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post Mar 6 2017, 08:15
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Just for the record, I've accepted this bounty. Expect it to be finished within 5 days.


Harasho Part 3 Script

Page 2:
A: About Five Months after Hibiki was taken as spoils by the Russians…
B: This is the last of them, we just have to hold out a little longer!
C: We made it this far, but everyone’s too damaged…
D: Shigure-san is down!
Yuuda-san, at this rate…
E: I knew it, are we really helpless
F: Without Hibiki?
G: Keep going!
Things may be bad, but we have a duty to our fleet to win!
SFX:
ドン=boom

Page 3:
A: Let’s go!
I’ll show you the real power of our fleet!
SFX: ガコ=crack
ドン=boom
スチヤ=whir
グオ=growl
シュ=swish
ゴドガ=crunch

Page 4:
A: Now!
B: It took us until nightfall, but we got it!
C: !?
D: Yuuda-san, look!
E: Heh?
F: Only one of my torpedo’s actually hit ‘em?
G: This is it…
SFX:
ドン=boom
くる=turn
ザパ=rush
ガコン=clang
バシュ=whoosh

Page 5:
A: Thank you, you saved…
!?
B: No way, is that…?
SFX: ドボン=boom

Page 6:
A: Are you sure? Hibiki’s back?
B: She’s in the parlor right now,
But she’s…
C: Hibiki!
D: …Hibiki, what’s going on?
E: …
F: She doesn’t answer to “Hibiki” any longer.
G: Her name is “Vilnuy” now.
H: I’m sorry, you are…?
I: I’m Commander of the Russian Navy’s Pacific Blue Water Kanjou Fleet.
Rear Admiral Lolisky.
SFX:
カッ=clack.
バン=thrust

Page 7:
A: It’s an honor.
B: You really helped me out of a dangerous situation back there.
C: But what brings you to Japan?
D: I came to meet you.
E: Is that what you wanted to hear?
F: Vilnuy is really an outstanding unit.
I wanted to give her one last chance to see her old commander before her training is complete.
G: Is that all?
H: And…
To show my gratitude to the man who let such a wonderful unit slip from his grasp.
I: What is that supposed to mean?
J: Nothing sinister, I assure you,
I wanted Vilnuy to show you something.
SFX:
ギツ=sit
ピク=twitch

Page 8:
A: Yes…
B: H-Hibiki!
C: That stomach…
D: Now do you get it? She’s five months pregnant.
E: Who’s child is it?
F: Mine, of course.
G: The theory is that the child of a Kanjou will have all of the mother’s power.
Isn’t that the plan for the Japanese Navy?
H: N-no… Hibiki…
I: Is it too shocking to believe?
Well, you’d better believe it.
J: Vilnuy.
SFX:
スッ=lift
がく=twitch

Page 9:
A: I’m sorry Commander…
B: Hibiki…
No…
C: You are not in command here.
She’s mine now.
D: So just sit back and watch.
You cannot deny this reality.
E: Yesh
F: Vilnuy…
Make sure your ex-Commander can see your face.
Small black bubbles: Mm
SFX:
すり=rub
ガタ=skrt
チヤ=click
ちゅぱ=suck

Page 10:
A: Oogh…
B: So good… Vilnuy…
C: Commandant…
(small bubble): Mm
D: I thought I’d never be able to see you again.
E: Stop… Hibiki…
F: But I didn’t want to meet like this…
G: I’ve been thinking about you ever since I went to Russia.
Small bubble: Mm
H: Stop it…
I: Fwah
J: Please don’t look at me like that…
K: What’s wrong?
You’re slowing down all of a sudden.
L: Do you not like doing it in front of your ex-commander?
M: …
N: I thought you had completely surrendered to me.
O: But you still have feelings for him…
P: Get on top of me, Vilnuy.
SFX:
Every SFX starting with ぢ=suck
シコ=rub
ギッ=grin

Page 11:
A: Spread yourself open and let your ex-commander get a good look.
Show him the pussy that I’ve conquered.
B: Is this the first time you’ve seen this?
Your former adjutant’s pussy all used up like this?
C: No…
D: Don’t look…
E: Are you getting embarrassed?
Then we need to change your attitude!
F: Hih!
G: I remember the first time I got this!
And now I get to come to Japan to relive it!
SFX:
シュル=slip
くちゃ=klch
ギツ=bump
かゃ=blush
ぐぼ=pop

Page 12:
A: H-how could you, she’s pregnant!
B: It’s training to help her have an easy delivery,
And what’s with that face? You really don’t like this.
Small bubble: Ah! Ah!
C: I don’t want the Commandant to see me in this state.
D: But I can’t help my reaction this…
E: So good…
F: I’ll… cum soon…
G: Vilnuy…
You can’t hold back, even in front of your Commander, with my fist inside you.
H: Augh…
I: Hah
Hah
J: Please…
Please make me cum…
SFX:
Starts with ぐ=pump
ガク=splash
ギチ=twitch

Page 13:
A: Aaaaghhh!
B: Wha?
C: How thoughtless of you.
D: Commandant… I’m… sorry…
E: Vilnuy, clean up your ex-commander’s face.
F: Hibiki…
Small bubbles (black and white) bottom half of page: Hah
G: I’m so happy…
H: I get a chance to touch the Commandant again…
SFX:
Top of page: Pop
びちゃ=Pish
ギツ=grab
ペろ=lick

Page 14:
A: Ah!
B: Mm
C: Mmph
D: Shaking your ass in front of an old man…
E: Agh
F: I’ll have to teach you some manners!
G: Ahih!
ぺちゃ=lick
フリ=shake
くちゃ=gsh
ピク=twitch
グ=grab
ズブ=thrust

Page 15:
AB: Agh
C: It’s different than when I was fisting, it’s a lot tighter.
D: No matter how many times we do it, I can’t get enough of this pussy!
E: Did you ever know the taste of this first-class pussy?
FG: Agh
H: Hah
I: Ah, you look like you’re in some pain down there.
J: I never thought I’d get to see the Commandant’s cock.
K: He has all this precum, is that just from seeing me?
LM: Hah
N: Yes…
O: Vilnuy…
Help him feel better.
P: Commandant’s cock… I can’t hold on…
Small black bubbles: Mm
Q: Please stop…
Stop, Vilnuy…
R: I didn’t know his cock would be so delicious…
SFX:
ずちゅ=glsh
ずん=wap
たぷ=jiggle
ドキ=thump
パク=nom
ちゅぱ=suck
ピク=shiver

Page 16:
A: Oogh
B: You’re getting even tighter now that you’re sucking him off.
C: Vilnuy, you bitch,
Whose cock do you want more!
D: Don’t say that in front of him…
(small bubbles): Hah
E: Y-your cock, sir…
F: Who’s your master, bitch?!
G: You are, sir!
H: And what do you want right now!?
IJK: Agh
L: I want your semen sir!!!!
SFX:
ギュう=stretch
どぢ=slam
ちゅぶ=suck
パン=wap
ピク=twitch
ドピュ=spurt

Page 17:
A: Hibiki…
No more…
B: Cum…
(small bubbles): Hah
C: Pleazhe cum…
Small bubble: Mm
D: Do you want a huge load?
I guess you’re not satisfied with just me.
(small black bubbles): Hah
E: Vilnuy
I give you permission to use your ass on your ex-commander.
F: Yes…
G: Go ahead Commandant…
Use my ass… to your heart’s content…
SFX:
ガク=shiver
ちゃく=lick
ピュ=spurt
れろ=lick
ぱく=pucker

Page 18:
A: But I…
B: I…
I never thought I’d get an opportunity like this!
C: Please…
I want to remember you as my commander too.
D: Hibiki…
I understand.
E: Then I’ll fuck you in your ass!
F: The Commandant’s cock…
is inside me…
G: Ahn ❤
H: It’s finally…
Inside me…
IJ: Ahn ❤
SFX:
グ=grimace
ブチヤ=bite
ヌブ=slam
グボ=grind

