Hand Maid May v.2. All changes to the script are Pureenergy's suggested edits, verbatim. No other changes have been made.
Translation Bounty:
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https://e-hentai.org/g/36208/6b73ce0911/Script Page:
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=5117278Page 2Narration: Handmaid May was, as usual, cleaning house when Saotome Kazunari wasn’t at home, when she was visited by Kazunari's classmates, Daimon and Tadokoro.
May: Well, if it isn't Daimon and Tadokoro? Right now Kazunari is helping Professor Yumi with research. Can you come back in a little while?
Daimon: Oh, we know you're all alone right now.
Tadokoro: That's why we came.
May: Eh...?
Narraration: With those words, the two men started towards May...
Page 3Panel 1
Balloon 1: Don't move, May-chan!
Balloon2: Ah!
Panel 2 Balloon 1: Tits... May-chan's tits...
Balloon 2: Wha... What are you...
Panel 3
SFX: squeeze
Balloon 1: Kyaa!
Panel 4Balloon 1: So soft, even outside your clothes...
Balloon 2: S...stop it, stop it, please...! aAAAH!
SFX1:grab
SFX2:squeeze
Page 4
Panel 1
Balloon 1: Under your clothes... softer...
SFX:Ziiiip!
Panel 2
Bubble 1: Eeyaaa!
Panel 3
Balloon 1: mmmm...
Balloon 2: Aaah...
SFX: suck
Panel 4
Balloon 1: Please...
SFX: lick
Panel 5
Balloon 1: Please stop that.
SFX1: lick SFX2: lick
Panel 6
Balloon 1: Ah! Balloon 2: This is so humiliating...
SFX1: suck SFX2: suuckk SFX3: squeeze
Page 5Panel 1
Balloon 1: Wh...what...
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Kyaa!
SFX: whoosh
Panel 3
SFX: whomp
Panel 4
Balloon 1: May-chan, why don't you lie down, ya?
Balloon 2: Aa...
Panel 5
Balloon 1: STOP! [Dame!]
SFX: spread
Page 6Panel 1
Balloon 1: This... This is May-chan's...
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Oh please, please ...
Balloon 2: Don't look at my...
Panel 3
SFX 1: squish
Panel 4
Balloon 1: Aah!
Panel 5
Balloon 1: mm... mmm..
SFX 1: lap lap
Balloon 2: Aah Ahh
Balloon 3: Stop... ngh Stop it...
Panel 6
SFX 1: lick lick
Panel 7
Balloon 1: Aaaa!
Panel 8
SFX 1: drip
Panel 9
Balloon 1: Ha
Balloon 2: Ha
Panel 10
SFX: squeeze
Page 7Panel 1
Balloon 1: Oww..
Balloon 2: It's going inside...
Balloon 3: I'm going to stick it in you!
SFX: stretch
Panel 2
Balloon 1: STOP! [Japanese: DAME!] Please noooo..
Panel 3:
Balloon 1: AHHH!
SFX: stretch
Page 8Panel 1
Balloon 1: Oww... OW!
Balloon 2: It's your first time, huh?
Balloon 3: I'm the first man inside of you!
Balloon 4:May... May!
SFX1: squish SFX2: squish SFX3: sploosh
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Ah, Ah! Balloon 2: Aaaa! SFX1: stretch SFX2: squish
Page 9Panel 1
Balloon 1: Eeya! Take it out, please get it out of me!
Balloon 2: Wait... I'll take it out... After I come...
SFX 1: squish SFX 2: drip
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Ugh, almost!
Balloon 2: No, wait, don't come there!
SFX 1: shoot SFX 2: sploosh
Panel 3
Balloon 1: Please don't…! Stop…! Not inside of me!!
Balloon2: NOooo...
Panel 4
Balloon 1: Enngh! Balloon 2: EYAAAHH!! SFX 1: squeeze SFX2: stretch
Page 10Panel 1
Balloon 1: huh, Balloon 2: uh, Balloon 3: Ohhh...
SFX 1: pump SFX 2: pump SFX 3: pump
Panel 2
Balloon 2: Ah... So good, so satisfying, May.
SFX 1: splash SFX 2: drip
Panel 3
Balloon 1: Ha,
Balloon 2: So, excuse me...
Balloon 3: Ha,
Balloon 4: There's no reason to quit after only one turn, is there?
Balloon 5: It's my time to have a little fun with May.
Panel 4
Narration: A short time later-
Panel 5
Balloon 1: Ahh... At last it's my turn with your pretty little mouth.
Balloon 2: Nnng-
SFX 1: stretch
Panel 6
Balloon 1: Let's see, we've cleaned out this place pretty good... Let's see if we can step it up a notch.
