[X] My Assistant

Alright, [www.mediafire.com] here they are, the corrected pages and the credits page as well.

I decided to go with a minimalist approach to the credits page... which is another way of saying I half-assed it.

In particular, I wasn't sure whether to put a "RAWs: bpop" in the credits, because bpop uploaded the images I used, but these images are from the digital release, not scanned from a physical copy, so by definition they weren't raws... So I omitted that altogether.

I've completed the editing of all pages of Daisuki na Hito (KanColle). It proceeded much quicker once I realized I didn't need to translate every single sfx. [www.mediafire.com] Here it is for QC.

Here are some proofreading and editing comments, mostly on rephrasing and font usage:

02
Instead of "Apparently she was looking for you," you might want to use "I think she was looking for you." It sounds a bit more natural.

Instead of "If you need to talk to her, you can go ahead and take care of that first," you might want to use "Go ahead and talk to her first, if you need to." The reason for this is that the reader might be unsure what "take care of that" refers to (the blowjob, or talking to Ooi). It's confusing because the focus of the panel is on the Admiral's dick.

Instead of "It's good to be honest," you might want to use "I admire your honesty!"

03
Instead of "I want to have the Admiral's baby, but so far, no such luck," you might want to use "I want to have the Admiral's baby, but I haven't had much luck so far." It sounds a bit more natural.

17
Instead of "I couldn't make it in time..." you might want to use "I couldn't pull out in time...". That way, it ties into Kitakami's complaint that he came inside Ooi. Alternatively, you could also use "I couldn't hold myself back..." as well.

20
You might want to consider changing the fonts in Panel 2 to follow the "regular" font. The raws show the same font throughout.

I checked the raws, and the Admiral calls Ooi "勝手". Wouldn't "selfish" or "self-centered" be a better word choice here instead of "whimsical"? Or you might want to use "fickle-minded" instead, which is a more common term for "whimsical".

24
You might want to consider changing the font of the Admiral's lines in Panel 4 and Ooi's line in Panel 6 to follow the "regular" font. The raws show the same font throughout.

27
Instead of "I wonder why," you might want to use "I'm not really sure~" It sounds a bit more natural.


By the way, why not translate the title as well? You can call it "The Ones I Love" or something similar. And on an unrelated point, what did you think of Trifinov's rendition of Rachmaninoff's concerto?

...

I responded to the last bit via PM because it's not related to the thread.

Instead of "Apparently she was looking for you," you might want to use "I think she was looking for you." It sounds a bit more natural.

This is the only one I disagree on, and I only slightly disagree on it. In context, it seems kind of weird for the Admiral to say "I think she was looking for you", as if he's not sure whether Ooi saying "I heard that Kitakami-san was in here" meant that or something else entirely. But it may just be a matter of personal speech patterns, and if others in this thread disagree with me I'll change that.

All the others I'll definitely change, and I'll post here later once I've uploaded them.

By the way, why not translate the title as well? You can call it "The Ones I Love" or something similar.

I checked the raws, and the Admiral calls Ooi "勝手". Wouldn't "selfish" or "self-centered" be a better word choice here instead of "whimsical"? Or you might want to use "fickle-minded" instead, which is a more common term for "whimsical".

Well, I'm only the editor, not the translator, and I don't know Japanese. I'll probably use "fickle-minded" (or actually, I think just "fickle" would work). The title I'll also probably adhere to you on, but I'll try to wait for other peoples' input first.

EDIT: The fixes to the errors meow_pao mentioned: [www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?o8cg7dgbkypbyet

This post has been edited by bearsridingdolphins: May 21 2015, 06:15

I've PMed the TL for the Kancolle work, amped, for comments. I think he was serious we use this image somewhere in the credits, but let's see what he says. I'd use it as part of the credits, not the gigantic background... so I think what you did is exactly what the had in mind. Simple doesn't mean bad (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: May 21 2015, 10:18

This is the only one I disagree on, and I only slightly disagree on it. In context, it seems kind of weird for the Admiral to say "I think she was looking for you", as if he's not sure whether Ooi saying "I heard that Kitakami-san was in here" meant that or something else entirely. But it may just be a matter of personal speech patterns, and if others in this thread disagree with me I'll change that.

You're right. In that case, you can try "It seems like she was looking for you."

I did a major overhaul of "Princess of the Desert". I rephrased most of the lines and adjusted translations in several places. I hope that's OK.

P01
Desert Princess

P02
The war is over.
We, the Baroque Works, have won.
Alabasta is now ours.
Heh. Don't glare at me like that.
Ah!

P03
Your body may have been defiled from doing your job as an agent, but it still looks great.
You may hate me now, Vivi...
but you're going to bear my children from now on!
Don't be a fool! I'd rather die than do that!