Page 19:
A: Kuh
B: M-My
C: A-ass hurts…
D: But…
E: Commandant’s cock feels
Sooo good!
F: Hah
G: Ah
H: Ahn
I: Ah
J: Agh
LM: Mm
N: Only your ass?
O: If… if you thrust up like that…
P: Ahn
Q: Your cock will… hit the baby…
RS: Agh
T: But even though you’re smashing my womb with your cock…
It feels good too!!
U: Are you sure that’s okay?
V: Yes…
W: Ungh
X: Ugh
SFX:
ずぢゅ=glsh
ちゅぱ=suck
たぷ=jiggle
ずん=wap
ヌヂユ=gsh

Page 20:
A: Commandant…
B: More…
More…
C: Thrust in me even harder…
Mess me the fuck up!
D: How about this!?
E: Ohh…
Oh wow…
FG: Cumming
H: Cummmming!
I: The Commandant’s…
J: And the Rear Admiral’s cocks are making me cum!
SFX:
ズン=wham
ガク=shake
ボコ=stretch

Page 21:
A: You’re making…
Me cummmm!
B: How could you do that to someone that pregnant!?
C: How could I not?
She’s spoils of war for the motherland, I’ll do with her as I wish.
D: Then…
I will protect Hibiki!
E: I will fight to get her back!
F: That sounds promising…
SFX:
ビュク=spurt
ビク=shiver
ドロ=ooze

Page 22:
A: A Fishing Port, Kunashir (Kuril Islands).
B: This punk again!
C: This ain’t Japanese territory, how many times do we have to beat that into your skull?
D: We ain’t gonna return it to Japan, ever!
E: Get out, and fucking stay out!
F: Stop it…
G: Say what?
H: This bastard keeps comin’ back, so we gotta teach him a lesson!
I: We ain’t aboard ship,
So we don’t gotta listen to ya here.
J: It’s dangerous for you around here, so get lo-
!?!
SFX:
ゴス=stomp
ガ=stomp
ドス=pow
ガコン=clang

Page 23:
A: I won’t repeat myself.
Step away from the Japanese national.
B: Th-this is…
C: Let’s get outta here.
D: Are you okay?
Former Commandant of the Japanese Kanjou Fleet.
E: 14 years ago you left the Yokosuka Ominato District to go to the Northern division.
And in the North you became feared as the “Northern Terror” as you annihilated your foes, even when faced with overwhelming odds.
F: Hi-
Hibiki?
G: And once your tour of duty was over, you retired.
H: It’s you, Hibiki…

Page 24:
A: Mama was killed in action.
B: Then you must be…
C: I am Vilnuy mk II.
D: I came to deliver something to you today from Mother.
E: From Hibiki?
F: This is…
G: You retired from the service after fighting for Mother’s sake.
SFX:
ガサ=grab

Page 25 (Here I’ll do the stuff in black, line by line, first):
To the Commandant
On that day, you saw me in such a shameful state… and yet you still said you would protect me.
That burst of courage…
It made me so happy.

A: Hibiki
!?
B: Commandant! Are you…
C: I’ll call an ambulance…
D (down and right of C): It’s okay.
E (closest to D): I’ve done what I set out to do.
F (left of C): Ahh… Hibiki…
G: I can’t believe I didn’t say it back then.
H: I should have told you directly.
All SFX on page: Cough

Page 26 (same thing, black line by line):
From your words, I know you are the one who went to the Northern Territories.
I know I’m a girl… But I was raised to be a warship.

A: Just let me ask one thing.
B: Are you happy in your life now?
C: Yes…
D: I know mama would be proud of me.
E: Really?
F: I’m so glad I had a chance to meet you.
G: Now I’ll have something good… to tell Hibiki… When we…
SFX:
ス.。。=touch
パタ=thump

Page 27 (ditto):
I love you. So much.
I know I’ll never be able to see you again.
But I know this letter will reach you one day.
Which will bear my love from the distant north. – Hibiki, the Destroyer.

A: Such a peaceful face.
B: Please send him back to Japan.
C: He’s the man mama loved more than any other.
D: And he’ll be happy to return to her side.

Page 28:
A: Hibiki…
B: Let’s get married!
C: Khorosho! (Russian: Okay!)

So it turns out I’ve been getting that wrong in the title this whole time, though I would bet that the similarities to the Japanese word for “impregnate” are deliberate.

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post Mar 7 2017, 14:17
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Excellent. I think it is also worth to include the note from the TL for Harasho 3 I got in the PM

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One thing i did figure out is what the title meant: it actually *is* a Russian word, just not what it appears. Harashou is "Khoroso" which means "Okay." Though I would still bet that the similarities to the Japanese word for impregnate is deliberate, given the plot.

The story here is actually kind of touching and takes an oddly dramatic turn after the absurdity of the last chapter about a man who fucked literal naval ships.


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post Mar 11 2017, 07:58
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post Mar 12 2017, 07:03
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Translation for the bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=15944

(C88) [2Stroke (YTS Takana)] 2STROKE ELSINORE (Xenosaga)

[00001] Front cover.

a. 2STROKE ELSINORE

[00002] Illustration

[00003]

お呼びでしょうか
a. You called, Master?
SFX: カツ カツ
b. katsu katsu (walking noise)
。。。マスター。。。
c. Master ?
SFX: こそ
d. koso
よく来たなコスモス今日はこいつの相手をしてやってくれ
e. Good, you came, He will be your partner today.
SFX: ニャ
f. nya (amused)

[00004]

SFX: カチャ
a. kacya
SFX: カチャ カチャ
b. kacya kcya
。。。。。。
c. ......
SFX: しゃるり しゃる
d. syaruri syaru (cloth rustling)
リラックスして私に任せてください
e. Relax and leave everything to me.
うん
f. Ok
ん。。。
g. n...
SFX: ちゅ
f. cyu (kissing noise)
んふあ
g. nfua
SFX: ぴちゅ ぴちゃ
h. picyu picya

[00005]

んん
a. nn
SFX: チュ チュパ
b. cyu cyupa (kissing noise)
んむ
c. nmu
うああ
d. uaa
SFX: ハア ハア ハア
e. haa haa haa (panting noise)
SFX: レロン
f. reron (licking noise)
ああつ
g. aa
それ。。。ちょつ。。。
h. That's... Wai..t...
SFX: ぴちゅ ぴちゅ
i. picyu picyu (licking noise)
SFX: ぴく
j. piku
SFX: クニ
k. kuni
SFX: クニ クニ
l. kuni kuni

[00006]

ん。。。ん
a. n...n
SFX: レロン
b. reron (licking noise)
ふああ
c. fuaa
SFX: ハア ハア
d. haa haa (panting noise)
んふあ。。。はあ。。。
e. nfua...haa...
SFX: ちゅぴ
f. cyupi
うあああ
g. uaaa
SFX: ビク ビク
h. biku biku (trembling)
んん
i. nn
SFX: クリリ
j. kuriri
んひあふああ。。。
k. nhiafuaa...
SFX: ペロ ペロ ペロ
l. pero pero pero (licking noise)
そ。。。んなところ。。。
m. Th...That place...
SFX: ビク ビク ビク
n. biku biku biku (trembling)
きたな。。。うああああ
o. I came... uaaaa

[00007]

んふあ。。。
a. nfua...
SFX: クップ クププ
b. kuppu kupupu
んむう
c. nmuu
SFX: チュパプ
d. cyupapu
んっく。。。んん
e. nkku...nn
SFX: ぷぢゃ ちゅぷ
f. pudya cyupu
SFX: くい
g. kui (squeezing)
SFX: ピク
h. biku (trembling)
ん。。。んんっ
i. n...nn

[00008]

SFX: クイ
a. kui
SFX: クニ クニ クニ
b. kuni kuni kuni
SFX: クチュ グチュ
c. kucyu gucyu
SFX: グニ グニ グニ
d. guni guni guni
SFX: チュク クチュ
e. cyukku kucyu
ん。。。くうんっ。。。んんっ。。。んふ
f. n...kuun...nn...nfu
んんんっ
g. nnn
SFX: ぷぢゅ
h. pudyu
んふあ。。。ふああん
i. nfua...fuaan
SFX: プハア
j. puhaa
んっく。。。
k. nkku
SFX: クップ クプ
l. kuppu kupu

[00009]

