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post Aug 19 2017, 05:51
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Translation complete for Okachimentaiko Ultra (Escaflowne). Please look it over and let me know if anything seems off. I'll claim bounty once I get the go-ahead.

Edit: updated script here: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=4930179

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post Aug 20 2017, 20:14
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post Aug 20 2017, 21:37
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post Aug 22 2017, 05:36
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As requested, here's the proofread/edited version of the originally posted script. Thanks to the senior translator for looking it over!

CODE
Bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=15662

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/375447/6d8d0a6076/ (p.15-30).

Translator Notes:

1) Anywhere where it says "lit:" is a literal translation.

2) Most sound effects were found using the Tonigobe sfx guide.  This thing was a huge help! https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?act=Attach&type=post&id=11330

3) Page numbers are based off the linked gallary's page number, not the comic's page number.

4) Anywhere it says it's an "sfx" it is something (most likely) located outside a text bubble.

5) This is only my 3rd translation, there may be errors, I'm open to any feedback!

====Page 15====
1) バァンさま
Van-sama...

2) どうしたんだ メルルッ?!
Merle!? What's going on?
lit: What's the matter Merle!?

3) ...アタシ アタシ...
I... I...

4) 欲しいんですゥ
I want you

5 sfx) ずりっ
*fall back in shock*

6) うひゃあ
*gasp*
lit: uhya

7 sfx)  ポイと
*Tossing Carelessly*

8) うわあう わわわう
WAAAAAH!
lit: *A surprised yell* (UWAAH! WAWAWA!)

====Page 16====
1) ふーん 猫人にも キクんだ
Hmm... Looks like it works on cat-people too...

2 [On Box]) マタタビ
Catnip
lit: Silver Vine (Basically Japanese catnip)

3) ヒトミ! 何それ? ちょーだーい
Hitomi!  What's that?  Gimmie some!

4) わあっ
Whoa!
lit: "Sound of being startled"

5) わーい バァン様の オチンチン
Mmm, Van-sama's penis~

6 sfx) カプ
*open and closing of mouth over something; wrapping lips around something.* (Based on sfx guide)

7 sfx [In Mouth]) ひええっ
"Hieeh!"

8) おいしい ですぅ
You taste delicious.

9 sfx) くちゅ くちゅ
*sucking*

10 sfx) ちゅぽ ちゅぽ
*sucking and smacking sounds*

11) ん んんっ
mmmm

====Page 17====
1 sfx) ぬギう
*Slip*
lit: *Taking Clothes Off*

2) もうがまん でまにゃーい
I can't wait any longer!

3) やっ...やめろッ
H...Hold on!
lit: Surprise and resigning to fate.

4) バァン様の オチンチンは ヤル気充分ですョ
Van-sama's dick is definitely ready to go!

5 sfx) ビン ビン
Bend/Arch

====Page 18====
1 sfx) ズブ
*Plunge*

2 sfx) ぬちゅう
*Wet, slimy and squelchy* (based off the sfx guide)

3/4 sfx) くちゃ
*cock sticking against a pussy* (based off the sfx guide)

5) 行けっ 行けっ GO! GO!!
GO! GO!!
Translator Note: 行けっ litterally just means "Go", no need for the repetition.

6 sfx) ズボオ
*Fucking hard and fast*

7 sfx) ずっ
*Liquid dripping*

8) ああっ
Ahh!

9) あん
Ahnn!

10 sfx) どっぴゅん
Sound of a powerful ejaculation.

11) ゴクッ
*Gulp*

12) ジャーンプ
JUMP!
Translator Note: I have no idea what this is referencing, but it appears it is indeed just the word "JUMP!".

====Page 19====
1) バァン様  超早い...
Van-sama came so quickly!

2) いまのは イキナリ だったからだ
Well I didn't expect you to jump me like that!

3) ちゃんと イカせて 下ちいよォ
This time, please let me cum too...

4 sfx) ぐっ
*Forceful grabbing*

5 sfx) ズシ
*Thrusting*

6 sfx) ズ
*Dripping*

7) うるさい だまってろ
You're being so noisy.  Stay quiet!

8) すつごい さすが けだもの
Amazing... She really is an animal...
lit: Amazing as to be expected of an animal.

9 sfx) ドキ ドキ
*thump thump* (heartbeat)

====Page 20====
1) ウオオオッ
OHHHHH~
lit: UOOO-

2) コレで どぅだ
How's this!?

3 sfx) ドン
*SMACK*

4 sfx) ドンドコ
*THUMP*

5) ふにゃ にゃあ にゃあああ
AHH NYA NYAAAAA!
lit: Funya NYA NYAAAAAA!

6) 人のH 見てても しょーがない
I shouldn't keep watching them have sex like this...

====Page 21====
1) 濡れてる
I'm getting so wet...

2) んっ
Mmm...

3 sfx) ビク
*Shutter*

4) ヒトミッ ナニしてんの
Hitomi, what are you doing there!?

====Page 22====
1) Hな匂いが する
Don't try to hide it, I could smell your sexual acts from a mile away.
lit: I smelled your lewd scent. (I like mine better, it's more catty;))

2) ワン ワン
Mew Mew
lit: Bow Wow
Translator Note: My guess here is while this is usually a "barking" sound, this is the way she laughs as a catgirl.  So it's really more of a "hehe"

3) わっ私。。。オナニーなんか してないわヨ
Wha... What are you implying!?  I wasn't masturbating or anything like that!
lit: *surprise* I'm not... masutrbating or anything like that.

4) そっか
Is that so!?

5) きゃあああっ
AHHHH!
lit: Kyaaaa-!

6) ビリイ
*Ripping Of Clothes*

7) ちぇ すとーッ
Hey! Stop!

8) 何する のよ
What are you doing!?

9) ガマンするのは 体に良くない ニャーッ
Repression isn't good for the body, nya~!

====Page 23====
1) ヒトミーッ Hしょーう
Hitomi~ Let's have sex.

2) ちょ。。。ちょっと バァンは どーしたの
But... but... What about Van?

