[X] My Assistant

Accepted the bounty for [50PointCaliper (Usami Suruga)] Suguha -Kouhen- (SOA).

here you can check some pages for qc:
[www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/fnr9qd

here you can check some pages for qc:
[www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/fnr9qd

I'm on a netbook 400 miles away from my main computer, but from what I can see this looks awesome. Are the JPGs working out for you source-wise? If you want, they're pretty huge and of course are unedited but I can send the original TIFFs your way.

Awesome stuff!

A nice short SOA script for (SC57) [Adulterator (Kano)] Oniichan dakedo Itoko dakara ♥ Kozukuri shitemo ♥ Mondai naiyone (Sword Art Online)

https://e-hentai.org/g/544155/2324ad7072/

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/imzc9n18hv5h9b0/(SC57)_[Adulterator_(Kano)]_Oniichan_dakedo_Itoko_dakara_♥_Kozukuri_shitemo_♥_Mondai_naiyone_(Sword_Art_Online).txt

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11117

P4
おにいちゃんの　股問付近が　さっきからこう。。。
Oniichan's crotch has been like this for a while...
こ、これはやはり男の人生理現象！！
Th, this must be man's physiological phenomena!!
もうすぐお母さんが来るのに、このままでいいのかな。。。。。。？
Mother is going to return soon, is it alright to leave oniichan like this?
いいわけ無いよね　私だって今　凄く気まずいもん
no, it isn't. it will be awkward if mother see this.
何とかしてあげないと
i have to do something
お兄ちゃん。。。。。。お、起きないよね
oniichan... won't wake up soon, right?
えっと。。。。。。どうしたらいいのかな？　確か、射精すると普通に戻るんだよね
umm... what should i do? if i'm not mistaken, it will be normal again after ejaculating...
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
考えても仕方ない実践あるのみっ　とりあえず、えいっ！
thinking about it won't help, i just have to do it. First i have to, ei!

P5
前にクラスの男子があたしにこういう風にされたいって話してるの　聞いちゃって。。。。。。
i have been hearing that boys in my class were talking, that they want me to do something like this...
その時は凄く不愉快だってけど、いいよ　お兄ちゃんなら。。。。。。
it makes me feel uncomfortable, but if it's oniichan...
乳首擦れて。。。。。。。
my nipples are rubbing...
はアッ
haa
はあっ
haa
何か変な気分になって来ちゃって。。。
weird feeling is coming...
はー
haa
はあっ
haa
わっ
uwa
これがせ。。。。。。。。。。。。///
this is se...
お兄ちゃんまだ元気。。。　一回じゃ駄目なのか。。。
oniichan's still... is it not enough...

P6
し、仕方ないよね緊急事態だしっ
I, it can't be helped, i have to do it fast..
お兄ちゃんはじめて。。。かな？
oniichan... is it your first time...
はー
haa
はあっ
haa
あたしが相手じゃ嫌かな？
is it allright if it's me?
ほら、さきっぽが入。。。。。。っ　起きない。。。と　お兄ちゃんの　初。。。めて、あたしが　奪っちゃう
よ？
look, the tip is entering... if you don't wake up... i will ta.. ke your first time.
もうすぐぜんぶ入っちゃうよっ
all of it will be inside me soon...
はアッ
haa
あッ
ahh
ぜん。。。。。。ぶ。。。。。。　はいった。。。。。。。。。！！
it's... inside me... entirely...!!
お兄ちゃん。。。。。。
oniichan...
。。。。。。。。。。。。すき
...i love you.
。。。。。。きこえないのが 分かってる時しか 言えないの
i can only say it, when i'm sure you can't hear it.
はー
haa
はあっ
haa
弱虫だね、あたし
i'm such a coward.

P7
お兄ちゃんとえっちしてるっ
i'm doing lewd things with oniichan..
はアッ
haa
はー
haa
はあっ
haa
お兄ちゃんっ
oniichan..
あー
ahh
お兄ちゃん
oniichan
あ
ah
はア
haa
あ。。。あ。。。あアっ
ah...ah...aah..
あッ
ah..
はあ
haa
はアッ
haa
お兄ちゃんのが中に。。。。。。っ
oniichan's inside me...
はー
haa
あっ抜けちゃ。。。。。。っ
ah, it came out...
だめえっ
no...
はあっ
ha..
んしょ。。。。。。っと
here......mn

P8
はアッ
haa
あッ
ahh
あっ
ahh
はア
haa
はあっ
haa
早く起きないとお兄ちゃんの初めて全部奪っちゃうからあっ
hurry wake up, or i will steal all of oniichan's first time..
はあっ
haa
はー
haa
はー
haa
はあっ
haa
あー
aah
はー
haa
あ。。。。。やっと、普通に戻ったあ。。。。。。
ah......at last, it's normal again...
はあっ
haa..
もう、こんなに射精したら赤ちゃん出来ちゃうよ。。。。。。
oniichan, if you came like this, i could get pregnant...
なんだか和人が
it's only a day
たった一日で妙にやつれたような。。。。。。
but somehow he looks really worn out
そ、そうかなっ
re, really?
おしまい
finnish

editing bounty posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11141

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 29 2014, 18:03

Doing (SC57) [Adulterator (Kano)] Oniichan dakedo Itoko dakara ♥ Kozukuri shitemo ♥ Mondai naiyone (Sword Art Online). It's really short, should be done soon.

here you can check some pages for qc:
[www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/fnr9qd

Back on my proper desktop with 24" monitor. Are these quick edits as proofs of concept or final works? The speech bubble cleaning is pretty...jarring. It's like, the part that covers up the original text, yeah, it's there...but if you're gonna bother with that, why not just normalize the entire bubble so it's not nearly as obvious?

