[X] My Assistant

Completed translation bounty for [Hitsujigumo (Masaki You)] Shoujo to Yajuu (Final Fantasy VII)

Front page ------------------------------------------------------------

レッドXユフィ本
Red XIII X Yuffie book

少女と野獣
The girl and the beast

18禁
18 Age-Restricted

page 4 ----------------------------------------------

真木　羊
Masaki You

18禁!
18 Age-Restricted

page 5 (author notes) ---------------------------

Hello there. They might be many of you (reading this)? Ero doujin beginner, Masaki You here. With what little experience I have and I don't think I have done very well but I am trying very hard (doing what?). Please take care of me.

However, I never thought I would be drawing an ero-doujin of FFVII. Much less about Red XIII X Yuffie (sweating)

(why bestiality?) Even some of my friends said it was weird. Well, since this will be my only work so please forgive me~ (kiss) (bestiality, that is)

There are many different pairing (coupling) for FFVII, aren't there? I haven't read anything on FFVII other than those on homos' and comedy. (lol) If there is any character coupling you would to recommend, please teach me.

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first panel ===========

オイラの子供を産んでくれ！
Please bear my children!

タイトル（笑）
title(lol)

second panel ============

エアリス (left arrow)
Aerith

ティファ (right arrow)
Tifa

third panel =============

な・・・
wha...

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top right panel ===============

バキィ　*sound effect*
*punch*

何考えてんのよ! このバカ犬！
what were you thinking!　You stupid dog!

ぎゃわん
wooooooof

top left panel =================

はぁ　small bubble x3
huff

よく飛んでだな！
He flew really far

middle panel ==================

だいたい あんた２本足対象外なんでしょ？！
By the way, isn't any　girl with two legs in your strike zone?

bottom right ==============

うん 年増は
However, old ladies are ...

bottom middle =============

どかっ　*sound effect*
*whack*

ばきっ *sound effect*
*smack*

ズゴッ *sound effect*
*menace*

bottom left ================

一言多いんだよな
you said a little too much

困ったもんだ
that was a sensitive topic

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top panel ================

何でユフィがいいんだ？
Why did you pick Yuffie?

かわいいじゃん
Because she's cute~

ポッ *sound effect*
*blush*

middle top panel ===============

そうかね・・・
that is true...

かわいくないこたないけど・・・　(outside bubble)
I don't think she's cute though...

どうしたら　いいんだろ　ヴィンセント？
What should I do Vincent?

何故私に聞く？
Why are you asking me?

middle bottom panel ===============

同類を見る目・・・　*sound effect*
*my partner...* //TL note: It actually means "looking at my patner" eyes

やめろ！
Stop that!

bottom =======================

よーし　恋の事なら　このオレ様に　任せろう！
Alright! If it's about love, leave it to me!

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top panel =======================

女にはやっぱプレゼントだな　花とか何とか
If it's women, then it should be gift like flower and such

さっき見てなかった？
Didn't you see it just now?

middle top panel =================

ユフィはマテリア好きだからマテリアあげたら？
Yuffie like Materia, so why don't you give her some?

オイラ今　バハムート改と　オーディーンと　ファイナル　アッタっク　持ってんだけど
I'm carrying it to perform a final attack with Neo Bahamut and Odin

バハムート改はムリだろ　エアリスいる時は・・・ (small note)
Summoning Neo Bahamut is impossible when Aerith is around...

middle bottom panel =================

不許可！
Denied!

クラウドー！
Cloud!

bottom panel ====================

それでも　ダメなら　押し倒せ
Nonetheless, you can still push her down

こら　待て
Hey! Wait a minute!

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top right ======================

もう少し気長にやってみろう
Why don't you see wait a bit and see

middle panel ==================

だいたいさ・・・
Anyway...

bottom panel ================

何であんた　あたしが　いいのよ？
Why did you pick me?

え・・・　なんでって　言われても・・・
eh... Even if you ask me...

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top right panel ======================

はっきり　言いなさいよ
Just say it

top panel ======================

かわいいから・・・
Because you are cute...

middle　top panel ==================

まぁ　当然と言えば　当然だけど
Um... Even if you put like that....

middle bottom panel ================

それとこれとは別！
Those are two different thing!

bottom panel =======================

種が違うのよ
We are of two different species

絶対ムリよ
So it's impossible

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top right panel ===================

ムリ・・・
impossible....

top right panel ===================

そうよ
It is...

middle panel =====================

・・・でも　オイラは　ユフィが好き
...But I love Yuffie

ユフィじゃなきゃ　イヤだよ
It can't be anyone else

bottom panel ==================

・・・・・・　気持ちは嬉しいけどね・・・
...... I'm happy that you feel that way about me...

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top panel ======================

オイラの　言葉に　ウソはないよ
There is no lie in my words

絶対に・・・
I'm sure...

middle panel ==================

ドキッ *sound effect*
*ba- dump*

ヤダ・・・　何かマジで　嬉しいくなって来ちゃうじゃん・・・
No way... I'm feeling really happy all of sudden...

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top panel =======================

ぽふん *sound effect*
*pushes*

middle (top) left panel ====================

あれっ？
huh?

middle bottom panel ===================

ピチャ *sound effect*
*drip*

bottom panel ==============

ひゃ
hya

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マ　アオカこか・・・ (sweat)　私　アオカこ好きね 訳じゃナイよ　(more sweat)　(small note)
Well, Blue or whatever... (sweat) I really love blue... else (sweat)
TL note// I don't know the author is trying to say

top panel =======================

ヘッ　x3
*huff*

傷付けたくないんだ　じっとして・・・
I don't want to hurt you so stay still...

middle panel =====================

そんな・・・
No way...

bottom right panel ================

ヤダ・・・　感じちゃう　ダメって　分かってるのに・・・
No... I'm feeling it... No... Even though it's wrong...

bottom left panel =================

レッド・・・
Red....

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top panel ====================

お願い・・・　こっちも・・・
Please... here as well...

bottom panel ===============

はぁ　x3
*pant*

ぬちゅ
*suck*

くちゅ
*suck*

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top right panel ===================

ピチャ　*sound effect*
*drip*

top (top) left panel ==============

ぐにゅ　*sound effect*
*lick*

top (down) left panel =============

ふぁ！
Fua!

すごく　気持ち良くって・・・
I feels so good...

bottom panel ======================

もう頭の中　真っ白だよ！
My head is going blank!

あぅん！
auhn!

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top panel =========================

ヌプッ　*sound effect*
*penetrate*

middle panel ====================

ズズズ　*sound effect*
*thrust* *thrust* thrust*

すごい！
Amazing!