3) ダウン しちゃった
He's down for the count~

4) だから 今度は ヒトミと
So now, it's your turn Hitomi~

5) けっ けだもの
Wha.... What an animal
lit: B...Beast

====Page 24====
1) ああっ
Ahhh!

2) んっ
Mmm...

3) どう? 感じてる ヒトミ
So? Does that feel good, Hitomi?

4) メルルの舌って ザラザラしてて 気持ちいい
Your tounge is rough... but it feels so good!

5) ん
Mmm...

6) んんっ
Mmmm~

7 sfx) ちゅぷぅ ちゅぷ
*sucking/smacking*

====Page 25====
1) あんっ
Ahhn~

2) ああっ
Ahh~

3) ん
Mm...

4) んん
Mmmm...

5) だいぶ いいなたい だにゃ
Looks like you're feeling good, nya...!

6 sfx) ペロ ペロ
*lick lick*

7) これなら 入れても 大丈夫だネ
Looks like you're ready for me to stick it in.

8 sfx) ぴちゃ ぴちゃ
*drip drip*

9) ええっ
Wha!?

====Page 26====
1) 入れるって ナニを
Stick WHAT in!?
Lit: Insert what?

2) ふふっ
Hehe...
lit: Fufu

3) はひい!!
Ahhhh!!
lit: Haiii!!

4) ニシュ
*effort* (based on sfx guide)

5) ポン
*popping sound* (based on the sfx guide)

6) シッポが 中で。。。暴れてる
She rammed her tail inside me so roughly!

====Page 27====
1) あああ...
AAAHHHhhhhh...

2 sfx) ズコ ズコ
*swift impacts*

3) 女だけで 楽しんで ズルイぞ
You girls shouldn't enjoy such things by yourselves!

4) バァン様も 混ざってくだ さーい
Van-sama!  Join us!

5) ええっ
Whaat!?

====Page 28====
1) 後ろの方が あいてます よォ
Look, I saved you a spot!  You can have her butt.
lit: Her backside can can still have an merged with.

2 sfx) ば
*Sudden Impact*

3 sfx) クチュ クチュッ
*Slurping/smacking*

4 sfx) ぐ
*Continual forceful act*

5) やっやだぁ! やめてェッ
N...No way!  You can't!

6 sfx) ズプウ
*Slide + Penetration*

7 sfx) どす
*Spirting*

8) あっひいいっ ふっはああ!
Ahhh! Pull it out! Hfff. Ahhh!
Lit: Ahh! Retreat! Fuhaaaa!

====Page 29====
Translator's Note: It appears this page is the exact same as Page 28.  Gallary error?

====Page 30====
1) ウウオオッ にゃみにゃ アンアアアンアン
Uuooh! Nyaminyaaa!  AH! AAAAHN!
Translator Note: This is a combination of all three of them yelling in pleasure.

2 sfx) ドックン
*SPLURT*

3 sfx) くわっ
*The sound of eyes opening wide*

4) 運命 改変!!
Destiny has changed!!
Translator's Note: Sadly I'm not familiar with Escaflowne, however this is the most literal translation I can come up with for this line.  My guess is it's something hillarious if you know the character, if not, let me know and I'll try to decipher it further.
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post Aug 22 2017, 17:02
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post Aug 24 2017, 13:00
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post Aug 28 2017, 22:42
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Completed the "EHCOVE [ALPS] Okachimentaiko Ultra (Escaflowne)>edit 15p" bounty.
I wasn't sure what to do about a front page (whether or not to use the first page of the gallery), so if I need to make one, just let me know.
I also took the image from page 14 (unused) for the credits page.

Anyway, here's the link:

"https://mega.nz/#!UyZ0VQ5b!6NMQy1P2MLOj0wMEQNtvDStAVccxnSPewRPYi6KkyiA"



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post Sep 4 2017, 11:08
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I'll post the finished script here once I'm done (should take 2-3 days).
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post Sep 5 2017, 01:02
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Here's the script for https://e-hentai.org/g/53349/a57c4b1ec4/
There are a few notes that I left since I wasn't sure about how to go about it. If there are any doubts, please feel free to contact me.

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Pg4

...Hm

...Where's this place!?

...!?

W-what is this...!?


Pg5

You've finally woken up, Saotome-kun.

Ranka... Nanase!?

Just what... where is this place!?


Pg6

Also, what's the meaning of this!?

I-I'm sorry Alto-kun.

It's all... for Ranka-san's sake.

... Eh!?

Right now, Ranka-san is going to step into the world of showbiz/entertainment. (pick the best one)

So, if she makes her debut and becomes famous...
she might even appear on the sanma goten! (note: "Odoru! Sanma Goten (Dancing Sanma Palace)" is a Japanese comedy variety program in which the host Akayoshi Sanma talks with famous guests from the entertainment world)

S-Sanma... what!?

If it comes to that, she'll need to have a lot of stories to tell.
Especially those related to love.


Pg7

When she's singing, it's important to convey her feelings of love too, right!?

That's...

It's also essential for her to have some kind of experience if she is to play the role of a heroine in a drama.

But unfortunately, Ranka-san doesn't have any experience of that kind...

That's why...

Wha...hey!?

For the sake of Ranka-san's growth, please have sex with her.

Woah...idiot, what are you doing!?


Pg8

H-hey... damn, don't look!

...eh!?

Huh...!?

I-isn't it kinda different from what we've heard!?

Y...yeah.

I've seen onii-chan's thing after he got out of the bath but... it's somewhat different (note: should onii-chan be translated too?)

Yeah...that's right.
I have a... phimosis.

Phi...mosis!? Is that a disease or something!?

...no.


Pg9

I see... the shape is a bit different, but there doesn't seem to be any problems.

Yeah, that's right. It's just a matter of shape.

Then... that's fine, right?

...yeah.

Fine, you say... what do you mean!?

What, you ask... didn't I tell you before?

I'll have you have sex with Ranka-san...

I'll help too, so please cooperate with us too, Saotome-kun.


