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SOYOSOYOです~: SOYOSOYO here~.
彩~IRODORI~: This is my first event-only book with IRODORI, and it's my first since I was with Kocher, so it's like I'm doing everything for the first time again… that’s how it feels, anyway.
そういえば: Speaking of which, when I first participated, I sold all 300 copies and raised my hands in joy. How nostalgic it all seems now (laughs).
そんな私も:Next year, I’ll be working on a game, so if you see it, please buy it.
ではーっ: Ciao!

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後(先?)描き Ver WHITE: After(fore?)word Ver. WHITE
初めての方:Hello to all you first-timers!
毎度の方: And thank you to the repeaters!
本当に: Finally, it’s a new book from IRODORI.
しかも: Not only that, it’s our first event-only book, not available in stores, an expression of gratitude for those who made the trip out to this event.
楽しんで: I’d be happy if you would enjoy it.
新匠: Nittakumi
何故か: For some reason, it’s suddenly… Jouban

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~ってことで: And it’s SOYOSOYO again.
これは: This is a limited edition book based on a complete version of Hakanai that dropped at the Spring Comic Revolution (TL note: a doujin event held twice a year between 1987 and 2005).
春の際: At the spring event, we gave copy books and pens to the first 300 customers, but I felt unsatisfied, so I’m glad I had a chance to do it as a rare event book.
今回: In a sense, the one who bought it this time might be lucky!?

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大佐殿: Captain, ma’am!! Sergeant Sagara, reporting as instructed!!
タッッ: FX: ta: standing at attention

2

緊急事態との: I was told it was an emergency, but what-
!?: !?

3

ブブ―: FX: bubu: nose bleeding

4

よく来て: Thank you for coming, Sagara-san The truth is…
あなたに: I have something important to tell you…
聞いていただけ: Will you listen… to me!?

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じっっ自分は: I… regarding this type of insolent behavior, I-!!
相良軍曹!!: Sergeant Sagara!!

2

こっ: Th-this is an order from your superior officer!!
目を反らさず: Do not look away. Continue to look at me!!

3

―そうです: Yes. My chest… my nipples…

5

私のお尻: My butt…
そして: and…

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私のアソコ: My special place…

2

た…: C-captain!! Please get a hold of yourself!!
こっっ: If we’re found like this, a court-martial won’t suffice!!

3

大佐殿: Captain!!
…: …

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どうです…: How is it, Sagara-san…
ハッキリと: Can you see my embarrassing place clearly…?

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もっと: More… deeper…
ヌチャッ: FX: nucha: pussy being spread
本当の私を: I want you to see the true me…

2

ビクッ: FX: biku: twitching
んっっ: Nnh…ha…

3

ホラ…: Look…
ねえ…: Please… praise me…
大佐は:Tell the captain she’s a lewd girl…
ア…アソコ丸出しで: …that she’s a pervert who drips perverted juices from sticking her fingers in her pussy…

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もう: Please stop this, Captain!!
自分には: I do not understand what you are doing…!?
…あさか: …could it be that you are testing my resistance to seduction!?
…: …

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違いますっ!: You’re wrong!!
!?: !?

2

相変わらず: You’re always such a dunce…
もっ: S-sorry… I’m not very experienced with these things…

3

あなたと: I want to have sex with you!!
私の: I want you… to fill my precious place… with your thing!!

4

この本気汁は: This juice is coming out for you… will you please take responsibility!?
ヌチュッ x2: FX: nuchu: pussy dripping

5

それともこれ以上: Or do you intend to embarrass me even more!?

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スッ: FX: su: penis being taken out
りょっ: R-roger!!

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ズブッ: FX: zubu: penis being inserted
キャッッ: Eeep!!
痛っっ…: It hurts!!

2

そ…: Y-yes…that’s it…
ズリュッx2: FX: zuryu: penis thrusting
そのまま: Just keep going like this…

3

ニュッ: FX: nyu: squeezing breasts
アッッ: Aah!!

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ヤッッ: No!
アッンッッ: Aaah…
ジュブッ x2: FX: jubu: thrusting
さっがらさ: Sa-sagara-san… it’s … too big…!!

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あっっ: Ah…!
もう: That’s enough…!!
ズリュッ x2: FX: zuryu: thrusting

2

ズリュッ: FX: zuryu: thrusting

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アアッッ: Aaah!!
こっ: Th-this is an order- aah!!

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大佐殿!!: Captain!!
一度追行した: I cannot take back a mission I’ve already carried out!!
ジュッ x2: FX: ju: thrusting

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んっあ: Nh! Aah!
あっっ: Aah!
ダ…: N-no…
何か…: Something….strange…!!
ああああ: Aaaahhh!!
ズブアッッ: FX: zubua: penis thrusting

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さ…: Sa… Sagara-san.
ビュッ x2: FX: byu: ejaculating
こ…: What… what will our relationship be from now on…

3

はい: This is a mission, so our relationship as officer and subordinate is unchanged.
!!?: !!?

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マ…マオの: Ma…Mao, you idiot!!
教えてくれた: You said if I did it like you taught me, I could make his heart mine…
ん!?: Hm!?

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ゴソッ: FX: goso: cloth shifting

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う~ん: FX: u~n: stretching

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スッ: FX: su: touching breast

5

大佐殿: Captain…

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相良さん…: Sagara-san…

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ビクン: FX: bikun: twitch

2

チュク: FX: chuku: touching moist pussy

3

ビクッ: FX: biku: twitch
あン: Ahn!

