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Jun 28 2016, 03:51
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backupeagle
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Ah, thanks (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Anything else I need to do now (sending files, adding info to the claim etc) or just sit back and wait for the typesetter to do their thing? |
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Jul 3 2016, 18:19
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Red of EHCOVE
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QUOTE(Shinko.Aelith @ Jun 25 2016, 09:38) 
It doesn't mean the gallery was removed, it's just on the sad panda side. But you have a point, new bounty hunter probably don't know about it, maybe using the ex link instead of the g.e- would be a good idea.
Bounty modified to point to ex. QUOTE(backupeagle @ Jun 27 2016, 20:51) Ah, thanks (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Anything else I need to do now (sending files, adding info to the claim etc) or just sit back and wait for the typesetter to do their thing? Nope, you are good. Go ahead and claim the bounty if you haven't done so yet. If you have time & will do consider another of our bounties! New script for proofreading - another Saki project here (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif). Yuri so I expect lesher to work on this soon. TL is KirbyDances : QUOTE QUOTE Hey, Sorry for not answering, but I've had a lot of troubles with my Internet connection. [snip] Anyway, here's the translation: [ www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/autu3ie4w6r5hjd/I haven't translated SFXs (except those that were inside bubbles and those that I thought were important), so I hope it wasn't in the bounty description. Again, sorry for the long wait, but it was completely independent from my will. See you, KirbyDances |
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Jul 4 2016, 16:59
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backupeagle
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jul 3 2016, 18:19) Bounty modified to point to ex. Nope, you are good. Go ahead and claim the bounty if you haven't done so yet. If you have time & will do consider another of our bounties! Claimed the bounty a while back, when I submitted the translation - it's coming up on a fortnight of waiting now, which seems a little long, so that's why I asked. I guess it'll just be dealt with in due time? And yup, I'd like to do another bounty at some point; not quite sure when that'll be though, since I've got a project I've got to start up for university over the next couple of days. Will see how things go. Looking forward to getting around to it eventually though! |
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Jul 6 2016, 07:00
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Murako
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QUOTE(Vilis @ Jun 13 2016, 23:44)
PR note: All corrections are marked in red. Text that needs to be deleted is also marked with a strikethrough.
Hi, I'm the guy who reserved the (C88) [Angyadow (Shikei)] CRACK (Sword Art Online) bounty. Cleaning of the raws, text removal, and text insertion has been completed. Link to prev QC postHere's v.1.0 of the job. [ www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/1a4tf18u...e/Crack+v1.0.7zPlease let me know if any further changes are needed. I'd appreciate it if someone sent me a PM, as I don't really used the forums. Regards, Mur This post has been edited by Murako: Jul 6 2016, 07:03 |
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Jul 11 2016, 05:44
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warw90
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Going to start working on Kyuusei Maryoku Chuudoku editing bounty.
I have completed everything and ran into a couple minor issues
pg 11 missign sfx bottom black bubble
pg 17 bottom right bubble
pg 19 I wasn't sure what to do with ○○○-schooler, Is she a pre-schooler or a mid-schooler I'm not sure?
pg 20 And the only Edit I made that I think is right is (an into a) (Right... it's a pussy now♡ My ass turned into an(an = a) pussy
pg 20 Two Big sfx bubbles and one small on the bottom
The rest was very well translated!
This post has been edited by warw90: Jul 13 2016, 07:39
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Jul 13 2016, 15:42
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backupeagle
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Alright, just had a look over the bits you've mentioned. I think I've managed to fill in all the gaps - just respond back if I've missed anything, or if you need me to make anything clearer. QUOTE(warw90 @ Jul 11 2016, 05:44)
pg 11 missign sfx bottom black bubble
キュン♥ *Twitch* QUOTE(warw90 @ Jul 11 2016, 05:44)
pg 17 bottom right bubble
ヒュー♥ Hyuu♥ QUOTE(warw90 @ Jul 11 2016, 05:44)
pg 19 I wasn't sure what to do with ○○○-schooler, Is she a pre-schooler or a mid-schooler I'm not sure?
As far as the original series goes she's a primary-schooler - or 'elementary-schooler', depending on whether you prefer UK or US English. I've gone with UK at an earlier point, in the translation, so 'primary' would be more consistent, but I think 'elementary' is more common in doujins so I'd probably lean towards that. That said, it was censored in the original Japanese - hence the ○○○. I think it just works fine as ○○○-schooler? I don't see any need for adding info that wasn't in the original text, since it was purposely vague there as well. QUOTE(warw90 @ Jul 11 2016, 05:44)
pg 20 And the only Edit I made that I think is right is (an into a) (Right... it's a pussy now♡ My ass turned into an(an = a) pussy
Oops, you're right. Must have made a typo when I wrote 'an' - it's supposed to be 'a', yes. My bad. QUOTE(warw90 @ Jul 11 2016, 05:44)
pg 20 Two Big sfx bubbles and one small on the bottom
Sorry for missing the bubbles - I think I was tired when I did that page. They don't really stand out much from the background, so I guess I sleepily overlooked them. Here they are: ひぐぅ♥ Ngh♥ はあん♥ Ahn♥ ハッ Haa QUOTE(warw90 @ Jul 11 2016, 05:44)
The rest was very well translated!
Thanks - glad to hear I didn't screw up my first translation here! Sorry again about the mistakes though~ |
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Jul 17 2016, 13:23
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danbo
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here is script
start from page5
* means sentence in square
page4 is a introduction about author, so i do not translate it.if u want, i will do later
page5
*yoko's "yo" means sun! hi! i am yoko!
*today,i am here to observe Ignorant people in zheeha village
*but..it seems u am hunted down
*Village headman seems to offer me something
headman:well wait
headman;we can take peaceful way for this
page6
if u make us all satisfied,we will bring u home unhurted
huh!
*i get food supply in this way or hunting,it always easy for me
yoko:okay?
headman:hehe you are good girl
*i am going to go all out this time
*this is only favored recreation in underground..
page7
headman:oh.. that is good
headman;if u makes us cum,i will give you buta-mogura steak!
yoko:that is nice! give me a large one!
*these guys..
*smells nasty as hell
*i wonder they are eating buta-mogura everyday?
headman;wow great paizuri
*its easy for me to make your tiny and stinking dick
page8
A:ohhh! im cumming!
*here he cums.smells are same as buta-mogura
*its not over.i will make you cum more
yoko:ah! ahhha ahhh
precious semen.i love it
B:uhh..again..
*precious stuff.i love semen
page9
headman:ghuu... you little bitch..i have to punish you
*no.noo..nasty dick,stinky dick,,
*my dear dick..
*ahhh
*it comes! stinky dick come inside my pussyyyy
page10
*ah! good guys in zheha village are so good..
B:move it ! bitch! you cunt buta-mogura!
*ooohhhhh
*hugghhhh
B:oh oh that is good
yoko: ah h
yoko n..
*stinky dicks brutally comes deep inside me..
C:her pussy goes tight
*im cumming...
page11
*this is the best sex i have ever had!
*im cumming i love these stinky dicks
headman;im cumming
yes!
please! please cum inside me! cum inside my stinky buta-mogura pussy!
buhhhhhhh!
page12
eekkkkkkkkkkkkk
headman:muhhh..it is too good not to relase such good slut
headman;i will fuck u with my bigbang dick forever!
kamina:wow! this is the drill i have been seeking for!
kamina:ha!
page13
yoko:here he is~
yoko:it seems easy to snipe from here..
yoko:well then,,
yoko:you are the first victim of this new sniper rifle
yoko:huhu...good bye gun-men
yoko:get some..
monkey:cha!
page14
yoko:uh...
yoko:nn..?
apeA:titties
apeB:sounds good
apeC:titties
apeD:ukyyyyyyyyy
yoko:what the hell!!
page15
yoko:stop..
yoko:stop it
yoko:...?
yoko:nnnnh!nn!
yoko:no..noo!!
page16
yoko:i dont..i dont obey such beasts..
yoko:huh,,ah..
yoko;n..
yoko:no..please..
yoko:please..
apeA:stop talking bitch.eat it
apeB:its not fair! do the same thing to me!
page17
apeC:now its good to
apeC:i cant wait anymore! she is so nasty and pussy seems prepared!
yoko:no! no! please! please dont !
apeC:ukyyyy catch her.dont let her resist!
yoko;ahh...it is inside me...
page18
yoko:ahh
yoko:hyahhh!
yoko:nn.nnnnnn
yoko:no! please do not cum inside!
apeC: now i am cumming..
page19
yoko:hhh..ah...!
apeD:what is this??
apeD:it is cool!
apeD:how is this working?
flash
booom
the end
page20
yoko:.....