Of course that critique means nothing if these are just PoC.

just PoC. i wanted to show, how i work on the bg, the lines etc. as you and Red_Piotrus asked for.


as you can see here, the bubbleproblem is no more:
[www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/8h4ljv

please tell me, if you see more errors. if you say its ok, then i'm done.

just PoC. i wanted to show, how i work on the bg, the lines etc. as you and Red_Piotrus asked for.
as you can see here, the bubbleproblem is no more:
[www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/8h4ljv

please tell me, if you see more errors. if you say its ok, then i'm done.

Yeah then I apologize, this looks fabulous. Thank you sir, you are a far greater editor than I. Thank you for bringing this translation to the masses! Now, take our e-dosh! You deserve it!

P.S. Hahaha, I noticed you kept my TL commentary. I want to leave it up to Red_Piotrus on whether or not that actually ends up in the final gallery. I put those comments into the TL so that you, the editor, were not confused by the empty bubbles thinking that maybe something got skipped or my scanner messed up. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) But while I put 'em in for editing's sake, I'll let Red decide if they're something the reader should see.

I am always fond of TL comments (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Will post to galleries as soon as we get the EHCOVE style credits. Nice job, people!

ok, here is the missing credits page

ok, here is the missing credits page

ok, here is the missing credits page

(IMG:[s14.directupload.net] http://s14.directupload.net/images/141002/8eqgjlc8.jpg)

ok, here is the missing credits page

(IMG:[s14.directupload.net] http://s14.directupload.net/images/141002/8eqgjlc8.jpg)

grrrr.....

Error 503
Error 503
Error 503
...

where is the f****g delet-button...

I've PMed you the script (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif).

Great. The thread for my Chinese to English TLs is here but it's a good idea to mention this here; I'll post the editing bounties here shortly for reference, too.

EDIT

editing bounties for those two scrips are here

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11115
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11314

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 28 2014, 03:33

Bounty accepted for:

EHCOVE [Kaicho-Maniax (Nanami Yasuna)] Absolute Zero (TIGER & BUNNY) -> english

Work commencing (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11118
https://e-hentai.org/g/518011/64f3c440da/

[Takane no Hanazono (Takane Nohana)] Silica no Asoko wo Okashimakuri! (Sword Art Online) [Digital]

５
パーティーとケンカ別れして[迷いの森]を単独突破しようとしたあたしは
After I got into quarrel with my party and separated, i tried to force my way through the Forest of Wandering alone.
ピナ
Pina!
ドランクエイプ三匹に苦戦し大切なパートナー[ピナ]が撲殺され
Having a hard time fighting three Drunk Ape at once, my dearest partner, Pina, beaten to death.
・・・すまなかった　君の友達助けられなかった・・・
...sorry, I couldn't save your friend...
だけど　心アイテムが残っていれば蘇生の可能性がある
but, if there is any remaining item from it, there is still a chance to save it.
そんなピンチを救ってくれたのが
The man who save me was
ドランクエイプ二匹を一撃で薙ぎ払ったキリトさんでした
able to mow down four Drunk Ape in one strike. Kirito-san.
ピナを失い途方に暮ているあたしに
As I was strucken by the loss
ほっほんとですか！？
R-Really!?
使い魔蘇生用アイテムを取りに行く手助けを申し出てくれました
he offered to me his assistance to get the Familiar Revival item
あたしシリカっていいます
I'm Silica
よろしくな
Nice to meet you

６
あたしとキリトさんはひとまず三十五層の主街区で一晩休み
After that Kirito-san and me spend a night at floor 35 to rest
翌日目的地へ向かう事に・・・
as next day we headed to our destination...
おやすみ
Good night
おやすみなさい
Good night
・・・ベッドってこんなに広かったんだ
...the bed felt so spacious.
ピナと友達になってから毎晩ふわふわの体を抱いて寝てたから
Since Pina became my partner, we always slept together.
閉鎖世界SAOに囚われ不安に押し潰されそうになっていたあたしを
I always feel overwhelmed by anxiety being trapped in this sealed world.
ピナが慰めてくれていた
Pina was the only one to console me.
・・・ピナ
...Pina

７
唯一のパートナーであり友達だったピナを
Pina was my only friend and partner
自分のせいで死なせてしまった・・・
Because of my own fault Pina died...
ピナ・・・
Pina...
ピナ・・・
Pina...
悲しい時　寂しい時
When I feel sad or lonely,
何度ピナに慰めてもらった事だろう
Pina always there to console me.
ピナの事を想い出すと勝手に手が動いちゃう・・・
Remembering Pina made my hand move on its own.
んっ
Mn！
あっ
Ah!
んっ
Mn!
うん
Uhn!
ピナがいないのにこんなに濡れちゃってる
I got this wet even though Pina is not here.
あっ・・・
Ah...!
でも・・・・・・指だけじゃヤだ
but... with only my fingers.
もっとピナを感じたいよ
I want to feel Pina more.
ピナ・・・
Pina...

