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https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10839Page 00 (cover)
[upper right] The Brown Girl's Child-like Book 2 [lit: Kasshoku Musume no Usuusu na Ehon 2, more literal translation would be "something like a picture book."]
[lower left freetext] Groping Around in the Dark [Lit: a 4-kanji phrase meaning exploring with no real clues]
page 01
Flange-san, I have a delivery.
Ah, thank you.
Farewell, then.
Ah, Melty-kun, wait for a minute.
Yes?
[panel 2] ......
Um, what is it?
It's from your grandfather.
From Grandpa?
He seems to be wanting to hold back 20% of his shipmaster taxes again. [NOTE: I had to look this word up, apparently means a "payment made to the government." It doesn't use the normal kanji for a "tax," but it seems the most apt English word anyway]
I know that times are tough, but it's troubling to have this happen every month.
[bottom right] Hmm... [lit: Fumu/Humu]
U-Um!
page 02
W-Would it be possible to pay with this body?
[sfx = Pira [lift/flash]]
Again...?
Well, your grandfather did also ask to have you, his granddaughter, pay for the difference, but...
Is that really okay with you? [NOTE: despite the bubble shape, this is the OLD MAN speaking]
Y-Yes, if you like! [lit: if I am good enough, less stilted in Jap]
It can't be helped... Well then, come over here.
[sfx bubble = Jyuru, Jyuru [Slurp, slurp]]
page 03
[sfx = Jyuru![slurp]]
Good grief... In all honesty, I really don't want to do things like this.
[sfx = Chupu [Sucking sound]]
I've known you since the day you were born.
You are almost like a granddaughter to me.
Uh!
Mmh, [lit: muu] you have gotten pretty good, though, haven't you.
[sfx = rero... [lick...]]
Really!? Thank you so much!
I'll make you feel even better! I'll do my best!
[sfx = Pero [another licking sound]]
page 04
Nnbh!
[panel 2 sfx = Kucha [sticky sound, stroking/spreading pussy]
!
Nnh!
[bottom right sfx = Jyururu [Sluuuuurp], sfx over ass= Kucha kucha [same sticky sound]]
Uh! [lit: fuh/huh]
Kuh! I'm already...about to cum!
[sfx = Jyupu! [Suck!] + Jyuru! [slurp!]]
Nnh...
page 05
[sfx bubble = byuku! [Splat, Splatter, cumming in mouth]]
[tall sfx bubble = byuru! [Slurp!]]
Mmh...
[panel 2 sfx = churu [Sucking], panel 3 sfx = kupu... [soft "plop" sort of sound. essentially dragging her lips tight down his dick as she pulled it out]]
Nnh...
[sfx bubble = Gokun [Swallow]]
page 06
[panel 3 sfx = moni moni [stroking], panel 4 sfx = munyu + monyu [stronger rubbing]]
They've gotten a bit bigger, haven't they? [note: if it isn't obvious, this is about her tits]
D-Do you think so?
You're in your growth spurt. It's a time when you'll grow so fast that I won't be able to recognize you.
[same bubble, below] You're still pretty small though...
[sfx = funi funi [another rubbing sound]]
Flange-san, that's terrible!
Hahaha! Sorry, sorry!
page 07
[sfx = su! [slip], panel 2 sfx = kui! [pull] + purun![heart] [Bounce/boing]]
Hmm
These really are cute every time I see them.
But you're going to say "but they're small," aren't you?
No, no, it was a compliment.
[sfx = funi! [stroke]]
As you get older, watching young saplings blossom and grow is fascinating.
[sfx = Pikun [Shudder], sfx near tits = momi momi [rubbing], upper left bubble = Ah!]
Just like these swelling breasts of yours. [NOTE: technically bad english, but it is a literal reading and seems fine for ordinary conversation.]
page 08
[2x clear bubbles = Haah, other sfx = moni [rub]]
Melty-kun, how old are you now?
Four...! Fourteen...AAH! [aah is bold]
Fourteen is it. You were just a babe taking your first stumbling steps not so long ago...
[sfx = su! [slide]]
Time certainly does fly.