4

ハァ x3: FX: haa: breathing
はっ はあ: Ha… haaa…unh! Aah….
あっ…: Aahh….

5

た…: C-captain….

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その格好は…: that outfit…!?
あの…: Um…does it not suit me?
い いえ…: No… on the contrary, it suits you very well.

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ゴキュ: FX: gokyu: gulp

3

?: ?

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スッ: FX: su: touching

5

あっ: Ah… Sa-Sagara-san!?
II-4: 2-4
てっさ: Tessa

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トロン: FX: toron: lustful feeling

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ペタン: FX: petan: sitting

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クイッ: FX: kui: tugging cloth

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ウンっ!: Unfh!

3

あっ!: Ah! No…
だ…: No… don’t!!

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うン…: Unh…Ah! Haa…
ビクン: FX: bikun: twitch

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ハッ!: Ma’am! Is there a problem, ma’am?
プシュ~: FX: pushu: spray

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グイッ: FX: gui: spreading pussy
こ…: This… this area seem suspiciously moist…

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み…: No… don’t look!!

2

あン!: Ah!
ジュプ: FX: jupu: dripping

3

見るも何も: Forget looking, once it’s like this…
ビク x2: FX: biku: twitch

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で 本気で: So… do you really want to stop?
ハア x2: FX: haa: breathing

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大佐殿!?: Captain!?
はあ:Haa…

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コレを: This…

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奥まで入れて: …please put it in deep…
して下さい: and make me feel good.

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YES! MAM!!: Yes, ma’am!! (or leave as is)
ビクン!: FX: bikun: twitch
ビクッ: FX: biku: twitch
ああっ!!!: Aahh!!!
ジュプ: FX: jupu: thrusting

2

ウゥ!!: Unh!!
あぁっン…!: Aaahn!

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ムムっ: Hmmm… as expected, Captain. Such wonderful honor.

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もっと速くですか?: Do you want it faster!? Shall I add more knots!? (TL note: knot, short for nautical mile per hour, is a measure of speed.)
あああ: Aaah!!

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2

ズップ: FX: zuppu: thrusting
ジュップ: FX: juppu: thrusting
ンあああっ!!: Aaaah!! It’s so great!!! I’m gonna cum…
自分も: I also feel like releasing it inside…unf!

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ああっ: Aah… no!

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な 中はダメです!: Not inside!
そ外に…: Outside… outside!!

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いっぱい: Cum lots! On me!

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ハァ: FX: haa: breathing

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はあ: Haa…
はっ はあ: Hah…haa….

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相良さん: Sagara-san…

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―いつまで: Just how long do you intend to keep playing around?
やっつ!!: No!!
キャッッ!!: Eeep!!
いっその事: Just get it over with already.

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ハッ: Ha! No way.
こいつには: I’ve got a lot of bones to pick, so I’m gonna make her pay.

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そんな: But even if you hurt her body, it’ll just heal.
―だったら: In that case, I need to give her a scar that will last a lifetime.
この: With this former Eclair’s body.

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―そうだな: Right.

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こっちを: Look over here, Éclair!!
えっ!?: What!?
フフ…: Hmm.. not a bad body you’ve got here…
ちなみに: By the way, this part…
ははっ: Haha, it looks like it’s been used quite a bit…
い…いや…: N-no… that’s not true…!!

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―それじゃ: Now let’s see the sensitivity… nnh!
あ… はっっ!!: Ah… aah!! It’s… all the way in!! I can’t believe… just how slutty this girl is…

3

や…: No… please, stop it!!
毎日バイヴで: Have you been masturbating with a vibrator every day or something?

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―そう: Well, if you can’t tell the truth…
メチャメチャに: I’ll just mess you up!
んっっ: Nnn! Aaah!
やっっ: Aah! Look! Look at me!! It’s going in so deep!!
んあっっ: Aaaahhh!!

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あんっっ: Aaah!! No!!
こっ: I… I’m gonna break!!

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あ…: I… yes, I have!!
毎日毎日: I’ve been masturbating with a vibrator every single day… so please, stop this!!

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フフ…: Fufu… cheeky little brat, and sensitive, too.
本気で: I was about to cum for real.

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―フフフ…: Fufufu… Well!? How do the love juices of a total slut taste?
ン―ッッ: Nnngh!!

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―ホラ: Look, there’s even more…
どうせ: You’re getting used to it with your new body anway.
イッ: N-no!! Nooo!!

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や…やめてっ: No… stop it! It can’t fit anymore!!

3

あっっ: Ah… no!
乳首…: Not my nipples!!

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見せて: Let me show you…
昔の自分の顔で: the way you cum with your old face!
イヤアアア: Nooo!!

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あはぁぁん: Aaah! It’s…amazing!!

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やぁぁっ: No… I… I’m gonna break…!!

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あはぁぁ: Aaaah!!

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や…んっ: No… stop!!
イッちゃう…: I’m gonna cum…. I’m gonna cum...!!

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あああああ: Aaaaah!!

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…ウフフ: Ufufu….
いいザマだわ: Looking good.
いくら: No matter how much you change your body, I’ll go ahead and keep taking it for you…

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~って事で: ~ and this is our first try.
彩~: This is IRODORI’s first event book, Gentei.
イベントに: For te fans who came out to see us, we have not only laminated cards but also 1,000 copies of this book, and I hope everyone enjoyed the other rare goods that could only be found at our space.
ネタは: The source is Full Metal Panic Fumoffu, and while many have forgotten it since it ended and new shows began airing, within our group it was a big hit.
いつもその時期の: We’ve always tended to follow the styles of the time, but for this event book, we wanted to follow our own personal styles, and in forthcoming event books, we want our art to reflect the styles of the originals, so please look forward to it!
そんな情報は: We’ll be periodically updating our website with more information, so please check it out.