８
あっ・・・
Ah...
ぴっピナ・・・
P-pina...
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ピナのふわふわが気持ちいい・・・・・・
Pina's feather feels so good...
じっ焦らさないで早くオマンコ触って・・・
Don't tease me, hurry my pussy...
あ　あぁっ
Ah　Aaah!
シリカのオマンコにぃ・・・
Silica's pussy...
ちょちょっと撫でられただけで
I...I brushed it gently
軽くイっちゃったぁ・・・
and came a bit...

９
あっ　あっ
Ah! Ah!<3
・・・舐めてぇ
...Lick me
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ピナの舌でシリカのオマンコ舐めて欲しいよぉ・・・・・・はあうう！
Silica want Pina's tongue...... Hauuu!
もっと舐めてぇぇ・・・・・・っ
Lick me more......!
あっ
Ah!
んっ
Mn!
んっ
Mn!
もっとぉ・・・ピナぁ・・・
More... Pina...
はぁー
Haa
はぁー
Haa
もっもう・・・我慢できないよ・・・
I can't... hold it anymore...
くちゅっ

おちん・・・ちん・・・・・・ピナのオチンチンが欲しいのぉ・・・
P-penis...I want Pina's inside me...<3
んっ！！
Mn!!
は、挿入ってるぅ・・・
I-it's coming in...
ピナのオチンチン挿入ってきちゃうよぉ・・・
Pina's dick is penetrating me...<3

１０
ぴっピナのオチンチンが擦れてぇ・・・・・・
Pi-pina's dick is rubbing me......
気持ちいい・・・シリカの膣内の奥まで届いちゃってるよ
Feels good... it's deep inside Silica's pussy <3
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
も・・・もっとぉ　もっと激しく突いてぇ・・・
M-more... thrust me harder...<3
シリカのオマンコが壊れちゃうくらい・・・
until you break Silica's pussy...
あっ
Ah!
はっ
Uh!
あっ
Ah!
ピナのオチンチンでぇシリカを滅茶苦茶にちてぇ～～
Pina's dick ish wreaking me~~<3
しゅっしゅごいぃ・・・
A-amaasshing...
はっ
Uh!
あっ
Ah!
オマンコ突かれながらぁクリトリス舐められちゃってぇ
Thrusting me and licking my clitoris
まっまた・・・イっちゃうぅぅ～～っ
I... come again~~! <3
ひっ
Hi!

１１
だっ射精してぇ・・・<3
Let it out...
あっ　あぁーっ
Ah! Aaah!
ピナの専用マンコにザーメン中出ししてぇ・・・　ピナの赤ちゃん孕ませてぇぇ～～
Let it out inside my Pina's only pussy... impregnate me~~!<3
・・・こんなんじゃ満足できないよ
It can't satisfy me
ピナの本当のオチンチンが・・・
Pina's dick...
早く・・・ほしいい・・・　よ・・・・・・
Hurry... I want it...

１２
シリカ　起きてるかい？
Silica, are you awake?
そろそろ行かないか
Are you ready to go?
うそっ寝過ごしちゃった！？
uwah! I overslept!?
いっ今　行きますっ！
I-I'm getting ready now!
おっおはようございます
G-Good morning.
おはよう　準備は　いいかい？
Are you ready?
はいっ
Yes.
じゃ　行こう
Let's go.

１３
四十七層
Floor 47
昨日みたいなパニックは起こさない
I feel alot better than yesterday.
自分に出せる全力で戦うんだ
I will fight with my best.
待っててね　ピナ
Wait for me Pina.
もうすぐ生き返らせてあげるからね・・・・・・
I will revive you......
ぎゃあぁぁ～っ！？　ぎゃっ
Gyaaa!? Gya!
きっ気持ちワルーっ！！　なに　これーっ！？
It's gross!! What is this!?
だっ大丈夫だってそいつはすごく弱いから簡単に・・・
C-calm down, it's weak...
だ・・・だって　気持ち悪いんですぅ～っ
B-but, it's gross~
そいつで気持ちわるがってたらこの先に進んだら大変だぞー
If you feel gross now with that, the next area would be worse.

１４
こっこの・・・
T-this thing...
いい加減に・・・
Stop it already...
ひゃぁんっ！？
Hyaah!?
えっ？まっまさか・・・
Eh? I-It can't be...
ぱっパンツ　履き忘れてるーーっ！！
I-I forgot to wear my pants!!!
あんっ
Ahn!
やだ・・・　昨日満足できなかったから
No... I couldn't get myself satisfied last night...
まだ少し濡れちゃってるぅ・・・
I still a bit wet down there...
やっやめてぇ・・・っ
S-stop it...!
やぁっ
No!
ツタを切って下りないと・・・
I have to cut these vines...
でも・・・　左手を離したら　キリトさんに丸見えになっちゃう・・・
But.. if i let go of my skirt, Kirito-san would be able to see me down there
ちょっ！？
W-wai!?

