。
kyou no tame ni youi shita kore o tsukatte ageru...

I prepared this just for today...
I had this prepared just for today


ズルウッ。。。
zuruu-...

*slither*/*slide*/*slip*(out)


コレは女のあそこに寄生するタイプの魔法生物なんだよ♡
kore wa onna no asoko ni kisei suru taipu no mahou seibutsu nanda yo♡

This is a type of parasitic magical creature that latches on to women's crotches♡


ヌラァ。。。
nuraa...

*slimey*


page 39


コレをこうやって。。。
kore o kou yatte...

You use it like this...
so

クチュ。。。
kuchu...

*stroke*/*rub*

ズルルルッ
zurururu-

*slip*/*slide*/*wiggle*

あンッ！
an-!

ahn-!


ふふ。。。入っちゃった。。。
fufu...haicchatta...

Fufu...It's in...


ブルッ ビクッ。。。ビクン。。。
*shudder* *tremble*...*shiver*


page 40


エ，エリナ。。。
e,erina...

E-elina...


今すぐ入れてあげるよお姉ちゃん♡
ima sugu irete ageru yo onee-chan♡

I'm gonna shove it in,onee-chan♡


グイッ
gui-

*shove*/*grab*/*yank*

あっ。。。
a-...

ah...


クチュッ ピクン
kuchu- pikun

*rub* *twitch*


ズヌヌヌッ
zunununu-

*sliiiide*

くアあっ！
kua-!


page 41


入ってる。。。わたしエリナに犯されちゃってるぅ。。。
haitteru...watashi erina ni okasare chatteruu...

It went in...I'm being fucked by Elina...


ヌププ。。。
nupupu...

*fapfap*(?)


いっぱい気持ちよくしてあげる。。。 お姉ちゃん。。。♡
ippai kimochiyoku shite ageru... onee-chan...♡

I'm going to make you feel really good...onee-chan...♡


グイッ
gui-

*shove*/*thrust*

アンっ！
an-!

ahn!


page 42


ぱんッ！ ぱんッ！ ぱんッ！ ぱんッ！ ぱんッ！
pan-! pan-! pan-! pan-! pan-!

*fap*fap*fap*fap*fap*


アアンっ！
aan-!

aahn!

はウっ！ くあァンっ！
hau-! kuaan-!


お姉ちゃん，どう？エリナのおちんちんは♡
onee-chan,dou? erina no ochinchin wa♡

How does Elina's penis feel? Onee-chan♡
How does it feel,onee-chan? Elina's penis♡


す，すごい。。。
su,sugoi...

A-amazing...


page 43


奥まで。。。突き上げてきて。。。
oku made...tsukiagetekite...

It's reaching...all the way in...


グチュッ ズチュッ
guchu- zuchu-

*stroke* *squish*/*schlip*


とっても。。。気持ちいいの。。。♡
tottemo...kimochi ii no...♡

It feels...amazing...♡


パンッ！パンッ！ アンッ！ アアンッ！
pan-! pan-! an-! aan-!

*fap* *fap* ahn! aahn-!


まだ満足するのは早いよ，お姉ちゃん♡
mada manzoku suru nowa hayai yo,onee-chan♡

It's too soon to be giving in to pleasure,onee-chan♡


ズチュッ ズチュッ
zuchu- zuchu-

*squish* *squish*

ハッ ハアッ ハアッ
ha- haa- haa-

*hah*huff*huff*


page 44


ね，クローデットお姉さま♡
ne,kuroodetto onee-sama

Right? Claudette onee-sama


スッ
su-

*step*/*appear*


ク，クローデットお姉さま。。。
ku,kuroodette onee-sama...

C-Claudette onee-sama...


page 45


さあ，クローデットお姉さま レイナお姉ちゃんの後ろに入れてあげて。。。
saa,kuroodetto onee-sama reina onee-chan no ushiro ni irete agete...

Come, Claudette onee-sama,stick it in Reina onee-chan's butt...


ま，待っ。。。
ma,ma-...

W-wait...


ズリュッ！
zuryu-!

*stab*/*penetrate*/*thrust*

ビクウッ
bikuu-

*jolt*/*suprise*

はあああんっ！
haaaan-!


page 46


ズリュッ ズチュッ グチュッ
zuryu- zuchu- guchu-

*thrust* *squish* *fap*

あァンっ！ あンっ！ くゥンっ！
aan-! an-! kuun-!

aahn! ahn! kuu~nh!


page 47


お姉ちゃんカワイイ♡
onee-chan kawaii♡

Onee-chans adorable♡


んむぅ。。。
nmuu...

mmmh...


すごいでしょう？二本のおちんちんでかき回される気分はどう？
sugoi deshou? nihon no ochinchin de kakimawasareru kibun wa dou?

How does it feel to be stirred up by two dicks? Awesome right?


あああ。。。
aaa...


page 48


ズチュッ ズチュッ グポッ グポッ
zuchu- zuchu- gupo- gupo-

*squish* *squish* *splish* *splish*


エリナと。。。クローデットお姉さまのおちんちんがおなかの中で。。。
erina to...kuroodetto onee-sama no ochinchin ga onaka no naka de...

Elina and...Claudette onee-sama's dicks are...


ゴリゴリって。。。 こすれあって。。。
gorigoritte... kosureatte...

scraping and rubbing... my insides...