あっ　あン
Aa ahn

bottom right panel ==================

グチャ
*splosh*

ヌチャ
*splosh*

bottom center panel ==================

あっ
Aa

チャ *sound effect*
*splosh*

グチャ　*sound effect* x2
*splosh* x2

やっ！
hyaa

bottom left panel ====================

も・・・　ダメ・・・
no... no more...

行っちゃ・・・
I'm cumming...

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ああっ
Aah

page 20 -------------------------------

top panel ========================

ごめん　ユフィ・・・
I'm sorry, Yuffie...

オイラもう　ガマン出来なくて・・・
I couldn't stop myself...

middle right panel ================

ちらっ *sound effect*
*stare*

middle right panel ==============

チュ
*kiss*

別に怒ってナイよ・・・
I'm not mad at you....

bottom panel ===================

ねぇこれから　レッドの事　バター犬って　言っていい？
From now on, can I call you "Butter Dog"? //TL note: lol

じょー
*blush*

page 21 (afterword) ------------------------------

There will be no afterword, since it's hard to do so let's talk. (heart)
Well, this book was about Red XIII and Yuffie however, I want to try coupling those two (Vincent and Tifa) together. All this while, I was doing a Vincent X Cloud homo and it became this!! It was because the heat burnt me to this point. My home does not even have a air conditioner (lol) Actually, it's because I only like Vincent (heart) I felt so happy drawing him (more hearts)

My regret this time (Not joking) was because Yuffie was ugly! Red XIII was so uncool that I cried (sweat) As a bonus, I will be drawing a white cheat background (more sweat) It's the same as sticking a tone (sweat) Hirada-chan, Thanks for helping me~ (heart) Sorry for using your stuff, it was very helpful. Thank you to you too, Umezu. Come over again to play~(heart)

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top panel ====================

明るい種族保存計画
Cheerful Species Conservation Plan

葉月あおい
Hatsuki Aoi

休憩中
Resting

ユフィ
Yuffie

レッドXIII
Red XIII~ (heart)

middle panel ==================

ぶにっ
*poke*

あんたお嫁さｎ捜してんだって？
You were looking for a bride?

bottom panel =====================

あたしがなったげる
I'll be your bride

きゃっ *sound effect*
*kya*

え？
eh?

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top right ====================

いや　オイラは種族保存のために同種のメイト捜してるんだけど
No, I am looking for a mate of my species in order to preserve my species

女性に対して大変失礼な発言である
That is a very disrespectful remark toward women

top left ====================

うるるるん　*sound effect*
*tearful eyes*

あ・・・あたしじゃダメ？
Am I not good enough?

middle panel =====================

ぜ・・・　全然OK
It's... It's absolutely OK.

やりっ
Did it (heart)

middle left box ====================

手は口元よ
Put your hand near your lips

ティファにおしえてもらったうるるん攻撃
The "tearful eyes" technique taught by Tifa

bottom panel ==========================

あたしが　レッドXIIIの子供　山ほど産んであげるよ
I will bear you lots of children //TL Note: It actually means "I will bear you as many children as the height a mountain"

フカフカ
*blow* *blow*

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あ・・・　んんっ
ah... ngh...

はよ *sound effect*
*pant*

ぴちゅ
*lick*

ちゅく・・
*lick*

あ！
ah

あはあっ・・・
ah haa

も・・・　もう・・・早く・・・
fa... fa... faster...

ズル・・・ *sound effect*
*lick*

なんか・・・　妙な画面ですまんです(sweat) (small vertical note)
Somehow... Sorry for the weird panel (sweat)

ヌチュ *sound effect*
*lick*

ひゃっ
hya

んっ・・・あ
ngh...ah

あっ
ah

ぐちっ　ズチュ *sound effect*
*splosh* *splosh*

やあっ　ああっ
yaa ahh

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top right panel =======================

あっあぁっ　レッドXIII・・・
ah aah Red XIII...

ぶるっ　*sound effect*
*tremble*

top panel ========================

や・・・あっ・・・
yaa...ahn...

あ・・・あぁん (heart)
ah aahn (heart)

ドクン　(huge watermark)
*thump*

不老不死の　マテリアみつけっから　浮気しちゃダメだよ
I will go look for an Immortality Materia so don't cheat on me while I'm not around

あと　５００年生きなきゃね　(heart)
We still have another 500 years~ (heart)

いったい　どんな子供が生まれるのやら
I wonder what kind of children will we have

その前に異種族で子供できるんか？ (small vertical note)
Will you be able to make children from inter-species copulation?

BGM: FLYING KIDS (Kuza Kuza Icha Icha) , (Don't do it)

*made slight changes to remove typos as well as grammatical errors* (10/10)

This post has been edited by reaper02: Oct 10 2016, 04:21

A fellow TL suggested that this sentence may be better"for p.9, can you comment?

"But right now I'm carrying Neo Bahamut, Odin and Final Attack..."

Seems fine, through this needs an English grammar etc. proofread.

After re-reading and checking the FF7 source material, I agree with the TL's suggestion but may I suggest using this
"But right now I'm carrying the Materia of Neo Bahamut, Odin and Final Attack..."
to make it easier for the readers to follow

Should I make these changes to the script?

Thanks to Red_Piotrus and the translator for pointing this out (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by reaper02: Oct 10 2016, 18:02

I tried proofreading the red x yuffie doujin;
I never proofread before, so I wasn't super consistent in how I edited (at times I substituted, at times I wrote below...)
All changes/ additions should be marked in green.
Feel free to ask about/ disagree with/ discuss/ any of it!

Completed translation bounty for [Hitsujigumo (Masaki You)] Shoujo to Yajuu (Final Fantasy VII)

Front page ------------------------------------------------------------

レッドXユフィ本
Red XIII X Yuffie book

少女と野獣
The girl and the beast

18禁
18 Age-Restricted

page 4 ----------------------------------------------

真木　羊
Masaki You

18禁!
18 Age-Restricted

page 5 (author notes) ---------------------------

Pleased to meet you... I guess that's how I should greet most of you. Ero doujin beginner, Masaki You here. With what little experience I have and I don't think I have done very well but I am trying very hard (not sure at what). Please take care of me.

However, I never thought I would be drawing an ero-doujin of FFVII. Much less about Red XIII X Yuffie (sweating)

"why bestiality?" Even some of my friends said it was weird. Please forgive me, this will be my last (kiss) (my last about bestiality, that is)

I wonder what FFVI ships get the most ero-books... Personally, I never saw anything but Yaoi and comedy works (lol). If there is any ship you'd recommend, please tell me.

page 6 ------------------------------------------------------------------------

first panel ===========

オイラの子供を産んでくれ！
Please bear my children!