１５
きゃあっ！？
Kya!?
きっキリトさん見ないでぇ～っ！
Ki-Kirito-san don't look~!
見ないで助けてぇ～っ！！
Don't look! Help me~!
そ・・・それはちょっと無理だよ
T...that's impossible.
っ！？
...!?
ひぃっ！！
Hii!!
なっ何これベトベトして・・・っ！？
W-what is this sticky thing...!?
落ち着いて
Calm down.
そいつの縛りは大した事ない　花の下の白い所を狙えば簡単に倒せる
That things' bind is weak, if you aim the white part below the flower you can defeat it easily.
そっそんなこと言われても・・・・・・っ
E-even if you say that...

１６
やっ
Yah!
あっ
Ah!
おっぱいとぉ・・・おまんこぉ　吸われちゃってるぅぅ・・・・・・っ
My chest... and my pussy... being sucked...!
かっ感じ過ぎちゃうからぁ吸っちゃぁぁ・・・・・・らめぇぇぇ～～～～っ！！ちっ乳首にぃ　雌しべが絡み付
いてぇ・・・　んうぅ・・・っ！
I-it feels too goooood!... don't suck iiiit~~~~!! the buds are coiling my nipples... Uuu...!!
ひゃっ！？
Hya!?
そ・・・そんなに強くぅ引っ張らないでぇ・・・・・・
D..Don't pull it hard......
もっもう　ぁ・・・あたし・・・
I-I can't... hold anymore...
おかしくなっちゃうよぉ・・・
It make me crazy...
あひっ！？
Ahii!?
そ・・・そこは・・・　やめ・・・っ
T-that place is... no, stop...!
あぁっ！くっクリトリスぅシゴかれてりゅぅぅ・・・っ
Aaah! I-it's stroking my clitoris...!
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ほ・・・ほんとにっおかしくなっちゃうぅぅ・・・
It really make me crazy...

１７
き、キリトさんの前で恥ずかしいのにぃ・・・
I-in front of Kirito-san, this shameful...
き、気持ちひぃ・・・
F-feels good...<3
こんな・・・っ気持ちひぃぃの初めてぇぇ・・・
it's my first time... to feel this good...
ふぅ　んぅーっ
Uu Nguu!
あくぅっ！？
Kuuh!?
おっお尻にぃツタがぁ・・・・・・
Th-the vine is on my anus...
ふぐぅっ！
Guuh!
ツタちんぽ　ぉ・・・おいひぃ・・・
Vine's dick... derihyuus...<3
先っぽから甘い汁が溢れてるぅ・・・
Sweet liquid is overflowing from the tip...
もっもう・・・イっちゃう・・・
I-I'll... comee...
なっ何で？　もうちょっとで・・・　っ！？
W-what happen? Just a little more I woul...!?
いっいや・・・そんなピナより太いの挿入れられたら・・・
N-no.. if something thicker than Pina's penetrate me...
んっ　んぅー
Mn! Mnnn

１８
は・・・入ってるぅ～っ！
I-it's penetrating me~!
んっ　んぅー！！
Mn! Nghh!!
モンスターの太い舌がピナ専用オマンコにぃ　入っちゃってるよぉぉ～～っ！！
A monster's thick tongue is entering Pina's exclusive pussy~~!!
き・・・気持ちぃ・・・いぃぃ・・・
I-it... f-feels... good...<3
んっ
Mn!
んふっ
Ngh!
舌のブツブツがオマンコの中引っ掻かれながらぁ・・・・・・っ
The tongue's bumps are scratching my inside......!
お尻のツタと挟まれてるぅ・・・
It's touching the one inside my ass...<3
か・・・身体中ぅ　掻き回されてぇぇ・・・・・・
M-my whole body... stirred up...

１９
いっイクぅ・・・
C-coming...
イク・・・っ
Come...!
イクっ！
come!
イクっ！
Coming!
んふっ
Ngh!
ピナ以外のモンスターでイっちゃ・・・・・・
A monster other than Pina gonna make me cum......
花の下の白い所を狙えっ！
Hit the white part below the flower now!

２０
短剣スキル　ファッドエッジ
Dagger Skill Fad Edge
・・・見ました？
...You watched?
・・・見てない
...No, I didn't.
じゃ、この膨らみは何ですか？
Then, what is this?
そっそれは！？
T-that is!?
あたしの見てこんなになっちゃったんですか？
You got this hard from watching me?
すごいドキドキする・・・
Amazing, it is throbbing...
イク寸前だったから・・・？
Is it about to come...?
・・・オチンチン
...dick
オチンチン欲しいよぉ・・・
I want dick...
しっシリカ！？
S-Silica!?

２１
しょっぱくてちょっと苦い
It's salty and a bit bitter.
これが男性のオチンチンの味・・・
This is a man's penis taste...
でも・・・　嫌いじゃないかも
but... i don't hate it.
キリトさん・・・ん　どうでふか？
Kirito-san...mmn how is it?
もっもう・・・イキそうだよ・・・
I-I... gonna come...
ぷはっ
Fuah!
し・・・シリカ・・・？
Si... Silica...?
イケずにおあずけされる気持ち・・・分かりますか？
You are on the verge...right?
早く助けてくれなかったからこんなになっちゃたんですよ・・・
Because you didn't help me earlier, I become like this...
責任取ってくださいキリトさん・・・
Please take responsibility, Kirito-san...<3

２２
あっ　ひうっ
Ah! Hii!
は・・・初めて・・・人の　オチン・・・チン・・・
M-my first time... with a man's penis...<3
ピナより・・・気持ちいぃぃ・・・
It feels... better than Pina's...<3
シリカは使い魔とHしてたのか
Silica, you do ecchi things with your familiar?
あっ
Ah!
・・・はい　してましたぁ・・・
...Yes, I do...
使い魔をオナニーの道具にするなんて・・・
Using familiar to satisfy yourself...
とんだ変態ビーストテイマーだな
What a pervert Beast Master you are...
あひぃっ
Hiii!
そ・・・そんな・・・　変態だなんてぇ・・・
N-no... I'm not a pervert...

