[X] My Assistant

[pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/eENxCfKt

Zoku Gokkan no Jikkenshitsu script for your QA consideration!

Edit: This had depressingly little Nami at the end of the day.

This post has been edited by Ogodei-Khan: May 16 2016, 03:14

[pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/eENxCfKt

Zoku Gokkan no Jikkenshitsu script for your QA consideration!

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/tpfaio76...+Proofread.docx

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/tpfaio76...+Proofread.docx

Amended!

[pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/hK2AgqXP

Claim forthcoming.

[pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/eENxCfKt

Zoku Gokkan no Jikkenshitsu script for your QA consideration!

Edit: This had depressingly little Nami at the end of the day.

Excellent. Sorry about the Nami, but if you are up to continuing this, his two remaining OP dojins seem Nam-focused, see here

Excellent. Sorry about the Nami, but if you are up to continuing this, his two remaining OP dojins seem Nam-focused, see here

Meh, pre-2Y Nami. Doesn't float the boat the same way at all (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif) .

I understand (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

If you find a OP 2YK Nami dojin you'd like to see released, I am sure we can add it to our editing queue. For now, editing bounty for your current work is

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14443

Here is the translation of https://e-hentai.org/g/730157/a5ae4858cc/

 Translation_of_Xenogears_Scribblebook_part_6.txt ( 7.81k ) Number of downloads: 49


If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to PM me.

Here is the translation of https://e-hentai.org/g/730157/a5ae4858cc/

 Translation_of_Xenogears_Scribblebook_part_6.txt ( 7.81k ) Number of downloads: 49


If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to PM me.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/03ouirjx...+Proofread.docx

I'd like to accept the translation bounty on [LemonMaiden (Aoi Masami)] Kyuusei Maryoku Chuudoku. Further info has been sent via PM.

TL script for : https://e-hentai.org/g/855749/88b9468296/

TL note: Most of the bubbles and text I didn't TL are basically just heavy breathing sounds. Pretty much all either ha ha or hu hu, not much variety there.


Crack, by Angyadow

Pg03

Fan Fiction of "Sword Art Online"
Angyadow presents / X-rated
case of "Sinon"

Crack


Pg04

This time it's the GGO route after the story in [Difference]. Addressing the question of how the

VR engine handles and replays [pleasure] and how it is felt by the player, this aims to follow

the line of [in the end it's still incoming signals from the external VR system].
[It's due to internal changes in the player's environment and mental state] will be use for the

ALO side some time in the future...

That annoying stuff aside, Sinon is cute! Let's go on with that in mind.


Pg05 F for frame, S for Sinon, M for mobchara/male

F1
S:...
That's ok...
F2
M: Of course not right, for someone to suddenly ask to touch your boobs like that...
M: Wait really?
S: ...Mmm
M: It's ok? Boobs!?
F3
S right: Stop saying it so loudly
S left: Just once, no more no less! I'll keep my word!
S no bubble bot: I probably should have stopped him right
F4
Box: Right, just this time

Pg06

F1
Box right: By touching this avatar
Box left: The Amusphere sends signals to the brain
F2
Box right: manufactured sensations
Box left: from the system
F3
Pleasure gets forced onto me...
F4
Box right: If just by touching the avatar myself is like this...
Box left: ...What would happen
If someone else were to do the touching

Pg07

F1
Box right: Someone else...
Box left: ... wait
F2
Box: Why did that guy suddenly come to mind!
F3
M: ...Sinon?
S: It's nothing!
We can't do it here, let's move elsewhere.
F4
Box right: That's right
Box left: It's not like I'm like that with him
F5
M right: Sinon...
M left: It's really ok?

Pg08

F1
M: If I touch you, the harassment code won't... right
S right: That won't happen
S left: I'll properly turn it off
F2
Box: It'll be alright
F3
Box: Just a little
Just testing it out a little - that's why
F4
S right: See
S left: Hurry up and touch them

Pg09

F1
M: Ok then
Excuse me...
F4-5
Box right: It's...
Box left: What's
this...