彩~: IRODORI~ Web
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ご意見: Send us thoughts, opinions, and work requests at:
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委託店&イベント用新刊:New work for consignment stores and event
溌~: Hatsuratsu~
フルメタふも本: Full Metal Panic Fumoffu book
B5: Size B5, 28 pages, 500 yen

発行: Published by: IRODORI
発行日: Date Published: 2003/12/30
印刷所: Printed by Ko-shin Shuppan
※当同人誌: Unauthorized copying, reprinting, or web uploads are forbidden.
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02.
>Haa
>Haa
>Haa

~Hu… Mme… Meg…
>Ha
>Ha
>Ha
~Stooop it
>Ha

>Mhf…
>Reaally?
~Should I really stop?
…Jo

~Stooop
<Ha
<Ha
<Ha
<Ha
~Ah…
<Stoooop… NOTT!
#That's a bit of a joke, she's saying yame, which Meg thinks means yamete=stop, but actually she's saying yamenaide=don't stop. unfortunately English sentences are the other way round, so it doesn't work quite well here. If you know any ambiguous sentence construct which could be completed to mean its opposite, we could transport the joke.
#stop not, stop never, … all sound strange

03.
~Ha…
~Yep, hey, look.
~Ahh
<Ha…
<Aaahaaahh
~It's coming out any moment now.
~Ha…

>What a… fantastic gun…
<Uhhh…
<Uhhhm
>That's not a thing to hide…

<You tease… #baka
<Uh
<Uh
<Uh

~Han
<Uh
<Uh
~Haa…
<Uh
~Haan
<Uuuuh…

04.
<Haa
>Aha
<Haa
<Haa
>It came out.

~Jo's thing, I'm astonished every time I see it.
~If I'd be shot with this…
#she calls it “gun” before, so maybe, “I wonder if I were shot by this”, sounds better
#small bubbles all: Haa

>Kyuu… #squeeze
<Uaa…!!

<Ah…
<Aaah!!!

~Hey… Jo…
~Jo…
#small bubbles all: Ha

05.
>Mn
<Oo…uu…Meeeeg…
<Mn
<Meeeeg…!!
<Mn
>Mn
<Uuuu…!!

<Oh…Ooooh
<Mn
<Mn
<Oo

<Uh
<Uh
<Uuuh…

<Stopppp… NOOOTT! #like before, ambiguous
<Don't stop with thiiiis

06.
<Uh!!

>Waa
<Astonishing…
#All other bubbles: Haa

>Joe, it's still hard.
~You've ejaculated so much semen, but it's still hard…

~Hey, Jo…
~Next time cum inside here…
#small bubbles all: Haa

09.
~Mhn, Jo…
~I put it in…
>Ah…
#small bubbles all: Ha

<Nn
<Nn…

<Uh…
<Uuuh

<Aah⁉
<W…what?
<It's becoming bigger…
#rest: Ha

10.
<A…ha…
<Aaaaaahhh

<Uuuh…

<Ah
<Joooo
<Ah
<Ah
<Jooooooo

11.
<Ah⁉
<Aaahn

<Don't pull… it out…
<Nooo
<I'm filled up by your penis.
#small bubbles all: Ha

<Haa
<Chaa
<Haa
<Haa
<Haa

12.
<I will take you…
<to Paradise…!!

#All Ha + sfx

~Jo… Jo…
~It's great!
~Absolutely fantastic!
#small bubbles all: Ha

13.
>Aaah…♥
~Ah… Aaaaaahh… Jo… mn…
~good…
~Ah…
~Ah…ha…mn♥
~Feels so gooood!!
#small round bubbles, all: Haa

~Yes, my asshole too.
~My ass virginity is yours.
#rest: Ha

14.
<Mn
<Mn
<Kha…aa…
<Aaah
<Mn

<Mn… Jo…
<Ah
<Ah
<Ah
<Nn
<Jo…!!

15.
<My asshole… Ah… Is… breaking…!!
<But… it's fine… ooooh…!!
#rest: Ah

<Ah
<Oh
<Ah
<Uhm
<Ah
<Ou
<Ha
#yeah, very literate^^

#all Ha

<Aahh

>dripping #sfx

16.
<Coming… Coming…
<Mnnnn…♥
<Ah
<Ah
<Hin
<Mnn♥
<Ha
<I'm coming with Jo's dick…
<Ah
<Ah

<Ha
<Uh… Uuh… Meg…
<Ha
<Ha
<Meg…

17.
<Cum (on), Jo!!
*splat x6
<Ha x5
<Cum into my asshole!!

<Aha
<Pleease… together!
<Ah
<Mn
<Aah
<Let's cum together!
<Uhm

<I'm cumming, I'm cumming…
<I'm cumming, cumming…

18.
<A… aahh… I'm flying.
<Ah
<Ah
<Ha
<I'm flying… look!
<Ah
#bubbles on the bottom:
<Uh
<Ha
<Ah
<Ah
<Ha

<My ass and my pussy…
<They're both cumming.
#rest: Ha

19.
<Me…
<…g!!

<Haa
<Ah… ah… Jo…
<Haa
<Haa
<It's coming out…
<Haa

~Ah…aah…
>sticky #sfx
~It's still coming out.

