[X] My Assistant

Translation script for "The sigh of Mikuru Asahina"
Translated by Shapes
Proofread by PureEnergy

Bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17669
Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/14673/4cec6acbae/

001.
The sigh of Mikuru Asahina

002.
The sigh of Haruhi Suzumiya

003.
Foreword

How do you do OR good day to you♪
I'm Takane no Hana and this time I'm struggling hard, determined to submit this script before the deadline. I'm presenting to you the the second part of my most recent book for "The melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya".

In the afterword of the last book, I wrote some utterly impossible things…
Well, being a human being, things like that happen!
As always, I'm drawing this at the same time I create a manuscript for the anthology, and I had a big event in my private life… so, given those things, I felt a bit cornered.
But I think my writing pace improved a little…
and I realized that I had wasted time at a lot of places. orz

But in the end, here is the Mikuru book I wrote in half a month. (haha)

I'm madly in love with the Anime's first episode!
It really enthralled me.
Inside my head it's the Mikuru opening theme over and over again!!!
I immediately ordered the CD from Amazon♪. I want to hear it now! (and never stop)
I also want to sing Karaoke!!

Thinking about it, I have a hard crunch time behind me: 2 to 3 weeks I haven't watched any anime at all!!! #修羅場
Had to finish the script, and also the anthology.
Will submit it at the 20th …orz

Through tears and hardship, I present to you this book.

004.
^Sunday, the lingering summer heat has finally cooled down.
>Mikuru, sorry, but I'm being manipulated here.

>E-Everyone, please come back to your senses!
>D-
\Double Mikuru Beam!!
>Cuuut!!

>Just "Beam" won't cut it here #Beam alone is too dull.
\Mikuru-chan, please come here.
^Today again, Haruhi's insolent attitude manifests itself at the shooting..

>Ehh? But, I can't…
>These are no decoration! You have to show more character!! #You have to act more spirited!!

005.
>Here comes Mikuru's.....
>Milk Flash!!

006.
>Nagato!
>Harmless, but very nutritious......
>That's not the problem!!

>Well, as mother's milk is coming out, at least they are not senselessly huge…
>Great
>Ahaha, incredible Mikuru♪

>Let me drink from your breasts♪
>Kyaaa⁉

>Hey come back to your senses! What the hell are you doing, you can't suddenly attack.....
>Well whatever, it looks interesting this way too.....
\Hey, you two minor characters, don't stand there looking stupid, attack already!!

>Is this really right?
>Well, these are the director's orders.

007.
>Haruhi, pull yourself together! You're always overdoing it...

>Seriously, how many times do I have to explain this to him until he gets it......

>Good job, Koizumi-kun!
>Please keep on filming!!

>Asahina-san, I'm sorry.
>These are the orders of the director.
>Please, stop iiiit!
>Impossible, the milk's overflowing and it won't stop⁉

008.
>Two side benefits of this work♪

>Delicious!
>Such a sweetness......

>No bitterness, a fresh taste for the tongue #just use some phrase wine drinkers would use to describe wine

>Please don't suck so hard.....
>Please let me go......

>We can't contain ourselves!
>We can't endure it anymore!!

009.
#bottom right:
>Please bring us back to sanity with your mouth and tits!

>Incredibly soft♪
>Her tits are squishy and sticky.

>Asahina-san has put mine into her mouth....
>It feels so good inside her mouth.....

>Mikuru's is sexy♪
>Let's see, how are your lower parts doing?

010.
>Ah, let's reveal the treasure♪
-Mmmm⁉
\Nnmmm!!
>Ahaha, Mikuruuu, something nasty happened to your panties♪

>Having your breast milk sucked out, and a penis in your mouth, has got you totally turned on, hasn’t it?
>Amazing, so much seeping out.

>These penises must be very delicious♪

>Uh, I'm.......
>cumming!

011.
>⁉

>Well done Mikuru-chan! You're so sexy, totally amazing♪
>But the main event comes now! #or: the real thing

>Really? All the way is fine?
>Well, I won't constrain myself.......

>Don't get carried away!!

012.
>Good grief....
>Yuki, you're the magician from outer space, so please grow a penis!

>.......

>Y-Yuki-san?

>Hii⁉

>Tsuruya-san, push from the back!
>Ayeoo♪
>N-No, this is a joke, right?
>Hey, Yuki! Mikuru-chan is prepared, don't hesitate, go on and rape her!!
>P-Please, not this.....

13.
>Ugh⁉ # it's the Japanese sign for "no loud", insert some kind of moan.

-Uh
-A
\Aah
>We'll train you to become our convenient slave from now on.
>Your fate is decided.

>It's painful......
>It hurts.......

014.
>Mikuru-chan, stick to your lines!!

>Even if you rape me.....
>It will not change a thing....
-Uah

-Ah
-Ah
-Ah
>And how is this?
-Ah
>No man can escape this magical training (joy coated) stick
#training as in training/breaking an animal, maybe go with whip instead of stick?
#in brackets, literally: great joy coating method
-Aahh

>Eh⁉

>Aaaaaah.......
>Impossible......., this can't be......
-ah

>Finally, pain is changing to sexual pleasure.....

015.
-Iah
>So hot......
>My pussy....
-Oh

>The insides of my pussy....
>are so hot.......
-Ah
-A
-Aah
\ah

>The effects are starting.
-Ah
-Aahh
>If you want to receive more pleasure, you have to vow to be my servant.

>Nn-never!
>I won't become your servaaaahhh...

>Yuki-chan, please let me ravish too♪ #or rape?
>.......

016.
>Aaahh⁉
\Why do you pull out?

>Just a bit longer......, please.....
>Only a bit?
>You have to swear to become our servant if you want that wish fulfilled.

-Ah
>.....I'll do it
>M-Mikuru will.....
-Haa [x3]
>become your sex slave, your bitch, I'll do everything,
>Dick please, I need dick!!
-Ah
-Aah
>Well said, here is your reward♪

017.
>Aaahh......
>This feels great.....

>My pussy feels fantastic....
-Aahh

-Ah [x3]
>And my ass.... my ass....
-Aah

>Hey Mikuru, how do you want it?
-Ah
\Aahh
>M-
\More....

>More dick......
-Ah
-Iah
>Thrust your dick deep inside.....

018.
>More....

>Tease me.......
>Tease Mikuru moooooooooore!!

>Aaaaaah

019.
^And this how Ashahina Mikuru, the fighting waitress that came from the future,
^came to live her remaining life as a slave under Nagato Yuki, the evil magician from outer space.....

^That’s just a lie. They may look alike, but it's mere coincidence. It's just an accidental resemblance. But not in the commercials though...…
*Chalalanlan♪
Cast
Mikuru Asahina Mikuru Asahina
Itsuki Koizumi Itsuki Koizumi
Yuki Nagato Yuki Nagato

Tsuruya-san Tsuruya-san
*Cha cha chalalala♪
^This story is a work of fiction, and any possible similarity to living persons, groups, events and the like is not intended and mere coincidence.

>With this we will be the main topic of conversation at the culture festival.
^Discussion like that can go many ways though.... #pretty heavy rewrite. literal translation is: that can have many meanings don't you think, but before this… (I don't get the part after the comma)
^Are you crying? How come? #as in: I have no idea what the reason for that might be

020.
Mikuru Asahina's daily routine

Her name is Mikuru Asahina, she looks like a ordinary sweet girl, but she's actually a fighting waitress from the future. Today, we're having a look at an ordinary day in Asahina's life.

Her usual clothes are bunny-girl costumes. That's because she's working the local shopping street to attract customers. Today again, she's going out for work in her bunny girl uniform.

021.
“Please excuse me for taking your time! Today we had a large shipment of fresh carrots. This is a limited-time sale! Starting now, and for exactly one hour, we’re offering these carrots for half price!”

“Mikuru-chan, you're spirited today again.”
“Yeees! I'm giving my best!”
She's sparkling with her pure charm, when she shouts out to the passing people in her too catchy costume.
“For such a hard working sales women, I have a present to deliver. I give you uncle's fresh carrot.”
“Th-Thank... youuugh...”
Mikuru is carefully stuffing her cheeks with this pulsating tasty carrot, that's rather fresh considering it's age.

022.
“Thank you as always. It's not much, but please take it.”
Called into the back of the shop, she's being paid by greengrocer manager Seijun Morimuri-san (46) in kind, it being poured into her womb.

“Too kind of you, that wouldn't have been necessary. Thank you for your patronage. This is too kind of you.”
She is the kind of girl that lowers her head politely, always being modest, no matter how exhausting the work.
While the semen is still moving inside her small bud, you can hear her say: “Well, I've to go the butcher next, please excuse me. Good bye.” She pushes the overflowing semen out and runs out to the shopping street.

023.
Right now she is comforting and making love to the local residents, being the necessary mascot character of the shopping street. “This service, ah, is available, ah, for free-hi- for every customer, ah, that spends 1000 yen and moaaahh!!”

“Aah! Again inside my belly.... Thank you for coming inside....”
Good luck Mikuru. You will get the customers back who have switched to the department store built last year. The revitalization and destiny of the local shops lies solely on your shoulders, Mikuru!

024.
■ Afterword ■
How was it?

In my opinion, Mikuru is number one character of the Haruhi series who gets jealous, so I tried not to make her suffer to much.
#ネタ＝jealous?
Actually I wanted to draw an additional two person H scene, but I had to tearfully skip that because of time constraints.
In place of this I added a rough sketch called “Daily life” that I still had.
This is how I completed this manga, hehe.

Well, for now I'm going to entrust this Mikuru book to the earth circle, I will draw the main two-volume work of Nagato for the summer convention and Sankuri 33 I guess.
At the summer convention, besides the new book, I'm also planning a surprise, so look forward to it!

....to reprove myself a little.
A lot of people enjoyed my previous Haruhi work, and I thank you a lot for your support. I seem to have published my books at a time when this genre is quite popular, therefore the order amount exceeded my estimations.
Well I got this karma because of the outstanding original work my books are based on.
I don't think [the success] is due to my ability, but I intend to strive everyday so more people can enjoy my work. I'm still a novice, please keep on being kind to me m(__)m

Now that I wrote it... it's somehow embarrassing.

This post has been edited by Shapes: Mar 13 2018, 14:32

Awesome! editing bounty for above haruhi project is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17729

But interested editors are advised to wait few days for proofreading check

is it ok, when i take this one?
[Barbaroi no Sato (Ryuuka Ryou)] Maihime (Vamp. Princ. Miyu) >edit 31p
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17070

Current Script Status for:
EHCOVE [Takane no hanazono (Takane Nohana)] Asahina Mikuru no (Haruhi)
(The sigh of Mikuru Asahina)
Translation Bounty Page & #: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17669
Editing Bounty Page & #: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17729
Gallery Page: https://e-hentai.org/g/14673/4cec6acbae/
Script Page: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=5091648

[STARTED] Proofreading Script Mar. 6th..
[ONGOING] Script under discussion with TL Mar. 7th...
[FINISHED] Script Updated by Translator Shapes Mar.13th...

PE

This post has been edited by PureEnergy: Mar 13 2018, 15:34

Hi here's the link to the script for the Aroma Gaeru Saikyou Controller bounty, and here it is also in script form.


EDIT: Please wait. The credits page also needs translating...

EDIT: Done! Please look two posts below.

This post has been edited by and.again.teal: Mar 9 2018, 02:23

Here's is the editing bounty for the space pirates script above (through the script link will be updated, plus proofread, so don't jump on it yet)

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17743

Here're the links to the completed Aroma Gaeru piece at https://e-hentai.org/g/510141/a32a6a8f9d/


[mega.nz] https://mega.nz/#!H3wR1SQB!yApuSWDX...QpPQatjkYmDha54

and

[mega.nz] https://mega.nz/#!m3wWCAAB!gVUdFQyy...F5YXK8x2DJaLP8M

It was translated by No4h. Please leave my name out of the project.



Saikyou Controller | Most Powerful Controller


03

New Okuhama City Airport

M: Ririka-san!
M: Hey!

M: Ririka-san!
G: What...
G: You again?

M: Don’t say that!
M: It’s lunch break, can I come with you?
G: Geez...
G: Fine, suit yourself.


04

G: But still...

G: I’m surprised at how...
G: Ahhh!
G: You never get tired of being with me.

G: Are you not getting along with your colleagues?
M: Th-That’s not it!
M: I’m spending time with you because I enjoy it!

M: Ririka-san, both as an air traffic controller and as a woman...
M: You’re my idol!

