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Jul 23 2015, 00:10
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Unkaar
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I finally finished it:
There really shouldn't be anything to fix. Normally.
I'll wait for your ok to claim the bounty, for the originally agreed price. The un-censoring was done of my own accord, I'd hate for it to feel like I was fishing for some bonus reward, or for you to feel obligated to.
Besides my meager artistic skills may not be to everyone's liking.
So without further ado:
https://mega.co.nz/#!SktQhD7I!Zc0yPa08Wvo1VsaEfWsFzcaoh8ZLYURrZvk2xNueDPU
Not sure I'll do that often anyway, that really took a lot more time than expected.
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Aug 3 2015, 09:32
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Red of EHCOVE
Group: Gold Star Club
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TL [Rukonosu (Ganari Ryuu)] Nyuukan ProWres (Sekai de Ichiban...) of by Ogodei-Khan [ pastebin.com] http://pastebin.com/uT6xxTbuNyuukan ProWres Script Uses e-hentai gallery page numbers Page 2: A: Haugh… B: Hkaaah! C: Bam! It looks like Sakura’s in agony! D: S-Sakura… -chan! E: Hah hah! How about I show off these lewd tits of yours? F: Ahhhh! G: Kazama’s hold has opened up Sakura’s costume and her beautiful nipples have spilled out! H: Her exposed breasts ripple with her body’s every movement! As she struggles to grapple, her pink nipples and areolae are dripping with sweat! I: C’mon! You won’t get off that easy! J: Nooooo! K: This… This is… embarrassing… L: I… Page 3: A: The Pro-Wrestling dojo “Berserk.” B: This was just supposed to be for promo purposes… C: Ah… Ahh! D: Elena! E: You ain’t got a chance of breaking out of this attack! F: Hahh… G: Wahhhh… P-please stop… H: Ah Ahh! I: Nangh… Higuh! Page 4: A: Elena, Elena! B: Aww… did the poor idols get in over their heads? (not literal, the literal sentence drives this way but is too vague). C: How… how dare you… D: I challenge you in Elena’s place! E: Heh… If you want to go that far, how about a “Caballera Maiden Caballera” match! F: You’re on! G: S-Sakura… H: You don’t know what you’re getting into… I: Ladies and gentlemen! It’s what you’ve all been waiting for! J: Here at Berserk Gym’s special underground ring! K: The famous idol Sakura Hagiwara versus Berserk’s Kazama Rio in a special bout! L: In addition, this is an unofficial match! Page 5: A: S-Sakura… Sakura-chan… B: Sakura dashes towards Kazama! C: Eh!? D: Heh F: Gah! G: Ah! H: Wow! Has Kazama caught Sakura so easily!? (pink text outside bubble, top of bottom-left panel) Mmm… I: W-what’s up with my body!? Page 6: A: Oh? Is the little idol feeling strange? B: Maybe you shouldn’t have drunk that sports drink before the match… C: Hihn… W-what did you put in it…? D: You’re not welcome, so you need… E: To be punished!! F: N-no… Page 7: A: This is so embarrassing… B: Boom! There’s the Romero Special! C: Sakura’s chest is in full view! D: Ahh… E: Yer costume’s slipping up into yer camel toe! F: And yer thighs are getting pretty wet, too! G: Ahh!! H: It’s rubbing inside… It feels good… Page 8: A: Whoa! Amazing! Kazama and Sakura are scissoring, this is too hot! B: Nooo! C: Kazama is tormenting Sakura’s thighs! D: A power-bomb into a piledriver! (note: the Japanese word used is a slang term, literally translated as piledriver, which in this case is a sex position and not a wrestling move). E: Ah! F: Is her clit visible!? With the way her tongue is sucking on it, just how erect is it!? G: Kazama! Isn’t that enough? H: Ahn I: Mr. President! J: I think our audience is ready for Ms. Sakura. K: Hah L: Ah M: So this is what you’ve waited for… Page 9: A: Time for your unveiling! B: There it is! Kazama’s famous “Shame Hold!” Her gently wet pussy, spread open right down the middle! Her bright pussy juices and beautiful vagina* open for all of our guests to see! (the term is “vaginal opening, medically the vagina proper, which is redundant since I use pussy elsewhere here, but that’s how it’s worded). Page 10: A: Everyone’s getting up on stage and unzipping at once! Right now, her flower is in full blossom in the ring! B: Haahh C: They’re looking… everyone’s looking at my pussy… I… can’t hold on… (the two on the fringes of this bubble say “Haah”) Page 11: A: Well, let me start this off real quick. B: Since I was the one who called for this. C: ‘Cuz I’ve wanted you to give me a titfuck with those splendid jugs. D: Then later I’ll be able to enjoy the rest of this… E: Ohoh! That’s it! F (below E): These things feel just like mochi cakes! G: Not bad at all… H: Your pussy’s soaking, Sakura. I: Ugh… C-cumming! J: Thrusting my cock in your mouth feels incredible! K: Nmuh! Page 12: A: Fuh… Haugh… B: Feel… weird… C: It hurts… Ahhh! D: Mm… Kuah! E: Heh… You’re wild <3 F: At last, a sign of Sakura’s pleasure is bursting out of her womanhood! G: Ku ku ku… Oi oi, just what do you think you’re doing in the ring? H: Hahaha, you’re giving a better performance than I thought, Sakura. I: Sakura-chan! J: Hmm!? Page 13: A: Are you the president of Sakura’s fan club? B: Hahaha… Your enthusiasm is showing… I wonder what you want to do to her? I think you know… C: Alright! Step into the special ring! D: I’ll leave it to you now… E: How about you show some gratitude to the fan who’s always been cheering you on? FG: Hah H: Pl… I: Please fuck my… J: Hah K: sloppy wet pussy! L: Ahah M: S-Sakura-chan, I’m going in… N: Okay… O: Ahahn <3 Not there! Page 14: A: Higuh B: Uwa C: And then… D: there we go… E: Hikh F: Ah! G: Ahh!! H: The “Caballera Maiden Caballera” is complete! I: It hurts! Page 15: A: Hah B: Do whatever you want! C: Hah D: Ahih E: We’ll continue showing our support! F: That’s… G: So good… HI: Cumming! J: For pleasure like this… Page 16: A: Cumming!! B: I’ll do my best! C: Sakura! You’ll pass out at this rate, tap out! D: Ahhhh!!! E: We can see inside her mouth! F: The idol Sakura’s beautiful expression! Now throw your used tissues into the ring to congratulate her on a well-fought match! G: Great job, Sakura-chan! H: I’ll definitely cheer for you next time! Page 17: A: Fufufu… Sakura’s got some outstanding talent… B: There’s another, too… I think… Sakura has a rival… C: Th-that girl will definitely… come to the ring… D: Fufufu… That’s just like you, Makoto… E: So good! F: Aahn <3 G: Sakura’s debut as an Idol-Wrestler was just like yours. H: Go deeper! <3 I: Ah-ah… J: A-again… K: Well… as an underground idol, anyway… L: Mfufu… I love you… my*dear Page 18: The Idol, Sakura Hagiwara Is a total pervert <3 Who begs to do nasty things in the ring <3 <3 <3 (smaller black text) A promising newbie, Or a bitch in heat, Which is her destiny!? editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12864This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 3 2015, 09:33 |
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Aug 7 2015, 15:20
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peregrine150
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Hey, posting here once again to accept the bounty on https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12844 Should be done within a week or two, depending on how absorbed i get in working on it XD |
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Aug 18 2015, 06:53
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Red of EHCOVE
Group: Gold Star Club