title:my first drill experience
yoko;what..
yoko;what are you doing...
page21
yoko:eh..
yoko;wwwwhat is this!!
yoko;ah
yoko;but it feels good..
page22
guren:hey! simon! stop running!
guren:you must pay for this!
simon:no! i do not want to!
kamina:aw..where is yoko?
page23
yoko:huh..huh..
yoko:i shold refuse it...
page24
A:so..we do not have enough pages.we are going to finish it
yoko:yea
yoko:if u say so.can you makes me pleasure?
yoko:it is not enough for me so far.ah other guys?
yoko:they have already burned out.they dont have guts.
page25
A:ahy..
yoko:hm..you have big one..
yoko;this will be good for me
page26
yoko:now then.you cant pass out
yoko:ofcourse.untill i satisfy
yoko:nahh
yoko:great..
yoko:n..a..
yoko:it is harder than i think..i cant stop cumming...
page27
afterword
tengenkapp grenragan
what a nasty breasts,she reigns every sunday morning...
by the way marina inoue(voice actress) is working so hard from last year
she have never shown any progress in her skill though she had worked harder,and this is why i like her
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Jul 28 2016, 07:32
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Whlezes
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Accepted and finished the bounty for the Teitoku to Musashi Event by Karateka Value. https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14258Here it is, submitted for proofreading. QUOTE PAGE 3
私
My name is Musashi. One of the battleships representing Japan.
Since I was assigned to this base I am performing as the flag ship.
提
The Admiral may look young but...
あ
He is the grand Admiral that saved me from that great peril at the dark Ironbottom Sound.
提
I have nothing but feelings of gratitude and respect for him...
だが
But... that aside
提
When I think about the Admiral...
この
What are these feelings...
PAGE 4
てっ
A-Admiral...
みんあ
All of the rest are on expedition...
あの
This... well... we are alone aren't we.
む
Mu-Musashi...?
てっ
A-Admiral...
皆に
They're all going to think bad of me but...
なっ
Wh-what...?
もう
I can't resist it anymore...
ん
Ngh..
提
Admiral... I... Love you...
私
My dear Admiral-sama
PAGE 5
む
Mu-Musashi...
こ
Th-this is the Admiral's great cannon that everyone wishes to the point of no stopping...
こ
Would you look at this.
な
What a great thing you have here.
む
Mu-Musashi...
I-I'm embarrased.
こ
With this you made the other ship girls cry didn't you.
戦艦
Battleship Musashi, ready to launch.
どうだ
How is it, Admiral?
ハン
I'm sandwiching your penis like a Hamburger.
しかも
And an extra large at that.
PAGE 6
ああっ
Ahh, Musashi.
さきっぽ
The tip... don't do that..
提督
The Admiral's is getting bigger.
私
I'm kinda starting to feeel it.
ふふ
Heh heh, you don't have to hold it you know?
あっ
Ah
Ah
武
Musashi
Musashi
ああ
Aah, the Admiral's penis.
だめ
You can't Musashi, not there
おいし
It's delicious...
PAGE 7
武蔵
Musashi's breasts...
気持ち
Did they feel good?
きっ
They felt really good, Musashi
でっ
Bu-but! A-any more and I'll come
そうか
I see, I see
いいぞ
It's alright, come.
あっ
Ah- don't !
武蔵
You can come with all your heart in between Musashi's breasts
はわわ
Ahhh I'm coming
PAGE 8
ああっ
Ahh, he's coming, he's coming
提督
I can feel the Admiral's penis throbbing and his hot milk coming in my breasts.
ああっ
Ahh
おっ
Don't... press your breasts.
ふふ
Heh heh, you came a lot
私
This much milk in my dark brown breasts...
こ
Look, they have become this white
PAGE 9
ああ
Aah.. Musashi, I'm sorry... I'm sorry
何
What are you apologizing for? This is something I did by myself so don't mind it.
ふふ
Heh heh, the Admiral is really cute when he is a Yamato soldier.
まだ
He's still big..
そう
I see... the Admiral is still not satisfied right?
私
I can still go... I want to thoroughly taste that main cannon.
今度
This time here... Can I ask that...?
PAGE 10
んん
Nnh... Ha, ha
さっ
It's- It's even... bi-bigger than before
は
Haa...
あ
ahii
きっ
E-even the glans is this big... Wh-what would happen if it went all inside...
ぜっ
I-I've put it all in...
凄
Such a fearful big cannon...
だが
But still, this is still not enough to sink... this Musashi
PAGE 11
は
Ha.. ha.. good, Admiral
こっ
Even though you are a child...
この
You are the only one that can keep up with this Yamato class up to this point
だっ
I-I can't Musashi! I'm... I'm gonna come again!
は
Ha.. Ha.. It's ok... It's ok to come...
その
Just like that... Come just like that...
PAGE 12
いっ
N-No! First I'm going to
先
First I'm going to make Musashi come!
あ
Ah!
てっ
A-Admiral?!
提
Admiral
そっ
Th-that is...
おしり
My ass
やああ
No, Aaaahhhhh
PAGE 13
ッ
Ngh
ハ
Ha..
ハ
Ha..
どっ
H-How is it? Musashi?
お
Does your ass feel good?
くっ
Kuh... Still... This is still not enough
この
To sink this Musashi!
なら
Then! Take!
えい
Take!
うおおお
Uohhhh
いく
I'm coming
いく
I'm coming
いく
I'm coming
PAGE 14
っっ
Hngh
あ
Ahh
ああ
Aahhh
この
To make this Musashi... come from her ass...
しかも
And it's even still pouring in...
その
That concentrated power, such a splendid thing.
提
Until I empty all of the Admiral's milk, this Musashi...
よっ
G-Good for you
は
Ha
は
Ha
提督
Admiral
If I can receive all of his semen then... I'm satisfied.
PAGE 15
その
After that
私
We did it
何
Again
何
And again
ふふ
Heh heh, Is there any problem?
んっちゅっ
*Slurp* It's alright. Just leave all to Musashi
何
And again
は
Ah
何
And again
は
Ah
は
Ah
恋人
We had sex like lovers
PAGE 16
その
After that the results in battle of the Admiral raised, and now he is recognized as the number one commander in all of the base.
もちろん
Of course, I also participate in the frontlines as the flagship.
そして
And...
今日
Today you came a lot as well, Admiral...
えらいぞ
Good boy
夜は
And in the nights I'm busy and happy performing my tasks as the wife secretary ship of the Admiral.
PAGE 17
どう
How is it... Admiral... My insides...
PAGE 18: ATOGAKI
Afterword:
A woman with a strong attitude is weak in the ass! Greetings!
This time this is a limited edition preview before of the event, I'm sorry for all of the troubles > <
Since Musashi is a slow speed kind of ship, I have made again a book with idea of making her weak point her ass. How was it?
Would her brown skin taste like candy?
Her breast milk, of course, would be coffee milk. Very popular with kids like the Admiral.
I had my heart broken because my midway LV83 Kitakame got sunk by a Musashi, but since I had the materials, if I was going to give up, I might as well use them all. With that in mind I challenged the event just the day before it ended, and while crying, just one hour before the end of the event, I got a Musashi, and because of that I developed a deep emotional attachment to this ship girl.
Now she's at lv80.
The one I take for the excersies is of course Musashi.
She is, again, someone special to me.