SFX: ヂュ チヂュ
a. dyu chidyu
んっ。。。んんっ。。。
b. n...nn...
んんー
c. nn
SFX: ちゅぷ ちゅぱ
d. cyupu cyupa
コスモスも準備OKだな?ケツを突き出せ
e. Kos-Mos is also ready? Her ass is sticking out.
SFX: ぷはあ
f. puhaa
んん。。。
SFX: ハア ハア ハア
g. haa haa haa (panting noise)
ふあ。。。はい。。。
h. fua... Yes...
SFX: クニ クニ
i. kuni kuni
ん。。。
j. n...
んあ。。。
k. na...
SFX: ちゅ ちゅぴ
l. cyu cyupi

[00010]

SFX: ツプ
a. tsupu
SFX: ズ ズヌヌ
b. zu zununu (wet noise)
んっくう。。。ん。。。んんっ
c. nkkuu...n...nn
SFX: ぴく
d. piku
SFX: ミチ ミチチ キュ
e. michi michichi kyu
SFX: ズヌン
f. zunun (wet noise)
SFX: ビク ビク
g. biku biku (trembling)
うあああ。。。あはあ。。。んん
h. uaaa...ahaa...nn
んあ
i. na

[00011]

SFX: ズチュ ズチュ
a. zucyu zucyu
SFX: ぴく ぴく
b. piku piku
なあつ。。。すご。。。い
c. naa! It's amazing...
ひあつ。。。あ。。。ああ
d. hia! ...a...aa
SFX: ハア パア パア
e. haa haa haa (panting noise)
ふああっ。。。
f. fuaa!...
んあ。。。激し。。。い。。。んん
g. na... It's so strong...
SFX: ビク ビク
h. biku biku (trembling)
ほら。。。ロの方がおろそかになってるぞ
i. Hey... your mouth has been ignored!
SFX: ぺろ ぺろ ぺろ
j. pero pero pero (licking noise)
は。。。ふあい
k. ha...fuai
んっく。。。んむ
l. nkku...nmu
SFX: クプ クップ
m. kupu kuppu

[00012]

あああっあ。。。もう
a. aaa!a... That's
出る。。。でちゃうよ
b. Cumming... I'm cumming
SFX: ガク ガク
c. gaku gaku
ふああ。。。んんんっ
d. fuaa...nnn!
SFX: ペロ ペロ
e. pero pero (licking noise)
SFX: ズプ ズヂュ ズップ
f. zupu zudyu zuppu
はあんつ。。。んはあ。。。
g. haan!... nhaa...
SFX: ビュ ビュル
h. byu byuru (spurting)
はむんつ。。。んん。。。
i. hamun!... nn...
SFX: ぽく
j. poku
んはあ。。。はあ 淒く。。。濃い。。。はあ
k. nhaa...haa It's bitter... and thick... haa
SFX: ハア ハア ハア
l. haa haa haa (panting noise)
SFX: とろ~
m. toro~

[00013]

SFX: パツン パン パツツ
a. patsun pan patsu
SFX: ピク ピクン
b. biku bikun (trembling)
ああつ。。。いやつ。。。ああつ んあああつ
c. aa!... iyaa!... aa! naaa!
あつ
d. a!
SFX: ヌヌヌ
e. nununu
SFX: ヌラ
f. nura
SFX: ぷん
g. pun
今度はアイツの上に乗ってやれ
h. Now get on top of him.
はい。。。マスター
i. Yes ... Master!
SFX: ハア ハア ハア
j. haa haa haa (panting noise)

[00014]

上から失礼します
a. I'm putting it in.
SFX: トクン トクン
b. tokun tokun
SFX: クヌプ
c. kunupu
SFX: プ
d. pu
ああああ何。。。これ
e. aaaa Wh-what is this?!
SFX: ビク
f. biku (trembling)
あはあ。。。
g. ahaa...
SFX: ゾク ゾク
h. zoku zoku (movement)
はあ。。。ああ。。。おお。。。きい。。。です。。。
i. haa...aa... It's... big...
SFX: ぴく ぴく ぴくん
j. piku piku pikun
SFX: グヌヌヌヌ
k. gununununu

[00015]

ふあむ。。。んんっ。。。ん
a. fuamu...nn! ...n
SFX: クププ
b. kupupu
SFX: モニ ムニャ
c. moni monya (squeezing noise)
んひいあふあああ。。。
d. nhiiafuaaa...
SFX: レロン
e. reron (licking noise)
SFX: ク
f. ku
SFX: むめ
g. munu
女の人の中ってこんなに。。。気持ち。。。いいなんて。。。
h. Being inside a woman can feel this good?!
ん。。。んん。。。
i. n...nn...
SFX: ヌラ
j. nura
んがつ がつ。。。
k. ga!
SFX: グププ
l. gupupu

[00016]

おえ。。。
a. oe...
SFX: ハア ハア
b. haa haa (panting noise)
SFX: グイ
c. gui
SFX: ビク
d. biku (trembling)
そこは。。。排泄をする器官で衛生的に。。。あの。。。
e. That's...where I use the bathroom. That's not clean...
ああつ
f. aa!
SFX: グチュチ グチ
g. gucyuchi guchi
SFX: グリリ
h. guriri
SFX: グヌ グヌヌス
i. gunu gununusu
ふつ。。。うう ううああつ
j. fu!...uu uuaa!
SFX: プル プル
k. puru puru

[00017]

んあ。。。
a. na...
おなかが。。。ん。。。くるしい。。。んはあ。。。
b. It-it's hurting... my insides... n!
SFX: プル プル プル
c. puru puru puru
SFX: キュ
d. kyu
SFX: クッポ クッポ
e. kuppo kuppo
あああ。。。いやあ
f. aaa...iyaa
SFX: ゾク ゾワワ
g. zoku zowawa
あひ。。。ん
h. ahi...n
SFX: ズチュ グチュ ズッチュ ズップ
j. zucyu gucyu zuccyu zuppu
SFX: プル プル
k. puru puru
おなかで。。。んん。。。二本が。。。ぶつかりあって。。。ああつ
Inside...nn!... Two penises are hitting me inside!... aa!

[00018]

SFX: グヌ
a. gunu
やあつ。。。ああああつ
b. yaa!... aaaa!
SFX: ぴく
c. piku
SFX: グヌップ
d. gunuppu
うああつ あ。。。ああ。。。
e. uaa! a... aa...
SFX: ビクク
f. bikuku (trembling)
SFX: ビュ ビュル
g. byu byuru (spurting)
SFX: ガク ガク ガク
h. gaku gaku gaku
くん。。。んんつ
i. kun...nn!
う。。。んん。。。
u...nn...

[00019]

SFX: プププ
a. pupupu
SFX: ハア ハア ハア
b. haa haa haa (panting noise)
うあ。。。あ。。。はあ
c. ua...a...haa
SFX: トプ トプ
d. topu topu
おしりが。。。はあ。。。熱い。。。はあ。。。あはあ。。。
e. My my ass... haa... it's hot... haa...ahaa...
SFX: ぴくん ぴく
f. pikun piku
SFX: ヌヌヌ
g. nununu

[00020]

SFX: ぴと
a. pito
SFX: ハア ハア ハア
b. haa haa haa (panting noise)
はあ。。。はあ。。。ん
c. haa...haa...n
今度は。。。はあ。。。前からおねがいします
d. This time... haa... give it to me from the front~
SFX: クチュ クチュ
e. kucyu kucyu
SFX: ヌプププ
f. nupupupu
んあつ。。。あああつ
g. na!...aaa!
んあ
h. naa
SFX: ビクン ビク
i. bikun biku (trembling)

[00021]

ふああつ。。。やっぱり。。。マスターよりおおきい。。。です
a. fuaa!... I knew it... you're bigger than master...
SFX: ハア ハア
b. haa haa (panting noise)
SFX: ぴく
c. piku
うあ
d. ua
SFX: ズッチュ ズップ ズフ
e. zucyu zuppu zufu
SFX: びく
f. biku (trembling)
んあつ
g. na!
んむう
h. nmuu
SFX: チュ チュピ
i. cyu cyupi (kissing noise)
SFX: プル プル
j. puru puru
SFX: ズチ ズ
k. zuchi zu
んつ。。。んふあ。。。ふあ
l. n!...nfua...fua