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script for https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12443https://e-hentai.org/g/666940/c055c2037c/TL: litinium (credit as anonymous) P03 ん・・・ちゅ・・・ 真奥・・・さん・・・ はむ・・・・・・ Mmn...chu...Mao...san...Hamu...... な、ななー Wh-wha... な、何してんのよ！ 魔王！ あ、あんたはァ！ W-what are you doing! Demon Lord! Y-you! なんだ、恵美か 久しぶりだな Well, Emi it's been awhile ん、んく・・・ んむ・・・・・・ん？どうしましたか真奥さん？ Mn, mmngh... mmn.. hmm? What is it, Mao-san? P04 あ、遊佐さんー Ah, Yusa-san- 遊佐さんー じゃないわよっ！千穂ちゃんも な、何してんのよ！ Don't just call me like that! You too Chiho-chan, what are you doing! えー？ Eh? もちろん真奥さんに御奉仕しているんですよ Of course I'm attending Mao-san, right? な、な、何ー え？奉仕？え？な、何のこと？ W-wh-whaaat? Eh? Attending? What do you mean? え？パイズリとフェラチオですよ 遊佐さんは知らないんですか？ Eh? I mean paizuri and fellatio, You didn't know about it? パ・・・フェ・・・？ Pa...Fe...? 食べ物じゃないぞ It's not food's name P05 知らないわよ！そ、そんな破廉恥なこと！ I don't know such shameless thing! エミリアは教会育ちだからなあ品行方正なんだよ Emilia grew in church, that's why she doesn't know things like that じゃあ遊佐さんってまだ処女なんですね あーよかったー So you are still virgin right, Yusa-san? Ah, I'm relieved な、何がいいのよ！って、な、何をしているの！千穂ちゃん！あっ、あああ！ Wh-why are you relieved! W-wait, what are you doing! Chiho-chan! A-aaah! んっとー Hop ふうー ちーちゃんの膣はやっぱ気持ちいいな Oh~ as expected, Chi-chan's pussy feels so good えへへ もう真奥さんの全部入るようになったんですよ Ehehe All of mao-san's is inside me あ・・・う・・・あ・・・ま、魔王！ど、どういうことよ、これ！ Aa...Uu...Aa...Demon Lord! W-what do you mean by doing this! あんっ Ahn んー？やっぱり魔王が自分だけ働くのは間違っている気がしてな Hm? As I expected, for a demon lord to work is not right 魔王らしく部下にも働かせて 俺は千穂ちゃんといちゃいちゃセックスしているんだ だから邪魔するなよ So I'm letting the peons to work for me while I'm having sex with Chiho-chan, so don't disturb us せっ・・・・・・！んぐ・・・あ・・・う・・・ Se......! Gu...Aa...Uuu... そーそれより す、鈴乃はどうしたのよ！ T-that aside, wh-where is Suzuno! んーああ鈴乃か？ Hm? Ah, Suzuno? P06 鈴乃は最初に気付いて止めに来たが魔王の力で返り討ちにしてやったよ when she know what I'm doing, she tried to stop me, so I give her a taste of my power なー Wha- 天下の異端審問官といっても只の人間だからな力を奪ってから無理やり犯してやったさ even the Chief Inquisitor is only a human, so I rape her after I stole her power ま、最初は随分抵抗したんだが数時間かけて可愛がってやったらよても素直になったぞ well, at first she was struggling but after a few hours of affections she became obedient ・・・・・・彼女はどこ？ .....where is she? P07 今は気を失ったからそこの押し入れの中にいれてあるさそろそろ木がつくかな？ she lost her consiousness for now, I put her in the closet. She should be awake by now ・・・・・・ ..... 顕現せよ我が力ー魔をー Manifest now, my true power- お、おいおいー聖法気は勘弁！ W-wai-wait give me a break! 何しろ破邪の衣とか全く色気ないしなおい、鈴乃ー起きろ After all there is no sexiness if you wear your armor.. Suzuno, wake up 色気ー？えっ？千穂ちゃん？す、鈴乃？ Sexiness? Eh? Chi-chan? Su-suzuno? え？きゃあっ！ Eh? Kyaa! P08 ちょ、ちょっと千穂ちゃん！鈴乃！正気に戻って！ Wa-wait Chi-chan! Suzuno! Return to your senses! や、やだ！服脱がさないで！ N-no! Don't strip my clothes! 鈴乃に関しては魔力も使ったから簡単には戻らないぜ You should thanks Suzuno. I've used my magic on her, so she wont be back soon 俺の命令をちゃんと聞くりっぱなお人形さそうだろ、ベル？ I have invited a splendid puppet that obey my order obidiently, right Bel? はい魔王さま Yes, my lord ちょ、鈴乃！あんた本当に？ Wai-! Suzuno! Are you really-! きゃあっ！ Kyaa! ま、真奥！みるな！ M-Mao! Don't look! はあ・・・ Haa... な、何よ！その残念そうな顔は！ Wh-what's with that disappointed look! や、やだ！やめて！ N-no! Stop! ちょっと待って！何をするつもりよ！ Wait! What are you doing! 趣味じゃないがお前には魅了術が効かないからまずは身体ってことさ It's not my taste, your charm doesn't work on me. So let's start with your body は、はあ？趣味じゃないってどういう意味よ！え？あ、やっ！それは、だ、駄目ェ！ H-Ha? What do you mean! Eh? Ah, no! That's... don't! P09 ふむまだ堅いし濡れてないな Hmm, It's too tight and not wet enough ひっ！あ、当たり前でしょ！や、やあ！ Hii! O-Of course! N-No! じゃあベルとちーちゃん恵美を用意してやってくれ Well, Bel and Chi-chan prepare Emi for me はい Yes はーい Ye~s ちょ、ちょっと！やめて！ふたりとも！ひっ！い、嫌あ！ W-Wait! Stop!Both of you! Hiii! N-Nooo! や、やだ！みないで！ひろげないで！ N-No! Don't look! Don't spread it! ひあ！ Hyaa! ひう！だめぇ！ちーちゃん！そ、そこやめてっ！ Hiii! Don't! Chi-chan! stop doing that! P10 随分と可愛い声で鳴くんだな Your scream is cute う、うるさいわねバカ！死ね！ Sh-shut up! Stupid! Die! ま、可愛い声だがやっぱり魔王は勇者の悲鳴を聴かないとな Well, even if it's cute, a Demon Lord wouldn't be faltered え・・・う、嘘・・・い、嫌・・・やめー Ee...You can't....N-no...stop... あああ！い、痛！やああ！ Aaaah! I-it hurts! Noooo! や、やだ！いやあ！ N-no! I don't want it! ひっ Hiii あ、ああ！ A-aaa! ふふふ全部入ったぜ恵美ーいや勇者エミリア fufufu It's all the way inside Emi-, well no, Hero Emilia 勇者のオ〇ンコも他の人間と変わらないんだな A hero's pussy is not so different with other human P11 い、いやあ・・・そんな・・・私・・・少しだけ・・・信じかけてたのに・・・ N-no...it can't be...even thought...I believed you... 真奥のバカぁ・・・・・・あんたやっぱり最悪最低のケダモノ魔王よ・・・！ Stupid Mao......You are the worst, the lowest, へえ勇者が魔王をちょっとは信じてたんだな Hee, to think that you believed me まったく平和ボケしちゃったようだな俺もお前も indeed we've been softened う・・・・・・くぅ・・・・・・ uh...... kuh... そんなんだから父親の仇に処女まで奪われるんだぜ thats why you lose your virginity at your father's foe う・・・うう・・・・・・ごめんなさい・・・おとう・・・さん・・・う、あ、あああ・・・ u.. uuu... sorry.... father.... uh, a-aaah... そうして泣いている顔は可愛いんだがな your crying face is cute う・・・あ・・・ uu... aa... んっんん！ hngg! P12 エミリアお前の膣は結構いい具合だぞもう勇者なんか辞めて俺の女になれよ Emilia, your pussy is really good, why don't you stop being a Hero and be my woman ふ、ふざけ・・・ないで・・・！誰が・・・あんたの・・・あ、あああ！ you are.... joking! who... would... a-aaah! も、当然か じゃ二度と俺様に逆らう気が起きないよう躾けないとな Well, of course I will train you so you won't oppose me anymore 鈴乃ー 叫びそうだから口を塞いどけ Suzuno, shut her mouth so she won't scream はいー yes ん、んん！ n-ngh! しつけは最初が肝心だからなたっぷりと俺の魔力がこもった精液を膣内に出してやるよ The first time is crucial when you train someone, So I will impregnate you deep inside with my magic ん？んんー！ hm? nngh! ぷはっ！う、嘘でしょ？ね、ねえ？ puha! N-no! Stop! あ、ああ！やあ！ Aaah! no! だ、だめ！絶対にそれだけは！ d-don't! please not that! P13 いくぞー I'm coming- い、いやあああああああ！ N-noooooooooooo! うー遊佐さんちゃんと膣にだしてもらってずるいです Uuu.. It's not fair.. Yusa-san is getting creampied こらこらちーちゃんはまだ高校生だからまずいでしょ？ Hey hey, you are still highschooler, it would be bad if I came inside you P14 じゃあ卒業したら絶対ですよ！絶対に絶対ですよ！約束です！ Then you have to do it after I graduated! You have to! Okay! う・・・あ・・・・・・ U...a... わかったわかったちーちゃんもエミリアも鈴乃もエメラダもみんな俺が責任持って孕ませてやるよ Okay okay, whether it's Chi-chan Emilia Suzuno or Emeralda I will take responsibility and impregnate all of you わーいさすがまおうさん！ Yaay as expected Maou-san! はっ Ha.. ん・・・どうした恵美 便所か？ hmm.. what happen Emi? Toilet? ち、違うわよ！ N-no! 我慢は良くないからな It's not good to hold it ま、子供みたいな身体でもおもらしはさすがにないか well, even though your body looks like a child you wouldn't do "that" right 死ね！死んでしまえ！ Die! Die you! ぎゃあっ GYaa! END editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12933This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 19 2015, 09:22 |
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Aug 21 2015, 04:57
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Red of EHCOVE
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QUOTE(ultimaflaral @ Aug 20 2015, 20:26) 
Anti-RHudson post.
Please don't take over the entire subforum like that. It's obnoxious.
UF
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Aug 21 2015, 11:43
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CrimsonClown
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Proofread for Nyuukan ProWres: Page 2: QUOTE G: Kazama’s hold has opened up Sakura’s costume and her beautiful nipples have spilled out! S: As far as I'm familiar with pro wrestling, they don't call whatever they wear "costume" but use "attire" instead. QUOTE H: Her exposed breasts ripple with her body’s every movement! S: Her exposed breasts ripple with every movement of her body. QUOTE I: C’mon! You won’t get off that easy! S: You won't get off that easily. Page 3: QUOTE E: You ain’t got a chance of breaking out of this attack! S: You ain't got a chance of breaking out of this hold. QUOTE K: The famous idol Sakura Hagiwara versus Berserk’s Kazama Rio in a special bout! C: Following the name format of *first* *last* used so far, it's Rio Kazama. Page 6: QUOTE D: You’re not welcome, so you need… C: You're not welcomed. Page 7: QUOTE E: Yer costume’s slipping up into yer camel toe! S: Attire Page 11: QUOTE F (below E): These things feel just like mochi cakes! C: Mochi are rice cakes so either use just "mochi" without the "cakes" or use "rice cakes". Page 12: QUOTE B: Feel… weird… C: Feels. QUOTE H: Hahaha, you’re giving a better performance than I thought, Sakura. C: You're giving a better performance than I expected. Page 17: QUOTE B: There’s another, too… I think… Sakura has a rival… C: There's another one... This post has been edited by CrimsonClown: Aug 22 2015, 06:31 |
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Aug 21 2015, 13:33
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CrimsonClown
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Proofread for No Work, No Life:
Too many things to point out so I'm rewriting the whole thing
P03
ん・・・ちゅ・・・ 真奥・・・さん・・・ はむ・・・・・・
Mmn... Chu... Mao... san... Hamu...
な、ななー
Wh-wha...
な、何してんのよ！ 魔王！ あ、あんたはァ！
What are you doing!? Demon Lord! Y-you!
なんだ、恵美か 久しぶりだな
Oh Emi, it's been a while
ん、んく・・・ んむ・・・・・・ん？どうしましたか真奥さん？
Mn, mmngh... Mmn... Hmm? What is it, Mao-san?
P04
あ、遊佐さんー
Ah, Yusa-san-
遊佐さんー じゃないわよっ！千穂ちゃんも な、何してんのよ！
Don't just casually call my name! And Chiho-chan, what are you doing!?
