Translation for [Takane no hanazono (Takane Nohana)] Nagato Yuki no S (Haruhi)
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=15188Version proofread by PureEnergy.
01.
Yuki Nagato's sexual punishment
02.
The melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
03.
⬛Foreword⬛
How do you do or good da〜y♪
I'm Nohana Takane, the one who's tendonitis came back, and who's shoulder and waist are on the brink of collapse (；´Д⊂)
Continuing without a break, I present to you the third Nagato book of “The melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya”.
Nagato is very popular, ri〜ght?
Maybe just because she's my favorite^^
If I would create a ranking of the female characters……
#1: Nagato
#2: Nagato (human version)
#3: Mikuru
#4: Kyon-imouto
#5: Mikuru (adult)
#6: Asahina
#7: Haruhi
#8: Tsuruya-san
#9: Mori-san
#10: Emiri Kimidori
By the way, I'm expecting that the number 10, Kimidori-san, will play an active role hereafter. (・∀・
Nagato has taken the two best positions in the ranking ^^
The story with Nagato that I like the most is the one where she has a game contest with the computer research society.
In this episode Nagato's feelings are well presented and I enjoyed the well-made animations.
After I submit the manuscript, re-imagine the recorded scenes with Haruhi like I draw them here, please (；＞ω＜)ノ
04.
^This morning, there was a torn-off note in my shoe rack space
+After the lesson is over, come to the empty class room 1-5, first year.
^I wasn't expecting much, but…
#I wasn't particularly anxious of who would be there, but
#I wasn't wondering much who would call me there, but……
# not sure, pick whatever you like, strange grammar here (slang?)
#(た)ろうが / たろう(が)？ なかっただろう＝＞なっかたろう？
^I was very surprised when I saw the person who was inside
>You're late.
>You…
\What do you want?
>Hypothetically speaking, when you realize that preserving the present condition will only make the situation worse,
\but you can't think of a way that leads to a good solution,
what would you do?
>At first you would think, what can go wrong, so let's change something, right?
\Just doing nothing wouldn't change anything.
>I tell you, I'm sick of seeing nothing change.
05.
>That's why,…
>I'm going to rape you and watch Haruhi Suzumiya's next move.
#'s attitude
^What kind of situation is this?
Why do I have to get my dick sucked by Asahina?
^Wait, wait, what has Asahina said? Raping me? But- why?
06.
<Stop this joke!
>You think this is a joke?
>Do you detest cumming?
Don't you wanna get raped?
>I can't quite grasp the concept of organic life-forms cumming.
^This must be some kind of bad joke, I have to flee from this class room.
^??? There's no door
^The class room's walls have all become uniformly grey.
>Impossible.
>Shouldn't you be done now? Go on and cum…
^Grph, I can't hold it in anymore…
07.
<Uuah, careful there!
>Each and all of your programs are weak.
>There was a space in the ceiling that was not properly closed and the information blocking was also faulty
\so please excuse my tiresome invasion.
>You feel like you're intruding? Here, I have the advantage. In this class room…
08.
<I control all the information in this space!
>I'm calling for an information decoupling……
#check the series for the correct name…
>In this space you cannot win against me.
>Your intuition and emotion are suppressed now.
>Drink this! #drink up
>I will release only one part for you: Your sexual desire and feelings.
09.
<…Ah
^Nagato… can she feel this?
^Am I dreaming this?
>How is it? Should feel good. That's sexual feeling.
>You've got a greedy look.
>Do you want to be tormented more?
>If you want that, how about I let you lick his thing?
<Hey⁉
10.
<Nagato!
Come back to your senses!!
>That's a useless wish, I turned her into a superficial puppet with only eyes for your penis
^Aahh… Getting licked so tenderly.
^I almost came before, so any moment now…
<Ouch⁉
<Kuaaaaa!!
11.
>That's bad, you shouldn't bite……
>But as you cum by being bitten, you must be an M?
^I don't want to hear that! #Shut up!
>Soo, what do you desire next?
>Sticking your ass out like this, I don't know what you want #teasing voice
<I want you to stick your penis into my vagina.
^I will be able to nail Nagato's secret spot in these exceptional circumstances
^Seeing this perfectly-closed vertical slit, my member is determinedly standing straight
12.
^Tight…
But more important…
<Nagato, are you fine?
>She's fine, she can't feel any pain.
Don't restrain yourself, thrust it in♪
^I'm not listening to you.
<Nagato
>…
^Now you're looking like the usual Nagato.
^… well, if you're fine with this #… than you've probably got a plan
13.
^Like this…
Tightly coiling around…
<Nagato…
soon…
<Cum… I want to cum inside…
<Cumming
>Seeing you both, I've gotten really excited.
>Let me join in♪
14.
>You want a second rod, don't you?
>I'm taking your anal virginity♪
>Terrific…
>Very tight, your bowels are coiling around my penis♪
<Ahm
>Don't press so hard…
>There's some kind of strong feeling coming from deep inside my body.