タイトル（笑）
title(lol)

second panel ============

エアリス (left arrow)
Aerith

ティファ (right arrow)
Tifa

third panel =============

な・・・
wha...

page 7 -------------------------

top right panel ===============

バキィ　*sound effect*
*punch*

何考えてんのよ! このバカ犬！
what are you thinking!　You stupid dog!

ぎゃわん
wooooooof

top left panel =================

はぁ　small bubble x3
huff

よく飛んでだな！
He flew really far!

middle panel ==================

だいたい あんた２本足は対象外なんでしょ？！
Bipeds shouldn't interest you in the first place!

bottom right ==============

うん 年増は
Well, I don't like old ones...

bottom middle =============

どかっ　*sound effect*
*whack*

ばきっ *sound effect*
*smack*

ズゴッ *sound effect*
*menace*

bottom left ================

一言多いんだよな
you said a little too much

困ったもんだ
that was a sensitive topic

page 8 ------------------------------

top panel ================

何でユフィがいいんだ？
Why did you pickYuffie?

かわいいじゃん
Because she's cute~

ポッ *sound effect*
*blush*

middle top panel ===============

そうかね・・・
I guess...

かわいくないこたないけど・・・　(outside bubble)
Can't say she's ugly...

どうしたら　いいんだろ　ヴィンセント？
What should I do Vincent?

何故私に聞く？
Why are you asking me?

middle bottom panel ===============

同類を見る目・・・　*sound effect*
Aren't-we-comrades look

やめろ！
Stop that!

bottom =======================

よーし　恋の事なら　このオレ様に　任せろう！
Alright! If it's about love, leave it to me!

page 9 ----------------------------------------------------

top panel =======================

女にはやっぱプレゼントだな　花とか何とか
If it's women, then you should give them a gift. Like, flowers or something.

さっき見てなかった？
Weren't you looking before?
middle top panel =================

ユフィはマテリア好きだからマテリアあげたら？
Yuffie likes Materia, so why don't you give her some?

オイラ今　バハムート改と　オーディーンと　ファイナル　アッタっク　持ってんだけど
With me I just have Bahamut, Odin and Final Attack...


バハムート改はムリだろ　エアリスいる時は・・・ (small note)
But he can't have Neo Bahamut! Aerith is still with them...

middle bottom panel =================

不許可！
Denied!

クラウドー！
Cloud!

bottom panel ====================

それでも　ダメなら　押し倒せ
Nonetheless, you can still push her down

こら　待て
Hey! Wait a minute!

page 10 --------------------------------------

top right ======================

もう少し気長にやってみろう
Why don't you take it a bit easier?

middle panel ==================

だいたいさ・・・
Anyway...

bottom panel ================

何であんた　あたしが　いいのよ？
Why did you pick me?

え・・・　なんでって　言われても・・・
eh... Even if you ask me...

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top right panel ======================

はっきり　言いなさいよ
Just say it

top panel ======================

かわいいから・・・
Because you are cute...

middle　top panel ==================

まぁ　当然と言えば　当然だけど
Well, yeah, that's a given...

middle bottom panel ================

それとこれとは別！
But this is totally different!


bottom panel =======================

種が違うのよ
We are of two different species

絶対ムリよ
So it's impossible

page 12 ------------------------------

top right panel ===================

ムリ・・・
impossible....

top right panel ===================

そうよ
It is...

middle panel =====================

・・・でも　オイラは　ユフィが好き
...But I love Yuffie

ユフィじゃなきゃ　イヤだよ
It can't be anyone else

bottom panel ==================

・・・・・・　気持ちは嬉しいけどね・・・
...... I appreciate the sentiment, but...

page 13 --------------------------------------

top panel ======================

オイラの　言葉に　ウソはないよ
There is no lie in my words

絶対に・・・
I'm sure...

middle panel ==================

ドキッ *sound effect*
*ba- dump*

ヤダ・・・　何かマジで　嬉しいくなって来ちゃうじゃん・・・
No way... I'm feeling really happy all of sudden...

page 13 -----------------------------------------

top panel =======================

ぽふん *sound effect*
*pushes*

middle (top) left panel ====================

あれっ？
huh?

middle bottom panel ===================

ピチャ *sound effect*
*drip*

bottom panel ==============

ひゃ
hya
*from now on I'll just put my version below, in green, instead of substituting*

page 15 --------------------------------------

マ　アオカこか・・・ (sweat)　私　アオカこ好きね 訳じゃナイよ　(more sweat)　(small note)
Well, Blue or whatever... (sweat) I really love blue... else (sweat)
TL note// I don't know the author is trying to say
What's that, blue crab? I don't even like them!
//I don't know either, aside from that being アオカニ rather than オアカこ. Might be some cultural reference but I can't find it.

top panel =======================

ヘッ　x3
*huff*

傷付けたくないんだ　じっとして・・・
I don't want to hurt you so stay still...
I won't hurt you, just stay still...

middle panel =====================

そんな・・・
No way...

bottom right panel ================

ヤダ・・・　感じちゃう　ダメって　分かってるのに・・・
No... I'm feeling it... No... Even though it's wrong...
No... It feels good... Even though I know it's wrong...

bottom left panel =================

レッド・・・
Red....

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top panel ====================

お願い・・・　こっちも・・・
Please... here as well...

bottom panel ===============

はぁ　x3
*pant*

ぬちゅ
*suck*

くちゅ
*suck*

page 17 -------------------------------------

top right panel ===================

ピチャ　*sound effect*
*drip*

top (top) left panel ==============

ぐにゅ　*sound effect*
*lick*

top (down) left panel =============

ふぁ！
Fua!

すごく　気持ち良くって・・・
I feels so good...

bottom panel ======================

もう頭の中　真っ白だよ！
My head is going blank!

あぅん！
auhn!

page 18 --------------------------------------

top panel =========================

ヌプッ　*sound effect*
*penetrate*

middle panel ====================

ズズズ　*sound effect*
*thrust* *thrust* thrust*

すごい！
Amazing!

あっ　あン
Aa ahn

bottom right panel ==================

グチャ
*splosh*

ヌチャ
*splosh*

bottom center panel ==================

あっ
Aa

チャ *sound effect*
*splosh*

グチャ　*sound effect* x2
*splosh* x2

やっ！
hyaa

bottom left panel ====================

も・・・　ダメ・・・
no... no more...

行っちゃ・・・
I'm cumming...

page 19 -----------------------------------

ああっ
Aah

page 20 -------------------------------

top panel ========================

ごめん　ユフィ・・・
I'm sorry, Yuffie...

オイラもう　ガマン出来なくて・・・
I couldn't stop myself...

middle right panel ================

ちらっ *sound effect*
*stare*

middle right panel ==============

チュ
*kiss*

別に怒ってナイよ・・・
I'm not mad at you....

bottom panel ===================

ねぇこれから　レッドの事　バター犬って　言っていい？
From now on, can I call you "Butter Dog"? //TL note: lol
From now on, can I call you my butter dog?