えー？
Eh?
もちろん真奥さんに御奉仕しているんですよ
As you can see, I'm serving Mao-san, right?
な、な、何ー え？奉仕？え？な、何のこと？
W-wh-whaaat!? Eh!? Serving!? What do you mean!?
え？パイズリとフェラチオですよ 遊佐さんは知らないんですか？
Eh? I mean paizuri and fellatio, You don't know about it?
パ・・・フェ・・・？
Pa...Fe...? (The joke here is that she just said "parfait" so include the word "parfait" in a bracket or something here so that readers can get it easily and this joke about food is also why I changed "attending" to "serving" on the lines above)
食べ物じゃないぞ
"It's not food" or alternatively "Not that"
P05
知らないわよ！そ、そんな破廉恥なこと！
I don't know about shameless things!
エミリアは教会育ちだからなあ品行方正なんだよ
Emilia grew up in a church, that's why she doesn't know
じゃあ遊佐さんってまだ処女なんですね あーよかったー
So you're still a virgin Yusa-san? Ah, that's good
な、何がいいのよ！って、な、何をしているの！千穂ちゃん！あっ、あああ！
Wh-what do you mean good!? W-wait, what are you doing!? Chiho-chan!? A-aaah!
んっとー
Hop
ふうー ちーちゃんの膣はやっぱ気持ちいいな
Oh~ As expected, Chi-chan's pussy feels so good
えへへ もう真奥さんの全部入るようになったんですよ
Ehehe, Mao-san is all the way inside me
あ・・・う・・・あ・・・ま、魔王！ど、どういうことよ、これ！
Aa... Uu... Aa... Demon Lord! W-what are you trying to accomplish!?
あんっ
Ahn
んー？やっぱり魔王が自分だけ働くのは間違っている気がしてな
Hm? I figured that it's not right for a demon lord to work
魔王らしく部下にも働かせて 俺は千穂ちゃんといちゃいちゃセックスしているんだ だから邪魔するなよ
So I'm letting the peons do the work for me while I'm having sex with Chiho-chan. Now don't disturb us
せっ・・・・・・！んぐ・・・あ・・・う・・・
Se...! Gu... Aa... Uuu...
そーそれより す、鈴乃はどうしたのよ！
T-that aside, wh-where is Suzuno!?
んーああ鈴乃か？
Hm? Ah, Suzuno?
P06
鈴乃は最初に気付いて止めに来たが魔王の力で返り討ちにしてやったよ
When she discovered what I was doing, she tried to stop me so I give her a taste of my power
なー
Wha-
天下の異端審問官といっても只の人間だからな力を奪ってから無理やり犯してやったさ
Even a Chief Inquisitor is only human so I raped her after I stole her power
ま、最初は随分抵抗したんだが数時間かけて可愛がってやったらよても素直になったぞ
She was struggling at first but after a few hours of affection, she became obedient
・・・・・・彼女はどこ？
...Where is she?
P07
今は気を失ったからそこの押し入れの中にいれてあるさそろそろ木がつくかな？
She lost consciousness earlier so I put her in the closet. She should be awake by now
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顕現せよ我が力ー魔をー
Manifest now, my true power-
お、おいおいー聖法気は勘弁！
W-wai-wait give me a break!
何しろ破邪の衣とか全く色気ないしなおい、鈴乃ー起きろ
You won't look erotic if you wear your armor. Suzuno, wake up
色気ー？えっ？千穂ちゃん？す、鈴乃？
Erotic? Eh? Chi-chan? Su-suzuno?
え？きゃあっ！
Eh!? Kyaa!
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ちょ、ちょっと千穂ちゃん！鈴乃！正気に戻って！
Wa-wait! Chi-chan! Suzuno! Regain your senses!
や、やだ！服脱がさないで！
N-no! Don't take my clothes off!
鈴乃に関しては魔力も使ったから簡単には戻らないぜ
You should thank Suzuno. I used my magic on her so she won't regain her senses anytime soon
俺の命令をちゃんと聞くりっぱなお人形さそうだろ、ベル？
She's now a splendid puppet that obeys my every orders, right Bell?
はい魔王さま
Yes, my lord
ちょ、鈴乃！あんた本当に？
Wai-! Suzuno! Are you really-!?
きゃあっ！
Kyaa!
ま、真奥！みるな！
M-Mao! Don't look!
はあ・・・
Haa...
な、何よ！その残念そうな顔は！
Wh-what's with that disappointed look!?
や、やだ！やめて！
N-no! Stop!
ちょっと待って！何をするつもりよ！
Wait! What are you doing!?
趣味じゃないがお前には魅了術が効かないからまずは身体ってことさ
It's not up to my taste, your breasts don't excite me. Let's start with your lower body
は、はあ？趣味じゃないってどういう意味よ！え？あ、やっ！それは、だ、駄目ェ！
H-Ha!? What do you mean!? Eh!? Ah, no! That's... don't!
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ふむまだ堅いし濡れてないな
Hmm, It's still too tight and not wet enough
ひっ！あ、当たり前でしょ！や、やあ！
Hii! O-Of course not! N-No!
じゃあベルとちーちゃん恵美を用意してやってくれ
Both of you prepare Emi for me
はい
Yes
はーい
Ye~s
ちょ、ちょっと！やめて！ふたりとも！ひっ！い、嫌あ！
W-Wait! Stop! Both of you! Hiii! N-Nooo!
や、やだ！みないで！ひろげないで！
N-No! Don't look! Don't spread it!
ひあ！
Hyaa!
ひう！だめぇ！ちーちゃん！そ、そこやめてっ！
Hiii! Don't! Chi-chan! Stop doing that!
P10
随分と可愛い声で鳴くんだな
Your screams are cute
う、うるさいわねバカ！死ね！
Sh-shut up! Stupid! Die!
ま、可愛い声だがやっぱり魔王は勇者の悲鳴を聴かないとな
Even if they're cute, a Demon Lord won't falter
え・・・う、嘘・・・い、嫌・・・やめー
Ee... You can't... N-no... Stop...
あああ！い、痛！やああ！
Aaaah! I-it hurts! Noooo!
や、やだ！いやあ！
N-no! I don't want it!
ひっ
Hiii
あ、ああ！
A-aaa!
ふふふ全部入ったぜ恵美ーいや勇者エミリア
Fufufu, it's all the way inside Emi... Or should I say, Hero Emilia
勇者のオ〇ンコも他の人間と変わらないんだな
A hero's pussy is not so different from a normal human's
P11
い、いやあ・・・そんな・・・私・・・少しだけ・・・信じかけてたのに・・・
N-no... It can't be... Even though... I believed you...
真奥のバカぁ・・・・・・あんたやっぱり最悪最低のケダモノ魔王よ・・・！
Stupid Mao... You're the worst... the lowest...!
へえ勇者が魔王をちょっとは信じてたんだな
Hee, to think that you believed me
まったく平和ボケしちゃったようだな俺もお前も
Indeed, you've become soft
う・・・・・・くぅ・・・・・・
Uh... Kuh...
そんなんだから父親の仇に処女まで奪われるんだぜ
That's why you lost your virginity to your father's foe
う・・・うう・・・・・・ごめんなさい・・・おとう・・・さん・・・う、あ、あああ・・・
U... Uuu... Sorry.... Father.... Uh, a-aaah...
そうして泣いている顔は可愛いんだがな
Your crying face is cute
う・・・あ・・・
Uu... aa...
んっんん！
Hngg!
P12
エミリアお前の膣は結構いい具合だぞもう勇者なんか辞めて俺の女になれよ
Emilia, your pussy is really good, why don't you stop being a hero and be my woman
ふ、ふざけ・・・ないで・・・！誰が・・・あんたの・・・あ、あああ！
You're joking... right!? Who... would... a-aaah!
も、当然か じゃ二度と俺様に逆らう気が起きないよう躾けないとな
I will train you so you won't oppose me anymore
鈴乃ー 叫びそうだから口を塞いどけ
Suzuno, shut her mouth so she won't scream
はいー
Yes
ん、んん！
N-ngh!
しつけは最初が肝心だからなたっぷりと俺の魔力がこもった精液を膣内に出してやるよ
The first time is always crucial when you train someone so I will cum deep inside and impregnate you with my magic
ん？んんー！
Hm!? Nngh!
ぷはっ！う、嘘でしょ？ね、ねえ？
Puha! N-no! Stop!
あ、ああ！やあ！
Aaah! No!
だ、だめ！絶対にそれだけは！
D-don't! Please not that!
P13
いくぞー
I'm coming-
い、いやあああああああ！
N-noooooooooooo!
うー遊佐さんちゃんと膣にだしてもらってずるいです
Uuu... It's not fair... Yusa-san is getting creampied
こらこらちーちゃんはまだ高校生だからまずいでしょ？
Hey hey, you're still a high schooler, it would be bad if I came inside you
P14
じゃあ卒業したら絶対ですよ！絶対に絶対ですよ！約束です！
Then you have to do it after I graduate! You have to! Okay!?
う・・・あ・・・・・・
U... A...
わかったわかったちーちゃんもエミリアも鈴乃もエメラダもみんな俺が責任持って孕ませてやるよ
Okay okay, whether it's Chi-chan, Emilia, Suzuno or Emeralda I will take responsibility and impregnate all of you
わーいさすがまおうさん！
Yaay, as expected of Mao-san!
はっ
Ha...
ん・・・どうした恵美 便所か？
Hmm... What's wrong Emi? Toilet?
ち、違うわよ！
N-no!
我慢は良くないからな
It's not good to hold it in
ま、子供みたいな身体でもおもらしはさすがにないか
Well, even though your body looks like a child's, you wouldn't do "that" right
死ね！死んでしまえ！
Die! Die you!
ぎゃあっ
Gyaa!