M: Um... you’re making me say this every week, aren’t you...?
M: Argh!
G: Hahaha!
G: It makes me so happy, so I can’t help it!

G: But if you keep telling me that to my face with honesty every week...
G: It might be time for me to answer it...!

> Airport underground

M: Hey...! Ririka-san!

G: Mmm?
G: C’mon, hurry up or...
*Kiss*
G: Lunch break will be over...!


05

G: Mm...!
G: Haa! (x2)
G: The smell of a young man... it’s been a while!

M: Woah!

G: Fuu!
G: A green-smelling young cock!
G: Buhhh!
G: Fuuu! (x2)
G: Yummy!

M: Guhhh! Ririka-san!
G: Mmm!
G: Fuu!
G: Mmm!
G: Mm!
M: If you suck it so hard...!

M: Gah!
M: It’s winding inside...!

M: Gwah!
*Press*
M: Not like that! No... ohhh!


06

M: I can’t take anymor...!
G: Ohhh!
G: Mm! (x2)
G: Cum!
G: Fuu!
M: Mm...!
M: Gwahhhh!

M: Ahhh!
G: Fuuuu!
M: You’re squeezing it out...!

G: Ohn!
*Lick*
M: I can’t stop...
*Lick* *Lick, lick, lick*
G: Sperrrrrrm!
M: Cumming...!
G: Fuu!
G: Yummy!

G: Mmmm!
M: Gah!
M: Guh!
G: Fuuuuu!

M: Ahh!
G: Fuu!


07

G: Mm!
G: Wow!
G: It’s so...
G: Lumpy...!

G: It’s really stinky too...
G: And it’s making me dizzy...

G: Geez... how could you store it until it goes all yellow like this...
G: Haa!
G: Ahh...!
G: Haa! (x2)
G: Naughty boy...!

G: Guh!
*Sput*
*Throb*
G: Mmmmmmm!!

M: I-I’m so happy...
M: I never thought you’d do this to me...

M: My legs...
M: Were turning into jelly!

G: It was like a dream, wasn’t it?
G: Haa...!
G: I’m confident about my technique...!


08

G: An old lady’s mouth...
G: Wasn’t too bad, was it?

M: But Ririka-san...
M: You’re not an old lady!

M: You’re unbelievably young and beautiful for someone who has a daughter...
M: Mm!
M: You have top-class skills as an air traffic controller...

M: You’re busy with all your coworkers relying on you...
G: Ah!
G: Haa! (x2)
M: Yet you’re happy to interact with a rookie like me...

M: Your daughter has nothing on you, she’s just young!
M: Pwah!
M: Haa! (x2)
M: You’re a really attractive and great woman...!

M: You’re the first person...
M: I ever did something like this to.

G: ...I see!
G: Then maybe we should...

G: Go all the way...?


09

G: Here, my pussy became totally ready while licking your dick too!
M: Ahh... it’s all mushy, isn’t it?
G: Haa! (x2)
G: Hehe! It’s been a while for me too, so it was stimulating...!
G: We don’t have much time, so just shove it right in...!

M: Okay, then...
G: Mm!
G: A bit lower...
M: I’m putting it in, Ririka-san!

G: Yes!
G: Keep going!

M: Gwah!
G: Ah!
G: Hot!

G: Hehe!
G: Haa!
G: You came just from inserting...
G: Did my pussy feel that good to you...?
G: Ha!
G: You’re still cumming!
G: But still... I’m gonna get you to cum a lot more!


10

G: Haaaaa!
G: That’s it!
G: Ah!
G: Ohh!
G: Slam your virgin cock...
G: Into me...
G: As hard as you can!

M: Gahhh!
M: Guh!
G: So that you’ll never forget...
G: Go hard!
G: Haa! (x2)

M: Ouargggh!
G: Ahhhhh! Yes!
G: I’m cumming!
G: Cumming!
G: Haa! (x3)
G: Shoot all your collected sperm!
G: I’m cumming, cumming, cumming, cumming!


11

G: I’m...
*Splurt*
*Sput*
G: Ah! (x2)
G: Cummmiiiiinnnnnng!!

G: Hyahhhhh!
G: I’m...
G: Overflowing...
G: With your sperm!

G: Hahaha!
G: You managed to make me cum in your first try!
G: Well done...!
G: We’re on the same shift, right...? Then...
G: Make sure you’re free this weekend...!


12

M: You’re here.
M: Come in.

> She’s in a hotel room with men...
> Could that mean...

M: That’s...!

M: Ririka-san...!
G: Mm!
M: Mm...!

M: So...
M: You’re the one who’s been showing interest in Ririka-kun lately.
M: We’ve only just begun.
M: You should take your clothes off and join in.
G: Buhhh!


13

M: You people...
M: Look familiar...

G: What’re you on about? He’s the chairman of our airport.
G: And this is the director of the Stellar Navy’s Security Division.

M: What?
M: Hahaha...
M: That’s right, rookie air traffic controller.

M: Hehehe...
M: I’m a big fan of Blaster Ririka...
M: And I noticed her right away when she was assigned here by recommendation by the Stellar Navy.

M: I approached her many times to get close to her...
M: And it turned out she’s quite the slut! She totally made me boneless. And now for several years, I’ve been getting her to service me in return for providing security to her daughter.

M: Lately, perhaps due to my age, she tends to overpower me even when there are two of us!
M: Hahahahaha!
M: She just keeps sucking it out!


14

M: And so...

M: You should help us attack Ririka-kun.

M: That underwear...
M: Oh, haven’t you realized yet?

M: Ririka-kun tends to look thin in her clothes, but no one expects her...
G: Mm!

M: To be hiding these!
G: Haa!

M: Ahh, irresistible!
M: Space-raised boobs sure are different!
M: The firmness and feel still haven’t degraded.

M: Wow...
M: Mm!
G: Haa!
G: It’s annoying when people stare at them...
G: Ah!
G: And it’s also hard to move around, so I normally keep them pressed down...


15

G: Come on! Stop daydreaming, and...
*Ooze*
G: Ah!
G: Haa! (x2)
G: Mm!
G: Attack me like crazy...!

M: Haaaa! (x2)

G: Ahaaaa!
G: Ah!
G: That’s it!
G: Go all out!!


16

G: More! Attack me harder!
*Slurp*
*Suck*

G: Ah!
G: At this rate, you’ll never satisfy me! I used to have gangbangs with several pirates at once after all!

G: C’mon! Grope my boobs enough to crush them!
G: Mm!
G: Fuu!

G: Gehhh!
G: Ohhh!
G: Ahh! Yes! Harder! Enough to melt my body!

G: Nehhhhhhhhhh! Yeees!
G: Yes! It’s making me throb! My mind’s tingling!

G: My pussy! Boobs! Mess up my entire body!
G: Ohhhhn!
G: Ohh!
G: Ah! It’s coming! Coming, coming, coming , comiiiiinnnnnggggg!


17

G: Hehhhhhhhhhhhh!!
G: I’m cummiiiiiiinnnnngggggggg!!

M: Alright, you came!
G: Haa! (x2)
M: Now, we’ll keep fucking you like crazy!

G: Ohh!
G: Buhhh!
M: Take thaaaat!
G: Ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!


18

M: Kuhhhhhh! Your squeeze and winding are incredible as usual!
G: Fuu!
G: Ah!

M: But today, I won’t stop until I’m totally empty!
G: Buh!
G: Buhhh!
M: I’ve taken strong aphrodisiac as well!

M: And you too, rookie-kun! Keep fucking her until you start shooting blood!
G: Ohhh!
G: Buhhh!
G: Ah!
G: Mm!
M: Come on! Come on!
*Splurt*

G: Hehhhhhhhh! Woooooooooow!
G: Ah!
*Shove*
G: I can’t stop! I can’t stop cummiiiiinnnnngggggg!
G: You’re shooting cum while fucking me...
G: Haa!
G: Guh! It’s coming! I can feel a big one comiiiiiinnnnggggg!
*Sput*


19

G: Buhhhhhh!?
G: Fuh... gohhhhhhhhh!!
*Gulp*
G: Ohh...!

M: We’re not done yet!
M: Tonight we’re gonna make you go totally crazy!

G: Haaa! (x2)
G: Ye-...
G: Yeeethhhhhh!


20

M: Phew...
M: At one point I thought we’d totally beaten her, but...

M: In the second half, she impressively began to come back.
M: She was the legendary female pirate after all.
G: Fuck my pussy!
G: Even more!
M: We never managed to beat her in the end.

M: Okay, unfortunately we have to leave now.
M: If you have any more problems, don’t hesitate to count on us again!

M: Don’t render him useless by squeezing too much cum out of him, okay?
M: Hahaha!
M: The end...?
G: Yeah, that was my last time with them for the time being.


21

G: Marika’s become a candidate for captain now and a nonaggression pact’s been signed.
G: So I’ve been thinking about quitting as air traffic controller and going back out to space.
G: Haa...!

M: What...?
G: Are you disappointed that I’m a hopeless slut like this?

M: No... Blaster Ririka, the legendary pirate, has to hide her identity...
M: While protecting and raising her daughter alone...
M: Even I can understand how hard that is.

M: In fact, it made me want to know you better.
M: I want us to get to know each other better so I can help you...!


22

G: You...
M: You’re a widow now...

G: Mm...
G: Mm!
G: I’m not satisfied by an ordinary man, you know?
M: So I have a chance with you, right...?
M: I’ll make sure...
M: I become a man who’s good enough for you!

M: So... when you finally accept me...
*Kiss*
M: Please give birth to my child!
G: Mm!
G: Hahn!
G: What!?
G: Ah?
G: Ah...!


23

M: Your pussy’s reserved until them, okay?
G: Hehhn!
G: Ahh!
M: I’ll never get bored of it!

G: Geez...
G: You’re not that young yourself...
G: So if you don’t hurry it up, I’ll leave yo-... ah, ah... ah!

M: Leave it to me! I’ll be sure to...
G: Ah...! (x2)
M: Make you happy!
G: You... idiot! Ah!
G: Ah! Ah! Ah! Cumming...!!
G: Fwahhhhhhhhh!!


24

M: Uh!
M: Ririka-san! I’m cummiiinnnggg!!
> A few days later, Ririka-san quit as air traffic controller...
> But our relationship is still continuing.

G: Haa! (x3)
G: You’ve improved a lot at sex...!
G: Hehe!
G: You should work just as hard to get your Large Interstellar Ship License...!
*Splurt*
*Sput*

G: Since you said you’d become my partner, you need to become a great sailor too...!
M: I-I’ll do my best!

M: But Ririka-san, I think sometimes we need to take a break...
M: My coworker gave me this ticket because he got some sudden business and couldn’t go.

G: A space resort...? And it’s this week!
G: Geez...
G: You’d better show me a good time!
M: Yes!


25

Mouretsu Riripai!








Atogaki (postscript)

Long time no see & nice to meet you, I am Numahana.
Did you enjoy my Moupai book?

I just stuffed all my feelings towards Ririka-san into this book ☆
Though it may seem I stuffed a bit too much into it, if I had used my original idea, the book would’ve become way too long. So I unfortunately had to take bits out (;´∀｀)

I again barely made the deadline and there are many disappointing areas...
I hope to improve my schedule in both my public and private lives!
I want to make a satisfactory work... no, I will! Because I’m gradually finding more free time!

Mouretsu Pirates is a work that I got hooked on quite early in its airing, and so I was enjoying watching it every week. But it also seems popular among others and that makes me happy!
It’s great to see a relaxed old-school space opera being accepted!

Kaida Yuuko-sama’s voice was perfect for Ririka-san and it was love at first sight ( ﾟ∀ﾟ)!
But I’m sad as she didn’t appear much after the first few episodes...

If there’s a sequel, I hope they include parts where Ririka-san does lots of stuff.
There are still stocks of the original material so they could be used. So please make a second season!

And now, I am planning for Natsucomi next.
I will be handing out the long-awaited “Mousou Yuugi 2” so please look forward for it!
I am also working on an Aquarion book... the main story is progressing too fast and I dunno what to do.
I’m changing lots of things and hope to release it after Comiket (I said July but ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sleep.gif)(IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)... I’ll stop announcing release dates now. No! I’ll still be releasing it!)