Pg10

Cooperate you say... Nanase... ugh

Nngh... kuh

Ooh...ah

Uhaa...

Nn...hmm!?

Pfaa...

Ah... kuuh


Pg11

Eh...!?

I thought it swelled up suddenly... the shape changed!?

T-that's why... I told you I had phimosis, didn't I?

If I get an erection, it comes out.

So this is Saotome-kun's penis true form!?

That's right... wait!?

Then that means there's no problems with this, right?


Pg12

Kuuh... Nanase, don't you dislike this kind of...

I do. Or rather... this is my first time.

T-then... why are you... ugh

If it's for Ranka-san, then I can do... anything.

...Nanase-chan.

I-I'll... I'll do it too, Nanase-chan.

...Eh, Ranka-san!?


Pg13

I can't let you do everything, Nanase-chan...

Ranka-san...

...just do as you please. Also, please untie this, I'm not going to resist.

Nn..mmff

Haah... I was so into it that I didn't notice it before, but

it's sour and tastes a bit... salty.

Nna..ah

But... I don't dislike it. Rather, I might even like this taste.


Pg14

Ranka-san, come here too.

Ok... but

A-am I really... doing it from this position!?

That's right. Apparently, it's good manners to service each other, so...

B-but... I, well... didn't take a shower...

...Ranka

Everyone's the same. Also, I want to see the usual you...

Alto-kun...

...ok

I want you... to see me, Alto-kun.


Pg15

Nn...

Haah...ah

Fwaa...

Nna...

Ah...

Ahh... nnn...

Nkuh...

Ranka's...


Pg16

It's got a bittersweet, rich smell...

Your viscous sweat is delicious, Ranka...

Iyaa...nnn

Yours is sticky and delicious too, Alto-kun...

Then, it's about time we ask Saotome-kun to do it...

Yeah...

Alto-kun... will you take my first time!?

A-are you ok with me...!?


Pg17

It's fine because it's you, Alto-kun...

G-got it.

Ah...nnn

Haa...ah

Nn... hah

Ah... Aaahh


Pg18

Uguh...

Gugih... iih

I-it's tight... do you think it's too much!?

It's... fine.

So... please keep moving like that.

I'll help too, so please do as Ranka-san says...


Pg19

Ranka-san... I'll ease your pain a little...

Nanase-chan...

A-also... if you don't mind, please... mine, well...

...eh!?

Ah, no... it's nothing, I'm sorry.

...!?


Pg20

Ah...aaah

Ranka-san, that's... too suddenly... haah

I want to... do it to Nanase-chan too.

Aah... Ranka-san, Ranka-saaan!

Kuhah...

Afwaa...

Haguh...


Pg21

Ah... Aah

Nn... haah

Haa... ah

Fwaa...nnn

Ah... nhaa

Nhaa...

Nnnn...

Haa...ugh

Aguh...

Kuhi...iin


Pg22

Ah... haaah

Fwaaa...

Kuhaa...ah

Nnnah... aah


Pg23

Ahaa...

I'm cumming... Haaaaah

H-have I been... of any help with this!?

Y...yes.

T-thank you... it felt really good, Alto-kun.


Pg32

For some reason, I like the Fujibayashi sisters from CLANNAD.
The older sister is particularly nice.
I can't shake off the feeling that I missed something, but I'm working on a manga about sisters.
I'll do my best.
Usamisuruga

Everyone, it's nice to meet you. I'm Kitatani Uni.
It's my first time working with Highland Studio.
If we have the chance, let's meet in a manga some other time.
Summer, 2008 Kitatanigumi - Kitatani Uni

Nice to meet you.
I'm Tachi Aoi (Note: not sure about this, couldn't find this person anywhere)
As a character symbol, double teeth are good and really cute.
An old example is Narusawa Yui. A more recent one would be Tsuruya-san.
And now we have the "Super Space-time cinderella" Ranka-chan (lol).
At least that's how I think it turned out as I was drawing it.
As far as feelings go, I'm more of a Sherryl person,
unfortunately I really couldn't draw her well...
Next time, if it ever comes.
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post Sep 6 2017, 13:01
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alright here are the links for the files of the tiger and bunny translation. one is the japanese text in txt the other is
the translated script. the paragraphs do correspond so it should be easy to see what translates into what.

[www29.zippyshare.com] http://www29.zippyshare.com/v/LE67b2oK/file.html

[www29.zippyshare.com] http://www29.zippyshare.com/v/bFWoGo1s/file.html
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post Sep 7 2017, 06:11
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thank you all for helping, here are the updates on stuff in the works

escaflowne project waiting for editor to conver the pages and make credit page before posting

macross editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=16926

tiger and bunny in review
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post Sep 7 2017, 13:46
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Alright heres the version 2 of Tiger and Bunny Translation.

the link for the complete translated text:

[www23.zippyshare.com] http://www23.zippyshare.com/v/S5q1Q2gF/file.html


and for easy review just the parts i changed with my commentary of it.

QUOTE


page 4:

first meeting turned into:

You don't have to stay all night with us...!
(tl: thanks for the info about this word. and
also thanks for the site with the new info ^^)




Page 8:

Woah,
are you this drunk?

Hey?
We shouldn't walk to far then.


turned into:

Oi oi.
Your legs are shaking already!

(left)
Come on... I'll walk with you for a bit...!
(tl: yeah i had trouble making sence with this text.
this makes it a lot clearer. i used oi oi cause
i wanted to make him sound more like a petty thug type.
seems to me like thats the authors intention.)




Page 9:

just he turned into heh
(tl: my german mind worked here XC totally didnt thingk
that english people would confuse it with the word he instead
of just reading the sound he (which indeed is in english heh in
german just he))

also
This close to my house..
Are the streets this bad?

turned into:
Even this close to my house..
This area's pretty lawless, you know?
(tl: changed the sentence before too with the additon
of even. I would say it sounds a bit better in english
this way, even though its less close to the original text.)