２３
そんな変態さんにはおしおきに中出しだっ！
To punish a pervert like you, I will come inside!
シリカの膣内にぃいっぱぃぃ・・・なっ中出しぃ・・・
C-come inside Silica's...<3 a lot...<3
いっぱい・・・おしおきしてくださいぃぃ～～っ！！
P-please... punish me more~~!!

２４
その後色々あったものの・・・
After that lots of thing happens...
蘇生アイテム[プネウマの花]を手に入れ
I got the revival item (Flower of Pneuma).
ピナを生き返らせる事ができました
I could finally revive Pina.
キリトさんはすぐ最前線に戻ってしまいました
Kirito-san immidiately returned to the front line.
本当は連れて行って欲しかった・・・
Actually I wanted to come along...
でも・・・あたしが行っても手足まといにしかならないから
But... with my skill I will only be a burden
キリトさんと別れて数日たまに寂しい時もあるけれど・・・
It has been sometimes after I parted with Kirito-san, but when I feel lonely...
そんな時はピナと
with Pina...
キリトさんから貰った短剣があるので大丈夫です
and the dagger that I recieved from Kirito-san, I will be alright <3
ぴっピナのオチンチンとぉ・・・　キリトさんのぉオチンチンがぁぁ・・・
Pina's penis... Kirito-san's penis...
んっ
Mn!
はぁーっ
Haaa!
お腹の中でぇ擦れあってぇぇ・・・気持ちひぃのぉぉぉ～～っ
Rubbing inside my belly... It feels so good~~!<3

25
はじめましてorこんにちわ。
Hi, nice to meet you.

印刷所の「触手割」が利用できず、ガッカリな たかねのはなです
I'm Takane no hana, who disappointed because of not getting the "Tentacle Rebate" from printing shop.

シリカ本、いかがでしたでしょうか？
Do you like this, Silica book?

タイトルに相当悩んだり、当初マンガ２２P予定が２０Pに減り
I was quite troubled choosing the title. At first it was planned as 22 page, but then it reduced to 20 page.
多少の余裕ができたので触手責めを
But then I got time to spare, so I made these tentacles
増やしつつ２２Pに戻し
I increase it slowly to 22 page again
増ページ分の前後の辻棲合わせに 時間が掛かってしまったため キリトとのカラミを２P減らして・・・・・・
The interlude was taking too much time, so I reduced 2 page of Kirito's intercourse......
とか、やっていたらキリトが挿入から果てるまで たった２Pの超早漏にｗ さすがSAO内一番の反応速度！ｗｗ
Then I realized, Kirito's intercourse was only 2 page and he came lol. As expected from the fastest reaction speed player in SAO! rofl

さて、次は冬コミになってしまいそうです。
Well, next is Winter Comicket.
本当は夏コミ後に凌辱アスナ本とか出したかったんですがしばらく仕事三昧な感じかな～と。
Actually I had a plan to make an Asuna rape book after Summer Comicket, but I think I'll concentrate for a while on my work.

夏コミ前にコアマガジンからは 初となる単行本が発売されています。
Before the summer comicket, I got my first sale on my tankoubon.
同人と合わせ、商業の方も よろしくお願いします
Best regards for other artists and those in the business.

I think this one is ready for editing, through some minor proofing comments may appear shortly

editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11638

Proofreading. A question to future users of the script - later, both "coming/come" and "cum/cumming" is used. Might I suggest picking one side...I'll leave it to editor's/TN's discretion.

Also, I thought Silica refered to Kirito as -kun? Any hardcore SAo buffs know?

Red for changed stuff
<QC:...comments will be on this>
If something needs to be nuked by N.Korea and USA replaced, I'll strikethrough and add the replacement with red

[Takane no Hanazono (Takane Nohana)] Silica no Asoko wo Okashimakuri! (Sword Art Online) [Digital]

５
After I got into quarrel with my party and separated, I tried to force my way through the Forest of Wandering alone.

Pina!

Having a hard time fighting three Drunk Apes at once, my dearest partner, Pina, was beaten to death.

...sorry, I couldn't save your friend...

but, if there is any remaining item from it, there is still a chance to save it.

The man who saved me was

able to mow down four Drunk Apes in one strike. Kirito-san. <QC: Double checking. How many Drunk Ape were there? 3 or 4?>

As I was stricken by the my loss <QC: Seemed personal, so thought this might fit better>

R-Really!?

he offered to me his assistance to get the Familiar Revival item
あたしシリカっていいます
I'm Silica
よろしくな
Nice to meet you

６

After that, Kirito-san and me spent a night at Floor 35 to rest

as we were going to head to our destination tomorrow...<QC: I'm not sure how to make the phrases separated by the ellipsis smoother. See note 1 below.>

Good night

Good night

...the bed felt so spacious. <QC: Isn't spacious a good thing? Can I suggest "empty"? Not quite sure if it fits>

Since Pina became my partner, we always slept together.