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ヌプッ グポッ
nupo- gupo-

*slide* *squish*


ああっ！もうイキそう。。。っ！
aa-! mou ikisou...-!

Aah! I'm going to cum...!


ハアッ ハアッ ハアッ ハアッ
haa- haa- haa- haa-

*hah*/*huff*


魔法ペニスでたっぷりお姉ちゃんの膣内に媚薬粘液を注いであげるからねっ♡
mahou penisu de tappuri onee-chan no chitsunai(naka) ni biyaku neneki o sosoide ageru kara ne-♡

I'll use my magical penis to pump onee-chan's pussy full of aphroditic nectar♡


Page 50


子宮を媚薬粘液で一杯にして。。。っ Hなことしか考えられない淫乱性奴隷にしてあげるっ。。。♡
shikyuu o biyaku neneki de ippai ni shite...H na koto shika kangaerarenai inran sei dorei ni shite ageru...♡

I'll fill your womb full of aphrodisiac nectar...until you become a slave that can't think of anything but sex


ズポチュッ
zupochu-

*plunge*

グポチュッ
gupochu-

*slosh*


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なっちゃう。。。 淫乱性奴隷になっちゃうよぉ。。。っ！
nacchau... inran seidorei ni nacchau yoo...-!

I'm becoming...I'm turning into a slutty sex slavee...!


出すよっ！ お姉ちゃん♡ 出すよっ！
dasu yo-! onee-chan♡ dasu yo-!

I'm coming! onee-chan♡ I'm coming-!


私も。。。出る。。。っ！
watashi mo...deru...-!

Me too...coming...!


はああっ！
haaa-!


Page 52


あああああんっ！！
aaaaan-!!

ドクッ！ ドクッ！
doku-! doku-!

*gush*/*splurt*


Page 53


ビクゥッ! ビクンッ！
bikuu-! bikun-!

*twitch*/*jerk*


Page 54


ドププッ ドクッ ドクッ
dopupu- doku- doku-

*pour* *gush*/*splurt*


はああ。。。エリナぁ。。。
haa...erinaa...

Haaah...Erinaa...


ふふ。。。大好きだよー お姉ちゃん。。。♡
fufu...daisuki dayoo- onee-chan...♡

fufu/*giggle*...I love you~ onee-chan...♡


Page 55


10時間後ー
jyuu jikan go-

10 hours later


アンッ ンッ アンッ
an- n- an-

ahn mm ahn


ねぇ。。。エリナぁ。。。もっとぉ。。。♡
nee...erinaa...mottoo...♡

Heyy...Elinaa...moree...♡


パンッ パンッ
pan- pan-

*slap*/*fap*


お，お姉ちゃ。。。もうダメ。。。
o,onee-cha...mou dame...

o-onee-cha...no more...


もう一滴も出ないよぉ。。。
mou itteki mo denai yoo...

Theres not a single drop left...


ゼエ ゼエ
zee zee

*wheeze*/*gasp*


Page 56


もぉ。。。だらしないわねぇ。。。
moo...darashinai wa nee...

What...how disappointing...
sigh


ズボッ
zubo-

*rise*


なら，クローデットお姉さま♡
nara,kurodetto-onee-sama♡

Then, Claudette-onee-sama♡


ひッ！
hi-!

eek!


ま，待て，レイナ，。。。私ももう限界。。。
ma,matte,reina...watashi mo mou genkai...

I've reached my
w-wait, Reina...I'm at my limit too...


Page 57


もっとがんばってよ，お姉さま♡
motto ganbatte yo,onee-sama♡

Hang in there,
Try a little harder, onee-sama♡


ギュッ！
gyu-!

*squeeze*


うあぁ。。。もう無理だ。。。レイナ。。。
uaa...mou muri da...reina...

uwah...It's impossible...Reina...
I'm tired...


うふふ♡ ホラホラ もっとぉ♡
ufufu♡ horahora mottoo♡

ufufu♡ c'mon c'mon moree♡


グチュッ グチュッ
guchu- guchu-

*fap*fap*


ご，誤算だったわ。。。
go,gosan datta wa...

I u-underestimated her...


レイナお姉ちゃんがこんなにHに強いなんて。。。
reina onee-chan ga konna ni H ni tsuyoi nante...

I didn't expect Reina onee-chan to be so good at this...



page 58


う，うあっ。。。！
u,ua-...!

u-uwah...!


ビクッ ビクッ
biku- biku-

*twitch*twitch*
jolt shudder tremble


もうイッちゃったの？だらしないなあ♡
mou icchatta no? darashinai naa♡

you came already? How disappointing♡


ん，もう。。。まだまだ足りないのにィ
n,mou...mada mada tarinai nonii

mm, geez...I'm still not satisfied


そうだ♡
souda♡

I know♡
That's it♡


Page 59


クイーンズブレイドに参加してる女たちとならもっとすごいHが楽しめるかも♡
kuiinzubureido ni sanka shite hitotachi to nara motto sugoi H ga tanoshimeru kamo♡

I'll participate in Queen's blade and have sex with the participants♡


ふふっ♡なんだかワクワクしてきちゃった♡
fufu-♡ nandaka wakuwaku shitekichatta♡

fufu♡ I'm getting pumped up♡


そうと決まれば。。。
souto kimareba...

I've decided...