At last, thank you very much for picking up this book. This post has been edited by Whlezes: Jul 28 2016, 23:09 |
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Jul 28 2016, 17:35
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goodd
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Jul 31 2016, 00:38
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goodd
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Here is the script for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14257Doujin name : Harashou! Sidestory : Camouflage Chimney! Page 3 This happended before she was sent out as a compensation ship to Russia.. After finishing a "Operation Ke" in Kiss Island, we were immediately given a mission to reengaged.. However, before the operation, I and Abukuma recieved remodel... Hibiki : ..I finished a remodel Abukuma : Hibiki-chan..... Thanks for your hard work! Hibiki : ....Where is everyone? Abukuma : They're resupplying~ Abukuma : That aside... how was it? Don't you think my Kai ni is great? Hibiki : ...Yes Abukuma : Ehhhh, such a weak reaction! Abukuma : Let me see your new remodel too~ Hibiki : ... I don't wanna Abukuma : It's my duty as a flagship to know about you, ya know~! sfx : fall! Page 4 Abukama : Eh? What is this? Sfx : grope Abukuma : Wohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Sfx : Plop Sfx : Footstep sound Page 5 Abukuma : Hi..Hibiki-chan... What is this...? Hibiki : ..."Camouflage Chimney" It's for confusing the enemy and made them think I'm their allys.... Abukuma : With this!? I think it's a whole different thing..... Hibiki : ....hn! Abukuma : S...Sorry... Abukuma : So this is attach to your clit... SFX : Flinch SFX : Touching Abukuma : Still, with it being this small, I doubt I'll help you before the problem arise Hibiki : It'll expand when the operation begun... Abukuma : I see... Can you make it bigger now? Hibiki : I can... but I don't want to Abukuma : Hibiki-chan you stingy~~~~! Page 6 SFX : Munch! Abukuma : A problem child who doesn't listen to the flagship will face..... THIS! Hibki : A...Abukuma... What are you...!? Abukuma : This is your punishment for not listening to my order~ I'll turn it into ready-mode myself~ Hibiki : If it became bigger.... SFX : Chupa (a lot of it) Hibiki : D...Don't... stop.... Abukuma : I wonder what exactly will happen if I don't stop~? Abukuma : Ah!? Page 7 SFX : Shock Abukuma : How amazing... I can see at being turned in to I-class destroyer now.... But are you gonna be without your pantie the whole time during the operation? Hibiki : Eh...ehh.... SFX : Staring Abukuma : Even hibiki-chan will be embarrassed too right~? Abukuma : It's kind of resemble the deep-sea vessles..... Abukuma : But no matter how I look at it.... It's guy's..... Abukuma : I wonder if Admiral will be this big too? Abukuma : W...Well... A practice before a real fight is important too... right? Hibiki : ...Abukuma? Abukuma : In order to not be embarrassed in a real operation tomorrow... Let's practice first Abukuma : Don't worry! I'll be practicing with you too! SFX : Flip Page 8 Sfx : Munch Hibiki : Wh..What is this pose... Abukuma : It's a practice to lose your embarrassment! From now, we'll be doing more embarassing thing together! Abukuma : Look at mine... And lick my embarassing place too... Hibiki : Abukuma's.... It's so pretty.... Abukuma : Ahn! Abukuma : B..Being licked feels so good~ Abukuma : I wonder if I was being touched by this.... how good would it feel.... Hibiki : A..Abukuma.... I feel.... stange... Abukuma : If you get used to it, It wouldn't be embarassing anymore~ Abukuma : Even when I'm playing with "Camouflage Chimney", Hibiki-chan feels it too~ Sfx : Shudder Sfx : Licking Page 9 Abukuma : I'll just pop in Sfx : Sqeak! Hibiki : Ah!? Abukuma : Hibiki-chan's period doesn't come yet, right? You're so small too.... Even one finger feels this tight.... Sfx : Licking*2 Abukuma : You're feeling so good that your Chimney expanded? Hibiki : I felt... good? I don't know... S...Something...is coming.... Hibiki : T..Tip.... It's coming to the tip.... Abukuma : It's .fine... just cum! Sfx : Splash Abukua : Show me your embarassing scene... Show me how hibiki-chan's Camouflage Chimney is cumming! Page 10 SFX : Splurt Hibiki : I'm cumming! A lot of things are coming out! Abukuma : I see, even though it's camouflage chimney... Abukuma : A thick sperm came out instead of smoke! Page 11 Abukuma : Y...You came so much... Abukuma : How amazing... Abukuma : It's not even shrinking... rather... It has became bigger... Abukuma : Hibiki-chan.... Hibiki : ...? Abukuma : Let's continue with the training! Abukuma : I don't really like being crashed from the front...... so you try slide it from my back! *Reference to how Cruiser Abukuma crashed with Kitakami, I think Page 12 Abukuma : Hibiki-chan.... Don't put it in...Ok?...Just rub it there.... Hibiki : Y......yes.... Abukuma : Being rubbed with something so big.. and so hard.... Abukuma : My pussy....is being....stretch~ Hibiki : The tip of the chimney...is touching Abukuma... It's so wet... I fell so good.... Abukuma : Hi...Hibiki-chan!? If you push it that hard.... It's gonna enter..... SFX : sliding sound Page 13 SFX : Ploping in sound Abukuma : Hi..Hibiki-chan..... I....It's.... entering meeee.... Hibiki : With a warmth enveloping the chimney... I felt even better.... Abukuma : Don't....move.... Even only a tip... it's really filling me.... Page 14 Abukama : Hibiki-chan... Put it in more slowly....Don't.move.... Abukuma : S...Stop.....Ittttttttttt~ Abukuma : Ohh!!?? SFX : Grumble Abukuma : It's...in... It's in my virgin pussy.... Abukuma : It's all so deep.. in my virgin pussy..... Page 15 Abukuma : Please.. Forgive me.... Abukuma : My virgin pussy... is becoming so loose~.... Sfx : Bam! (a lot of it) Hibiki : I'm sorry.. It felt so good I can't stop.... My body is moving on its own... Abukuma : If...you continue... I'll become.....weird~~~~ Abukuma : My inside are being messed up..... M...My pussy is being destroy~!! Page 16 Abukuma : A warm white smoke.. Is coming in me! Sfx : Splurt Sfx : door opening I can't remember her name : Abukuma-san, We're finished with the resupply~ Page 17 Shimakaze : Hibiki! Whatshername 1 : Abukuma-san! Whatshername 2 : What just happended! Hibiki : Everyone... You came just right on time.. I still can't remove the camouflage chimney Hibiki : Please help... Destroyers : !? Destroyers : Ahhhhhhnnnnnn~~~~ Text : Next, - Operation Reengage the northen ke sea Big Text : Success ! Text : After completing the operation, Hibiki's camouflage chimney was safely removed Text : With much regret to some shipgirls!? Page 18 + Afterwords + Nice to meet you, or happy to see you again, I'm Takane no Hana After being asked with "Is the continuation of "Harasho-!" not out yet" for more than 1 years... Sorry for the wait! This is the side story is Hibiki's douji, "Harasho-!"!! For those who are thinking that "So this is not the end book?" You're right! Due to various reasons, the ending book of "Harasho-!" does not make it in time T T With that, I made do with this side story! It's being based on a real story of Hibiki's being equiped with Camouflage Chimney for disguise as a western ship But the enemy in Kancolle is a deep-sea vessles so the Camouflage Chimney is changed too wwwwww And because it needs to be seen during fights, it turned into a giant cock wwwwwwwwww Even for the sake of operation is this pretty embarassing so, the Fkagship Abukuma has to helped her! It's that kind of situation This time, for the sake of drawing Abukuma, I had to check out her voiced as I normally play the game with a mute.... With that, he sounds different than my imagination! Her drawing seems pretty mature.... but her voice is really childish!! After that, I looped her voice and try replacing the new her in my head It's really hard! Moreover, Even if I said this is Hibiki's book, It has became a book from Abukuma's perspective so Hibiki is.... Well, Something like that is good too, sometimes! That being said, This year is pretty short, but I'll in your care again next year too! + Information + + Publisher : Takane no Hana + Date : 31/12/2015 + Homepage : [ www,asahi-net.or.jp] http://www,asahi-net.or.jp/~wp5m-kmkr/+ Email : wp5m-kmkr@asahi.net.or.jp * Uploading online is prohibited * It seems my english is a lot more rusty than my Japanese, and I'm pretty unsure about what to do with massive amount of sfx in some pages. |
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Jul 31 2016, 16:50
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Vilis