Page 10:

doe is the (probably totally bad english) internet slang of though
(alteast what i got out of my gaming days, right?). ofc if its
not as usual as i though it would be we can change it into though,
but i wanted to emphasise the friendly and companionlike relationship
they have, which then turns into a lover relationship. (also him
not really looking at her like a girl first.) i'll keep it in the script
but if you guys say we should change it i can easily do.




for the "Compared to" i can only go out on a limb here and guess she
means something more akin to "Compared to him i am..." as she is really
angry about herself and how she handled the situation, and he is coming
in and solving everything for her. But as that part is ommited i can
really only guess here. Not changing it yet till we came to a consensus
about it ^^



Page 13:

about using shitty. frankly for me (and my german mind ^^) it didnt seem
as big of a word really. maybe just the way i learned english mostly
from the internet... plus i wanted to get that sugoku iya feeling over as a truly bad thing. ofc we can go a bit less strong i would propose:

Even though this terrible thing
or:
Even though this truly bad thing

something along those lines.


as for the second shitty mention:

yeah the kibun as jibun was wrong. i see that now, makes more sense why
she's asking for him to make it go away too.

changed:
This shitty me should
just disappear...

into:
I want this disgusting
feeling to disapear...
(maybe even use disgusting instead of the first shitty?)


English errors mentioned by Red Piotrus:

de-capitalized Nickname

beek red turned into bright red (is that better?)

and about being called with my name by guys (was it just the double e
in being or just gramatically problematic? deleted the double e.)



Welp thats all points for version 2.


hope my proposed solutions sound better (or are flatout not worng XD)
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post Sep 10 2017, 11:22
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I'll be editing the EHCOVE [HIGHLAND STUDIO] GIRL'S CAPRICCIO13 (Macross Frontier) work.
I'll send over the first draft when reserved.
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post Sep 16 2017, 15:55
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Translation for EHCOVE [GUST (Harukaze Soyogu)] Zokuzoku! Kuronekotachi no Kyouen(Noir)

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Explanation

xxx. is page number
A., B. is panel number
bubbles are separated by blank lines or out of bubble text (*)
out of bubble text (mostly sfx) starts with a *
comments are # until end of line
sometimes I have alternative translations, split by / or ()

Was impossible to find translations for all the sfx, so if you really like to have them all in English: be creative!


000. In succession - Chloe's feast
# lit: Kuroneko's feast (Kuroneko = black cat)
# Probably a wordplay on Chloe→jap:Kuroe→Kuro(n)e(ko)
# I guess Chloe's Feast is easier understandable, change if Kuroneko is actually used in the English series

004.
A.
Eh…, you want to see the Japanese school uniform I wore?

Ok, if you really want to

B.
How…

nostalgic…

C.
Gulp

D.
Kirika ahhhh!!

* Gabaa

Kya⁉


005.
A.
Ch…
Chloe…

This isn't right…

Haa

Haa

Ah…
Better…
Stop it

B.
*picha picha picha # splash
Mnn…
*biku # blush
Nfuu… Mhh…!!
*biku


C.
This feeling…
it's feeling good, right?
Kirika……

Huu
*picha
Huu

Don't lie to me…… # more literal: You shouldn't lie……

D.
Look a how hard and pointy you get here……
*bikun
Hia!

006.
A.
Aah
A
*biku # = bikun
# You get the rest

B.
Ha…
*buru # shake
Haa

C.
Your bottom's becoming so loose # lit: You let your bottom become so loose……
How sweet……

I can't restrain myself anymore
Kirika……

D.
I feel like you…
I'm…
sticking it inside # lit: going inside you / I'll penetrate you / entering you ?
*kuchu… # rub stroke fondle
Agh

No

007.
A.
*zupu # ?
*biku
Hia

B.
Ah
*zupupupu # ?
Ah
*bikubikubiku
Aahh

C.
*ju # drool, sizzle
*djupu # variation of above
*zupu
*djupu
Today…
Mireille went out alone
*zuchu # squish gsh schlip
Ha
A
Aa

D.
A
Chloe is always looking out for such an occasion (lit: time) and comes here secretly……
And than she comes to excessively indulge in my body……
I never can refuse (such a thing)……
*nuchu
Kirika
*zudju
Ya…
*nnuchu
Kirika
*nidju
Haa
*guchu
A…
Kirikaa…

008.
A.
We really shouldn't do this / such a thing……
My understand that we are betraying Mireille, but…
my body is…
*dju
I'm cumming soon……
*dju
Haaa…
*dju
Me too, together……
*zoku
*zoku
Hyuaa…
*dju

B.
*bikun
Haa…mh
A…
doku… # SFX for gushing, running off (thick liquid).
Aa
dopya # no idea
byupu # no idea

C.
*hiku # twitch, flinch, muscle spasm
Haa…
*nnupo…
Aahh
*hiku


D.
Chloe……
You broke our promise again

Eh…?

009.
A.
I asked that you don't cum inside…

I told you I don't want to leave any traces inside my body
Even though I asked you…

B.
*gaan! # shock
I made here angry
She's going to hate me…

C.
I'm so sorry!
I'm so sorry!
It felt so good, that I couldn't stop
*egu egu # no idea
Emm…, that's…, you don't have to cry……

She says it was unintentionally…
but it's always like this………

D.
Inside my body it's all sticky……

I have to take a bath before Mireille comes back…
Also have to clean the room……
*pikiin # no entry found, but you get it from the context

E.
Is it ok if I join the bath?

Eh?

F.
Ok…
As we have no time……

010.
A.
*myaaaa… # sound of a shower, i guess

C.
*jii # staring

D.
Chloe…?

Is something (up)?

