I just realized the script for (C84) [HellDevice (nalvas)] Osawari Nadeshiko (Chihayafuru) was only PMed to me, without being posted here for proofing, so here it is
TL ackeejag
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showuser=198607 (direct any questions to him; in fact I'd think it'd be good practice to shoot a TL a PM when proof comments are made here)
p2
panel 1
Ah… wait for me!
I’m getting on
The first time it happened to me was back when I was a freshman.
pardon me, coming through…
phew
panel 5
Maybe it’s because….it’s crowded….
p3
panel 1
No… there is...a hand going under my skirt…!
uh...wah...a pervert! There’s a molester here…!
wah, I guess even someone like me could be accosted like this…
but then...wh...what do I do…
panel 2
ah… oh no…
he keeps...f… feeling me up…
I can’t...let this go on.
panel 3
ah
If… If I...don’t say something...then…
p4
panel 1
ah…
N...noooo!!
gross… h,hurry and get to the next station already…
panel 2
Now approaching the next stop
please watch for exiting
I… I’m getting off here!
panel 3
haa...haa….
… that was so scary…
I, got molested back there…
Some guy I don’t even know went so far with me…
I’ve never had anything like that happen……
panel 4
...but… why
would a guy whose face I couldn’t even see
panel 5
from behind…
haa
haa
l...like this…?
bring up these kinds of feelings in me as a woman
panel 6
G….gross, what am I thinking… I’m usually so unpopular and a mess around people…
….but on the train it almost felt like the opposite…
p5
panel 1
My house is a well established fabric shop.
panel 2
yes...yes… well get this months payment in somehow.
yes… well then…
But since not many people have a demand for expensive traditional clothing these days….
so it’s getting harder to manage.
panel 3
And since the traveling expenses and hotel feels for my Karuta tournaments can get pretty pricy…
I wish I could find a way to take of it all on my own but…
eh? A part time job?
panel 4
But Kana chan. How will you find the time with all of your club activities?
I guess that’s true…
But I figure I could find something for the time when I’m free…
You think it’s that simple?
p6
panel 1
Just ask some rich old fart for it. Just talk it out and let him feel you up a little bit.
So if he goes further he pays more get it?
panel 2
And with breasts like that it’s an easy win for you, don’t you think Oe san?
What the heck... I can’t do that.
eh, but it’s fine. Everybody does it.
panel 3
But Kana chan can’t do that!
Because it’s wrong right!?
y, yeah
you’re way too nervous for that
panel 4
My friends were worried about me doing something like this. But…
…….but I….
panel 5
But now I’ve taken to… letting men touch on my body…
p7
panel 1
It wasn’t just once that I ran into the molester
I happened over and over…
panel 2
And I may have even been turned on by it
It… even started to feel a little good
panel 3
If he would grab me firmly by the waist to stop me from running
I would bear it to show I wasn’t running…
But lately the men I’d let touch me had grown in number...
panel 4
I stood there and took it without resisting. He must have thought I was that kind of girl..
panel 5
mn…
It’s crowded again today…
panel 6
...kuhi
c, come on, grab it
eh…?
panel 7
what is he doing…
panel 8
haa...haa…
G...gross….is this his… di...dick…
My cock...is pretty beefy huh.
Want me to stick it in? Hey….guhi
p8
panel 1
This person… is so gross… He’s...a degenerate… and a pervert… so it’s to be expected...but still…
… that’s right. I have to say something and stop it…
ah…..
panel 2
...um…
panel 3
ah… aah…. He’s going...under my panties…
...no way...he’s putting...his finger inside of me…
panel 4
uh...ah….
panel 5
A man...is penetrating….me….
ihii hehe, you’ve got a really nice pussy. Are… are you a virgin? guhuhu
panel 6
ah...ah….
And you’ve got huge tits too.
Let me feel your little nipples titty chan.
p9
panel 1
My body is trembling… I can’t move…
hya…
not my nipples…
ah
mn
No… what is this… Am I getting turned on from fear and embarrassment….
panel 2
N...no I can’t… I can’t let myself be turned on...by something like this….
guhi
panel 3
Your pussy is soaking wet.