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Aug 24 2015, 00:00
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Bounty on https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12844 is complete, here's the link: [ www.filedropper.com] http://www.filedropper.com/file_8And below is the copy-pasted script. I feel better about the translation for this than the previous Hybrid Tsuushin I did, but still need to improve lots more! ======== Seven Deadly Boobs Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.18 Muronaga Chashu ======== Page 2 奥付 - Publication Credits (Publisher Notes/Data/Credits) ハイブリッド通信vol.18 - Hybrid Tsuushin Vol. 18 発行日 - Date of publication 発行 - Publisher ハイブリッド事務室 - Hybrid Office HP - Homepage 著者 - Author Muronaga Chashu 印刷所 - Printed しまや出版様 - Shimaya Publications ======== Page 3 -------- SFX ぶるッ,ふる - Shiver, Tremble, Quiver もぞ - Wriggle, Tremble ビク - Twitch ハァ - Haa (General panting) ズボッ - POP! ばた - wriggle, squirm (Would actually be a sort of smacking, slapping sound. Use that if you wish, i just wasn't sure whether the SFX would fit the English translation properly.) -------- 第６話 今日も懲りずにやらせていただいた大パイ Deadly Boobs Chapter 6 - Today I'll find out for Myself キング！！早くー！！ "King!! Hurry uuup!!" フガッブゴゴ "This is really uncomfortableee..." もがく度に揺れる肉。。。 "This squirming, shaking meat..." スゴイよ。。。デイアンヌ！！ "Its amazing...Dianne!!" 。。。ん？ "...Ehh?" あぁああ。。。これがディアンヌの。。。 "Aaaah...this is Dianne's..." ちょ。。。キング！？真面目にやって！！ "Wai-King!? Stop messing around already!!" あっ。。。ゴメン！ "Ah! Sorry!" じゃ。。。じゃあいくよ！？ "I-I'll go ahead then!" うん！よろしくだよ！！ "I'm counting on you!!" キャッ "Ah!" あーんもう何してんのキングぅ！！ "Aaaah! What're you doing King!!" もぞもぞしないでー "Stop wriggling around!" ごっごめんよディアンヌ！！オイラつい。。。 "S-sorry Dianne!! It was an accident..." なんちゃって！ "...Not!" (or "...Kidding!") なんちゃってじゃないよー！！ "Stop messing around already!!" ======== Page 4 -------- SFX ムキッ - Squeel, Screech (For this case, i think it'd probably make more sense with English readers to use a different SFX, like 'Drip, ooze' to represent his nosebleed) ハァ - Haa! (General panting) キュピー - Snap! (Finger snap), Ping! ドン - Tadaaa, BANG, Boom! (Used for dramatic impact and effect) ドキ - Badum! (Heartbeat) ムチ - Squish, Boin むん - twitch, wiggle ぴよーん - Leap!, Boing! ゴクリ - Gulp... -------- 第７話 何をやってるかわかりにくくてごめんなパイな大パイ Deadly Boobs Chapter 7 - I Don't Know Where i'm Going With This, Sorry! (I think that's what the title is trying to say) ということでー A little later... ぬおぉおぉ！！ "Whuuuooaa!!" ついに。。。ついに。。。 "Finally...finally..." ありがとうゴウセル！！ "Thanks so much Gowther!!" どういたしまして "No problem" ありがとう団長！！ "Thanks so much Captain!!" 今回は何ページかな "How many pages will it be this time?..." (4th wall breaking) キター！！ "Here it iiisss!!" ねえーキングぅ。。。早くイタズラ。。。して？ "Kiiing...mess me up already...pleeaase?" い。。。いいんだねやっちゃって。。。 "Th-this is fine right? Doing this..." ディーアンヌちゃーん！ "Diiiaanne-chaaaaaaaan!" ======== Page 5 -------- SFX ズポーン - Boing! きゃふん - Squish, squidge! ビク - Twitch ニュリ - Wriggle ズニュ - Squish, slide, wriggle ぶる - Shiver, shake ギュギュギュ - squeeze, tweak キャン - Kyaa! あっ - AH! ワサ - Rustle -------- あっ！そんなこと。。。 "Ah! What..." すげぇー！！おっぱい！！ケツ！！肉！！ "Amazing!! Boobs!! Ass!! Meat!!" あーン 服の中でそんなに暴れまわらないでぇー "Aahn! Stop wriggling around (inside) so much!" す。。。すごいよ。。。 "A-amazing..." ねぇ 服も脱がして。。。？ "C-can you take off my clothes too...?" うっうん！！ "S-sure!!" ちょっと乱暴しちゃおうかな。。。 "I guess i'll get a little rough then..." 霊槍ジャスティフォル第５形態。。。 "Spirit Spear Chastiefol Form 5!" ビオランチ！！ "Biollante!!" (TL Note: Biollante is a Kaiju from 1989 Godzilla Film 'Godzilla vs Biollante') ======== Page 6 -------- SFX ばばっ - Jolt, Dadan! ビルル - Rustle! ガッ - GRAB! ギギ - Creak, streetch (Rope like stretching of the plant monster) ぎゅぷ - Hnnmmgg!! Hrrrnngg! ドオ - drool, slick, drip ニョキ - Jajaan! シコシコシコ - stroookee..., rub rub rub... -------- キャッ "Kyaa!" ふあぁーん急に激しいよぉー "Fuuaaa! Suddenly getting so rough with mee..." むごっ！ふぐぐ。。。 "hmmgu! hnnnn..." (Not sure about what sound effects fit this, feel free to replace if you can think of something better to represent someone's mouth being stuffed ) ごっごめんよディアンヌ。。。 "S-sorry Dianne..." 優しくするからさ。。。 "I was gonna be gentle..." ======== Page 7 -------- SFX ガシィ - Grab! Squeeze ぱふ - Wobble, rub, どぽん - Slide, rub ヌチュ、ニチュ - Slick, Shlup, Squelch ドピピュ - Spuuurt! はあ - Haa -------- キング現在地 "King's current location" でもガマンできないよぉ！！ "But I just can't stop!!" オイッチパイズリして！！ "Rub your boobs all over me!!" むほ むほほ "Haaa" "Uwaah!" ぎゃはースッゲュェー！！ "Haaaaaa, this is amazing!!" あぁ。。。もうオイラ。。。 "Aaah...I think..." オイラ。。。 "I'm gonna..." ======== Page 8 -------- SFX コン - cough (quiet cough) すやすや - Zzzzzzz...., Uhaaaaaaaaa ぐーぐー - Zzzzzzzz ぶるるーん - Boioioing! Boing! Shake -------- 。。。はっ！！ "...Ah!!" ちょっこれって。。。！！ "Wai-this is...!!" はずかしいシミ "Embarassing stain" 目覚めたかキング "Ah, you've woken up King" ディアンヌも今眠ったところだ "Dianne's still fast asleep over there" 団長ー "Captaaiinn..." まあそんなことだろうと思ったよいつもオイラはこういう役だし "Ahh...I thought it was something like this, it always seems to go this way..." また今度頼むよ "Thank's anyway..." (Literal would be "I'll be counting on you again for next time" or similar) タフだな "Hang in there" でも本当はもっていろいろやりたかったな。。。 "I really wanted to do so much more though...: あとで思い出してオナニーでもするか "Guess i'll masturbate to it all later" ですよねー "Of course" 左へつづく Continues to the left 第８話 小さくなったディアンヌかわいすぎな大パイ Deadly Boobs Chapter 8 - Small Dianne is way too cute! まるで夢みたい！ "This is like a dream!" 団長とこんなことできるなんて "Being able to do this with the Captain" 全部デカいからマヒしてるけど "You're still so big you're making me numb though..." お前もだいぶおっぱいデカいよね？ "You've still got huge boobs too" うん！バランス的にはエリザベスと同じくらい。。。 "Yup! They must be around the same size as Elizabeths now...: うぅん ボクの方が大きいかも "No wait, mine may be even bigger!" ======== Page 9 -------- SFX ぼにぃ - Boooinnn! びろーん - Badoing ぐにゃ - Squeeeeze され、さわ - grope, press こに - tweak, flick, press ボヌッ - Squidge, press こね - Squeeze -------- 本当か？ちょっと調べてみるか "You think so? I might have to investigate this a little" えっ？ "Eh?" ぬんっ！！ "Strike!!" きゃはっ！ "Kyaa!" ふむふむこれはなかなか "Hmmm, these are rather good..." なるほど "I see..." 乳首は割としっかりしてるな "Nipple size and firmness is good too..." うむ！大きさも戦力も確かにひけをとらないぞ "Yep! With this size and potential, there's no way I could back down from them!" あーんもう触りすぎ "Aaahn, You're playing with them so much!" ======== Page 10 -------- SFX タプン - Jiggle たぷ - tremble, shake ギュ - Grab, squeeze ずにゃー - Smoosh んふう - Fuuu..., Haaa... ぼにゅう - Squidge, boing ずむにゃううー - Squuuueeeeeezeeee -------- 何言ってるのまだまだこれからだぞ？ "This is just the beginning you know?" こうやって下から。。。 "Rub them from below...: ぎゅーって引き上げて。。。 "Squeeze them tight together..." おぉ凹む凹む！ "Oooaaa! They're sinking in!" 手が入っちゃうよ！！ "My hands are sinking into them!!" んもー団長遊びすぎ "Aahn, Captain, your playing with them too much..." ======== Page 11 -------- SFX ドドドド - BADUM BADUM ビク - Twitch むぎゅう - squeeze ヌプ - Slick, rub, slide ミプッ - rub, BOUNCE (like she's on a trampoline naked, they just bounce hard up and down, or at least, thats how im imagining this ) ぷた - Drip (sweat) -------- いいよ団長！これでわからせてあげる！！ "Don't worry Captain! Leave this to me!!" 絶対ボクのおっぱいの方が気持ちいいんだから！ "My boobs will make you feel better!" ほーら団長！全部ズッポリ "See Captain! It's in completely!" それっ！どう団長！？いいよイって！ちょうだい！ "Take that! What do you think Captain! Tell me it's good! Tell me it feels good!" ======== Page 12 -------- SFX ドピュ - Spuurrt! ゴプ、ぶぷ - Splat, drip ドキ - badum, flutter キ八 - Ping! (lightbulb idea sort of ping), Shine ハァ - Haa (general panting) ふる - quiver -------- ねえ団長っ "Hey, Captain..." どっちの方がよかった？