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*PR note: All corrections are marked in red. Crossed out text is to be deleted.*QUOTE(Whlezes @ Jul 28 2016, 08:32) Accepted and finished the bounty for the Teitoku to Musashi Event by Karateka Value. https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14258Here it is, submitted for proofreading. PAGE 3 私 My name is Musashi , one of the battleships representing Japan. Since I was assigned to this base , I've been performing as the flag ship. 提 The Admiral may look young , but... あ He is the grand Admiral that saved me from that great peril at the dark Ironbottom Sound. 提 I have nothing but feelings of gratitude and respect for him... だが But... that aside 提 When I think about the Admiral... この What are these feelings... ?PAGE 4 てっ A-Admiral... みんあ All of the others are on an expedition... あの This... well... we are all alone, aren't we ?む Mu-Musashi...? てっ A-Admiral... 皆に They're all going to think badly of me , but... なっ Wh-what...? もう I can't resist it anymore... ん Ngh.. 提 Admiral... I... Love you... 私 My dear Admiral-sama PAGE 5 む Mu-Musashi... こ Th-this is the Admiral's great cannon that everyone desires so much they can't help themselves... (PR note: I changed the wording a bit because the previous one didn't feel natural)こ Would you look at that. な What a great thing you have here. む Mu-Musashi... I-I'm embarrassed. こ You made the other ship girls cry with this, didn't you?戦艦 Battleship Musashi, ready to launch. どうだ How is it, Admiral? ハン I'm sandwiching your penis like a Hamburger. しかも And an extra large at that. PAGE 6 ああっ Ahh, Musashi. さきっぽ The tip... don't do that.. 提督 The Admiral's is getting bigger. 私 I'm kinda starting to feel it. ふふ Heh heh, you don't have to hold it in, you know? あっ Ah Ah 武 Musashi Musashi ああ Aah, the Admiral's penis. だめ You can't , Musashi, not there おいし It's delicious... PAGE 7 武蔵 Musashi's breasts... 気持ち Did they feel good? きっ They felt really good, Musashi でっ Bu-but! A-any more and I'll come そうか I see, I see いいぞ It's alright, come. あっ Ah- don't ! 武蔵 You can come with all your heart in between Musashi's breasts はわわ Ahhh , I'm coming PAGE 8 ああっ Ahh, he's coming, he's coming 提督 I can feel the Admiral's penis throbbing and his hot milk coming in my breasts. ああっ Ahh おっ Don't... press your breasts. ふふ Heh heh, you came a lot 私 This much milk in my dark brown breasts... こ Look, they have become this white PAGE 9 ああ Aah.. Musashi, I'm sorry... I'm sorry 何 What are you apologizing for? This is something I did by myself , so don't mind it. ふふ Heh heh, the Admiral is really cute even though he is a Yamato soldier. (PR note: the context seems to imply this change)まだ He's still big.. そう I see... the Admiral is still not satisfied , right? 私 I can still go... I want to thoroughly taste that main cannon. 今度 This time here... Can I ask that...? PAGE 10 んん Nnh... Ha, ha さっ It's- It's even... bi-bigger than before は Haa... あ ahii きっ E-even the glans is this big... Wh-what would happen if it went all the way inside... ?ぜっ I-I've put it all in... 凄 Such a fearful big cannon... だが But still, this is still not enough to sink... this Musashi PAGE 11 は Ha.. ha.. good, Admiral こっ Even though you are a child... この You are the only one that can keep up with this Yamato class up to this point だっ I-I can't , Musashi! I'm... I'm gonna come again! は Ha.. Ha.. It's ok... It's ok to come... その Just like that... Come just like that... PAGE 12 いっ N-No! First , I'm going to 先 First , I'm going to make Musashi come! あ Ah! てっ A-Admiral?! 提 Admiral そっ Th-that is... おしり My ass やああ No, Aaaahhhhh PAGE 13 ッ Ngh ハ Ha.. ハ Ha.. どっ H-How is it? Musashi? お Does your ass feel good? くっ Kuh... Still... This is still not enough この To sink this Musashi! なら Then! Take this! えい Take this! うおおお Uohhhh いく I'm coming いく I'm coming いく I'm coming PAGE 14 っっ Hngh あ Ahh ああ Aahhh この To make this Musashi... come from her ass... しかも And it's even still pouring in... その That concentrated power, such a splendid thing. 提 Until I empty all of the Admiral's milk, this Musashi... よっ G-Good for you は Ha は Ha 提督 Admiral If I can receive all of his semen , then... I'm satisfied. PAGE 15 その After that 私 We did it 何 Again 何 And again ふふ Heh heh, is there any problem? んっちゅっ *Slurp* It's alright. Just leave it all to Musashi 何 And again は Ah 何 And again は Ah は Ah 恋人 We had sex like lovers PAGE 16 その After that , the results of the Admiral in battle rose, and now he is recognized as the number one commander in all of the base. もちろん Of course, I also participate in the frontlines as the flagship. そして And... 今日 Today you came a lot as well, Admiral... えらいぞ Good boy 夜は And during the nights I'm busy and happy performing my tasks as the wife secretary ship of the Admiral. PAGE 17 どう How are they... Admiral... My insides... PAGE 18: ATOGAKI Afterword: A woman with a strong attitude is weak in the ass! Greetings! This time , it's a limited edition preview before of the event, I'm sorry for all of the trouble > < Since Musashi is a slow speed kind of ship, I have made another book with the idea of making her weak point her ass. How was it? Would her brown skin taste like candy? Her breast milk, of course, would be coffee milk. Very popular with kids like the Admiral. I had my heart broken because my midway LV83 Kitakame got sunk by a Musashi, but since I had the materials, if I was going to give up, I might as well use them all. With that in mind , I challenged the event just the day before it ended, and while crying, just one hour before the end of the event, I got a Musashi, and because of that I developed a deep emotional attachment to this ship girl. Now she's at LV80. The one I take for the exercises is of course Musashi. (PR note: I'm not sure what you meant here)She is, again, someone special to me. At last, thank you very much for picking up this book.
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Jul 31 2016, 18:44
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KirbyDances
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General remarks (mostly for the translator): - the script will be difficult to read for the editor: if a bubble is split in two, you should write the translation on two different lines, so the editor knows where the speech should be cut, - there are many bubbles you didn't translate, probably because they only contain moans, but you should still translate them, or the editor (and readers) may think that you missed them, and that the translation is incomplete (and you missed some bubbles that actually contain important text), - you're trying to stay too close to how the original sentences were worded in Japanese, which gives rise to sentences that just sound wrong in English. General remarks: - I didn't proofread the script (only some parts where it was blatantly wrong), I just checked the translation, - orange means I think the change should be made but it's not absolutely crucial, or that I'm not 100% sure, - red means it is absolutely crucial to change this part, - also, I haven't spent much time on it, so there may still be mistakes here and there. Here is the script for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14257Doujin name : Harashou! Sidestory : Camouflage Funnel! First of all, this doujin's name is a pun: "harashou" comes from ハラショー, which is how Japanese people pronounce "хорошо́", which means "good / nice" in Russian (thanks Google translate), and it has become a Japanese word that means basically the same; but it is written with 孕, which means "to impregnate". Not that I have any idea of how to translate that, though (nor do I want to spend too much time on it).
Also, if I got things right, "camouflage funnel" refers to a tactic used by the Japanese navy (e.g., during their retreat of Kiska). It consists in adding a false funnel to a ship to make it look like a different ship from far away (for example an enemy ship).This happened before I was sent out as a compensation ship to Russia.. "compensation ship" should probably be "spoils of war"After finishing a "Operation Ke" on Kiss Island, we were immediately given a mission to reengage d.. "Operation Ke" and "Kiss Island" are references respectively to "Operation Ke" (same name as [en.wikipedia.org] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operation_Ke but different operation), which consisted in the evacuation of Kiska (which is called "Kiska Island" in Japanese).However, before the operation, I and Abukuma were remodeled... Hibiki : .. .They finished remodeling me.Abukuma : That aside... how was it? Don't you think my Kai ni is great? She's asking "Do you like it?" (Abukuma's "kai ni" form).It's for confusing the enemy and make them think I'm their ally s.... Abukuma : So it is attach ed to your clit... Abukuma : Still, with it being this small, I doubt I'll help you before the problem arise It's "But it's so small, I think there's a problem much more serious than camouflage." (see, e.g. [thesaurus.weblio.jp] http://thesaurus.weblio.jp/content/%E4%BB%...%95%8F%E9%A1%8C to parse the sentence better)Hibiki : It'll expand when the operation begins... Hibiki : If it becomes bigger.... Abukuma : How amazing... I can see at being turned in to I-class destroyer now.... But are you gonna be without your pantie s during the whole operation? "It looks like an I-class destroyer..."Abukuma : It's kind of resemble a deep-sea vessels..... Abukuma : But no matter how I look at it.... It's a guy's..... Abukuma : I wonder if the Admiral is this big too? Abukuma : In order to not be embarrassed during the real operation tomorrow... Let's practice first Abukuma : It's a practice to lose your embarrassment! From now, we'll be doing more embar rassing thing s together! Abukuma : Look at mine... And lick my embar rassing place too... Abukuma : If you get used to it, It won't be embar rassing anymore~ Abukuma : Even when I'm playing with "Camouflage Chimney", Hibiki-chan feels it too~ more like "Even though I'm just touching your "camouflage funnel", your girl parts are feeling it too"Abukuma : I'll just pop in "I'll plug it."Abukuma : You're feeling so good that your Chimney expanded? "You're feeling so good that you're raising your hips?"Hibiki : Y......yes.... Why not "D-Da..."?Abukuma : My pussy....is being....stretch ed~ Hibiki : The tip of the chimney...is touching Abukuma... It's so wet... I feel so good.... Hibiki : With a warmth enveloping the chimney... I feel even better.... Abukuma : Don't....move.... Even only the tip... it's really filling me.... Abukama : Hibiki-chan... Put it in more slowly....Don't.move.... "Hibiki-chan... It's slowly entering me... So stop moving...!"Abukuma : If...you continue... I'll become..... crazy~~~~ Abukuma : My inside are being messed up..... M...My pussy is being destroy ed~!! Abukuma : A thick white smoke.. Is coming in me! Whatshername 2 : What just happened! Page 18 + Afterword s + This is the side story of Hibiki's douji, "Harasho-!"!! It's being based on a real story of Hibiki's being equip ped with a Camouflage Chimney for disguise as a western ship But the enemy in Kancolle are deep-sea vessels so the Camouflage Chimney is changed too wwwwww Even for the sake of operation is this pretty embar rassing so, the Flagship Abukuma has to helped her! With that, she sounds different from what I had imagined! Moreover, Even if I said this is Hibiki's book, It has become a book from Abukuma's perspective and I had a limited number of pages, so there wasn't so much Hibiki.... That being said, This year ended in the blink of an eye, but I'll in your care again next year too! + Publisher : Takane no Hana zono+ Printing : Taiyou Shuppan |