Now, let’s meet at Natsucomi～ ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif))/~


This post has been edited by and.again.teal: Mar 9 2018, 16:37

Current Script Status for:
EHCOVE [Aroma Gaeru (Numahana)] Saikyou Controller (Mouretsu Pirates)
Bounty Page & #: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17743
Gallery Page: https://e-hentai.org/g/510141/a32a6a8f9d/
Script Page: [mega.nz] https://mega.nz/#!H3wR1SQB!yApuSWDX...QpPQatjkYmDha54
Script Page: [mega.nz] https://mega.nz/#!m3wWCAAB!gVUdFQyy...F5YXK8x2DJaLP8M

[STARTED] Proofreading Script Mar. 9th...
[ONGOING] Script comments under discussion with TL N04h Mar.10th...

PE

This post has been edited by PureEnergy: Mar 10 2018, 15:00

Bounty Claim for EHCOVE [cocon! (Otone)] Evenkuruga no Shitei (Utawarerumono)>ENG 24p
Bounty Page : https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=16182

Here is the file containing the translation of the entire book.
[files.catbox.moe] https://files.catbox.moe/d1tma4.rtf

Here is the corrected translation script.
[files.catbox.moe] https://files.catbox.moe/rq4uhz.rtf

This post has been edited by Vexxille: Mar 15 2018, 15:56

Great, editing bounty for it is now live at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17756

Waiting for proofreading, of course

Translation for "Ofuro DAYS 4"[V2]
Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/996567/38de68bd4a/
Bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17347

page 3:
Halt! Demon Lord Calvados!

If you go any further you're under arrest!!

Like you'll catch me

Don't worry Forehead, next time I'll give you a nice leisurely peeping.

Leave this

to

US!

umm!? but over there is...

page 4:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!

Ohh!? that's...

hoo

ee

fueee

page 5:
UWAAAAAAAAAAAA?!

Prince and

Cinque

Cinque

Can't see

Ooiii

Cinque, come here degozaru

Indeed

Oie, thatfs the wrong reaction Yuki

And Rico, you don't need to call him over too!

page 6:
GAUL!!
WHAT THE HELL YOU DOING!!

WAIT! WAIT!!

Cinque, you pervert!!

Both hero's killing blows connect with Prince Gaul and Hero Cinque!

With the use of armor destruction, the situation in the bathhouse has become even more confused.

Percy, Prince Gaul appears to be in significant trouble.

Prince...?

Ohhh Prince Gaul, wow, has fallen between the legs of Her Majesty Leo's attendant Violet.

Page 7:
Gaul Sama

OOOOOOOOOOOOOO

That's quite a good look he's getting there! Someone like Leo kaka(who is almost a sister) having her secret place in such an embarrassing situation, now this is getting pretty exciting.

... an, anyway Prince Gaul is in dire straits!

Gaul Sama...

That is

NAUGHTY!!

indeed

And there it is, Violet's "NAUGHTY"! Whew, that hurts!!

It seems like a lot of fun, should I join in?

Nah.... I's just a bit jealous of Leo-Nee's calm.

Now then, Karin, what has happened to hero Cinque?

Ah yes, Biscottifs Hero Cinque is currently being chased en force!
Page 8:
Hero Cinque goes flying

wawa

aa

Cinque Kun

All of Genoise! And isn't he popular

Cinque

Want to bath together?

Eh, I'll pass

AHAHAHAHA
Having some fun are ya?

Before we send you back home, a present from my wonderful self!

Why, isn't that a fairly confident tone of voice.
Page 9:
If you don't stop fooling around, I'll shoot.

Don't Shoot! Please don't shoot!

I'll hear you out if it isn't an excuse.

Um, uh, you know

We should be proud of our bodies

Well, I have to admit that isn't a bad explanation.

But then that Toshigami girl sure has one heck of a body.... EH!!

My EYES!!

Ooi Cinque

Over here degozaru

Yuki!?

Like I said, don't call him over!

No looking Cinque!

My EYES!!

A brilliant eye attack by Hero Rebecca!

As expected from the Hero King's apprentice.

Oi, Gaul come on over here

Eh, what up, Sis?
Page 10:
It's... close up.

What? It's nothing you haven't seen before, come on, look this way.

o oo

Heh!

Ee

That should be good enough

Divine justice

Leo-nee, wasn't that a bit drastic?

MY EYESSSS!!

Cinque!! Hold it right there!

SORRY! SERIOUSLY SORRY!!

Oi Yuki, do something about this mess

Would Eclair want to take a bath with Cinque?

No way!

Understood degozaru. Well then

Yukikaze technique
Page 11:
Ahh, it appears that Sir Hero is leaving.

Hey Yuki, what did you do?

In fact it looks like nothing happened!

Ohh, Hero Cinque has retreated outside!

And the remaining two have withdrawn, bringing this event to a close.

*Burun*

Aa... Huh?

What's wrong, Yuki?

Well, Yuki's ninjitsu often aren't effective.

Ueee?!

*Hikaeme*

Page 12:
Rico is truly disappointed.

I would have liked to wash with Sir Hero.

*petaan*

*tsuruun*

I'm washing with Rico!

You alright Yuki!!

*Booyon* wobble

I've actually swapped with Yuki AGAIN?!
Page 13:
I.... I'm fine de arimasu!

If... If I'm caught, I'm dead!!

or rather! degozaru!!

No, that's not fine at all

If the heat's gotten to your head, get out ahead of us!

Tha... That's true degozaru

poke

Umm.... This really is it

Is this something that Yuki can help me with?

stretch

But....
Page 14:
Shall I wash Rico?

Whoops, my hand slipped

An

Yuki, you're naughty

Wanna see degozaru(just kidding)

Ehhh

Th... That

Tha.... That's what their bodies do when girls have perverted thoughts...

Sorry for messing your underwear, Yuki.
Page 15:
U-Uwaaa....

It got like this

YES! I am a guy after all

Yuki, sorry.

I'm just going to explore a little
Page 16:

Girl's bodies really are amazing

To tingle this much

It tastes of Yuki
Page 17:
More
More of Yuki's erotic taste

not enough

Yuki's body is so perverted

So much

And her perverted hole opens so much

I can't stop my fingers

Yuki's body is going to break!
Page 18:
Incredible

More

Cinque, help degozaru

Uwaaaaaaaa?!

I was just having some fun with myself

I myself see no problem degozaru

Ehh?! Really!

More importantly, Cinque

Looking now at my body as Cinque

This

Page 19:
Whatever should I do degozaru?

Uwaaaa!!

Don't pull that out, Yuki!

Even if you say that, Cinque

Ohh... I ran here because it hurts so much degozaru.

Please do something about it degozaru

Anything I can do for it... Really?

degozaru

Wi... Will this resolve things degozaru?

Uumm....

This feeling really feels just like my normal self.

Cinque

Somehow I'm feeling really warm and fuzzy degozaru

Rea.. Really

But I'm really doing with Yuki's hand

Hey, Yuki

There is a way to make it feel even better if you want.
Page 20:
Well, Yuki?

It feels even better than before

Well, that's good

What am I doing with Yuki's breasts?

Cinque... I can't hold on any more degozaru

Yuki?! hold on, moving like that hurts

I can't seem to stop moving like this degozaru

Come on
Page 21:
UAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Wow, this feels better still degozaru

Cinque

This is as far as I can go

Umm, it's not getting better

Well then, this time

Letfs give this a try
Page 22:
Uwaaaaaaaaaa!!

It's like Yuki is driving me crazy.

More

I want to move it around more degozarsu...!

Hia?!

Not, Not that hard!!

If you keep doing this, Yuki's body will break
Page 23:
Wow!

This time I'm driving Yuki crazy!

Wait --- Yuki---- too hard

Don't suck my breasts now!

AAAAAA

Cinque, it's coming out again degozaru!

No, Don't do that Yuki. Do it outside!!

Not inside!
Page 24:
This... Feels too good degozaru

AAAA

You came inside!!

Ah, ahhhh... Didn't I say not to let it out inside?

I don't mind degozaru

EEeee?!

What, we're back?!

degozaru

Thi... This is

So, Sorry Yuki

I don't mind degozaru

Just like this with Cinque

I'd like to try again degozaru

Page 25:

Hi-ho, it's me, BOM!

Now then, in this Bath Days, Yuki finally gets an appearance!
Yuki is Yuki, but then Cinque is Yuki as well!!

When body swapping is happening there has to be some action, don't you think? Thus there is only one thing that can happen(lol).

Keeping that in mind, the first half sure was fun huh! While it was alot of fun drawing such a lighthearted scene, what did you think?

While there are still so many more characters to draw, they will have to wait for another time! Until we might meet again.

This post has been edited by atlantismaniac: Jun 5 2018, 14:02

Current Script Status for:
EHCOVE [cocon! (Otone)] Evenkuruga no Shitei (Utawarerumono)
Editing Bounty Page: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17756
Gallery Page: https://e-hentai.org/g/917415/dfbcfa3db1/
Script Page: [files.catbox.moe] https://files.catbox.moe/d1tma4.rtf
Corrected translation script: [files.catbox.moe] https://files.catbox.moe/rq4uhz.rtf

[STARTED] Proofreading Script Mar. 10th...
[ONGOING] Script comments under discussion with TL Mar.10th...
[FINISHED] Script Updated by TL Vexxille Mar.15th...

PE

This post has been edited by PureEnergy: Mar 15 2018, 23:53

Current Script Status for:
(CT21) [Serenta (BOM)] Ofuro DAYS 4 (DOG DAYS)
Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/996567/38de68bd4a/
Translating Bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17347
Translator: atlantismaniac
Script Page: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=5096557

[STARTED] Proofreading Script Mar. 10th...
[ONGOING] Script comments under discussion with TL Mar.13th...
[FINISHED] Script Updated by Translator on June 5th...

PE

This post has been edited by PureEnergy: Jun 6 2018, 03:40

Japanese title: (C82) [UROBOROS (うたたねひろゆき)] Akather (Another)
English title: (C82) [UROBOROS (Hiroyuki Utatane)] Akather (Another)

Translation by JBT

IF YOU'RE EDITING THIS, MESSAGE ME SO I CAN GIVE YOU A LINK TO DOWNLOAD IMAGES THAT HAVE THE TRANSLATION OVERLAYED ON TOP OF THE ORIGINAL JAPANESE, which I'd assume would make your job a lot easier.

Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/518250/125e11d248/
Bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17638

NOTE: NOTEs are for the editor to give context or additional information. Do not put them into the actual scanlation.

===Page 1=======================================================================

Akather
Akather

===Page 2=======================================================================

Akather
Akather

===Page 3=======================================================================

まえがき

今回画面を暗くしたいページもあったため、試しにコミスタ使って仕上げ入れてみようかなどと思ったところ、
初めて使うものだからたいへんいろんな失敗などで時間を無駄にしてしまい、全ページはとても無理な状態にな
ったり、演出上、回想シーンでいつも鉛筆描きが混ざったりと人によってはちょっと読みにくいかもしれません
。
ちょっとデジ絵の勉強してきます。
ああ、根っからのアナログ人間だったんだなぁ
ともあれちょっとでも「An〇ther」に興味を持っていただければ幸いです。

うたたねひろゆき

Foreword

This time, I wanted to do some darker scenes on some of the pages, so I loaded up Comic Studio and tried to add some finishing touches to them. But, it being my first time using the thing, I made so many bad screwups and I wasted a ton of time. All the pages were terrible and in the flashback scene I ended up mixing in my pencil scribbles so some people might find it kind of hard to read.
I'm gonna study up a bit more on digital art.
But alas, I'm pretty hardcore old-school in that regard.
Anyhow, I hope this comic gets people at least a little bit more interested in Another.

Hiroyuki Utatane

===Page 4=======================================================================

Daughter: ただいまー
I'm home!

Kōichi: おかえり　うん？　お友だろかい？
Hey... Hm? Your friend?

Daughter: パパ？　なに今日早いじゃん
Daddy? You're early today.

Daughter: あ　紹介しとくね　演劇部の友だちで赤沢泉美
Oh, let me introduce you. This is Izumi Akazawa from the Drama Club.

(SFX door): ヅタン
SHUT

Izumi: 赤沢です
Akazawa.

===Page 5=======================================================================

Izumi: 来週転校生がくるからみんなピリピリしてるー
The transfer student is coming next week so everyone's on edge.

Izumi: うちのクラスはちょと…ね
My class is a bit...

Izumi: 特別なの
Special.

Kōichi: ああ　ボクも３組の生き残りだよ　君には悪いが娘が２組で安心してる
Yeah, I was in Class 3 as well. Sorry to say this, but I'm glad my daughter's in Class 2.

Izumi: おじさまも？
You were too?

Kōichi: いつなにがあるかわからないーだからなのかい？
You've got no way of knowing when something might happen...