T-That's because Flange-san...ah!...has been an Ojii-chan... [ah is bolded][NOTE: "ojii-chan" literally means grandpa, but can also be used familiarly for any older person you like]
[clear bubbles = haah, sfx at ear = chuu [suuuck/kiiiss], lower sfx = kunya [stroke]]
[continued from previous bubble] Since I was born! Nnh![nnh bolded]
[last panel sfx = toro [drip, strand of saliva]]
Hahaha![hahaha bolded] That's certainly true.
page 09
Then let me show you Ojii-chan's hidden strength.
[sfx = gucha [sticky sound]]
Ah! Wai...! D-Don't! [all bold]
[all sfx = gucha]
If you stir me up that much...aah![all bold]
[attached bubble] Ah![bold]
[3rd panel, large sfx = Bushasha [Squuiiiirt], smaller sfx = sha sha [spray/squirt]]
NOOOO![4x hearts]
[4th panel sfx = bota [drip]]
You were cumming [note: "came?"] pretty hard.
Even though you're only fourteen, you've grown to become so lewd. [NOTE: very minor pun here. Lewd is "Iyarashiku," but the "I" was in katakana. That katakana "I" is the same used for "cumming"]
[clear bubbles = Haah]
Your father must be sad to see it... Or is he actually glad?
Y-You're terrible, Flange-san. It's because Flange-san always does things like this...
[same bubble, left] that I've become this way, right?
[NOTE: in previous bubble, the 3x small sfx kana inside the bubble = Haah]
Oh, is that how it is.
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To take responsibility...please hurry and put it inside.
Oh my. Even though you just came, you already can't hold back any more?
[sfx = toro [drip]]
That's because I was raised by Flange-san to be a slutty girl...
Well then, show me the slutty begging of a slutty girl.
[bottom panel, ALL 3 bubbles, split where you like] Please thrust that hard Ojii-chan cock into my pussy like you did when you took my virginity and make a mess of my womb!
[sfx = Kupa![heart] [Spread!]]
page 11
Hahaha, if you say that much then I suppose there's no choice.
[panel 2 sfx = Nupupu... [Squeeze...]]
Ah!
[sfx = Twitch!]
Nnh......
[Bottom right panel, bubble on right arm] Ooh!
[same bubble, below] It went in smoothly since you're so wet.
[sfx near dick = Gichi [sticky fucking sound], bigger sfx on leg = Zupupupu... [thrusting sound]]
[bubble left of head] So? How do you like this old man's cock?
[sfx in breath bubble = Haah]
Yes, it's incredibly...large...
It is, isn't it. I won't lose out to a younger man yet!
No younger man is a match for me, right?
Ah, but... I've never been with anyone besides Flange-san, so I can't compare.
Oh? Is that how it is?
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It's because everyone...nnh![bold]...treats me like I'm a child...! No one treats me seriously. [small attached bubbles = Ah! + Ahn!]
[sfx = Zupu [thrusting]]
Hahaha, I see. [attached bubble] You're still only fourteen. Maybe that's inevitable.
Flange-san treats me like a kid too...!
[sfx = Buu...! [sort of a vexed sound, fairly immature]]
Sorry, sorry.
But Melty-kun, you've had your first menstruation, right?
Ah, yes.
In that case, I'll let it out inside today.
Eh!?[bold]
[sfx = gui! [lift]]
Eh... Ah, but today is...
page 13
Don't worry. If you get pregnant I will take responsibility and raise the child.
[sfx = Nubu... [slip]]
A superior specimen like myself has a duty to leave behind his many superior genes at least once.
[attached bubble] My goodness, it isn't easy being one who stands at the top. Hahaha!
Ah, no! It's just...um...I'm still only fourteen, and...
You don't need to worry. Even at fourteen you can bear a child.
No, that's not really what I meant...
[sfx = zu! [thrust]]
[2x tiny bubbles= Ah!]
No, I mean...you just can't!
[bottom right panel, sfx = zu! [thrust], 2x tiny bubbles = Ah!]
I am still just a child, so something like pregnancy is...
Hahaha![bold] So you've admitted that you really are a child.
[sfx = Zuchu! [squelchy thrusts]]
A child giving birth to a child, it's interesting isn't it.
[same bubble, left] I'm starting to want to see your child even more. [?]
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Come on[bold], I'm about to cum! You musn't spill a single drop!