Pg10

F1
Box right right: Compared to touching myself
Box right: It's an order of magnitude off
Box left: It's like the most climatic point... but
Box left left: coming in right from the start
F2
Box: This...
I...
F3
S right: Ok now stop!!
S left: The end!!
M: Eh....?
F4
M: Just a little more
Just one more time!
S right right: Annoying!!
S right: Only once!! Nothing more nothing less!!
S left: If you don't comply I'll report you

Pg11

F1
Box: ...No good
F2
Box right: That's... not good
Box left: Something like that...
F3
Box right: If I keep getting a signal like that
Box center: I'll end up wasting away
Box left: I won't be able to go back
F4
Box right: So... why
Box left: Do I feel...
It's not enough...

Pg12

F1
Box: Just this time
F3
Box: It's alright
F4
Box: It's just this once
...that's why

Pg13

F1
Box: Just this once
F3
Box: Just...

Pg14

F1
Box right: Just this once
Box left: ...right
F2
M: Aah...ah
Incredible, Sinon
F3
M: It's clamping my dick
like it's sucking it in...
F4
M: It feels...
really good
Box: This is...
some quicksand I've gotten into

Pg15

F1
M: The softness enveloping me
This is...
Uwah
Box right: But...
This isn't real
Boxleft: This feeling
F2
Box right: A bit...
Just... a bit more
Box center: I'll try it
Box left: ...meh
F3
Box: Ah...
He came
F4
Box: He came
On my back...

Pg16

F1-2
S: ...Ok
That's it for today
F4
S right: Wait!!
What are you...
M: ...
It's ok right, Sinon...
S left: What is。。。 Get off!
F5
M right: We've come this far
I want to get inside Sinon...
M center: Become one with Sinon
M left: I...

Pg17

F1
S right: Noo... Wait
S center: You can't
S left: STop...
Nooo...
ooooooooo...
F3
Box: ...
He really... cmae in

Pg18

F1
M: Sinon...
Sinon
Sinon...
Box right: What's... this
Box left: Even though he's doing it wildly
F2
S: Stop...
Pull out...
Box: The signals.. of pleasure
From there...
F3
Box right: Keep hitting
me
Box left: ee (Honestly this probably would get removed in English, shouldn't be too hard to erase this box during editing)

Pg19

F1
M: ... Coming
F2
Box: Stoooo.....ooop
F3
S: Noooooooooooo
ooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooo

Pg20

F1
Box: ...Now what
F2
M right right: ...did it
M right: in... Sinon
M left: now
ha
M left left: haha
F3
Box right: I...
Box left: picked up...
something like this
F4
Box: Just great...

Pg21

Text: Everytime I fill in an empty page with a rough of the front cover. Oops.
I was wondering whether to reveal that or keep quiet.

Pg22

- And that was the GGO route proceeding from the previous work [Difference]
- I spent some time deciding whether to do the ALO or GGO route but in the chose to prioritize GGO because I felt like drawing the GGO outfits... Now it looks like this is going to drag quite long. The end goal including the ALO route now looks so far away. Oops.
- ...heck, if I'm going to extend this, then was there a point brusqely squeezing in a sex scene? Feels like I could give it a pass next time. Hmm
- In any case, Sinon in prone position is JUSTICE
- Anyways that's all

PR note: All corrections are marked in red. Text that needs to be deleted is also marked with a strikethrough.

TL script for : https://e-hentai.org/g/855749/88b9468296/

TL note: Most of the bubbles and text I didn't TL are basically just heavy breathing sounds. Pretty much all either ha ha or hu hu, not much variety there.
Crack, by Angyadow

Pg03

Fan Fiction of "Sword Art Online"
Angyadow presents / X-rated
case of "Sinon"

Crack
Pg04

This time it's the GGO route after the story in [Difference]. Addressing the question of how the

VR engine handles and replays [pleasure] and how it is felt by the player, this aims to follow

the line of [in the end it's still incoming signals from the external VR system].
[It's due to internal changes in the player's environment and mental state] will be used for the

ALO side some time in the future...