Kōichi: いつもあんなに激しいのは
So is that why you like it so hard?

Izumi: それね…っ
No...

Izumi: おじさまがえっちだからよ！
That's because you're such a dirty old man!

===Page 6=======================================================================

Izumi: 今年一年こんなに苦しいんだもの　いき生きのびたらこの町から出てみるのもいいかな　県外に進学とか
This entire year's been suffocating. If I make it through this, I want to leave this town. Like, transfer schools.

Kōichi: だからボクみたいなおじさんに？
And that's why you're with an old guy like me?

Izumi: 学費はともかく女の子には色々とあるからー　なんて　ホントはピピッときたのよ　初めてお会いした時
Well, besides tuition, girls have a lot more going on, ya know... Just kidding. The truth is, when we first met, there was just a spark.

Izumi: とりあえず優しそうだったし　ふふ
Plus, you seemed nice enough.

Kōichi: ひどいな　とりあえずかい？　ははは
Seemed? Now that's harsh. Hahaha.

(SFX hand/bed): ギシッ
CREAK

Izumi: それにー
Besides...

===Page 7=======================================================================

Izumi: 友だちのお父様とー　なんて背徳的だわ
What's hotter than doing your best friend's daddy?

Izumi: わたしたちのこと知ったらどんな顔するのかしら？　クスクス
How'd she react if she found out? Teehee.

Kōichi: スリルを楽しんでいるかい？
You're enjoying the taboo?

Kōichi: 悪い娘（こ）だ
What a naughty little girl.

(SFX hand/ass): ぐにぃ
SOFT

(SFX ass): びく
SHUDDER

Izumi: あ゛ッ
Ah!

Izumi: やだ…
No...

(SFX Izumi): はッ
GASP

Izumi: おじさま…っ
Mr. S?
NOTE: Izumi's term of address for Kōichi is "Oji-sama," a pretty normal term of address for someone like your friend's father. In American English, the analogous term would be Mr. Surname. I've adopted that here but abbreviated Sakakibara to S. It also serves to hide Kōichi's identity.

(SFX Izumi): ひくん
SHIVER

===Page 8=======================================================================

Izumi: あ゛
Ah!

Izumi: あ
Ah

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHUDDER

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHUDDER

(SFX finger/vagina): にゅぷ　ぬぷ
SCHLUP　SCHLUP

(SFX finger/vagina): ぢゅッ　ちゅぐ
SCHLUP　SCHLUP

(SFX finger/vagina): くちゅ　ぐちゅ
SCHLUP　SCHLUP

Kōichi: そのクセ　SEX（こっち）は
I just cannot believe...

(SFX ass): びく　びく
SHIVER SHIVER

Izumi: んあッ
Ah!

Izumi: ああ゛
Aaah!

(SFX finger/vagina): じゅぷ　じゅぼ　じゅぼ
SCHLUP SCHLUP SCHLUP

Kōichi: 優等生だなんて
This belongs to an honors student.
NOTE: Referring to her vagina.

Izumi: …っあ　い…たっ
...Ah! Aa...ah!

Izumi: 激…しっ
So... hard!

(SFX finger/asshole): つぷ　つぷ
WRIGGLE

(SFX finger/vagina): ぐり　ぐり　ぐぽ
RUB RUB RUB

(SFX finger/vagina): どろ
DRIP

Izumi: あ　お…じさま
Ah. Mist...er

(SFX Izumi): びくっ
SHUDDER

Izumi: おじさま…っ
Mr. S!

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHUDDER

(SFX Izumi): はー
PANT

(SFX Izumi): はー
PANT

(SFX finger): ぬる
SCHLUP

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHUDDER

Kōichi: ホントに
You really are...

(SFX Izumi): はッ
PANT

(SFX penis/vagina): くにゅうう
RUB

(SFX penis/vagina): くち
RUB

(SFX penis/vagina): くち
RUB

(SFX Izumi): はっ
PANT

Kōichi: 悪い娘だ…っ
Such a bad girl...!

===Page 9=======================================================================

(SFX penis/vagina): ヌプププ
SCHLUUUP

(SFX penis/vagina): ちゅぷ　ちゅぷ　ちゅぷ
SCHLUP SCHLUP SCHLUP

(SFX Izumi): ひく　ひく
SHIVER SHIVER

Izumi: ふあっ　おー
Aah!

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐぷぷ
GLOP

(SFX penis/vagina): ギチ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ギチ
GRIND

(SFX Izumi): ひく
SHUDDER

(SFX Izumi): かく　かく
WOBBLE WOBBLE

Izumi: あ゛
AH!

Izumi: あ゛
AH!

Izumi: あ゛ー
AAH!

Kōichi: 悪い娘にはオシオキが必要だね
A bad girl needs punishment.

Izumi: ん
Mmn

Izumi: ふ
Phew

Izumi: ん゛ッ
Nnn

(SFX mouths): れるぅ　ぢゅるっ
LICK KISS


Kōichi: ボクの形になじむまで膣内（なか）で射精（だ）すよ
I'm going to cum in your pussy until it's my cocksleeve.

Izumi: ふッ
Phew

Izumi: …ひゃい
...Please.

(SFX mouths): ピチャ　ピチャ
DRIP DRIP

(SFX saliva): ぷる
QUIVER

===Page 10======================================================================

(Sign): 男子トイレ
MEN
NOTE: Restroom sign

(Sign): 女子トイレ
WOMEN
NOTE: Restroom sign

(SFX rain): ポ
DRIP

(SFX rain): タタ　タタッ
PITTER PATTER

===Page 11======================================================================

(SFX rain): ザアアアア
SSSSSSS
NOTE: Sound of heavy rain.

Daughter: ああっ　モオ　いきなり
Oh my god！ Why now!?

(SFX shoes/wet ground): バシャ　バシャ
SPLASH SPLASH

(SFX car horn): パアン
HONK

Kōichi: おーい
Heeey!

Daughter: パパ！？
Daddy!?

Kōichi: 良かったよ　打ち合わせの帰りでね　さ　2人とも乗りなさい
Glad I made it. Just got back from a meeting. Hop in you two.

Daughter: ラッキー　パパ愛してるぅ
Yay! Love you, Daddy!

===Page 12======================================================================

(SFX car blinker): チッカ　チッカ
CLICK CLICK

Kōichi: それじゃあ赤沢さん送ってそのまま事務所に戻るから
After I drop Akazawa off, I'm returning to the office.

Daughter: はーい　じゃね　赤沢
Okay. See you later, Izumi.
NOTE: She calls her Akazawa here but then Izumi later, which doesn't make any sense, making me think it's a typo.

Kōichi: ああ今日は遅くなるってママに伝えといてくれ
Oh yeah, tell Mom that I'm going to be late tonight.

Daughter: りょーかーい
Roger roger.

(SFX tire/ground): シャアアア
SKEEE

Izumi: 家族仲いいんですね
You and your family get along well.

Kōichi: ん…そう…かな
Is that right?

Izumi: 今日は大変みたいですね　お帰りが遅いーとか
Coming back late and all that, you must be swamped today.

Kōichi: 君を送ると娘に約束したからね
I did make a promise to bring you home.

Izumi: あら
Oh?

===Page 13======================================================================

Izumi: うちはさっき通り過ぎましたよ？
But you just drove past my home.

Izumi: はッ　んあ　お…ひひゃま
Aah. Ah. Mr...S.

(SFX Izumi): はッ　はっ
PANT PANT

Izumi: おっひ
Mist–

Izumi: んあ
Mm

(SFX tongue): れろ　れろ
BLEH BLEH

(SFX penis): ビク
SHIVER

(SFX tongue): ぺろ
SLURP

(SFX penis): ビク
SHIVER

(SFX Izumi): はッ
PANT

Izumi: ん
Nn

(SFX Izumi): はっ
PANT

Izumi: ん♡
Mm♡

(SFX Izumi): はあっ
PHEW

(SFX penis): びく
SHIVER

(SFX lips): ぢぅ
SMACK

(SFX penis): びく
SHIVER

===Page 14======================================================================

Izumi: ん…ふ
Nnn...mmm

Kōichi: ん
Nn

Izumi: あふ
Aah

Izumi: はふ
Om

(SFX Izumi): はッ
PANT

Kōichi: ん　んく
Nnmm

Kōichi: んッ
MMn

(SFX Izumi): はッ
PANT

Izumi: ちゅっちゅっ
Mmmnnn
NOTE: Kissing sound

(SFX Izumi): えれ
LICK

Izumi: ちゅっ
Mmm
NOTE: Kissing sound

Kōichi: どうしたん…だい？　いつもは
What's going on? You were...

Kōichi: お　お
Oh oh

Kōichi: 嫌がる…のに
So unwilling before.

(SFX Kōichi): びく
SHUDDER

(SFX Kōichi): びく
SHUDDER

Kōichi: んッ　んッ
Nn Nn

Izumi: ぷあ　ん
Ommm Nn

(SFX Izumi/penis): ぢゅぽ
SMACK
NOTE: Wet kissing

(SFX Izumi/penis): ぢゅぽ
SMACK
NOTE: Wet kissing

Izumi: んぷ
Om

Izumi: ふう…ん…
Mmmph

(SFX Izumi nose): ふッ
Nnph
NOTE: Breathing

(SFX mouth/penis): くぷぷ
Mmm

(SFX mouth/penis): ぢゅる　ぢゅ
DROOL　DROOL

(SFX Izumi nose): ふッ
Nnph
NOTE: Breathing

Kōichi: プライドの高い君がボクのチンポにかしづく…なんて
Always acting so stuck-up, now you're pleasuring cock...

Kōichi: お　あっ
Ah Ahh

Izumi: ん
Mn

Izumi: ぢゅるるる
Sluuurp
NOTE: Wet sucking noise

Izumi: ん　んッ
Mm mm

Kōichi: おッ
Oh

Kōichi: 男としてはたまらない…ね
Is pretty damn hot.

Kōichi: …っお
Oh

Izumi: ぢゅる
Slurp

===Page 15======================================================================

(SFX phone): ヴヴヴ
BZZZ

Kōichi: ああ　わたしだ
Hey, it's me.

(SFX phone): ピ！
BEEP!

Izumi: ん゛
Nnm

Izumi: んッ　んン
Nn nnm

(SFX mouth/penis): ヅュル
DROOL

(SFX mouth/penis): ぬる
WET

(SFX mouth/penis): しゅ
BLEH

(SFX mouth/penis): しゅ
BLEH

(SFX mouth/penis): ヅュル
SLURP

Daughter: あ　パパ　あたし泉美に連絡つかないんだけどー
Hey, Daddy. So I'm trying to get in touch with Izumi–

(SFX mouth/penis): ちゅぷ
SLURP

(SFX mouth/penis): ぬちゅ
SUCK

(SFX mouth/penis): れろー
LICK

Kōichi: ああ　欲しい本があるとかで本屋まで
Yeah, there was something she wanted at the bookstore.

Izumi: ん
Nn

Izumi: ん
Nn

Kōichi: うん　そう　そこ
Yeah, there.

Izumi: ん゛ーっ
Nmmm

Izumi: ん゛ッ
Mmm

(SFX Izumi nose): ふッ
Nnph

(SFX mouth/penis): くぷ　ぐぽ
SUCK SMACK

(SFX Izumi nose): ふッ
Nnph

Kōichi: あ…あ
Aaah

Kōichi: う゛
Uuugh

Kōichi: きっとまだ店内で
She's probably still in the store.

(SFX penis/mouth): ぐぷ　ぐぷ
KISS KISS

Izumi: んぷ
Ommn

Izumi: ふ…っう
Nnnph

Kōichi: ケイタイの電源でも切ってるんじゃないか　うん
Her phone's probably out of battery. Yeah.

Kōichi: ん゛ッ
Nnm

(SFX penis/mouth): れろ　れろ　ちゅ
BLEH BLEH KISS

Kōichi: ！
!

Daughter: そっかー　じゃあ時間置いてかけ直してみるよ
Alright, I try calling again later.

Kōichi: んッ
Mmm

Kōichi: ん
Mm

Kōichi: ん……はっ
Mmm Aah

Izumi: はッ
PANT

Daughter: ？　水音？　そっちまだ降ってんの？
What's that sound? Is it still raining over there?

(SFX mouths): しゃぶ　しゃぶ　ぴちゃ　ぴちゃ　ぴちゃ
KISS KISS SMACK SMACK

Izumi: …っふ　ふう
Nnph Phh

===Page 16======================================================================

Kōichi: ん？　いや　もう雨はあがったんだが
No? The rain already stopped.