ねえ？ ねえ？ "Who's feel better? Who? Whooo?" わかれへん "Who Indeed!" (/"No Idea!") わかれへんのんかーい！！ "Stop joking around!" 第９話 エリザベスとホークのコンビ大好きな大パイ Deadly Boobs Chapter 9 - Elizabeth and Hawk's Love Combo 今日はエリザベスちゃんに "Today, I'll finally" 俺も男ってところをみせてやるぜ。。。 "have my way with Elizabeth-chan..." あのおっぱいに俺のこのデカブツをブチニんでヒィヒィいわしたるぜ！ （Note:Hawk, why do you have to speak in such a horrible font! I can barely tell what you're saying! \(>.<)/ ) "I'll make those enormous goods mine and do as I like with them!" (Translated that based on what was said, but can't really read the font properly, so some of this is ad-libbed) おっ 都合よくエリザベスちゃん "Ah, How convenient! Elizabeth-chan!" ======== Page 13 -------- SFX ぼにっ - Boing! むぎゅー - squidge, press, rub ばぃーん - Booinng!! ピク - twitch ぽよ - spring, jiggle ハァ - Haaa... -------- エリザベスちゃーん！！ "Elizabeth-chaaan!!" スーパーロースパイオツイリージョン！！ "Super Boob-loin Illusion!! キャッ ホークちゃん？ "Kyaa! Hawk-chan?" ヌオオー！やっぱりすげぇぜ！！ "Whuooooh! This is great!!" めりこむめりこむめりこむー！！ "I'm sinking in! I'm sinking into them!!" フルカウンター！！ "FULL COUNTER!!" あっ ホークちゃん大丈夫？ "Ah! are you ok Hawk-chan?" あーあーごめんね "I'm sorry" こんなになっちゃって。。。 "I didn't mean it..." "死ぬかと思いだぜ。。。" "I'll remember this for as long as I live..." へヘッ。。。 "Hehe..." 今日はこのくらいにしといてやるぜ。。。 "For now, i'll manage with this..." ======== Page 14 -------- SFX ぼにっ - squidge ぐにぃ - Rub あ - Aah..., Aa! (panting) たぱたぱたぱ - tap tap tap, smack smack smack. clap clap clap がば - streeetch (of clothing) -------- 第１０話 ただこれがやりたかっただけな大パイ Deadly Boobs Chapter 10 - I Just Really Wanted To Do This ニャリーン "Grin" ほれほれー おっぱいグニグニ "How's this! Rub Rub Rub!" 波動拳！波動拳！昇竜見！！ "Hadouke! Hadoken! Shoryuken!!" (Seriously, this is what it says XD ) それっ！ "Take this!" １６連射だ！！ "Rapid fire attack!!" こうやってギューって。。。 "Just squeeze liek this..." いやンメリオダスさまあ。。。 "Kyaa! Meliodas-sama..." じゃあこういうのはどうだ！？ "How about like this!?" キャッ！！見えちゃう！！ "Kya!! Stop looking!!" 。。。なあ これエロいのかね "Hey, this is a little Erotic, right?" 私に聞かないでくださいっ！！ "Don't ask me!!" おしぱい "The End" (playing on 'Boobs'(おっぱい) and 'The End'(おしまい)) ======== |
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Aug 24 2015, 17:38
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Proofread for Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.18: Page 8 QUOTE "Thank's anyway..." C: Thanks anyway QUOTE "Yup! They must be around the same size as Elizabeths now...: C: They must be around the same size as Elizabeth's now Page 10 QUOTE "Aahn, Captain, your playing with them too much..." C: you're playing with them too much Page 12 QUOTE "Who's feel better? Who? Whooo?" C: Whose feel better Page 14 QUOTE "Hadouke! Hadoken! Shoryuken!!" It's about the first two words here it's "Hadouke! Hadoken" in the script but when I looked at the Japanese characters, they looked exactly the same so the two should be the same. It might be a typing mistake and if so, correct it and use the right ones. QUOTE "Just squeeze liek this..." C: Just squeeze like this This post has been edited by CrimsonClown: Aug 24 2015, 17:38 |
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Aug 28 2015, 17:59
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peregrine150
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QUOTE(CrimsonClown @ Aug 24 2015, 16:38)
Proofread for Hybrid Tsuushin Vol.18:
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C: Thanks anyway
C: They must be around the same size as Elizabeth's now
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C: you're playing with them too much
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C: Whose feel better
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It's about the first two words here it's "Hadouke! Hadoken" in the script but when I looked at the Japanese characters, they looked exactly the same so the two should be the same. It might be a typing mistake and if so, correct it and use the right ones.
C: Just squeeze like this
Yeah, I noticed some of the mistakes i'd made when typing up as I posted the reply XD Serves me right for not checking carefully enough! Anyway, here's the link for the translated script for: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12576[ www.filedropper.com] http://www.filedropper.com/file_243EDIT: here's the mediafire link too: [ www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/wn1vqyr68h4e...95%E3%82%93.txtand here's the pasted script (hopefully without any silly mistakes!). Nyarko's A favourite character of mine, so I couldn't very well pass this up! The Title especially is something im not sure on, could do with some input there >.< 黒に這いよるニャル子さん Nyarko Crawls over Kuroyuki-hime ======== Page 4 -------- SFX コスコス - rub rub ピチャ, ぴちゅ - drip はあ - haaa ゴシュ - Stroke, stroooke 二チョ - ooze, rub -------- どうだい？ハルユキ君。私の大きめの乳輪でオチンポしごかれるの好きだろう？ "How is it, Haruyuki-kun? The feeling of having your dick stroked against these tits?" せっ先輩すごいですっ！ "I-it feels great, Senpai!" もういっちゃっいそうですっ！！ "I feel like i'm going to cum already!" ふふっじゃあキミの臭い精液を私の黒髪にぶっかけてくれ "Hehehe well...Why not try plastering that smelly cum all over my hair?" 先輩っいいんですかっ？ "Are you ok with that, Senpai?" いいぞっハルユキ君っ！！臭いがとれなくなるくらい。。。。キミの精液で私の黒髪をドロドロにしてくれっ！ ！ "It's fine, Haruyuki-kun!! Cum over it so much that the smell never comes out!!" ======== Page 5 -------- SFX どぶっ - spurt ドロォ～ - ooze はあ - haaa ヌル。。。 - drip, ooze ビリビリ - teeaaarr (as in ripping, not tear as in from the eyes) じゅぷじゅぷ - slick, (jupuk!, joop!) あん - haa, aah, aan (general moaning) -------- ああっ すっ好きなだけぶっかけろっ "Aaah...Cover me as much as you want..." いっぱいだしたなすごい臭いだぞ精液の臭いですっかり興奮してしまったよ 私のオマンコに突っ込んでくれな いか？ "...Such an intense smell, such a huge amount of cum. The smell alone is making me horny... won't you take me already?" ("...hurry up and stab me with your dick!""...won't you stab me with that dick of yours already" I'm not sure which one fits better, feel free to swap as you wish) 最近先輩どんどんエッチになってるような。。。 "You've become so much more lewd lately, Senpai..." ふふっエッチな私は嫌かい？ハルユキ君 "Hehehe...do you dislike that side of me, Haruyuki-kun?" そんなことないです！！エッチな先輩大好きですっ！！ "Not at all! I love Senpai's lewd side!! うれしい。。。私のオマンコでいっぱい気持ちよくしてやるぞ "That make's me so happy...in return, i'll make you feel as good as I can with this pussy of mine" ああっ！先輩の中ヌルヌルですごいですっ！！ "Ah! It feels so slippery and slimy inside! Amazing!" もっとっ！！もっと激しくつてくれっ！！ "More! Do me even harder!!" ======== Page 6 -------- SFX あっ、んあ - aan, aah (general moaning) どぶっ - whoosh! splat! -------- 先輩っ！！先輩っっっ！！ "Senpai! Senpaiiiiii!!" すっすごいっ！！ハルユキ君のチンポが奥までっ！！いくっ いってしまうっっ！！ "Th-this is great! Your dick is thrusting so deep inside! I'm cumming!!" んあああぁああぁああああ "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!" ======== Page 7 -------- SFX シュツ - ping! bading! (any other random sudden appearance sounds) -------- こんばんは～ 這いよる混沌で～す "Good Evening! The Crawling Chaos is heeree" きっキミは誰っっ。。。！？ "Wh-who are you!?!?" おりゃあぁあぁぁ！！ "Oryaaaaaaa!!" 縛！！ "Bind!!" /"Bind her!" なっなにをするっ！！ "What are you doing!" あなた一体なんなんですかっ！？ "What do you want with us!?" いつもニコニコあなたの隣に這いよる混沌ニャルラトホテプのニャル子と申します 平たく言うと宇宙人です え～最近お二人のエッチを覗かせてもらってるんですがちょ～っと参加させてもらおうかと思いまして私のいい 人はすさまじく身持ちが固くてですね 欲求不満が溜まりに溜まってしまったんです そこでこのハルユキ君に欲求不満解消のお手伝いをしていただこ うかと "Your ever smiling neighbour, Nyarlathotep, the Crawling Chaos known as Nyarko, is here～. Umm, lately I've been peeking in on your 'activities' and wondered if I could join you? My darling's been playing hard to get, and it's been making me so frustrated...I thought I'd get Haruyuki-kun to comfort me instead～" だめだっ！