I always felt overwhelmed by anxiety being trapped in this sealed world. <QC:I see SAO...but I agree "sealed world" sounds better.>

Pina was the only one to console me.

...Pina

７

Pina was my only friend and partner

Because of my own fault me, Pina died...

Pina...

Pina...

Whenever I feel sad or lonely,

Pina was always there to console me. <QC:Added -ever and was>

Remembering Pina made my hand move on its own.
んっ
Mn！
あっ
Ah!
んっ
Mn!
うん
Uhn!
ピナがいないのにこんなに濡れちゃってる
I got this wet even though Pina is not here.
あっ・・・
Ah...!
でも・・・・・・指だけじゃヤだ
but... with only my fingers. my fingers aren't enough. <QC:This gets the point across better. Someone give her those plant tentacles...>
もっとピナを感じたいよ
I want to feel Pina more.
ピナ・・・
Pina...

８
あっ・・・
Ah...
ぴっピナ・・・
P-pina...
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ピナのふわふわが気持ちいい・・・・・・
Pina's feather feels so good...
じっ焦らさないで早くオマンコ触って・・・
Don't tease me, hurry my pussy... <QC: "hurry my pussy" feels wrong, but not sure how to improve it. "my pussy, hurry..."?>
あ　あぁっ
Ah　Aaah!
シリカのオマンコにぃ・・・
Silica's pussy...
ちょちょっと撫でられただけで
I...I brushed it gently
軽くイっちゃったぁ・・・
and came a bit...

９
あっ　あっ
Ah! Ah!<3
・・・舐めてぇ
...Lick me
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ピナの舌でシリカのオマンコ舐めて欲しいよぉ・・・・・・はあうう！
Silica want Pina's tongue...... Hauuu!
もっと舐めてぇぇ・・・・・・っ
Lick me more......!
あっ
Ah!
んっ
Mn!
んっ
Mn!
もっとぉ・・・ピナぁ・・・
More... Pina...
はぁー
Haa
はぁー
Haa
もっもう・・・我慢できないよ・・・
I can't... hold it anymore...
くちゅっ

おちん・・・ちん・・・・・・ピナのオチンチンが欲しいのぉ・・・
P-penis...I want Pina's inside me...<3
んっ！！
Mn!!
は、挿入ってるぅ・・・
I-it's coming in...
ピナのオチンチン挿入ってきちゃうよぉ・・・
Pina's dick is penetrating me...<3

１０
ぴっピナのオチンチンが擦れてぇ・・・・・・
Pi-Pina's dick is rubbing me......
気持ちいい・・・シリカの膣内の奥まで届いちゃってるよ
Feels good... it's deep inside Silica's pussy <3
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
も・・・もっとぉ　もっと激しく突いてぇ・・・
M-more... thrust me harder...<3
シリカのオマンコが壊れちゃうくらい・・・
until you break Silica's pussy...
あっ
Ah!
はっ
Uh!
あっ
Ah!
ピナのオチンチンでぇシリカを滅茶苦茶にちてぇ～～
Pina's dick ish wreaking me~~<3
しゅっしゅごいぃ・・・
A-amaasshing...
はっ
Uh!
あっ
Ah!
オマンコ突かれながらぁクリトリス舐められちゃってぇ
Thrusting me and licking my clitoris
まっまた・・・イっちゃうぅぅ～～っ
I'm... coming again~~! <3
ひっ
Hi!

１１
だっ射精してぇ・・・<3
Let it out...
あっ　あぁーっ
Ah! Aaah!
ピナの専用マンコにザーメン中出ししてぇ・・・　ピナの赤ちゃん孕ませてぇぇ～～
Let it out inside my Pina's only pussy... impregnate me~~!<3
・・・こんなんじゃ満足できないよ
...It This can't satisfy me
ピナの本当のオチンチンが・・・
Pina's dick...
早く・・・ほしいい・・・　よ・・・・・・
Hurry... I want it...

１２
シリカ　起きてるかい？
Silica, are you awake?
そろそろ行かないか
Are you ready to go?
うそっ寝過ごしちゃった！？
Uwah! I overslept!?
いっ今　行きますっ！
I-I'm getting ready now!
おっおはようございます
G-Good morning.
おはよう　準備は　いいかい？
Are you ready?
はいっ
Yes! <QC:More enthusiasm?>
じゃ　行こう
Let's go.

１３
四十七層
Floor 47
昨日みたいなパニックは起こさない
I feel alot better than yesterday.
自分に出せる全力で戦うんだ
I will fight with my best.
待っててね　ピナ
Wait for me Pina.
もうすぐ生き返らせてあげるからね・・・・・・
I will revive you......
ぎゃあぁぁ～っ！？　ぎゃっ
Gyaaa!? Gya!
きっ気持ちワルーっ！！　なに　これーっ！？
It's gross!! What is this!?
だっ大丈夫だってそいつはすごく弱いから簡単に・・・
C-calm down, it's weak...
だ・・・だって　気持ち悪いんですぅ～っ
B-but, it's gross~
そいつで気持ちわるがってたらこの先に進んだら大変だぞー
If you feel gross now with that, the next area would be worse.