E.
Ehh⁉

010.
A.
Ehm……
*biku *biku

B.
Chloe
*biku *biku

C.
Well…
*pisha… # splash
It has to be……

D.
Chl…

E.
If you show off such a sweet body……
If you tempt me like this………

Kirika……
You're the one at fault………

F.
*kuchu *kuchu *kuchu # dict says rub, fondle, stroke, I'd rather go with kissing sounds
Mn
Mnhm…

G.
*nuchaa # no entry
Haa
Haa
Haa

012.
No…
*ha
*ha
*ha
Seriously…

Chloe… stop it…

B.
Nn…

C.
Aa…
Why…
My small breasts…

Ah…
Huaa
Aah
Kyu # squeeze
Kyu
Kyumu # same as above (more like a verb)

Shu # rub
Shu

But when it's going to feel so good……

D.
Ah… With Chloe's stiff…
*shu
*shu
*pi # drip
*shu
*shu
*toro # creamy
My bottom…… feels so good……

E.
*puchu # dunno

F.
*zekun # dunno
A!

G.
Kirika's special spot
is so warm and wet…
it's opening up…

*doki # heart beating
*Aahh
*doki
Soon…
Ah, must stick it inside…
*doki
*buru # tremble / shiver
*buru
You want sex now too, right?

Djupu…pupu…
*buru
No
not right……

Crap
I let it out for her

013.
A.
*gyu! # squeeze, grab

B.
*bikun
Nyaa⁉

C.
Eh?

D.
Chloe…
*bikun *bikun

I'll

I'll do it with my mouth

E.
That you take the initiative……

makes me happy……

F.
Picha…

Ah

014.
A.
Kupu… # slurp, suck

B.
*kupupupu
Nhuu…

C.
*zoku zoku zoku # shiver
Uaahh

Your tongue is embracing my (thing)… #lit: twining around

D.
*zekun
Ah
*shu
Iya…
*zeku
*shu
*shu
Haa

Haa…
Aah…
D…Don't look in that way…

Yaaa

E.
Haa
*buru
*buru
*bururu
*gaku
*chupu
*gaku # shaking
*chupu
Haa
*chupu
*churu # slurp
Haa

F.
*zoku zoku
*chupa
Funyaahh
Soo warm
*chupa
*zoku *zoku

G.
Chu # kiss
Zuzu # sip
Chapo # splash
Reron # ?
Chaku # ?

F.
No way…

015.
A.
I…

Jun
*kuchu… # rub
jun # ?

once again turned into this…… # as in got horny yet again

B.
Mm…
*nuchu
*kuchu
*chupu
*chupu

C.
Ah
Aahh
*guchu
*buchu
*nuchu
picha
reron
chu
chu
*buru
hiaa
Ah
Aaahh

D.
Haa
Haa
*picha
*shu
*shu
*shu
Haa
*picha
*picha

E.
Haaa…
Ah…
*zowa # shudder
I'm cumming #kanji: ejaculating

F.
*gugu # choking
!

G.
*nupupupu
Kyu!
Coming…!!

016.
A.
*dopyu… # spurt

B.
*byu # whoosh?
N!
*byuru
*byuku

C.
Aahh
It's coming out…
*byu
*byuru
It's getting all in Kirika's mouth……!

D.
*byuru
Ahh…
It's pulsating…
so much…
*pyu # splurt
*goku # gulp
*goku
*goku
So much…
So thick…

E.
*hikun
*hikun
*hikun
*cha *pon… # plunk, splash

F.
*zuru zuru # slide
Petan # flop, Flop down on the floor
Haa
Haa
[…]

G.
[…]

H.
Kyu… # squeeze

I.
Eh…

017.
A
……
I'm sucking out for you……
what's still remaining……

B.
juru # drool
*bikun # shiver

C.
Hiuu
*ju # drool
*biku
Uugh
*bikun
*juru
*bikun
This much…
Kirika
*jururu # drool

D.
Haaa
*bikun
Aahh…
*toro… # creamy
*bikun
Aa…
*bikun
*bikun

E.
With this much…
Chloe should calm down too

F.
Eh?

018.
A.
This can't be…
So much came out already, but still…
*bikun
*bikun
it's gotten even bigger

B.
Kirika… Aaahh!!
*ba # whoosh
!

C.
*gu # grab

D.
I want to finally stick it inside…
Ha
Ha
Ha
You / Your pussy #Kanji: vagina, Kana: inside

E.
*kuchu
Yaa
*bikun

019.
A.
Ah…ah…
*nudju
*buru # shake
Chloe…
No…

B.
nupu
nupupupu
*bikun
Hua…
*bikun
*bikun
Aahh
*Entering… inside… so big… so hard…

C.
*pita # hold tightly

D.
*nururi… # slippery

E.
…Ah…

Eh?

F.
crap…

In the end
you also really want my thing…

G.
*zupu

H.
*zupupupu
*biri
Kuuu
*biri # prickle
*biri
Ahh

020.
A.
*bikun!
Aaahh
*jupu
*Hua
A…
*bikun!
A…Aaahh……
Aahh
*bikun!
*bikun!

B.
Ah……
*buru
Hahu…
*buru
Ha…a
Hahu…

C.
She's so active now…
Riding up and down… # strange combination of ›to ride‹ and ›let flow‹
*nuru
*piku
It's so sticky and deep
*piku

D.
The lewd Kirika……

So…
I'll let you feel even better……
*zoku

021.
A.
*nupu
*nucha
Aahh…
*bikun
*bikun
Aahh…
*zuchu
*bikun
*nuchu
*nuzu

B.
*zupu
Nn
Nu
*nupu
Ah
*zupu

C.
Ah…ha…
*tsupu
*biku

D.
Tsupupupu

Ya… # read no
What are you doing…?
Chloe……

That's a strange place
Please don't penetrate there

E.
You know what comes now…
*biku
Nn

Bupupu

N…ah…
*biku

022.
A.
From time to time I should train your anus too
*zuchu
*buchu
Ah
*djupu
*guryu
*gupu # splish, slurp, wet (squishy) noice
No

B.
*djuku
*djupu
Why… does this feel so good?
Even though I'm being ravished here…

Aa…n
*guchu
*zuchu
Haa
Ahu
Aa
*gupu

C.
So warm…
and slippery
That you let me feel such a thing…
makes me happy

Huaa
*bururu
Haa
Ah
Haa
Haa
Aahh
*buru

And that let me fully cum inside your pussy

Iyaa Ah # No Yes (moaning)

We two together
should leave some real Noir blood behind # lit trans, as I've got no idea, maybe reasonable in the setting's context (Noir)?