Balloon 2: How about we pay May's neighbors a visit?
SFX 1: streeetch SFX 2: stretch SFX 3: plop
Page 11Page 12Panel 1
SFX: rub rub
Panel 2
SFX: stretch
Panel 3
SFX: squeeze
Panel 4
SFX 1: poke SFX 2: poke
Page 13Panel 1
SFX 1: squeeze SFX 2: stretch SFX 3: poke
Panel 2
SFX 1: streeetch SFX 2: squish
Panel 3
SFX 1: spurt SFX 2: plop
Page 14Panel 1
Balloon 1: Kei-San!
Balloon 2: Aah!
SFX 1: squeeze
Panel 2
Balloon 1: You're so soft... top and bottom.
Balloon 2: What... what you're doing right now, AH! You'd better... you'd better stop it...
SFX 1: grab SFX 2: grab SFX 3: squish
Panel 3
Balloon 1: Kei-san, I just can't hold off, I'm going to stick it in!
Balloon 2: W...wait, anywhere but there. Don't...
Balloon 3: Serious little bookworm Kei-san, what a hot body you have underneath those clothes. I just can't wait!
SFX 1: poke
Page 15Panel 1
SFX 1: enter
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Aaah!
Panel 3
Balloon 1: Kei-San, amazing!
Balloon 2: It's so good inside of you... I'm... going to...
Balloon 3: N..NO! Please, at least don't do it inside of me!
SFX1: squish SFX2: poke SFX3: sploosh
Panel 4
Balloon1: Ungh!
Balloon2: NooOOoo!
SFX1: spurt spurt SFX2: squirt
Page 16Panel 1
Balloon1: Mami-San, I can see it right thru your panties.
Balloon2: You'd better stop that right away... p-please?
Balloon3: H-Hey, look how wet your panties are becoming.
SFX1: rub rub
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Ya, I see you like that, don't you?
Balloon 2: Let's just pull these off.
Balloon 3: Hey, you better...
SFX 1: stretch...
Panel 3
Balloon 1: I just can't wait...
Balloon 2: !
Balloon 3: W...Wait!
Panel 4
Balloon 1: Mami-San!
Balloon 2: Stooop AaaH!
SFX 1: poke
Page 17Panel 1
Balloon 1: Mami-San... I'm going to come inside you, understand?
Balloon 2: Ah, Ah! In... inside?
SFX 1: squirt
SFX 2: sploosh
Panel 2
Balloon 1: Mami-San... I... ugh...
Balloon 2: Ah, eyah...
Balloon 3: No, don't! [Dame!] Pull it out! Aah!
Panel 3
Balloon 1: Mami-San, you were fantastic!
Balloon 2: I said not to do it inside.
Balloon 3: We're sorry, Mami-San. Let's try it again now...
Balloon 4: Haa Haa
SFX1: spurt SFX2: drip
Page 18Page 19Hello, everyone, Fred Kelly here. This is the completed version of the summer edition, "Hand Maid May." At the time I had finished this project, I had everything completed outside of the cover page. I am still working on completing the cover page as this is about to go to press. I apologize from my home where I am writing this.
PRINTING PRESS EMPLOYEES. I'M SORRY. [SUMIMASEN.] My bad. • Below is the dialog layout for Rena's pages. Due to my layout, there wasn't enough space to fit the dialog in. This is a bit hard to read, but you can match the dialog in with the drawings if you choose.
Page 1 Panel 1 Tadokoro and Daimon threaten to hurt Ikariya unless Rena cooperates.
Tadokoro: I can see the shape of your pussy thru your panties.
Rena: Aaah, help!
Panel 2 Tadokoro: It feels so good and soft... Hey, what's up with this little suit?
Panel 3 Rena: Gah, no! Aahh!
Panel 4 Rena: Hck! N-noo...
Tadokoro: Listen, Big brother Tadokoro's going to stick his dick in here and widen it up a bit. Looks like this is going to hurt some, huh?
Page 2 Panel 1 Rena: Ow-ow-ow... Stop it, it hurts!
Tadokoro: What a tiny little hole you have, Rena-chan! Big brother's about to shoot his load inside of you!
Panel 2 Rena: No, stop, waaiiit! [Dame!]
Tadokoro: Ugh-
Panel 3 Rena: Aaa...
Tadokoro: Thank you [Arigatou], Rena, that was amazing. Little Rena was the tightest of all.
Daimon: And we lied about having Ikariya. Well, then, where can we find a bit more fun?
Melon Frappe Half and, half "HMM"
Published 12.30 (Sun) 2001
BY FRED=KELLY (In ART THEATER)
〒155-0031 4-4-7 Kitazawa Setagayaku Tokyo. JAPAN