ハルユキ君は私のだぞっ！それに何故ハルユキ君なのだ！？ "You can't! Haruyuki-kun is mine! Go find someone else to help you!" ハルユキ君は超絶私好みなんですよ真尋さんには負けますけど。。。 "Haruyuki-kun's my type though! He's so delicious～...only Mahiro could beat him～" ======== Page 8 -------- SFX はもっ - nom, lick, slather にゅぽ、にゅぼ - pop! (dick popping out other side), sliide, slick にゆっ - squish, slide, rub -------- まずはパイズリをしてあげましょう 黒雪姫さんにはしてもらったことないでしょうし？ "Shall I start with a paizuri? I bet Kuroyuki-hime hasn't given you one of these!? うああっ！！ "Uwaaa!!" こういうの逆ネトラレっていうんですかねぇ～ 興奮してまいますよっ "This sort of reverse netorare...It's turning me on～" ちょちょっと！やめてくださいっっ！！ "W-wait! Stop!!" ほああぁっ！！オチンポがもんのすごぉく固くなってますよぉっ～ "Wow! your dick's gotten so hard～!" 気持ちいいんでしょう？ザーメンをぶちまけてしまいましょう～ ほらぁ～ほらぁあああっ～ "It feels good right? Hurry up and spray your cum all over me～ Come on! Come ooooon!" おっオッパイすごいっっせっ先輩ごめんなさい！でっ出ちゃいます！もう。。。もうっ！！ "I-it feels so goood! I-im sorry Senpai! I cant...hold back!!" ======== Page 9 -------- SFX どぱぁ - spuurt! ドロォ～ - ooze じゅるり - slurp, lick げしっ - RUSTLE, snap! -------- 出して出してぇ～ ザーメンかけまくってぇ～ん "Aaah! It's spraying all over meee～" はぁはぁ。。。次は私のオマンコを気持ちよくしてもらっちゃいましょうかねぇ "Haaaa...haaa...next...shall i make you...feel good with my pussy?" なっなんで動けるんです！？ "H-how can you move!?" ふっ拘束を解くなどレベル９の私には造作もないことだ "Ha, getting out of something like that is easy for a level 9 like me!" よくも私のハルユキ君に手を出してくれたな。。。そんな色情魔はとことん私がぺニバンで相手をしてやろう "How dare you use Haruyuki-kun for your own fun...for a sex maniac like you, i'll be your partner!" ======== Page 10 -------- SFX ズプっ - slide! stab! のおおおおぉぉぉっ、ああああ、おぉっ、んおおっ - oooooooooohh, aaaaaaaaaaaaa, oohhhhhhhhhhhhh, hooooooooohhhhh ぺろっ - lick チュボ - suck, slurp, fwup! -------- い。。。いきなりそっちですかっ！？ "Y-your starting there!?" のおおおおおおおっっ！尻の穴がぁああああああぁぁぁぁっっ～ すっすごいのぉおおおおぉぉぉっっ～ "OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH! My Asshole! It feels so goooooooooooood!" オマンコはバイブでかき回してあげよう "I'll make sure to give your pussy some action too!" ああああああああああああああぁぁぁぁぁっ～ オマンコもお尻もきぼちいいよぉおおおおぉぉぉぉぉっっ～ "Aaaahhhhhhhhhh～! My pussy...and asshole...they both feel so gooooooood～!" ======== Page 11 -------- SFX んあ、んお、おっ - aaa, ooo, oohhh, aahhh ヌリ - rub, slather じゅぽ - slide, slurp, fwuuuurrrpp ドブッ - spurt ぶぽぉ - slam! strike! -------- ほらっハルユキ君もチンポで顔を思う存分犯してやるんだっ！ "Haruyuki-kun, you too! Use that face of her's as much as you want!" せっ先輩っ！女の子の顔にチンポ擦りつけるの気持ちいいですっ！！ "S-senpai! This feels so good! Rubbing my dick against a girl's face!" でるっ！！ "C-cummiiing!!" んがぁっっ～ 鼻にっはたにザーメンがぁああぁっ～ "Aaahhh～cum's shooting up my nose～!" しゅごっしゅごいですぅうううぅぅっっ～ "A-amaashiiing!" ハルユキ君もっとだっ！この女を徹底的にイかせてやろう！！ "More! Haruyuki-kun! Use this girl as much as you can!!" ======== Page 12 -------- SFX じゅぽ - slap! slam! ぶぼっ - slam! strike! ゴシュゴシュ - stroke, rub -------- 肛門がめくれあがっちゃいますぅうぅ～ "My asshole's turning inside out!!" オマンコぉ～オマンコももっとグチュグチュしへぇえええええっっっ "Stir it up! Stir my pussy up even more!!" そんなだらしない顔して恥ずかしくはないのかっ？ このっ変態！ド変態めっっ！！ "You should be embarassed with that slutty face of yours! You massive pervert!!" おおおおおおおおおおっっっっ！！いぐっ！いぐっ！いぐぅうううぅぅっっ～ "Ooooooohhhhhhhh!! Cummiiinng! Cummiiiiiing～!!" いけっ！いってしまえっっ！！ "Cum! Cum for me!!" ======== Page 13 -------- SFX びゅるる - pulsing, pulse! spuuuurrrrttt ビク、ビクン - twitch twitch! shake! -------- んにゃああああああああああっっ～ "Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah～!!!" はぁはぁ。。。這いよる混沌の私を一瞬にして性奴隷にしてしまうとは。。。地球人のエロスレベルはねぇです "Haaaahh...to turn me, the Crawling Chaos, into a slave to sex so quickly...It seems i've underestimated the perversion of Earthlings～ で次はいつにします？今後もちょくちょくお二人で私を弄んでほしいんですけどぉ～ "Well? When shall we do this again? I want you to tease me even more next time～ 。。。キミは乳がでかいから却下だ "...Your boobs are massive, so never." (literal, alternative: "Your boobs outrank/are bigger than mine, so never" Adapting bits like this are always a pain >.< ) ======== Page 15 (Credits) 黒に這いよるニャル子さん Nyarko Crawls over Kuroyuki-hime 発売日-Release Date 著者-Author 発行-Publisher 印刷-Printing (サングループ- 成年向けですので１８歳未満の方の閲覧・購入は禁止させていただきます This Doujin is intended for those 18 and over. 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Proofread for Nyarko Crawls over Kuroyuki-hime: Page 5 QUOTE "That make's me so happy... C: That makes me so happy... Page 10 QUOTE "Y-your starting there!?" C: Y-you're starting there!? Page 11 QUOTE Use that face of her's as much as you want!" C: Use that face of hers as much as you want! This post has been edited by CrimsonClown: Aug 29 2015, 00:57 |
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Posting the script for: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12530https://e-hentai.org/g/709232/af0c7f516a/Bear in mind that page numbers are based on the image name, not the gallery order. I can change that, if you want (lower every number after 1 by 1). Additionally, if there are any issues with my scripts, I would appreciate being notified of that directly. 01: 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ７ -Barefoot Vampire 7 成人向 -For Adults 03: 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ７ -Barefoot Vampire 7 04: こんにちは!りゅうか綾（りゅう）です。 まずは、この本をお手にとって下さり 誠に、ありがとうございます! -Hello! It's Ryuuka Ryou. First off, for everyone who wanted to pick up this book, thank you all very much! バレバレかと思いますが… 例の如く焦ってます。焦って焦って、 焦りまくってます…… それでなくとも、 ろくな文章書けない のにますます…頭が働かない… -Wondering if I've been found out... As always, I was rushing. Rush rush always rushing...... Even when I'm not in a rush, I'm increasingly unable to write a decent line. ...My head just won't work... 学習能力は無いのか自分よ…。 -I just can't learn how to do it.... さてさて。 夏コミにてりクエストを頂いたので♪ 今回は、神魔と絡みです。 お間抜けだデザインの神魔に なっちゃ ったのが無念です…。 -Now then. I've taken requests for Summer Comiket♪ This time, it's a relationship with Shinma. I regret letting the design for Shinma get so foolish... 次の本は、春レヴォか夏コミ合わせ かな?美夕も描きたいけど…ネタ切れ なので、リクエスト募集です（笑） -For the next book, would Larva blooming be suitable for Summer Comiket? I wanna draw Miyu, but... since I'm out of material, I'll take your requests (Ha ha) あー!!駄文ごめんあさい! 少しでもマトモな絵＆話が描けるよう になりたいわ… -Aah!! Sorry for my poor writing! I wanted to draw a decent image and story with little text... いつか、バリバリのＯＶＡ設定で漫画 描けたら良いなぁ（夢） -In time, it'd be nice if I could draw a manga of the scenes revealed for the OVA (dream~). …美夕って花が合わない…。 -...A flower is no match for Miyu.... 05: えーと -Uum 次のお客様は …っと -The next customer is ...here あら! -Oh! データだけなら 超好み♥ -This one is great from the data alone♥ デカくても痛いし… -That's big enough to hurt... それは 秘密の花園 -Then, the Secret Garden 06: たぐい稀なき美姫達が 集う館－… -The mansion where princesses of unparalleled beauty gather... いらっしゃいませ… -Welcome... 石鹸王国こすちゅーむぱらだいす♥ 「メイドと冷羽登場!」編 -Soap Kingom Costume Paradise♥ "Introducting Maids and Cool Bunnies!" Continuation. 07: お帰りなさいませ …御主人さま… -Welcome back ...Master... 08: はっ -Hah んっ -Nh んんっ -Nnh はぁ -Haa なあっ -Naaah んぐぅ -Nguu んんんッ!! -Nnnh!! ん… -M... なあ -Naa はっ -Hah はあ -Haa 09: キャア -Kyaa 御主人さま -Master! ああ!! -Aa!! 10: あぅぁっ…! -Auah...! あっく -Ah Kuh コンコン -trickle あっ -Aah 御主人さまぁ! ゴリゴリ当って痛いぃぃ! やめて下さっ… -Masteer! Scratching me there huurrts! Please, sto... 11: あんああーッ -Anmaaa! ここですわね -This is the place. 12: 私の知らぬ間に このような事を… -It became like this before I even noticed... 許せませんわ! -I will not allow that! ……つづく。…といいなぁ（遠い目） -...To be continued. ...when ready (a distant day). …なんか -...Somehow イヤな予感… -I got a scary feeling... 13: ちょっと こんな場所で やめてよっ -Wait. Don't do this here. いいだろ -It's fine 我は何だ… -There's something I... 気にすんな -I don't care. …… もうっ やめてってば! -Geez, I said stop! …あ -...Ok 何がしたい…? -What do I want? 14: ひっ -Hiih …ひ? -...Hii? …我は -...I うれすぉー