[00022]

ああ。。。またでちゃうう
a. aa... I'm cumming again!
SFX: ビク ビク
b. biku biku (trembling)
このまま。。。はあ 中に。。。奥に出してください。。。
c. haa... inside... please cum inside me!
ああつ
d. aa!
はああつ。。。ああ。。。膣内で。。。はあ 暴れてるう。。。
e. haa!... aa... you came inside... haa It's so strong...
SFX: ビク ビク ビク
f. biku biku biku (trembling)
SFX: ビュル ビュ ビュルリ
g. byuru byu byururi (spurting)
SFX: ハア ハア
h. haa haa (panting noise)
あ。。。はあ。。。いっぱい。。。
i. a...haa... So full...
子宮が満たされて。。。んはあ。。。
j. You filled my womb... nhaa...
SFX: ビク ビク
k. biku biku (trembling)
SFX: とぷ とぷぷ
l. topu topupu

[00023]

表紙の没案その1です。
今回の表紙用に描いた一致目ですが
もう少し色気というかエロ気を
出したかったので没になりました。

This was the first discarded cover drawing.
This time's cover drawing was good, but
I wanted Kos-Mos to show a little more sex appeal
so this one was discarded.

[00024]

こんにちは、 YTS鷹那です。
KOS-MOS本も三冊目になりましたが、未だに安定していない上に
描く速度もいっこうに速くならないです (FACE)

というか、今回はマジで描けなくて本気でヤバイと思いましたORZ
でも、形にはなったのかな?って思います。
相当難産でしたが、楽しんでいただければ幸いです。
今回はおねしょた路線でいってみました。
プラス、男二人の3Pニ穴攻めです。
KOS-MOSに排泄用のアナがどの程度意味があるのか。。。
とかいっちゃダメです(笑)

さて、次の本ですが
プリキュアを考えてます。
きらら推しなのできらら中心になるはず。。。

それでは次回の本でお会いしましょう
2015年8月

こちらも表紙没案その2です。
こっちでもよかったけど
腰回りに違和感を感じたのと、
腰アーマーの置き場にちょっと
困ったので没にしました。
上半身はアリなんだけどなあ。。。

Hello, This is YTS Takana.
And this became the third KOS-MOS book,
but even now, the rate that I draw at is not enough,
I might need to be faster. (FACE)

In any case, this time, I seriously could not draw. I thought it was really bad. ORZ
But it became like this? I thought.
It was difficult, but I enjoyed it and am happy with the results.
This time I did an Onee-Syota (older sister, younger boy) doujin.
Plus, a threeway with two men and double penetration.
I thought about how hard Kos-Mos' anus was used...
That was really bad. (Laughing)

Now, for the next book,
I think it will be Precure.
I am a fan of Kirara so it will probably be focused on Kirara.

Then, until the next book.
8/2015

This was the second discarded cover drawing.
This one was also good, but
I felt her hips were wrong,
and the placement of her hip armor
was a bit off, so it was discarded.
But the top part was good...

[00025]

Publication data
2STROKE ELSINORE

Circle 2STROKE
Author YTS Takana
Publication date 2015.8.16

URL [w3.dreams.ne.jp] http://w3.dreams.ne.jp/pc0819/uraaq/
E-mail uraaq@mail.goo.ne.jp
Twitter: @takana2_

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Done.

(C57) [GOLD RUSH] (Suzuki Address) ~wall~ (Excel Saga, Love Hina)
(C57) [GOLD RUSH (鈴木あどれす)] ~wall~ (エクセルサーガ , ラブひな)


P2

Illustration : Ootsuka Tomohiro (Circle Kouchaya)

P3

Contents
3P Illustration Ootsuka Tomohiro
4P Contents
5P "A Sorrowful <3 Saga"
Warabi Yuuzou
18P Illustration Suzuki Address
19P~24P "Mascot Girls Panic"
Suzuki Address
25P Illustration Suzuki Address
26P~41P "HEATx3"
Suzuki Address
42P Illustration Suzuki Address
43P~62P "New-born Love"
Uuroncha Tanaka
63P Afterword Compilation
Illustration Katakuriko
64P Address' Free Talk
65P Guest Comments
66P~69P "Haruzou's Room"
Haruzou
70P~73P Notice Regarding the Mail Orders
74P Publication Data

P4

Kanashiki <3 Saga
Warabi Yuuzou

P5

Heil, Il Palazzo!!
sfx: ぜッ (ze = rise)
You seem to be stupidly full of energy, Excel-kun. Just like always
By the way, Excel-kun
Yay Yay Yay Yay
Where exactly is Hyatt-kun?
Sir! Master Il Palazzo's loyal servant Hyatt
Is here, right here, as you can see. Huh, what?
sfx: ザッツ (zattsu = vanish)
I'm sure that... in the morning... together...

P6

Hyatt (Hacchan), did you close the front door!?
Yes, I locked it up properly
Didn't forget anything I hope
Ah...
Jeez, you can be so careless, Hyatt (Hacchan)~
Superior Superior Superior
Kidnapping (Kidnapping)
Now then...
sfx: スッ (su = grab)
Let's continue

P7

Wait for me, Hyatt (Hacchan), I'm coming right away!!
sfx: ダッ (da = dash)
The enemy will most likely seek to ambush me with overwhelming military power
Menchi attempting to escape
In that case
The first one to make their move wins
Spit (ぷっ = pu)
sfx: ガゴ (gago = clung), クゥーン (kuu~n = fly)

P8

sfx: バン (ban = bam)
KYAAAH, Nobita-san you pervert!! (Nobita-san no ecchi!! -TL note: a famous line from Shizuka-chan in Doraemon)
sfx: シュウウウウウウ (shuuuuuu = fizzle)
T-...They passed us
sfx: シュウ (shuu = sizzle)
Why is it coming back!?

P9

What's her deal?
No idea, but how about we take her in?
sfx: バタンッ (batan = slam)
Escape failed
Oh, you woke up
What are you doing all of a sudden
That's my line
What the heck am I wearing?
sfx: ゴス (gosu = wham)
I'm especially concerned with these
Professional tools

P10

Even though it's already like this, you still don't get it?
WAH
Ngu... Fuu
Nh...Fu
sfx: ぐぽ (gupo = gulp), じゅぷ (jupu = suck), ぷ (pu = suck), ズッ、ズプ、 ズプッ、ズッ (zupu, zu = thrust)
She's completely drowning in sexual desire...
Ngu
sfx: ヌプ、ヌププ (nupu, nupupu = slide)
See, that's how it is
WAH
Rope Rope (TL note: Excel is most likely mistaking rope for rape here)
sfx: バッ (ba = push)

P11

NAH...!!
sfx: ガクン (gakun = fall)
Ha...Uh Kuh...
sfx: ビクッ (biku = tremble)
She's really sensitive
HI
sfx: ずじゅる、じゅる (zujuru, juru = slurp)
What will happen when I put this in?

P12

HI
sfx: ズイ (zui = poke)
KIHA
NHAU~
sfx: ズゴッ (zugo = thrust)
Oh, they're getting excited over there too

P13

I'm going to let it out
Drink it up!!
sfx: ドプ、ドプン (dopu, dopun = shoot), ゴックン (gokkun = swallow), ゲホ (geho = cough)
Somehow, it suddenly became colder inside Ayasugi-san...
UH
It feels way too good
sfx: ドクッ (doku = thump)

P14

There's no time to rest
sfx: ニュル (nyuru = splish)
KAHA
AAA...
sfx: ズン (zun = rise)
You should share some with your friend
Get a good taste of this freshly squeezed mixed juice
sfx: ドポッ (dopo = drip), ゴキュ (gokyu = swallow)
Now have a taste of this
Hey Use your hips more

P16

Oh dear, it really is the worst when the situation gets out of control and ends in an explosion
Today's experiment... was a failure

P18

Urashima...
sfx: うるっ (uru = teary)
Mo... Motoko-chan...?
Chuu <3 (kiss)
sfx: ピシ (pishi = crack)

P19

Mascot Girls Panic
You can do whatever you like to me...
That's too sudden, it doesn't make any sense EEEH~?
sfx: かあー (kaa~ = blush)
Suzuki Address (large grey print resembling a watermark)

