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Hey again! Deadly Sins 19 is finished, heres the link:

[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?91du4wghswx4648

And here's the plain script:


Seven Deadly Boobs
Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.19
Muronaga Chashu

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Page 3(Contents)

ハイブリッド通信vol.19
Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.19

目次
Contents


第１１話　のっけから一番のムチャする大パイ
Chapter 11 - 'This was Absurd from the very beginning' Deadly Boobs

第１２話　パイじゃないけどマーリン大好きだから許してな大パイ
Chapter 12 - 'There's no Boobs, But I Love Merlin so Please Forgive Me' Deadly Boobs

第１３話　いつもの大パイ
Chapter 13 - The Usual Deadly Boobs

第１４話　そこは着衣パイズリだろ！な大パイ
Chapter 14 - 'Clothed Paizuri!' Deadly Boobs

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SFX
つん - poke, tap
わな - tremble, wriggle
ポポポ - Blush
やぁーっ - Well...
ばるるん～ - Badoing!
パチュ - Snap (Think he just clicked his fingers)
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第１１話　のっけから一番のムチャする大パイ
'This was Absurd from the very beginning' Deadly Boobs

ねュキング一生懸命守ってくれたお礼だよ？
"Hey King, as thanks for you protecting me so much..."

本当にいいの？ディアンヌ。。。
"Are you sure this is ok, Dianne?..."

もちろん！それとも団長のことが気になる？
"Of course! Or are you worried about what Captain will think?"

いやっ。。。！そうじゃないけど。。。
"N-no! Not that..."

それともやっぱり大きいままより
"Or is it because of how big I am?...

そっそんな！
"I-it's nothing like that!"

そんなことないよ。。。むしろ。。。
"It's not like that at all...If anything..."

『オッパイはとにかくデカいほどいい』派のオイラには。。。
"I'm on the side of 'The bigger the boobs are the better!'" (I might have got that wrong, he might be saying he's on the side of "Any size boobs are great!", but given he only seems to have eyes for Dianne...)

むしろこっちがいいんです！！
"So your boobs are the best!!"

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SFX
きゃん～ - Kya! Hya!
ズボッ - Shove, Splat, bang
むぎゅー - squeeeeze
くんかくんか - Sniff Sniff
びくっ - twitch
ああああは - aAaaaaaAah...
うひっ - hehe, ehehe
チュパ - suuck
ペロ - lick
ふる - quiver, tremble
ぶらーん - Booing
はぁ - huuuu (breathing in)
ぐぐぐぐ。。。 - fwuuck!
ズッ！！- push, press
ポン - Pop!
ぶぱぁっ - Uhaaaaa!
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とうっ！！
"Wheeee!!"

ディアンヌのデカちくび～
"Dianne's enormous nipples～"

おっぱいのちくび～
"My nipples～!!!"

こんなところに隠れて。。。
"So you were hiding here were you..."

いけない子だなぁ
"You naughty thing～"

こうしてやるっ！
"I'll have to do this then!"

キング。。。こっち。。。こっちも。。。
"King...Can you do...the other side too?..."

むふふ～ディアンヌの言う事なら
"Muhuhu～ As it's you-"

喜んで！！
"Take This!!"

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SFX
でろぉ - Uwaaa
はあ - Haa
ちょは - squeeze
じゅるじゅる - drip, drool
ぶるっ、ぶる - bounce, boing
むにゃ - grope
ぐにゃ - press, knead
ぶにっ - squeeze
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どうだいディアンヌ。。。
"How was it, Dianne?..."

うん。。。すごく。。。
"It...was great..."

気持ちいいよ。。。
"It felt...really good..."

でも。。。もっと。。。
"But...more..."

もっといっぱいしてもいいよ？
"Can we do it...even more?"

もう素直に言えばいいのに
"You don't have to be so shy about it～..."

オイラはヤル気マンマンなんだから
"I'm still brimming to do it as well after all"

改めてディアンヌのこの爆乳を。。。
"I'll take your enormous boobs..."

全身で堪能しちゃうモンね！！
"and enjoy myself fully!!"

うほーっオッパーイ！オッパーイ！！
"Uhaaaa! Boobs! Booobs!!"

すっ。。。
"A..."

すごっ。。。すごい。。。！！
"A...Amazing...!!

ディアンヌ～（のオッパイ）
"Dianne's boobs..."

最高だよーっ！！
"They're the best!!"

アキラのヤオリちゃうねんからー （？？？）
(I don't really know what this is talking about. I thought King might be giving some reason why Dianne's boobs are great, but doesn't seem to be the case at all...)

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SFX
ふる - quiver, tremble
びく - twitch
ギュウウ - streetch
くるっ - fwuuuuu (wind like sound)
あぱはっ- Awaaaaa!
ボンッ - Boing!
ドプーン！- Splat!
ぷはー - gasp
は - Haa, aah, haaa
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あぁっ。。。!キングの体がおっぱいの中に。。。！？
"Aaah...! You're inside my boobs...!?"

この果てしない柔らかさ。。。！！
"This endless softness..."

そしてこの弾力！！
"This springiness!!"

そしてもちろんこの大きさ。。。！！
"And of course, this size!!"

オッパイダーイブ！！
"Boob Dive!!"

ギャッ
"Kyaa!"

ぷはーっ！！これはまさに。。。
"Puhaaa!! This is just like..."

乳肉の海水浴やーっ！！
"Swimming in an ocean of boobs!!"

んもう。。。キングったら～
"Ehehe～...King～..."

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SFX
はあ - Haa
キリ - staare
ゴン - thud, badum
ドキ - Blush
チッ - wag, shake (wagging his finger)
ひっ、あっ、あひっ,　ひゃうん - Hiii! Ah! Aaaa, Hyaaa～
にちゃっ - slick, squelch
ぶわあ - Boing
ずぷんっ - shove
ふん！！ - Huu!
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それじゃあそろそろ。。。
"Well then, I guess it's about time..."

セックスしようか！ディアンヌ！！
"Lets have sex! Dianne!!"

で。。。でもこのままだとサイズ的に難しいんじゃ。。。
"B-but, the size difference is a little..."

違うんだなそれが。。。
"Your wrong..."

こっちの世界じゃ常識だよ？
"That sort of common sense doesn't exist here!"

きゃはうん
"Kyaaaa!～"

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SFX
はぁ - Haa
パン - fwack, slap
ビク - twitch
ジュブ、ジュプ - clap, slap, shove
ギュギュ - squeeeeze
ドピュッ - spuurt
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片方だけってのはよくないよね！？
"Only doing one side is bad right?"

ほら！こっちも！！
"I'll do this side too!"

あっ。。。キングっ！おっぱいが！
"Aah! King! My boobs!"

ああっ！！スゴイっ。。。！！オイラと。。。
"Aaah! Amazing...! Me and..."

オイラとオッパイがひとつに。。。！！
"Me and your boobs, we're becoming one!!"

ディアンヌっ　もっと。。。もっとオイラをギュって。。。！！
"More Dianne! squeeze me tighter!!"

ああっ！オッパイが
"Aaah! My boobs are"

おかしくなっちゃう。。。！！
"My boobs are going crazy!!"

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SFX
ぬぽっ～ - drool, drip, slip
はぁ - Haaa
ヌヌヌ。。。 - Zzzz
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はぁはぁ。。。たっぷり。。。
Haaaaa...so good..."

やっぱりすごいや
"As always...it's so good..."

ねえキング。。。やっぱりボク
"Hey King...My..."

まんこにもオチンチンほしい。。。
"My pussy really want's a dick..."

ねえキング。。。
"Hey King...?"

よーしオイラ頑張っちゃうぞ
"Alll right then! I'll try my best!"

恥ずかしいしみ
"Embarassing Stain"

今回はちょっとサービスしたのだ
"This time, I helped him out a little"

やったねキング～セックスできたね！
"We did it King! We had sex!"

タートルネックディアンヌ
Turtleneck Dianne

おまけその１
Bonus 1

やっぱディアンヌかわいいよーでも描くのむむいよー　(that does say むむい right? I'm going to take that to be a colloqial　or 難しい)
"Dianne's so cuteーbut drawing her is difficult..."

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SFX
ふる - twitch
ビクッ - twitch, shiver
バチ - Crackle!
あーん、あ - Aaahn
むん、むあ - slick, fwick
もぐ - Nom, Om
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第１２話　パイじゃないけどマーリン大好きだから許してな大パイ
Chapter 12 - 'There's no Boobs, But I Love Merlin so Please Forgive Me' Deadly Boobs

七つの大罪　VS　聖騎士...
Seven Deadly Sins VS Holy Knights - Extra Version

さすがなマーリン。。。
"I'd expected no less from you..."

なんという舌使い。。。！
"Your tongue's amazing...!"

お姉ちゃ。。。ん
"Sis..."

なんかいつもより激しい
"Your a little more...intense than usual"

七つの大罪...今回は負けませんよ？
"Deadly Sin....I won't lose to you again..."

フン！無駄無駄～
"Hah! It's Futile～"

ジールったらまたこんなにクサくして。。。
"Zeal...you smell so dirty～"

ちゃんと洗ってるの？
"Have you been washing properly～?"

んもういけない子～
"What a dirty boy～"

やっぱり
"No way..."

私のジールへの愛情が負けるはずがな。。。
"...could anyone beat my love for Zeal"

お姉ちゃんごめんなエ
"Sorry Sis..."

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SFX
ドスン - thud, thump
ぐりぐりぐり - rubrub
ぴく - twitch
うーッ - Ruuuub
あ - ag!
ぎゅう - Press
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いつの間にか騎乗スタイルに！！
"C-Cowgirl!?"

ぶごっ。。。ぶひっ。。。ん
"U-ugo...hiii...n"

そっそれなら私も。。。
"In that case..."

うわっお姉ちゃん！
"Uwaa!? Sis!?"

ほらジール！
"Zeal!"

ほらほらほら！
"How is it!? How is it!?"

八ッ！！
"Ah!"

既に次々と別の体勢に。。。！！
"You've already moved on!?"

あららどうしたの？
"Oh? Whats wrong～?"

変な声出しちゃて
"You're making such strange noises"

しかも一国の王相手に
"With a King, no less!"

王様で？イケメンで？天才で？変態ってか？
"Is a King, a hot guy, a genius, supposed to be this perverted?"

あんな恥ずかしい格好まで。。。！！
"In such an embarassing position!?"

はい。。。マーリンの犬で＿しがり屋の　（何だそれ！？No idea what one of the kanji are, so left it with an underscore in its' place >.<')
"I'm sorry! I'm perverted! I'm Merlins..." (Had to wing it a little with this, but I think it's still fairly close to what I think is being said)

変態王アーサーですっ。。。！！
"...Perverted King Arthur!"

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SFX
ジョボ - slop, splat
ぶりん - boing
チュン - squeeze
パチュ - Slap
ニュチッ - Smack
ぱっ - Ping, poof
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さあでは
"Well then..."

仕上げといくか
"...Lets finish this"

そして圧倒的尻肉による尻ズリからの。。。
"This overwhelming ass..."

尻肉鷲掴みっっ完全密着スタマ！！
"Eagle grip (Ass version)! Ass meat masturbation!" (This line...now sounds a little strange XD)

しかもいつの間にか動いてるのはアーサーの方！！
"You've gotten into it quickly! Arthur!"

あ、いきろう！いきろう！
"Ah! Cumming! Cumming!"

そしてもはやほったらかし！！
"Saying that, you're finishing a little quick!"

え！？なっと！！
"Eh! Ah...!"

しかもフィニッシュさせない！！
"I'm not gonna let you!"

。。。完敗だわ
"...I've completely lost"

お姉ちゃんこれ何の勝負なの？
"Sis, what sort of match was this?"

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SFX
ニョホ - grin
ぽよ - spring
モニュ - grope
ギュッ - tweak, rub
タポン - jiggle
にゅ - press
ぐにぃ - knead
ぼに - squeeze, rub
んああ、あ - Haaa, Aaaah
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第１３話　いつもの大パイ
Chapter 13 - The Usual Deadly Boobs

本当にオッパイがお好きなんですね～
"You really do love boobs don't you～"

ふはは。。。
"Mwuhaha..."

バレちゃあしょうがない
"I've been discovered, have I～?"

もう誰だってしってますよ～
"Everyone knows already～"

だってこんな。。。
"But, really..."

この若さでこの軟乳！！
"This young, soft breast flesh!"

それぷるんぷるん～
"and this bouncyness～"

ほれ指が入ってくよ？
"Look! My finger's going straight in!"

ほらっ！こんなにぐにゅぐにゅのむにむに～
"And this squidgy, pillowyness"

そんなに褒められると照れちゃいます
"Ah, stop it! You'll make me blush if you keep praising me～"

うひー！こんなっ。。。
"Uhaaa! This..."

こんなにズブズブ！！
"They're being swallowed up!"

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SFX
ドド - Rub
ぎゅー - Pinch
ぷッ - press
ぼにゅうー - boing
タプ - pull, squeeze
あ、んあ、はあ - Ah, Hnaaa, Haaa
キュ - tweak
トプン - squeeze, press
はィーン～ - Hiiii, Haaaa
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むふふ。。。これがり。。。
"Muhuhu...these are some..."

じゃなかった
"...No, never mind"

エリザベスの
"These are Elizabeths"

。。。聖乳！！
"Saintly Boobs!"

メリオダス様。。。先っぽ。。。
"Meliodas-sama...the tips..."

乳首もおねがいします
"Can you do my nipples too?"

ん？これか？
"Hmm? Here?"

これなのか！？
"Or do you mean here?"

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SFX
ちぱ Slurp
ムキッ - squeeze
ちゅぅー, ちゅー - Suuck
あん、あ、はあ - Ah, aahn, haa
ポンッ - pop
ブル - shake, tremble
ミユル - rub, squeeze
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あぁ。。。メリオダス。。。さま
"Aah...Meliodas...sama"

おっお上手ですぅ
"I-it feels really good"

そうか？それはエリザベスがこんな
"Oh? In that case, I'll..."

こんなやらしいオッパイ
"I'll make your lewd boobs..."

してるからだろ？
"Feel even better!"

んーっ！！
"Mmmmmmnnnn!"

んまぁーーーーい！！
"Dewishous!"