<Bu!!
<n!!
#bun in sfx means *swish* apparently, whatever…

20.
~Jo…
~You've let out too much semen♥
#rest: Haa

<Noo

<Ah
<I just came…

<Doing it…
<shortly after I came…
<Oohh…

21.
<Aaaah Jo… I'm cumming!
<Ha
<Jo's dick… Aahh!
<Uh
<Ha
<Hu
<Uh
<Ah
<Ha
<Ha
<Ha
<I'm cumming again!
<Oh
<Cumming!!

*Jo, I love you…♥
#Small bubbles, all: Ah
#outside of bubbles, all: Haa
*The end

22.
>Huhum♫
>Humhuhum♫

23.
Daydream
by Pochiko

>I feel so refreshed.

>Jo! What are you doing here?

24.
>Hepp #just a filling word without meaning

>Jo, what's the matter? You have a strange look.

ボーとってる
のはいつも
だけで…
*but usually you're just exaggerating
#lit: pulling the stick (like in the game Mikado, I guess???)
#I could have this totally wrong, it's just a guess on what I made of the characters, I can't really read them at the current resolution

>No.

>I just remembered the time when we met.

>Where you met me?

>Hey… Jo⁉

25.
>I'm glad that I’ve met you. I can't remember what it was like before that.
\It feels like I’ve become a completely different person since I met you.

>Wh-Why are you suddenly saying this?

#I had to stop here, and first do a transcription cause the scan is so bad plus the author uses a stupid handwrite-like font. Worst combination (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
#I kept the Japanese, probably useful for the editor

だけど…だから そんなメグに隠すごとできない
今さらだけど…
私のこと… ちゃんと知ってほしい…から
>But I have to tell you… I can't keep this from you.
\At least now, because I want you to know about me…

<Jo!?

26.
これ…何?
なんでこんなものがついてるの⁉
>What is this?
Why do you have such a thing attached?!

27.
気味が悪い…だろ…?
>Feels gross… does it?
昔からツし??興奮状態になるとこ?ういう風に…
>For quite a long time now, whenever I get excited it turns out like this.

あっ
>Ah
ジョウが顔まっ赤にしてる初めて見るかも…
\This could be the first time I’ve seen Jo with such a red face.
っていうかちょっとカワイイかも
\She's actually cute this way.

それに…こんなの見さられたら
>I can't stop myself…
メメグ
<Me-Meg!!
ガマンできないよー
>when I see her like this.
#she could also be talking about the penis: when I see such a thing

28.
~Mn
~Mnku
~Mnu
\Mhu
~Huu
#the non-bubble sfx are slurping sound, like you guessed

~Nchu
~Chu
~Kuchu #kissing sounds

ジョウ…のおちんちんヒリヒク??いってるよ #used ヒクヒク
>Jo… your penis is twitching.
>Haa x3

29.
>Haa
>Aha
>Nnaah
>Nha

~Nnn
\nn

ジョウ…すごく大きい……あぁ…
>Jo's thing… so big… aahh…
ぬれてきちゃうった…どうしよ…指が止まらないよ
\I got wet. What should I do… my fingers won't stop.

<Ngh
<Nku

>Haa x3

<Ngh
<Nhu

30.
<Haa x2
メ…グあまり
<Meg,
はげ…しくしないで…
\not… so forceful!
出る
<It's coming out!
<Nchu

<Nghhhh!!!
<Ndju

<No… I'm cumming… CUMMING!!
<Nn
<Nnngh

<Hia

31.
やーん
>Daa
せっかくシャワーあびたのに…
>I was in the shower just before…
全身ベタベタ〜
>My whole body is sticky.

あはっちょっと激しかったかな?
>I was a bit too wild, right?
ってかすごく濃いし…Hな気分に…
>We are so intimate… such a lewd mood…

ご ごめ…我慢できなかった…
>So… Sorry, that I couldn't endure it…

ジョウの出したばかりなのにもう元気だよ
>Even though you came just now, it's still so lively.

32.
今度は私も一緒に
>This time, I want us…

気もち良くなりたい
>…to feel good together.

大きいから入るかな…?
>It's so big, will it fit in…?

もう頭の方だけで苦しいかも
>The pain is only in the head I guess.
#an illusion, seems like she's talking to herself to forget about the pain

>Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!

33.
すごい…私の中…
>Incredible, my insides…
ジョウのでいっぱいになってるよ
>get filled up by Jo's thing.
#could also be read as: get filled up because of Jo
奥に…奥にあたって…すごっ…
>Deep, deep, it's hitting the end… amazing!
気持ちいいよー!!
>feels so good!!

34.
<Ah
<Haa
<Aha

<Hua
<Nnaa
<Nnaa
<Aahh

>Haa
>Ah
>Ha
>Haa
>Aha
<Aaaaaaaa

35.
ああ…私ジョウのおちんちんでいっちゃう…
<Aahh… I'm cumming with Jo's penis.
ああっ!!
\Aahh!!

あっあっ…腰が止まらな…
<Ah, ah, my hips can't stop.

イッ…ちゃ…
<I'm… cum…
ゔーーー!!!
<iiiiiing!!!

36.
*Haa x4

>Ha x6

<Stop, Jo!!

<Wait!

37.
<Ah
<Ah
<Ahn
ま…て…私さっきイッたばか…り…
<Stop… wait… I just came a second ago…
<Ah

<Ha
<Ah
<Haa
おかしくなっちゃ…っ
<I'm going crazy…

私はまだイッてない…
>I haven't cum yet…

そんな…
<But!