じょー
*blush*
*cry*

page 21 (afterword) ------------------------------

There will be no afterword, since it's hard to do so let's talk. (heart)
Since there isn't a page for the afterword, I'll talk a bit here instead (heart)

Well, this book was about Red XIII and Yuffie however, I want to try coupling those two (Vincent and Tifa) together. All this while, I was doing a Vincent X Cloud yaoiand it became this!! It was because the heat burnt me to this point. My home does not even have a air conditioner (lol) Actually, it's because I only like Vincent (heart) I felt so happy drawing him (more hearts)

//returning to substituting

My regret this time (Not joking) was because Yuffie was ugly! Red XIII was so uncool that I cried (sweat) And if that's not enough, the backgrounds were really bare. Draw some scenery, me! (more sweat) This is nothing more than putting on some tones! (sweat) Hirada-chan, Thanks for helping me~ (heart) Sorry I made you work hard, you helped out a lot. Thank you to you too, Umezu. Come hang out again~(heart)

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top panel ====================

明るい種族保存計画
Cheerful Species Conservation Plan

葉月あおい
Hatsuki Aoi

休憩中
Resting

ユフィ
Yuffie

レッドXIII
Red XIII~ (heart)

middle panel ==================

ぶにっ
*poke*

あんたお嫁さん捜してんだって？
You were looking for a bride?

bottom panel =====================

あたしがなったげる
I'll be your bride

きゃっ *sound effect*
*kya*

え？
eh?

page 23 ------------------------------------

top right ====================

いや　オイラは種族保存のために同種のメイト捜してるんだけど
No, I am looking for a mate of my species in order to preserve my species

女性に対して大変失礼な発言である
That is a very disrespectful remark toward women

top left ====================

うるるるん　*sound effect*
*tearful eyes*

あ・・・あたしじゃダメ？
Am I not good enough?

middle panel =====================

ぜ・・・　全然OK
It's... It's absolutely OK.

やりっ
Did it (heart)

middle left box ====================

手は口元よ
Put your hand near your lips

ティファにおしえてもらったうるるん攻撃
The "tearful eyes" technique taught by Tifa

bottom panel ==========================

あたしが　レッドXIIIの子供　山ほど産んであげるよ
I will bear you lots of children //TL Note: It actually means "I will bear you as many children as the height a mountain"
//山ほど just means 'a lot', the same way as 'a motherload' doesn't actually mean 'as much as a lot of mothers amount to'.

フカフカ
*blow* *blow*

page 24 --------------------------------------

あ・・・　んんっ
ah... ngh...

はよ *sound effect*
*pant*

ぴちゅ
*lick*

ちゅく・・
*lick*

あ！
ah

あはあっ・・・
ah haa

も・・・　もう・・・早く・・・
fa... fa... faster...

ズル・・・ *sound effect*
*lick*

なんか・・・　妙な画面ですまんです(sweat) (small vertical note)
Somehow... Sorry for the weird panel (sweat)
Uhm... Sorry for the weird panel (sweat)

ヌチュ *sound effect*
*lick*

ひゃっ
hya

んっ・・・あ
ngh...ah

あっ
ah

ぐちっ　ズチュ *sound effect*
*splosh* *splosh*

やあっ　ああっ
yaa ahh

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top right panel =======================

あっあぁっ　レッドXIII・・・
ah aah Red XIII...

ぶるっ　*sound effect*
*tremble*

top panel ========================

や・・・あっ・・・
yaa...ahn...

あ・・・あぁん (heart)
ah aahn (heart)

ドクン　(huge watermark)
*thump*

不老不死の　マテリアみつけっから　浮気しちゃダメだよ
I will go look for an Immortality Materia so don't cheat on me while I'm not around

あと　５００年生きなきゃね　(heart)
We still have another 500 years~ (heart)

いったい　どんな子供が生まれるのやら
I wonder what kind of children will we have

その前に異種族で子供できるんか？ (small vertical note)
Will you be able to make children from inter-species copulation?
In the first place, will inter-species copulation actually give you any children?

BGM: FLYING KIDS "Kuza Kuza Icha Icha" , "shitekichai na yo"
//song titles

*made slight changes to remove typos as well as grammatical errors* (10/10)

Page 5 ---

Pleased to meet you... I guess that's how I should greet most of you. Ero doujin beginner, Masaki You here. With what little experience I have and I don't think I have done very well but I am trying very hard (not sure doing what). Please take care of me.

Please forgive me, this will be my last <-- this line feels a bit stiff so I'd rather use this
"Since this will be my only work so please forgive me~ (kiss) (for bestiality, that is)"

I wonder which FFVII ship get the most ero-books... Personally, I've never read anything but Yaoi and comedy works (lol). If there is any ship you'd recommend, please tell me. <-- Got me a bit lost here (maybe coz I was not really into aXb stuff), I'd recommend using "pairing" as it's easier to understand

Page 7 ---

Well, I don't like old women... <-- This should be better since "ones" sorta sounds a bit off

Page 9 ---

I only have Bahamut, Odin and Final Attack with me... <-- minor rephrasing, still can't get used to giving materia names like Bahamut

Page 11 ---

But this is totally different! <--
"But this and that are two different things!" should be better

Page 12 ---

...... I appreciate the sentiment, but... <-- replace with
"...... I'm happy that you feel that way about me but..." as it gives a more maiden feel in my opinion

Page 15 ---

I won't hurt you, just stay still... <--
"I don't want to hurt you so stay still..." is more accurate and gives a more forceful feel

Apart from these, the rest of the corrections are really good and well justified. Thank for the proofreading, I will be uploading the revised version after further discussions.

This post has been edited by reaper02: Oct 11 2016, 02:59

I'm done editing https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14578

[mega.nz] https://mega.nz/#!N8N1UKhC!kwvy2b1m...rJ4Rg77QBU4dnUs

Page 5 ---

Pleased to meet you... I guess that's how I should greet most of you. Ero doujin beginner, Masaki You here. With what little experience I have and I don't think I have done very well but I am trying very hard (not sure doing what). Please take care of me.
Ok

Please forgive me, this will be my last <-- this line feels a bit stiff so I'd rather use this
"Since this will be my only work so please forgive me~ (kiss) (for bestiality, that is)"
もう、これ一冊きりだからゆるして、ね　(獣姦は）
Rereading the sentence I'm not that sure I got its meaning, so, yeah, I won't defend my correction.