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SFX
がばっ - slick
ドッ - blush
ジューン～ - drool
ミャッキハ - twitch
ポン - pulse
ずぶ - shove
パン - clap, slap
たぷん - boing
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。。。とオッパイばっかりと見せかけて。。。
"...Ah, by the way, it's not just boob's i'm into..."

エリザベスのおパンツ
"Elizabeth's underwear"

キャッ！いつの間に！？
"Kyaa! When did you...!?"

ね？いいだろ？リ。。。エリザベスぅ
"Hey, it's fine right? Elizabeeeeth～"

メ。。。
"If..."

メリオダス様がそう言うなら。。。
"If you really want to..."

。。。どうぞ
"...You can"


召し上がってください～
"Enjoy yourself as much as you want～"

よぅし。。。そうと決まれば！
"Ok! If thats the case!"

メリオダス様のモノが私の。。。
"Your thing is..."

私の中にッ。。。
"Plunging inside me..."

あっ～ダッ～メッ～メリッ～
"Ah! Aah! Me-Melio～"

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SFX
はあ、んああ、は、あ - haaa, aaahn, ah
ユサッ - shake, boing
ミュッ, ブッ - fwuck, slap
むぎゅう - rub tweak
にゅう - squeeze
ビク - Twitch, throb
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すごいっ！！
"Amazing!"

これがエリザベスのロイヤルマンコ！！
"This is Elizabeths sacred pussy!"

あっメリッ。。。さま
"Ah-Melio...sama"

オッ。。。オッパ。。。！！
"M...More...!"

オッパイも。。。！！
"More!"

オッパイもっともんで下さい～
"Fondle my breasts even more～!"

うっ。。。ダメだ！！
"Uh...I'm gonna...!"

もう。。。！！
"No...!"

私もっ。。。
"I think I'm also..."

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SFX
ビクッ - throb
ドピュシャア - Spurt
ガッ - tremble
くっちゃ - snort
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あひッ～あひっ～イッ～イッ～
"Ah! Ah! Aaaah! Hiiiii～!

イッちゃいますうぅっ～
"Cuumiinng～!"

。。。っていう
"By the wa-"

夢を見たんだろ
"That was such a great dream!" (Not sure why Hawk dreamt that meliodas was having fun with elizabeth and not him, but... >.<)

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SFX
はあ - Haa
ずぼっ - shove, dig
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第１４話　そこは着衣パイズリだろ！な大パイ
Chapter 14 - 'Clothed Paizuri!' Deadly Boobs

いただくぜお前のカラだ。。。
"I'll be taking my fill..."

んっ～
"Hnn～!

に隠したコイツをな
"of these things you hid in your clothes"

これだから○リコンは。。。
"I told you we shouldn't-"

殺すぞ
"Shut up, I'll kill you"

よくわからないよ、このみんなはもったっなよばけ さググってみよう！
"I don't know why, but it seemed to good to pass up drawing this! Now, go read the actual 'Seven Deadly Sins' series!"


(What strange dreams Ban has!)
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Credits
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奥付 - Publication Credits (Publisher Notes/Data/Credits)
ハイブリッド通信vol.19 - Hybrid Tsuushin Vol. 19
発行日 - Date of publication
発行 - Publisher
ハイブリッド事務室 - Hybrid Office
HP - Homepage
著者 - Author
Muronaga Chashu
印刷所 - Printed
しまや出版様 - Shimaya Publications



Enjoy (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) And thanks in advance for proofreading!

This post has been edited by peregrine150: Sep 24 2015, 13:24

Excellent; editing bounty for that is now at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13132

And the Pretty Cure editing bounty is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13124

Hmmm, all our proofreaders are not very active, I'll see what I can do!

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 25 2015, 04:35

Hmmm, all our proofreaders are not very active, I'll see what I can do!

This....

This....

All proofreaders PMed, posted in proofreading thread, posted a proofreading bounty. The only thing I can do if there is no volunteers to help is to proofread myself, which I'll do for any scripts we get an editor for.

I accepted the bounty for [Ozashiki (Sunagawa Tara)] NINJA EXTREME 3 (NARUTO)

Here' the script: [pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/Ue1nuf9y

Page 04
Hey Sasuke...!

You've come, Karin...

What are you calling me here for?

Kuu- Sasuke is such a fine man today too~

So... What do you want?


page 05
I just thought...

I'd want to be alone with you...

Heh?

Wh... Wha-Wha-Wha-Wha-Wha-

What are you saying all of sudden?!


I finally aware of my own feeling...

For me, it can only be you...

What was that just now...

It can't possibly be...


Page 06
Waa-

Ah...

Sa-Sasuke...

You're... not Sasuke!

Haa... Correct.

How troublesome... Your ability that is.

Kukuku...

This annoying chakra's feeling...

You're...!


Page 07
Suigetsu! I knew it!

Haha. That Sasuke really caught you off guard, huh?

If only it wasn't for that sensing ability of yours.

What the hell... is this...

Kuu...

My body-

You took in a little of my body fluid while I'm in this state before

It's full of poison and chemical, you know...

Your neck was full of opening so I can easily inject it inside.

Haa!

Don't worry. That poison won't kill you.

However, you won't be able to move freely for a while.

You always act cute in front of Sasuke, and it really pisses me off...

Gu...uu!

That's why I decided to punish you a bit...


Page 08
Boss Suigetsu!

Ah... You guys are here.

Hehe

As expected of our boss, can incapacitate Karin so easily.

Th-These guys... are being held in the South hideout... What are they doing here?!

Don't be afraid...

I trained them a bit before released them from the hideout...

I thought everyone would want to pay back for those absurdly things you've done to us ever since we were captured...

so I just fulfill their wish.

...It's just like that.

Have plenty of fun, Karin...


Page 09
You... Kuu!

St... Stop!

Nice.

The meat toilet is ready! Who first?

Da... Damn you!

I'll kill you... If you touch me even a little I'll kill all of you!

A--- It's useless.

You can't even move your body for the time being!

Come one, open her legs!

I spent a long time in prison and was really built-up. Let's get to it quickly!


Page 10
Hihihi

Ohoo! This pussy is smaller than I thought!

St... Stop! Stop it! Don't spread it!

Don't hold back. Hurry up and put a dick inside!

'Alright! Today you guys can ravage whichever hole you want to your heart's content!

Okay, first one!

Come on!

Aah!

Ooh! So tight!

This tightness is awesome!


Page 11
Fuu!

Fuu!

Hehehe, I'm going to come!

I'm gonna shoot a lot inside!

Uoooooh!

Oh... Ooh!

I came hell lot...!

Damn... she squeezed me out...!

Fuu--!

That felt so good--!

Guu...

'Alright! Next one!

At this rate we gonna flood her belly with cum soon!


Page 12
Oh- Ooh! Coming coming!!

Ubuu

Go... hoh!

Nmnnn

Come one! Tighten your pussy more!

I'm almost cumming!

Fuoo!

Ah... Coming! I'm comiiiiing!

Ubuu... mnn!

Nbuu!

Look at this sow!

She suddenly gets tight when I creampied her!

Come on! Drink it properly! Don't you dare to spit even one drop!

Splurt splurt


Page 13
Hey hey, look at her stupid face!

Hey! Don't sleep yet, wake up!

We've just only raped you a bit.

It's far from over yet!

Because you're our meat toilet now!


Page 14
Come on! Say how it feels in your shithole!

Uooooh! Cumming... I'm cumming!

Hehe... your butthole is pretty nice too...

Who's done go rest until your turn again.

We still have a lot of time to enjoy ourselves thoroughly!

Ah... Ah

No... I hate it...


Page 15
Suigetsu...

I don't see Karin anywhere...

Do you you where she is?

Well...

I don't know.

Really, where has she gone I wonder...


Page 16
I was called to Tsunade-sama [note: her name's written 網出 instead of 網手 like it supposed to be, but well, they're both pronounced "de" here so it doesn't really matter]


Page 17
Fufu... Finally, you're here! I really hate to wait.

Come one, hurry up and strip off everything! Today I'll milk you until your last drop.

It'll check this carefully...!

Nhaaa... Such amazing odor... not good... my head... is getting dizzy.


Page 18
First I'll treat it with my mouth! You need to let out a lot!

It's always busy here so I didn't get to drink any semen at all, so I've been craving for it!

So thick--- I need this!

Slurp---!

Nnm---!

Nm

Slurp

Nmoh


Page 19
Nm----!

Slurp-!

Sluuuurp

Fuwa- How was that? Felt good?

Hah-

Go one... cum! Shoot all your cock juice inside this mouth!

You can come anytime you want...

Hurry up let me drink it. Come on Come on come on!

Hah-

Hah-


Page 20
Nm-!

Nm-!

Slurp

Splurt

Splurt

Splurt

Twitch

Twitch

Haaaaa-!

What amazing amount. And this thickness really met my expectation.

But drinking cum directly from your cock is only the start!


Page 21
Come on, what are you waiting for?

The main show is from here on... You understand?

This place's been aching for a while now.

Hurry put your hard thing in!


Page 22
Thrust harder!

Nhaah! Shoot your semen as hard as you can inside!

Ha... ah... This is- so good-! it's hitting me deep inside!


Page 23
Nhaaaaah!

Splurt

Splurt

Ah... ha... Your creampie is the best after all!

Did my pussy feel good for you?

You made me cum so easily...

Today you can use me however you like... So don't hold back.

Because right now I'm not the Hokage, but your dedicated creampie meat toilet!


Page 24
Fuu.... you want to cum already?

Go on! Cum! Hurry, let me drink it.

I can feel it...! I want the smell of your thick semen spread all in my mouth!

I expected a lot this time.

I plan for Karin-san to be secretly being called Cock Juice Sommelier or Semen Mania in the South hideout, she drinks cum from subordinates and prisoners indifferently.


Page 25
This book is the third NARUTO story, but at first I thought would make this a separated book for Karin. But then the story became can't be fit in just one book, so I just throw the story into this shape.
In the Karin manga this time, I wanted to put more of the bite-marks on her body in the content before it ended.
...But I stopped because that's seem to be too much of a maniac. But there may still be a feeling that I want to draw it.
But after all, I don't really have time for all that.
And I'm still thinking about which Kunochi should I draw next time.
Anyway, thank you for purchasing this book.

Sunagawa Tara

Thanks, bounty accepted. Here are some comments from one of our established translators, which also serve as a good proofread for the first few pages

Page 4: "Kuu-" -> Kuu...!". "fine man" is a very literal reading. In this usage, you'd be better off just saying "hot" or "sexy" or something.

Page 5: Heh? -> HUH!?, I finally aware of my own feeling -> I finally realized my own feelings. Missing the EEEEEHH!? bubble at the end of the 2nd to last panel. Final panel is completely screwed up. It should be "This is completely impossible, but did he just..." "CONFESS to me......!?!"

page 6: Waa -> Wah!. "Correct" -> "Good grief..." or "Well now..."


I should also mention his atypical punctuation. Most translators translate "っ" or "ッ" at the ends of sentences as "!". The little "tsu" marks are emphatic, and English only has one mark that's at all similar. There are also a few spots where he translates something like "Haa-" instead of "Hah..." or "Haa...". The "ー" extending mark is legit in Japan. If it's at the end of a sentence, it's essentially a trailing mark, like ellipses (...).

It's certainly more right than wrong, but overall quality could be a bit better.

Editing bounty for this is now at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13191

First half of Love Dashi 6
https://e-hentai.org/g/128511/23644fe988/

Second half is still waiting for a TL https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13172

CODE

Love Dashi 6
by: Anonymous


Page 02

Even for Motoko's formerly virgin pussy, after slamming into it every day,

Sticking a dick in...

[black sfx = Squelch]

is pretty easy.

[thick black = Shove!]

[white sfx = Splat! + Squelch!]

Quit it...!

Don't stick it in!


page 03

Stop...!

[Splurt!]

[left of big sfx] Take this! I'm cumming inside!

[left of her face] Don't just fill in my insides so casually!

[top left sfx = Splurt x2]

Shut up! I'm cumming!

Stop! Not inside!

I'm cumming!

I'm cumming inside!


page 04

Even if you tell me not to cum inside, just what other purpose do you think your pussy has?

Don't ask me! Just hurry and PULL OUT!

Pull out? Sure, once my balls are empty!

I'm cumming into your pussy!

Nooo!

You've got to cum inside a pussy in order for you to be impregnated. Didn't you learn that in Health class?

You're mad! You've all gone crazy...!


page 05

There! Get pregnant!

P...

[sfx = Kah!]

Pucchi Moni...

MOTOKO!* [TL Note: Confused? "プッチモニ" was a Japanese all-girl pop idol group, branching off from the better-known "Morning Musume" group in 1999-2000 (when this doujin was drawn)]

Aaah! So hot! You're ejaculating right into my pussy!

I'm...I'm MATING with him!

I'll have children with a man I don't even like!


page 06

[bottom right] Here it comes, Motoko!

[bottom left] Uugh!

[panel 2, top right] I'm cumming!

[below mouth] Aau!

[bottom left of panel 2] Uu!

[panel 3, left] I'm gonna fill your womb...

[panel 4, bottom right] ...with every last drop of my seed! You'll be full of my milk!

You'll take it all!

Take it in your womb!

Get pregnant...!


page 07

Hnnnh! Injection of sperm into Motoko's womb, complete.

He...He's impregnated me...!

[small sfx at bottom right of panel 1 = Quiver x3]

I sure came a lot.

[panel 3, black = steam x2, thin black on ass = Kaplop!]

Uwaa! My thick stuff's coming out...


page 08

He's getting big in my mouth.

It's painful all the way to my throat...

I'm going to have to drink this man's semen again, aren't I...

Motoko's mouth...

[panel 3, far left] It feels so GOOD~! I'm gonna cum!

[bottom right] Motoko, I'm cumming!

[bottom left] I'm cumming!

[panel 4, top left] DRINK!

No! I won't swallow...!

[last panel, top right] I'm cumming in your mouth!

[upper left] Drink it!

[sfx = SPLUUUURT!]


page 09

Mnn! Mhhhh!

[panel 2, free sfx = Drip x3, sfx bubbles around throat = Gulp, sfx bubbles around balls = SPlurt + Spluuuurt]

Take the last of it on your face, Motoko.