P04
N-Nooo...!
Heh. You don't know how to please a man, do you?
Aaah...
Hyaaah...
You leave me no choice, princess.
Okay, then. I've decided.

P05
I'll train you on the proper way of pleasing men until you are pregnant with my child.
W-Who would...
Are you saying you won't?
Well, you'll definitely change your mind once you see her.
Fuuh!!

P06
Ah!
Ah!
Aaah!
T-That's...
No more!
I can't...
I can't take any more!

P07
You cruel bastard! Let Nami go!
"Cruel"? I'm actually showing her mercy.
Agh!
Ah!
They fought against me. I originally planned to kill them off by feeding them to the crocodiles.
However, if you do as I say...
I'll let them live.
What do you say?
...

P08
Bathing together...
This is... so embarrassing...
And I'm surrounded by brawny guys...
Hey, boss. Can we have some fun with this girl?
Go ahead!
All right! Let's celebrate our takeover of Alabasta, boys!

P09
Playtime!
Eek!
Hyaaah!
Don't touch me there!
N-Nooo!!

P10
Let's skip the foreplay and cut to the chase!
Hyaaah!
Ohh! Nice reaction! You're squeezing me real tight.
Aah!
Ah!
These guys... are treating me like a toy...
Fuck! I wanna do her, too!
Fguh!
Fuah!
Ah!
Hey, wait your turn!

P11
I've been waiting for this ever since you became an agent.
I wanted to do you at least once.
This ass...
Haah!
Hah!
Those thighs...
You're definitely a princess, alright...!
F-Fugh!
All right, my turn!
Huh? That's not...!

P12
Aaah!
N-No... Stop it...
Heh heh! She's really wet!
Uwaah!
Looks like she enjoys being raped.

P13
No... I don't... I...
I'm not that kind of girl...
Oh yeah! I'm gonna cum!
No! Don't!
Ohhh!

P14
Heh heh. Gimme some lovin' too, Vivi-chan.
F-Fuuh...
Nngh.
Ah.

P15
Just you watch, Crocodile...
No matter what you do...
I...
will never give in...

This post has been edited by meow_pao: May 22 2015, 03:53

I'm doing the Jibril bounty

Hmm, so if what a quick Google search has told me is accurate, "daisuki na hito" could mean either "the one I love" or "the ones I love", because Japanese is vague about plurals. So is this title wordplay on the author's part (because over the course of the doujin both Ooi and the Admiral go from a single lover to two)? Should I try and think of a way in English to convey this vagueness, or should I not bother and go with "The Ones I Love"?

Should I try and think of a way in English to convey this vagueness, or should I not bother and go with "The Ones I Love"?

How about writing it as "The One(s) I Love" instead?

This post has been edited by meow_pao: May 22 2015, 06:18

Hmm, so if what a quick Google search has told me is accurate, "daisuki na hito" could mean either "the one I love" or "the ones I love", because Japanese is vague about plurals. So is this title wordplay on the author's part (because over the course of the doujin both Ooi and the Admiral go from a single lover to two)? Should I try and think of a way in English to convey this vagueness, or should I not bother and go with "The Ones I Love"?

Wouldn't it mean the loved one (single)? Ones (plural) would be hitotachi(人たち). But of course I don't know the context.

This post has been edited by kdrt: May 22 2015, 06:27

Wouldn't it mean the loved one (single)? Ones (plural) would be hitotachi(人たち). But of course I don't know the context.

Well, I just got that info from [en.rocketnews24.com] this article, I myself have no knowledge of the subject.

I think I'll go with the suggested "The One(s) I Love".

This is the translation of the jibril bounty.
Bounty
Gallery

ｐ０１
健全天翼 じぶりーる
healthy heaven wings　jibril *awkward, but I can't think of a better translation
ｐ０２
マスタ—どうでしよう… えつちで勝負と言うのは 先にいかせたら勝ち と言うのは
master, how about it? we'll have a sex game. the one who make the other cum first wins
ジブり—ル本気で 言つているのか…
Jibril, are you serious about it?
もし勝つたら マスタ—の大切な物を いただきます *she means his virginity
if I win, I'll take your precious thing
いや待てした時点で いただいた事に ならないか…
no, wait... can't you take it after we do it?
ご安心ください マスター　このゲームが終れば
rest assured, master. when this game is over
マスターの大切物はそのまま継続されます
Master's precious thing will be returned as is
つまりしていても 童貞のままと…
in other words, I'll still be virgin..
はい
Yes
なんとも すばらしい勝負だ
sounds like an amazing game
ありがとうございます そぅ言ってもらて　光栄です
Thank you master. It is an honor to hear your gratitude. *to be told that