I’ve… got something special for you.
hwe?
panel 4
AAAAAh
ah
hwaa
I rubbed this ointment on your pussy
so you should be ready to fuck soon
p10
panel 1
n...no… there are so many fingers inside of me…
mnn!?
mn
d...digging in….
panel 2 *down
fuaa… ah
ah...ah my loins are burning up… my vision is...blurring…
what is...he doing to me…
ah
ah
ha…
panel 3
that holse...my hole ...it’s starting to…
ah
panel 4
Become...a filthy hole...to be used by this man…
ha
panel 5
ah...aah….? the room is starting..to spin…
panel 6
ha
ah...hwaa…?
ha
panel 7
guhu.... you alright? You aren’t feeling well are you?
uh...ah…?
haa haa
haa
Come on, why don’t you get off with me here.
p11
panel 1
I can fuck your little slut hole in this stations bathroom, titty chan.
You’d like that right? If I used your pussy
my...pu….
I’ll give you loads of pocket money if you do, hihi…
panel 2
You look good enough to eat.
what...did… he…. do to me…
….uh
guhu, From here on out I’m going to be shoving my fat cock
into you tight horney pussy.
panel 3
My entire body is numb but I can feel it tingling down there…
ah…
…….! no… I’m...in such a shameful state…
p12
panel 1
First lets start with my cock in those sexy lips of yours.
hii…!?
no..what...it smells…
nbuu
panel 2
aah, that’s great, titty chan.
huhihi, do you like being molested? I always see you.
You’re really into dirty things aren’t you. guhi…. there’s no need ot hold back.
Because I’ll be making love to you with this adult cock over and over today…
panel 3
got it!!
nbooo
panel 4
cough
cought
a...ah...this is semen…!?
p13
panel 1
Now that nobody can see, I’ll use the whole thing.
hyaa!?
panel 2
wh...what is this weird drug…!
...don’t tell me it’s the stuff from before…
ah...it’s that...feeling again...ah
panel 4
nha….
….no...noo..
ha
ahu
You’ll feel like you did on the train all over again soon.
You’ll lose your mind and all of your senses will focus into your lower region.
ahaaaaaa
panel 5
haa… ah
d..don’t suck on my nipp...les…
huhihi your nipples are so delicious
panel 6
We’re about to go all the way
and I’m going to dump my load into your pussy
ah
p13
panel 1
a...all t he way…? what do you...ah…
hii...please stop...I, I’m still…!
guhi, it really is your first time isn’t it?
It’s alright. I’ve fucked tons of virgin girls like this before.
panel 2
Even young girls with tight hymens like you, titty chan...
ah...no….n...no….ah
panel 3
Once I’m done with you, it’ll be a second rate used p pussy.
ah...ah… my virginity…
It’s… it’s...gone….
huhihi It’s all in.
Now that you’ve cast away your virginity, you’re a woman now titty chan.
For a girl to be out doing this type of thing behind the back of her friends and family
She’d have to be a real cock hungry whore. guhihi
p15
panel 1
huhihi, take this, this is what sex is.
Does being fucked for the firs time feel good?
….ah
There’s no need to hold back. I know the drug has you feeling good.
ha…
panel 2
My cock is thrusting into you…
no….stop…
ah
guhu, I know how to make a girl turn into a complete slut on her first time with a man.
panel 3
Let this old man show you the pleasure of a cock in your hole.
ah
mn
ah
I’ll make you into a cock loving school girl in now time.
nho
ooh
panel 4
guhihi, you’re lactating
(it’s an effect of the drug)
...no way wh...why…!?
panel 5
You must be ready… to have a child then.
Pretty soon I’m going to blow my load into your unused school girl pussy and make you a mama…
m...mama…? hii… don’t… you can’t!
hwaa
ah
th...that’s so…
p16
panel 1
guhihi take your first load of middle aged man cock juice into your fuck hole.
I’m going to teach you the joys of being kocked up.
nha
aah
panel 2
Your filthy fuck hole is sucking in my cock juice as I shoot it out
You’ve really become a cock hungry slut haven’t you!
nooo...nyooo...mn
ngo
nbuu mnn
mn… mn
panel 3
guhu, guhihihi! Got it?
I’ve pumped your untouched womb full of my sperm.
ah…
ah
Ah, it feels so good. Make sure you give birth to my child.
p17
panel 1
hahu...you’er so cute that I’m still rock hard, titty chan.
panel 2
Bring your ass in closer
ah…
W...we’re not leaving until my balls are completely empty, got it.
panel 3
panel 1
ah…
ah..
ah
huu, I’ve had my fill. It felt great planting my seed in your virgin pussy.
So your name is Oe Kanade huh. What a pretty name. And your nickname is Kana chan huh?
haa
ah…
Ah, let me take a picture. It’s fine. I won’t let anybody see.
I’ll just be using it to jerk off to. guhihi
ha
You really seem to love the cock so why don’t we fuck again some time.
p18
panel 1 *note: Literal translation in these lines is an old Japanese poem about a flower hibernating in winter and blooming in the spring which I can only assume is a metaphor for striking when the opportunity is right (for their card game) so here’s my interpretation. Feel free to change it up.