チャキッ
chaki-

*clack*

シュルルッ
shururu-

*fwish*/*swish*

グッ
gu-

*clench*/*grip*


page 60


冒険の旅に出発ね♡
bouken no tabi ni shuppatsu ne♡

to depart on an adventure♡


page 61


おまけイラスト
omake irasuto

omake/extra illustration


本編におさまりきれなかったHシーンをイラストで紹介
honpen ni osamari kirenakkata H shiin o irasuto de shoukai

Indroducing in the illustration: a H-scene that couldnt fit into the original book


「うふふ，エリナ♡いっぱい気持ちよくなってね♡」
「ufufu,erina♡ ippai kimochi yoku natte ne♡」

「ufufu, Elina♡ I'll make you feel really good♡」


「ああんっ！お姉ちゃんのがエリナにずぶずぶって，はいってるうぅっ！」
「aan-! onee-chan noga erina ni zubuzubutte,haitteruuu-!」

「aahn! onee-chan's thing is deep inside Elina!」


page 62


「ああ。。。妹たちに犯されて。。。イッってしまう。。。っ！」
「aa...imouto-tachi ni okasarete...i-tteshimau...-!」

「ah...I'm cumming...while being fucked by my younger sisters...-!」


「クローデットお姉さま♡ たっぷり楽しんでね♡」
「kuroodetto onee-sama♡ tappuri tanoshindene♡」

「We're glad you're enjoying yourself♡ Claudette onee-sama♡」


page 62


あとがき
atogaki

afterword


お買い上げありがとうございます。
okaiage arigatougozaimasu.

thank you for your patronage


Φ-02@白糖会です。
phi-o2 @ hakutoukai desu.

I am phi-o2 @ hakutoukai


今回のネタはクイーンズブレイドです。
konkai no neta wa kuiinzubureido desu.

シリーズが刊行され始めたころからずっと
shiriizu ga kankou sare hajimeta-koro kara zutto

フアンだったんですが，このたびやっと
fuan dattan desuga,kono tabi yatto

同人誌が描けました。
doujinshi ga egakemashita.


The subject this time is Queen's Blade. I wanted to draw a doujin eversince the series began, and this time, I finally did it.



アニメのクイーンズブレイドも予想より
anime no kuiinzubureido mo yosou yori

出来が良いので毎週楽しみに視聴してます。
deki ga yoi node maishuu tanoshimi ni shichou shimasu.

もちろんAT-Xで見てます。 無修正万歳。
mochiron AT-X de mitemasu. mushuusei banzai.


The Queens Blade anime too, as I predicted/expectaed/anticipated had good excecution, that's why I looked forward to watching it every week.
I watch it on AT-X of course. Uncensored banzai.



アニメが始まる前に描き始めたので
anime ga hajimaru mae ni kaki hajimeta node

この同人誌とアニメとでは微妙に展開が
kono doujinshi to anime to dewa bimyou ni tenkai ga

違っちゃってます。 よくあるよくある。
chigacchattemasu. yoku aru yoku aru.


I started drawing this doujinshi before the anime aired, so there might be subtle differences in the plot. Just slight differences.



調子に乗ってflashで再生する動画も作って
choushi ni notte flash de saiseisuru douga mo tsukutte

みましたが，そのおかげでだいぶ完成まで
mimashita ga,sono okage de daibu kansei made

時間がかかりました(アニメ放送が終了する
jikan ga kakarimashita (anime housou ga shuuryou suru

前に完成してよかった。。。)。
mae ni kansei shite yokatta...).


I got caught up in the moment and decided boot-up flash to make videos and because of that the doujin took longer to complete (thank goodness I managed to complete it before the anime finished broadcasting...)


それではご縁がありましたらまた次の同人誌で。
soredewa goen ga arimashitara mata tsugi no doujinshi de.

Well then, if fate allows it, we'll meet again in the next doujinshi.







This post has been edited by sapphireblade: Aug 28 2018, 15:20

Speech bubbles separated by a line of space.
Connected bubbles get a new line.
TL Note: Rory refers to Itami by his first name, Youji, quite often and without honorifics. First name basis without honorifics
is akin to first/second base in Japanese culture, and her frequent use of Youji is meant to be endearing, I suppose.

P1
You Aren't Getting Away Tonight
---------------------------------------------------------------------------
P2
...huh?

My room?

...Oh right, I was drinking with Rory. After that, let's see...

"Morning, Youji"

"...After that, you brought me to my room? Sorry about that, Rory."

"It's no big deal."
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P3
"Wha!
Rory, what are you wearing!?"

"What?"

"I thought you were into this kind of thing.
...Your wife told me. I never expected you to have these kinds of interests. I wonder if you're a pervert."

Dammit Risa! Why would you tell her that!? ... But I can't deny that she looks great.

"So um, why are my hands tied?"
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P4
"And, actually...

Why are you doing this, Rory?"

"Why?

Because every time I try to tempt you, you always wiggle your way out, or someone else gets in the way."

"That's never happened."

"Oh but it has~

I've tied you up so you can't get away, and we're in your room so no one will bother us. <3

Prepare yourself, Youji. <3"
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P5
"So, um...
Rory, I think I've said this before...

In my country..."

"Oh I know! But we're in Arnus, Youji!

So? What do you think of my body?
It hasn't changed since I became an Apostle, but in its own way, I think it has its perks."
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P6
"...For example, I think I like my butt on the smaller side~"

Crap, at this rate...