D.
*djupu
uAhh…
Ah… both holes…
are so…
tight(end)……!!
Aaahh Ha
*nupu
Hua
*gupu
Ah
*gyupu
Yaa Ha
*guchu
Ha…

Ah Ah Ah

Aaahh……

It nearly hurts……
But it's this good…
In a moment I'll…
*zuchu

023.
A.
*djupu
Already
*gucha
*guchu
*nuchu
Comming

B.
*zupunupu
Ah
*buruburuburu
Hua
Ha
*buchu
I'm

Ah
cumming now

C.
Uh…
Haa…
*nudjuu…
*dokun # gushing, running off thick liquid

D.
*doku doku doku doku # dokun
*biku
*biku!
Yaa…
*biku
Aaahh
Ah Ha

024.
A.
*nyupo
*biku

B.
*bikun
*dopu
Hua… Ah…
*hikun
Ah… Aahh…
*hikun
Haa… Ha…
Ah……

C.
Aahh……

That was fantastic…♥

Mhmm

That's really good, isn't it # sarcasm

025.
A.
Mireille…!

Why are you back so early……?

A…

Aa……

B.
These surveillance cameras to record that group of solders—should they come into this room—should actually all have been disabled, but…
Recently Kirika has been acting strange, so I let few run. Ah, I received the alert with this cell phone♪

C.
In other words—
You let me see the /whole/ misdeed
**giggle**

Ah
I…
I'm so sorry…

026.
A.
Well…
What punishment should I give to such a thievish cat…?

At first we have go with 10, no 20 punches, don't we?

B.
A…
Aa…
Noo…

C.
Noooo
AAArgh

D.
This night…
Chloe escaped my at the 13th punch.
Until today, 4 days for now, she hasn't returned

Mireille is looking like she's totally bored.
I'm too, a little… **blush**

027.
Afterword

◾ Hi and nice to meet you, I'm Harukaze Soyogu. I'm delivering to you the 4th Noir book of GUST named “In succession - Chloe's feast”. Like always it has been delayed…
◾ Let's not speak of that… The Chloe of this series seems really behaves like an idiot. This colder Chloe is pretty cool, but when she does it together with Altena or Kirika she's more adorable, I like her more that way ������. In my head, she's the spoiled youngest child of the three Noir sisters.
◾ When drawing the manuscript, as background music I let a video tape or DVD play, set to sound only mode. At the spots where there there are only breathing sounds or moanings, I get more and more delusions (unhealthy ones…). For instance in the scene in Corsica: Chloe's voice, when she admires Kirika's work, goes like “Ahh-Yuu“. Having a few such memories, they are getting sampled and replayed in my head while drawing, and the manga I'm drawing at that time gets more fun to read.
◾ A bit sudden but, Kirika's tits, they're big, right? Tell me your opinion.
◾ For the next time I plan to change patterns and appearances towards a gentle Mireille-Kirika love. The title will be “Kuroneko's day off”. There will be a scene where those two will be making out in a shower room. It would be nice if I could revive some more locations in the drawings, I think.
◾ The special pre-ordered complete DVD set has safely arrived. It's been cuter than I expected — Mireille's eyes are bit frightening though ������.
◾ Before I forget, if you have the time and money to spend, please have a look at the next Noir books too.
arukaze Soyogu

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Thank you for purchase. This is Yamazaki Show. A while ago in my CR publish I said it would be hard to publish a new doushinji for winter comiket(C59), but I finally made it.
I've published many works this year, after counting this one would be my 10th work in this year. If including copy-shi (self publish doushinji using copy machine) it would be the 12th. It turns out that I'm in the situation of publishing every month. It just like a candle that is going to burnt out, suddenly giving its last radiance when it goes dim? It is quite different from my usual work so please do not judge hard on this work.
So let’s begin this chapter of Hand Maid May.

p4
Recently Kazuya-san is facing a bottleneck in his research
He is just sitting at the table and frowning    

May is quite worried as Kazuya-san keeps working overnight...


p5
Without his smile, this isn't like the usual Kazuya-san...

Even if it is a bit embarrassing, May will do my best to cheer him up!


p6
Can you see it? May's private part...

It is too small to see clearly, please come closer and to a good look

Ahhh...I touch myself too much and it feels soooo goood....


p7
hehehe
look at you Kazuya-san
it seems May's sexy position excites your lower body...

Don't worry, I will take responsibility and give it a good care...


p8
Does it feel good...?

Probably just using my mouth isn't enough
Let me use my entire body to serve you

Ah...Kazuya-san...

Your penis is so hot...Wonderful...


p9
aha...the penis tip is shaking and enlarging...

Kazuya-san you are going to cum...

So please use May's pussy...

Aaaaa....

It is too big to fit in my pussy but please cum on it as much as you want...


p10
Ah...aaaaa...So good...

It's okay...please just cum all over me...

Ahhhh...May is...May is also going to...

...cum!!!


p11
Wow...Amazing
You've cum so much

KYAAA!
*WHUMP*

p12
ahaha
I slipped off of your dick

Ah...Finally Kazuya-san is smiling

I'm so happy!
From now on please let me see your smile!

May will work harder and harder to keep Kazuya-san happy♡


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002.
Hi, nice to meet you! I'm Ryogu Harukaze, a member of GUST. My deepest thanks for purchasing “Little Wing” this time. This time, considering graphics, story and completion, this book leaves a lot to be desired (self reflection). I'm sorry for this and would be happy if you enjoyed it a little non the less. By the way, hack #19 “Recollection” was good, right? Aaahh Subaru-tan. If we just could see the episodes a bit earlier. Last episode's approach turned out different, don't you think. To be honest, after seeing the series' start, I thought it's not so interesting, but after seeing the middle part, it became an anime I'm looking forward to every week. Yes! Should i also check game and OVA? Oh yes.
But first of all I need a PS2…
2002-08-11 Ryogu Harukaze

I'm also drawing Noir! Next fall or winter (Revo or Only), I'll complete “In succession - Chloe's Feast” and it is planned to do a story about Kirika's first experience (based on episode 13, that wouldn't spin it too much…).