Roses are red, violets are blue
I’m about to destroy you
panel 2
aah… What is he singing… I can barely hear…
I went through all of that...yesterday… Wh… what the heck am I doing…
panel 3
I keep getting this weird feeling from down there…
I washed it out but maybe there’s still some of his semen inside of me…
Even now, the sperm of some man I don’t even know is moving around...inside of me…
panel 4
My chastity… My first partner… My first...time….
And to force me to feel pleasure in such a cowardly way...it’s all… that man’s….
And...now I might even be pregnant….
Na chan
panel 5
Kana chan!
eh…? ah Tsukue...kun…
ah...u...um…
p19
panel 1
S...sorry, I’m going to...head home for today.
ah...ok. Stay safe.
thanks…
panel 2
...It’s fine. There’s nothing to worry about…
It’s… It’s not that serious, just like a little bite from a dog….
This is… not that big of a deal. It’s not a big deal so the sooner I forget the better….
panel 3
I just have to forget and go back to how I used to be…
…...mn…?
panel 4
…….ah
panel 5
No way...A...again….?
Th...the same...f...no...it’s a different person…
panel 6
Ah...aah…. Another person I don’t even know is playing with my body….
It’s because I let him get away with something like this that...he….
….that he decided to use me so cruelly….
….ah...aah...why is it….
mn….
p20
panel 1
Don’t tell me… I’m getting… turned on
ah...my panties….
panel 2
….he...he’s rubbing his thing up against my thights…
haa...haa… you like that don’t you.
eh….? d...don’t tell me….
panel 4
I’m...going in...raw
….! in here!?
panel 5
no…
mn…..!
panel 6
Another man has his thing inside of me…
mnn….
mn
ah...It’s...penetrating….me
panel 7
nhuuuu
Hitting...on...my womb….ah
p21
panel 1
mn
ah…..ah…. in here…
while I’m standing, from behind...like a dog….
huu
ha….
hu…
hwa….
ah...ah…
panel 2
His cock is inside...of me….
fucking me….ah…..
panel 3
ha
haa
haa
aah…
ha….
ah
panel 4
It’s such...a filth low class thing to do...and yet
It feels...so good… that my hips...are moving…
panel 5
huu...ghuu...I’m going to cum inside of you.
in...inside…. ah….
Is that ok? You wouldn’t want it on your uniform would you?
ah...th..that’s right...nha
mn
guhi...Well then I’ll dumb my thick load into your womb.
O...okey….
Give me your creampie...mister…
ah
p22
panel 1
hwa!?
ah
ah….
aaaaaaah
It feels so good the way my womb is swelling up
from sucking in all of your hot cuum!
panel 2
nha…
ah...ah...It’s flowing...so deep inside of me…
I’m going to get knocked up by your hot… cum…
guhu...That’s great, little missy.
panel 3
Next time we’ll really make a baby.
p23
panel 1
ah...ah….
...again.. and this time with a man whose face I couldn’t even see…
Ma...making love...s...sex….
h...he made me feel so good…
panel 2
and I even told him...to cum inside of me…
...and then he gave me money for it….
is this...me…?
panel 3
Hey...you
y..yes?
panel 4
That’s pretty crazy that you would do that inside a train.
ah...ahh...I can’t believe it… he saw me…
I’m really a complete slut now aren’t I….
You think you could play with me too after that?
Come on...let’s go to a hotel.
Ho...tel….?
p24
panel 1
ah...aaah...That’s right… that’s the kind of girl...that I look like after all...right.
Or rather… I’m already that type of girl…
haha….
panel 2
….I always thought something like this could only happen in some alternate universe…
I always thought of myself as close to someone from ancient times…
but now
...with this body I can’t even get married can I….
I...it was bound to happen...one way or another…
aah… that old man.
….said he could make girls turn with sex…
panel 3
Could that be what this is…
u...um…
hm? what is it?
panel 4
Well...um…
how much...would you say...that I’m worth to you…?
panel 5
Komano senpai, are you heading to the club room?
ah, Hanano san, yea……..ah!
p25
panel 1
Kana chan!
Ah...Desk-kun, Hanano…
panel 2
Are you not coming to club again today?
Y,yeah. I have to help at home…
oh okey…
panel 3
Sorry…
Please send my regards to Chihaya chan too.
yeah….
panel 4
...Kana chan is hiding something isn’t she…?
I bet...it’s that Inou senpai...found a boyfriend.