[clear bubbles around face = haah]
P-Please, stop! Outside...! Please do it outside!
[sfx = Zubu! [thrusting sounds]]
Having a child might be hard, but it would prove that you are an adult. [lit: "join the ranks of adults" sort of]
[attached] Isn't that what you want?
[tiny bubbles = haah [her], sfx = Nubu! [like zubu above but wetter]]
T-That's not what I meant!
Hmm, I think I'm about to cum.
[sfx = jupu! [another thrusting sound]]
Please, not inside!
[clear tiny bubbles= haah, sfx = jupu]
There! I'm cumming!
NO, NO!
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[wild font] NOOOOO!
[large sfx = SPLURT!]
Ah......Aaah.
[sfx = byubyu + byururu [spurt + spluuuurt]
Hmm...i-it won't stop...!
[upper left] Noooo... You're cumming... You're cumming inside...!
[bottom left] Pull it out...!
[last panel, angular sfx bubble = byupupu! [I'm thinking this is him slowly pulling out his dick while still cumming. No idea how to put that in an English sfx though]]
Ah! Ah...
[clear bubbles = Hah]
page 16
[sfx = nupo! [Plop!]]
Phew... You squeezed it all out of me.
[clear bubbles = Hah, sfx on thigh = Ooze..., sfx near mouth = Ebu [sound of taking something into mouth, maybe just Mmnn in Eng]]
[top left]Good grief, this is why I can't give up on your childish pussy.
[bottom right] Come on, clean it up.
Oooh, Flange. It's been a while.
If it isn't the Fleet Commander.
[small freetext = Nice timing.]
Eh!
[clear bubbles = hah]
Ah...!
[sfx = Ba! [quickly pulling skirt down, Yank?]]
Haha, there's no need to be shy. I have already explained the situation to the Fleet Commander.
Eh...?
page 17
Every month I have been covering the portion of debt that you pay for with your body, but things have been getting tight for me as well.
I want you to pay the Fleet Commander directly.
N-No way...! [alt: can't believe it, lit: expression of surprise/disbelief]
Alright Commander, go ahead.
[attached] She is ready for anything.
[sfx near leg = Gui! [pull!], sfx on head = kaaaaa [Bluuuuush]]
Nooo...
Mmh, [lit: Umu, like Gash Bell] It's been a long time since I've had such a young girl.
[attached] Despite my age, I'm quite excited.
Ooh, quite impressive, Commander! A fine thing indeed!
P-Please, stop...
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Oooh, so this is the pussy of a girl who's barely had her first menstruation.
Ridget can't even compete against this tightness.
Nnh...!
Of course, Commander! Please stir her up to your heart's content.
Mmh [lit: Umu], I won't hold back.
[sfx = Zupupupu [thrusting noises]]
[bottom panel, vertical bubble] You are Melty-kun, yes?
[bottom right] Ye-Yes...nnh![nnh bolded]
[clear gaseous bubbles = Hah, jagged small bubbles = Ah!]
[black sfx = Jupu! [thrusting sounds]]
How old are you?
Four...Fourteen. Ah![bold]
Oooh! I would have though you even younger.
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Your breasts don't stick out at all yet, do they.
[sfx = zupu! [thrusting sound], tiny jagged bubbles = Ah!, clear bubbles = Hah]
F-Flange-san says I'll still grow...
Hahaha, is that so?
Commander, you wouldn't mind if I stepped in myself as well, yes? [Note: had to fiddle with this one a bit. Flange's tone is extremely polite, though familiar. In a literal sense, he's saying he's going to "be a bother," but it's just politeness.]
Ooh, Flange. You can use her mouth.
Nnbh!
[sfx = Zubo! [shove]]
Of course. Excuse me then.
My goodness, this young woman has such bright, vibrant skin.
[attached] This is...just too good!
[sfx = Jupo! [wet plopping kind of sound]]
Nnh!
My goodness, indeed. When it comes to girls, I limit myself to the young ones.
Hmm [commander]
Nnbh!
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More importantly, Flange,
[attached] when did you start a relationship with this girl?
[sfx around legs/hips are a mix of Zubu! [thrusting] + Jyupu! [similar but more wet]]
[small bubble left of her head] Nnbyu!