(SFX penis/vagina): ぬ゛る　ぬる　くみゅ　ぬち
WET SCHLUP

Kōichi: 下の方はビチョビチョだよ
You're so damn wet down there.

Izumi: ー！
!

(SFX penis/vagina): ズン
THRUST

(SFX penis/vagina): びゅ　びゅ　ビチュ
GRIND GRIND GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ギュプ
GRIND

Izumi: …っか
Aaah

(SFX vagina): びく　びく　びく
TWITCH TWITCH TWITCH

Izumi: あ゛は
Aaaah

(SFX penis/vagina): ギュプ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ぷしっ
THRUST

(SFX penis/vagina): ぷしゅ
THRUST

Izumi: …っじさま
...Ster S.

(SFX Izumi): はっ　あッ
Aah Aah

Izumi: おじ…っじさま…あ
Mis...ter S.

(SFX Izumi): あ゛ッ
PANT

Daughter: ？　誰かいるの？
Is someone there with you?

(SFX bodies/bed): ギシ
CREAK

(SFX Izumi): ゆさ　ゆさっ
SHAKE SHAKE

===Page 17======================================================================

Kōichi: はは　事務所に誰もいなかったら仕事に困るよ
Haha. How's any work gonna get done if no one was here?

Izumi: …まっ
Mist...

Kōichi: ん
Nn

Kōichi: 呼ばれているから切るぞ
I gotta go. They need me.

Izumi: あッ　あ
Ah ah

Izumi: …じさま
...Mr. S.

Izumi: あっ
Ah

(SFX Izumi): ガクッ
WOBBLE

Izumi: あ゛
Ah

(SFX Izumi): ガク
WOBBLE

Kōichi: イカなくちゃ
Bye.

(SFX phone): ブ
BEEP

Kōichi: こら！
Hey!

Izumi: んあっ
Aaah

(SFX penis/vagina): ドチュ
SCHLUP

(SFX penis/vagina): ブチュ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ごりゅ
GRIND

Kōichi: 気づかれたらどうするんだ？
What do you think you're doing!

Izumi: お…じさま…こそ
What about you?

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐちゅ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ズプ　ズプ
SCHLUP SCHLUP

Izumi: こん…なっいつもよりカチカチ………でぇ
You're...so much harder... than ever.

Izumi: あ゛
Ah

Izumi: あッ
Ah

Izumi: あ゛
Ah

(SFX penis/vagina): ヌ゛ッ
SCHLUP

(SFX penis/vagina): ぶちゅっ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ぬぢゅ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ぢゅぐっ
GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ヌ゛ッユ
SCHLUP

===Page 18======================================================================

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐぽっ　ぐぽ
SMACK SMACK

Izumi: あ゛ぅ
Ah

Izumi: ーあ゛
Ah

Izumi: あー
Ah

Izumi: あ　だめ
Ah No

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHUDDER

Izumi: や
No

Izumi: とんじゃう
I'll cum.

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHIVER

Izumi: とんじゃ…あ゛
I'll... cum.

Izumi: おじ…さまっ
Mr... S.

(SFX hand): ふる
QUIVER

Izumi: や
No.

Izumi: つなぎ止めて…っ
Hold me...

Izumi: おじさまっ
Mr. S.

(SFX Izumi): はあ
AAH

(SFX Izumi): きゅ
SQUEEZE

Izumi: んッ
Nn

Izumi: はあ　はあ
Aah Aah

Izumi: おじさまっ
Mister

Izumi: ーこ…
—Ko...

===Page 19======================================================================

Izumi: 恒一さん！
Kōichi!

(SFX glass): パキン
CRACK

===Page 20======================================================================

Narration Izumi: あの年度（とし）の犠牲者は
There was actually
NOTE: Checking with the Yen Press translation of the novel, 犠牲者 (victim) is translated as "victim."

Narration Izumi: 本当はもうひとり
Another victim that year.

Kōichi: 大丈夫？
Are you alright?

===Page 21======================================================================

Izumi: あなた夜見山の人じゃないよね？
You aren't from around here, are you?

Narration Izumi: 同い年ぐらいなのになんだか
Though we were about the same age—

Kōichi: うん
No.

Kōichi: 東京から来たんだ
I'm from Tokyo.

Narration Izumi: 落ち着いた雰囲気
He was cool and composed.

Narration Izumi: 年上みたいな空気が
Acting like someone a little older.

Izumi: そう…
Huh.

Narration Izumi: 少しお兄ィ…に…
A little like my older brother.

Izumi: ………ッ
...Hic

===Page 22======================================================================

(SFX tears): ポロ　ポロ
DRIP DRIP

Kōichi: ！　どこか痛いの？
Hey! What's wrong? Are you hurt?

Izumi: 違うの
No.

Izumi: 大事な人が…　死んじゃったから
Someone important to me... had died.

Kōichi: そうなんだ
Oh.

Kōichi: じゃあ　ボクと同じだね
Then, we're the same.

===Page 23======================================================================

Izumi: 夜見山（ここ）へは葬式に…
You came here for the funeral...

(SFX hand): きゅっ
SQUEEZE

Izumi: そう…
I'm...

Izumi: ごめんなさい
So sorry.

Izumi: 少しだけ…
Just for a little bit.

===Page 24======================================================================

Izumi: ………う
...Sob

Izumi: う
Sob

(SFX Izumi): ひっ
SOB

(SFX Izumi): ひ
SOB

Izumi: …ッ
HIC

(SFX Izumi): びく
SHUDDER

(SFX hand): プル　プル
QUIVER QUIVER

Kōichi: ………
...

(SFX Kōichi): ぶるっ
SHIVER

(SFX tears): ポタッ　ポタ
DRIP DROP

===Page 25======================================================================

Kōichi: あれ？
Uh?

Kōichi: あれ？
Huh?

Kōichi: なんで…
What...

(SFX Kōichi): ズッ　ぐし
DRIP SNIFF

Izumi: わたしと同じね
You're the same.

Izumi: ………ヤダ
...Oh, my.

(SFX Izumi): ぞく　ぞく
TREMBLE TREMBLE

===Page 26======================================================================

Izumi: 目の前で男の子が泣くの見るなんて初めて
This's the first time I've seen a boy cry.

Kōichi: それは…　ボクだって
Me too, crying in front of a girl.

(SFX Kōichi): すんッ
BLUSH

Kōichi/Izumi: わたし/ボクたち…
We really are...

Kōichi/Izumi: 同じだね
The same.

===Page 27======================================================================

Izumi: は
Ah

Kōichi: ふは
Aah

Kōichi: は
Ah

Izumi: んっ
Nn

Izumi: …ッ
Mm

Kōichi: ん
Nn

Kōichi: んんっ
Nnn

(SFX mouth): ぷちゅ　んぷ
SMACK KISS

Izumi: んあ
Aanh

Kōichi: ん゛ーッ
Mnnn

(SFX mouth): ちゃぷ　れちゅ　ピチャ　ちゅぷ
SMACK KISS SMACK KISS

Izumi: ん　んッ
Nn Mm

Izumi: んぷ
Nnn

(SFX mouth): ちゅぷ　ちゅ　ちゅく
KISS KISS KISS

(SFX Izumi): びくっ
SHUDDER

Izumi: んん゛んッ
Mmmnnnn

(SFX Izumi): ビク
SHUDDER

(SFX Izumi): ふにゅ
SOFT

Izumi: きゃっ
Aah!

(SFX Izumi): ビク
SHUDDER

===Page 28======================================================================

Izumi: んはっ
Aah

Finger: カリ カリ
SCRATCH SCRATCH

Finger: カリ
SCRATCH

Izumi: んんんッ
Mmmmmnnn

Izumi: そこ　ダメ…っ
No. Not there.

(SFX Kōichi/Izumi): ド
FALL

===Page 29======================================================================

Izumi: だ…め
No...

Izumi: だめっ
No.

Izumi: それ　だめ…っ
Please, no.

(SFX tongue): ぺろ　ぺろ　ぺろ
LICK LICK LICK

(SFX tongue/vagina): ピチャ　ピチャ
DRIP DRIP

Izumi: なんでこんな
Why are you so...

(SFX Izumi): ビク
SHIVER

(SFX Izumi): ビク
SHIVER

Izumi: 慣れてるのぅ
Good at this?

(SFX tongue/vagina): ペチャ　ちゅぴ　ペチュ　ぬるるう
KISS KISS KISS SLOBBER

Izumi: あァあ
AAAah

===Page 30======================================================================

(SFX Izumi): はー
Aah

Narration Izumi: あれ？
Huh?

(SFX Izumi): はー
Aah

Kōichi (no speech bubble): その…　入院長くて看護婦さんが…
Uh... I was in the hospital for a while and so the nurse there...

(SFX hands): きゅっ
SQUEEZE

Izumi: んあ
Aaanh

Izumi: フケツ…
Pervert.

Izumi: は
Aah

Izumi: はっ
Aaah

Narration Izumi: なんでこうなったんだっけ？
How did things turn out like this?

Izumi: あ…
Ah

(SFX penis/vagina): くにゅ　くに　ふに
RUB RUB RUB

Izumi: な…まえ
Your name...

Izumi: 名前…教えて？
Tell me your name.

Kōichi: え
Huh.

Kōichi: あ　ご…　ゴメン
Oh, sorry...

Narration Izumi: わたし名前も知らない人と
I was doing it...

(SFX penis/vagina): とろ　くちゅう
WET RUB

Narration Izumi: スゴイこと…　シテる
With a guy whose name I didn't even know.

Kōichi (no speech bubble): ボクはー
My name's–

===Page 31======================================================================

Izumi: 一年前…
About a year ago...

Izumi: あなたに空缶ブツけたの
I threw a soda can at you.

Izumi: 覚えてる？
Do you remember?

Kōichi: え？
Huh?

Izumi: もう…やんなっちゃう
Please, I'd hate it...

Izumi: ウソでもいいから「覚えてるよ」ぐらい
So even if you don't remember, at least lie...

Izumi: 言いなさいー
And say that you do.

Izumi (no speech bubble): なによ
So, what.

Izumi (no speech bubble): ヤリ逃げじゃない
Was this supposed to be a one-night stand?
NOTE:"ヤリ逃げ" is slang for sleeping with someone and then cutting off all contact.

===Page 32======================================================================

Narration Izumi: ああ
Oh.

Narration Izumi: 思い出した
I remember now.

Narration Izumi: あの年度（とし）の最後の犠牲者
No one else–

Narration Izumi: 誰も知らない
Besides me–

Narration Izumi: わたしだけが知ってる
Knew of the the final victim of that year.

Narration Izumi: わたしのお腹に宿ったばかりのー
The one that I had just become pregnant with.

===Page 33======================================================================

Kōichi: ー美
–umi

Kōichi: 泉美！？
Izumi!?

Kōichi: 泉美！
Izumi!

Kōichi: どうしたの？
What's wrong?

(SFX tears): ポロ　ポロ
DRIP DRIP

Kōichi: いきなり泣き出して
You're crying.

Narration Izumi: ああ…　そうかー
Oh, I get it now.

===Page 34======================================================================

Narration Izumi: 「死者」はわたしー
I'm the extra person.
NOTE: The Yen Press translation of the novel translates 死者 (the dead) as "casualty" or "extra person."

===Page 35======================================================================

Izumi: ねえ　覚えてる？
Hey, do you remember?

Kōichi: う…ッ
Ugh...

Izumi: 「２６年前」空き缶ふつけた時のこと
When I hit you with that soda can 26 years ago.

Kōichi: ２６年ーって　何
26 years...?

(SFX Kōichi head): ズキ
PAIN

Kōichi: 言って…
What are you...

(SFX Kōichi head): ズキ
PAIN

Past Izumi (darkened speech bubble): やんなっちゃう
Please, I'd hate it...
NOTE: Repeat of line said on page 31.

Izumi: 思い出したの
I remembered.

Past Izumi (darkened speech bubble): 覚えてるよくらい言いなさい
At least lie and say that you do.
NOTE: Repeat of line said on page 31.

Izumi: わたし「２４年前」死んでるーって
That I'd died 24 years ago.

(SFX Kōichi head): ズキ
PAIN

Kōichi: …うっ
Ugh

===Page 36======================================================================

Kōichi: うわあああ
AAAAAAaaaaahhhhh

(SFX hands/neck): ギリ ギリ
TWIST TWIST

Izumi: か
Aaaggh

Izumi: かはっ
Aaahh

===Page 37======================================================================

Kōichi: …死者…を
Send the dead...