GOOD! Here's your FACIAL!

So? How's it feel having a man's seed [left] all over your face?

Did it get you wet?


page 10

Stop...!

Not this sort of thing!

Marshmallow

Boob

Tit-Fuck!

Come on! I've squeezed out some more semen...

[thin white = Flop!, thick white = SPLURT! x2]

Out of m cock using Motoko's tits! Take this!!


page 11

My seed's welling up from my balls!

It's here, it's here...!

TORYAAA!

NOOOOO! STOOOP...!

Uaah! I totally came all over your face.

Your face, your tits...

You're completely soaked in semen, Motoko!


page 12

Nyahahahahaha!

Does that feel good~?

[sfx near hands = Squeeze!, sfx on leg and right of his hand + on his leg = Sway, sfx near feet = Clench!]


page 13

Aaah~!

Geez...!

Quit distracting me...!

Whatcha getting mad for!?

Sex is pretty fun, right...?

[Raise!]

Don't fuck with me! I'll teach you to behave...!

[SLAM!]


page 14

Ora!

Ora!

Ora!

Ora!

Ora!

[sfx are all slam!]

Huh~? Don't try to break me!

[white sfx = Boof! x2, tag = Pillow]

But when I'm in your pussy...

[tiny bubbles = Hah]

Your joking around not too cute.

Oh, all right~!

Let's do it right~!

I'll work with you!


page 15

Then...

I'm slammin into...

...that brown pussy...!

[top left] It's my first time, be gentler! (Lying)

AH!

[all sfx in mid page =Shove!]

TAKE THIS!

How's that, Indian girl? I'm diving all the way down to your womb!

No way!

If you fuck me this violently,

HYII!

...I'm gonna break!

[sfx at far right = Slam!]

Onii-chan's so big...!


page 016

Huh? [left] You were all soft earlier,

but now you've gotten [below] all hard inside me!

[sfx = Thrust!]

I got ecited, Suu-chan! Show me your tits!

[big sfx = Grab!, white sfx = Boing!, thin black sfx = Flop!]

Oh no! But...even Nii-sama hasn't seen these...! [NOTE: in context, she is obviously referring to her ACTUAL brother here, not this random dude]

No!

Don't look at my boobs...!


page 17

Your cock's growing bigger inside my pussy!

[far left] Is my pussy making you feel that good!?

[far right] Woah!

You're super tight!

[under his face] It's like you'll tear it off...!

You're so big!

[white sfx = Shudder!, black = SHOVE!]

You're bulging outward! Is it swelling up with your sperm?

It's slowly growing all the way to my womb! It hurts!!


page 18

[black sfx = Pull..., white = PLUNGE!]

[bubble below black sfx] I-I can't take it...!

[panel 2] Suu, I'm cumming!

Ah!

I'M CUMMING!

[thin black = twitch!, white = Thump!]

I'm cumming...!

[black sfx = SPLUUUURT!, sfx bubbles = Spurt!]

I'm cumming inside!

AH! Oh no...!


page 19

I'll cum inside and get your womb all sticky!

[black = Splat, white = Splurt]

Suu-chan, I'm cumming...!

I'm letting out every last drop!


[all sfx around groin = Splurt/spurt/splat]

[upper left] You're cumming! You're cumming, you're cumming!! You're seed si filling my womb...!

[far right] Suu-chan, this is a "creampie." When I cum inside your pussy,

my sperm will splatter against your egg!

No, no!

You can't!

[black sfx around shoulders = Grab!]


page 20

If you fill my insides with that much,

YOU'LL GET ME PREGNANT!

You're fertilizing my pussy!

[sfx = Splurt/splat]

Am I going to have the child of some man I don't like!?

No, no! Onii-sama, save me...! [again, she's referring to her real brother here]

[sfx = Shudder!]

I'm going to have a baby!

[last panel sfx are one big sfx = KaSLAM!]


page 21

This isn't real, right? Did you really...

[far left] cum inside me?

Yup, of course!

I was shooting into Suu-chan's womb!

I made a big old mess in you with my seed.

[black = Kerplop!, white = Deflaaate, sfx bubble = Shrink..., white = Gurgle]

Fertilization, complete!


page 22

[sfx bubbles = twitch!]

Wow. That was really intense~!

I "came" a little bit too...

[white = Dribble...]

We half-Indian girls love this stuff...

JUST KIDDING! Nyahaha!

[white = Grin!]

I'm just going to directly edit my proofread version onto the quoted text. There were only minor typos and grammar mistakes in this one.

Posting the script for:
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12530
https://e-hentai.org/g/709232/af0c7f516a/

Bear in mind that page numbers are based on the image name, not the gallery order. I can change that, if you want (lower every number after 1 by 1).

01:
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　７
-Barefoot Vampire 7
成人向
-For Adults

03:
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　７
-Barefoot Vampire 7

04:
こんにちは!りゅうか綾（りゅう）です。　まずは、この本をお手にとって下さり　誠に、ありがとうございます!
-Hello! It's Ryuuka Ryou. First off, for everyone who wanted to pick up this book, thank you all very much!
バレバレかと思いますが…　例の如く焦ってます。焦って焦って、　焦りまくってます……　それでなくとも、
ろくな文章書けない　のにますます…頭が働かない…
-Wondering if I've been found out... As always, I was rushing. Rush rush always rushing...... Even when I'm not in a rush, I'm increasingly unable to write a decent line. ...My head just won't work...
学習能力は無いのか自分よ…。
-I just can't learn how to do it....
さてさて。　夏コミにてりクエストを頂いたので♪　今回は、神魔と絡みです。　お間抜けだデザインの神魔に
なっちゃ　ったのが無念です…。
-Now then. I've taken requests for Summer Comiket♪ This time, it's a relationship with Shinma. I regret letting the design for Shinma get so foolish...
次の本は、春レヴォか夏コミ合わせ　かな?美夕も描きたいけど…ネタ切れ　なので、リクエスト募集です（笑）
-For the next book, would Larva blooming be suitable for Summer Comiket? I wanna draw Miyu, but... since I'm out of material, I'll take your requests (Ha ha)
あー!!駄文ごめんあさい!　少しでもマトモな絵＆話が描けるよう　になりたいわ…
-Aah!! Sorry for my poor writing!　I wanted to draw a decent image and story with little text...
いつか、バリバリのＯＶＡ設定で漫画　描けたら良いなぁ（夢）
-In time, it'd be nice if I could draw a manga of the scenes revealed for the OVA (dream~).
…美夕って花が合わない…。
-...A flower is no match for Miyu....

05:
えーと
-Uum
次のお客様は　…っと
-The next customer is ...here
あら!
-Oh!
データだけなら　超好み♥
-This one is great from the data alone♥
デカくても痛いし…
-That's big enough to hurt...
それは　秘密の花園
-Then, the Secret Garden

06:
たぐい稀なき美姫達が　集う館－…
-The mansion where princesses of unparalleled beauty gather...
いらっしゃいませ…
-Welcome...
石鹸王国こすちゅーむぱらだいす♥　「メイドと冷羽登場!」編
-Soap Kingom Costume Paradise♥ "Introducing Maids and Cool Bunnies!" Continuation.

07:
お帰りなさいませ　…御主人さま…
-Welcome back ...Master...

08:
はっ
-Hah
んっ
-Nh
んんっ
-Nnh
はぁ
-Haa
なあっ
-Naaah
んぐぅ
-Nguu
んんんッ!!
-Nnnh!!
ん…
-M...
なあ
-Naa
はっ
-Hah
はあ
-Haa

09:
キャア
-Kyaa
御主人さま
-Master!
ああ!!
-Aa!!

10:
あぅぁっ…!
-Auah...!
あっく
-Ah Kuh
コンコン
-trickle
あっ
-Aah
御主人さまぁ!　　ゴリゴリ当って痛いぃぃ!　やめて下さっ…
-Masteer! Scratching me there huurrts! Please, sto...

11:
あんああーッ
-Anmaaa!
ここですわね
-This is the place.

12:
私の知らぬ間に　このような事を…
-It became like this before I even noticed...
許せませんわ!
-I will not allow that!
……つづく。…といいなぁ（遠い目）
-...To be continued. ...when ready (a distant day).
…なんか
-...Somehow
イヤな予感…
-I got a scary feeling...

13:
ちょっと　　こんな場所で　やめてよっ
-Wait. Don't do this here.
いいだろ
-It's fine
我は何だ…
-There's something I...
気にすんな
-I don't care.
……
もうっ　やめてってば!
-Geez, I said stop!
…あ
-...Ok
何がしたい…?
-What do I want?

14:
ひっ
-Hiih
…ひ?
-...Hii?
…我は
-...I
…あ
-...Oh

15:
還りたいー
-Want to go home-
愚者の行進
-The Fool's Parade
美夕
-Miyu

16:
また空とお話　してる～　　聞いてよ
-Another pointless story~ I'm listening.
彼氏?
-Boyfriend?
そうなの
-Looks like it.
最近連絡全っぜん　してこないと思って　たら…
-Lately, I just could not get in touch with him, and I thought...
アイツ…
-That one...

17:
距離おこう…って
-Distance makes it worse... they say.
ひどいよ…
-How mean...
どれだけ心配　してるか　しらないで…
-No matter how much you worry, it won't fix anything...
バカヤロ!
-You ass!
自己中め!
-Self-centered!
そんな男　より…
-Just from that guy...
私なら
-If it's me
美夕?
-Miyu?

18:
キャアアアーッ
-Kyaaaa!
ああー
-AAA-
痛っ
-It hurts!
美夕!
-Miyu!
助け…　あぁあぁー!
-Help... AaaAAA!
私の獲物を　奪うなんて…
-How dare you snatch away my prey...

19:
許さない!
-I won't allow this!
きゃあぁぁ
-Kyaaaa

20:
ここは…　神魔の体内?
-This place... Inside a shinma?

21:
あっ
-Aah
あああっー
-Aaaaaah

22:
ひゃうっ
-Hyauh
あぁっ…
-Aaah...
人間の快楽が　お望みか　監視者よー?
-Does it want a human's pleasure? A guardian?
あ…あぁ…あ
-Aa... Aaa... Aa

23:
あー
-Aa-
いやぁあ
-Iyaaa
侵される!
-It's attacking!
ああっ!
-Aaa!
…やっ　やめてぇ!
-...sto- Stop!

24:
いやあ
-Noooo!
はぁっ
-Haah
はぁっ
-Haah
イッ…あっ
-Com... Aah
あっ
-Aah
ひぅっ!
-Hiuh!
あぁんっ
-Aaanh
あぁふぁ!!
-Aaafua!!

25:
あ…
-Aa...
ああぁ…
-Aaaa...
キモチ
-That feels
いぃ…
-Nice...
…美夕
-...Miyu

26:
はあ
-Haa
はっ
-Hah
あっ
-Aah
はっ
-Hah
はあっ
-Haah

27:
あっ
-Aah
んっ
-Nh
ハッ
-Hah
あはぁ
-Ahaaa
うあぁ
-Uaaa
はあ
-Haa
やっ
-St-
止めて!
-Stop!
28:
痛っ…
-Hurts...
そっちは　嫌な…のっ!
-I'm scared of that... Noh!
どうして?
-What should...?
あひっ
-Ahih
ひん
-Hin
望んでいたの　でしょう?
-What did I want?
痛ッ　切れちゃうー
-Ooww! Cut it out-
イッ!
-Iie!
あっ
-Aah

29:
あきゃ　あぁぁ!!
-Akyaaaa!!
はっ
-Hah
はあっ
-Haah
はっ
-Hah
イタイッ
-Ow ow!
はっ
-Hah
はーっ
-Ha-h
いつもなら…
-If it's always...

30:
こうなる前に　ラヴァが…
-Once asked, Larva will...
んっ
-Nnh
ぐぶ　ぐぶ
-Splish Splash
はーッ
-Ha-h
ラヴァが…
-Larva...
はぁー
-Haa-
ラヴァ
-Larva
あひっ
-Ahih
ラヴァ!
-Larva!
きゃぅぅん
-Kyauun

31:
ラヴァ
-Larva
はあ
-Haa
ひぐへ…
-Twitch...
[Indecipherable]
-Please
監視者が
-The guardian
しまっちゃ…
-Aw shi...
もっと!　あお
-More! Aao
イクッ
-cum!
現実逃避?
-Running away?
ひっん
-Hiihn
人間のように　濡らして悶える…
-For the human's sake, soak and writhe...
イッちゃう
-I'm cumming!
ラヴァ!!
-Larva!!
ああ　夢みたいだ
-Aaa, It's like a dream

32:
憧れの山野さんが　ぼくのモノを　くわえているなんて
-The Yamano-san I longed for has become my chew toy
だめえ
-Stop!
んあぁぁ!
-Nhaaaa!
下はもう　ビショビショですよ
-I'm already all soaked down there.
もっと!　もっとお願い!　激しくして…っ!
-More! Please, More! Harder... nh!
俺達まだ若い　きらさ　何度でも　イケるんだから
-Once more, her youth is used up every time she cums.
あひぁあぁ
-Ahia AAaa

33:
イッちゃぅ!
-I'm cumm!
イッく…　また　イッちゃうぅ～!
-Cum... I'm cumming again~!
あふぁあ!!
-Ahua Aa!!
あッ
-Aah

34:
美夕
-Miyu
…ああ
-...Aaa
ラヴァ
-Larva
気持ちイイよ
-It's so nice
ラヴァ…
-Larva...
己が…　いつから自我を　待ったか知らぬ
-I... don't know how long you've been waiting for me.
神魔よ…
-The Shinma...
闇へ…
-to Dark...

35:
時に神と崇められ　邪神とうとまれ…
-You know, you're supposed to worship Gods and shun Demons...
嗚呼…　我という存在は…
-I see... Call me and I will appear...
何だ?
-What?

36:
ねぇ
-Hey
放課後…
-After school...
屋上に来て　くれる?
-Would you come up to the rooftop?