15.
<This feels sooo…
\gooooood.
<This is how organic that cumming of organic life-forms feels.
16.
<Ehh⁉
<It's pulsating inside my pussy.
\It's not stopping.
<The ejaculation.
<The ejaculation isn't stoppiiiiing!!
<I'm being exploited.
>You have to rape Asahina immediately…
>Cum inside…
^Nagato!!
^Like expected, you came up with a plan!
<What's are you waiting for⁉
<What are you planning!!
17.
<Don't stick it in…
<When an organic life-form does this…
<Nagato's backup plan, as might be expected.
<The firmness is good!
<Cumming!
<I'm cumming…
<Penis and pussy both…
18.
>It's over
>How could that happen?
To accomplish this after only three years of living?
#fits with the lore??? Grammatically should be right. Or does maybe she wants to talk about being a third-grader instead, like:
# => As an inexperienced third grader
>Information link cancellation, initiate!
>You were very good. #very superior
>That's why it took so long to impregnate you with this program.
It's over now.
19.
>While giving the blowjob, she implemented a divide-by-zero exploit.
\My loss.
>Take care.
\Become happy with Suzumiya-san.
See you.
<Nagato?
>Are you ok?
>Can I help you?
>Ah.
>You forgot to reconstruct your glasses.
#Can't tell who's speaking
>First of all, wipe this semen off.
<Don't lick them!!
20.
Emon Mikuru
^Facing a strange table, I suddenly feel a shock in my abdomen, and stumble back into the center of the room, knocking over all the chairs.
A drawer has opened by itself, and somehow, a cute, big-breasted girl with cat ears and a maid uniform suddenly appears.
“Nice to meet you. I come from the future, I'm Emon Mikuru.”
^Ah, I must have seen her somewhere before.
She loved pancakes (dorayaki), didn't she?
Moreover, those cat ears had been very sensitive…
“They are off-limit.”
#lit: They are a forbidden device, has something to do with the series, dunno
21.
^“Kyon, you impertinent dog!”
“That's exactly what you are.”
The leader of the gang, Haruan, and her follower Kosune (husband).
They are sticking together and are somehow trying to blame me.
^It looks like a recital will be held once again today, in the open area of this meeting place.
They are very famous in the neighborhood because they are very good.
Many people from the neighborhood are coming for the recital.
But I don't think they're the reason I'm being picked on…
They are so beautiful. I'll try to beg Emon Mikuru.
#I don't understand a thing here… what recitals???
22.
^“Emon Mikuru! Haruan is here!!”
Impulsively, I open the door and…
a paradise-like scene appears before my eyes.
“Kyaaa!”
Panicking, I close the door, check that the fan service scene is over, and enter the room again.
^“Letting the fan service slide, I need some kind of tool.”
“I don't know what you mean by fan service, but
I can't get you this tool, it's prohibited …”
Ehm, if we keep it like that, the story can't continue.
“I don't think it will work, but what if we try it with a request……
Ah, and there it is, an override code?”
#here once again, there is some kind of prohibited-tool, check the series
23.
^Obtaining the ever*where door, I'm teleporting into Shizuka-chan's home.
“Shizuka-chaaaan, let's play together.”
As promised, here is a Shizuka Nagato bathing scene.
^“…“
After a short silent pause: “Ok, play what?”
I quietly pull out the thing.
“What's that?”
Shizuka-chan is quietly approaching it, coming close with her mouth.
“That's the way!”
24.
⬛Afterword⬛
How was it? (how did you feel)
Somehow Asahina turned out to be the main character……orz # = kneeling, head on the floor
I had planned to draw two additional pages (@2P), but when I had some troubles, time run out, and even though it made me cry, I had to reduce the number of pages(；´Д⊂)
Because I had to fill the gap up somehow, it looks a bit fractured.
Last time I wrote that I would create two chapters, but I won't do the second chapter.(；´Д｀)
But I will make a revenge book for Asahina (as Nagato was the main heroine this time)!
While I was fighting with the bonus illustrations, I got an idea from the sketches I was drawing: “Coming from the future”, yeah, a pretty common idea.
If I had the time, I would have drawn a 4-Koma……orz
Regarding the cast, it would have be come a separate version:
Ko?Su(ne)-husband: Nagato
出来杉-kun: Koizumi
Shi(zu)ka-chan: Tsuruya-san or Kyon-imouto (w
If I have the chance I want to give it a try (；´Д｀)
At the moment, the “Beast Daughter Anthology (Kemono Musume Ansoro)”, which was being worked on at the same time as this book, is on sale♪
I'm also writing about many things at @水面下 (underwater)（＾＾；
Though I wonder if I can write something more before the next publication.
Speaking of that, the next publication will be out October 1st at Sankuri.
“Ryoko Asakura's ???” (no name yet)
Let's meet again —
This post has been edited by Shapes: Jan 20 2018, 15:53
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