Kōichi: 死に還…せ
Back to death...

(SFX Kōichi): びく
FLINCH

Izumi: いい…よ
Kōichi...

Izumi: 恒一君…な…ら
Do... it. Kill... me.

Kōichi: は…っう
Aaaggh

(SFX Kōichi): ぶるっ
SHUDDER

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐり　ぐり
RUB RUB

(SFX speech bubble penis/vagina): きゅう　きゅううう
SQUEEZE SQUEEZE

(SFX penis): ビュブ
SQUIRT

Izumi: ー違…っ
No...

===Page 38======================================================================

Izumi: 違う…っの
No...

Izumi: んッ
Nn

Izumi: んッ
Nn

(SFX Izumi): ふッ
Aah

(SFX Izumi): ふう
Aah

(SFX penis/vagina): ゴチュ　ゴッ
THRUST THRUST

Izumi: こ…んなっ…のッ
I'm not...

Izumi: あ
Ah

Izumi: あ゛
Ah

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐぷっ　ヂュッ
THRUST THRUST

Izumi: ひあ　やっ　わた…
Aaah... No...

Izumi: わた…ひ
I'm...

(SFX penis/vagina): にゅぐ　じゅく
THRUST THRUST

(SFX penis/vagina): ぱちゅ　ぱちゅ　ぱちゅん　ぱちゅ　ぷちゅ
GRIND GRIND GRIND GRIND

Izumi: こん…なえっちな子じゃ
Not this kind of girl...
NOTE: "I'm not a slut."

(SFX Izumi): びく　びくっ
SHUDDER SHUDDER

Izumi: な…あ　あああ
Aaahh Aaahhh

===Page 39======================================================================

Kōichi: 赤沢さん
Izumi.
NOTE: Calls her Akazawa-san here.

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐぷ　ぐぽ　ぢゅぐ
GRIND GRIND

Kōichi: ん゛ッ
Nn

(SFX mouths): ちゅぷ　ぺちゅ
SMACK KISS

Izumi: はッ
Aah

Izumi: ん
Nn

Kōichi: 赤沢…っさん
Izumi.
NOTE: Calls her Akazawa-san here.

(SFX penis/vagina): ブチュ　ブチュ
THRUST GRIND

Kōichi: カワイイよ
You're too cute.

(SFX face): ポッ
BLUSH

Izumi: バ…っ　なに…
Wha–!

Narration Izumi: ウソ　ウソ！　そりゃよくキレイとは言われるケド
No way! I've always been told that I was "pretty."

(SFX penis/vagina): ズッ
THRUST

Kōichi: うわっ
Woah.

(SFX penis/vagina): プジュ
THRUST

(SFX speech bubble vagina): ぎゅ　ぎゅ
SQUEEZE SQUEEZE

(SFX speech bubble vagina): きゅううん♡
SQUUUEEEEZE

Izumi: 言って
–the heck!

Kōichi: 急に締め…っ
You're getting tighter...

Narration Izumi: その分キツイとか生意気とかカワイイなんて
But that's always followed with being called "stiff" or "stuck-up."

(SFX penis/vagina): ズプ
THRUST

Narration Izumi: お兄ィだってそんなことー
Even my brother never...

Izumi: あ゛
Aah

Izumi: あッ
Ah

Kōichi: カワイイよ
You're so cute.

Izumi: あッ
Ah

(SFX speech bubble vagina): きゅうん♡
SQUEEZE♡

Izumi: やっ
No.

(SFX penis/vagina): ぐゅぽ　ぐぶぷっ
GRIND THRUST

Kōichi: カワイイ♡
Too cute♡

(SFX speech bubble vagina): きゅきゅっ
SQUEEZE SQUEEZE

Izumi: やっ
No–

Kōichi: カワイイ
Cute.

(SFX speech bubble vagina): きゅうん
SQUEEZE

Izumi: やぁ…
No...

(SFX Izumi): はッ
Aah

Izumi: もぉ言わない…れぇ
Don't say that...

(SFX Izumi): はッ
Aah

Kōichi: だってカワイイって言うたびきゅんきゅん締めて
But every time I do you tighten up down there.

(SFX Izumi): ビクッ
SHUDDER

Izumi: ひっ
Aaah
NOTE: Heavy breathing.

Izumi: ひっ
Aaaah
NOTE: Heavy breathing.

(SFX Izumi): ビク
SHUDDER

Izumi: はひ
Aaahh
NOTE: Heavy breathing.

(SFX Izumi): ビクッ
SHUDDER

===Page 40======================================================================

Kōichi: ホントにかわいいよ
You're just too cute!

Izumi: ん゛あ゛ー！！
Nn Aah

Izumi: あっ
Ah

Kōichi: 締め過ぎ…っ
You're so tight...

Izumi: んんん゛っっ
NnnNN

(SFX Izumi): びく　びく
SHIVER SHIVER

Kōichi: や…ば　出るッ　出るっ！
Crap... I'm gonna cum!

Izumi: やあッ　外に…っ
No– pull out–

Kōichi: …って赤ざ…　足…っ　はなしてっ
Izumi– let go, your legs–

Kōichi: 膣内（なか）に…っ
I'm gonna cum...

Kōichi: 出…ッ
In you–

(SFX penis): ゴプ　ゴピュッ
SQUIRT SQUIRT

(SFX penis/vagina): どぷ
SQUIRT

Izumi: やあ゛あ゛あ゛ぁ
Nooooo.

===Page 41======================================================================

(SFX penis): びゅっ　びゅく
SHUDDER SHUDDER

(SFX penis/vagina speech bubble): コプ　コポ　ゴプ
SQUIRT SQUIRT

(SFX Izumi): ビク　ビク　ビク　ビクッ
SHUDDER SHIVER SHUDDER SHIVER

(SFX penis/vagina): ぬ゛る
WET

(SFX penis/vagina): こぴゅ
GLOP

(SFX Izumi): はー　はー　はー
Aah Aah Aah
NOTE: Heavy breathing.

(SFX penis/vagina): コプ
GLOP

===Page 42======================================================================

Kōichi: そう…だ
That's right.

Kōichi: あの秋の日君を
That day in autumn.

Kōichi: 抱いた
We made love.

Izumi: あはッ
Aaaagghhh

Kōichi (no speech bubble): 無理ーだ　２度も
Not again, I just can't...

Kōichi (no speech bubble): 愛する人を手にかけるなんて
Kill someone I love again...

===Page 43======================================================================

Kōichi (no speech bubble): できないー
I just can't...

(SFX Izumi): ゴホ ゴフ　ゲフッ
COUGH COUGH COUGH

Izumi: ………
...

Izumi: …殺さないの？これから…も
If you don't kill me now...

(SFX Izumi): ケフッ　ケフッ
COUGH COUGH

Izumi: 何人犠牲者が…でるかー
There will be more victims.

Kōichi: ………
...

Izumi: ーそう　うん
I see...

Izumi: 本当はわたしも卒業式まで生きてみたかったのよ
To tell you the truth, I want to make it until graduation.

===Page 44======================================================================

Izumi: ー今　またおなかに
Right now...

Izumi: あなたの赤ちゃんがいるの
I'm pregnant with your baby again.

Kōichi: また（・・）ー！？
Again!?

(SFX Kōichi): ぶるっ
SHIVER

Izumi: あの秋の日の後　ーわたし妊娠したの　気づいてすぐの頃流産してしまったわ
I got pregnant after that day. But I miscarried right after I realized it.

Izumi: ３組の２親等内じゃないから本物ではないけど
The Class 3 curse shouldn't have affected her.
NOTE: Literally, "The baby was within two degrees of separation from Class 3, so it wasn't the real thing." She's talking about the rules of the curse and who it applies to.

Izumi: わたしにとってはまぎれもなく「あの子」もあの年の犠牲者だった
But there's no doubt in me that she was another victim that year.
NOTE: Gender of child is ambiguous but I'm just going to go with "her."

Izumi: 卒業式までならあの子をギリギリ産み直せるかもしれない
If I live until graduation, I just might be able to give birth to her this time.

===Page 45======================================================================

Izumi: この子も死を招（よ）ぶのかしら？
Will this child also bring death with her?

Izumi: それともわたしと一緒に消えるのかしら？
Or will she disappear with me?

Izumi: ねえ
Hey.

Izumi: 死者から生まれるのは
Will the child of an extra–

Izumi (no speech bubble): 「生者」？
Be life?

Izumi (no speech bubble): 「死者」？
Be death?

===Page 46======================================================================

Izumi: …
...

(SFX coffin): ギッ
CREAK

Izumi: ーッ
–mn

Izumi: あ
Ah

Izumi: あッ
Ah

(SFX coffin): ギシッ　ギッ
CREAK CREAK

Izumi: あ゛ッあッ
Aah Ah

(SFX coffin): ギシ
CREAK

===Page 47======================================================================

Izumi: あッ
Ah

Izumi: あ
Ah

Izumi: だめっ
No

(SFX bodies): パン　パン　パン
SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK
NOTE: Sound of Kōichi nailing Izumi from behind.

(SFX penis/vagina): ヌプ　ズプ　ズッ　ズッ
GRIND GRIND GRIND GRIND

(SFX penis/vagina): ゴッ　ゴッ
POKE POKE
NOTE: Sound of penis hitting the cervix.

Izumi: あ あ゛ッ
Aaaahh

Izumi: 奥だめッ　赤ちゃ…あ゛
Not so deep... the baby...

(SFX coffin): ガタ　ガタ
SHAKE SHAKE

Izumi: 赤…ちゃ　あ　驚いちゃう
You'll upset... Ah... the baby.

Izumi: あ゛あ
Ah

Izumi: ゃあっ
Aaah

(SFX penis/vagina): ヂュッ　ぱちゅ　ヂュ　ヂュッ　ぱちゅっ
SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

(SFX bodies): ヌプ　ヌプ　ヌッ
GRIND GRIND GRIND

===Page 48======================================================================

Izumi: あ　や…っ　そこ…なめちゃ
Don't... lick... there.

Izumi: わき　らめっ
Not my arm...pits.

Izumi: あ
Ah

(SFX Kōichi): ヌコッ　ヌコッ
GRIND GRIND

(SFX speech bubble penis): ちゅぐ
SQUIRT
NOTE: Sound of ejaculation

(SFX speech bubble penis): ぶちゅ
SQUIRT

(SFX bodies): パン　パン
SMACK SMACK

Izumi: あ
Ah

Izumi: あッ
Ah

Izumi: …は…っ
Aah

Izumi: 忌々しい顔ー
Such an obnoxious face.

===Page 49======================================================================

Izumi: どう？
How about it?

Izumi: 今　恒一君はわたしのモノよ？
Kōichi belongs to me now.

(SFX fingers/doll lips): きゅっ
SMOOTH

===Page 50======================================================================

(SFX ???): かん
CLICK
NOTE: I have no idea what this is.

Izumi: あ…
Ah

===Page 51======================================================================

Izumi: 今
Just now–

Izumi: 動いた
She kicked.

===Page 52======================================================================

あとがき

まず謝っておきます。
エロ薄くてすいませんでした！
というわけで、「An〇ther」本第二弾というか、全改定版「Akather」でした。
今回回想シーンで差し挟んだ前作「今はもういない君へ」にてあかざーさんが榊原にこだわる理由として「妊娠
」を設定した時に「現象」が起こってる１年間ならギリギリ出産までいけるなぁ、などと考えてしまって、そう
いえばボテ腹を描いたことないなと思ったら描きたくてしょうがなくなってしまったのでした。当初はねっとり
したエロ描写入れようとか思ってたのですが、流れが散漫になる感じが強く、また単純に時間がなかったため断
念しました。
あぁ、榊原もネタばれ防止の意味も含めデブのおっさんにしたかったなぁ…。

今回ひさびさにネタメインの本を作ってみて、自分的には新鮮だったのですが、シリアスに寄り過ぎるのも読者
的にはつらいのかなぁ、とかいろいろ考えることも多かったですね。

ではまた機会があればお付き合いいただければ幸いです。

うたたねひろゆき

Afterword

First off, let me apologize– sorry for low amount of smut!
And so, here we have it, with part two my Another dōjinshi, or rather, the complete edition, Akather.
The idea, or something along these lines, was to insert my last work, Ima wa Mō Inai Kimi e, as a flashback scene and setting it up as the reason why Akazawa is so attached to Sakakibara, and then when she was pregnant, the year long timeframe during which the "extra person" curse was in effect would be barely enough time to make to their childbirth... and so then I realized I hadn't really ever drawn any preggo scenes before and I really, really wanted to draw one.
When first starting out, I had planned to put in a lot more smut scenes, but the flow of the comic went all over the place and in the end I straight up just didn't have enough time so I gave up on that idea and those scenes didn't make it in.
Oh yeah, I was also thinking about making Sakakibara a fat old man, which would've also served to stop readers from figuring out the twist in the end.