37:
えー…最後まで読んで下さって、　本当にありがとうございました!!
-Uh... For those who have been reading lately, I truly thank you very much!
満載のシッコミどころは、既に、己　でシッコミ済みなので、何卒ご容赦　を……（苦笑）　私の中での（勝手
な）神魔観では、　性的なモノはないんですね…だから　話の辻褄合わせに四苦八苦（涙）　いつかメガテンの
ような、神々しくも　禍禍しい、神魔との絡みを描けたら　…最高の自己満足かな?　自分を追い詰める為に書くあたらが　情けないけどね（笑）
-Rather than being loaded with shikkomi, instead, my only shikkomi is at the end, please forgive me... (grimace). As for the appearance of the Shinma that I made (my own way), it doesn't really have a gender... I did that so the story comes coherently to the danger (tears). Sometimes, like MegaTen, even the divine seems ominous, and if I draw her entangled with a Shinma, ...is this the greatest smugness? But writing myself into a corner is just sad.
それでは、このへんで。　本当にありがとうございました!
-In that case, it's something completely different. Really, thank you very much!
既刊本のご案内（2002年12月）
-Information on already published works (Dec 2002)
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　６（在庫有）★
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　５（在庫有）★
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　４（完売）△
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　３（完売）△
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　２（完売）
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ（完売）
-Barefoot Vampire 6(In stock)★ Barefoot Vampire 5(In stock)★ Barefoot Vampire 4(Sold Out)△ Barefoot Vampire 3(sold out)△ Barefoot Vampire 2(sold out) Barefoot Vampire (Sold Out)
★→「虎の穴」様で委託中。
△→「ＤＬサイトコム」様で　ダウンロード可能。
年明けには「信長書店」様でも　委託して頂く予定です。
-★→Use "Tora no Ana" for consignment sales. △→Use "DL site" for download version. At the beginning of the year, we plan to use "Nobunaga Shoten" too for consignment sales.

38:
お迎え遅い!
-Belated Greetings!
…次の日には趣味の『美少年狩り』　していた人が何を　言ってるんですか。　あなたの事だから、　楽しんで
だんでしょ?
-...the next day, people were talking about someone whose hobby is doing a "teenager hunt." Since it's your thing, I guess it was fun?
う～　…ラヴァの　いぢわる!
-Uu~ ...Larva's so cruel!
あのぅ…　もしもし?
-Um... Hello?
ものスゴク　マヌケな役回り　なんですが私…
-Somehow, I'm playing the role of a ghastly fool...
大体、　すぐ裸になって　肌を表にして…　少しは羞恥心を待って　下さい、全く。　監視者たる者第一に…云
々
-An outline, almost nude and showing skin... It's a little embarrassing, but if you wait, it's everything. The guardian becomes the most important person... etc.
裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ　７
-Barefoot Vampire 7
発行:バルバロイの里
発行日:2002年12月30日
印刷:関西美術印刷株式会社（表紙）　株式会社くりえい社（本文）
-Publisher: Barbaroi no Sato Publish date: December 30, 2002 Printer: KANBI (cover) Kuriei Co. (contents)
※無断転載・未成年者の購読一切禁止
-※Reprinting without permission or allowing a minor to subscribe is absolutely forbidden.

40:
miyu

I'm going to directly edit my proofread version onto the quoted text. I could barely find any errors in this one.

Here's the script for [T-Press (ToWeR)] Futari De Cure Cure!! from this bounty. Lot's of fun, handwritten text in this one.

Page numbers are by gallery page.

page 1
ふたりでキュアキュア!!
Futari de Cure Cure!!
We Cure Cure together!!


page3
ふたりでキュアキュア!!
Futari de Cure Cure!!
We Cure Cure together!!

アダルト
It's for adults only.


page4
前
Foreword

こんに
Hi, I'm ToWeR.

今回
As a change from the usual, this time it's a PreCure book. It's been a while since the last doujinshi I released as T-Press.

という
With that said, since I believe that this is the first time I meet many of you, let me quickly introduce myself.

初じめまして
Pleased to meet you, I'm ToWeR. The thing I'd most like to try and drive is the Zaku.

で、しばらく
And after doing that for a bit, I'd switch to a Gouf, plaster it with camouflage paint and then I'd like to try getting into Jaburo.

ま、これ
Well, if I write more than this, it'll turn into one of those leaks of personal information that are currently en vogue.

それでは
Well then, we'll meet again later.


page5
ミップル
Mipple

きりっ
*crisp*

メップル
Mepple...

二人
We don't have time for this, you two!!

バンッ
Wham

愛し合う
Splitting up two lovers is the worst, mepo!!

ギャー
Gyaa

ドック
I'm telling you, one of those Dusk Zone guys appeared!!

デュアル
Dual Aurora

ウェーーブ
Waaave!

ザケンナー
Zakenna


page6
ふたり
We are...

プリキュア
Pretty Cure!!

はう
Hauhh!?

ドクンッ
*thump*

な、なに
W-what...?

体が
My body feels hot...

胸が
My heart is pounding...!!

ドクン
*thump*

ドクン
*thump*

ドクン
*thump*

ドクン
*thump*


page7
ホワイト
White...

ブラック
Black...

はあ
Haah

はあ
Haah

はあ
Haah

ホワイトも
You too, White!?

はあっ
Haahh

はあっ
Haahh

今は
For now, let's exterminate this Zakenna!

そ、そうね
Y-yeah, okay.

ゴメンナー
Sorry!

ゴメンナー
Sorry!

はあっ
Haahh

はあっ
Haahh


page8
大丈夫
Are you okay?

ぺたん
*slump*

はあっ
Haahh

はあっ
Haahh

う…
Y-yeah, I'll be... okay...

じん　じん
*tingle* *tingle*

変身する直前ミップル
I think the state Mipple and Mepple were in right before we transformed is influencing us...

変身する直前二人
Those two, right before we transformed? What were they doing again?

だから
So... Well... If we perform m-masturbation, I think we'll get better.

恥
*embarrassed*

マスター
Master... what?


page9
マスター
Masturbation. T-that means... playing with yourself...

かあ
*blush*

言わせないでよ　もう
Don't make me say that, jeez...

オナニー
Playing with yourself?

ブラック
Black, you've... never played with yourself? You don't touch yourself?

さわる？
Touch? Where?

仕方ない
You're hopeless... Well then, I'll do it for you.

え？
Huh? What? White, what are you doing?


page10
見せて
Let me see it, Black... Your Card Commune.

やだ
No, not that one.

クン　クン
*sniff* *sniff*

ぐっ
*grab*


page11
ブラック
You have one down here too, don't you, Black?

スリット
A slit...

や、ちょ
No, wai-...!?

ちゅっ
*kiss*

はあん
Haanhh

びくん
*twitch*

あっ
Ahh

あん
Anh

ぴちゃ
*shlip*

ぴちゃ
*shlip*


page12
あっあっ
Ahh! Ahh!

ホワイト
White, no...

くちゅ
*squish*

ぴちゃ
*shlip*

ぴく
*twitch*

ぴく
*twitch*

ぴくん
*twitch*

ぴくん
*twitch*

はっ
Hahh

はあっ
Haahh

はあっ
Haahh

んっ!!
Mhh!!

やっ…
Sto-...

じわ…
*soak*

ぴちゃ
*shlip*

ぴちゃ
*shlip

はあ
Haah

はあ
Haah


page13
はあんっ
Haanhh

あんっ
Anhh

しちゅっ
*suck*

ぴちゃ
*shlip*

ふあっ
Fuahh

あっ
Ahh

ぴくんっ
*twitch*

ぴくんっ
*twitch*

こり　こり
*knead* *knead*


page14
あっ
Ahh

くあっ
Kuahh

ぴくっ
*twitch*

ぴくっ
*twitch*

れる
*lick*

れる
*lick*

はあ
Haah

はあ
Haah

ちゅぱ
*smack*

ぴちゅ
*shlip*

くちゅ
*shlurp*

ちゅっ
*kiss*

くちゅ　くちゅ
*shlick* *shlick*

くり　くり
*rub* *rub*

くり
*rub


page15
や…
Sto-... Wa-...!?

ひああっ
Hiaahh

ちろ　ちろ
*flick* *flick*

だ…だめ…
N-no... Any more of this...

おかしく
...and I'll go crazy...

キャッ
Kyahh

カッ
*clack*

これで
Now we're back to normal...

ほ…
Hoh...

はうう
Hauuhh!?

ドクン
*thump*


page16
なんで
Why...?

ドクン　ドクン
*thump* *thump*

トロ
*ooze*

ほのかぁ
Honokaaa...

はっ
Hahh

はっ
Hahh

はあっ
Haahh

だから
That's what I was telling you... It's just sexual arousal, so even canceling the transformation isn't gonna fix it.

はあっ
Haahh

うそぉ
No way...

ありえない…
I can't believe this...


page17
ぴちゃっ
*shlip*

くちゅっ
*squelch*

はあ　はあ
Haah haah

ねろ　ねろ
*lick* *lick*

こくん
*swallow*

さっきの
Would you like to... continue from earlier?

ほのか
Honoka...

ドキ　ドキ　ドキ
*thump* *thump* *thump*

あ
Ah...

さわ　さわ
*touch*

…うん…
...Yes...

ぽっ
*blush*

こく
*nod*


page18
はらり
*flutter*

んんっ
Mmhh...

ぴちゃ　ぴちゃ
*shlip* *shlip*

くり　くり　くり
*knead* *wiggle* *rub*

はあ…あ…
Haah... Ah...

ちゅぱっ　ちゅぱっ
*shlurp* *shlurp*

ぶるっ　ぶるっ
*tremble* *tremble*

ちゅく　ちゅく
*shlup* *shlup*

ちゅく
*shlup*

ああん
Aanhh!!

ジュプ
*squelch*

ジュプ
*squelch*

ジュプ
*squelch*

ねえ、なぎさ
Hey, Nagisa... I'd like to feel good together with you... okay?

それは…
That's... fine, but... what are we gonna do?


page19
あのね、
Uhm, well... You rub yours against mine down here, Nagisa.

…うわあ
...Uwaah. So that's Honoka's...

ぐちょぐちょして
It's soaking wet and looks so lewd...

わたしのも
I wonder if mine became like that too...

そしてそれを
And Honoka saw that...

かあっ
*blush*

なぎさ？
Nagisa?

あ、ううん
Ah, no, it's nothing.

あせ　あせ
*sweat* *sweat*

ぐい
*grab*


page20
よっ
Okay...

ん…
Mh...

くりゅっ
*grind*

ふああっ
Fuaahh

ビク
*twitch*

ビクン
*twitch*


page21
はああんっ
Haanhh

ビクン
*twitch*

ビクン
*twitch*

ぶるっ
*tremble*

ぶるっ
*tremble*

ビクンッ
*twitch*

ぶるっ
*tremble*

プシャアッ
*squirt*

ビュクンッ
*splash*

なぎさと
I'm so happy you got to link with Nagisa, mipo!

ぽっ
*blush*

神聖な
This only happened because you disturbed the holy act of love, mepo!!

不可思議生物
You're way cheeky for a mysterious life form!!

終
The End


page22
初めは
I didn't watch it at first, but once I started, somehow or the other, I got into it. But why didn't I watch it at first? I don't think there was any particularly good reason for that. So, I randomly caught a glimpse of the opening. And then I was like, that's got quite some movement there, doesn't it? So far I'd watched Marimite and it might have been there too, but when it came to the "moving" part, I was touched and thought: Let's watch this from the next one on. The one I'd watched had been episode 8. From there, I got hooked a bit. As the story goes, it seems I was lucky that I watched episode 8 first by chance. Since I didn't know about episodes 1 to 7, I didn't really get the details of the setting though. Since episode 8 seemed like a good one, it seems lucky that that was the episode I watched first.

やっぱり
Of course there are parts that bear resemblance, so even if I don't go as far as comparing it to Sailor Moon, putting them next to each other, I end up looking at them with comparing eyes. I don't know if it's the design or the character setting, but comparing it to Sailor Moon, I get a more modern impression. Even though I can't really put my finger on it, that's how it is somehow... I wonder. Maybe it's because of all the frills they have.


page23
実はブラック派です。世間的には「ホワイトマンセー」らしいですが。衷情がコロコロ変れるところとかカワイ

イと思うんだけどなあ。あとメリットとしては、アイテムを、いつでも買うことができます。食玩とか人形とか

。売れ残ってるとかゆーな!!
I actually belong to the Black faction. Societally things seem to be more like "White banzai" however. I think it's cute how her inner feelings keep changing. Another advantage is that I can buy merchandise whenever I want. Toys sold with food, dolls, whatever. And don't say that they're just left on the shelf!!


page24
あとがき。
Afterword.

このたび
My sincerest gratitude for picking up this ToWeR kojinshi "Futari de Cure Cure!!"
[TL note: A kojinshi is a doujinshi made from material produced by a single person.]

今年
During the "PreCure year taking place at T-Press" this year, I bought small toys sold with food, memorized the OP and ED songs and held various events, but for the time being, this book has become the biggest event. It's been a while since I did anything with lesbians other than Mako/Ami (from Sailor Moon that is) back then.

今回
The point I'd like to emphasize this time is that I drew them with middle school student-like looking bodies. For that reason I wanted to make their breasts as small as I could and go into the direction of avoiding curves on their bodies while drawing, but I wonder how that turned out. Back then for Sailor Moon I couldn't do it, so I told myself I'd get it right this time at least. Even if you say just blindly draw small breasts, managing to have them not have loli figures, but a tall and child-like build is hard... I drew less hair too. Personally, I'm mostly satisfied, but I think it would've been better if I had drawn their breasts smaller. Also, I drew a lot of Cure Black, so that was good. Beta was troublesome!!

次は
I haven't decided yet what I'll do next. Maybe I'll go with PreCure again, maybe I'll go back to Sailor Moon or maybe I'll do some other work with lesbians (← that part seems to be the only thing I've decided on). I'll think it over while watching a looot.

それでは
That's about it. I'm hoping for your support again next time.

ToWeR


page25
・おやつ
・Afternoon snack

おなかすいた
I'm starved...

ぐう
*growl*

なにか食べて
How about we eat something and go home?

えんせーーい
Accepteeed!

パイナップル
Pineapple! I wanna eat pineapple!

なんか
That's kinda groooss.

終
The End


page26
告知のコーナー
略して　「知ナー」
Announcement Corner
"Anner" for short
[TL note: "kokuchi no koonaa" abbreviated as "chinaa" or "shinaa."]