I wonder which FFVII ship get the most ero-books... Personally, I've never read anything but Yaoi and comedy works (lol). If there is any ship you'd recommend, please tell me. <-- Got me a bit lost here (maybe coz I was not really into aXb stuff), I'd recommend using "pairing" as it's easier to understand
Well, in think ship is a common fandom term for "coupling"/ "pairing", but 'pairing' conveys the meaning too, so yeah, go with what you prefer. (I just found it a bit stiff, if one is used to internet fandom lingo)

Page 7 ---

Well, I don't like old women... <-- This should be better since "ones" sorta sounds a bit off
"you shouldn't like bipeds" ->"I don't like old women" -> Aeris gets angry
It doesn't flow that well, but I get 'ones' can sound a bit off, even if I think it conveys the intended meaning.
So... same meaning, different phrasing:
'Why are you interested in bipeds anyway? You shouldn't like them!'
'Yeah, I don't, if they are old'

Page 9 ---

I only have Bahamut, Odin and Final Attack with me... <-- minor rephrasing, still can't get used to giving materia names like Bahamut
I see I dropped the 'Neo' accidentally, and sure, I didn't have a problem with the version you proposed the post before mine; in correcting your original one I just went with mine instead of copy-pasting yours (I didn't want to pass your version as my correction I guess)

Page 11 ---

But this is totally different! <--
"But this and that are two different things!" should be better
I find some phrasings to work better in Japanese than they do in English, so I prefer to try to change them in something more natural, but your more literal version works too.

Page 12 ---

...... I appreciate the sentiment, but... <-- replace with
"...... I'm happy that you feel that way about me but..." as it gives a more maiden feel in my opinion
The original phrase, I think, is often used to politely reject; yours seems to lean a bit too much on the sincerity side.
Something in between:
'That's very sweet of you, but...'


Page 15 ---

I won't hurt you, just stay still... <--
"I don't want to hurt you so stay still..." is more accurate and gives a more forceful feel
Yeah, sorry, I read that wrong. 'I don't want to' is right.

Finalized translation for [Hitsujigumo (Masaki You)] Shoujo to Yajuu (Final Fantasy VII)

Front page ------------------------------------------------------------

レッドXユフィ本
Red XIII X Yuffie book

少女と野獣
The girl and the beast

18禁
18 Age-Restricted

page 4 ----------------------------------------------

真木　羊
Masaki You

18禁!
18 Age-Restricted

page 5 (author notes) ---------------------------

Pleased to meet you... I guess that's how I should greet most of you. Ero doujin beginner, Masaki You here. With what little experience I have and I don't think I have done very well but I am trying very hard (not sure doing what). Please take care of me.

However, I never thought I would be drawing an ero-doujin of FFVII. Much less about Red XIII X Yuffie (sweating)

(why bestiality?) Even some of my friends said it was weird. Well, since this will be my only work so please forgive me~ (kiss) (for bestiality, that is)

I wonder which FFVII pair get the most ero-books... Personally, I've never read anything but Yaoi and comedy works (lol). If there's any pair you'd recommend, please tell me.

page 6 ------------------------------------------------------------------------

first panel ===========

オイラの子供を産んでくれ！
Please bear my children!

タイトル（笑）
title(lol)

second panel ============

エアリス (left arrow)
Aerith

ティファ (right arrow)
Tifa

third panel =============

な・・・
wha...

page 7 -------------------------

top right panel ===============

バキィ　*sound effect*
*punch*

何考えてんのよ! このバカ犬！
what are you thinking!　You stupid dog!

ぎゃわん
wooooooof

top left panel =================

はぁ　small bubble x3
huff

よく飛んでだな！
He flew really far

middle panel ==================

だいたい あんた２本足対象外なんでしょ？！
Bipeds shouldn't interest you in the first place!

bottom right ==============

うん 年増は
Well, they don't... If they are too old

bottom middle =============

どかっ　*sound effect*
*whack*

ばきっ *sound effect*
*smack*

ズゴッ *sound effect*
*menace*

bottom left ================

一言多いんだよな
you said a little too much

困ったもんだ
that was a sensitive topic

page 8 ------------------------------

top panel ================

何でユフィがいいんだ？
Why Yuffie?

かわいいじゃん
Because she's cute~

ポッ *sound effect*
*blush*

middle top panel ===============

そうかね・・・
I guess...

かわいくないこたないけど・・・　(outside bubble)
Can't say she's not pretty...

どうしたら　いいんだろ　ヴィンセント？
What should I do Vincent?

何故私に聞く？
Why are you asking me?

middle bottom panel ===============

同類を見る目・・・　*sound effect*
*Aren't we comrades*

やめろ！
Stop that!

bottom =======================

よーし　恋の事なら　このオレ様に　任せろう！
Alright! If it's about love, leave it to me!

page 9 ----------------------------------------------------

top panel =======================

女にはやっぱプレゼントだな　花とか何とか
If it's women, then you should give them a gift. Like, flowers or something.

さっき見てなかった？
Weren't you looking before?

middle top panel =================

ユフィはマテリア好きだからマテリアあげたら？
Yuffie likes Materia, so why don't you give her some?

オイラ今　バハムート改と　オーディーンと　ファイナル　アッタっク　持ってんだけど
I only have Neo Bahamut, Odin and Final Attack with me...

バハムート改はムリだろ　エアリスいる時は・・・ (small note)
But he can't have Neo Bahamut! Not when Aerith is still here...

middle bottom panel =================

不許可！
Denied!

クラウドー！
Cloud!

bottom panel ====================

それでも　ダメなら　押し倒せ
Nonetheless, you can still push her down

こら　待て
Hey! Wait a minute!

page 10 --------------------------------------

top right ======================

もう少し気長にやってみろう
Why don't you take it a bit easier?

middle panel ==================

だいたいさ・・・
Anyway...

bottom panel ================

何であんた　あたしが　いいのよ？
Why me?