"For awhile now, I could feel you trying to escape, Youji~

But this part of you right here...

...is rearing to go~ <3

Oh c'mon, just follow your male instincts~ Youji <3"

"No, wait"

"Jeez, more excuses? I guess I'll just have to...

Do this <3"

"MMF"
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
P7
"Give in, Youji <3 You still won't make love to me, even if I do this?

Or this? Or this? <3

Come on, look Youji. Look at how wet I am~"

I can't hold back...

"You can do whatever you want to me, and my pussy, Youji~

"Jeez, you still won't? I can't believe you'd hold back. But still I... AH"

*twitch*

(smaller sfx around Rory) *shiver*

*sucking noises* (*slurp*?)

"Nn, Ah"
----------------------------------------------------------------------
P8
"Finally, you're honest to your desires

How does my pussy taste, Youji? Does it taste good~?

Are you that entranced by my pussy? ... Fufu, you're so cute, Youji.

Youji, lick me, like the dog you are.

Right there... Just like that. You're doing great, Youji. More, lick me more <3"
-----------------------------------------------------------
P9
"Nn

Ah, mm

Ahn

Hahh~ You made me cum, Youji <3

That felt great, Youji.

You did well

Now instead of with your mouth...
How about you use /that/ down there~ <3

You don't look like you're satisfied just yet, fufu."
---------------------------------------------------------------
P10
"Hey, Rory. Could you untie my hands?"

"Nope, not yet, Youji <3"

"W-Why"

"If you can satisfy me down here...

... I'll consider untying you. <3"
---------------------------------------------------------------
P11
"Take a good look, Youji.

Watch as your dick enters me

Nn,
Look <3. Just a little more and it'll all be in.

NN
And it's all in <3

Youji~ you're so~ hard~ <3
Does my vagina feel that good?"
---------------------------------------------------------------
P12
... Oh god!

"Youji~
I can tell you just want to grab my waist and thrust violently in and out of me

It's written all over your face~ But I'm not going to let you yet~ <3"

Rory's pussy is... Oh crap! What is this sensation...

"If you want to, you'll have to satisfy me, lots.

If you can, then I'll let you do whatever you want to me~"

There's barely been any foreplay, yet its dripping wet. It's warm, and most of all, its got a great tightness.

"Hm? What's the matter, Youji.
I can feel you already twitching. Don't tell me you're going to cum already?"

...At this rate I'm going to cum real soon.
---------------------------------------------------------------
P13
Crap! I really am going to cum right away.

"NN
You're great, Youji. You're hitting all of my favorite spots.
Looks like you and I are a great fit <3"

"NN" Twitch

(Bottom Right) "Urk
I'm cumming!"

"NN
AH"

*Splurt (gush?)*
---------------------------------------------------------------
P14
"Rory!"
(all these kissing sounds don't have an english equivalent...)
"nmph, Youji!

NN

Hah <3
Oh, you freed yourself...

Oh well <3 You may have cum before me, but I'll cut you some slack this time <3
Alright, do me however you want, Youji. Dont. Hold. Back. <3

NN

Ah, so rough"
---------------------------------------------------------------
P15
"AH

A-amazing <3 I can feel you grinding and prodding against my womb.

Caress my stomach more Youji! Your large hand against my skin feels wonderful~ <3

NNAH

AH... Youji<3 Fuck me harder~ <3"
---------------------------------------------------------------
P16
"I'm going to cum soon, Rory."

"Ah, do it <3 Youji <3 Inside me! <3"

"Here it comes!"

"Ah, I'm cumming!"
---------------------------------------------------------------
P17
"Oh come on, Youji.

You still down? What, were you not satisfied with my body?"

"No... That's not it..."

"Don't worry about it. Cause now, your heart, and your body, are mine <3

And I won't ever let you get away <3 Youji <3"
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AFTERWORD

"Thank you for reading the entire book.
For those new readers, it's a pleasure to meet you. Otherwise, hello again. This is HaRu.
This book is about GATE, an anime I've been watching and getting addicted to. It's been awhile since I've done a non-Kancolle book. A really long while...
My favorite character is, well, Rory. Ah~ Rory...
Her PVs, visuals, and animation stirred something within me, and seeing her joyfully sit on Itami's lap made me go "ah~ yes~"
Or something like that haha. I'm looking forward to the second season in January.

Anyway, this may be sudden, but I have an announcement to make...
Actually, today, I debuted in Comic Grape December edition.
I never thought I'd get to draw my favorite fox girl in an official manga.
I'd like to extend my thanks to whoever was in charge. Thank you very much.

As we're low on time, I'll stop here. Once again, thank you for purchasing this book. I wish everyone a Happy New Year."

This post has been edited by qianweijia: Sep 18 2018, 18:59

[pastebin.com] Here is the proofread script for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18530

I don´t consider this finished yet.
I´m done
Also this is the first time I translated SFX, so I had to look up almost all of them.

This post has been edited by brandmahr: Sep 6 2018, 15:44

Hey, I'm just posting here that I'm interested in doing this bounty

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18337

I've accepted this bounty
forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=163963

I expect to have it translated within 2 weeks, probably faster.