・単行本
・The tankoubons "Ane ni wa Zettai Kanawanai" and "Aokan Tengoku" are now on sale, props to Shobou-san.
[TL note: Tsukasa Shobou is a publishing company.]

・あと、「Blue
・I also got to participate in a doujinshi called "Shot A Shota" from the circle "BlueLAGOS". It's a shota thing. There seem to be consignment sales of it at Toranoana and all sorts of events.

・あと、「おかち
・Moreover, I'm drawing for "Okachimentaiko"-san. I think that a kojinshi collecting the things I have drawn so far will be released, so I'm looking forward to your support for that too.

・あと、これから
・I'll also be likely to show up here and there in doujinshi by several other circles, so please support me at those times too.

・商業誌
・Occasionally I'm being published in the professional magazine Dolphin. Please look out for me there too.

奥
Colophon

・Book No. 22　　　　　　　"Futari de Cure Cure!!"
・Date of publication　　　August 15, 2004
・Production　　　　　　 　T-Press
・Printing　　　　　　　 　Power Print (パワープリント)
・Contact address

This post has been edited by Vilis: Oct 20 2015, 14:55

I'm going to edit my proofread version directly onto the quoted text.

Hey again! Deadly Sins 19 is finished, heres the link:

[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?91du4wghswx4648

And here's the plain script:
Seven Deadly Boobs
Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.19
Muronaga Chashu

========
Page 3(Contents)

ハイブリッド通信vol.19
Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.19

目次
Contents
第１１話　のっけから一番のムチャする大パイ
Chapter 11 - 'This was Absurd from the very beginning' Deadly Boobs

第１２話　パイじゃないけどマーリン大好きだから許してな大パイ
Chapter 12 - 'There's no Boobs, But I Love Merlin so Please Forgive Me' Deadly Boobs

第１３話　いつもの大パイ
Chapter 13 - The Usual Deadly Boobs

第１４話　そこは着衣パイズリだろ！な大パイ
Chapter 14 - 'Clothed Paizuri!' Deadly Boobs

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Page 4
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SFX
つん - poke, tap
わな - tremble, wriggle
ポポポ - Blush
やぁーっ - Well...
ばるるん～ - Badoing!
パチュ - Snap (Think he just clicked his fingers)
--------

第１１話　のっけから一番のムチャする大パイ
'This was Absurd from the very beginning' Deadly Boobs

ねュキング一生懸命守ってくれたお礼だよ？
"Hey King, as thanks for you protecting me so much..."

本当にいいの？ディアンヌ。。。
"Are you sure this is ok, Dianne?..."

もちろん！それとも団長のことが気になる？
"Of course! Or are you worried about what Captain will think?"

いやっ。。。！そうじゃないけど。。。
"N-no! Not that..."

それともやっぱり大きいままより
"Or is it because of how big I am?..."

そっそんな！
"I-it's nothing like that!"

そんなことないよ。。。むしろ。。。
"It's not like that at all...If anything..."

『オッパイはとにかくデカいほどいい』派のオイラには。。。
"I'm on the side of 'The bigger the boobs are, the better!'" (I might have got that wrong, he might be saying he's on the side of "Any size boobs are great!", but given he only seems to have eyes for Dianne...)

むしろこっちがいいんです！！
"So your boobs are the best!!"

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Page 5
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SFX
きゃん～ - Kya! Hya!
ズボッ - Shove, Splat, bang
むぎゅー - squeeeeze
くんかくんか - Sniff Sniff
びくっ - twitch
ああああは - aAaaaaaAah...
うひっ - hehe, ehehe
チュパ - suuck
ペロ - lick
ふる - quiver, tremble
ぶらーん - Booing
はぁ - huuuu (breathing in)
ぐぐぐぐ。。。 - fwuuck!
ズッ！！- push, press
ポン - Pop!
ぶぱぁっ - Uhaaaaa!
--------

とうっ！！
"Wheeee!!"

ディアンヌのデカちくび～
"Dianne's enormous nipples～"

おっぱいのちくび～
"My nipples～!!!"

こんなところに隠れて。。。
"So you were hiding here, were you..."

いけない子だなぁ
"You naughty thing～"

こうしてやるっ！
"I'll have to do this then!"

キング。。。こっち。。。こっちも。。。
"King...Can you do...the other side too?..."

むふふ～ディアンヌの言う事なら
"Muhuhu～ As it's you-"

喜んで！！
"Take This!!"

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Page 6
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SFX
でろぉ - Uwaaa
はあ - Haa
ちょは - squeeze
じゅるじゅる - drip, drool
ぶるっ、ぶる - bounce, boing
むにゃ - grope
ぐにゃ - press, knead
ぶにっ - squeeze
--------

どうだいディアンヌ。。。
"How was it, Dianne?..."

うん。。。すごく。。。
"It...was great..."

気持ちいいよ。。。
"It felt...really good..."

でも。。。もっと。。。
"But...more..."

もっといっぱいしてもいいよ？
"Can we do it...even more?"

もう素直に言えばいいのに
"You don't have to be so shy about it～..."

オイラはヤル気マンマンなんだから
"I'm still brimming to do it as well after all"

改めてディアンヌのこの爆乳を。。。
"I'll take your enormous boobs..."

全身で堪能しちゃうモンね！！
"and enjoy myself fully!!"

うほーっオッパーイ！オッパーイ！！
"Uhaaaa! Boobs! Booobs!!"

すっ。。。
"A..."

すごっ。。。すごい。。。！！
"A...Amazing...!!

ディアンヌ～（のオッパイ）
"Dianne's boobs..."

最高だよーっ！！
"They're the best!!"

アキラのヤオリちゃうねんからー （？？？）
(I don't really know what this is talking about. I thought King might be giving some reason why Dianne's boobs are great, but doesn't seem to be the case at all...)

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Page 7
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SFX
ふる - quiver, tremble
びく - twitch
ギュウウ - streetch
くるっ - fwuuuuu (wind like sound)
あぱはっ- Awaaaaa!
ボンッ - Boing!
ドプーン！- Splat!
ぷはー - gasp
は - Haa, aah, haaa
--------

あぁっ。。。!キングの体がおっぱいの中に。。。！？
"Aaah...! You're inside my boobs...!?"

この果てしない柔らかさ。。。！！
"This endless softness..."

そしてこの弾力！！
"This springiness!!"

そしてもちろんこの大きさ。。。！！
"And of course, this size!!"

オッパイダーイブ！！
"Boob Dive!!"

ギャッ
"Kyaa!"

ぷはーっ！！これはまさに。。。
"Puhaaa!! This is just like..."

乳肉の海水浴やーっ！！
"Swimming in an ocean of boobs!!"

んもう。。。キングったら～
"Ehehe～...King～..."

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Page 8
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SFX
はあ - Haa
キリ - staare
ゴン - thud, badum
ドキ - Blush
チッ - wag, shake (wagging his finger)
ひっ、あっ、あひっ,　ひゃうん - Hiii! Ah! Aaaa, Hyaaa～
にちゃっ - slick, squelch
ぶわあ - Boing
ずぷんっ - shove
ふん！！ - Huu!
--------

それじゃあそろそろ。。。
"Well then, I guess it's about time..."

セックスしようか！ディアンヌ！！
"Let's have sex! Dianne!!"

で。。。でもこのままだとサイズ的に難しいんじゃ。。。
"B-but, the size difference is a little..."

違うんだなそれが。。。
"You're wrong..."

こっちの世界じゃ常識だよ？
"That sort of common sense doesn't exist here!"

きゃはうん
"Kyaaaa!～"

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Page 9
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SFX
はぁ - Haa
パン - fwack, slap
ビク - twitch
ジュブ、ジュプ - clap, slap, shove
ギュギュ - squeeeeze
ドピュッ - spuurt
--------

片方だけってのはよくないよね！？
"Only doing one side is bad, right?"

ほら！こっちも！！
"I'll do this side too!"

あっ。。。キングっ！おっぱいが！
"Aah! King! My boobs!"

ああっ！！スゴイっ。。。！！オイラと。。。
"Aaah! Amazing...! Me and..."

オイラとオッパイがひとつに。。。！！
"Me and your boobs, we're becoming one!!"

ディアンヌっ　もっと。。。もっとオイラをギュって。。。！！
"More, Dianne! Squeeze me tighter!!"

ああっ！オッパイが
"Aaah! My boobs are"

おかしくなっちゃう。。。！！
"My boobs are going crazy!!"

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Page 10
--------
SFX
ぬぽっ～ - drool, drip, slip
はぁ - Haaa
ヌヌヌ。。。 - Zzzz
--------

はぁはぁ。。。たっぷり。。。
Haaaaa...so good..."

やっぱりすごいや
"As always...it's so good..."

ねえキング。。。やっぱりボク
"Hey, King...My..."

まんこにもオチンチンほしい。。。
"My pussy really wants a dick..."

ねえキング。。。
"Hey, King...?"

よーしオイラ頑張っちゃうぞ
"Alll right then! I'll try my best!"

恥ずかしいしみ
"Embarrassing Stain"

今回はちょっとサービスしたのだ
"This time, I helped him out a little"

やったねキング～セックスできたね！
"We did it, King! We had sex!"

タートルネックディアンヌ
Turtleneck Dianne

おまけその１
Bonus 1

やっぱディアンヌかわいいよーでも描くのむむいよー　(that does say むむい right? I'm going to take that to be a colloqial　or 難しい)
"Dianne's so cuteーbut drawing her is difficult..."

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SFX
ふる - twitch
ビクッ - twitch, shiver
バチ - Crackle!
あーん、あ - Aaahn
むん、むあ - slick, fwick
もぐ - Nom, Om
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第１２話　パイじゃないけどマーリン大好きだから許してな大パイ
Chapter 12 - 'There's no Boobs, But I Love Merlin so Please Forgive Me' Deadly Boobs

七つの大罪　VS　聖騎士...
Seven Deadly Sins VS Holy Knights - Extra Version

さすがなマーリン。。。
"I'd expected no less from you..."

なんという舌使い。。。！
"Your tongue's amazing...!"

お姉ちゃ。。。ん
"Sis..."

なんかいつもより激しい
"You're a little more...intense than usual"

七つの大罪...今回は負けませんよ？
"Deadly Sin....I won't lose to you again..."

フン！無駄無駄～
"Hah! It's Futile～"

ジールったらまたこんなにクサくして。。。
"Zeal...you smell so dirty～"

ちゃんと洗ってるの？
"Have you been washing properly～?"

んもういけない子～
"What a dirty boy～"

やっぱり
"There's no way..."

私のジールへの愛情が負けるはずがな。。。
"...anyone could beat my love for Zeal"

お姉ちゃんごめんなエ
"Sorry Sis..."

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Page 12
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SFX
ドスン - thud, thump
ぐりぐりぐり - rubrub
ぴく - twitch
うーッ - Ruuuub
あ - ag!
ぎゅう - Press
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いつの間にか騎乗スタイルに！！
"C-Cowgirl!?"

ぶごっ。。。ぶひっ。。。ん
"U-ugo...hiii...n"

そっそれなら私も。。。
"In that case..."

うわっお姉ちゃん！
"Uwaa!? Sis!?"

ほらジール！
"Zeal!"

ほらほらほら！
"How is it!? How is it!?"

八ッ！！
"Ah!"

既に次々と別の体勢に。。。！！
"You've already moved on!?"

あららどうしたの？
"Oh? What's wrong～?"

変な声出しちゃて
"You're making such strange noises"

しかも一国の王相手に
"With a King, no less!"

王様で？イケメンで？天才で？変態ってか？
"Is a King, a hot guy, a genius, supposed to be this perverted?"

あんな恥ずかしい格好まで。。。！！
"In such an embarrassing position!?"

はい。。。マーリンの犬で＿しがり屋の　（何だそれ！？No idea what one of the kanji are, so left it with an underscore in its' place >.<')
"I'm sorry! I'm perverted! I'm Merlin's..." (Had to wing it a little with this, but I think it's still fairly close to what I think is being said)

変態王アーサーですっ。。。！！
"...Perverted King Arthur!"

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SFX
ジョボ - slop, splat
ぶりん - boing
チュン - squeeze
パチュ - Slap
ニュチッ - Smack
ぱっ - Ping, poof
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さあでは
"Well then..."

仕上げといくか
"...Let's finish this"

そして圧倒的尻肉による尻ズリからの。。。
"This overwhelming ass..."

尻肉鷲掴みっっ完全密着スタマ！！
"Eagle grip (Ass version)! Ass meat masturbation!" (This line...now sounds a little strange XD)

しかもいつの間にか動いてるのはアーサーの方！！
"You've gotten into it quickly! Arthur!"

あ、いきろう！いきろう！
"Ah! Cumming! Cumming!"

そしてもはやほったらかし！！
"Saying that, you're finishing a little quick!"

え！？なっと！！
"Eh! Ah...!"

しかもフィニッシュさせない！！
"I'm not gonna let you!"

。。。完敗だわ
"...I've completely lost"

お姉ちゃんこれ何の勝負なの？
"Sis, what sort of match was this?"

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Page 15
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SFX
ニョホ - grin
ぽよ - spring
モニュ - grope
ギュッ - tweak, rub
タポン - jiggle
にゅ - press
ぐにぃ - knead
ぼに - squeeze, rub
んああ、あ - Haaa, Aaaah
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第１３話　いつもの大パイ
Chapter 13 - The Usual Deadly Boobs

本当にオッパイがお好きなんですね～
"You really do love boobs, don't you～"

ふはは。。。
"Mwuhaha..."

バレちゃあしょうがない
"I've been discovered, have I～?"

もう誰だってしってますよ～
"Everyone knows already～"

だってこんな。。。
"But, really..."

この若さでこの軟乳！！
"This young, soft breast flesh!"

それぷるんぷるん～
"and this bounciness～"

ほれ指が入ってくよ？
"Look! My finger's going straight in!"

ほらっ！こんなにぐにゅぐにゅのむにむに～
"And this squidgy, pillowiness"

そんなに褒められると照れちゃいます
"Ah, stop it! You'll make me blush if you keep praising me～"

うひー！こんなっ。。。
"Uhaaa! This..."

こんなにズブズブ！！
"They're being swallowed up!"