P20

You're drunk Motoko-chan so... We'll discuss this later.....
sfx: あわあわわわはわわ (awaawawawahawawa), あうううう (auuuu)
I know... I'm aware that you have Naru-senpai
That's why this time
We'll keep it a secret!! Clearly
Eeh~ You're fine with it, if we keep it a secret
The spider's thread~ (TL note: reference to a short story by Ryuunosuke Akutagawa, featuring a sinner trying to escape from hell by climbing a spider's thread)
Here
How long are you going to make me wait!!
Hyii~!!
sfx: あ (ah), ゆら (yura = waver)

P21

Ah
Nh...
sfx: ピチャ (picha = drip)
Fuh
Ah
Nh
sfx: くちゅ、ちゅっ (kuchu, chu = rub)
Softly... Be gentle
Yeah yeah
Haah
Ah!
sfx: ビクン (bikun = shiver), チュプププ (chupupupu = slide)

P22

Ahah!
Fu
Kuh
Aaaaaaaaah
Nha
Hya
Splish
Schlip
sfx: たぷん (tapun = bounce), ちゅぶっ、ちゅっ (chubu, chu = splut), パンッ (pan = splat)

P23

sfx: ぐっちゅ (gucchu = squish)
Auuh!! I can't
sfx: ビクン (bikun = twitch)
Kyah!
.....U...Urashima~ You bastard~
Hyii~!!
sfx: ゴゴゴゴ (gogogogo = rumble rumble)
You call yourself a true man, even though you came before meee!!
What a shabby end~
sfx: どかーん (doka~n = baaam)

P24

Address Suzuki's Free Talk
I recently started using Corel Painter, but since my PC is low spec, it won't run very smoothly. I heard later that it's a rather heavy software, but it still runs depending on what I do with it. Well, since I only just started using it... Still, I'd like to make use of it in the next book's cover...
Lately, all I've been doing is mahjong... Does that make me a failure as a human being? Well, I suppose if one continues that even when there's only one week left until the deadline, it does qualify one as a failed human being. Besides, by playing too much in these parts, all the opponents seem to have become stronger and I can't keep winning anymore. Because of that sad state of affairs, I bought some books and studied! It goes without saying that as a result my manuscript was delayed once more...
I should take manuscripts more seriously...

P25

Heil, Il Pala-
Zzo~!!? Just like that?! Just like that?!!
Suzuki Address

P26

We need to live up to everyone's expectations
Aaaaaaaaah
sfx: パラパラ ブオンブオン コーンコカカカ パラリラ パラリラ ゴンゴゴ (parapara buonbuon ko~nkokakaka pararira pararira gongogo = brrrr vroom vrooom brrooom honk honk brrrr)
About the mission this time
Are you listening, Excel-kun
Yes... Somehow
Damn, he really doesn't hold back!!
Comiket 57 Group (on excels mask) (TL note: Excel's attire and the sfx's in the earlier panel are a reference to Japanese biker gangs that had their golden age in the 80's)
I'd like you to deliver this box to this address (space)... (TL note: "space" is a common term used for the tables or spaces allocated to the participating circles at Comiket)

P27

Big Sight (TL note: Tokyo Big Sight, the established venue of Comiket)
Slot a here (TL note: The tables at Comiket are often shared by 2 circles, hence spaces "a" and "b")
All we need to do is to deliver this single box!!
The mission this time is really easy, but...
I wonder what's inside?
It's quite heavy!
Senpai... I'm feeling a bit...
Ah, you're not feeling too good again?
Me neither, to tell the truth
After all

P28

The smell swirling about this place is terrible!!
Ah
Everyone ought to take a bath for this day of conquest!!
sfx: ボタボタ (botabota = splash), ムキー (muki~ = grrr)
You just rest, Hyatt (Hacchan)
I'm sorry...
"Comiket"... Speaking of which, it's gotta be doujinshi!!
Ah!!
This is it.
Master Il Palazzo must be telling me to sell these, in order to "Lead a more affluent life"...
As expected of Il Pala...
sfx: カッシャ (kassha! = open)

P29

Th... This is the rumoured...
So that people won't copy this, we air this part fully censored.
sfx: プルプル (purupuru = shiver)
Just now, did I become a person that "should be beaten to death!!"? Is that who I am?
sfx: イヤアアアアアアアア (Iyaaaaaaaaa = Noooooooooh), ガーン (ga~n = shock)

P30

Man, why the hell do I have to come to a place like this.....?
Stop grumbling, this is work too...
...saying that, you really seem to be enjoying yourself
That's quite the bag you have there!
Hmm!!
I'll go look around a bit as well...!!
He's easy to read.....
sfx: ダッ (da = run)
He~y Look, "Kouchaya" is releasing a new book!!
That can't be, Tenimuhou 4 is scheduled to be released next spring
Huh? Where's Watanabe?
He's gone stalking...

P31

sfx: ぱちっ (pachi = open eyes)
Oh? Are you awake?
...where are we?
The infirmary. Apparently events like this actually have one...
Her heart!
To think that we would meet in such a place..... How are you feeling?
Her heaaart!!
I'm sorry, for making you worry about me
Let me know if there's anything you need. Do you feel thirsty?
In that case... Let me take you up on that offer...
Eh!!?

P32

Haa~wawawa...
Criminal
Criminal
Criminal
Rape her
Criminal
Rape her
Rape her!!
sfx: イヤアアアアアアア (Iyaaaaaaaa = Noooooooo)
Master Il Palazzooo

P33

Nh
Mmh
Hyah
Aah
sfx: ちゅ (chu = suck), ぴちゃ (picha = drip), ちゅぶっ (chubu = splish)

P34

Fuah
Ahn
Kuh
Ih
sfx: ガポッ (gapo = suck), ムニュ (munyu = squueze), ちゅぶっ (chubu = splish)

P35

Hyah
Haaah!
Ah
Ah
sfx: チュブッ (chubu = splish)

P36

Ah Ah
Haah Aah
Hyah
Chuu!!
sfx: チュブッ、ちゅぶっ (chubu = splish), ズズズ (zuzuzu = slide)

P37

....what's going on
Yah
Ah
Ah
Ah
Fuuuck, I'll never get my tuuurn... At this rate
Hmm?
sfx: パンパン (panpan = thrust thrust), チュブ (chubu = splish), ぐっちゅ (guccha = squish)
Rape her too while we're at it!!
Rape her
Rape her!
Rape her!!
sfx: オオオオオオオオ (oooooooo = yeaaaaah)

P38

sfx: ガッ (ga = hit), ゴッ (go = punch)
Hmph...
Damn otakus...
Hmph!
sfx: すたすた (sutasuta = thud thud)

P39

sfx: ゴッ (go = bam)

P40

So you have no idea why you were lying naked in such a place...?
Yeah...
Must be memory loss......
I feel like I'm really missing something important here.

P42

New-born Love
Myuu
Phototypesetting Haruzou
Art Uuroncha Tanaka

P43

Umm
Senpai
Hmm
What is it, Shinobu-chan?
I
Have something I'd like
To ask you
sfx: ドキ (doki = thump)

P44

Senpai
What you feel for Naru-senpai
Is love
Isn't it...
Narusegawa is....
Apparently getting along well with Seta-san, so...
It's got nothing to do with me
Hot springs turtle (The sign on the background)

P45

Umm
Senpai
...I...
Senpai
I love...
You!!
If it's me, I would unconditionally, about senpai...
Ummm I mean... I...
sfx: ひく (hiku = sniff)

P46

Thank you, Shinobu-chan
Ah
Se-Senpai
I love you, Shinobu-chan
Yes
Senpai

P47

You're fine with this, Shinobu-chan?
Y-Yes
sfx: ドキ (doki = thump)

P48

Kya!!
Ah
sfx: ムニ (muni = fondle)
Nh
Ah
Noh
Haa
Haa
sfx: ドキドキ (dokidoki = thump thump)

P49

Hyah
N-No
Nh
You can't!!
sfx: プル (puru = shiver), キュッ (kyu = squueze)
Hya
Kyannh!!
sfx: フー (fu~), ハー (ha~), ツブ クイ (tsubu kui = spread)
Haa
Haa
Haa