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Jul 31 2016, 21:57
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goodd
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Thanks for the corrections, This is Updated version for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14257Doujin name : Harashou! Sidestory : Camouflage Funnel! Page 3 Text Box : This happened before I was sent out as a spoils of war to Russia.. Text Box : After finishing "Operation Ke" on Kiss Island, we were immediately given a mission to reengage.. Text Box : Before the operation, I and Abukuma were remodeled... Sfx : *Door Opening* Hibiki : ..They finished remodeling me. Abukuma : Hibiki-chan..... Thanks for your hard work! Hibiki : ....Where is everyone? Abukuma : They're resupplying~ Abukuma : That aside... Do you like it? Don't you think my Kai ni is great? Hibiki : ...Yes Abukuma : Ehhhh, such a weak reaction! Abukuma : Let me see your new remodel too~ Hibiki : ... I don't wanna Abukuma : It's my duty as a flagship to know about you, ya know~! sfx : fall! Page 4 Abukama : Eh? What is this? Sfx : grope Abukuma : Wohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Sfx : Plop Sfx : Footstep sound Page 5 Abukuma : Hi..Hibiki-chan... What is this...? Hibiki : ..."Camouflage Funnel" It's for confusing the enemy and made them think I'm their ally.... Abukuma : With this!? Abukuma : I think it's a whole different thing..... Hibiki : ....hn! Sfx : Flinch Abukuma : S...Sorry... Abukuma : So it's attached to your clit... SFX : Flinch SFX : Touching Abukuma : But it's so small, I think there's a problem much more serious than camouflage. Hibiki : It'll expand when the operation begins... Abukuma : I see... Can you make it bigger now? Hibiki : I can... but I don't want to Abukuma : Hibiki-chan you stingy~~~~! Page 6 Abukuma : A problem child who doesn't listen to the flagship will face..... Abukuma : THIS! Hibki : A...Abukuma... What are you...!? SFX : Munch! Abukuma : This is your punishment for not listening to my order~ I'll turn it into ready-mode myself~ Hibiki : If it becomes bigger.... SFX : Chupa (a lot of it) Hibiki : D...Don't... More than that and I'll.... SFX : Pero Abukuma : I wonder what exactly will happen it become bigger~? Abukuma : Ah!? Page 7 SFX : Shock Abukuma : How amazing... It looks like an I-class destroyer.... \ Abukuma : But are you gonna be without your panties during the whole operation? Hibiki : Eh...ehh.... SFX : Thump (as in heart beating) Abukuma : Even hibiki-chan will be embarrassed too right~? Text Box : It's kind of resemble a deep-sea vessle..... Text Box : But no matter how I look at it.... It's a guy's..... Text Box : I wonder if the Admiral is this big too? Text Box : W...Well... A practice before a real fight is important too... right? Hibiki : ...Abukuma? Abukuma : In order to not be embarrassed in during the real operation tomorrow... Let's practice first Abukuma : Don't worry! I'll be practicing with you too! SFX : Flip Page 8 Hibiki : Wh..What is this pose... Sfx : Munching Abukuma : It's a practice to lose your embarrassment! Abukuma : From now, we'll be doing more embarrassing things together! Abukuma : Look at mine.... Abukuma : And lick my embarrassing place too... Hibiki : Abukuma's.... It's so pretty.... Abukuma : Ahn! Text Box : B..Being licked feels so good~ Text Box : I wonder if I was being touched by this.... how good would it feel.... Hibiki : A..Abukuma.... I feel.... strange... Abukuma : If you get used to it, It won't be embarrassing anymore~ Abukuma : Even though I'm just touching your "camouflage funnel", Abukuma : your girl parts are feeling it too~ Sfx : Shudder Sfx : Licking Page 9 Abukuma : I'll plug it in Sfx : Squeak! Hibiki : Ah!? Abukuma : Hibiki-chan's period doesn't come yet, right? Abukuma : You're so small too.... Even one finger feels this tight.... Sfx : Licking*2 Abukuma : You're feeling so good that you're raising your hips? Hibiki : I felt... good? I don't know... Hibiki : S...Something...is coming.... Hibiki : T..Tip.... It's coming to the tip.... Abukuma : It's fine... just cum! Sfx : Splash Abukua : Show me your embarassing scene... Abukuma : Show me how hibiki-chan's Camouflage Funnel is cumming! Page 10 SFX : Splurt Hibiki : I'm cumming! A lot of things are coming out! Abukuma : I see, even though it's camouflage Funnel... Abukuma : A thick sperm came out instead of whitesmoke! Black word bubbles are just a bunch of "Ah" Page 11 Abukuma : Y...You came so much... Text Box : How amazing... Abukuma : It's not even shrinking... rather... It has became bigger... Hibiki : Hah....*3 Abukuma : Hibiki-chan.... Hibiki : ...? Abukuma : Let's continue with the training! Abukuma : I don't really like being crashed from the front...... so you try slide it from my back! *Reference to how Cruiser Abukuma crashed with Kitakami, I think Page 12 Abukuma : Hibiki-chan.... Don't put it in...Ok?...Just rub it there.... Hibiki : D-Da... (2 bubbles combined) Abukuma : Being rubbed with something so big.. and so hard.... Abukuma : My pussy....is being....stretched~ Hibiki : The tip of the Funnel...is touching Abukuma... It's so wet... I feel so good.... Abukuma : Hi...Hibiki-chan!? Abukuma : If you push it that hard.... It's gonna enter..... SFX : sliding sound Page 13 SFX : Ploping in sound Abuku,a : Hahih!? Abukuma : Hi..Hibiki-chan..... Abukuma : I...It's.... entering meeee.... Hibiki : With warmth enveloping the Funnel... I feel even better.... Abukuma : Don't....move.... Abukuma : Even only the tip... it's really filling me.... Page 14 Abukama : Hibiki-chan... It's slowly entering me... So stop moving...! Abukuma : If....If you put it in deeper...~ Abukuma : S...Stop.....Ittttttttttt~ Abukuma : Ohh!!?? SFX : Grumble Abukuma : It's...in... Abukuma :It's in my virgin pussy.... Abukuma : It's so deep.. Abukuma : All in my virgin pussy..... Sfx : Panting Page 15 Abukuma : Please.. Forgive me.... Abukuma : My virgin pussy... is becoming so loose~.... Sfx : Bam! (a lot of it) Hibiki : I'm sorry.. It felt so good I can't stop.... Hibiki : My body is moving on its own... Abukuma : If...you continue... Abukuma : I'll become.....crazy~~~~ Abukuma : My inside are being messed up..... Abukuma : M...My pussy is being destroyed~!! Page 16 Abukuma : A thick white smoke.. Is coming in me! Abukuama : Ahhhhh~!! Sfx : Splurt Sfx : door opening I can't remember her name : Abukuma-san, We're finished with the resupply~ Page 17 Shimakaze : Hibiki! Whatshername 1 : Abukuma-san! Whatshername 2 : What just happened! Hibiki : Everyone... You came just right on time.. I still can't remove the camouflage Funnel Hibiki : Please help... Destroyers : !? Destroyers : Ahhhhhhnnnnnn~~~~ Text : Next, - Operation Reengage the northen ke sea Big Text : Success ! Text : After completing the operation, Hibiki's camouflage Funnel was safely removed Text : With much regret to some shipgirls!? Page 18 + Afterwords + Nice to meet you, or happy to see you again, I'm Takane no Hanazono After being asked with "Is the continuation of "Harasho-!" not out yet?" for more than 1 years... Sorry for the wait! This is the side story of Hibiki's douji, "Harasho-!"!! For those who are thinking that "So this is not the end book?" You're right! Due to various reasons, the ending book of "Harasho-!" does not make it in time T T With that, I made do with this side story! It's being based on a real story of Hibiki's being equipped with a Camouflage Funnel for disguise as a western ship But the enemy in Kancolle are deep-sea vessels so the Camouflage Funnel is changed too wwwwww And because it needs to be seen during fights, it turned into a giant cock wwwwwwwwww Even for the sake of operation is this pretty embarassing so, the Flagship Abukuma has to helped her! It's that kind of situation This time, for the sake of drawing Abukuma, I had to check out her voiced as I normally play the game with a mute.... With that, she sounds different from what I imagined! Her drawing seems pretty mature.... but her voice is really childish!! After that, I looped her voice and try replacing the new her in my head It's really hard! Moreover, Even if I said this is Hibiki's book, It become a book from Abukuma's perspective and I had a limited number of pages, so there wasn't so much Hibiki.... Well, Something like that is good too, sometimes! That being said, ended in the blink of an eye, but I'll in your care again next year too! + Information + + Publisher : Takane no Hanazono + Printing : Taiyou Shuppan + Date : 31/12/2015 + Homepage : [ www,asahi-net.or.jp] http://www,asahi-net.or.jp/~wp5m-kmkr/+ Email : wp5m-kmkr@asahi.net.or.jp * Uploading online is prohibited * Black bubbles are moan bubbles, so it is pretty what is or isn't moaning, but still, let me know if you think I need to translate it (not that it contains anything more than Hih/Ah/Hah). This post has been edited by goodd: Jul 31 2016, 22:06 |