I had a lot of concerns when making this comic, like it's been a while since I've made a more plot-focused work and while it was refreshing for me, since the content was fairly heavy, I realize it might've not been so much fun for the reader.

Thank you for reading and I hope that we can meet again sometime.

Hiroyuki Utatane

===Page 53======================================================================

おくづけ
Colophon

「Akather」
"Akather"

（株）翔美
Shōbi Co., Ltd.

2012/08/11
08/11/2012

UROBOROS
UROBOROS

禁無断転載・無断複製、およびWEB等への違法アップロード等類似行為
未成年者の購読・閲覧はこれを禁じます。
No unauthorized reproduction, no unauthorized upload to the Internet, no sales to minors.

===Page 54======================================================================

UROBOROS
UROBOROS

This post has been edited by beowulflee: Mar 25 2018, 22:28

editing bounty for the DD project by atlantismaniac: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17770

editing bounty for Another project by beowulflee: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17804

once again, thank you to everyone who helps EHCOVE running (and quite busily at that). You - we - rock (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Current Script Status for:
[UROBOROS (Hiroyuki Utatane)] Akather (Another)
Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/518250/125e11d248/
Script: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=5102311
Editing Bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17804

[STARTED] Proofreading Script Mar. 18th...
[ONGOING] Script comments under discussion with TL JBT Mar.21...

PE

This post has been edited by PureEnergy: Mar 21 2018, 21:26

(C71) [Muchi Muchi 7 (Hikami Dan, Terada Zukeo)] Muchi Muchi Angel Vol. 13 (Bleach) [English]

If this is acceptable I would like to complete this gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/1022053/a7e79b37ec/
with my edits: https://e-hentai.org/g/1200391/37fce0f753/
(this is my first private gallery, I dont know if it's viewable to everyone else)

-Page 20:
--Top right bubble

What's this?
You still want to do it even though I squeezed you so much yesterday?

Fufu...
Not that I don't mind it ♥
Since you can't forget the first woman you've done it with

-- Top left bubble

Pour all of your youthful desires into me ♥

-Page 21

Well look at that ♥
Does the tightening of a woman's raw meat jar feel that that good?

I will squeeze you so many times ♥
cum inside my vagina as much as you want ♥

This post has been edited by q91: Mar 19 2018, 16:27

Accepted : https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17811
Completed :
 _CT19___Serenta__BOM___Ofuro_DAYS__DOG_DAYS_.txt ( 18.67k ) Number of downloads: 47

Proofreaded edit :  _CT19___Serenta__BOM___Ofuro_DAYS__DOG_DAYS_.txt ( 18.89k ) Number of downloads: 20

Page 1
成人向け
For adults

１８歳末満の
購入．閲覧禁止
Purchase or viewing is forbidden
if younger than 18 years old.

Page 2
成人向け
For adults

１８歳末満の
購入．閲覧禁止
Purchase or viewing is forbidden
if younger than 18 years old.

Page 3
1)
我々ガレット（以下略）
ジェノワーズ！
We are Gallette's
Génoise!

ちゅどーん
*Boboom*

あなたの大事に姫様は
我々がさらわせて頂きます。
We have in our hands
your precious princess.


2)
で
And so,

ガウル様は勇者様との
一騎打ちをご所望です。
Gaul-sama wishes
to duel Hero-sama.

んん~！
Mmh~!

3)
勇者さんが断ったら
姫様がどうなるか
ーーーーーー
If Hero-san refuses,
who knows what would happen?

うおおおおお
Uoooooh!

4)
受けて立つに決まってる
I take up the challenge!

ぐっ
*Guts*

どこの誰とだって
戦ってやる！
No matter who or when,
I will fight!

で。
And so.

Page 4
1)
捕まりました。
He got caught.

あ。。。
Ah...

あれ？
Hey?

だら
*sweat*

だら
*sweat*

まさかビスコッティの勇者が
あんな手に引っかかるなんて
ーーーーーー
No way... The hero of Biscotti
was caught by using such a simple scheme…

2)
あんな手
Scheme

リコ！？
Rico!?

3)
アホ
Idiot!

なのかしら
I wonder...

アホやなー
Yer an idiot!

。。。。。。ロリコン
......Lolicon.

うっ
Uhh...

だら
*sweat*

だら
*sweat*

ぼそっ
*whisper*

Page 5
1)
それにしても
Even then,

この勇者
ーーーーーー
this Hero...

え！？
Eh!?

まだ何か”
What is it?"

アホー
アホー
I~diot!
I~diot!

ロリコン
Lolicon.

2)
ちょっと
He's

臭いますわね
really stinking.

3)
ルージュちゃん！
Rouge-chan!

ちゃんと
Come here.

はい？
Yes?

汗臭いぞ勇者
You stink of sweat, Hero-sama.

臭うぞロリコン
You're stinking, lolicon.

もわっ
*smog*

だっておフロに入る
ところにキミ達が来たから。。。
But you all came just
as I was heading to the bath...

ううっ
Uuhh

4)
えぇい
Aayy!

わー
Waah!

キリがない！
They're endless!

5)
いったい
ドコへ行ったんだ！！
Just where
have you gone to!!

アホ勇者ー！！
Idiot Heroo!!

ぞろ
*march*

ぞろ
*march*

Page 6
1)
入浴中でした。
He's in the middle of bathing.

え？
Eh?

ごし
*scrub*

ごし
*scrub*

いやだって
Well, I'm

汗臭いから風呂入れって。。。
bathing to remove the stink...

2)
そりゃ学校終わってスグに
召喚されてそのまま戦に参加して
ホコリと汗まみれになって
I was summoned and had to
fight just as school ended, so
I'm covered in dust and sweat.

ぶっ
*pour*

ぶっ
*pour*

いざおフロに入ろうかって時に
よびだされるんだもんなぁ
You should not be able
to summon during a bath.

ざぱぁっ！
*splash!*

3)
えっ？
Ehh?

ざざーー
*drip*

きゃっ！！
Kyah!!

つるん
*slide*

4)
むぎゅ！
Mugyu!

ゴッ
*bump*

ぽょん
*Boing*

Page 7
1)
あらあら”
Ara ara!"

ささっ
*swish*

大変失礼しました
I'm very sorry.

おケガはありませんか
Are you hurt?

勇者様♪
Hero-sama♪

な、なっ
W-,wh

ガタッ
*rattle*

なんでキミがココに！？
What are you doing here!?

ベールですわ❤
My name is Vert❤

2)
今日一日たいへん
お疲れでしょうから
You were fighting all day
and you must be tired, so...

お背中を流して差し上げようと
思いまして
I was thinking of helping you
wash your back.

3)
けけけっ！
結構です！！
I-I-It's!
It's fine!!

それに戦は
どうしたんですか！？
And besides, shouldn't
you be on the battlefield!?

戦場のことでしたら
There's no problem.

4)
ぶるぁぁぁぁ
*Self-confidence*

将軍にお任せ
してきました☆
I'm leaving it
to the general☆

それってサボりたいだけじゃぁ
You just want
to slack off!

Page 8
1)
さぁ
お流ししますから
Well, I'm
going to wash your back, so...

ニコ
*smile*

ニコ
*smile*

サボりじゃないですよ？
I'm not slacking off, you know?

まにあってます”
I guess that's right..."

2)
たゆん❤
*jiggle❤*

3)
ぽよん
*boing*

ぽよん
*boing*

どうされました？
Is there a problem?

いえ”
No..."

4)
流してもらう事に
なりました
He became like that
just from being washed.

ドキ
*thump*

ドキ
*thump*

この勇者、なかなかに
エロである。
This Hero is really
perverted.

Page 9
1)
それじゃ
腕あげてくださいね~
Well then,
lift your arm please~

ドキ
*thump*

ドキ
*thump*

は、はい。
Y-, yes.

ムニュ❤
*squeeze❤*

ごし
*scrub*

ごし
*scrub*

ドキ
*thump*

ドキ
*thump*

ふにっ
*squeeze*

ふにっ
*squeeze*

ぽよん❤
*boing❤*

2)
あっ。。。
Sa-...

あのっ
Say,

当たってるん
だけどーーー
It's bumping me so...

ドキ
*thump*

ドキ
*thump*

3)
あらっ”
Araa!"

私は気にしませんよ~♪
I don't mind♪

4)
で、でもっ
B-, but,

そ、そのっ
ーーーーーー
Th-, this...

勇者様はこういうのは
お嫌いですか？
Does Hero-sama dislike
such a thing?

わあぁぁぁっ
Waaaaahh

ムニュ❤
*squeeze❤*

ムニュ❤
*squeeze❤*

い、いえ”
N-, no..."

Page 10
1)
あっ
Sa-

あのっ
Say,

ムニュ❤
*squeeze❤*

ごし
*scrub*

ごし
*scrub*

ムニュ❤
*squeeze❤*

まっ、前は
I can take care

ちょっと。。。
of the front...

ムニュ❤
*squeeze❤*

気にしないでいいですよ~
I'll do it, don't worry~

2)
そうじゃなくて
It's not that!

あっ
Ahh!

ビクッ
*jolt*

3)
さわ
*slide*

さわっ
*slide*

4)
あらあら~？
Ara ara~?

5)
わぁぁぁぁ
Waaaaah!

これって❤
What's that❤

ぎゅうっ❤
*squeeze❤*

Page 11
1)
こういうのは
嫌いかしら
I wonder if you
don't like it...

2)
ふる
*headshake*

ふる
*headshake*

3)
そのままでいて
下さいね❤
I'll take care
of it then❤

にゅるっ
*slide*

ぬゅる
*slide*

コフン
*cough*

くちゅっ
*grope*

ぬちゅっ
*slide*

Page 12
1)
んっ
ーーーーーー
Mmh...

これはどう？
How is it?

ぬちゃ
*slide*

ぬるっ
*slide*

2)
ぬっ
*slide*

気持ちいいでしょう❤
It feels good, doesn’t it❤

んっ
Nnh.

にゅるっ
*slide*

3)
たぷっ
*tremble*

う、うん
。。。
Y-, yes...

あっ
Ahh!

ビクン
*jolt*

ぬちゃっ
*slide*

ぬっ
*slide*

4)
じゃぁ
And

こっちは？
There?

うん。。。
Yes...

うあっ
Uahh!

くちゅっ
*grope*

ぬちゃっ
*slide*

あぁっ！！
Aahh!!

Page 13
1)
あのっ。。。ボク
Say... I

も、もう。。。
C-, can't...

ガマンできないの？
You're at your limit?

くちっ
*grope*

ぬちゃっ
*slide*

2)
もうちょっとだけ待って
ーーーーーー
Wait a little bit...

スッ
*slip*

3)
こっちで
出したほうが
It feels
better when

たゆん❤
*jiggle❤*

気持ちいいですよ❤
they are out in the open❤

Page 14
1)
それじゃココに
座って下さいね❤
Well then, please
sit here❤

あらっ
Araa...

っぷ
*stab*

ああっ
Aahh!

にゅぷっ
*slide*

にゅるん
*slide*

ホントにもう
出ちゃいそうなんだ
It really seems like
it's going to come out.

2)
どう？
So?

こっちのほうがいいでしょ？❤
Is it good like that too?❤

うん。。。気持ちよすぎて。。。
Yes... It feels way too good...

にゅっぷ
*slide*

あっ
Ahh.

もう。。。
I can't...

ぬっぷ
*slide*

3)
はぁ
Haa.

んっ
Nnh.

いつでも射精（だ）して
いいですからね❤
You can let it out
whenever you want❤

は、はい。。。
Y-, yes...

ぬっぷ
*slide*

ぬっぷ
*slide*

にゅぷっ
*slide*

はぁ
Haa.

ねっ
*slide*

ちゅく
*kiss*

ぬっ
*slide*

Page 15
1)
あっ
Ahh.

はぁ
Haa.

はぁ
Haa.

うあ！
Uah!

あら
Ara?

そんなに気持ちいい？
It feels that good?

ぬっ
*slide*

ぬっ
*slide*

2)
じゃぁ。。。
Well then...