P50

Aah
Haa
Haa
Haa
Hyah
Se-Senpai
sfx: ピト(pito = touch)
Hyah

P51

Haa
Ah
Ah
Haa
Nh
Haa
Haa
Haa
Haa
Hyaa
Haa
Kuunh
sfx: ジュグ (jugu = slide)

P52

Shino
-chan
Ha
Nh
Ha
Ha
Byuru = shoot
Ha
sfx: ピト (pito = splish), ポト (poto = splash), ヌッ (nu = slip), ジュグッ (shugu = slide)

P53

Myuu
sfx: そそそ (sososo = stare)
I know, Senpai. You do really like Naru-senpai
But I won't give up. It's not "impossible". It "can be done, if one tries really hard"
Those words you said, Senpai. I want to believe in them
That's why, I will never give up. I will certainly make senpai see me like that

P54

Haa
Haa
Ahn
Hya
sfx: スウ (suu = smoke)

P55

Haa
Haa
Senpai!!
Yeah
sfx: ケシケシ (keshikeshi = stub out)
Sorry sorry
Haa
Haa
Nh
Ah
Kuh
sfx: ズッ (zu = thrust)

P56

Haa
Haa
Haa
sfx: パン (pan = splut)
Haa
Hya
Senpai
Haa
Haa
Kyah
Haa
From the front
Haa
Mhh
Yeah yeah
Haa

P57

Hyaah
sfx: ニュポ (nyupo = slip)
Senpai
Yeah
Naru-chan

P58

Hya
Haa
Hya
Haa
Fuhya
Haa
Haa
Haa
Haa
Senpai
Uh
Haa
Haa
sfx: ジブ (jibu = schlip)

P59

Haa
Haa
Hyaah
sfx: ジュク (juku = squish), ビチュ (bichu = splish)
Haa
Haa

P60

Haa
Haa
Haa
Mmmh!!
Haa
sfx: ビク (biku = twitch)
Ah
sfx: プシャアア (pushaaa = splash)
Ha
Haa
Ha
Ha
Haa

P61

With this
We can focus on studying
Senpai, I've decided
I will apply for Todai (TL note: Tokyo University)
I see
If that's what you've decided
Do you best, Naru-chan
Yeah

P62

Afterwords Compilation

P73

Publication Data
Title
Publishing circle
Date of publication
Contact address
Tel. 181-0013
Tokyo Metropolitan Area, Mitaka-shi, Shimorenjaku
4-5-25 Shunzansou, Toushi Nogata
Printing
Shimaya Publishing
Unauthorized copying and reproduction forbidden



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(C83) [CUT A DASH!! (Mitsumi Misato) & Blazer One (Amaduyu Tatsuki)] esquisse Brise (Various)

PAGE7
Sachi: (Even though Kirito's sleeping next to me... I'm, doing this...) (Ah... Aah, I want it...) (Kirito... I can't help myself)

Sachi: (I'm rubbing myself... down there, right next to Kirito) (It feels so good, and I'm so wet. It's making such obscene squelching sounds, he'll hear me)

Sachi: (I want him to touch me... to make me feel good)

PAGE8
Sachi: (...my clit, it's gotten this big)

Sachi: (Look, I'm spreading it open, so play with it- Ah, rub it, make me... feel really good)

Sachi: (Aah, oh yes, it feels so good! More... Aah, oh yes, harder)

PAGE9
Sachi: (Eh... Kirito...? ...he's... sleeping, right?) (Hand) (His hand...) (Kirito's hand...)

Sachi: (Nnn, Haaa, so much juice is leaking out from inside, it's even reaching my butt) (Touch me, here... my pussy, touch it. Ah, Hah, Aah, touch it a lot~ A-amazing, feels good~)

PAGE10
Sachi: (Aahh, h-his finger) (I-it's going in! Nnnn, M-moving inside like- Ah, Aahh!)

Sachi: (Just by having his finger in me, I'll cum, I'm going to cum)

Sachi: (Oh... wow... Ah, Aaah!)

Sachi: (~Ah, Aah, Aahnnnnnnn~!)

PAGE11
When I told Mitsumi-sensei, 'Draw Sachi!', I got told 'Who's that?' instead.
Seriously!? I'm so sorry!
Amaduyu here.

Either way, it's a black hair festival! By the time I realized it, we were like this.

What's this, My Pretty Cure Boom is still continuing!
Reika-chan's appearances have been getting me excited lately
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Steins;Gate... Movie & new title have been announced (^ω^)

The blank area here will probably draw your attention, but I just couldn't seem to crop my picture any better. Mind you, I didn't just throw in the towel you know (^ω^)

Could it be: It is my very first drawing of Kurisu. Her boobs really are too big for an assistant. (^ω^) I'm sure that somewhere there's the π- word line of a big boobs kingdom

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How about some gel banana for a snack ((((^ω^))))...banana break?

After a bath, it's time for a glass of milk! Or not really, I actually went with strawberry milk (^ω^)



Pages 4 and 14 are basically otaku-ish banter between the two artists, something that most people probably won't find too interesting

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PAGE2
Darq: (Whee~) (It's gotten so late) (Eika, Kanata, I've returned~)

Darq: (Oro) (Hic) (These shoes are...)

Darq: (So the hero-dono is here too, I see)

PAGE3
[No text]

PAGE4
Darq: (Seems like while I was away-) (You've been taking care of everyone at Fuugetsuan)

Darq: (What are you so scared of?) (Please be at ease, hero-dono)
Male: (O-okay)

Darq: (I still haven't drunk my fill tonight, so how about accompanying me?)
Male: (N-no, I don't drink...)

Darq: (Are you saying you can't drink my wine, hero-dono?)
Male: (Those words are that of a drunk!) (Ah, no) (That's not it, but any further is abuse of power...)

Darq: (And so, I lost that time on purpose, you know. On purpose) (Yet when that Leo-hime heard it, she clicked her tongue. Don't you think she's still a child?)

Darq: (In the first place, she was like that with the cursed beast incident too-)
Male: (Aah, geez, you're getting totally carried away, Lady D'Arquien)

PAGE5
Darq: (Still, why would that Leo-hime get so hung up on me? My status... I wouldn't boast about my deeds, but just because I put on a hat to hide doesn't mean she can address me without honorifics) (What? Perhaps she judges people by the size of their chest instead) (In that case, that explains a lot, but I do carry some impressive assets of my own. There are only a few that can count above me)
Text: (Blah)X2 (Haa) (Boob alien?) (Uu~) (Toilet, need toilet)

Darq: (Don't you think so? Yukikaze?) (...oh, she ran off. Speaking of chest size, there's hardly anyone who can beat Yukikaze) (Well, Leo-hime and Yukikaze are childhood friends, so she might have looked at the young Yukikaze and thought about how big her chest was. Really, she's such a child) (-Woah there, we're running out of wine. Eika!)
Text: (Hey) (Yukki, help... Ah...) (She ran...)

Darq: (Regarding dispensing with honorifics, Nanami-dono's stands out quite a bit too. As expected of hero-dono's teacher, I should say) (For me, the only one to address me by name alone is my elder brother, yet that's a difficult thing to deal with) (I know I'm being idolized, but it irritates me enough that I used Wolf Destruction Fang in the last war. Dear me, I'm just so immature too, I suppose) (Well, as for the issue of the armor breaking, I'll just call it quits with the small size of Nanami-dono's chest) (Really, her courage is on par with Leo-hime's, despite her small chest. Ha ha ha)
Text: (Here you go) (Umu) (Yes) (Say, is Lady D'Arquien always like this?)

Darq: (Speaking of small chests, how are you getting along with Eclair, whose breasts you groped and stripped naked in your first encounter? Hero-dono) (It's said that groping the chest makes them grow bigger, but it appears that Eclair's chest still remains small. Is Hero-dono squeezing them properly every day?) (Just like training every day, it's important to keep on doing it, since I feel that it will grow even bigger then...) (Perhaps it's what you would call hitting a rut?) (If that's the case- Oh? Hero-dono? Are you listening?)
Text: (Wait) (Don't leave me alone!) (Hurry hurry)

PAGE6
Girls: (It's only a bit more before our lady passes out drunk) (So please hang in there, hero-sama)

Male: (She doesn't seem like she'll pass out at all...)
Text: (Aah...)