ｐ０３
これがリアルと いうものか… 思つてた以上に 気持ちいいな
So this is the real deal, huh? it feels better than I expected
マスターでも 経験した事の ない事では勝ちよぅが なさそぅですね
master, looks like having no experience is a big disadvantage here *she said unlikely to win

ｐ０４
それはどぅかな 経験だけが　すべてではないのだよ ジブリール君…
I wonder about that. Experience is not everything, jibril.
アソコにボカシが 入っていよぅが 光で見えなくとも…
Usually that place is blurred or have a shine of light, but..
すべては想像で 補ぅのだよ
Everything is compensated by imagination

ｐ０５
マスター。。。。。そこは。。。　あつあ
master.... that place is... Ah ah
どうしたさつきまでの 行きよいは
what's wrong? what happened to the earlier bragging *the earlier liveliness
さすがマスター そう簡単には 勝たせてくれ ませんわね
as expected, master. you don't let me win easily
ハア
haa..
ハア
haa...

ｐ０６
才レ様はありとあらゆる 女性を攻略してきたんだ どこのポイントを クリックすればいいか
I have conquered each and every kind of girl. I know where to click.. *he emphasizes I with '-sama'. perhaps you know the higher order of I.
すべて見極められる…
Everything can be analyzed
たとえば こんなふぅに…
For example. like this...
ああっ
Aaaah!

ｐ０７
ギュッ
gyuu
どうだこの 一寸もくるいもなく ポイントを狙う 俺様の手さばき
How is it? This perfect aiming of my judgement hand *he said not even an inch miss
すごいです…触れるたびに 体中に電気が走る
it's amazing... impulse is running through my body everytime you touch *she said electricity

ｐ０８
これにたえられない よぅじや俺様には 勝てないぜ……
this is unacceptable. you can't win against me.
ああ…ダメー 指だけでィカされて しまいますわ……
aaah!!.. dooon't!! You'll make me cum with just your finger!
！！
!!
はあー
Haa
はあー
Haa
はあー
Haa

ｐ０９
お—とまだイツて もらつちやあ困るぜ
Oops, I won't let you cum yet *I can't have you cumming yet
このギンギンのまま 終わられても 納得がいかない……
I won't be satisfied if it's over like this
そぅだろジブリ—ル こいつでイカせて 欲しいだろ……
that's right, jibril. you wan't me to make you cum with this, right?
はい。。。マスター。。。 負けるなら マスタ—の物を味わい ながら負けたいです…
yes... master.... if I have to lose, I want to lose with master's dick *she said while tasting master's thing

ｐ１０
そぅか…　だったら存分に 味あわさせてやる
Is that so... Then, I'll let you taste it to the fullest.
本来の俺の力を……
My true power!
ああ…最高です　マスター
Aaah... It's the best, master

ｐ１１
マスターの物が 激しくてあたつて イツっちゃいそう…
Master's dick is hitting me hard. I'm gonna cum *master's thing
ああ…どんどん 激しく……
Aah... It keeps hitting hard
ああっ　あっダメ
Aaaah Ah! Nooo

ｐ１２
膣が壊れて しまいますわ マスタ—…
My womb is going to break, master
そんな事気にする 必要はないだろ…
You don't have to worry about that kind of thing
終ればすべて もとに戻るんだろ だつたら……
When this is over, everything will be back to before, right?
めちゃくちゃになるまで 続けるまでさ……
I'll keep going until you go insane. *he said mechakucha
あっ
Aah!
ｐ１３
ああっっ
Aaaahhh..!!
もうダメです　マスター　これ以上したら…
I can't hold it anymore. master, if you do more than this
イって　しまします
I will cum
あっ
Ah
あっ
Ah

ｐ１４
ああｗ　*i don't know what that w is
aaah!!
！！
!!

ｐ１５
さすがマスター ここで引き分けに もつてくるとは。。
As expected, master. You make this game a draw.
まあな…このゲームは 勝った者はイケずに 終つてしまうからな… お前はそれを知つて 勝負をかけにきたんだろ
Right. On this game, the winner is the one who didn't cum. You were betting on this, right?
だがお前の おかげでこんな すばらしいゲー厶が あるなんて 知らなかつたぜ……
but thanks to you, I get to know this. Who would've thought this wonderful game exist.
ありかとな ジブリール…
thanks, jibril
マスタ—に 感謝されるなんて 光栄ですー
It's an honor to hear your gratitude, master *to be thanked by master
よーし—。。。。 オレ様の テクニックで すべての女どもの 味わつてやるとするかな…
all right! perhaps I should let every woman taste my technique
まあ…　素敵ですマスタ—……
oh! that's wonderful, master!
ステフ セツクスで 勝負だ！！
steph, let's do a sex game!
そんな事　するわけないでしよ バカですの！！
Like I would do that kind of thing, you stupid!
野望…終了……
My ambition.. ended...