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Jul 31 2016, 22:19
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Red of EHCOVE
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QUOTE(goodd @ Jul 31 2016, 14:57) Thanks for the corrections, This is Updated version for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14257Thanks - and thanks to all who keep commenting elsewhere! Go ahead and claim the bounty (ditto for Whlezes). As for the Kancolle script, I got the following note from another translator regarding one small part which I am endorsing: "Th-this is the Admiral's great cannon that everyone wishes to the point of no stopping..." That's a very literal translation. Better might be something like "Th-This is the Admiral's great cannon that everyone can't stop dreaming of." Less literal, but far more sensible in English. new editing bounties https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14832https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14833This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 1 2016, 13:29 |
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Aug 6 2016, 16:23
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Noni
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Aug 8 2016, 21:36
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Noni
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QUOTE(DJNoni @ Aug 6 2016, 16:23) The translation is in reading order, right to left Page 5 Hehehe, fufufufu... Rather than readjusting it, it'd be better to reset your imagination system completely Page 6 Welcome back, my admiral... Would you like to have dinner? Or a bath? Or maybe...would you like to board me? Page 8 Of course, Gunzou went straight for the handjob. It seems like he likes it when I take the initiative as of late. Hehe...Do you want to come already? You can't yet~ As soon as I start touching his cock, my inner woman immediately awakens. I can't wait to be violated by this hard thing Keeping my speech and mannerism nonchalant, I keep hiding my burning lust Page 9 While I was jerking him off, Gunzou started groping my exposed behind, staring at my breasts from under my semi-transparent apron all the while Even though I got distracted a single moment, he came, but I kept going anyway Aha! It came out already...hehe, did my handjob feel good? Before long, my hand was covered in his cum, his orgasm accompanied by my ridiculing words My face and body are covered in a man's cum... The white fluid felt like it was sinking through my skin into my soul, making my mind go blank Page 10 Having his cock sticking right in front of my face, the strong male musk makes me feel like coming already Just like he asked, I paid particular attention to the back of his dick, licking it thoroughly while fondling his balls Of course, I didn't forget to look up at him meanwhile...he said it makes him more excited Knowing that this is how males assert their dominance makes me quiver! Mmph...hn! Fwah...hnnn Does this it feel good...? Page 11 I'm coming, takao! As soon as he announced it, I took his cock out of my mouth His seed came out flying with incredible strength, the huge amount was enough to cover my face completely mmph...hnaah! Aaah...hn.. Having that scent filling my lungs, I couldn't help but feel like a bitch in heat Hnnn! You came so easily, even though I was barely touching you... Page 12 It's reaching my core! Nooo!! Just like a well trained dog, I followed his orders and climbed onto his lap, getting his cock inside me on my own The way I pushed down with my hips made his cock reach deeply into my womb, making me lose consciousness for a second I'm coming! i'm coming! I noticed Gunzou staring at me. I wonder if I'm making an ahegao again? Still, I'm barely able to think of anything outside of feeling good... Page 14 Aaah, finally! A big one's coming!! I'm going nuts, this is incredible! His cock is amazing! Ah! I'm coming! i'm comiiiiing! I'm coming again and again from having his unprotected dick creampie me! Page 14 This time, I'm fulfilling my duty of providing sex in the bath I've prepared the swimsuit gunzou loves so much, the one that leaves my pussy completely exposed Aah! Don't move yet! I'm too sensitive! I'm going to come already! Cleaning up his body like I was his personal towel, hugging and kissing... And so, I came again My already overly stimulated body came countless times just from having him put it in Page 15 Groping my ass, Gunzou picked up the pace, and started thrusting deep into my hole Maybe because of the bath, I started moaning even more than usual noooooo! I'm coming agaaaaain! I'm coming! Before long, his cock pushed deep inside my womb and released its seed, coming pleasure spready through my pussy into my body, I felt so exhausted that I had to cling onto the bathtub to stay up Page 16 Gunzou and Takao are having sex as usual Hnn...mmph...! They don't even care that I'm here One day, I just started masturbating while peeking on them Aauuh...! As if trying to lure takao's man away, I kept making lewd moans in the changing room, loud enough to be heard even in the hallway ...I want it...Gunzou's dick... I'm a woman too...I can't take this anymore... Page 17 Getting out of the bathroom, Takao just gave me a smile, seeing me there in the changing room Aah...nnn Looks like you were masturbating to us having sex I'm coming! Coming so suddenly...seems like the orgasm left you powerless and you couldn't escape in time Maybe you need to be punished? Page 18 You must shamefully beg for it as a punishment G-gunzou...have sex with me Even though you act embarassed, that's way too bold for a begging speech. Try again! D-Do it...please U-use my virgin hole, I want to have sex with you! i want to become your woman! Even though she's supposed to be a virgin, her pussy is twitching and leaking, trying to lure men inside Could it be she let us find her on purpose to make this happen? Page 19 Their passionate sex unfolded in front of my eyes, as if they were putting on a show for me hnnn...!...ah!...ngh... Gunzou would look my way at times, smiling mischievously Iona kept moaning loudly, moving her hips and being much more sensitive than you'd expect from a virgin E-even though it's my first time it feels so good. Your cock is amazing, gunzou! ahn! Aaaaah! noooo! getting to know the pleasure of watching gunzou fucking another girl in front of me, I started stirring up my pussy Page 20 Too concentrated on pleasuring myself, I was surprised to find my hands locked behind my back What, are you masturbating while watching them? You sure are soaked...hehe Who is this? Someone from the crew?! N-no, I can feel something against my butt! Lusty as usual, I see / I want to make you mine Could it be, he has gunzou's permission to do this? no way...am I going to be violated by someone else?! No! ...but...why? Even though I don't love him, the feeling of anticipation from knowing I'm going to get fucked...is making me so horny Page 21 He started rubbing over my clit with his left hand, while his right took care of my nipples, caressing over my breasts Hee, You sure got a nice ass. Maybe I should rub one out over it before I get to your pussy? ah, nno! It's coming out! hey now, are you wetting yourself? Or are you coming? / You sure are coming a lot, for someone getting raped His hardened cock kept rubbing against my behind My body, well versed to all kinds of sex with Gunzou, easily reacted to that stimulation My body relaxed all of a sudden, and a lukewarm feeling started streaming down my thighs. Did I...did I just wet myself? Page 22 It's going inside me... Woah, you're soaked! Not only that, you're tight...even though it's and used up pussy, it feels great A raw cock, its shape and size completely different from Gunzou's Aaaah...! It's hitting my womb! Do you like my cock? / I'm going to fuck you until your pussy is molded into the shape of my cock! My pussy is going to be molded, it's going to be made into his cock's shape! noo, not so deep...! It feels so good! Page 23 Aaaah, my head is spinning a huge cock is making me come...even though it's not gunzou's! Hehe, I'm already close. So? If you don't want me to come inside, take it out yourself No...don't take it out! Please come inside me! Woah, you're getting so tight all of a sudden... / Oooh! Are you coming with an ahegao while getting your womb filled with cum? What a slut! Aaah...I'm coming! I'm coming! A raw creampie is making me cooooome! Page 24 Aaah...I really got fucked by a man that wasn't Gunzou... Come on, suck every last drop out. This isn't over yet Gotta take your ass next...and why not, maybe penetrate you in both holes at once with gunzou / you're going to be our personal cumdumpster from now on Not to mention, raw... Thank you so much... I can't live without cock anymore... But I'm happy...to think that being used as a toy for men could feel this good Please take care of your new cumdumpster, my dear admiral Page 25 So it's finally over. This is the sixth volume from Kotonosha. This time, I tried drawing something from "Arpeggio of the blue steel" Takao is so cute! With the anime coming out, a lot of people are sure to get their hands on her, so I got a head start (ahah) I'm looking forward to the anime, but I can't help but wonder about the continuation of the story. I hope Takao's revival comes soon enough. Oh well, I'd be happy with her appearing at all. This is all Takao's imagination by the way, imagine that she's been hacked by Iona halfway through and that's why the story changes, ahah It took me quite some time to make the color pin-up, but I still have some hang-ups about it. Oh well, I'll try again next time. Thank you for buying this book, see you next time! (Mutsumi Masato) |