For this bounty
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18337




[pastebin.com] https://pastebin.com/vm6FkPJn


Edit: Its done, just awaiting final confirmation

This post has been edited by Erelzen: Sep 6 2018, 10:46

For this bounty
EHCOVE [R-WORKS (ROS)] Mikuni-san-chi no Miharu-san (Kiss x Sis)>ENG 21p
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18535

Here's the script
[pastebin.com] https://pastebin.com/bKjZXNpL

This post has been edited by Erelzen: Sep 10 2018, 22:34

toromero translation

for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18559

https://e-hentai.org/g/1232035/0fad60bfd1/


pastebin : [pastebin.com] https://pastebin.com/UMFrr9vy



とろめろ
toromero

MeltyMelo
MarshMelo

トロメッロ
toromerro

Wikipedia definition
1.Tromello is a comune (municipality) in the Province of Pavia in the Italian region Lombardy, located about 35 km southwest of Milan and about 25 km west of Pavia. As of 31 December 2004, it had a population of 3,561 and an area of 35.2 km². Tromello borders the following municipalities: Alagna, Borgo San Siro, Cergnago, Gambolò, Garlasco, Mortara, Ottobiano, San Giorgio di Lomellina, Valeggio.


page 3


はじめまして
hajimemashite
遠海と申します
enkai tomoushimasu
初のクイーンズブレイド本です
hatsu no kuiinzubureido hon desu
メローナが一番好きなんですが
meroona ga ichiban suki nandesu ga
メローナ本てあんまり見かけないような気がする。。。？
meroona hon te anmari mikakenai you na ki ga suru...?
もしかして需要ない。。。？
moshikashite shuyou nai...?
いやまさかそんな
iya masaka sonna
......
...万が一そうだとしても
...mangaichi sou dato shite mo
自分が楽しければいいじゃないか！
jibun ga tanoshi kereba ii jyanai ka!
というわけで楽しみました
toiuwakede tanoshimimashita
ではどうぞ!
dewa douzo

Nice to meet you
I am Enkai
This is my first Queen's Blade book
I like Melona the most but...
It feels like there arent that many books featuring her...?
Could it be that there's no demand...?
Nah, that can't be it
......
...even if that's the case
as long as I'm having fun, it's fine!
I had a lot of fun making this book
Please enjoy!


page 4


参ったな。。。いつまでたっても村に着かないぞ
maitta na...itsumade tatte mo mura ni tsukanai zo

I give up...I can't reach the village no matter how far I walk


ねえキミ 道に迷ったのかな？
nee kimi michi ni mayotta no kana?

Hey you, are you lost?


うわっ
uwa-

uwah


page 05


じゃーんっ♡
jyaan-

Ta-daa♡


うわ 化け物？
uwa bakemono?

uwah a monster?


なんだよ 失礼だなあ！
nandayo shitsurei danaa!

Excuse me? How rude!


page 06


ここは沼地の魔女の領地だからね
koko wa numachi no majo no ryouchi dakara ne

This is the Swamp Witch's territory y'know


残念だけど 生きてここを通すわけにはいかないんだっ
zannen dakedo ikite koko o toosu wake niwa ikanainda-

It's a shame but, I can't let you leave this place alive~


なっ 何言ってんだ 冗談じゃないぞ
na- nani itten da joudan jya nai zo

W-what are you saying, that's not funny


ちなみにい力ずくで 通ろうなんて
chinaminii chikarazuku de toorou nante

By the way~ trying to escape through force


バカなこと 考えないほうがいいよ？
baka na koto kangaenai hou ga ii yo?

is futile, shouldn't even consider it, okay?


。。。なーんて
...naan te

...just kidding


んー
nn

hmm


実はちょうど 退屈してた とこだし
jitsu wa choudo taikutsu shiteta toko dashi

Actually I'm just really bored


ボクを楽しませてくれたら
boku o tanoshimasete kure tara

So if you can entertain me


見のがしてあげてもいーよ♡
minogashite agete mo ii yo

I'd be willing to let you go♡


page 07


。。。楽しませるって。。。
...tanoshi maserutte...

...entertain you...


ぷるんっ
purun-

*wobble*/*boing*/*jiggle*


そんなの キミみたいな 芸の無さそうな人間に できることなんて 決まってるじゃん
sonna no kimi mitai na gei no nasasou na ningen ni dekiru koto nante kimatteru jyan

Yup, even a plain looking human like yourself should be able to do it, right?


でもお もし楽しく なかったら
demoo moshi tanoshiku nakattara

Buuut if you're no fun...


殺しちゃうかも♡
koroshichau kamo

I might just kill you♡


待。。。
ma...

Wait...


ごそ ごそ
goso

*rustle*/*rummage*


ほらほら〜 早くっ
hora hora~ hayaku-

Hey c'mon~ hurry up


ぼろ〜っ
boro~-

*limp*/*scuffed*/*tattered*


page 08


お一っ
oo--

ooh


くに くにゅ
kuni kunyu

*rub*


なかなか 立派だねっ どれどれー
naka naka rippa dane- doredoree

Not bad~ Let's see now~


は。。
ha..

hah...


は♡ ふ
ha♡ fu

ahh♡ *huff*


ねと。。
neto..

*drool*


んんっ
nn-

mm


ヌル。。。ッ
nuru...-

*slimey*/*slippery*


page 09


んん
nn

mm


んむ んっ♡
nmu n-♡

mmh mm♡


じゅぷ じゅぷっ
jyupu

*slurp*/*slobber*/*suck*


ニュル ニュル
nyuru

*wiggle*
*rub*/*drip*


んぅ どんどん おっきくなぅ。。。
nu dondon okkiku nau...

mm it's slowly gedding biggie...