-Uwaaah-…あ -...Oh 15: 還りたいー -Want to go home- 愚者の行進 -The Fool's Parade 美夕 -Miyu 16: また空とお話 してる～ 聞いてよ -Another pointless story~ I'm listening. 彼氏? -Boyfriend? そうなの -Looks like. 最近連絡全っぜん してこないと思って たら… -Lately, I just could not get in touch with him, and I thought... アイツ… -That one... 17: 距離おこう…って -Distance makes it worse... they say. ひどいよ… -How mean... どれだけ心配 してるか しらないで… -No matter how much you worry, it won't fix anything... バカヤロ! -You moron!自己中め! -Self-centered! そんな男 より… -Just from that guy... 私なら -If it's me 美夕? -Miyu? 18: キャアアアーッ -Kyaaaa! ああー -AAA- 痛っ -It hurts! 美夕! -Miyu! 助け… あぁあぁー! -Help... AaaAAA! 私の獲物を 奪うなんて… -How dare you snatch away my prey... 19: 許さない! -I won't allow this! きゃあぁぁ -Kyaaaa 20: ここは… 神魔の体内? -This place... Inside a shinma? 21: あっ -Aah あああっー -Aaaaaah 22: ひゃうっ -Hyauh あぁっ… -Aaah... 人間の快楽が お望みか 監視者よー? -Do you want a human's pleasure, Guardian?あ…あぁ…あ -Aa... Aaa... Aa 23: あー -Aa- いやぁあ -Iyaaa 侵される! -It's attacking! ああっ! -Aaa! …やっ やめてぇ! -...sto- Stop! 24: いやあ -Noooo! はぁっ -Haah はぁっ -Haah イッ…あっ -Com... Aah あっ -Aah ひぅっ! -Hiuh! あぁんっ -Aaanh あぁふぁ!! -Aaafua!! 25: あ… -Aa... ああぁ… -Aaaa... キモチ -That feels いぃ… -Nice... …美夕 -...Miyu 26: はあ -Haa はっ -Hah あっ -Aah はっ -Hah はあっ -Haah 27: あっ -Aah んっ -Nh ハッ -Hah あはぁ -Ahaaa うあぁ -Uaaa はあ -Haa やっ -St- 止めて! -Stop! 28: 痛っ… -Hurts... そっちは 嫌な…のっ! -I'm scared of that... Naah!どうして? -How is that?あひっ -Ahih ひん -Hin 望んでいたの でしょう? -Isn't this what you wanted?痛ッ 切れちゃうー -Ooww! Cut it out- イッ! -Eee!あっ -Aah 29: あきゃ あぁぁ!! -Akyaaaa!! はっ -Hah はあっ -Haah はっ -Hah イタイッ -Ow ow! はっ -Hah はーっ -Ha-h いつもなら… -If it's always... 30: こうなる前に ラヴァが… -Once asked, Larva will... んっ -Nnh ぐぶ ぐぶ -Splish Splash はーッ -Ha-h ラヴァが… -Larva will...はぁー -Haa- ラヴァ -Larva あひっ -Ahih ラヴァ! -Larva! きゃぅぅん -Kyauun 31: ラヴァ -Larva はあ -Haa ひぐへ… -Twitch... [Indecipherable] -Please 監視者が -The guardian しまっちゃ… -Aw shi... もっと! あお -More! Aao イクッ -cum! 現実逃避? -Running away? ひっん -Hiihn 人間のように 濡らして悶える… -Writhe and soak like a human...イッちゃう -I'm cumming! ラヴァ!! -Larva!! ああ 夢みたいだ -Aaa, It's like a dream 32: 憧れの山野さんが ぼくのモノを くわえているなんて -The Yamano-san you were craving is now mine.だめえ -Stop! んあぁぁ! -Nhaaaa! 下はもう ビショビショですよ -You're already soaked down there.もっと! もっとお願い! 激しくして…っ! -More! Please, More! Harder... nh! 俺達まだ若い からさ 何度でも イケるんだから -Since we're still young, you can cum quite a bit.あひぁあぁ -Ahia AAaa 33: イッちゃぅ! -I cumm! イッく… また イッちゃうぅ～! -Cum... I'm cumming again~! あふぁあ!! -Ahua Aa!! あッ -Aah 34: 美夕 -Miyu …ああ -...Aaa ラヴァ -Larva 気持ちイイよ -It's so nice ラヴァ… -Larva... 己が… いつから自我を 待ったか知らぬ -I... don't know how long you've been waiting for me. 神魔よ… -The Shinma... 闇へ… -to Dark... 35: 時に神と崇められ 邪神とうとまれ… -You know, you're supposed to worship Gods and shun Demons... 嗚呼… 我という存在は… -I see... Call me and I appear... 何だ? -What? 36: ねぇ -Hey 放課後… -After school... 屋上に来て くれる? -Would you come up to the rooftop? 37: えー…最後まで読んで下さって、 本当にありがとうございました!! -Uh... For those who have been reading lately, I truly thank you very much! 満載のシッコミどころは、既に、己 でシッコミ済みなので、何卒ご容赦 を……（苦笑） 私の中での（勝手 な）神魔観では、 性的なモノはないんですね…だから 話の辻褄合わせに四苦八苦（涙） いつかメガテンの ような、神々しくも 禍禍しい、神魔との絡みを描けたら …最高の自己満足かな? 自分を追い詰める為に書くあたらが 情けないけどね（笑） -Rather than being loaded with shikkomi, instead, my only shikkomi is at the end, please forgive me... (grimace). As for the appearance of the Shinma that I made (my own way), it doesn't really have a gender... I did that so the story comes coherently to the danger (tears). Sometimes, like MegaTen, even the divine seems ominous, and if I draw her entangled with a Shinma, ...is this the greatest smugness? But writing myself into a corner is just sad. それでは、このへんで。 本当にありがとうございました! -In that case, something completely different. Really, thank you very much! 既刊本のご案内（2002年12月） -Information on already published works (Dec 2002) 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ６（在庫有）★ 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ５（在庫有）★ 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ４（完売）△ 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ３（完売）△ 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ２（完売） 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ（完売） -Barefoot Vampire 6(In stock)★ Barefoot Vampire 5(In stock)★ Barefoot Vampire 4(Sold Out)△ Barefoot Vampire 3(sold out)△ Barefoot Vampire 2(sold out) Barefoot Vampire (Sold Out) ★→「虎の穴」様で委託中。 △→「ＤＬサイトコム」様で ダウンロード可能。 年明けには「信長書店」様でも 委託して頂く予定です。 -★→Use "Tora no Ana" for consignment sales. △→Use "DL site" for download version. At the beginning of the year, we plan to use "Nobunaga Shoten" too for consignment sales. 38: お迎え遅い! -Belated Greetings! …次の日には趣味の『美少年狩り』 していた人が何を 言ってるんですか。 あなたの事だから、 楽しんで だんでしょ? -...the next day, people were talking about someone who's hobby is doing a "teenager hunt." Since it's your thing, I guess it was fun? う～ …ラヴァの いぢわる! -Uu~ ...Larva's so cruel! あのぅ… もしもし? -Um... Hello? ものスゴク マヌケな役回り なんですが私… -Somehow, I'm playing the role of a ghastly fool... 大体、 すぐ裸になって 肌を表にして… 少しは羞恥心を待って 下さい、全く。 監視者たる者第一に…云 々 -An outline, almost nude and showing skin... It's a little embarrassing, but if you wait, it's everything. The guardian becomes the most important person... etc. 裸足のＶＡＭＰＩＲＥ ７ -Barefoot Vampire 7 発行:バルバロイの里 発行日:2002年12月30日 印刷:関西美術印刷株式会社（表紙） 株式会社くりえい社（本文） -Publisher: Barbaroi no Sato Publish date: December 30, 2002 Printer: KANBI (cover) Kuriei Co. (contents) ※無断転載・未成年者の購読一切禁止 -※Reprinting without permission or allowing a minor to subscribe is absolutely forbidden. 40: miyu This post has been edited by J99814: Nov 4 2015, 05:35 |
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Here's the script for [T-Press (ToWeR)] Futari De Cure Cure!! from this bounty. Lot's of fun, handwritten text in this one. Page numbers are by gallery page. QUOTE page 1
ふたりでキュアキュア!!
Futari de Cure Cure!!
We Cure Cure together!!
page3
ふたりでキュアキュア!!
Futari de Cure Cure!!
We Cure Cure together!!
アダルト
It's for adults only.
page4
前
Foreword
こんに
Hi, I'm ToWeR.
今回
As a change from the usual, this time it's a PreCure book. It's been a while since the last doujinshi I released as T-Press.
という
With that said. Since I believe that this is the first time I meet many of you, let me quickly introduce myself.
初じめまして
Pleased to meet you, I'm ToWeR. The thing I'd most like to try and drive is the Zaku.
で、しばらく
And after doing that for a bit, I'd switch to a Gouf, plaster it with camouflage paint and then I'd like to try getting into Jaburo.
ま、これ
Well, if I write more than this, it'll turn into one of those leaks of personal information that are currently en vogue.
それでは
Well then, we'll meet again later.
page5
ミップル
Mipple
きりっ
*crisp*
メップル
Mepple...
二人
We don't have time for this, you two!!
バンッ
Wham
愛し合う
Splitting up two lovers is the worst, mepo!!
ギャー
Gyaa
ドック
I'm telling you one of those Dusk Zone guys appeared!!
デュアル
Dual Aurora
ウェーーブ
Waaave!
ザケンナー
Zakenna
page6
ふたり
We are...
プリキュア
Pretty Cure!!
はう
Hauhh!?
ドクンッ
*thump*
な、なに
W-what...?
体が
My body feels hot...
胸が
My heart is pounding...!!
ドクン
*thump*
ドクン
*thump*
ドクン
*thump*
ドクン
*thump*
page7
ホワイト
White...
ブラック
Black...
はあ
Haah
はあ
Haah
はあ
Haah
ホワイトも
You too, White!?
はあっ
Haahh
はあっ
Haahh
今は
For now, let's exterminate this Zakenna!
そ、そうね
Y-yeah, okay.
ゴメンナー
Sorry!
ゴメンナー
Sorry!