003.
>Why do you do this…
>It makes no sense…

>There is a reason…
>You and me will both feel good…

004.
*shiver
>By doing this
I can experience this world to the fullest,
I can believe it
>I wish that director(you) will experience the same

*suck
*thrust
*shove
*thrust

>Doing this
>Even though I might exist only in data

*>kiss + suck

<Ua!

005.
*strong ejaculation + rumbling
*liquid pouring
*strong ejaculation

>A…
Aahh
>Haa
*shaking
>Haa
>Haa


*>giggle

>Huhu…
It's still energetic
*shaking, slow muscle contraction
>Ah!
*finger slide

>Tsukasa…
*>lip opening sound
>Please come (in?^^) here

006.
*resistance + wet
>Ah…♥

*slurp
>Mn

*smack

>Tsukasa…
>Don't tease me…
>You're only sliding by… you make me confused…

*smoothly

>Ah⁉
Ih…

*tremble
*tremble
>Haa… Ahh……
*tremble
*tremble
>Haaa

007.
>Ah
*wet ぬちゅっ
>Aha
*penetrating sliding ずぷっ
*shove ぐぷっ
>Ah
*drenching ぐちゅうっ
*wet sliding, smack ずちゅっ
>Ah
*shlap *ぬぷっ
>Ahm
*wet sucking *ぶちゅっ

*sip, slurp (all outside bubble sounds)
>Ha
>Ahmm
*>deep
>Ah

*Ha (all bubbles)

>Mhmm…
*kiss
*kiss
>Mhhu

008.
*continue…!
>Does it feel good, Tsukasa?

>It feels good, but…
*sliding penetration
>Mn

>It's a strange feeling…
It doesn't feel like my own body
*slip
*slip

>The ‘real’ me might have no experience…
>this might be a girl like Mimiru described it?
#not going to translate the sfx anymore. Annoying as hell. Whoever wants them in English can look them up himself. No Japanese skills needed for this. I give you the transcription. (there's no translation for some, be creative)
*>picha picha
*puru
*puru
>Ha…ah…
>Ahh…♥

>Ha
>Ah # and variations
*nupu
*nuchu
#(sfx: ignore the “)


>Subaru, Do you feel good too?
>Ha…
>Ha
>Or…
is this only roleplay…?

>This…
>is an administrator level secret…♥

009.
>Is this here a secret too?
Have you used this place yet?
*>suck
smack
>I wonder whether the spot of the real Subaru is also this beautiful?
>Ah…
>Yah…
*shiver
>Ya…

*shaking
*shaking

>Tsukasa…
>Instead of doing this,
*smack smack
>hurry…

>The crimson knights' leader is pestering?
Furthermore, is this an order?
>Speaking for Ginkan (it's plural, so Ginkan's troup/friends…?), it should be a pleasure to follow my orders, don't you think?

>If that's your intention…
*nichu

*nupupu
<MmAh…

010.
>Ua
<Ah
*zoku
*biku
>So deep
<Ah…
*biku
*>nuchu
*>nuchu
*biku
*zoku
*zoku
<Haaa
*biku

<Ah
<Aahn…
<Hia…
<Aha…
*guchu
*chupu
*buchu
*gupu
*nupu

*chupu
<Ahn
<Hua
*nuchu
*gupu
<Tsuukasa
*zupu
<Tsukasa

011.
>So soft…
*chupu
*zuchu
*nuchu
>Feels so good
*nupu
*nuchu
…Ha, Ah, Nhu…

>If we didn't leave from here (from “The World”)…
>We don't have to return to that shitty world…

>That's wrong

>Aren't you data?
If you and me stay like this,
feeling this pleasure,
having a body living in this reality…\
I don't know what would happen to you in this reality
>don't add indetermination into reality
#not 100% certain here, check if this fits the lore

012.
>Just now
>Only now, forget the bitter things
>Tsukasa

>Stronger…
>Harder…

*chuku
>Ravish me!
<Ah
*chupu
<Ah
<Ha…
*zuchu
*nuchu
<Ah
*zupu
<Hiah…
*guchu
<Hua

013.
*nuchu
*nuchu
<Haa
*nupu
<Ah
<Aah
*nuzu
<Mm

>NHu…
Tsukasa…
>Me…
*nupu
>To…
*nupu

<Mm
*nuzu

*byu
*byururu
>Cumming
*biku
>Aahh
*biku
>Ahaaa…

014.
*soaping

>Haa (panting)


>Haa
*muscle contracting
*muscle contracting

>It's time, I have to go now…

>I see…
*click
>Yes

>………Ehm…
>Thank you…

>It was my pleasure…♥
When you come back…

>let's do it again
Tsukasa…

015.
>Enough now…
>Stop it…
>Haa
>Haa
>Ah…
Chlo…
Chloe…

^In succession — Chloe's feast (wip version)

>Doesn't it feel good, Kirika?
*>breath
*wet contact
*>breath
>don't lie to me

>see, this place is so hard and pointy
*shiver
>Aahh!