にゅぷ
nyupu

*suck*/*glomp*


ぢゅ。。っ
chu..-

*kiss*/*gobble*


れろ
rero

*lick*

ぬれ にゅっ♡
nure nyu-♡

*wet*


。。。の割にキミなんか不満そぉじゃない?
...no wari ni kimi nanka fuman soo jyanai?

...but you look kinda uncomfortable?
dissatisfied glum


にゅるっ♡
nyuru-

*slimey*

ちゅる♡
churu

*slurp*

にゅぷぷぷっ
nyupupupu

*slobber*/*drool*


えっ
e-

eh


page 10


いやっ。。。なんつーか唐突すぎて。。。
iya-...nantsuuka toutotsu sugite...

Well...I mean its kinda sudden...


んぽっ
npo-

*plop*


なんだよーノリ悪いなぁ
nandayoo nori warui naa

Huh~ What a bad attitude


しょーがないっサービスしてあげるよ♡
shooganai- saabisu shite ageru yo

It can't be helped- I'll give you some service♡


まふっ
mafu-

pomf


えい どーだっ♡
ei dooda-

Ei~ How's this♡


むにゅう
munyuu

*squish*

ピク
piku

*twitch*


うわっ。。。すげ。。。柔らかいモノに包まれて。。。
uwa-...suge...yawarakai mono ni kurumarete...

uwah...amazin'...I'm being wrapped up in something warm...


むにゅっ むにゅっ♡
munyu-

*squish*

ヌル ヌル
nuru

*slimey*/*slippery*


あは♡ すごい ビクビクしてるよぉ
aha♡ sugoi bikubiku shiteru yoo

Aha♡ Amazing, it's twitching so much~


page 11


だいぶその気に なった みたいだね♡
daibu sono ki ni natta mitai dane

It looks like it perked up a lot♡


う
u

u/uh/ugh


くにゅ にゅっ
kunyu nyu-

*rubby* *rub*


ビク！
biku!

*twitch*


あは♡ ひゅご
aha♡ hyugo

aha♡ Hugo
huge


はっ はっ
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*

ぺろ ぺろ
pero

*lick*


熱ぅ い。。。♡
atsuu i

So hot...♡


おぉ。。っ 吸いつく 感触が。。。っ
oo...- suitsuku kanshoku ga...-

Ooh...this sticky feeling...


ぺろ♡
pero

*lick*

ゆる♡
yuru

*swirl*


ヌモ ヌモ

*fap*/*fwap*

ヌッ♡

*fap*/*fwap*


はっ♡
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*

ちる ちるっ
chiru

*lick*


ぅわ で。。。出るッ
uwa de...deru-

uwah I'm...c-coming


びくっ
biku-

*twitch*/*jerk*


page 12


あんっ。。。♡
an-...♡

ahn...♡


ドクンッ
dokun-

*throb*

ビュル ビュッ
byuru byu-

*spurt* *splurt*


いっぱい出したねぇ〜
ippai dashite nee~

You came so much~


どろ。。っ
doro..-

*drip*


さてっ
sate-

Now then


それじゃ。。。
sorejya...

Next is...


とろっ
toro-

*melt*


page 13


ねっ どぉ？
ne- doo

ne~ Well?
Hey~ How's this?
Well~


ボクの トロトロ オマンコ♡
boku no torotoro omanko

My melty pussy♡


とろ。。
toro..

*melt*/*drip*

ビク ビク
biku

*twitch*


ほらぁ
horaa

C'monn
Heey


ぴと
pito

*touch*


入れたい？
iretai?

Wanna put it in?


ねぇ 入れたい？
nee iretai?

Hey, do you?


ぬちゅ。。っ
nuchu..-

*press*


ズリュッ
zuryu-

*slip*


あ んっ
a n-

Ah mm


page 14


あぁん♡ チンポ擦れてるっ♡
aan♡ chinpo sureteru-

Ahn♡ I'm rubbing your dick♡


ヌリュ ヌッ
nuryu nu-

*rub*/*grind*


はっ
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


ほらぁ もぉ ヌルヌルだよっ
horaa moo nurunuru dayo-

Loook, I'm already so wet~



ヌルッ
nuru-

*wet*/*sloppy*

ヌモュ ヌモュ

*drip*/*drool*


。。。。。。っ
......-


ぐっ
gu-

*grab*


あ♡
a

Ah♡


page 15


あ
a

Ah


はっ あ♡
ha- a♡

ha ah♡


ビク
biku

*twitch*/*shock*/*surprise*

ズン！
zun

*thrust*


んん
mm

ぬ。。っ
nu..-

*slimey*/*slide*


ビク
biku

*twitch*/*jerk*


はんっ
han-

ha~n


ぱちゅっ
pachu-

*fap*/*fwap*


あは。。。♡ どぉ？
aha...♡ doo

Aha...♡ how is it?
well?


キモチイイよね？
kinochi ii yone?

Feels good right?


ぬ。。ぷ ぬ。。ぷ ぬぶっ
nu...pu nubu

*fap*/fwap*/*slosh*/*squish*


page 16


すげ。。。な。。。中が。。。っプルプルネトネトで。。。
suge...na...naka ga...-purupuru netoneto de...