That annoying stuff aside, Sinon is cute! Let's go on with that in mind.
Pg05 F for frame, S for Sinon, M for mobchara/male

F1
S:...
That's ok...
F2
M: Of course it's not right, for someone to suddenly ask to touch your boobs like that...
M: Wait, really?
S: ...Mmm
M: It's ok? Boobs!?
F3
S right: Stop saying it so loudly
S left: Just once, no more no less! I'll keep my word!
S no bubble bot: I probably should have stopped him, right?
F4
Box: Right, just this time

Pg06

F1
Box right: By touching this avatar
Box left: The Amusphere sends signals to the brain
F2
Box right: manufactured sensations
Box left: from the system
F3
Pleasure gets forced onto me...
F4
Box right: If just by touching the avatar myself it's like this...
Box left: ...What would happen
If someone else were to do the touching?

Pg07

F1
Box right: Someone else...
Box left: ... wait
F2
Box: Why did that guy suddenly come to mind!?
F3
M: ...Sinon?
S: It's nothing!
We can't do it here, let's move elsewhere.
F4
Box right: That's right
Box left: It's not like I'm like that with him
F5
M right: Sinon...
M left: Is it really ok?

Pg08

F1
M: If I touch you, the harassment code won't... right?
S right: That won't happen
S left: I'll properly turn it off
F2
Box: It'll be alright
F3
Box: Just a little
Just testing it out a little - that's why
F4
S right: See
S left: Hurry up and touch them

Pg09

F1
M: Ok then
Excuse me...
F4-5
Box right: It's...
Box left: What's
this...

Pg10

F1
Box right right: Compared to touching myself
Box right: It's an order of magnitude off
Box left: It's like the most climactic point... but
Box left left: coming in right from the start
F2
Box: This...
I...
F3
S right: Ok, now stop!!
S left: The end!!
M: Eh....?
F4
M: Just a little more
Just one more time!
S right right: Annoying!!
S right: Only once!! Nothing more, nothing less!!
S left: If you don't comply I'll report you

Pg11

F1
Box: ...No good
F2
Box right: That's... not good
Box left: Something like that...
F3
Box right: If I keep getting a signal like that
Box center: I'll end up wasting away
Box left: I won't be able to go back
F4
Box right: So... why
Box left: Do I feel...
It's not enough...

Pg12

F1
Box: Just this time
F3
Box: It's alright
F4
Box: It's just this once
...that's why

Pg13

F1
Box: Just this once
F3
Box: Just...

Pg14

F1
Box right: Just this once
Box left: ...right
F2
M: Aah...ah
Incredible, Sinon
F3
M: It's clamping my dick
like it's sucking it in...
F4
M: It feels...
really good
Box: This is...
some quicksand I've gotten into

Pg15

F1
M: The softness enveloping me
This is...
Uwah
Box right: But...
This isn't real
Boxleft: This feeling
F2
Box right: A bit...
Just... a bit more
Box center: I'll try it
Box left: ...meh
F3
Box: Ah...
He came
F4
Box: He came
On my back...

Pg16

F1-2
S: ...Ok
That's it for today
F4
S right: Wait!!
What are you...
M: ...
It's ok right, Sinon...
S left: What is。。。 Get off!
F5
M right: We've come this far
I want to get inside Sinon...
M center: Become one with Sinon
M left: I...

Pg17

F1
S right: Noo... Wait
S center: You can't
S left: STop...
Nooo...
ooooooooo...
F3
Box: ...
He really... came in

Pg18

F1
M: Sinon...
Sinon
Sinon...
Box right: What's... this
Box left: Even though he's doing it wildly
F2
S: Stop...
Pull out...
Box: The signals.. of pleasure
From there...
F3
Box right: Keep hitting
me
Box left: ee (Honestly this probably would get removed in English, shouldn't be too hard to erase this box during editing)

Pg19

F1
M: ... Coming
F2
Box: Stoooo.....ooop
F3
S: Noooooooooooo
ooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooo

Pg20

F1
Box: ...Now what
F2
M right right: ...did it
M right: in... Sinon
M left: now
ha
M left left: haha
F3
Box right: I...
Box left: picked up...
something like this
F4
Box: Just great...

Pg21

Text: Every time I fill in an empty page with a rough of the front cover. Oops.
I was wondering whether to reveal that or keep quiet.