016.
<Aah
<A
*twitch


>Ha…
*shake
*spasm
>Hiaa

>So cute…
how you raise your hips…
>You can't take any more, huh Kirika…

>I feel the same way…
I'm sticking it inside # lit: going inside you / I'll penetrate you / entering you ?
*kuchu… # rub stroke fondle
<Agh
<No…

017.
*zupu # ?
*biku
<Hia

<Ah
*zupupupu # ?
<Ah
*bikubikubiku
<Aahh

*ju # drool, sizzle
*djupu # variation of above
*zupu
*djupu
^Today…
Mireille went out alone
*zuchu # squish gsh schlip
<Ha
<A
<Aa

<A
^Chloe is always looking out for such an occasion (lit: time) and comes here secretly……
And than she comes to excessivly indulge in my body……
I can never refuse (such a thing)……
<Kirika
*nidju
<Ya…
*nnuchu
<Kirika
*nidju
<Haa
*dju
*guchu
<A…
<Kirikaa…

018.
# this ↓ line is missing in the wip version
#We really shouldn't do this / such a thing……
^I know we are betraying Mireille…
But my body…
*dju
>I'm cumming soon……
*dju
>Haaa…
*dju
>Me too, together……
*zoku
*zoku
>Hyuaa…
*dju

*bikun
>Haa…mh
*doku # SFX for gushing, running off (thick liquid).
<A…
<Aa
*>dopyu
*>byupu
*dopya # no idea
*byupu # no idea

*hiku # twitch, flinch, muscle spasm
>Haa…
*nnupo…
>Aahh
*hiku

>Chloe……
You broke our promise again
>Eh…?

019.
>I asked that you don't cum inside…
>I told you not to leave any traces inside my body
But even though I asked you…

*gaan! # shock
>I made here angry
She's going to hate me…

>I'm so sorry!
I'm so sorry!
It felt so good that, it was unintentional
*egu egu # no idea
>Emm…, that's…, you don't have to cry……
>She says it was unintentional…
but it's always like this………

>Inside my body it's all sticky……
>I have to take a bath before Mireille comes back…
Also have to clean the room……
*pikiin # no entry found, but you get it from the context

>Ehm, ehm, is it ok if I join the bath?
>Eh?

>…Ok…
We have no time anyway…

020.
*myaaaa… # sound of a shower, i guess

*jii # staring
*dokidokidoki… #fast heart beat

>Chloe…?
>Is something (up)?

<Ehh⁉

021.
>Ehm……
*biku *biku

<Chloe…
*biku *biku

>Well…
*pisha… # splash
>there's no other way…

>Chl…

>If you show off such a sweet body……
#this ↓ line is missing in wip version
#If you tempt me like this………

#this ↓ bubble intro is missing in wip version
#>Kirika…
>then it's your fault

*kuchu *kuchu *kuchu # giggle in the throat + kiss
>Mn
>Mnhm…

*nuchaa # no entry
>Haa
>Haa
>Haa

022.
>No…
*ha
*ha
*ha
>Seriously…
>Chloe…
stop it…

<Nn…

^Aah…
Why…
My small breasts…
>Ah…
>Huaa
>Aah
*>Kyu # squeeze
*>Kyu
*>Kyumu # same as above (more like a verb)
*>Shu # rub
*>Shu
^But when it's going to feel so good……

^Ah… With Chloe's stiff thing…
*shu
*shu
*>pi # drip
*shu
*shu
*>toro # creamy
^My bottom…… feels so good……

*puchu # dunno

*zekun # dunno
<A!

>Kirika's special spot
is so warm and wet…
it's opening up…
*doki # heart beating
*doki
>Aahh…
Just a bit more and
she she'll get entranced
# guessing zupu = zubu
*doki
*buru # tremble / shiver
*buru
>You want more sex too now, right?
*>Djupu…pupu…
*buru
>No
that's not right……
^Crap…
I'm letting myself go

023.
*gyu! # squeeze, grab

*bikun
# the final version uses ⁉ instead of !!
>Nyaa!!

>Eh?

>Chloe…
*bikun *bikun

>I'll
*>ku…
>I'll do it with my mouth

>That you take the initiative……
>makes me happy……

*>Picha…
<Ah

024.
*>Kupu… # slurp, suck

*kupupupu
>Nhuu…

*zoku zoku zoku # shiver
>Uaahh
>Your tongue is embracing my thing… #lit: twining around

*zekun
>Ah
*shu
>Iya…
*zeku
*shu
*shu
>Haa
>Aah…
D…Don't look in that way…
>Yaaa

>Haa
*buru
*buru
*bururu
*gaku
*chupu
*gaku # shaking
*chupu
>Haa
*chupu
*churu # slurp
>Haa

*zoku zoku
*chupa
<Funyaahh
Soo warm
*chupa
*zoku *zoku

G.
Chu # kiss
Zuzu # sip
Chapo # splash
Reron # ?
Chaku # ?

>Oh no…

025.
I…
*>Jun
*kuchu… # rub
*>jun # ?
>once again turned into this…… # as in got horny yet again

>Mm…
*nuchu
*kuchu
*chupu
*chupu

>Ah
>Aahh
*guchu
*buchu
*nuchu
*>picha
*>reron
*>chu
*>chu
*>buru
>hiaa
>Ah
Aaahh

>Haa
>Haa
*picha
*shu
*shu
*shu
>Haa
*picha
*picha

<Haaa…
<Ah…
*zowa # shudder
<I'm cumming #kanji: ejaculating

*gugu # choking
>!

*nupupupu
*>Kyu!
>Coming…!!

016.
*dopyu… # spurt

*byu # whoosh?
<Mn!
*byuru
*byuku

>Aahh
It's coming out…
*byu
*byuru
>It's getting all in Kirika's mouth……!

*byuru
>Ahh…
It's pulsating…
so much…
*pyu # splurt
*goku # gulp
*goku
*goku
>So much…
So thick…

*hikun
*hikun
*hikun
*cha *pon… # plunk, splash

*zuru zuru # slide
*>Petan # flop, Flop down on the floor
>Haa
>Haa
[…]

#these two panels are differ in wip/final version
>Chloe should have finally calmed down by now…

Ah…

“In succession! Chloe's Feast” will be continued in the sales version

027.
The Noir only Doujinji display and sale will be held on 11. November 2002 in Tokyou-Takadanobaba… The exhibition “Destinies Black Thread”(?) is also scheduled!! Details can be found at the address below!
Harukaze will present “In Succession, Chloe's Feast” and additionally is planned the presentation of the first experience of our serious Kirika-tan … wow! Embarassed!! When October's Revo is done, after that somehow… it think. Duty calls.
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