はあっ
Haahh
はあっ
Haahh
page8
大丈夫
Are you okay?
ぺたん
*slump*
はあっ
Haahh
はあっ
Haahh
う…
Y-yeah, I'll be... okay...
じん じん
*tingle* *tingle*
変身する直前ミップル
I think the state Mipple and Mepple were in right before we transformed is influencing us...
変身する直前二人
Those two, right before we transformed? What were they doing again?
だから
So... Well... If we perform m-masturbation, I think we'll get better.
恥
*embarrassed*
マスター
Master... what?
page9
マスター
Masturbation. T-that means... playing with yourself...
かあ
*blush*
言わせないでよ もう
Don't make me say that, jeez...
オナニー
Playing with yourself?
ブラック
Black, you've... never played with yourself? You don't touch yourself?
さわる？
Touch? Where?
仕方ない
You're hopeless... Well then, I'll do it for you.
え？
Huh? What? White, what's are you doing?
page10
見せて
Let me see it, Black... Your Card Commune.
やだ
No, not that one.
クン クン
*sniff* *sniff*
ぐっ
*grab*
page11
ブラック
You have one down here too, don't you, Black?
スリット
A slit...
や、ちょ
No, wai-...!?
ちゅっ
*kiss*
はあん
Haanhh
びくん
*twitch*
あっ
Ahh
あん
Anh
ぴちゃ
*shlip*
ぴちゃ
*shlip*
page12
あっあっ
Ahh! Ahh!
ホワイト
White, no...
くちゅ
*squish*
ぴちゃ
*shlip*
ぴく
*twitch*
ぴく
*twitch*
ぴくん
*twitch*
ぴくん
*twitch*
はっ
Hahh
はあっ
Haahh
はあっ
Haahh
んっ!!
Mhh!!
やっ…
Sto-...
じわ…
*soak*
ぴちゃ
*shlip*
ぴちゃ
*shlip
はあ
Haah
はあ
Haah
page13
はあんっ
Haanhh
あんっ
Anhh
しちゅっ
*suck*
ぴちゃ
*shlip*
ふあっ
Fuahh
あっ
Ahh
ぴくんっ
*twitch*
ぴくんっ
*twitch*
こり こり
*knead* *knead*
page14
あっ
Ahh
くあっ
Kuahh
ぴくっ
*twitch*
ぴくっ
*twitch*
れる
*lick*
れる
*lick*
はあ
Haah
はあ
Haah
ちゅぱ
*smack*
ぴちゅ
*shlip*
くちゅ
*shlurp*
ちゅっ
*kiss*
くちゅ くちゅ
*shlick* *shlick*
くり くり
*rub* *rub*
くり
*rub
page15
や…
Sto-... Wa-...!?
ひああっ
Hiaahh
ちろ ちろ
*flick* *flick*
だ…だめ…
N-no... Any more of this...
おかしく
...and I'll go crazy...
キャッ
Kyahh
カッ
*clack*
これで
Now we're back to normal...
ほ…
Hoh...
はうう
Hauuhh!?
ドクン
*thump*
page16
なんで
Why...?
ドクン ドクン
*thump* *thump*
トロ
*ooze*
ほのかぁ
Honokaaa...
はっ
Hahh
はっ
Hahh
はあっ
Haahh
だから
That's what I was telling you... It's just sexual arousal, so even cancelling the transformation isn't gonna fix it.
はあっ
Haahh
うそぉ
No way...
ありえない…
I can't believe this...
page17
ぴちゃっ
*shlip*
くちゅっ
*squelch*
はあ はあ
Haah haah
ねろ ねろ
*lick* *lick*
こくん
*swallow*
さっきの
Would you like to... continue from earlier?
ほのか
Honoka...
ドキ ドキ ドキ
*thump* *thump* *thump*
あ
Ah...
さわ さわ
*touch*
…うん…
...Yes...
ぽっ
*blush*
こく
*nod*
page18
はらり
*flutter*
んんっ
Mmhh...
ぴちゃ ぴちゃ
*shlip* *shlip*
くり くり くり
*knead* *wiggle* *rub*
はあ…あ…
Haah... Ah...
ちゅぱっ ちゅぱっ
*shlurp* *shlurp*
ぶるっ ぶるっ
*tremble* *tremble*
ちゅく ちゅく
*shlup* *shlup*
ちゅく
*shlup*
ああん
Aanhh!!
ジュプ
*squelch*
ジュプ
*squelch*
ジュプ
*squelch*
ねえ、なぎさ
Hey, Nagisa... I'd like to feel good together with you... okay?
それは…
That's... fine, but... what are we gonna do?
page19
あのね、
Uhm, well... You rub yours against mine down here, Nagisa.
…うわあ
...Uwaah. So that's Honoka's...
ぐちょぐちょして
It's soaking wet and looks so lewd...
わたしのも
I wonder if mine became like that too...
そしてそれを
And Honoka saw that...
かあっ
*blush*
なぎさ？
Nagisa?
あ、ううん
Ah, no, it's nothing.
あせ あせ
*sweat* *sweat*
ぐい
*grab*
page20
よっ
Okay...
ん…
Mh...
くりゅっ
*grind*
ふああっ
Fuaahh
ビク
*twitch*
ビクン
*twitch*
page21
はああんっ
Haanhh
ビクン
*twitch*
ビクン
*twitch*
ぶるっ
*tremble*
ぶるっ
*tremble*
ビクンッ
*twitch*
ぶるっ
*tremble*
プシャアッ
*squirt*
ビュクンッ
*splash*
なぎさと
I'm so happy you got to link with Nagisa, mipo!
ぽっ
*blush*
神聖な
This only happened because you disturbed the holy act of love, mepo!!
不可思議生物
You're way cheeky for a mysterious life form!!
終
The End
page22
初めは
I didn't watch it at first, but once I started, somehow or other I got into it. But why didn't I watch it at first? I don't think there was any particularly good reason for that. So, I randomly caught a glimpse of the opening. And then I was like, that's got quite some movement there, doesn't it? So far I'd watched Marimite and it might have been there too, but when it came to the "moving" part, I was touched and thought: Let's watch this from the next one on. The one I'd watched had been episode 8. From there, I got hooked a bit. As the story goes, it seems I was lucky that I watched episode 8 first by chance. Since I didn't know about episodes 1 to 7, I didn't really get the details of the setting though. Since episode 8 seemed like a good one, it seems lucky that that was the episode I watched first.
やっぱり
Of course there are parts that bear resemblance, so even if I don't go as far as comparing it to Sailor Moon, putting them next to each other, I end up looking at them with comparing eyes. I don't know if it's the design or the character setting, but comparing it to Sailor Moon, I get a more modern impression. Even though I can't really put my finger on it, that's how it is somehow... I wonder. Maybe it's because of all the frills they have.
page23
実はブラック派です。世間的には「ホワイトマンセー」らしいですが。衷情がコロコロ変れるところとかカワイ
イと思うんだけどなあ。あとメリットとしては、アイテムを、いつでも買うことができます。食玩とか人形とか
。売れ残ってるとかゆーな!!
I actually belong to the Black fraction. Societally things seem to be more like "White banzai" however. I think it's cute how her inner feelings keep changing. Another advantage is that I can buy merchandise whenever I want. Toys sold with food, dolls, whatever. And don't say that they're just left on the shelf!!
page24
あとがき。
Afterword.
このたび
My sincerest gratitude for picking up for this ToWeR kojinshi "Futari de Cure Cure!!"
[TL note: A kojinshi is a doujinshi made from material produced by a single person.]
今年
During the "PreCure year taking place at T-Press" this year, I bought small toys sold with food, memorized the OP and ED songs and held various events, but for the time being, this book has become the biggest event. It's been a while since I did anything with lesbians other than Mako/Ami (from Sailor Moon that is) back then.
今回
The point I'd like to emphasize this time is that I drew them with middle school student-like looking bodies. For that reason I wanted to make their breasts as small as I could and go into the direction of avoiding curves on their bodies while drawing, but I wonder how that turned out. Back then for Sailor Moon I couldn't do it, so I told myself I'd get it right this time at last. Even if you say just blindly draw small breasts, managing to have them not have loli figures, but a tall and child-like build is hard... I drew less hair too. Personally, I'm mostly satisfied, but I think it would've been better if I had drawn their breasts smaller. Also, I drew a lot of Cure Black, so that was good. Beta was troublesome!!
次は
I haven't decided yet what I'll do next. Maybe I'll go with PreCure again, maybe I'll go back to Sailor Moon or maybe I'll do some other work with lesbians (← that part seems to be the only thing I've decided on). I'll think it over while watching a looot.
それでは
That's about it. I'm hoping for your support again next time.
ToWeR
page25
・おやつ
・Afternoon snack
おなかすいた
I'm starved...
ぐう
*growl*
なにか食べて
How about we eat something and go home?
えんせーーい
Accepteeed!
パイナップル
Pineapple! I wanna eat pineapple!
なんか
That's kinda groooss.
終
The End
page26
告知のコーナー
略して 「知ナー」
Announcement Corner
"Anner" for short
[TL note: "kokuchi no koonaa" abbreviated as "chinaa" or "shinaa."]
・単行本
・The tankoubons "Ane ni wa Zettai Kanawanai" and "Aokan Tengoku" are now on sale, props to Shobou-san.
[TL note: Tsukasa Shobou is a publishing company.]
・あと、「Blue
・I also got to participate in a doujinshi called "Shot A Shota" from the circle "BlueLAGOS". It's a shota thing. There seem to be consignment sales of it at Toranoana and all sorts of events.
・あと、「おかち
・Moreover, I'm drawing for "Okachimentaiko"-san. I think that a kojinshi collecting the things I have drawn so far will be released, so I'm looking forward to your support for that too.
・あと、これから
・I'll also be likely to show up here and there in doujinshi by several other circles, so please support me at those times too.
・商業誌
・Occasionally I'm being published in the professional magazine Dolphin. Please look out for me there too.
奥
Colophon
・Book No. 22 "Futari de Cure Cure!!"
・Date of publication August 15, 2004
・Production T-Press
・Printing Power Print (パワープリント)
・Contact address |
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