１４
こっこの・・・
T-this thing...
いい加減に・・・
Stop it already...
ひゃぁんっ！？
Hyaah!?
えっ？まっまさか・・・
Eh? I-It can't be...
ぱっパンツ　履き忘れてるーーっ！！
I-I forgot to wear my pants!!!
あんっ
Ahn!
やだ・・・　昨日満足できなかったから
No... I couldn't get myself satisfied satisfy myself last night...
まだ少し濡れちゃってるぅ・・・
I'm still a bit wet down there...
やっやめてぇ・・・っ
S-stop it...!
やぁっ
No!
ツタを切って下りないと・・・
I have to cut these vines...
でも・・・　左手を離したら　キリトさんに丸見えになっちゃう・・・
But.. if i let go of my skirt, Kirito-san would be able to see me down there
ちょっ！？
W-wai!?

１５
きゃあっ！？
Kya!?
きっキリトさん見ないでぇ～っ！
Ki-Kirito-san don't look~!
見ないで助けてぇ～っ！！
Don't look! Help me~!
そ・・・それはちょっと無理だよ
T...that's impossible.
っ！？
...!?
ひぃっ！！
Hii!!
なっ何これベトベトして・・・っ！？
W-what is this sticky thing...!?
落ち着いて
Calm down.
そいつの縛りは大した事ない　花の下の白い所を狙えば簡単に倒せる
That things' bind is weak, if you aim the white part below the flower you can defeat it easily.
そっそんなこと言われても・・・・・・っ
E-even if you say that...

１６
やっ
Yah!
あっ
Ah!
おっぱいとぉ・・・おまんこぉ　吸われちゃってるぅぅ・・・・・・っ
My chest... and my pussy... being sucked...!
かっ感じ過ぎちゃうからぁ吸っちゃぁぁ・・・・・・らめぇぇぇ～～～～っ！！ちっ乳首にぃ　雌しべが絡み付

いてぇ・・・　んうぅ・・・っ！
I-it feels too goooood!... don't suck iiiit~~~~!! the buds are coiling my nipples... Uuu...!!
ひゃっ！？
Hya!?
そ・・・そんなに強くぅ引っ張らないでぇ・・・・・・
D..Don't pull it hard......
もっもう　ぁ・・・あたし・・・
I-I can't... hold anymore...
おかしくなっちゃうよぉ・・・
It's making me crazy...
あひっ！？
Ahii!?
そ・・・そこは・・・　やめ・・・っ
T-that place is... no, stop...!
あぁっ！くっクリトリスぅシゴかれてりゅぅぅ・・・っ
Aaah! I-it's stroking my clitoris...!
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ほ・・・ほんとにっおかしくなっちゃうぅぅ・・・
It's really making me crazy...

１７
き、キリトさんの前で恥ずかしいのにぃ・・・
I-in front of Kirito-san, this shameful so embarassing... <QC: Probably a more..."english" way of putting it, I suppose>
き、気持ちひぃ・・・
F-feels good...<3
こんな・・・っ気持ちひぃぃの初めてぇぇ・・・
it's my first time... to feel this good...
ふぅ　んぅーっ
Uu Nguu!
あくぅっ！？
Kuuh!?
おっお尻にぃツタがぁ・・・・・・
Th-the vine is in my anus...
ふぐぅっ！
Guuh!
ツタちんぽ　ぉ・・・おいひぃ・・・
Vine's dick... derihyuus...<3
先っぽから甘い汁が溢れてるぅ・・・
Sweet liquid is overflowing from the tip...
もっもう・・・イっちゃう・・・
I-I'll... comee...
なっ何で？　もうちょっとで・・・　っ！？
W-what happened? Just a little more I woul...!?
いっいや・・・そんなピナより太いの挿入れられたら・・・
N-no.. if something thicker than Pina's penetrate me...
んっ　んぅー
Mn! Mnnn

１８
は・・・入ってるぅ～っ！
I-it's penetrating me~!
んっ　んぅー！！
Mn! Nghh!!
モンスターの太い舌がピナ専用オマンコにぃ　入っちゃってるよぉぉ～～っ！！
A monster's thick tongue is entering Pina's exclusive pussy~~!!
き・・・気持ちぃ・・・いぃぃ・・・
I-it... f-feels... good...<3
んっ
Mn!
んふっ
Ngh!
舌のブツブツがオマンコの中引っ掻かれながらぁ・・・・・・っ
The tongue's bumps are scratching my inside......!
お尻のツタと挟まれてるぅ・・・
It's touching the one inside my ass...<3
か・・・身体中ぅ　掻き回されてぇぇ・・・・・・
M-my whole body... stirred up...

１９
いっイクぅ・・・
C-coming...
イク・・・っ
Come...!
イクっ！
come!
イクっ！
Coming!
んふっ
Ngh!
ピナ以外のモンスターでイっちゃ・・・・・・
A monster other than Pina gonna make me cum......
花の下の白い所を狙えっ！
Hit the white part below the flower now!