え・・・　なんでって　言われても・・・
eh... Even if you ask me...

page 11 --------------------------------------

top right panel ======================

はっきり　言いなさいよ
Just say it

top panel ======================

かわいいから・・・
Because you are cute...

middle　top panel ==================

まぁ　当然と言えば　当然だけど
Well, yeah, that's a given...

middle bottom panel ================

それとこれとは別！
But this and that are two different things!

bottom panel =======================

種が違うのよ
We are of two different species

絶対ムリよ
So it's impossible

page 12 ------------------------------

top right panel ===================

ムリ・・・
impossible....

top right panel ===================

そうよ
It is...

middle panel =====================

・・・でも　オイラは　ユフィが好き
...But I love Yuffie

ユフィじゃなきゃ　イヤだよ
It can't be anyone else

bottom panel ==================

・・・・・・　気持ちは嬉しいけどね・・・
...... I appreciate the sentiment, but...

page 13 --------------------------------------

top panel ======================

オイラの　言葉に　ウソはないよ
There is no lie in my words

絶対に・・・
I'm sure...

middle panel ==================

ドキッ *sound effect*
*ba- dump*

ヤダ・・・　何かマジで　嬉しいくなって来ちゃうじゃん・・・
No way... I'm feeling really happy all of sudden...

page 14 -----------------------------------------

top panel =======================

ぽふん *sound effect*
*pushes*

middle (top) left panel ====================

あれっ？
huh?

middle bottom panel ===================

ピチャ *sound effect*
*drip*

bottom panel ==============

ひゃ
hya

page 15 --------------------------------------

マ　アオカこか・・・ (sweat)　私　アオカこ好きね 訳じゃナイよ　(more sweat)　(small note)
What's that, blue crab? I don't even light them! //TL note: Still don't know what it means

top panel =======================

ヘッ　x3
*huff*

傷付けたくないんだ　じっとして・・・
I don't want to hurt you so stay still...

middle panel =====================

そんな・・・
No way...

bottom right panel ================

ヤダ・・・　感じちゃう　ダメって　分かってるのに・・・
No... It feels good... Even though it's wrong...

bottom left panel =================

レッド・・・
Red....

page 16 ------------------------------------

top panel ====================

お願い・・・　こっちも・・・
Please... here as well...

bottom panel ===============

はぁ　x3
*pant*

ぬちゅ
*suck*

くちゅ
*suck*

page 17 -------------------------------------

top right panel ===================

ピチャ　*sound effect*
*drip*

top (top) left panel ==============

ぐにゅ　*sound effect*
*lick*

top (down) left panel =============

ふぁ！
Fua!

すごく　気持ち良くって・・・
I feels so good...

bottom panel ======================

もう頭の中　真っ白だよ！
My head is going blank!

あぅん！
auhn!

page 18 --------------------------------------

top panel =========================

ヌプッ　*sound effect*
*penetrate*

middle panel ====================

ズズズ　*sound effect*
*thrust* *thrust* thrust*

すごい！
Amazing!

あっ　あン
Aa ahn

bottom right panel ==================

グチャ
*splosh*

ヌチャ
*splosh*

bottom center panel ==================

あっ
Aa

チャ *sound effect*
*splosh*

グチャ　*sound effect* x2
*splosh* x2

やっ！
hyaa

bottom left panel ====================

も・・・　ダメ・・・
no... no more...

行っちゃ・・・
I'm cumming...

page 19 -----------------------------------

ああっ
Aah

page 20 -------------------------------

top panel ========================

ごめん　ユフィ・・・
I'm sorry, Yuffie...

オイラもう　ガマン出来なくて・・・
I couldn't stop myself...

middle right panel ================

ちらっ *sound effect*
*stare*

middle right panel ==============

チュ
*kiss*

別に怒ってナイよ・・・
I'm not mad at you....

bottom panel ===================

ねぇこれから　レッドの事　バター犬って　言っていい？
From now on, can I call you my butter dog? //TL note: It means a dog used by women for masturbation (lol)

じょー
*cries*

page 21 (afterword) ------------------------------

Since there isn't a page for the afterword, I'll talk a bit here instead (heart)
Well, this book was about Red XIII and Yuffie however, I want to try coupling those two (Vincent and Tifa) together. All this while, I was doing a Vincent X Cloud Yaoi and it became this!! It was because the heat burnt me to this point. My home does not even have an air conditioner (lol) Actually, it's because I only like Vincent (heart) I felt so happy drawing him (more hearts)

My regret this time (Not joking) was because Yuffie was ugly! Red XIII was so uncool that I cried (sweat) And if that's not enough, the backgrounds were really bare. Draw some scenery, me! (more sweat) This is nothing more than putting on some tones! (sweat) Hirada-chan, Thanks for helping me~ (heart) Sorry I made you work hard, you helped out a lot. Thank you to you too, Umezu. Come hang out again~(heart)

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page 22 -----------------------------------------

top panel ====================

明るい種族保存計画
Cheerful Species Conservation Plan

葉月あおい
Hatsuki Aoi

休憩中
Resting

ユフィ
Yuffie

レッドXIII
Red XIII~ (heart)

middle panel ==================

ぶにっ
*poke*

あんたお嫁さｎ捜してんだって？
You were looking for a bride?

bottom panel =====================

あたしがなったげる
I'll be your bride

きゃっ *sound effect*
*kya*

え？
eh?

page 23 ------------------------------------

top right ====================

いや　オイラは種族保存のために同種のメイト捜してるんだけど
No, I am looking for a mate of my species in order to preserve my species

女性に対して大変失礼な発言である
That is a very disrespectful remark toward women

top left ====================

うるるるん　*sound effect*
*tearful eyes*

あ・・・あたしじゃダメ？
Am I not good enough?

middle panel =====================

ぜ・・・　全然OK
It's... It's absolutely OK.

やりっ
Did it (heart)

middle left box ====================

手は口元よ
Put your hand near your lips

ティファにおしえてもらったうるるん攻撃
The "tearful eyes" technique taught by Tifa

bottom panel ==========================

あたしが　レッドXIIIの子供　山ほど産んであげるよ
I will bear you lots of children

フカフカ
*blow* *blow*

page 24 --------------------------------------

あ・・・　んんっ
ah... ngh...

はよ *sound effect*
*pant*

ぴちゅ
*lick*

ちゅく・・
*lick*

あ！
ah

あはあっ・・・
ah haa

も・・・　もう・・・早く・・・
fa... fa... faster...

ズル・・・ *sound effect*
*lick*

なんか・・・　妙な画面ですまんです(sweat) (small vertical note)
Uhm... Sorry for the weird panel (sweat)

ヌチュ *sound effect*
*lick*

ひゃっ
hya

んっ・・・あ
ngh...ah

あっ
ah

ぐちっ　ズチュ *sound effect*
*splosh* *splosh*

やあっ　ああっ
yaa ahh

page 25 --------------------------------------

top right panel =======================

あっあぁっ　レッドXIII・・・
ah aah Red XIII...

ぶるっ　*sound effect*
*tremble*

top panel ========================

や・・・あっ・・・
yaa...ahn...

あ・・・あぁん (heart)
ah aahn (heart)

ドクン　(huge watermark)
*thump*

不老不死の　マテリアみつけっから　浮気しちゃダメだよ
I will go look for an Immortality Materia so don't cheat on me while I'm not around

あと　５００年生きなきゃね　(heart)
We still have another 500 years~ (heart)

いったい　どんな子供が生まれるのやら
I wonder what kind of children will we have

その前に異種族で子供できるんか？ (small vertical note)
In the first place, will inter-species copulation actually give you any children?