42.
<Ngh!!
<Ah

<Ha
<Aha
<Haa

<Aaahh…

<Uh…ah…
<Khaha… ha… aaahh… …nna!!!

39.
<Hua!!

<Haa-
\Ah aha
<Ahn
<Ahi

<Hu

40.
>Haa

>Ahu
>Nhu

<N
\Nhu
<Nchu

41.
<Haa… ah… noo…
<It's coming out!!!

<AAAAAHH

42.
>Nn

メグ 大丈夫?
>Meg, are you ok?
あ メグ姉目さ?めた
>Ah, Meg-nee's waking up.

せい…エイミーどうしたの?
>Sei, Amy, what's up?

どうしたの?はこっちのセリフ?よずっとうなされてるし
>You ask what’s up? I should ask. It looked like you were having a nightmare all the time.
いくら起こしても起きないから心配してたなよ
\but no matter how much we tried to wake you, you didn't wake up. We were pretty worried, I tell you.

「イヤ…ダメ…」とか言ってどうせイヤらしい夢でも見てたんでしょー
>You said “Nooo noot”, must've been a pretty lewd dream.

違うわよバカ!!
>That's not it, stupid!!
あーっ顔真っ赤図星なんだースケベだぁー
Ah! Jackpot!, your face is bright red. Pervert.

43.
あ。おはようございます
>Ah, good morning.
恭 #<-respect, no idea why it's here, maybe to stress Jo's politeness
<Nh
<Jo!!

それで何してるんだ?メグ
>What are you doing there? Meg!
うーんちょっとねー
>Eemm, wait a moment.


ていっ!!
>the fuck!!

やっぱり付いてるわけないか
*Indeed, there was no way she would really have one.

ジョウさんおっおちついて下さい…
*Jo-san, please calm down…
なーんだやっぱり単なる夢なんじゃん
>Yupp, was merely a dream.
あ。でもちょっと残念だったかも
\Ah, actually a little bit of a pity.

44.
✾ぽちタロウです。今回は爆裂天使ということで。今回も描かせていただいきました。女性同士のカラミは大変
ですね。でも、一つ勉強になったと思います。鬼ノ先生。ありがとうございました〜
✾私事ですが、HP開設しました。近頃、更新おこたり気味ですが、何かとがんばってますので、よかったら見に�
��て下さいね^^

✾I'm Tarou Pochi. This time it's Burst Angel. Once again, It’s my honor to draw for you. Relationships between women are dreadful, right? But, I learned a thing or two. Kino-sensei, thank you very much.
✾As a bit of a personal matter, I created a home page. Lately, I'm in the mood to update it a lot, and giving it my best. So, if you feel like it, have a look please.
2004, Dec, Pochiko

48.
え。どうもです。鬼ノ仁です。今回は爆裂天使の「メグ」をメインに描いてみました。どなり/い!? メグの魅力はやはりあの、年中ビンビンになってる乳首ですね!(ぷ なんであんなにビンビンなんでしょうか
?本編の方は…最初は面白かったと思うんですが、その…どんどんつまらなくなって…大阪のあたりから時に加
速的に…いや。いいんですが…ところで今回は初めてデータ入稿にチャレンジしてみまして果たしてどんな風に
印刷されるやら…あはは…。ちゃんと出てればいいな…。
Eh hi! I'm Hitoshi Kino. This time I tried to draw a story of Burst Angel with Meg as the heroine. How was it? Meg's main points of charm are her always excited nipples. (Why the heck are they always so lively?)
Talking about this volume, the beginning is interesting, but then, it gets more and more boring… should have speeded up a bit when I was around Osaka… no… it's fine… # don't get it
By the way, for the first time, I challenged myself by submitting the script digitally, but how will it turn out after printing…? Ahaha… I hope it will turn out fine…
2004 Dec 11 Hitoshi Kino

#probably unnecessary
49.
おくづけ #publication data
誌名:MEGMEGFifteen #magazine name
著者:鬼ノ仁(n_k)#author
発行者:こぴくら #publisher: Kopikura
住所:136-0071 #address
江東区亀戸6-8-3豊川ビル205
HP:http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~tr6h-kjur/
ゲスト様:ぽちこ先生 #Guest writer: Pochiko-sensei
スペシャルサンクス:たむらともよし先生ッ! #special thanks: Tomoyoshi Tamura-sensei!
桃ちゃんさん先生ッ! #Momo-chan-san-sensei!
発行日:2004年12月30日初版発行 #Pubishing date: 2004-12-30 first release
印刷所:コーシン出版 #Press: Kooshin press

※未成年者の閲覧禁止 #reading by minors prohibited

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Tentatively accepted

Here's what I have so far:
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(Can't post links on first post, it's probably fine to avoid the filter since this isn't spam, right?)

I edited what I've done so far on an uncalibrated monitor, so there might be a few spots that should be white that I've missed.

There's a few things to note, one is that this looks like it was done with graphite and charcoals, I think that preserving the shading is more important than getting perfect blacks here.
Another is that there's a lot of SFX and I'm not sure they translate very well; I feel like they actually take away from the art when they've been replaced, at least in some cases.
That said, I admit I'm far from great at replacing SFX and any suggestions for fonts or techniques for replacing them satisfactorily are appreciated.
If I was editing this independently I'd probably leave 75% of the SFX in, possibly even all of it.
Lastly there's a little bit of scanner artifacting on a few pages, page 3 for example in the bottom panel there's a little bit of an offset about 25% up from the bottom of the panel. I don't think it detracts from the image at all so I didn't fix it. There's also a little bit of bleed-through in the same area, I've done a little retouching but I think it looks like sunrays and overall doesn't detract from an otherwise simple panel.