２０
短剣スキル　ファッドエッジ
Dagger Skill Fad Edge
・・・見ました？
...You watched?
・・・見てない
...No, I didn't.
じゃ、この膨らみは何ですか？
Then, what is this?
そっそれは！？
T-that is!?
あたしの見てこんなになっちゃったんですか？
You got this hard from watching me?
すごいドキドキする・・・
Amazing, it's throbbing...
イク寸前だったから・・・？
Is it about to come...?
・・・オチンチン
...dick
オチンチン欲しいよぉ・・・
I want dick...
しっシリカ！？
S-Silica!?

２１
しょっぱくてちょっと苦い
It's salty and a bit bitter.
これが男性のオチンチンの味・・・
This is a man's penis taste...
でも・・・　嫌いじゃないかも
but... i don't hate it.
キリトさん・・・ん　どうでふか？
Kirito-san...mmn how is it?
もっもう・・・イキそうだよ・・・
I-I... gonna come...
ぷはっ
Fuah!
し・・・シリカ・・・？
Si... Silica...?
イケずにおあずけされる気持ち・・・分かりますか？
You are on the verge...right?
早く助けてくれなかったからこんなになっちゃたんですよ・・・
Because you didn't help me earlier, I became like this...
責任取ってくださいキリトさん・・・
Please take responsibility, Kirito-san...<3

２２
あっ　ひうっ
Ah! Hii!
は・・・初めて・・・人の　オチン・・・チン・・・
M-my first time... with a man's penis...<3
ピナより・・・気持ちいぃぃ・・・
It feels... better than Pina's...<3
シリカは使い魔とHしてたのか
Silica, you do ecchi things with your familiar?
あっ
Ah!
・・・はい　してましたぁ・・・
...Yes, I do...
使い魔をオナニーの道具にするなんて・・・
Using a familiar to satisfy yourself...
とんだ変態ビーストテイマーだな
What a perverted Beast Master you are...
あひぃっ
Hiii!
そ・・・そんな・・・　変態だなんてぇ・・・
N-no... I'm not a pervert...

２３
そんな変態さんにはおしおきに中出しだっ！
To punish a pervert like you, I will come inside!
シリカの膣内にぃいっぱぃぃ・・・なっ中出しぃ・・・
C-come inside Silica's...<3 a lot...<3
いっぱい・・・おしおきしてくださいぃぃ～～っ！！
P-please... punish me more~~!!

２４
その後色々あったものの・・・
After that, lots of thing happened...
蘇生アイテム[プネウマの花]を手に入れ
I got the revival item (Flower of Pneuma).
ピナを生き返らせる事ができました
I could finally revive Pina.
キリトさんはすぐ最前線に戻ってしまいました
Kirito-san immidiately returned to the front line.
本当は連れて行って欲しかった・・・
Actually I wanted to come along...
でも・・・あたしが行っても手足まといにしかならないから
But... with my skill I will only be a burden
キリトさんと別れて数日たまに寂しい時もあるけれど・・・
It has been some time after I parted with Kirito-san, but when I feel lonely...
そんな時はピナと
with Pina...
キリトさんから貰った短剣があるので大丈夫です
and the dagger that I recieved from Kirito-san, I will be alright <3
ぴっピナのオチンチンとぉ・・・　キリトさんのぉオチンチンがぁぁ・・・
Pina's penis... Kirito-san's penis...
んっ
Mn!
はぁーっ
Haaa!
お腹の中でぇ擦れあってぇぇ・・・気持ちひぃのぉぉぉ～～っ
Rubbing inside my belly... It feels so good~~!<3

25
はじめましてorこんにちわ。
Hi, nice to meet you.

印刷所の「触手割」が利用できず、ガッカリな たかねのはなです
I'm Takane no hana, who's disappointed because of from not getting the "Tentacle Rebate" from printing shop.

シリカ本、いかがでしたでしょうか？
Did you like this Silica book?

タイトルに相当悩んだり、当初マンガ２２P予定が２０Pに減り
I was quite troubled choosing the title Choosing the title was troublesome <QC:Flows better>. At first it was planned as 22 pages, but then it got reduced to 20 page.
多少の余裕ができたので触手責めを
But then I got time to spare, so I made these tentacles
増やしつつ２２Pに戻し
I increase it slowly to 22 page again
増ページ分の前後の辻棲合わせに 時間が掛かってしまったため キリトとのカラミを２P減らして・・・・・・
The interlude was taking too much time, so I removed 2 pages of Kirito's intercourse......
とか、やっていたらキリトが挿入から果てるまで たった２Pの超早漏にｗ さすがSAO内一番の反応速度！ｗｗ
Then I realized, Kirito's intercourse was only 2 pages and he came lol. As expected from the fastest reaction speed player in SAO! rofl

さて、次は冬コミになってしまいそうです。
Well, next is Winter Comicket.
本当は夏コミ後に凌辱アスナ本とか出したかったんですがしばらく仕事三昧な感じかな～と。
Actually I had a plan to make an Asuna rape book after Summer Comicket, but I think I'll concentrate for a while on my work.

夏コミ前にコアマガジンからは 初となる単行本が発売されています。
Before the Summer Comicket, I got my first sale on my tankoubon.
同人と合わせ、商業の方も よろしくお願いします
Best regards for other artists and those in the business.


note 1: I know this is pretty loose from the TN script, but can I suggest: "After that, Kirito-san and I spent a night at Floor 35 to rest. As we readied to head to our destination, I thought.../...the bed felt so spacious"