Must be nice…
panel 5
eh...what!? no way!
Komano senpai get a clue!
That’s gotta be it! What else could it be!
panel 6
n...no way… so kana chan found a boyfriend….
p26
panel 1
mnn
npu
ah…
panel 2
hwa
hu
ahu
panel 3
ha
ah
hyaaaaa
panel 4
oh
oh
panel 5h
I lost control all at once…. Once I fell once, the rest was pure bliss.
Soon enough I was spreading my legs to take this mans thing as if I were some beast in head….
Eventually I didn’t even have time for club activities.
Doing this… I’ve really betrayed everyone. And yet…
huu
ohoo
huu That was great Kanachan. Isn’t it close to an unsafe day? guhu… How about we do it raw then?
aah… I know that… I’m becoming now good...but…
nhu
hu
hu
…..ohkaay
My insides are so broken that it won’t allow me to stop doing this.
I’m sorry chihaya chan, I don’t think… I’ll be coming back to club.
p27
panel 1
By the way Kana chan, I’ve got a little request for you…
panel 2
Well basically… he knew this guy that was looking to produce some kind of porno and was wondering if he could record me getting fucked….
Of course I turned it down… no matter how much he begged…
But I eventually agreed under the condition that he buy a kimono from our shop.
panel 3
The money I would get was enough to manage things on,
But I kept wanting to find something special for my family...for my mother as well….
panel 4
And so that day I….
guhu...Welcome back Kana chan.
ah, did you take that contraceptive from before?
Y...yes… because I’m ovulating today…
Well then we can go ahead and plant our seed inside of you today then, right? Because I think I’m about to blow my load right into your womb in a minute.
p28
panel 1
Now then, could you introduce yourself?
Ah, ok. I’m Oe...kana.
A sophemore from...Mi,Mizusawa.
When was your first time? And with who?
...I, I was molested on a train… And then… he carried me from the train to the station bathroom...that man…
guhihi, that’s crazy. Seems like it’s not just once that you’ve had a runin with these perverted molesters is it.
y...yeah it’s true…
So today our foolish KAna chan will be getting fucked raw by us old guys… are you ready?
y...yes.
panel 2
You’ve got great tits.
There’s milk coming out. Could it be you’re already pregnant?
N...no. I’m not….maybe.
guhu….Well whatever the case I think it’s about time I doused your egs with my cock juice anyway.
eh…?
panel 3
You think you’ll be able to impregnate her even though she took the contraceptive?
mn
panel 4
….ah….right… My eggs… are going to combine with your sperm right.
Are you getting turned on?
You’ve being recorded so be sure to set the mood, Kana chan.
ah….alright….
p29
panel 1
Haa...haaa
Please shove your raw cocks right into me, right here.
haa
haa
haa
Please pour your seed right into me and knock up my ovulating grade school pussy….I’m begging
panel 2
ohoo, nice. first why don’t we start off with those slutty tits?
O….ok.
panel 3
How do...you like them?
Those breats look like they’re ready for a child but…
panel 4
Instead why don’t we use them
to bring pleasure to our cocks?
ha
ah...aha...oh yes
I’m getting so turned on stroking your cock between my tits. I’m...such a pervert….
p30
panel 1
ha...ah….your cock...is so...warm
hihihi, well how about we use those tits a little differently and leave my imprint on you.
panel 2
O..okay… fuck my breast pussy and leave your marking on me!
Fuck, I’m gonna knock your tits up with my jizz!
nhaaa
panel 3
haa
panel 4
huu...hehe… Kana chan is usually so reserved and yet….
nmo
nhu
mn
mn
panel 5
Now then, next you’ll need to change into this.
How about we fuck.
Eh, isn’t that...don’t tell me…
p31
panel 1
Th… This is what you brought from my shop isn’t it…
haa
haa
haa
panel 2
Um… do you plan on us doing it like…
buh
mn…
ah…
panel 3
guhu. It’s the traditional clothing from the home you love so much.
hu
nhu
panel 4
hya…
We’re going to fuck you and douse you in cum so you’ll never forget this.
ah
no… not from the miyatsuguchi*
tlnote: this is apparently a small opening under the sleeve of a kimono. You can keep it as the original or just say sleeve or armpit. Just thought I’d leave it in context. **
panel 5
hwa...ah
mn…
haa
haa
ah
haa.. ah...the hakama are going to be ruined….
*hakama are the pants part she’s wearing*
p32
panel 1
ah….
How about I shove my cock into your cum drenched pussy now.