I'd say what I've posted is about 5-10% complete to EHCove standards regarding the SFX, with other regular commitments to other projects it could take me a month or more to finish. I'd be willing to give what I have finished if after a month I feel like it'll take much longer to finish.

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夜叉の杜 yasha grove

013.
封印 sealing
弥勒 Miroku
己の類型
微笑ましい

I was wondering what would have happened if Inuyasha wouldn't have been sealed away and would have met Miroku when he was a child. Well, this child-size Miroku is maybe a bit too small, but that's the type I have in mind. Imagine a parallel world where child Miroku is raised by a dog. How cute must that be, I wish I could see that. The dog is cute too ~ no homo, it's just a heart warming situation, that's why I'd like to see it; child raising by a dog.

014.
>Hey, Inuyasha!
>Hey,
How often do I have to tell you…
Stop it!
>Miroku-sama and the others will wake up this way…!

>snore snore
*I'm sleeping, deep asleep. This fellow is sleeping too.

015..
>Kagome… you smell so nice…!

>Hey, Inuyasha
\Down!
#like the dog command, Sit! (dunno what's used in English usually)

>Mhh?
*mumble

>Kago…!
<Not now, now comes the good part
>snore snore

>I think I've heard Shippo's voice…!
>Ah

016.
<Ah
\haa
<…

<Hua…

<Mn…
^Wh… what are you doing there, Inuyasha…
\My… my heart is not prepared yet…

<Ah!

017.
<U_ah
>You're totally wet…!
# Or: Amazing…
you became wet…!

<Ah…
\Inu…yasha!
<Ah

<Sto…

<Ahah
\Aaaah

018.
<Ah…n!

<Aah!

<Ha…ya
\ah
<Hi…!

>Kagome…
<Ah
<Hia
>I love you, Kagome……

019.
<Mn
\Hi…ha
<Ahah
I…Inuyashaa
That's enough
\Enough!
#actually she's saying: bad. Could also be a dog command

<Ah…haa

020.
*hmf
>Stupid Inyasha!

>Why did you have to be so fierce, I wanted a better mood… (sigh)
>Well, that's because it's already dog mating season, isn't it?

>snore snore
*Did…, did he just turn around?
<…!
*by the way, where is Sango? #below frame

>Kaagoomee♥♥
*cheery
<Ha!
*Since when was he awake!

*Noooo #sfx
<This time the tip #今度は先っぽ??
Only the tip #not sure, maybe a blowjob??
*It's new year
^Well, we just had the first sex for this year!
*Happy new year
*The next one's will probably be Miroku and Sango
#had to improvise a little, because of bad scan ヾ( ・`⌓´・)ノ゙

022.
>Well, I'll go and will be back home later

>…Ehm

>Actually on the other side is the place where I used to life
\Feels strange calling this side home

>Well, both sides are you home now, don't you think! More important come back here quickly!
\If you take too much time, I will come to bring you back!
>Sure, I get it

>Well, everyone, I'm off now!

023.
>…see you

>Come back home safely!

>Mm

024.
>And there she's gone, Kagome-chan

>She has to do this “test” thing again, I guess
>Kagome is a very busy person…
\and what about Inuyasha?

>He stays silent like always

>I see… Inuyasha is lonely like this

025.
>Well, a bit of silence isn't bad for a change

>Monk-sama, are you lonely too?
#Apparently she calls Miroku Monk-sama (Houshi-sama)
#How was this translated in the English series?
#Probably simply as Miroku. Anyway, should we use the suffixes?
#I keep them for now, because it's easy to remove them later
>Well, it's a shame
\when a beauty like her leaves…

>Yeah, too bad that _only I_ am left. #sarcastic
#lit: Too bad, _I_ am not sufficing
>That's not what I meant!
\You are beautiful enough on your own.

>Monk-sama…
>Yes?

026.
>When Kagome comes back…
>…hugh?

>you'll be smiling that way again
>Hugh… what are you're talking about?
#lit: you're speaking strange

>Well, I don't mean… but
#some random stuttering (it's hard for her to speak about this)

>Well, was am a bit startled I tell you
\I haven't seen you smiling that softly like this before…
#in case it's not clear, Sango's speaking, referencing Miroku's smile on page 023

>…Is that so?
#this bubble is for Miroku, even though it's more pointing towards Sango, I got all the bubbles wrong in the beginning, that's annoying

027.
>But…
>It's fine

>Even when Monk-sama is cheerfully laughing
\somehow… it always looks a little bit like your acting…
>Well, that's how it feels
#虚勢を張る = bluffing

>You look lonely, so I was a bit concerned… I'm relieved now

028.
>Am I really that unreliable?
>That's not what I meant…
\Sorry, I said something strange and it turned to this…
#yeah, you could really be more clear ヾ( ・`⌓´・)ノ゙

>I just misunderstood the situation #Sango speaking!
>No, I didn't want to #insult you, I guess

>Have you been concerned about me?

>Because I'm such a weak person…!
>We're somehow getting mixed up in this conversation…!

>But…

#cannot read the line below the frame clearly, it could mean: あ…手が違う, Ah, the hand is wrong, which could mean: watch your hand!