Darq: (By the way, there's a small matter I'd like to consult you on, so would you hear me out, hero-dono?)
Male: (Yes, yes, I'll hear you out on anything, that's me)

Darq: (Actually...) (Could I ask you to look at this?)

PAGE7
Darq: (Please be gentle, hero-dono) (Yes)
Male: (Y-yes, I'm doing it, okay?)

Darq: (Ohh) (This is...)

Darq: (As expected of you, hero-dono. Now I'm totally smooth and bare) (I'll go show it to the princess later)
Male: (I'd rather you not praise me while I'm shaving your crotch with my head between your thighs. And it's not bare) (Please don't) (You're a total chatterbox when you're drunk)

Male: (I'm going to do the rest, so please don't move, okay?)

PAGE8
Darq: (Nn...) (Mm)

Darq: (N-no, that's not it...) (Nn) (Ah!)
Male: (Ah, did that hurt?)

PAGE9
Darq: (N-no, that was nothing)

Male: (I-It's done already, so...)

Darq: (Th-this is hero-dono's fault for touching all the strange spots)

Darq: (There's no need to hold back) (Look, you're like this down here too, aren't you?)

Darq: (If you're okay with me, I'll help to comfort you)

Male: (...yes)

PAGE10
Mal: (Mm)
Darq: (Seems like you've been enduring it quite a bit)

Darq: (My breasts won't produce, but feel free to suckle from my chest as much as you like) (You're quite stiff down here too, I see)
Male: (Haa)

Darq: (How's this smooth sensation feel?) (Oops) (The tip ended up going inside)

Male: (Ahh!)
Darq: (Oh my, raising your voice just from this, you won't be able to pleasure the princess like that, you know)

PAGE11
Darq: (Like this-) (Nn)

Darq: (Haa)X2

Darq: (Aahh!)

Male: (Aaah!) (The inside's moving) (Oh no!)

Male: (Cumming!) (It's squeezing me dry...!)
Darq: (How is it?) (Feel free to let out every last drop in me)

PAGE12
Darq: (Well, well, this is quite a large amount, isn't it) (Thanks to hero-dono making me all smooth) (It's now all smooth and slippery)

Darq: (Shall we continue making babies a while long-)

Darq: (-...er) (Eh)

Male: (Muguh!) (Hey, Lady D'Arquien!?)
Darq: (L-looks like I moved too much) (Ulp)
Text: (Only now?)

Male: (S-somebody!) (Heavy!) (This person's too big!)
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I am not familiar with Black Lagoon, and the ( admitedly shallow ) research did not lead to anything, so i may have gotten wrong the third page as i don't know the events that are evoked.
Aside from that, it's finished.

EDIT : Less literal, clarification of composite bubbles.
EDIT 2 : Page 03 is ok.

--- 01.jpg
[upper right]
For adults

--- 03.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
...A nice bonus to the reward for the work...

[upper panel, SFX]
*swoosh*

[upper panel, left bubble]
Still, I am surprised the triads have a private beach.

[second panel, right bubble]
...Why is big sister here?

[second panel, middle bubble]
Ah, hello.

[second panel,upper-left bubble]
I intend to relax after a work well done

[second panel, lower-left bubble]
Contrary to you...

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
Since those resorts tend to be crowded, isn't it natural?

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
Right now, the city is busy cleaning up probably.

[lower-right panel, middle bubble]
Mister Chang is doing his best.

[lower-right panel, lower-left bubble]
I'll have to make an appearence at the party, this evening.

[lower-right panel, SFX]
*swoosh*

[lower-left panel, bubble, right "text"]
......... .........

[lower-left panel, bubble, left text]
...You came because you felt like having a good time, did not you?

--- 04.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
Alright big sis!

[upper panel, upper-left bubble, upper text]
Let's compete to that island!

[upper panel, upper-left bubble, lower text]
The one who wins get 5XX dollars-

[upper panel, lower-left bubble]
I can't swim.

[lower right panel, upper SFX]
*Hmph*

[lower right panel, middle SFX]
*smack*

[lower right panel, lower-right bubble]
N(o)-... B(ut)-...

[lower right panel, lower-left bubble]
You laugh, I kill you. You tell anyone, I kill you.

[lower middle panel, upper bubble]
My underlings offshore are awaiting my signal.

[lower middle panel, upper SFX]
*ship horn*

[lower middle panel, lower bubble]
Bring this secret to the grave.

[lower left panel, upper bubble, right text]
Aah... That's it!

[lower left panel, upper bubble, left text]
I'm looking for Rock, have you seen him?

[lower left panel, lower bubble]
He came to greet me a while ago, I gave him some spirits.

--- 05.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
Kid stuff?

[upper panel, middle bubble]
Whisky.

[upper panel, left bubble]
99% alcohol❤

[second panel, SFX]
*swoosh*

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble]
...You don't seem surprised to see me.

[lower-left panel, lower-right SFX]
*step*

[lower-left panel, lower-left bubble]
I have to talk to you.

--- 06.jpg
[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble]
The battle... I owe you.

[upper-right panel, upper-left bubble]
The young master and Fabiola would be against it but

[upper-left panel, upper-right bubble]
I want to settle this debt.

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*grab*

[upper-left panel, upper-left bubble]
A reward of ten thousands dollars.

[upper-left panel, lower-left bubble]
What about those breasts!?

[middle-left panel, upper-right bubble]
This is...

[middle-left panel, middle bubble]
Thanks to the swimsuit, touching without suspicion is possible...

[middle-left panel, upper-left bubble]
Touching!?

[middle-left panel, lower-left bubble]
If that's the case...!!

[lower panel, upper-right bubble]
Let's fullfill the natural purpose of those breasts!!

[lower panel, SFX]
*grope*

[lower panel, upper-left bubble]
Aah...!?

--- 07.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
...You prefer that to money?

[upper panel, SFXs]
*grope* *grope* *grope*

[upper panel, left bubble]
Look at these boobs, is that surprising!?

[middle panel, right bubble]
...My body is worth more than ten thousands dollars...?

[middle panel, SFX]
*rub*

[middle panel, left bubble]
Even more than one million dollars!!

[lower panel, upper-right bubble]
I need those boobs!!

[lower panel, upper-middle bubble]
Kuu...!?

[lower panel, SFX]
*STAB*

[lower panel, lower-left bubble]
Aaaa!!

--- 08.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
Wait... That!!

[upper panel, SFX]
*thrust* *thrust* *thrust*

[upper panel, left bubble]
Sudden......!!

[middle panel, right bubble]
I am...again, this thing...

[middle panel, mini bubbles]
Haaa Haa

[middle panel, left bubble]
The young master... Would he be sad?

[lower panel, upper-right bubble]
Aaaa faster...!!

[lower panel, SFX]
*thud* *thud* *thud*

[lower panel, lower-left bubble]
Finish fast...!!

--- 09.jpg
[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble]
Sure but, I'll finish when you come.

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*pull*

[upper-right panel, upper-left bubble]
Kuu...!!

[upper-right panel, lower-left bubble]
At any rate,

[middle-right panel, right bubble]
your young master isn't enough, isn't it?

[middle-right panel, left bubble]
U...a!!

[upper-left panel, upper-right bubble, upper text]
No matter how much the mind is satisfied,

[upper-left panel, upper-right bubble, lower text]
what the body wants is different.

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*knead* *knead*

[upper-left panel, lower-left bubble]
Hii...!

[lower panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
It is... so...

[lower panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
...hard!!

[lower panel, SFX]
*thrust* *thrust* *thrust*

[lower panel, lower-left bubble]
It's like a barrel enters me...!!

--- 10.jpg
[upper panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
No...almost...!!

[upper panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
there!!

[upper panel, SFX]
*thrust* *thrust* *squeeze*

[upper panel, left bubble]
Fuaaaa!!

[lower panel, upper-right bubble]
Ya...Aaa!?

[lower panel, upper SFX]
*slap* *slap* *slap* *slap*

[lower panel, lower SFX]
*squirt* *squirt*

[lower panel, lower-left bubble]
Comiiiing!!