Are you ready to be knocked up in your super tight school girl cunt?
wa...wait… but...it’s….
nhii
Take the cock of a man old enough to be your father,
and get ready to have my baby!
panel 2
ah
mn
panel 3
Raw cock!
aaah
Oh god!
guhihihi, you came just from taking it in didn’t you.
Does wearing traditional clothes turn you on?
nho
oho
Your pussy so soaking wet, Kana chan.
p33
You’ve been craving a pounding in your fuck hole, haven’t you, Kana chan.
Soon I’ll shoot my thick cock juice straight into your cunt.
Cumming
agaain…
I’m gonna make you into a knocked up school girl…
Knocked...u...p?
haa
whas thaat….
panel 3
hihihi, as if you don’t know what I mean?
I’m talking about how the drug you’d been taking wasn’t contraceptive but a fertility drug.
Paying you for sex has been so fun
mn
So you’d better get ready to get knocked up on our seed.
ha
mn
ha
ha
ha
hwa
ah….ah…. well I….um….that’s crazy…
panel 4
You’ve got such a slutty easily impregnated body
So just give in and take our
Children!
hii
nhiiii
p34
panel 1
You really become just a little slut once you get the cock, Kana chan.
ah
oh
ohoo
hwa…
aaaaa
guhihihi that’s great. It’s like her womb is sucking my cock right in.
We’re going to make your ovulating womb overflow with our cum until you have our child.
mn
aah… ahaaa…. I’m gonna… have your...baby…. Your baby… it feels.. so… goood...ii hiiii… ah
panel 2
You love how our cocks feel, don’t you kana chan.
Do you love us, kana chan?
ha
ye...es, I love… you..
haa
haa
Then you want us to fuck your slut holes more and love you harder, right?
yes…. yes! Love me deep down in my pussy… use me….
guhihi! I’ll send it deep down into your stupid school girl pussy….
panel 3
I’m gonna unload as much of my filthy cock juice into you as I can!
y...yes
Please give me your filth
p35
panel 1
guhihihi
To think that you went from being raped in the bathroom to selling your slut pussy.
panel 2
ah
nhi
And now you’re gonna get pregnant with a cute little baby!
The beautiful traditionally dressed slut, Kanade chan!
My pussy if cumming from being knocked up!
ha
ha
haa
ah
you’re cum is filling
me up
ah
Fuck...here it comes
p36
panel 1
whoa, that was an awesome scene. But I guess Kana chan isn’t done just yet.
We’ll be fucking you senseless until your pussy is left a gaping mess
a….ha….
ha
ha
ha
ha
ha
We’ll keep making you feel good and fucking you until you’re pregnant.
o...okey…..
Cock...fill me with cum…. fuck me. Please….
panel 4
Kana chan didn’t come to club again today did she…
Huh… you didn’t know?
It looks like Kana chan is taking a break from school all together….
panel 5
Seriously!? Is she sick or something?
Do you think...I pushed her to hard!?
Calm down
Ah… A phone call… from Kana chan!
panel 6
Hello
mn...ah….ah
Kana chan?
p37
ah…. aha… is this Chihaya chan…? I’m sorry… I haven’t been coming to club lately.
haa
haa
I...just haven’t… been feeling well enough to playing Karuta lately,
haa
that’s why I took… maternity leave…
eh… what do you mean…
haa
My belly has grown so big… that I can’t be expected to deal with school or anything else…
I… decided to record the next time I’m knocked up too… mn
K… kana chan… what are...you saying…?
I’m...sure you can understand where I’m coming from Chihaya chan.
Th...the joy of a woman having her womb used by….a man….
aah…. with things the way they are with club president Mashima… I guess you’ll find out later right….?
… Chihaya chan, you should… come here too okay?
p38
Panel 1
Extras
BEFORE
She has a voice that brings up feelings of someone that might wish for world peace on a survey.
Conversely to her childlike fat and short stature her breasts are actually shockingly large.
Just as her outward appearance would suggest, she’s very into old customs and traditional songs. The style of a traditional japanese woman really suits her.
Right now she seems to be having a lot of fun with club activities and even seems to have a boy she’s interested in.
panel 2
AFTER
he slipped something in her drink and skillfully dragged her away to a hotel once she started feeling it.
As expected of a virgin she begged and pleased but he ignored her and had his way and showed her loins what a mans member was like.
As he thrust his raw penis into her, she begged for him to use contraceptive but of course he ignored her as he violently thrust his seed into her
He presented his impregnating juices to her brand new womb as a friendly person would a gift.
He had etched into her womb, exactly who it was she belonged to.
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May 27 2015, 14:39