[small bubble under her chin] Nnbh!
[sfx around dick = Gappo + Guppo [sucking sounds]]
It's already been about two years, I think.
[attached] The girl's grandfather is never able to make his shipmaster payments, so she had little choice.
So that's it.
[sfx = Gupo! [plopping/sucking sound]]
[small near balls] Nh!
[small under thigh] Slurp! [lit: byu, sort of a pseudo-sfx bubble]
Then every month, you have been paying a portion of their shipmaster taxes?
[small over stomach] Nbh!
Yes, exactly. Back then she was still a sleek, flat-chested little girl, but...
[sfx near pussy = Gucho! + Nucho! + Guju! + Gucho! + Nucho! [bunch of squelchy thrusting sounds]]
Even now, she's still basically teh same.
Isn't she!? Wahahaha!
Page 21
Seems like things are tough with your fleet as well, Flange.
Ah!
Apu! [Another pseudo-sfx, shows she's opening and shutting her mouth]
[sfx on head = Pi Pi! [unsure. Instinct says it's his hand keeping her head from moving. Could also reasonably be impact of semen into hair though]]
Puah!
[big sfx = Byu Byu! [Splurt splurt]]
No, no, compared to your troubles, Fleet Commander, mine are nothing at all. [tiny attached = Uu![this is her]]
Meeting a great shipmaster like you was the luckiest thing that ever happened in my life.
Hahaha, you flatter me.
[black sfx = doro... [drip...]]
[small on corner] Puuh!
[small left of cheek] Nnbh!
[sfx at bottom = Buju! + Guju! + Jubu! [slick thrusting sounds]]
Mmh, I think it's about time to cum.
Is cumming inside alright?
Yes, go ahead, go ahead! Feel free.
[attached] I let mine out just a bit earlier, so your seed might not find a home, but...
Hahaha! So that must mean there's no reason to hold back.
Nnh...!
Nnh...!
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NOOOOO!!
[sfx = Gobyu! [SPLURT!]]
Mmmh...! Oh...! [this is the Commander]
Ah...Aaah...
[sfx bubbles = Byupu! + Byupupu [cumming while pulling out?]]
Whew... She really squeezed it all out.
Fleet Commander, you can still use her as long as you like...
[sfx = toro... [ooze]]
No, no, I'm just too old. We can continue tomorrow. We will have plenty of fun.
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Well then, Commander, how about a quick drink next door?
Ooh, sounds good.
Aah, that's right. Melty-kun,
You're still nowhere close to paying back the shortfall in your taxes.
Tomorrow you should bring your friends along as well.
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The next day
Flange-san,
Oh, you're here.
[attached] Please step into the room.
What do you think, Fleet Commander?
?
Mmh, [lit: Umu] all three of them seem quite lively.
You fellows come in as well.
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Bevel...?
Why are you here with these others?
[sfx = Gaba! [yank/strip], sfx lower down = Baain [Boooing!]]
!?
W-What do you think you're doing!?
Aaah...
Melty-chan, I can finally [note: sentence fragment, had to reword]
[black sfx = Muhihi[heart] [creepy sort of laughter], clear bubbles = Hah]
[thought bubble] Sorry Amy, Saaya.
I was always secretly watching what you were doing with Flange-san.
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Stop it, Bevel!
These are Onee-chan's boobs...
[sfx = Chu~ [kissing/sucking sound]]
Bevel-kun has been dreaming of a moment like this forever.
[bottom right] Frustration isn't good for the body.
More, when you consider Bevel-kun's illness, releasing his seed occasionally is actually a good thing.
No way...! But...!
Look Bevel-kun, over here.
Nooo...
[sfx at pussy = Gunyu [spread??], sfx in next panel = Haah... Haah...]
Aaaah...[wild text]
[sfx = Nupupupu [pressing in]]
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[first bit bolded] Uhyo! I've always wanted to touch Saya's big tits!
[sfx = jupo! [wet fucking sound]]
Nooo~~! [lit/alt: Yaa~~!, aborted start of "Yamete"]
Apph! [lit: Apu!]
This is better than I ever imagined! Uooh![bolded]
[sfx = Byugo! [strange one, byu = spurt, go = strong impact]]
Here, Fleet Commander! Kick off the celebration!