--- 11.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
......... ......... You're satisfied?

[upper panel, small bubbles]
Haa Haa

[upper panel, left bubble]
With this the debt is...

[second panel, bubble]
Ah...?

[second panel, SFX]
*swoosh*

[third panel, right bubble]
What is this? Rock.

[third panel, left bubble]
If it's about the liquor, no need for thanks.

[lower panel, right bubble]
If not, I need to look for my guns...

[lower panel, middle bubble]
It's terrible!!

[lower panel, left bubble]
There are scars all over!!

--- 12.jpg
[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble]
I need to quickly lick and heal them!!

[upper-right panel, upper-left bubble]
Ah!?

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*slide* *crumple*

[upper-left panel, right bubble]
Just wait a- What...!?

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*suck*

[upper-left panel, left bubble]
Anh!?

[upper-middle panel, SFX]
*suck* *squeeze*

[upper-middle panel, left bubble]
You...what do you think you're doing...!!

[middle panel, right bubble]
You- No way...!!

[middle panel, left bubble]
You drank it all...!?

[lower-right panel, SFX]
*swoosh*

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble]
The captain is abnormal.

[lower-left panel, upper-left bubble]
Taking down the target?

[lower-left panel, lower bubble]
Wait!!

--- 13.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble, upper text]
...No signal. She's enjoying herself,

[upper panel, right bubble, lower text]
so for now stand-by!

[upper panel, left bubble]
Ha!!

[middle-right panel, upper-right bubble]
...My body is burning, and I have enough...

[middle-right panel, lower-left bubble]
Nh...

[middle-right panel, SFX]
*suck* *suck*

[middle-right panel, upper-left bubble]
Since the start it was my fault anyway.

[middle-right panel, lower-left bubble]
And...

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble]
...My subordinates are also watching probably.

[lower-right panel, lower-left bubble]
Seeing their flustered faces should be funny.

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble, upper text]
Very well Rock, I'll do it with you.

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble, lower text]
Come on.

[lower-left panel, SFX]
*kiss*

[lower-left panel, lower-left bubble]
If you don't perform, you'll be shot dead.

--- 14.jpg
[upper panel, right bubble]
...Fuu!!

[upper panel, SFX]
*THRUST*

[upper panel, left bubble]
Kuuuu!!

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble]
...It's a good gun...!!

[lower-right panel, SFX]
*thrust* *thrust* *thrust* *thrust*

[lower-right panel, upper-left bubble, upper text]
Its barrel is...!!

[lower-right panel, upper-left bubble, lower text]
longer than mine...!

[lower-left panel, SFX]
*thud* *thud* *thud*

[lower-left panel, upper-left bubble]
Haa...!!

[lower-left panel, lower-left bubble]
Aaaa❤

--- 15.jpg
[upper-right panel, right bubble]
Nn... Where did you learn...!?

[upper-right panel, left bubble]
This...!!

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*thud* *thud* *thud*

[upper-left panel, right bubble]
Just on... My innermost...!!

[upper-left panel, upper-left bubble]
You're gouging it...!!

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*thrust* *thrust* *thrust*

[lower panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
It's good... ...Almost!!

[lower panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
There...!!

[lower panel, SFX]
*slap* *slap* *shiver*

[lower panel, upper-left bubble]
Aaaaaaaaa!?

--- 16.jpg
[upper-right panel, right bubble]
What are you doing you...!? Aaah big sister...!?

[upper-right panel, left bubble]
...What's the big idea?

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*grab*

[upper-left panel, right bubble]
Why aren't you in your swimsuit on the beach!

[upper-left panel, left bubble]
HAA!?

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*push*

[lower-right panel, right bubble]
Take off your clothes, to your underwear!!

[lower-right panel, left bubble]
...Yaa?!

[lower-right panel, SFX]
*TEAR*

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
This isn't right...

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
no swimsuit, and no underwear too.

[lower-left panel, upper-left bubble]
Hey!? You're drunk or what!?

[lower-left panel, lower bubble]
Hey!?

--- 17.jpg
[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
So young yet so vulgar,

[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble,left text]
I need to punish you.

[upper-right panel, upper-left bubble]
Wai-... Moron...!!

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*insert...*

[upper-right panel, lower bubble]
I'm not ready...!!

[upper-left panel, upper-right bubble]
Hii...!!

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*plow* *plow*

[upper-left panel, lower-left bubble]
Haaaann!!

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
Thanks to Balalaika-san's love juices,

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
I entered smoothly isn't it?

[lower-right panel, upper-left bubble]
Ukuu...!!

[lower-right panel, SFX]
*twitch*

[lower-right panel, lower-left bubble]
Fuu... ...aa!!

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble]
It's so hot today, I am dried up.

[lower-left panel, upper-left bubble]
Kuaaa!!

[lower-left panel, SFX]
*smuck* *smuck*

[lower-left panel, lower-right bubble]
Ahii...!!

[lower-left panel, lower-left bubble]
This time you'll be the one to refresh me.

--- 18.jpg
[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble]
Stop... that!!

[upper-right panel, upper-left bubble]
Aann❤

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*pump* *pump*

[upper-right panel, lower-right bubble]
...Hey.

[upper-right panel, lower-left bubble]
I still didn't finish, you know?

[upper-left panel, upper-right bubble]
Although... Levy,

[upper-left panel, upper-left bubble]
you're letting out a charming voice, you know?

[upper-left panel, lower-right bubble]
I'm... not...!!

[upper-left panel, lower-left bubble]
Yaann!!

[lower panel, upper-right bubble, right text]
Well since you're attacking this child,

[lower panel, upper-right bubble, left text]
please suck on me❤

[lower panel, upper-left bubble]
Haaaa❤

[lower panel, SFX]
*smack* *thud* *thud* *thud*

--- 19.jpg
[upper-right panel, upper-right bubble]
Nn...!

[upper-right panel, SFX]
*suck*

[upper-right panel, lower-left bubble]
Aaa❤

[upper-left panel, upper-right bubble]
Wait... No...!!

[upper-left panel, SFX]
*thud* *thud*

[Upper-left panel, small bubbles]
Haa... Haa

[upper-left panel, lower-left bubble]
Stop......!!

[lower-right panel, upper-right bubble]
Hii...

[lower-right panel, SFX]
*thrust* *thrust* *thrust*

[lower-right panel, lower-right bubble]
Haaaa❤

[lower-left panel, upper-right bubble]
It's good... There...

[lower-left panel, SFX]
*suck* *suck* *suck* *suck*

[lower-left panel, small bubbles]
Haa Haa

[lower-left panel, upper-left bubble]
More... Grope more......❤

[lower-left panel, middle-left bubble]
Aa.........kuu...!!

[lower-left panel, lower-right bubble]
U......aaa❤

--- 20.jpg
[upper panel, upper-right bubble]
Right there...!! Just with foreplay...

[upper panel, SFX]
*smack* *smack* *smack*

[upper panel, middle bubble]
I'm going to come...❤

[middle panel, right bubble]
Why...Is it stronger...!!

[middle panel, SFX]
*squish* *squish* *squish*

[middle panel, left bubble]
Than usual...!?

[lower panel, upper-middle bubble]
Faster... ...Here!!

[lower panel, upper-left bubble]
Almost...!!

[lower panel, SFX]
*thud* *thud* *thud*

[lower panel, lower-left bubble]
There!!

--- 21.jpg
[upper panel, upper-right bubble]
Com...ming!!

[upper panel, SFX]
*slam* *slam* *slam* *thud* *thud*

[upper panel, upper-left bubble]
Commiiiing❤

[lower panel, right bubble]
......... ......... ...What about everybody(Gust)?

[lower panel, middle bubble]
They did enough for today, they returned home.

[lower panel, left bubble]
...Why?

--- 22.jpg
[left bubble]
You...remember nothing!?

[second leftmost bubble]
You dimwit!?

[second rightmost bubble]
Stop... Be quiet...

[SFX]
*groan* *groan*

[upper-left bubble]
My head and waist are going to give out...

[lower-left bubble]
Where is this coming from...

[完]
End

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