029.
>I am…

>completely sincere right now

>Wa…

031.
>Mm… Monk-sama, the clothes
>Don't mind them

032.
>I don't want dirt to touch your body

>You don't have to be so tense
~Bb… But
>I will be as gentle as possible… Relax

033.
~Ya…!
~That's…

~Don't lick there, it's dirty…

>There's not a single dirty place on your body
~Ah…!

>A trace of red and so wet
\So beautiful
~Nn… No, this is so embarrassing

033.
>Because it's your first time, it might hurt a little bit
>If it hurts too much, don't bare with it, tell me

~Em, yes

034.
~Ah…
\Ah…

~Ah, khu
>San…go
~It hurts…

>Is it too much?
~No, it's fine

>I'm moving only slowly at first

035.
~Nhh…
\Nhu!
~Aah

>Sango…
\Don't keep in, let your voice out

>Noo, that can't be…
\That's not my voice…!

~Ah
\Ahaa
~Ahnnn!

037.
~Ah…a
\You're moving so much inside me…!

~Ya…
~Noo…
\I'm… breaking

~Aaah

>Sango…
>Mmo…
\Monk-sama Monk-samaaa…

>Do you feel it? We are now one…
>Like this…

038.
>Together…
*and they melted…

<Ha…
\Aah
<Aaaahh

>…ha…
>Haa
\Haa…

039.
^Well
\I did it

>Even though I didn't want to lay my fingers on her yet.
\I didn't even start it…
#not sure, he's saying: not much sweet things said, so I guess he means he didn't lure her in (like all the other girls) so I changed the sentence to make it better understandable

*…whatever, it's fine

040.
^Since when has the atmosphere become so calm…? #or: gently, quiet

>Aah… tomorrow it'll certainly be sunny
^Let's pray for a restful night for everyone…

042.
>Monk-sama!

>Hmn?

>Ah, Sango, what's the matter? In the dead of the night…
\Dawn will come soon, so better rest while you have the time!
>I should say so! Monk-sama couldn't wake up yesterday morning at all!

043.
>You should better sleep!

>I have to tend to my hand because of Saimyōshō and other poisons… #(最猛勝)
>You're keeping this all to yourself…
You're starting to act like Inuyasha, I'm getting worried
\Playing the strong man…

>Honestly, it's really fine
\Because you have been nursing me so well!
#一生懸命 = 一所懸命

>Fool
>Because you've been sleeping with me it healed even faster…

>Ehm, Monk-sama…
>Yes?

044.
>Ah!
\Did you get interested in the sleeping with me part?
>That's not it!

>Monk-sama, you're always making fun of me!
>Nonsense! Am I not serious as ever?
>…may I take a seat here?
>Gladly, please!

>What is it?

>I can see you have something on your mind?
>Eh…

045.
>It's nothing
>Really?

>Really really?
>You really don't have anything you want to tell me?
>Nnno, nothing!

>Ah… hey…!
>What are you doing to my hand… let it go!
>No I won't!!

>You may not say it, but it's clear
>You want to be next to someone…

046.
>I'm happy that you're next to me

>Being alone in this silent night
\makes me think strange thoughts…
so I'm happy you came to me
#↑this the continuation after the … at the end, at least I think so
#anyway, for the translation include it, makes no sense in English without it
>Ah…

>You are most beautiful when you smile
>…ehh?
>in place of your once lonely face, your beautiful face has taken stage

>Uh… that's not true,
\I bet you say that to all the girls!
>It's not a lie, I tell you. Don't you think you are beautiful enough?
>But, compared to Kagome-chan, I'm not feminine at all…
\I'm way to reckless
>Well, you have a point there…

047.
~Hey…!
Do you know where you put your hand
>Yes, today would be fine I thought…

~Heeey… what would be fine?
>Sango, that would be unrefined to say

>Do you hate me?
~That, when you say that…
>I always think you're so cute
~He

~Monk…
~…!
>If you really hate me, than reject me like usual…

048.
>Even though I do not know of tomorrow
#or: Even though I might not be so certain tomorrow
\I want to embrace you now…
~Monk-sama

~Mhn
~…!

~Ua…
>…Sango

>Sango…

049.
~Ah
>Monk-sama
~Ha…
~Hu

>I can see the moon

050.
The Sango-chan that I draw is a pleasant girl. She's got a pleasant nice body, breast, ass, and tights a perfect. At first I thought it would be difficult to draw here, but now I think the Inuyasha characters that have difficulties with are Kagome-chan and Kikyou. Sailor uniforms and Miko shapes… Even though costumes are totally moe. Battle uniforms like Sango-chan's on the other hand are moe too, especially when they are tattered! (sorry sorry) Even in this unfavorable condition they have good points, right?

Well, for this Sango-chan, instead of showing her breast as much as possible, I'm putting emphasis on raising them up. It was still fun to draw them. Actually I thought of drawing her together with Kirara. Kirara's moe too! Tiny Kirara is so moe! I want to hug her… What do you think, being Kirara and moving between Sango-chan's breast, or being Sango-chan and hugging Kirara, which one would be more blissful…?

Ah well, as for Miroku-sama, he can have sex with Sango-chan, and can ride and hug Kirara. You lucky bastard, Miroku Monk-sama! (laugh)

052.
*Not parents, nor siblings, not even are we comrades

*it's fear and deep obedience what drives us
#I added the what drives us

*pure domination without freedom

>What's up with you?
\Can't you talk?

053.
>Hey…
>Koga!

>You're another boy who doesn't learn his lesson, a wolf who only follows his nose
\Well let's finish this quick

<Shut up bitch!
\I have to vomit when I see your ugly face.