Pg22

- And that was the GGO route proceeding from the previous work [Difference]
- I spent some time deciding whether to do the ALO or GGO route, but in the end chose to prioritize GGO because I felt like drawing the GGO outfits... Now it looks like this is going to drag out for a long time. The end goal including the ALO route now looks so far away. Oops.
- ...heck, if I'm going to extend this, then was there a point in brusquely squeezing in a sex scene? Feels like I could give it a pass next time. Hmm
- In any case, Sinon in prone position is JUSTICE
- Anyways, that's all

Got a script for https://e-hentai.org/g/732318/1d79c9dde6/ from an anonymous TL. See attachment

 Naruto.txt ( 26.64k ) Number of downloads: 46


Editing bounty for Naruto script https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14578

--

other recent editing bounties

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14507 (Xenogears)
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14583 (SOA)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jun 17 2016, 16:44

Okay, I've just finished the English script translation for [LemonMaiden (Aoi Masami)] Kyuusei Maryoku Chuudoku (bounty page here). Script is here, in case people need it for something: [pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/e4bDV8VC. I'm new to bounty translations, so if there's something else I'm supposed to do, questions for me etc., feel free to reply here or drop me a PM.

Thanks. While we are waiting for the proofs, here's the editing bounty

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14623

Thanks. While we are waiting for the proofs, here's the editing bounty

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14623

Just thought I'd mention that the gallery you've linked in the editing bounty is dead/removed (or, at least, that's how it's showing up for me), which might slow down getting an editor. There are a couple of alternative raws available on the other site (which the forum here apparently won't let me link to?), each with different page numbering; my script has a link to the version I based my page numbers on, in case you want to add that to the bounty description instead of the broken one.

This post has been edited by backupeagle: Jun 23 2016, 04:29

I would like to help, but I have to resit one of my exams so I can hardly edit anything for now, sorry ^^

Just thought I'd mention that the gallery you've linked in the editing bounty is dead/removed (or, at least, that's how it's showing up for me), which might slow down getting an editor. There are a couple of alternative raws available on the other site (which the forum here apparently won't let me link to?), each with different page numbering; my script has a link to the version I based my page numbers on, in case you want to add that to the bounty description instead of the broken one.

It doesn't mean the gallery was removed, it's just on the sad panda side. But you have a point, new bounty hunter probably don't know about it, maybe using the ex link instead of the g.e- would be a good idea.

Got a script for https://e-hentai.org/g/732318/1d79c9dde6/ from an anonymous TL. See attachment

 Naruto.txt ( 26.64k ) Number of downloads: 46


Editing bounty for Naruto script https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14578

--

other recent editing bounties

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14507 (Xenogears)
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14583 (SOA)

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/11fbcle6...+Proofread.docx

Okay, I've just finished the English script translation for [LemonMaiden (Aoi Masami)] Kyuusei Maryoku Chuudoku (bounty page here). Script is here, in case people need it for something: [pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/e4bDV8VC. I'm new to bounty translations, so if there's something else I'm supposed to do, questions for me etc., feel free to reply here or drop me a PM.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/k05z5x3r...+Proofread.docx
I think I only found one mistake.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/k05z5x3r...+Proofread.docx
I think I only found one mistake.

Glad to hear there's only one issue! I was kind of nervous, since it's my first translation submitted here. If I'm not wrong, your one problem was with 'any more', which you changed to 'anymore', right? I'm... not sure I agree, at least personally. My usual view has been that 'any more' is the correct spelling, while 'anymore' is a typo or common misconception, so I did a brief Google search. Apparently 'anymore' is only considered correct in US English, which would explain it; I'm Australian, so I tend towards AU English (which is generally the same as UK English). [alt-usage-english.org] One source I looked at implies that your change would be appropriate in US English, but would cause a previously-correct phrase to now be incorrect in any other form of the language; [www.elearnenglishlanguage.com] another source notes something similar, though also notes "when in doubt, choose any more – it is always correct".

Is there any expectation or rule saying that EHCove translations should adhere specifically to US English rules? If so, then I'll happily sign off on your change and chalk my complaint down to regional differences; otherwise, I don't really see the need to make changes just to prioritise Americans over other English speakers. Not a huge issue either way, but those are just my two cents. Either way, thanks for the proofreading (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

This post has been edited by backupeagle: Jun 27 2016, 09:07

Fair enough, I'm just more used to US English myself. When you put it that way, it's not actually a mistake.