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Aug 9 2016, 13:02
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Noni
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https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14687I've accepted this bounty offer. I expect the translation to be finished in a couple of days. This post has been edited by DJNoni: Aug 9 2016, 23:10
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Aug 9 2016, 14:42
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hentaiboya
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Hey, just finished TL-ing this! (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) --TL by hentaiboya-- All text is in right to left order unless stated otherwise P1 For Mature Audiences P3 T-this doujinshi is Not the work of art we sought out for? (bottom) Sadly, it's just a normal book. P4 Itami: This doujin is way too hoooot top left and top right SFX: Snore snore snore who the fuck cares [right panel] Tuka: Itami... SFX: doki doki badump badump (TL note: it is a heartbeat) Tuka: Mou! My ears are getting hot! left bubble: SNOOOORE!!!! Tuka right bubble: Hah Left: My body... Feels weird... Left bottom: Hah SFX: Twitch twitch rustle P5 Legs: Haa x 2 SFX: thud thud Topleft SFX: POMF =3 [middle left] Tuka: Hah hah x2 SFX doki doki doki badump Bottom right: Save.. me... Father.............. Bottom left Itami: I FOUND A SURVIVOR! HEY! ARE YOU OK! P6 Tuka: I haven't... Thanked you yet so... SFX: doki doki topleft Ow! Eye: EH?! Rory: Oh my, what a coincidence that we meet here. Tuka: Y-you?! Why?! P7 Rory: Crawling into a man's room? You're unexpectedly lewd Lelei: You could say that she's secretly horny Tuka: Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh middle Tuka: Y-you guys too... What did you come here for? Ruri: I'm just here to finish what I started that night~ And this time I'm going to go all the way Shockedbubble: Eh?! What?! Rory: Quiet down, little girl smalltext: You're 156 years old... P8 topright Rory: Take a goo~ood look shockedbubble: Waai.. sfx: doki topleft Rory: Fufunn Rory: Oh my, it's already hard! I wonder if he's having a naughty dream lelel: !? Rory: Despite his looks, isn't it the size of an Ogre's? topbubbles: Hah x2 SFX tongue: Lick lick Tuka: What are you doing? Why are you licking......! P9 In the other world, this is a technique called "Fellatio" used to pleasure men **TL Note: Rory mispronounces this is Hyakuhachi means "108", to avoid confusion we'll just call it "Fellatio" Small bubbles: Nnnh! Ngh! top left Haa Haa (heart) sfx:drip~ Bottom panel top right Rory: Amazing... Just from thinking about it, I'm going to go crazy in a good way Bottom right small: By the way, this is a footjob Side panel at bottom panel's top left Rory: Even I in hundreds of years small bubbles: haa... Bottom left: The awakening of my female parts has gotten me extremely aroused ~ P10 Rory: Oh, Itami Penis sfx: twitch twitch Rory: How cute! Itami: Ah! Agh! Rory: You participate too Or I'll have him all to myself Tuka: I... I'll.... Shockbubble: Lelei! What are you doing?! Bubble at tuka's leg: Ah... My nose hurts from just now (monotone) Right boobs: I get it... On top of penis: So... What is this technique called? Beside penis: It seems to be called a "paizuri" Tuka: Aren't boobies for babies? P11 Lelei: Tuka's boobs can sandwich it so well Can we switch soon? Tuka: Eh..... But I wanted to give him "Fellatio"... Itami's left pectoral: Speaking of "Fellatio"...... Top left Ngh! NNghh!! sfx: pop! Lelei: Itami's "cock" is filling me so deep In my throat (heart) Small bubble: Nghh! Rory: Won't he wake up already? Lelei: I want to see... His reaction Small: Hah Small: Ngh! Tuka: What will I do if he wakes up? P12 Right bubble: Nhh! Ngh! Haah! Middle bubble: Pop! Pop! (sucking noise) Rory: It's pulsing and twitching! Lelei: Foop! (alternatively "Pop") Tuka: I can't hold it any longer SFX: Doki doki badump P13 rORY: At this rate, he's going to ejaculate Tuka: Itami... Does it feel good? Lelei: I hear that it feels good to ejaculate while dreaming Rory: Did you know? In one ejaculation There are two hundred million sperm Tuka: Hihami... Haa Ngh! Lelei: Nhh..... Itami...... Rory: Two hundred million of Itami's children die, you know? Itami: Ughh.. Ah...? Cosplay loli! Rory: Fufu! Elf! Magical girl! P14 Tuka: Noo! This is way too embarrassing! Sleep! Itami: Kemomimi Lamia... Happy Centaurus... Rory: Mou~ Getting him to sleep? You're really just a child NNgh! Haa! Nghfu! Itami: ughhh Aahhhhhh! Rory bottom right: Aaaaaahn! P15 Rory: Ahh, how nice~ Itami's lower body passes from inside me To Emroy Top left Rory: Fuuuu- Fuuuu- Since it's been so long, I want more Tuka: Oh no~ Itami's thing shrivelled up Rory: Don't worry Lelei? Lelei: Recovery spell! curvy penis: *Droop* sfx: twitch Straight penis: Shing EH? THAT EXISTS? P16 Rory: I'll go first then It has been ages since I've had the pleasures of the flesh Tuka: Roryyyyy! That's unfair! Top middle: Respect your elders Ngh! top left: Ahn! Rory: Ahn.. Ah! Amashing... (heart) The feeling of pleasure is returning to me...! The grinding of flesh against flesh! Haah Hah The exchange of one another's mucous (membrane)... Sex is wonderful! P17 Lelei: This is intercourse... Rory: That's right... This is real intercourse, of mutual lovers! Bottom right Rory: Eh?! No! Bottom left: Are you really asleep!? You're pounding all my weak spots Nooo! I can't stop my hipss! P18 Your sperm... Comes! Coming comingggg top left: Ahh! Stocking: CUM Lelei: Recovery penis: Wilt penis: Shing Lelei: Haa M-me too.... P19 Tuka: Itami's cock feels soo good! I'll give birth to a half elffff! Rory: I'm shocked that Tuka was like this Bottom right blackbubble: Hau! Ah! What's this? Coming.... I knowwww, it's sperm...! Tuka: Ahhh... It's so warm inside me Penis: Byu byu byu!! P20 Lelei: Teach me, Itami About men, and about intercourse Middle left: I can feel the warmth and shape of your genitalia Bottom right: It's a strange sensation that hurts yet feels good... A sensation that I didn't know... It's good.... Bottom left: Ahhhn! Penis: Byururururu P21 Itami.... Uh.... Why isn't he awake yet......! In between panels: Lecture by the All-Knowing Rory Rory: Because of his overexposure to magic, he's become something like a zombie which moves out of desire~ Itami: RAAH Tuka! Release the spell quick! Kyah! Nn!! This isn't the time to be cumming! Bottom left: Tuka: B-But! P22 I'm happy that Itami is dominating me Rory: Since it's come to this we have no choice but to milk him dry Bottom right: His cock is coming... In... Btm left: I don't even know how many times it's been! P23 Tuka: haah hah Lelei: Ahh Ahn Rory: Geez... Just how strong are you? Rory's right leg: It'll be dawn when we manage to calm you down... Bottom right: In the afternoon that day Itami: I'm really tired, did I do something last night? Lelei: doki doki Rory: Well, well? P24 U-um, I would like to know what happens to the white parts of this doujinshi Would they be the same as those of the gentlemen from this world? If you're fine with mine... In front of face: Please try it T... This is Untaro from the world of the Arts After that, they had lots of sex~ [BOLD text] Bonus A manga of what I imagine happened between these two Bottom left: And that's how it came to this. SFX (below saliva): Psssssshhhhh P25 Rory is the character I like the most. That way of speaking is so addicting...! And the fact that she's a lolibaba makes her irresistable. She has small breasts but I'll allow that (She'll clean me up with her halberd). I'm looking forward to the second season. Anyway, I'm reading the hardcover version while waiting. It's good that the hardcover, paperback, manga and anime are all different....... On the spur of the moment I made a acrylic keychain of Rory. It was harder than I expected because I had to draw her appearance from behind for the inside of the keychain... I realised the reason why nobody draws on the inside. Drawing a Goth god was really hard, but she was flashy and cute. Tuka's elf outfit in the DVD 1 Pack was cute, so I wanted her to wear it in this work. Publication Neko to Hato Publication Date 4 October 2015 Printing KurabisuFuriku-sama Contact Address Please use the Neko to Hato homepage's mail form Our Twitter address is @hato_ya but it's easier to find by searching 鳩矢豆七 P26 Presented by Neko to Hato This post has been edited by hentaiboya: Aug 9 2016, 15:19 |
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Aug 9 2016, 21:50
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Vilis
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*PR note: All corrections are marked in red. Crossed out text is to be removed.*QUOTE(DJNoni @ Aug 8 2016, 22:36)
Here you go:
The translation is in reading order, right to left
Page 5
Hehehe, fufufufu...