<Kagura!
<I'm going to catch the foe of my comrades

054.
>Comrades, what comrades…

<Shut up!

>Spare me your waffling! #lukewarm talk

<You amateur…
>Simply killing you should be fine, but…

055.
>But actually…
>A type like you could have other uses…

>Huhu…
>What do you think of this plan?
<What!

<What do you think you're doing, bitch!

>Well, what do you think
>Isn't it your hobby to be ridden by women?

056.
<Nobody wants to see your pitiful tits
>Hhhmm

>How long are you going to continue with your stubborn talking…
They are an attraction…

>This place here is more honest, don't you think?
<Ugh

>Hee
Finally I get hold of a worthy one!

057.
<Stop it!
>You don't say! With this erection you're not really convincing

>Kagura, you bitch!

>Does it feel good?

~Nn
\Nnnn

<Ugh
Damn!

058.
>Huhu
>My cute Koga

>You turned pretty quiet!
<You're the worst shit!

>Hum!
>That you still can speak like this!
\Well, in this case…

<Nn
<How is this?

059.
<Hey, Koga!
<How do you feel when a girl does this to you? #or woman

<Kagura…!
<Don't act so pride!!

<Even if you give it your best, it's still like shit
<Eh…

060.
<Bitch, since you're begging for it
<I'll rape you so hard

<Ah!
\Aaahh
<Aahh!

<Ah…
\Kago…
<Nn

<Ah, this is good!

61.
<Uah…
<Ah!

<Ah…ha

062.
>I'm overlooking today's encounter, Kago
>That are my final words. Get lost!

>Keep that in mind… The next time we will encounter
>I will definitely kill you…!

063.
*The next time…
*I see you,
*I will xxx you…
*No, I will xxx you,
*the next time we meet…
#that doesn't work too well in English. They're skipping the verbs, so the xxx could mean kill, could also be love/fuck (that's the puchline). is it ok to simply omit the xxx?

065.
Mirosanisuto's 30th comic volume “Special Girl” has really been special. The monk really confessed…! That Miroku and Sango became a couple in the original work, as a pure fan that makes me totally happy, on the other hand, as a reader with many wild delusions, well, somehow, there are so many situations that cannot happen anymore now and it happened so sudden, make me a bit sad (laugh). But still, I'm mostly happy
One of the stories I had in mind is them both being locked up inside a storehouse, but now I will be an after-engagement scene for them, so always lovey-dovey from now on (my curse). (I don't mind so much… I like it when there's happiness). Speaking of this, my next sketches will be something like “congratulations on your engagement”, I guess.
イチャラブ=いちゃいちゃらぶらぶ
#暮れる

067.
^Sango…
^Stop… you can't do that, Monk-sama
^Why not?
^Look, these here became already stiff
^Noo…
^Will you bear my child?
^That… I can't tell yet…
\Monk-sama, you're teasing me!

068.
^No, ah
^Look me in the eyes, Sango…
^Ah
\Ah
^Ah…
^Ha…ah
\Nnn…
^Huum…
^Nn…hu

069.
^Ngh…!
^Ah…
^Nnu
\Nnnnn…!
^Mm Monk-sama
^Sweet nectar is flowing out of you, Sango
^Noo… don't say that…
^Well…, I'm reaching my limits too
^Aaahh…!
^Ah!
\Auuh!

070.
^Ah…ha!
^Sango…
\Relax a little bit, you're too stiff
^Ahh…ah! Mm Monk-sa…maaa…!
\Ahaahhhh Auu…!
^N… it's good this way, Sango
\You seem to get used to it slowly, you hips are shaking…
^No, don't say this… Monk-sa…maa
^Don't say such embarrassing words…!

071.
^Ah noo…!
\When you do it so fierce, noo…!
^Uahh…!
^Ah!
\Aaaaahh aahh!!
^N…huuu

072.
^Please, can you bear 10, no 20 of my children?
\I'm giving it my best too!
^Monk-sama, you womanizer

073/074.
Afterword
Postscript by Youkishi for Inuyasha re-recording collection.
It's called Inuyasha re-recording, but I really like Miroku and Sango, so it turned out being almost exclusively them. Well, I like it this way! Because I like the Inuyasha series, I might spontaneously make another doujinshi together with Furari again. As the anime of the recommended Comics Vol. 30 “Special Girl”, which is like a festival of Miroku and Sango has aired, this work feels like a re-recording from a different perspective.
I feel somewhat like a father who's beloved daughter has become a bride, I want to congratulate her, but I'm lonely and happy at the same time (well, I'm really happy for Sango-chan).
Every doujinshi that became a manga later had their sketches cut, but adding color covers and by-side illustrations and even photo book sketches, it turned out to be a real Inuyasha collection. (Thinking about my activity phase until now, was it a bit short? … sorry for writing slowly)
Drawing and background are ok the way they are, it's only tone [that's problematic] I think. I focused a bit on the background and human shapes. When I was drawing I soon got the impression it would be complete, but when I turned to printing matter I recognized many white spots, which I took seriously and fixed them all, tough luck. (well when I'm looking at the raw manuscript, it did not turn out too bad). The next time, even if I have such a chance, I will not focus so much on fixing. What I want to draw next for Inuyasha is a congratulation work for Miroku and Sango's engagement or something with Sesshomaru + Rin. I also want to focus on make the erotic more colorful…

Well, I would be happy if we could meet again in the next book.
Mitsuru Youkishi

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