BGM: FLYING KIDS "Kuza Kuza Icha Icha" , "Shitekichai Na Yo"

Thanks to Red_Piotrus, pundeiu and the mysterious translator whose name I still do not know for helping me with the translation
@pundeiu, stuck to the old one for some the lines

This post has been edited by reaper02: Oct 12 2016, 04:10

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New script for proofreading - another Saki project here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif). Yuri so I expect lesher to work on this soon. TL is KirbyDances :
Hey,

Sorry for not answering, but I've had a lot of troubles with my Internet connection. [snip]
Anyway, here's the translation: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/autu3ie4w6r5hjd/
I haven't translated SFXs (except those that were inside bubbles and those that I thought were important), so I hope it wasn't in the bounty description.
Again, sorry for the long wait, but it was completely independent from my will.

See you,
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working on this one.

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Source: (C82) [STUDIO JAM (Izumi Kyouta)] Himegoto Connect (Kokoro Connect)
https://e-hentai.org/g/645659/df2a8cc4e7/

Info:

Text direction : Left <--- Right
// -> Contiguous lines in the same bubble/box, next to each other.
|| -> Lines in contiguous bubbles/boxes, but are separated by a space.
{ } -> Explanation/Commentary from me (It's just for explaining, shouldn't be on the release)

Names:

ふうせんかずら Fuuzen Kazura -> Balloon Vine (LN/Manga/Anime) / Heartseed (Anime, other subgroups)
後藤 Gotou

稲葉 Inaba
唯 Yui
永瀬 伊織 Nagase Iori
太一 Taichi
青木 Aoki

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Page 01 (01_Scan000.jpg)

ヒメゴトコネクト
Himegoto Connect {Secret Connect}

スワップランダム
Swap random

成年向け
Adult only
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皆さん // 揃っていますね
I see you're all here.

おまえ // ふうせん // かずら // …か？
Are you... Balloon Vine?

今日は民さんに // 特別なサビス // を用意しました
I've prepared a special service for everyone.

いつも楽しませて // くれるので // その褒美 // といったところです
Consider this a reward for always entertaining me.

そう…単純に // 性的欲望を // 開放させて // あげますよ
So, cutting to the chase, your sexual desires will be unleashed.

ほら // 伊織君 // なんか // もう…
Look, Iori-kun is already...

えっ!
Eh!

えっ！ // そんな…
Eh! It can't be...

あん… // ホントに // 体が…感じて // 熱い…んっ
Ahn... My body's feeling really hot...

くふんっ // …お願い // なんとか // …して
Huff... Please... do something...

くちっ x2
Squish

えっ… // おいそんな 欲望開放なんて…
Eeh… Unleashing those desires...

なにがサービスだよ // こんなとこで // 開放できるかよ!
Service my ass! Like we could release those desires here!

…いや…待て // 確かにこの所の // 異常現象でストレス // は限界に来ている…
...No, wait. It's true that all those strange situations have put plenty of stress on us...

そう // 感じないか // ?
Don't you think?

そのストレスを // 開放する意味では // 確かにいいご褒美 // なのかも知れん
And in order to release that stress, this could be a good reward.

…なるほど… // っておい！ // もういきなり // かよ！
...I see- Hey, wait! Don't go straight at it!
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そんな… // でも私も // 確かに感じて // きた…ような
It can't be... but I think... I also felt that.

唯ちゃ // どう // しようか..
Yui-chan, what will you do?

もう… // こうなったら // やるしかないで // しょう…バカ
Gosh... we have no choice now... idiot.

わっ... // 唯…ちょ // そんないきなり
Wha... Yui... wait, so suddenly.

ん… // ふんっ // はふっ…
Nn... Fuun~ Hmph~...

わっ… // 唯の囗使い… // いいっ
Wah… Yui, your technique is so... good.

お…おい // でも // 二人同時 // なんて // おい…おあっ
H... Hey, wait, you can't do it at the same time... hey!

うおっ // いいっ
Whoa, it's great!
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んふ
Nfu.

んつ…
Nn...

ヒク
Twitch

うつ… // 永瀬おあっ // そこは…うつ
Uuh... Nagase, whoa... There... Uuh...

おつ！
Ooh!

ヒクッ
Twitch

うつ // くうつ
Uuh! // Kuhh!

んっ // はふつ太一の // すごい熱いっ // …んっ
Nn~ // Hmph, Taichi, your thing is so hot... Nn~

んふっ
Nfh~~

ピッ
Peel

んっ
Nn~

んっ // ふつ
Nn // Fuu

んっ
Nn

おっ // くぅつ
Ooh, ugh.

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んっ…唯 // くうつ // そこ…いい
Nn… Yui, ugh, that's… amazing.

んっ
Nn~

んふっ
Nfh~

はふん
Hmph~

んふん // はふつ // んん…つ
Nfun~ Hmph~ Nn... Uh.

はふ
Hmph

あんっ // はあんっ
Ahn~ Haan~

はふん
Hmph

んっ
Nn

くうつ // 唯の舌が // 絡んで…いいっ
Kuh, it feels so good when your tongue entangles me...

んふっ
Nfh~

くう…
Kuh...

うおっ // なめ回されて // しびれてくるつ // …くうつ
Uwah, when you lick me there I get numb...
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言って // おきますが // これはただの // 欲望の開放
I'll have to remind you that this is nothing more than unleashing your desires.

皆さん // こうなることを // 欲していたの // ですよ
Everyone wished to do this on your own accord.

じやあ // お願い // ニ人とも…
Well, then I ask you two...

だからこの機会に // 思い切り // ぶちまけて // 下さい
To seize this change and ravage us without restrain.

ニ人の // 大っきいのを // 私たちの // 膣に…
Both of you, put your big things...

思いっきり // 深く // 挿入して…
deep inside our pussies...

ヒクッ
Twitch

ヒクッ
Twitch

いーっぱい // 膣で // ぶちまけて
Fill us with all you got~!
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じやあ // お願い
So, please...

うん
Yes.

すごい // こんなに // 張り詰めて
Amazing, it stretches that much...

ぴと
Stuck

くぷ
Suck

大きくて // 挿れるの // …あん // きつい…っ
It's difficult to put it in because... ah... it's so big...

あん // すごい
Ahn, so good!

めぷ
Slimy

あ
Ah.

あん
Aan.

太一のが // 挿って // あん… // くるうつ…んっ
Taichi's dick is going... Ahn... Inside~
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んはっ♥ // ああんっ // ひゃうんっ
Nha~♥ Aahn~ Hyan~

あふんっ // くふんっ // はあ…あんっ
Huff~ Hmm~ Haa... Aanh~

はふん // あんっ
Hmph! Anh~

ひはん
Hyan !