Mmh. [lit: Umu]
[sfx = Paku! [spread wide]]
Yaa!
Wai...! I...I'm still...!
D-Don't...!
[huge sfx = Zun! [Thrust]]
Ahyaa!
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[sfx = Pan [slap, bam]]
Commander, thank you for inviting us take part this time in this amazing idea!
No, no, I was simply helping as I could with Flange's proposal.
[sfx near pussy = Jupo! [sticky thrusting]]
[small bubbles near middle] Hyi![lit: garbled "Ii", pronounced like ee of sleep] Uu!
[small bubble in upper left] Nh!
[sfx in upper left = Zugo [thrusting]]
[small bubble below dick in mouth] Buuh!
We are always grateful to have everyone's help.
I simply wished to share this happiness with everyone.
What incredible compassion...! How wonderfully admirable! [lit: I admire that, but extremely formal and respectful, not sarcastic]
Well in any case, this is all thanks to the compassion of Melty-kun and her friends.
[sfx at right = pan pan [slap/bam]]
[over Amy's head] Higu! Uah! [possibly a garbled "iku/I'm cumming" but I think the author would have made a bigger deal of it if that's what it was]
[near Saaya's head] No, sto...!
Stop...!
It sure is! We need to express our gratitude so that these girls can enjoy this as well!
[sfx near saaya's ass = pan pan]
[small bubbles around Melty = Ah!, sfx = Zupu [thrusting sounds]]
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[sfx = Nupu! [wet sucking/thrusting sound]]
Look,
With your friends taking part everyone seems so happy.
[small bubble over Saaya] Ah!
[small bubble left of Amy] Ah!
[sfx near Amy = Jupo! [wet thrusting]]
With the Fleet Commander's arrangements, your deficit in the shipmaster taxes is slowly diminishing.
You have good friends, Melty-kun.
Yes...
[bottom panel, breathy bubbles = Hah]
Oh my, what a sight.
Commander, which hole would you like to try out next?
Well then, perhaps I'll take Amy-kun. [Fleet COmmander speaking]
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There! Inside agai...
[sfx = Zupu! [thrusting]]
Ah! Ah!
!
[sfx bubble = Dopi! [Throb/spasm]]
Uugh...!
Commander...?
Commander...!!
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Afterword
COMMAAAAAANNNDEEEEEEEERRRR!
...And with that, hello everyone.
This is Maruko Rondo, of the 「Drawing Amy〠fraud.
After declaring over and over again, like in my previous work's afterword and my blog, that "I'll draw Amy next," I~n~s~t~e~a~d... this is mainly a Melty book. [w]
I didn't really think it would happen, but if you happen to be someone who was waiting hopefully for it, then I apologize sincerely. [bowing down emoticon]
I-I mean, I just think Melty is so cute... I GUESS IT CAN'T BE HELPED. [last bit all katakana, he's poking fun at himself, not being fully literal]
Anyway, Gargantia's heroine has to be Melty... She shows the most skin too.
Incidentally, despite the contents of this doujin, there will be eight episodes in the whole story.
It will be a scene related to Flange abandoning the Gargantia after the Fleet Commander's death.
The truth untold by the anime! The Commander didn't die of illness, but in the middle of sex! Just like that!
But, because the doctor was Oldham-sensei, [lit: doctors are also called sensei, alt: leave sensei out of it] The "death by sex" diagnosis was buried in the darkness and became "death by illness."
What a dirty adult.
Still, in the anime it really seems like Flange-san was a good man.
Representing him as a dirty adult in my book, I did a bad thing to Flange-san. [w]
Personally, I like situations where girls are getting conned by old men... My bad.
Well then, I'm thinking about drawing an SAO [note: Sword Art Online] book next time.
Silica, probably? ...But after what happened this time, please don't trust me. [w]
Well then, later! [symbol]
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Publishing Info
Author: Maruko Rondo
Publisher: Anchuu Mosaku
Publication Date: August 18, 2013
Printer: (Yu) Neko no Shippo Sama [lit: Cat's Tail-sama]
Contact Info: [those websites]
Without author permission, the republishing, copying or distributing of any or all of this book is prohibited.
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This book is adult-oriented. Those under the age of eighteen should neither view nor purchase it.
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