Amazin'...your i-insides are...like a jelly...


だって ボクは
datte boku wa

That's because I can


はっ
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*

ひくっ
hiku-

*grind*/*twitch*


キミのチンポにぴったりのオマンコになれるんだから♡
kimi no chinpo ni pittari no omanko ni narerun dakara♡

morph my pussy to perfectly fit the shape of your dick♡


は♡
ha

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*

ヌ。。
nu..

*press*

あ
a

ah

ズン
zun

*thrust*

ピクッ
biku

*twitch*

あ ひっ♡
a hi-♡

Ah eek♡


あ♡ いい
a♡ ii

Ah♡ good


ズッ♡ ズッ ズッ♡ ズッ♡
zu-

*fap*/*thrust*


いっ♡ い。。。っ
i-♡ i...-

good♡ good


page 17


いくぅっ♡
ikuu-

Cumming♡


ビク ピクッ
biku piku-

*twitch* *spurt*/*splurt*

びく びく〜！
biku

*spasm*


はぁ。。。キミすごいねっ
haa...kimi sugoi ne-

hah...you're pretty amazing~


ひくっ
*tremble*

はー。。。
haa...

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


すぐにイかされ ちゃ。。。
sugu ni ikasare cha...

I came almost immediatel-...


ぐっ
gu-

*grab*


page 18


ぐいっ
gui-

*pull*/*spread*/*grab*


はっ はー
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


え。。。っ
e...-

Eh...


嘘ぉ もう 復活しちゃ。。。 ふあッ
usoo mou fukkatsu shicha... fua-

No waay you're already erect again...fuah


ヌペ
nupe

*press*

ズンッ
zun-

*thrust*


びくっ
hiku-

hic/eek


ズチュ ズチュ
zuchu

*fap*/*fwap*/*slosh*/*thwap*

ヌッべ ヌッ
nubbe nu-

*fap*/*fwap*/*slosh*/*thwap*


あっ♡ ちょ。。。
a-♡ cho...

Ah♡ Wai-...


あ
a

Ah


はっ はっ
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


待っ
ma-

Wait-


page 19


あっ♡
a-♡

Ah♡


ぐぷ ぐぷっ
gupu

*slosh*/*fwap*/*splish* wet noise

ジュぺッ ジュぺ!
jupe-

*fap*/*fwap*

ビク ビクッ
biku

*twitch*/*shudder*


ヒク ヒクッ
hiku

*twitch*

ヌロオ。。。
nuroo...

*sloppy*/*drool*/*ooze*


ふああ。。っ
fuaa..-

Fuah..


あぁ♡ はぁああっ♡
aa♡ haaaa-♡

Ahh♡ Haaah♡


ズぺンッ
zupen-

*thrust*/*shove*


page 20


はぁぁ。。っ♡
haaa..-

haaaa..♡


ズッ ズッ ズッ ズッ
zu-

*thrust*/*fap*


あーっ♡
aa-♡

ahh♡


ぞく ぞく
zoku

*shake*/*tremble*/*shudder*

はっ はっ
ha-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


すごっ。。。そんなにズボズボされたらぁ♡
sugo-...sonna ni zubozubo saretaraa♡

Amazi-...If you keep thrusting like thatt♡


ずっ
zu-

*slide*

ずちゅっ
zuchu-

*slosh*/*slide*


まっ。。。またっ。。。イッちゃ
ma-...mata-...icha

I'm...cumming...again


ぬぶっ
nubu-

*thwap*/*fap*/*fwap*


ビュルッ
byuru-

*spurt*/*splurt*

ビク ビクン！
biku bikun!

*twitch*/*spasm*


イッ♡
i-

I'm-♡


page 21


ビクッ
biku-

*twitch*/*jerk*/*spasm*/jolt*/*shudder*


いっ。。。ひゃぁあっっ♡
i-...hyaaa--♡

c-...cummies♡
c-...cumming♡


ぞく ぞく
zoku

*shudder*/*tremble*


はーっ♡ はっ。。♡
haa-♡

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


びくっ びくっ
biku-

*twitch*/*tremble*/*quiver*

ぬぽっ
nupo-

*plop*

ドロ。。。
doro...

*drip*/*drool*


はぁっ
haa-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*

ぶる。。っ
buru..-

*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*


あは。。。
aha...

ahah...


page 22


ヌルル
nururu

*slide*/*slip*


！？ なっ
na-

!? wha-


まっ まさか まだっ。。。
ma- masaka mada-...

No- no way, you're still...


ぐっ
gu-

*grab*

ぐぢゅっ ぐぢゅっ
guchu-

*fap*/*fwap*


あ♡
a

ah


無理無理つ もう いいって。。。え
muri muri- mou iitte...e

No way no way enough already...eh


page 23


やあぁあっ。。。
yaaaa-...

yaaAa...


ぐちゅっ
guchu-

*plow*

ぶちゅっ ぶちゅっ
buchu-

*fap*/*fwap*/*plow*/*slosh*/*kiss*


はひ
hahi

hahi/eek


ひいんっ♡
hiin-♡

hiin/eek♡


ぱちゅっ！ぱちゅっ！
pachu-!

*fap*/*fwap*


あひッ♡
ahi-♡

ahi/eek♡


ズッ ズッ ズッ
zu-

*fap*/*thrust*

ぎゅっ。。
gyu-..