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Page 16
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SFX
ドド - Rub
ぎゅー - Pinch
ぷッ - press
ぼにゅうー - boing
タプ - pull, squeeze
あ、んあ、はあ - Ah, Hnaaa, Haaa
キュ - tweak
トプン - squeeze, press
はィーン～ - Hiiii, Haaaa
--------

むふふ。。。これがり。。。
"Muhuhu...these are some..."

じゃなかった
"...No, never mind"

エリザベスの
"These are Elizabeth's"

。。。聖乳！！
"Saintly Boobs!"

メリオダス様。。。先っぽ。。。
"Meliodas-sama...the tips..."

乳首もおねがいします
"Can you do my nipples too?"

ん？これか？
"Hmm? Here?"

これなのか！？
"Or do you mean here?"

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Page 17
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SFX
ちぱ Slurp
ムキッ - squeeze
ちゅぅー, ちゅー - Suuck
あん、あ、はあ - Ah, aahn, haa
ポンッ - pop
ブル - shake, tremble
ミユル - rub, squeeze
--------

あぁ。。。メリオダス。。。さま
"Aah...Meliodas...sama"

おっお上手ですぅ
"I-it feels really good"

そうか？それはエリザベスがこんな
"Oh? In that case, I'll..."

こんなやらしいオッパイ
"I'll make your lewd boobs..."

してるからだろ？
"Feel even better!"

んーっ！！
"Mmmmmmnnnn!"

んまぁーーーーい！！
"Dewishous!"

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Page 18
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SFX
がばっ - slick
ドッ - blush
ジューン～ - drool
ミャッキハ - twitch
ポン - pulse
ずぶ - shove
パン - clap, slap
たぷん - boing
--------

。。。とオッパイばっかりと見せかけて。。。
"...Ah, by the way, it's not just boob's I'm into..."

エリザベスのおパンツ
"Elizabeth's underwear"

キャッ！いつの間に！？
"Kyaa! When did you...!?"

ね？いいだろ？リ。。。エリザベスぅ
"Hey, it's fine right? Elizabeeeeth～"

メ。。。
"If..."

メリオダス様がそう言うなら。。。
"If you really want to..."

。。。どうぞ
"...You can"
召し上がってください～
"Enjoy yourself as much as you want～"

よぅし。。。そうと決まれば！
"Ok! If that's the case!"

メリオダス様のモノが私の。。。
"Your thing is..."

私の中にッ。。。
"Plunging inside me..."

あっ～ダッ～メッ～メリッ～
"Ah! Aah! Me-Melio～"

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Page 19
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SFX
はあ、んああ、は、あ - haaa, aaahn, ah
ユサッ - shake, boing
ミュッ, ブッ - fwuck, slap
むぎゅう - rub tweak
にゅう - squeeze
ビク - Twitch, throb
--------

すごいっ！！
"Amazing!"

これがエリザベスのロイヤルマンコ！！
"This is Elizabeth's sacred pussy!"

あっメリッ。。。さま
"Ah-Melio...sama"

オッ。。。オッパ。。。！！
"M...More...!"

オッパイも。。。！！
"More!"

オッパイもっともんで下さい～
"Fondle my breasts even more～!"

うっ。。。ダメだ！！
"Uh...I'm gonna...!"

もう。。。！！
"No...!"

私もっ。。。
"I think I'm also..."

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Page 20
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SFX
ビクッ - throb
ドピュシャア - Spurt
ガッ - tremble
くっちゃ - snort
--------

あひッ～あひっ～イッ～イッ～
"Ah! Ah! Aaaah! Hiiiii～!

イッちゃいますうぅっ～
"Cuummiinng～!"

。。。っていう
"By the wa-"

夢を見たんだろ
"That was such a great dream!" (Not sure why Hawk dreamt that Meliodas was having fun with Elizabeth and not him, but... >.<)

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Page 21
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SFX
はあ - Haa
ずぼっ - shove, dig
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第１４話　そこは着衣パイズリだろ！な大パイ
Chapter 14 - 'Clothed Paizuri!' Deadly Boobs

いただくぜお前のカラだ。。。
"I'll be taking my fill..."

んっ～
"Hnn～!

に隠したコイツをな
"of these things you hid in your clothes"

これだから○リコンは。。。
"I told you we shouldn't-"

殺すぞ
"Shut up, I'll kill you"

よくわからないよ、このみんなはもったっなよばけ さググってみよう！
"I don't know why, but it seemed too good to pass up drawing this! Now, go read the actual 'Seven Deadly Sins' series!"
(What strange dreams Ban has!)
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Credits
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奥付 - Publication Credits (Publisher Notes/Data/Credits)
ハイブリッド通信vol.19 - Hybrid Tsuushin Vol. 19
発行日 - Date of publication
発行 - Publisher
ハイブリッド事務室 - Hybrid Office
HP - Homepage
著者 - Author
Muronaga Chashu
印刷所 - Printed
しまや出版様 - Shimaya Publications
Enjoy (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) And thanks in advance for proofreading!

I'm going to directly edit my proofread version onto the quoted text. I could barely find any errors in this one.

Thanks for the proofreading. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

However, concerning this change:

マスター
Mastur... what?

I'd prefer for it to be kept like this:

マスター
Master... what?

It's intentionally wrong to show how she's not understanding the term.

This post has been edited by jfji552: Oct 19 2015, 16:28

Hi, I don't think a Red Piotrus has posted the TL bounty for this yet but here's the TL for proofreading.


(SC2015 Summer) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Difference (Sword Art Online)
(サンクリ2015 Summer) [行脚堂 (しけー)] Difference (ソードアート・オンライン )
https://e-hentai.org/g/856431/2c53ac37e3/

Pg 02

Fan fiction of Sword Art Online
Angyadow presents / X-rated
case of Shinon

Difference


Pg 03

Fan fiction of Sword Art Online
Angyadow presents / X-rated
case of Shinon

Difference


Pg 04

Disclaimer

Yup. It's suddenly SAO
This time I wanted to expand a bit on [Extra31] that went on sale the other day.

And now, if you please


Pg 05

panel 1
...Mmm

Mmm

Box: Why...

panel 2
Mmm...

...fu

Box: Why...

panel 3
fu... gu...

Nnmmm

Box: ...does

panel 4
Box right: does... this

Mm...

Kuu... nn

mmm...

Box left: feel so good


Pg 06

Panel 1
Box right: This is the inside of ALO

Mm..nn

nn

rub rub

twitch twitch

mm

Box left: A VRMMO

Panel 2
fuuu, fu...

hu, fu

Box: My current body is this avatar.

Panel 3-4
Box right: In reality, my body is currently

Box left up: Quietly lying down

Box left down: on that bed in that apartment...

TL note: I TLed the moans and effects to this point, but seems that they don't really mean anything, just sounds. I'll be skipping them until there's a change near the end. Until that point, they're mostly all huu/fu kinda sounding.


Pg 07

Panel 1
Box right: There's a limit to how much the Amusphere can interrupt.
Box left: Even though I know it can't completely shut out all stimuli...

Panel 2
Box right: What I'm feeling now......

Box left up: Is greater than the stimuli
Box left down: generated by the system...

Panel 3
Box: It should just be mere electric signals......

Panel 4
Box: ...just mere...


Pg 08

Panel 1
Boxs right: I'm still just a girl after all
Boxs left: I have my urges, and I do masturbate

Panel 2
Box: The guilt and disgust always overpowers the pleasure...

Panel 3
Box: I find it hard to think of as pleasurable


Pg 09

Panel 1
Box: ...When I first started GGO

Panel 2
Boxs right: I decided to test it out...
Boxs left: To see if was the same in this world...

Panel 3
Box: The results were actually worse than reality


Pg 10

Panel 1
Right Box: The sensations of my avatar being touched were sent to my brain
Left boxs up: A very standard output from the system,
Left boxs down: a replay of the pleasure

Panel 2
Right box: It didn't feel real at all
Left box: As if the sensations weren't even mine.

Panel 3
Box: There was nothing pleasurable about it

Panel 4
Box right: Nothing but a weird feeling out out of place-ness and discomfort
Box left: so...


Pg 11

Panel 1
Box right: so then...
Box left: why now

Panel 2
Box right: have I...
Box left: become...

Panel 3
Box: become...

Panel 4-5 blank


Pg 12

Panel 1
Box right up: Because it's ALO?
Box right down: Because it's not GGO?
Box left: No...

Panel 2
Box: What I'm feeling hasn't changed

Panel 3
Box: There hasn't been any change at all to the signals from the system

Panel 4
Box right: This artificial sensation...
Box left: Hasn't changed at all


Pg 13

Panel 1
Box right: This...
Box mid: should be my hand
Box left: should be my finger

Panel 2
Box right: But it doesn't feel seem like mine...
Box left: Something else

Panel 3
Boxs right: Someone else
Boxs left: is providing them

Panel 4
Box right: Like something
Box mid: is raping me.
Box left: ...so then


Pg 14

Panel 1
Box right: this something,
Box left: why is it so...

Panel 2-3
Box right up: Because it's...
Box right down: not me?
Box left up: It's not me
Box left down: ...Something else

Panel 4
TL: That's a lot of AAAAA, just arrange around the effects


Pg 15

Panel 1-2
Moanings are still mostly AAAAAAA,
Motion effects around Sinon are SHUDDER/SHIVER/SHAKE/related synonym


Pg 16
Page wide bubbles are all haa-, post-exercise breathing
Panel 1
Box: ...what

Panel 2
Box up: What...
Box down: was that

Panel 3-4
Box right up: ...
Box right down: Could it... be that?
Box left: ...Just great


Pg 17
TL note: The boxes here are a play on train schedules

Left box:
ALO course
via Kirito reverse rape
towards Turning the tables

Right box:
GGO course
via Toyed with by mob chara
towards Descent into pleasure

Sinon: ...What the heck


Pg 18

End talk

- And that was sort of like the common route before going into the individual routes

- If the feedback for taste had it's limits then wouldn't it be really a kind of dream for the players to be experiencing sensations "in another body"? From that line of thought it went to [it works awesomely because the SAO players were trapped inside for years, as well as Yuuki's group's special circumstances]. In that case, [what about the GGO side, where Sinon moves back and forth between VR and reality?]. [How far can you accept your avatar as your actual body] was the topic that I poked around with and eventually made into this story.

- Individual route will be... soon. That said, which one should I do? Let's see.

- That's all and bye

However, concerning this change:

マスター
Mastur... what?

I'd prefer for it to be kept like this:

マスター
Master... what?

It's intentionally wrong to show how she's not understanding the term.

Noted.

Proofreading for the Kokoro Connect doujin
https://e-hentai.org/g/540980/b4c566141f/

I don't think I had to correct more than two things.

Cover
Hey... Inaban... in this situation, how about we have sex?


Pg 002
[frame] Nagase Iori's house - Past 8 PM
Uuuum... to summarize the current situation
Inaban is in my body
[bottom] Inaba Himeko -> Nagase Iori
---
I am in Taichi's body
[bottom] Nagase Iori -> Yaegashi Taichi
---
And Taichi is in Inaban's body... / That's correct, right?
Yeah
[bottom] Yaegashi Taichi -> Inaba Himeko
---
[in small, between panels] Speech color pattern / Regardless of the body, the characters inside will be assigned a color / Taichi / Iori / Inaba
---
... So, the reason why Inaban was so depressed was because
While masturbating, the substitution happened and Taichi found out, isn't that right?
Don't summarize it like thaaaaat!
E... Everyone does things like that, don't worry about i...
I don't want to hear that from you! [TN: good luck fitting that one in the bubble]
[small, next to "Taichi"'s head] I see, I see?
---
Well... I'm thinking it might become a problem sooner or later
So...
... Hey... Inaban... in this situation... / How about we have sex?



Pg 003
Huh...?
---
He... Hey... Iori... Do you understand what you're saying?
T-That's right... Don't suggest something unreasonable
---
Of course I do! / Since your secrets and your private place were already revealed
It's not embarrassing, that's thinking in reverse
---
[frame] If I think back on it now... / Nagase was performing a role
Nh... Nnh... Are you serious...
---
[frame] A role where she didn't want Inaba to break down because of this matter / so she would destroy everything
[left bubble] Iori... stop it... It's your body
[right bubble] That's exactly why



Pg 004
[top right] That's... no good...
[top left] Nh / Nnh
[bottom left] Well... Since I perfectly know my own body... / Hey, was my body that sensitive?
[bottom right, blue] Nh...!!
[bottom right, pink] Shlick shlick [I'm not good at English sfx, so here's a definition if you can find a better alternative "guchu, guchu guchu = 1) combination of [gu] (doing something forcefully) + [choro or chu] (soppy wet sucking sound)."]
---
Look, Inaban... / I'm this wet
Ooh... With this... / My crotch became dense
---
Why... You have quite a wonderful thing! Way to go, Taichi
Wai...!
---
Then... start licking me, Inaban
W... Wait... Are we really... doing it?
After all this, of course we are! / And besides, I'm curious



Pg 005
I never thought I'd see Nagase and I / Doing naughty things from an external point of view, but... this is too exciting
---
---
Maybe it's because Inaba was in the middle of masturbating... but I've been feeling hot from the start...
Sorry, Inaba... I can't stop...
---
I'm licking... Taichi's...
No... That's Iori's, but... Aaah, I don't know anymore



Pg 006
I... can't... / I'm going... to cum...
---
---
Uwah... uwah... Taichi's semen / It's sticky and dripping down...
Nh...



Pg 007-008
[top right] The taste is really funny...
[top left] It was me, but... It wasn't my fault, right?...
[middle] Taichi... / It was your body that came, so take responsibility...
[bottom] I'm being fed my own semen / But... to be honest, picturing Nagase and Inaba together... is arousing... me
---
Ah... I kissed Taichi just now... / Even though it's me on the outside... Ah, it's mixing up in my head
Nh...!!
Hm, good, good, you two! / Let's do it just like that
---
I-Iori...?
W... Wait / If you put it in, it won't be a joke anymo...
Nh... It's tight... / Do I feel... like that? It might give me a bit of self-confidence
Nhaaa!!



Pg 009
Iori, you... damn idiot... / Take better care... of your own bo... dy...
Sorry... I can't stop... my hips...
---
You're incredibly... erotic... Inaba
---
If you tell me... something like that...
Being tormented by two Taichis...
---
Inaban... You really tightened up... / I can't... hold it
Me... too...