ああつ
Aah~

レロ
Lick

くりつ
Rub

ひあっ // ふかいっ
Hya~ So deep!

くうあっ // そこ… // なめられると // イク…ッ
Kuhah... If you lick me there... I'll cum~

あひ
Ahi~

あつ
Ah~

はん
Haan!
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んっ // くんっ
Nn~ Ugh~

んツ
Nh~

ひはんっ // すごいっ // 奥の子宮まで // 来てるっ！
Hyan~ Amazing~ It's hitting deep inside my womb!

キュウッ
Squeeze

くっしまるっ
Ugh, so tight!

キュッ
Squeeze

ん"あ"ッ♥ // 芯までッ // くるうッ♥
Nn! Aah~ ♥ It's filling me up~ ♥

きゅぶ {cropped from page, but it should be it}
Squish

んあん // ああん♥ // はあんッ
Naan! Aahn ♥ Haan~

ひあん // あんッ♥ // いいのッ
Hyan~ Aahn~ ♥ So good!

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ううつ！ // 永瀬ツ // ィク…よっ
Uuh! Nagase, I'm... cumming!

あっ
Ah~

んあ
Nah!

ひはっ
Hya~

ああっ // 太一つ // 膣で…あん // !
Aah~ Taichi~ Inside...!

くうん // いぱいくるッ // あんッ♥
Kuh... So much is coming! Ahn~ ♥

レロ
Lick

コプ
Flow

くううっ // すごいっ!! // イクうッ
Kuuu~ Amazing!! I'm cumming~!

あひんッ // あふれるう // ッ♥
Ahiin~ It's overflowing~! ♥

レロ
Lick

コプ
Flow

トプ
Drip

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あん…
Ahn…

くうつ // 唯の膣に // 吸い込まれるッ
Kuuh~ Yui's pussy is squeezing me~

青木の熱いのが // いっぱい // 流れてくるうつ
Aoki's hot semen is flowing inside me!

さて…次は // 私だ…太一 // 次はもっと開放 // してもらうぞ
Well then, I'm next... You'll have to unleash some of it on me too, Taichi.

えつ… // 稲葉…
Ehm... Inaba...

じやあ // 次は青木 // で…
Then I'll use Aoki now...

う…唯も // 太一がいいな
Uh... I also want to do it with Taichi...

私も溜まってて // …太一と解放 // しないとな
I'm pent up too... So I'll have to use Taichi...

んっ…くっ // 思ったより // 大きいな…
Nn... Ugh... It's bigger than I thought...
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んっ…く // 青木のも // 太くてつ // いいっ！
Nn~ Ugh... Aoki's also thick and hard!

んっあくっ
Nn~ Ack~

レロ
Lick

チロ
Slurp

チロ
Slurp

おあっ！！
Whoa~!!

ひッ
Hyaa~

あひんっ
Ahiin~

ふかいのっ♥
So deep~ ♥

あっ
Ah~

おくにっ♥
Inside~ ♥

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んっ
Nn~

くふう♥
Huff ♥

ああん // 奥までッ // きてるうッ
Aahn! It's reaching the bottom!

ひはあん // ああッ！ // イクウッ♥
Hyaan! Aah! I'm cumming! ♥

ひああ♥
Hyaa ♥

くおっ // しまるッ
Kuoh~ It's so tight!

くあん♥ // ああんッ // もっとッ♥
Uahn! ♥ Aahn! More~! ♥

ひあん // 唯のなかに // きてるうッ // くうん♥
Aahn! It's coming inside Yui! Uuh ♥

ひッ
Hii~

いいッ
Good!

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はくうッ // すご...い♥
Huff~ Ama... zing! ♥

深くまでッ//
Deep inside!

あくうッ//
Aah~!

あふれるッ♥
It's spilling~ ♥

あ… // あん♥
Ah… Ahn ♥

はあ // はあ…
Haa! Haa...

ううッ // イクッ !!
Uuh~ I'm cumming!!

くうんッ♥ // 入ってえ // くるうッ♥
Ugh~ ♥ It's going inside~♥

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ああ…あ // はああん♥ // いっぱい // あふれるう
Aah... Ah! Haaan ♥ So much is overflowing!

あはあん // ああ…ん♥ // すごい… // いい…のっ♥
Ahaan~ Aah... Nn ♥ It's so... good ♥

ところでだが後藤 // お前いつから正気に // 戻ってたんだ？
By the way, Gotou, since when did you regain your consciousness?

なんのことだ？ // 俺はどうしてココに // いるんだ？
What are you talking about? Why am I here?

とぼけるな // そんなトコ // おったてて // 私たちの乱交 // 眺めてたんだろ！
You were playing dumb while watching our orgy!

発行: STUDIOJAM
Group: STUDIOJAM

発行日: 2012/8/12
Date: 2012/8/12

印刷所: サングループ様
Printing: Sun Group-sama

すまん...て // お前たちこそ // 何やってんだよ!
I'm sorr... Hey, what the hell are you guys doing!

Yo Red you remember that Gate doujin I translated a couple months back? The sequel? Is anyone gonna do it? I'd throw in 1 or 2 million credits into the bounty just to see it completed but I'm not sure whether the guy is even active anymore.

This post has been edited by hentaiboya: Oct 25 2016, 19:30

Yo Red you remember that Gate doujin I translated a couple months back? The sequel? Is anyone gonna do it? I'd throw in 1 or 2 million credits into the bounty just to see it completed but I'm not sure whether the guy is even active anymore.

Why don't you translate it yourself?

Why don't you translate it yourself?

Nonono I translated it for the bounty already. The editing bounty has been reserved for some dude and I was wondering if he's even going to do it.

Nonono I translated it for the bounty already. The editing bounty has been reserved for some dude and I was wondering if he's even going to do it.

I see... なるほど

I accepted the editing bounty for Himegoto Connect (Kokoro Connect).

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=15249

Yo Red you remember that Gate doujin I translated a couple months back? The sequel? Is anyone gonna do it? I'd throw in 1 or 2 million credits into the bounty just to see it completed but I'm not sure whether the guy is even active anymore.

The editor for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=15081 is still active here (Last Active 25th October 2016 - 05:02). I have sent him a PM. Will see if he replies. No reply for a week - I'll release it to new people.

Given EHCOVE has a backlog of editing scripts, we are being much more lenient on editors taking more then two weeks.

I have one project that has been in editing since January. The editor working on it is a very busy perfectionist... but I hope we will get it finished by XMAS. Seriously I don't know if I should laugh or cry for that project, lol.

Seriously I don't know if I should laugh or cry for that project, lol.

You should do both, laugh in tears (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)