*squeeze*/*grab*

ピュ
pyu

pew/*perk*


んッ♡
n-♡

mm♡


page 24


あっ そんな
a- sonna

ah no~


揉んじゃダメだよぉっ
mon jya dame dayoo-

Don't squeeze them~


おっぱい 出ちゃうぅ♡
oppai dechauu

My boobs are squirtingg♡


ぞく ぞくっ ぞくっ♡
zoku

*tremble*/*shudder*/*quiver*

ムニュ ムニュ
munyu

*grope*

ずっ ずっ
zu-

*thrust*

ビュル
byuru

*spurt*/*splurt*


あっ あっ♡
a- a-♡

Ah ah♡


出るっ♡ 出てるぅ♡ ああぁ♡
deru♡ deteru♡ aaa♡

It's coming out♡ I'm squirting♡ Aahh♡


ずっ！
zu-!

*thrust*

ビュ
byu

*spurt*/*splurt*

プにッ
puni-

*squish*

ビュッ
byu-

*spurt*/*splurt*

ピュプ
pyupu

*pew*/*spurt*/*splurt*


やぁあぁ♡ とっ 止まんないッ おっぱいしぼんじゃうぅっ♡
yaaaa♡ to-tomannai- oppai shibon jyauu-♡

yaaaa♡ I-it's not stoppingg my boobs are leaking♡


page 25


あ。。。！！
a...!!

Ah...!!


あ♡
a♡

Ah♡


あああああッ♡
aaaaa-♡

Ahhhhh♡


んはっ♡
nha-♡

nha♡


びくんっ びくん
bikun-

*spasm*/*twitch*

ドプッ
dopu

*spurt*/*splurt*

替わりに 俺のを 注いでやるよっ
kawari ni ore no o sosoide yaru yo-

Don't worry, I'll fill you back up using my dick


ビュ ピュ
byu pyu

*spurt* *splurt*

ドクッ ドクッ ドクッ
doku-

*gush*


あぁあっ♡ 中っ。。。いっぱい。。。混ざっちゃうぅ♡
aAa-♡ naka-...ippai...mazacchauu♡

AaAHH♡ So much...swirling...inside mee♡


page 26


ビク ビクッ
biku

*twitch*/*jolt*

はーっ はっ は。。。っ
haa- ha- ha...-

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*

ピュプッ
pyupu-

*spurt*


あは あッ♡
aha a-♡

Ahah ah♡


まっ。。。 まだ。。。っ♡ イッてるぅ。。。っ
ma-... mada...-♡ itteruu...-

I'm...still...♡ C-cummingg...♡


は♡
ha♡

*hah*/*huff*/*pant*


ひく。。っ
hiku..-

*twitch*/*shudder*/*flinch*/*jerk*/*spasm*

びく
biku

*twitch*

ぶるっ
buru-

*tremble*/*shake*/*shudder*

ビュッ ビュル
byu- byuru

*spurt*/*splurt*/*drip*/*gush*/*ooze*


page 27


はーっ 気持ちよかったぁ♡
haa- kimochi yokattaa♡

Haah that felt so goood♡
Phew was


ぴこ ぴこ
pikopiko

*perk*/*wag*


じゃあ 約束通り ここを 通してもらうぞ
jyaa yakusokudooru koko o tooshite morau zo

Soo, as promised, let me pass through here


あっ ダメ♡ キミの事 気に入っちゃったから 飽きるまでここで 飼ってあげる♡
a- dame♡ kimi no koto kiniicchatta kara akiru made koko de katte ageru♡

Ah, no way♡ I took an intrest in you so you're not going anywhere until I grow tired of you♡


。。。。。。え？
......e?

......eh/huh?


page 28


読んで下さってありがとうございました！
yonde kudasatte arigatougozaimashita!
少しでも楽しんでいただけていれば嬉しいです
sukoshi demo tanoshinde itadakete ireba ureshii desu

久しぶりのエロ漫画で
hisashiburi no ero manga de
勝手が思い出せなかったりもしたのですが楽しかっだ！
katte ga omoidasenakattari mo shita no desuga tanoshikatta!
ほんとはもっといろいろさせたかった
honto wa motto iroiro sasetakatta
とろかしたりとろけたり。。。
toroka shitari toroke tari...

沼地組が好きなので
numachi gumi ga suki nanode
今度はメナスとかアイリとか描きたいです
kondo wa menasu toka airi toka kakitai desu
あとカトレア母さん
ato katorea kaa-san
どこかで見かけた際にはよろしくしていただければ幸いです
dokoka de mikaketa sai niwa yoroshiku shiteitadakireba saiwai desu

とりあえず原稿が終わったので
toriaezu genkou ga owatta node
晴れてスパイラルカオスで遊びたいと思います！
harete supairaru kaosu de asobitai toomoimasu!
それでは！
soredewa!


遠海
enkai



Thank you for reading!
I'll be glad if you enjoyed it even a little

It's been a while since my last ero-manga
I'm a little rusty but it was fun drawing it!
I actually wanted to draw more scenes
featuring melting or dissolving...

I like the Marshland gang so
Next time I would like to draw Menace or Airi
and also mommy Cattleya
If you happen to see me somewhere feel free to come over and say hi, I'd be delighted


For now the manuscript is finished so
I want to take my time playing Sprial Chaos!
Well then!/Signing off!


Enkai