Pg 010
No way... What's this... I don't... understand
We've... gone back...?
---
Cumming... I'm cummiiiiiiiing
---
---
Uoh... Since we returned so suddenly, my dick is really... painful
---
[top right] Taichi... / Take my first time... proper... ly
[middle left] I... Inaba... No... But...
[bottom] It's okay, I'm telling you to put it in... Idiot



Pg 011
[Taichi] What... The sinuous inside of her pussy is suddenly milking me out...
[Inaba] Hyaa <heart> / I... I came just from you putting it in...
---
Ta... ichi... / It's coming... out
[on two panels] Sorr... I can't stop... cum... min...
---
You're... still... cumming



Pg 012
[frame] Even after that, we kept having sex as if we had lost our minds / We didn't want to think about anything... Or rather, we couldn't think about anything
---
[frame] The mental damage from changing bodies was greater than I thought / And then, without a doubt, something broke in us
---
Taichi... I want it inside...
Let's do it... once more? Please... do it?



Pg 013
Hello, I'm 108gou. This book was supposed to be out for summer Comiket, but it ended up being late by 1 month.
I'm terribly sorry... That mess caused my health to greatly deteriorate!
The date of publication says it was in August, but it was actually in September. I had sent the front cover for printing first...

KokoroKo is good. I also wanted to draw Dereban, but I wanted to avoid spoiling it for the people watching the anime, so she never had an appearance.
Inaban is cute! She's cute! I hope Iori will find happiness. She's someone who's been through a lot.
I also like Yui. I also like Aoki! Aoki being honest is good.
I'll enjoy the anime until the end... Quick, THIS scene and THAT scene, I want to see theeeeeem!

I'll be editing my proofreading onto the quoted text.

Hi, I don't think a Red Piotrus has posted the TL bounty for this yet but here's the TL for proofreading.
(SC2015 Summer) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Difference (Sword Art Online)
(サンクリ2015 Summer) [行脚堂 (しけー)] Difference (ソードアート・オンライン )
https://e-hentai.org/g/856431/2c53ac37e3/

Pg 02

Fan fiction of Sword Art Online
Angyadow presents / X-rated
case of Shinon

Difference
Pg 03

Fan fiction of Sword Art Online
Angyadow presents / X-rated
case of Shinon

Difference
Pg 04

Disclaimer

Yup. It's suddenly SAO
This time I wanted to expand a bit on [Extra31] that went on sale the other day.

And now, if you please
Pg 05

panel 1
...Mmm

Mmm

Box: Why...

panel 2
Mmm...

...fu

Box: Why...

panel 3
fu... gu...

Nnmmm

Box: ...does

panel 4
Box right: does... this

Mm...

Kuu... nn

mmm...

Box left: feel so good
Pg 06

Panel 1
Box right: This is the inside of ALO

Mm..nn

nn

rub rub

twitch twitch

mm

Box left: A VRMMO

Panel 2
fuuu, fu...

hu, fu

Box: My current body is this avatar.

Panel 3-4
Box right: In reality, my body is currently

Box left up: Quietly lying down

Box left down: on that bed in that apartment...

TL note: I TLed the moans and effects to this point, but seems that they don't really mean anything, just sounds. I'll be skipping them until there's a change near the end. Until that point, they're mostly all huu/fu kinda sounding.
Pg 07

Panel 1
Box right: There's a limit to how much the Amusphere can interrupt.
Box left: Even though I know it can't completely shut out all stimuli...

Panel 2
Box right: What I'm feeling now......

Box left up: Is greater than the stimuli
Box left down: generated by the system...

Panel 3
Box: It should just be mere electric signals......

Panel 4
Box: ...just mere...
Pg 08

Panel 1
Boxs right: I'm still just a girl after all
Boxs left: I have my urges, and I do masturbate

Panel 2
Box: The guilt and disgust always overpowers the pleasure...

Panel 3
Box: I find it hard to think of as pleasurable
Pg 09

Panel 1
Box: ...When I first started GGO

Panel 2
Boxs right: I decided to test it out...
Boxs left: To see if it was the same in this world...

Panel 3
Box: The results were actually worse than reality
Pg 10

Panel 1
Right Box: The sensations of my avatar being touched were sent to my brain
Left boxs up: A very standard output from the system,
Left boxs down: a replay of the pleasure

Panel 2
Right box: It didn't feel real at all
Left box: As if the sensations weren't even mine.

Panel 3
Box: There was nothing pleasurable about it

Panel 4
Box right: Nothing but a weird feeling of out of place-ness and discomfort
Box left: So...
Pg 11

Panel 1
Box right: so then...
Box left: why now

Panel 2
Box right: why have I...
Box left: become...

Panel 3
Box: become...

Panel 4-5 blank
Pg 12

Panel 1
Box right up: Because it's ALO?
Box right down: Because it's not GGO?
Box left: No...

Panel 2
Box: What I'm feeling hasn't changed

Panel 3
Box: There hasn't been any change at all to the signals from the system

Panel 4
Box right: This artificial sensation...
Box left: Hasn't changed at all
Pg 13

Panel 1
Box right: This...
Box mid: should be my hand
Box left: should be my finger

Panel 2
Box right: But it doesn't feel like mine...
Box left: Something else

Panel 3
Boxs right: Someone else
Boxs left: is providing them

Panel 4
Box right: Like something
Box mid: is raping me.
Box left: ...so then
Pg 14

Panel 1
Box right: this something,
Box left: why is it so...

Panel 2-3
Box right up: Because it's...
Box right down: not me?
Box left up: It's not me
Box left down: ...Something else

Panel 4
TL: That's a lot of AAAAA, just arrange around the effects
Pg 15

Panel 1-2
Moans are still mostly AAAAAAA,
Motion effects around Sinon are SHUDDER/SHIVER/SHAKE/related synonym
Pg 16
Page wide bubbles are all haa-, post-exercise breathing
Panel 1
Box: ...what

Panel 2
Box up: What...
Box down: was that

Panel 3-4
Box right up: ...
Box right down: Could it... be that?
Box left: ...Just great
Pg 17
TL note: The boxes here are a play on train schedules

Left box:
ALO course
via Kirito reverse rape
towards Turning the tables

Right box:
GGO course
via Toyed with by mob chara
towards Descent into pleasure

Sinon: ...What the heck
Pg 18

End talk

- And that was sort of like the common route before going into the individual routes

- If the feedback for taste had its limits, then wouldn't it be really a kind of dream for the players to be experiencing sensations "in another body"? From that line of thought it went to [it works awesomely because the SAO players were trapped inside for years, as well as Yuuki's group's special circumstances]. In that case, [what about the GGO side, where Sinon moves back and forth between VR and reality?]. [How far can you accept your avatar as your actual body] was the topic that I poked around with and eventually made into this story.

- Individual route will be... soon. That said, which one should I do? Let's see.

- That's all and bye

Translation script for [GEGERA STANDARD] Gansha Onedari Offline (Sword Art Online)
for the bounty in https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13114

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顔射おねだりオフライン
Bukkake Pleading (or Begging) Offline

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Page 4
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1)
お兄ちゃんいっぱい溜めこんでくれた？
Did you save up that load I asked you to?

私。。。顔射にすっごい興味があったんだぁ～♥ 　今日は溜まったものを私の顔にいっぱいぶっかけてよねっ♥
I really wanted to try out that bukkake thing~♥ I want you to shoot that juice you've saved up, all over my face♥

2)
スグ。。。最近エッチなことに関して積極的になりすぎじゃないか？
Sugu...I think you've been a bit too assertive when it comes to sex lately.

いいでしょっ！私はアスナさんとの仲を認めてお兄ちゃんから身を引くことに決めたんだから家族としてのスキ
ンシップくらい許されるはずでしょっ！
What's wrong with it!? I said I wouldn't interfere with your relationship with Asuna-san, but that doesn't mean we can't spend some family time together!

3)
かっ家族がこんなことするかぁ。。。？
I-I don't think this is exactly what families do...

お兄ちゃんだって興味があるくせに。。。こんなに固くしちゃってっ♥
So you say, but you're obviously interested...going by how hard you are down here♥

SFX:
さわっ - fondle

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1)
アスナさんとはまだなんでしょ？
You still haven't done it with Asuna-san, have you?

うまくいくまで私がお兄ちゃんのチンポの面倒をみてあげる
I'll take care of your cock until the two of you get started.

SFX:
にぎっ - grip
ペロッ - lick

2)
チンカスいっぱい溜まっててすっごく濃厚♥
Look at all this thick smegma you've built up♥

SFX:
はあ。。。 - Haah...
ピチャ - slurp

3)
はっ激しいっっ！！
Whoa-Not so hard-!!

SFX:
んふ♥ - Mph
じゅぽ、じゅぷ - slurp

4)
うあああっ！もっもう出るっっ！！
Ahhh! I-I'm gonna-!!

SFX:
んっ。。。 - Mm...
じゅぽ - slurp

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1)
射精っ！射精してっ！！
Yes! Give it to me!!

お兄ちゃんの臭い汁顔にいっぱいぶっかけてぇ～～～っっ♥♥♥
Shoot your hot cum all over my face~~~♥♥♥

SFX:
はぁ。。。 - Haah...
ドキ - thump

2)
うおおおっっ！！
Ooooh!!

んばああああぁぁぁあああぁぁああぁぁぁっっ♥♥♥
Mbaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!♥♥♥

SFX:
ビュルルル - spuuurt
どぷっ - splort

3)
やらしい。。。やらしいよぉ。。。
It's dirty...so dirty...

あーーー。。。こっこれが顔射。。。
Ahhh...so this is cum...

SFX:
ヌル - slimy

4)
１回じゃ足りないわっ今日はもっともっと顔にかけまくってもらうからねっ♥♥
Just once isn't enough. I want more of your cum on my face, okay?♥

SFX:
バッ - open
ぶるん♥ - boing♥

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1)
ふふっ今度はおっぱいでしごいてあげる♥
Hehe! I'll squeeze it between my tits this time♥

スグの胸またでかくなったんじゃないか？
Hey, did they get even bigger?

SFX:
ぬり。。。 - smear

2)
固いチンポ乳首に擦りつけながら私も気持ちよくなっちゃう♥
Rubbing your hard cock on my nipples is making me feel good, too♥

SFX:
コリ - rub

3)
おおおっ！もっと強く挟んでくれっ！
Oooh! Squeeze it tighter!

SFX:
ギュウウウ～ - squeeze
ぐにゅう - tighten

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1)
あぁんっそんなに強くにぎらないでぇ～
Aahn! Don't squeeze them so hard~

SFX:
ギュウ - squeeze

2)
まっまた出るっ！！
I-I'm gonna cum again!!

顔っ！顔よっっ！！
On my face! Cum on my face!!

SFX:
ぎゅぽっ - thrust

3)
んぶっっ♥　ぷああぁぁっっ♥
Mbfh!♥ Pwaaaah!!♥

SFX:
どぱぁ - spurt

4)
チンポでザーメン顔中に塗り広げてぇ～っ♥♥
Rub your cock juice all over my face~♥♥

SFX:
ぬり – slimy
ぐり - rub

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1)
ねぇ。。。お願いしてたものは用意できてる？
Say...did you prepare that thing I asked you for?

言われたとおりペットボトルいっぱいに精液溜めたけど。。。こんな変態プレイやっても大丈夫なのか？
Yeah, I filled a water bottle with my cum...are you sure you wanna do something this hardcore, though?

SFX:
トプン - glop

2)
すっすっごい量のザーメン。。。！！
Whoa! So much cum...!!

お兄ちゃんっ！早く顔や体にかけまくってっ！！
Onii-chan! Splash it all over my face and body!!

3)
ふぁあああああああっっ♥♥
Fwaaaaaaah!!♥♥

SFX:
ヌロォ - gloop
どろぉ - drip

4)
顔がくっさ～いザーメンまみれだよぉおおおぉぉっっ♥♥♥
Your smelly cum is all over my faaaaaace♥♥♥

すごい。。。すごいよぉおおっっ♥
It's so...amaziiing♥

SFX:
ヌリ - slimy

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1)
あぁ～～～。。。ザーメン。。。ザーメン。。。
Aah~~~...Cum...Cum...

体中ザーメンでヌルヌルだよぉ。。。
My whole body is wet and sticky with your cum...

スグの身体。。。すっごいエロいことになってるぞっっ
Sugu...your body's so sexy like this!!

SFX:
はぁ♥ - Haah♥
ヌリ - slimy
とろぉー - drip

2)
あ～んっ♥　興奮しちゃうよぉ～～♥
Aahn!♥ I'm getting really horny~~♥

SFX:
にゅるん - lather

3)
お兄ちゃん。。。もう我慢できないよぉ
Onii-chan...don't keep me waiting~

チンポぉ。。。チンポ入れてぇ♥　オマンコ気持ちよくしてぇ♥♥
Your cock...Stick your cock in me~♥ Make my pussy feel good~♥♥

SFX:
くぱあ♥ - spread♥

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1)
ああああああっ！入ってくるぅううっっ♥
Aaaaaah! It's inside meeee♥

SFX:
ずにゅう - thrust

2)
んああああっっお兄ちゃんっお兄ちゃあぁあああぁぁんっっ♥♥♥
Nnaaaah! Onii-chan! Onii-chaaaaaaan!!♥♥♥

SFX:
あンっ♥ - Ahn♥
あっ♥ - Ah♥
じゅぽぉ、じゅぷっ - squelch

3)
スグの中ヌルヌルして気持ちいいぞっ！
Your wet pussy's amazing, Sugu!

お兄ちゃんのチンポでオマンコの中いっぱいだよぉおおおっっ♥♥♥
You're filling me up with your cooooock!!♥♥♥

SFX:
ズポ - thrust

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1)
残りの全部ぶっかけてぇ～ザーメンヌルヌルセックス気持ちいいよぉおおおおおぉぉぉっっ♥♥♥
Gimme all the cum you have left~ Wet and sticky sex feels so goooooooood!!♥♥♥

スグはまだ○学生なのにっ。。。変態すぎだろっ！
You're still a (XX) schooler...I can't believe you're such a hardcore pervert!