Rather than readjusting it, it'd be better to reset your imagination system completely
Page 6
Welcome back, my admiral...
Would you like to have dinner? Or a bath?
Or maybe... would you like to board me?
Page 8
Of course, Gunzou went straight for the handjob. It seems like he likes it when I take the initiative as of late.
Hehe...Do you want to come already? You can't yet~
As soon as I start touching his cock, my inner woman immediately awakens. I can't wait to be violated by this hard thing
Keeping my speech and mannerisms nonchalant, I keep hiding my burning lust
Page 9
While I was jerking him off, Gunzou started groping my exposed behind, staring at my breasts from under my semi-transparent apron all the while
Even though I got distracted for a single moment, he came, but I kept going anyway
Aha!
It came out already... hehe, did my handjob feel good?
Before long, my hand was covered in his cum, his orgasm accompanied by my ridiculing words
My face and body are covered in a man's cum...
The white fluid felt like it was sinking through my skin into my soul, making my mind go blank
Page 10
Having his cock sticking right in front of my face, the strong male musk makes me feel like coming already
Just like he asked, I paid particular attention to the back of his dick, licking it thoroughly while fondling his balls
Of course, I didn't forget to look up at him in the meantime... he said it makes him more excited
Knowing that this is how males assert their dominance makes me quiver!
Mmph...hn! Fwah...hnnn
Does this it feel good...?
Page 11
I'm coming, Takao!
As soon as he announced it, I took his cock out of my mouth
His seed came out flying with incredible strength; the huge amount was enough to cover my face completely
mmph...hnaah! Aaah...hn..
Having that scent filling my lungs, I couldn't help but feel like a bitch in heat
Hnnn!
You came so easily, even though I was barely touching you...
Page 12
It's reaching my core! Nooo!!
Just like a well trained dog, I followed his orders and climbed onto his lap, getting his cock inside me on my own
The way I pushed down with my hips made his cock reach deeply into my womb, making me lose consciousness for a second
I'm coming! I'm coming!
I noticed Gunzou staring at me. I wonder if I'm making an ahegao again.
Still, I'm barely able to think of anything outside of feeling good...
Page 13
Aaah, finally! A big one's coming!!
I'm going nuts, this is incredible! His cock is amazing!
Ah!
I'm coming! I'm comiiiiing!
I'm coming again and again from having his unprotected dick creampie me!
Page 14
This time, I'm fulfilling my duty of providing sex in the bath
I've prepared the swimsuit Gunzou loves so much, the one that leaves my pussy completely exposed
Aah! Don't move yet! I'm too sensitive!
I'm going to come already!
Cleaning up his body like I was his personal towel, hugging and kissing...
And so, I came again
My already overly stimulated body came countless times just from having him put it in
Page 15
Groping my ass, Gunzou picked up the pace, and started thrusting deep into my hole
Maybe because of the bath, I started moaning even more than usual
Noooooo! I'm coming agaaaaain!
I'm coming!
Before long, his cock pushed deep inside my womb and released its seed, coming
Pleasure spread through my pussy into my body, I felt so exhausted that I had to cling onto the bathtub to stay up
Page 16
Gunzou and Takao are having sex as usual
Hnn...mmph...!
They don't even care that I'm here
One day, I just started masturbating while peeking at them
Aauuh...!
As if trying to lure Takao's man away, I kept making lewd moans in the changing room, loud enough to be heard even in the hallway
...I want it... Gunzou's dick...
I'm a woman too...I can't take this anymore...
Page 17
Getting out of the bathroom, Takao just gave me a smile, seeing me there in the changing room
Aah...nnn
Looks like you were masturbating to us having sex
I'm coming!
Coming so suddenly...seems like the orgasm left you powerless and you couldn't escape in time
Maybe you need to be punished?
Page 18
You must shamefully beg for it as a punishment
G-gunzou... have sex with me
Even though you act embarrassed, that's way too bold for a begging speech. Try again!
D-Do it... please
U-use my virgin hole, I want to have sex with you! I want to become your woman!
Even though she's supposed to be a virgin, her pussy is twitching and leaking, trying to lure men inside
Could it be she let us find her on purpose to make this happen?
Page 19
Their passionate sex unfolded in front of my eyes, as if they were putting on a show for me
hnnn...!...ah!...ngh...
Gunzou would look my way at times, smiling mischievously
Iona kept moaning loudly, moving her hips and being much more sensitive than you'd expect from a virgin
E-even though it's my first time, it feels so good. Your cock is amazing, Gunzou!
Ahn! Aaaaah! noooo!
Getting to know the pleasure of watching Gunzou fucking another girl in front of me, I started stirring up my pussy
Page 20
Too concentrated on pleasuring myself, I was surprised to find my hands locked behind my back
What, are you masturbating while watching them? You sure are soaked... hehe
Who is this? Someone from the crew?!
N-no, I can feel something against my butt!
Lusty as usual, I see / I want to make you mine
Could it be, he has Gunzou's permission to do this? No way...am I going to be violated by someone else?!
No! ...but...why?
Even though I don't love him, the feeling of anticipation from knowing I'm going to get fucked... is making me so horny
Page 21
He started rubbing over my clit with his left hand, while his right took care of my nipples, caressing over my breasts
Hee, you sure got a nice ass. Maybe I should rub one out over it before I get to your pussy?
Ah, nno! It's coming out!
Hey now, are you wetting yourself? Or are you coming? / You sure are coming a lot, for someone getting raped
His hardened cock kept rubbing against my behind
My body, well versed in all kinds of sex with Gunzou, easily reacted to that stimulation
My body relaxed all of a sudden, and a lukewarm feeling started streaming down my thighs.
Did I... did I just wet myself?
Page 22
It's going inside me...
Woah, you're soaked! Not only that, you're tight... even though it's a used up pussy, it feels great
A raw cock, its shape and size completely different from Gunzou's
Aaaah...!
It's hitting my womb!
Do you like my cock? / I'm going to fuck you until your pussy is molded into the shape of my cock!
My pussy is going to be molded, it's going to be made into his cock's shape!
Noo, not so deep...!
It feels so good!
Page 23
Aaaah, my head is spinning
A huge cock is making me come... even though it's not Gunzou's!
Hehe, I'm already close. So? If you don't want me to come inside, take it out yourself
No... don't take it out!
Please come inside me!
Woah, you're getting so tight all of a sudden... / Oooh! Are you coming with an ahegao while getting your womb filled with cum? What a slut!
Aaah...I'm coming!
I'm coming!
A raw creampie is making me cooooome!
Page 24
Aaah... I really got fucked by a man that wasn't Gunzou...
Come on, suck every last drop out. This isn't over yet
Gotta take your ass next...and why not, maybe penetrate you in both holes at once with Gunzou / You're going to be our personal cumdumpster from now on
Not to mention, raw...
Thank you so much...
I can't live without cock anymore...
But I'm happy... to think that being used as a toy for men could feel this good
Please take care of your new cumdumpster, my dear admiral
Page 25
So it's finally over. This is the sixth volume from Kotonosha.
This time, I tried drawing something from "Arpeggio of the blue steel"
Takao is so cute!
With the anime coming out, a lot of people are sure to get their hands on her, so I got a head start (ahah)
I'm looking forward to the anime, but I can't help but wonder about the continuation of the story. I hope Takao's revival comes soon enough. Oh well, I'd be happy with her appearing at all.
This is all Takao's imagination by the way, imagine that she's been hacked by Iona halfway through and that's why the story changes, ahah
It took me quite some time to make the color pin-up, but I still have some hang-ups about it. Oh well, I'll try again next time.
Thank you for buying this book, see you next time!
(Mutsumi Masato)
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