ぬちっ
*slide*

にゅぷっ
*slide*

こんなのは
どうかしら❤
How about this❤

3)
じゅぷっ
*slosh*

れろん❤
*lick❤*

ぬぷっ
*slide*

っぷ
*stab*

4)
はぁぁぁぁ！！
Haaaaa!!

はぁ
Haa.

ガク
*shake*

ガク
*shake*

はぁ
Haa.

ガク
*shake*

そろそろかしら
Are you there?

いいですよ
It's ok!

射精（だ）しちゃって♪
Let it out♪

も、もう
I, I can't...

ガク
*shake*

はぁ
Haa.

はぁ
Haa.

ガク
*shake*

射精（で）るっ！！
I'm coming!!

あっ
Ahh.

Page 16
1)
ビュッ
*squirt*

ピュッ
*squirt*

きゃっ❤
Kyah❤

ピュッ
*squirt*

ビュッ
*squirt*

ビュクッ
*squirt*

2)
はぁ
Haa.

ごぷっ
*burble*

はぁ
Haa.

はぁ
Haa.

びゅるっっっ
*squirt...*

気持ちよかった
ですか？
Did it feel
good?

はぁ
Haa.

こんなにいっぱい
出ちゃうんだ❤
So much of it
came out❤

ぺろっ❤
*lick❤*

Page 17
1)
びくぅっ！
*shock!*

ドゴッ
*smash*

2)
戦場におらん思うたら
I looked for you on the battlefield,

こんな所でサボって
ナニしてんねん！！
But here you are slacking off
and doing who knows what!!

3)
パン
*tap*

パン
*tap*

ギブ！！
I give!!

ギリ
*bound*

しかもこっそり
自分だけ楽しむとか
ズルイやんか！
It's awful of you
to keep all the fun
for yourself!

ギリ
*bound*

4)
私たちも混ぜろエロ勇者
Stir us up too, pervert Hero.

ガッツ
*impact*

えっと。。。
命令ですか”
Uuuh...
Is that an order?"

Page 18
1)
さっき出したばかりなのに
もうこんなに
Even though you just came,
you're still quite lively.

ギーン
*throb*

ギーン
*throb*

さすが勇者様♪
As expected, Hero-sama♪

こっちも準備できてる
I'm preparing there, too.

くちっ
*slurp*

ノワールのちっさい
ま●こ見て勃ってしもた
んか。やっぱりロリコン
なんやな
You got so hard looking
at Noir's tiny p●ssy.
You're really a lolicon,
ain'tcha?

2)
それで
ーーーーーー
Well
then...

私はいつでも構いませんよ
We are ready when you are.

くぱ
*spread*

勇者さんは
誰のま●こに
挿れたいんや？
Which p●ssy
will you stab,
Hero-sama?

ちゅくっ
*spread*

うちもOK
やで！
Mine is
ready too!

選べロリコン
Choose, lolicon.

くちっ❤
*spread❤*

Page 19
1)
つぷっ
*push*

ぐっ
*hump*

やっぱりちっちゃい娘が
好きなのかしら
It seems you truly like
little girls, don’t you?

はぁ
Haa.

。。。大きい
... It's big.

はぁ
Haa.

でもノワールのやと
ちっちすぎて全部入れはんな
But Noir's thing is
too small to put all of it in.

くちっ
*slurp*

ずぷっ
*thrust*

くちっ
*slurp*

きゅっ❤
Kyuh❤

2)
はぁ
Haa.

は、入った
Ha, it's in!

んっ！
Nhh!

はぁ
Haa.

はぁ
Haa.

ぐり
*grind*

ぐりっ
*grind*

3)
くちゅっ
*slurp*

くちっ
*slurp*

ゴッ
*stab*

4)
おなかにいっぱい入ってるーーー
My tummy is full...

はぁ
Haa.

勇者の大きすぎ
Hero is too big.

ずっ
*shove*

はぁ
Haa.

ずりゅ
*shove*

ごめん
Sorry.

Page 20
1)
ノワールの中は
どうですか？勇者様
How is it inside
Noir, Hero-sama?

す、すぐに奥に
It just bumped

当たる。。。”
inside..."

はぁ
Haa.

えぇなぁ二人だけで
楽しんで
Heyyy, only the two of
them are having fun.

ぷに
*squish*

ぷに
*squish*

はぁ
Haa.

はぁ
Haa.

ちっちくて
It's so,

すごく狭いよ
so tight...

コッン
*knock*

コッン
*knock*

2)
私たちも混ぜて欲しいですわ❤
We want to be stired up too, you know❤

4)
ぅあぁぁぁぁぁぁ
そこ。。。ダメ！！
Uaaaaaaah!
There... No!!

ガク
*shake*

ぎゅっ❤
*tug❤*

トン
*bump*

トン
*bump*

あらあら❤
勇者様のがまだ
大きくなってますよ
Ara ara❤
It seems Hero-sama's
thing got bigger.

ビクン！！
*jolt!!

ガク
*shake*

ビク！！
*jolt!!*

ムクッ
*swell*

ムク
*swell*

Page 21
1)
トン
*bump*

トン
*bump*

はぁ
Haa.

せやなぁ❤
That's right❤

2)
ノワはここトントンされるの
ホンマ好きやな❤
He really likes Noi
He's like a piston❤

トン
*bump*

ぅあっ！
Uahh!

ぐにょり
*squeeze*

きゅうぅぅぅぅ❤
*squeeeeze❤*

3)
ノワールもずいぶん
ノッってきましたわね
Noir also came
a lot, didn’t she?

ぬぷ
*slide*

ちゅぷっ
*slide*

んっ
Nhh.

はぁ
Haa.

奥にーーー
Inside...

はぁ
Haa.

はぁ
Haa.

奥にコンコン
当たるーーー
It's hitting
inside...

はぁ
Haa.

コッ
*bump*

コッ
*bump*

そろそろイキ
そうかしら？
Are you at
your limit?

ぬぷぷっ
*slide*

ちゅぷっ
*suck*

ぐっぽり咥え
込んどるなぁ☆
You're putting more
and more into her☆

Page 22
1)
んっ
Nhh.

ちゅぷっ
*suck*

はぁ
Haa.

ずぷっ
*slide*

お腹。。。すごい！
My tummy... Amazing!

ああっーーー！！
Aaahh...!!

あっ
Ahh.

あっ
Ahh.

ゴッ
*bump*

ゴッ
*bump*

ちゅく
*suck*

ぬぷっ
*slide*

2)
イ、イっちゃう
C-, coming!

はぁ
Haa.

ガク
*shake*

ガク
*shake*

ボ、ボクも
ーーーーーー
Me, me too...

はぁ
Haa.

3)
ガク
*shake*

ぶるるっ
*tremble*

ガク
*shake*

はぁ
Haa.

ゴッ
*bump*

ゴッ
*bump*

はぁ
Haa.

4)
ぴゅっ
*spurt*

ちゅぽっ
*slurp*

ビクン
*jolt*

ビクン
*jolt*

Page 23
1)
またいっぱい
射精（だ）しましたね~
You let out a
lot again, didn’t you~

あっ
Ahh!

ビクン
*jolt*

びゅるっ
*release*

はぁっ
Haah!

ビクン
*jolt*

とぷっ
*pour*

ぴちゃっ
*splash*

ビクン
*jolt*

びゅっ
*squirt*

ビクン
*jolt*

びゅっ
*squirt*

すごいなぁ
全然止まらへん❤
It's awesome!
It won't stop❤

2)
それじゃ次は
ウチの番やで
Well then,
now's my turn

ビクン
*jolt*

ビクン
*jolt*

ぴちゃ
*drip*

3)
はぁ？
Haa?

次は私ーーー
Next is me---

まだするの？
It's not over?

何言うてんねん！
ベールはさっき
ヤっとったがな！
What are you saying!
You just did it
before, Vert!

あれはノーカンですわ
Can't you let me rest a bit?

Page 24
1)
はっはっは
Hahhahha!

これはすごい
That's awesome!

お館さま？
Leader?

2)
若い騎士たらが
頑張っている
ようでござる
It seems like the
young knights are
doing their best!

わ、我々は加勢しないほうが
良いかと。。。。。。”
I wonder if not participating
is a good thing......"

3)
そのころーーー
During that time...

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

なで
*pet*

4)
ねぇヴァノン。。。
。。。。。。。。。
。。。。。。。。。
Say Vernon...
.........
.........

なで。。。
*pet...*

5)
勇者さま
ーーーーーー
Hero-sama
......

アホ
勇者ー
Idiot
Heroo-

わー
Waa-

わー
Waa-

おそいですね。。。
is late, isn't he...

おわり
Fin

Page 25
あ　と　が　き
Afterwords

まいど！BOMでございます！
今回は二期も決まっているDOG DAYS本なのですよ~。
As always! It's BOM!
This time it’s the second DOG DAYS book that is

being released.

シンプルで深い説明なく入り込めるファンタジー作品、
しかも安心して観られる作品ということでお気に入りですね。
It's a simple fantasy work that needs no

explanation,
I like such works where there's nothing to worry

about.

でもちょっと魅力的なキャラクターが多すぎて、各キャラの
お当番回的なものが無かったのが残念がな~？
ということで、三バカにスポットを当ててみましたが
いかがでしたでしょうか？
But it's a shame we're missing so many characters,
as this series has way too many cute girls!
I have chosen the three idiots this time,
how did it go?

本編での大きな出番は姫様誘拐ぐらいでしたけど、
それ以外でも常にチョイ役出ているような面白キャラ
って結構好きなので、二期でも活躍して欲しいところ
ですね。
In this book the princess was kidnapped but,
outside of that, she didn't do much.
I really like her, and I wished she would have done
more.

てなところで、今回はココまで！
また機会があればお合いいたしましょう。
Well then, I guess this wrap things up!
I hope there'll be another occasion to meet again.

２０１２年　１月　BOM
January 2012 BOM

Page 26
Serenta presents
お風呂DAYS
Serenta presents
Bath DAYS

奥付
Publisher's notes

発　行　日　：　２０１２年　１月１５日　初版
描いた人　　：　BOM
連　絡　先　：　kshinya@mx３５．tiki．ne．jp
　　　　　　　　　http：//ww３５．tiki．ne．jp/¯kshinya/
Date of production : 01/15/2012 first edition
Artist : BOM
Contact information: kshinya@mx３５．tiki．ne．jp
　　　　　　　　　http：//ww３５．tiki．ne．jp/¯kshinya/

印　刷　所　：　サンライズパブリケーション株式社会
　　　　　　　　　http://www/sunrisep.co.jp/
Printing office: Sunrise Application Corporation
　　　　　　　　 　http://www/sunrisep.co.jp/

　１８歳未満の方へは頒布できません。
複製および無断転載はお断ります。
Cannot be distributed to minors.
Unauthorised reproduction is forbidden.

☆次回、閣下参戦？！
☆Next time, her excellency is going to war!?

This post has been edited by Enatcon: Mar 26 2018, 08:22

(C71) [Muchi Muchi 7 (Hikami Dan, Terada Zukeo)] Muchi Muchi Angel Vol. 13 (Bleach) [English]

If this is acceptable I would like to complete this gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/1022053/a7e79b37ec/
with my edits: https://e-hentai.org/g/1200391/37fce0f753/
(this is my first private gallery, I dont know if it's viewable to everyone else)

-Page 20:
--Top right bubble

What's this?
You still want to do it even though I squeezed you so much yesterday?

Fufu...
Not that I don't mind it ♥
Since you can't forget the first woman you've done it with

-- Top left bubble

Pour all of your youthful desires into me ♥

-Page 21

Well look at that ♥
Does the tightening of a woman's raw meat jar feel that that good?

I will squeeze you so many times ♥
cum inside my vagina as much as you want ♥

The link works, the edits are fine, and you can upload the new complete gallery. This wasn't an EHCOVE project, I just a compilation by Lkelon, I just linked sources in the comment. You don't need mine or EHCOVE's or anyone's permission to replace his merge with an even better one. Good job!

If you'd like to translate/edit some Bleach or other content for EHCOVE, now, this is something we can chat about more (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Current Script Status for:
(CT19) Serenta BOM Ofuro DAYS DOG DAYS
Gallery Page: https://e-hentai.org/g/853339/8008bc7212/
Script Page: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?act=A...t&id=115571

Updated Script here:

[STARTED] Proofreading Script Mar. 21st...
[ONGOING] Script comments under discussion with TL Mar.23rd...
[FINISHED] Script Updated by Translator Enatcon Mar.26th...


PE

This post has been edited by PureEnergy: Mar 27 2018, 05:29