SFX:
どろぉ - drip
ぐちゅ - squelch
ヌリ、ヌル - slimy
じゅぶ、じゅぼ - thrust

2)
だっだってぇ～～あぁんっ♥
Y-yeah, but...aahn♥

SFX:
ずぼっ - thrust

3)
スグっっ！もうすぐイきそうだっっ！！
Sugu!! I'm ready to cum!!

イク時は顔よっ！お兄ちゃんのザーメンで私の顔を汚しつくしてぇえええええっっっ♥♥♥
I want it on my face! Shoot your dirty cum all over my faaaaace!!!♥♥♥

SFX:
んあっ♥ - Nnah♥
あっ♥ - Ah!♥
あン♥ - Ahn♥
んっ♥ - Mm♥

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1)
んばああああああああぁぁぁぁっっっ！いっくぅううううぅぅぅぅぅううううぅぅぅっっっ♥♥
Mbaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! I'm cummiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!!!♥♥

SFX:
どぴゅ - spurt
ビクッ、ビクン - twitch

2)
んん～～～っっ堪能したわぁ～～♥
Mmm~~~ that was wonderful~~♥

次は二本分溜めといてねお兄ちゃんっ♥♥
I want you to prepare two bottles for the next time, okay?♥♥

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げげらです。
直葉のおっぱい最高です。
以下の本を同人ショップ等で取り扱っていただいております。
詳しくはＨＰをのぞいてみて下さい。
Hello, this is Gegera.
Suguha's tits are awesome.
My following books are available at various doujinshi stores.
Further information is available at the home page.

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顔射おねだりオフライン
Bukkake Pleading (or Begging) Offline

発効日・２０１２・１２・３１
Publishing Date: December 31, 2012

発行・ＧＥＧＥＲＡ　ＳＴＡＮＤＡＲＤ
Publisher: Gegera Standard

印刷・サングループ
Printing: Sungroup

成人向けですので、１８歳未満の方の閲覧・購入は禁止させていただきます。
This book is aimed at adults. Therefore, those under 18 years of age are prohibited from reading or purchasing it.

Translation script for [DIOGENES CLUB (Haikawa Hemlen)] Otome-nohon Junbigou (Mai-HiME)
for the bounty in https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13244

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オトメノホン　準備号
Otome book – preparation chapter

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ジュリエット・ナオ・チャン
Juliet Nao Zhang

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Page 3
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アカネ・ソワール
Akane Soir

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ハルカ・アーミテージ
Haruka Armitage

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次回の新刊では、シズルｘナツキのフタナリものを予定。次のがその下書き・・・・汚くてスイマセン
I plan to make the next volume a Shizuru x Natsuki book. The next pages are a sample of the draft...I apologize for how messy it looks.

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4)
あっだめ。。。
Ah-no...

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1)
ぷはっっ
Pwah!!

SFX:
ドロ。。 - drip

5)
SFX:
コンコン – knock knock
びく - twitch

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お手に取ってくださった方、ありがとうございます。見るに耐えんようなページも混じっとりますが、次回なん
とか形にしてお目にかけたく思ってますのでお見捨て無きよう。。。
早くデボチン描きたいなー
Dear reader, thank you for taking this book into your hands. Some of the pages may have been an eyesore, but I plan to make them more presentable for the next release, so please don't give up on me yet...

Man, I wanna draw Forehead sometime soon.
**TL note: I assume “Forehead” refers to Haruka.**

I'll be directly editing my proofreading onto the quoted text. I couldn't really find any mistakes, though.

Translation script for [GEGERA STANDARD] Gansha Onedari Offline (Sword Art Online)
for the bounty in https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13114

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Page 1
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顔射おねだりオフライン
Bukkake Pleading (or Begging) Offline

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Page 4
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1)
お兄ちゃんいっぱい溜めこんでくれた？
Did you save up that load I asked you to?

私。。。顔射にすっごい興味があったんだぁ～♥ 　今日は溜まったものを私の顔にいっぱいぶっかけてよねっ♥
I really wanted to try out that bukkake thing~♥ I want you to shoot that juice you've saved up all over my face♥

2)
スグ。。。最近エッチなことに関して積極的になりすぎじゃないか？
Sugu...I think you've been a bit too assertive when it comes to sex lately.

いいでしょっ！私はアスナさんとの仲を認めてお兄ちゃんから身を引くことに決めたんだから家族としてのスキ
ンシップくらい許されるはずでしょっ！
What's wrong with it!? I said I wouldn't interfere with your relationship with Asuna-san, but that doesn't mean we can't spend some family time together!

3)
かっ家族がこんなことするかぁ。。。？
I-I don't think this is exactly what families do...

お兄ちゃんだって興味があるくせに。。。こんなに固くしちゃってっ♥
So you say, but you're obviously interested... going by how hard you are down here♥

SFX:
さわっ - fondle

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1)
アスナさんとはまだなんでしょ？
You still haven't done it with Asuna-san, have you?

うまくいくまで私がお兄ちゃんのチンポの面倒をみてあげる
I'll take care of your cock until the two of you get started.

SFX:
にぎっ - grip
ペロッ - lick

2)
チンカスいっぱい溜まっててすっごく濃厚♥
Look at all this thick smegma you've built up♥

SFX:
はあ。。。 - Haah...
ピチャ - slurp

3)
はっ激しいっっ！！
Whoa-Not so hard-!!

SFX:
んふ♥ - Mph
じゅぽ、じゅぷ - slurp

4)
うあああっ！もっもう出るっっ！！
Ahhh! I-I'm gonna-!!

SFX:
んっ。。。 - Mm...
じゅぽ - slurp

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1)
射精っ！射精してっ！！
Yes! Give it to me!!

お兄ちゃんの臭い汁顔にいっぱいぶっかけてぇ～～～っっ♥♥♥
Shoot your hot cum all over my face~~~♥♥♥

SFX:
はぁ。。。 - Haah...
ドキ - thump

2)
うおおおっっ！！
Ooooh!!

んばああああぁぁぁあああぁぁああぁぁぁっっ♥♥♥
Mbaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!♥♥♥

SFX:
ビュルルル - spuuurt
どぷっ - splort

3)
やらしい。。。やらしいよぉ。。。
It's dirty... so dirty...

あーーー。。。こっこれが顔射。。。
Ahhh... so this is cum...

SFX:
ヌル - slimy

4)
１回じゃ足りないわっ今日はもっともっと顔にかけまくってもらうからねっ♥♥
Just once isn't enough. I want more of your cum on my face, okay?♥

SFX:
バッ - open
ぶるん♥ - boing♥

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1)
ふふっ今度はおっぱいでしごいてあげる♥
Hehe! I'll squeeze it between my tits this time♥

スグの胸またでかくなったんじゃないか？
Hey, did they get even bigger?

SFX:
ぬり。。。 - smear

2)
固いチンポ乳首に擦りつけながら私も気持ちよくなっちゃう♥
Rubbing your hard cock on my nipples is making me feel good, too♥

SFX:
コリ - rub

3)
おおおっ！もっと強く挟んでくれっ！
Oooh! Squeeze it tighter!

SFX:
ギュウウウ～ - squeeze
ぐにゅう - tighten

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1)
あぁんっそんなに強くにぎらないでぇ～
Aahn! Don't squeeze them so hard~

SFX:
ギュウ - squeeze

2)
まっまた出るっ！！
I-I'm gonna cum again!!

顔っ！顔よっっ！！
On my face! Cum on my face!!

SFX:
ぎゅぽっ - thrust

3)
んぶっっ♥　ぷああぁぁっっ♥
Mbfh!♥ Pwaaaah!!♥

SFX:
どぱぁ - spurt

4)
チンポでザーメン顔中に塗り広げてぇ～っ♥♥
Rub your cock juice all over my face~♥♥

SFX:
ぬり – slimy
ぐり - rub

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1)
ねぇ。。。お願いしてたものは用意できてる？
Say... did you prepare that thing I asked you for?

言われたとおりペットボトルいっぱいに精液溜めたけど。。。こんな変態プレイやっても大丈夫なのか？
Yeah, I filled a water bottle with my cum... are you sure you wanna do something this hardcore, though?

SFX:
トプン - glop

2)
すっすっごい量のザーメン。。。！！
Whoa! So much cum...!!

お兄ちゃんっ！早く顔や体にかけまくってっ！！
Onii-chan! Splash it all over my face and body!!

3)
ふぁあああああああっっ♥♥
Fwaaaaaaah!!♥♥

SFX:
ヌロォ - gloop
どろぉ - drip

4)
顔がくっさ～いザーメンまみれだよぉおおおぉぉっっ♥♥♥
Your smelly cum is all over my faaaaaace♥♥♥

すごい。。。すごいよぉおおっっ♥
It's so...amaziiing♥

SFX:
ヌリ - slimy

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1)
あぁ～～～。。。ザーメン。。。ザーメン。。。
Aah~~~...Cum...Cum...

体中ザーメンでヌルヌルだよぉ。。。
My whole body is wet and sticky with your cum...

スグの身体。。。すっごいエロいことになってるぞっっ
Sugu...your body's so sexy like this!!

SFX:
はぁ♥ - Haah♥
ヌリ - slimy
とろぉー - drip

2)
あ～んっ♥　興奮しちゃうよぉ～～♥
Aahn!♥ I'm getting really horny~~♥

SFX:
にゅるん - lather

3)
お兄ちゃん。。。もう我慢できないよぉ
Onii-chan...don't keep me waiting~

チンポぉ。。。チンポ入れてぇ♥　オマンコ気持ちよくしてぇ♥♥
Your cock...Stick your cock in me~♥ Make my pussy feel good~♥♥

SFX:
くぱあ♥ - spread♥

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1)
ああああああっ！入ってくるぅううっっ♥
Aaaaaah! It's inside meeee♥

SFX:
ずにゅう - thrust

2)
んああああっっお兄ちゃんっお兄ちゃあぁあああぁぁんっっ♥♥♥
Nnaaaah! Onii-chan! Onii-chaaaaaaan!!♥♥♥

SFX:
あンっ♥ - Ahn♥
あっ♥ - Ah♥
じゅぽぉ、じゅぷっ - squelch

3)
スグの中ヌルヌルして気持ちいいぞっ！
Your wet pussy's amazing, Sugu!

お兄ちゃんのチンポでオマンコの中いっぱいだよぉおおおっっ♥♥♥
You're filling me up with your cooooock!!♥♥♥

SFX:
ズポ - thrust

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1)
残りの全部ぶっかけてぇ～ザーメンヌルヌルセックス気持ちいいよぉおおおおおぉぉぉっっ♥♥♥
Gimme all the cum you have left~ Wet and sticky sex feels so goooooooood!!♥♥♥

スグはまだ○学生なのにっ。。。変態すぎだろっ！
You're still a (XX) schooler...I can't believe you're such a hardcore pervert!

SFX:
どろぉ - drip
ぐちゅ - squelch
ヌリ、ヌル - slimy
じゅぶ、じゅぼ - thrust

2)
だっだってぇ～～あぁんっ♥
Y-yeah, but...aahn♥

SFX:
ずぼっ - thrust

3)
スグっっ！もうすぐイきそうだっっ！！
Sugu!! I'm ready to cum!!

イク時は顔よっ！お兄ちゃんのザーメンで私の顔を汚しつくしてぇえええええっっっ♥♥♥
I want it on my face! Shoot your dirty cum all over my faaaaace!!!♥♥♥

SFX:
んあっ♥ - Nnah♥
あっ♥ - Ah!♥
あン♥ - Ahn♥
んっ♥ - Mm♥

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1)
んばああああああああぁぁぁぁっっっ！いっくぅううううぅぅぅぅぅううううぅぅぅっっっ♥♥
Mbaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! I'm cummiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!!!♥♥

SFX:
どぴゅ - spurt
ビクッ、ビクン - twitch

2)
んん～～～っっ堪能したわぁ～～♥
Mmm~~~ that was wonderful~~♥

次は二本分溜めといてねお兄ちゃんっ♥♥
I want you to prepare two bottles for the next time, okay?♥♥

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げげらです。
直葉のおっぱい最高です。
以下の本を同人ショップ等で取り扱っていただいております。
詳しくはＨＰをのぞいてみて下さい。
Hello, this is Gegera.
Suguha's tits are awesome.
My following books are available at various doujinshi stores.
Further information is available at the home page.

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顔射おねだりオフライン
Bukkake Pleading (or Begging) Offline

発効日・２０１２・１２・３１
Publishing Date: December 31, 2012

発行・ＧＥＧＥＲＡ　ＳＴＡＮＤＡＲＤ
Publisher: Gegera Standard

印刷・サングループ
Printing: Sungroup

成人向けですので、１８歳未満の方の閲覧・購入は禁止させていただきます。
This book is aimed at adults. Therefore, those under 18 years of age are prohibited from reading or purchasing it.

Well, this was too short to really have any mistakes in it, but I checked anyway.

Translation script for [DIOGENES CLUB (Haikawa Hemlen)] Otome-nohon Junbigou (Mai-HiME)
for the bounty in https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13244

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オトメノホン　準備号
Otome book – preparation chapter

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ジュリエット・ナオ・チャン
Juliet Nao Zhang

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アカネ・ソワール
Akane Soir

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ハルカ・アーミテージ
Haruka Armitage

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次回の新刊では、シズルｘナツキのフタナリものを予定。次のがその下書き・・・・汚くてスイマセン
I plan to make the next volume a Shizuru x Natsuki book. The next pages are a sample of the draft...I apologize for how messy it looks.

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4)
あっだめ。。。
Ah-no...

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1)
ぷはっっ
Pwah!!

SFX:
ドロ。。 - drip

5)
SFX:
コンコン – knock knock
びく - twitch

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お手に取ってくださった方、ありがとうございます。見るに耐えんようなページも混じっとりますが、次回なん
とか形にしてお目にかけたく思ってますのでお見捨て無きよう。。。
早くデボチン描きたいなー
Dear reader, thank you for taking this book into your hands. Some of the pages may have been an eyesore, but I plan to make them more presentable for the next release, so please don't give up on me yet...

Man, I wanna draw Forehead sometime soon.
**TL note: I assume “Forehead” refers to Haruka.**

editing bounties for

SOA (diff) https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13247
SOA (sugu) https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13248
MAIHIME https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13249