This post has been edited by kdrt: May 22 2015, 15:06

Proofread for Kenzen Tenyoku Jibril:
Regarding the title, a lot of different words can be used for "Kenzen" but for Jibril, I think "lively" fits her better than "healthy".

P02

master, how about it? we'll have a sex game. the one who make the other cum first wins

S: Master, how about we have a sex game where the one who makes the other cum first wins?

Jibril, are you serious about it?

S: Are you seriously suggesting that Jibril?

if I win, I'll take your precious thing

I'd suggest being more direct here in mentioning that she intends to take his virginity as "precious thing" isn't usually used to refer to virginity especially for a guy. "I'll take your first time/experience if I win" or something sounds better.

no, wait... can't you take it after we do it?

C: Wait... wouldn't that be impossible?

P03

master, looks like having no experience is a big disadvantage here *she said unlikely to win

S: Master, you're likely to lose with your lack of experience.

P04

I wonder about that. Experience is not everything, jibril.

S: I wouldn't be so sure about that. Experience doesn't decide everything, Jibril.

"アソコにボカシが 入っていよぅが 光で見えなくとも…" is the line after this, is it untranslated?

Everything is compensated by imagination

S: Imagination compensates everything.

P05

what's wrong? what happened to the earlier bragging *the earlier liveliness

S: What's wrong? Where is your confidence now?

you don't let me win easily

C: You won't let me win easily.

P12

everything will be back to before

S: Everything will return to normal.

I'll keep going until you go insane

S: "I'll keep going until you break" or "I'll keep going until you're completely messed up".

P15

You make this game a draw.

C: You made it end with a draw.

Who would've thought this wonderful game exist.

C: Who would've thought this wonderful game existed.

Like I would do that kind of thing, you stupid!

S: "you idiot" sounds better.

Regarding the discussion for the Daisuki na Hito title. It could be singular if the "hito" refers to the male. "The person I love" would also be a valid translation in that case.

This post has been edited by CrimsonClown: May 22 2015, 13:48

"アソコにボカシが 入っていよぅが 光で見えなくとも…" is the line after this, is it untranslated?

Welp, you're right. I missed that. Just translated that. Please proofread again, crimsonclown.

Usually that place is blurred or have a shine of light, but..

For that line I'd use "This place is usually blurred or blocked by light, but..."

Here's a review of Kenzen Tenyoku Jibril:

P01
Lively Flügel Jibril
(I did a bit of research, and "天翼" refers to the Flügels, Jibril's race.)

P02
Master, how about we have a sex game... where the one who makes the other cum first wins...?
You can't be serious, Jibril...
I am...
If I win, I'll take your "precious thing".
Wait... Won't you actually be taking it once we do it?
Don't worry, Master. Once this game is over,
your "precious thing" will be returned intact.
In other words, I'll still be a virgin...
Yes...
That's one amazing game!
Thank you, Master. I'm honored to receive your gratitude.

P03
So this is what it's really like... It feels better than I expected...
Uh!
Master, your lack of experience means that you'll probably lose...

P04
Don't underestimate me, Jibril. Experience isn't everything, you know.
This place is usually blurred out or blocked by light, but...
imagination can easily make up for it!

P05
Master...! That's my...! A-Ahh...!
What's wrong, Jibril? Where's that confidence of yours now...?
I expected nothing less from you, Master. You're putting up a good fight.
Haah
Haah

P06
I've conquered each and every type of girl. I know exactly where to click.
I've mastered everything...
Allow me to demonstrate...
Ahhn!

P07
Squeeze
You see? My hands are finding all the right spots.
Ah!
Ah!
Ah!
It's amazing... Your touch is sending a current throughout my body...

P08
This isn't fair! I can't lose...!
Aah...! Nooo! You'll make me cum with just your fingers...!
Haah
Haah
Haah

P09
Now, now. We can't have you cumming yet.
I won't be satisfied if the game ends like this...
You want me to make you cum with this, don't you, Jibril?
Yes... Master... If I'm going to lose to you, I'd rather savor my defeat that way...

P10
Is that so...? Then I'll give you a full taste of it...
Feel my true power...!
Ah!
Aah...! It feels so good, Master...!
Ah!
Ah!
Ah!

P11
Master, your dick is pounding me so hard! I'm gonna cum...!
Ah!
Aah... You're ramming me even harder...
AAAH! NO!

P12
You're going to break my womb, Master...
Don't worry about it...
Once this is over, everything will return to normal, right?
I won't stop until you're completely fucked up...!
Ah!

P13
AAAH!
I can't take much more of this, Master... If you keep this up...
I'm gonna cum...!
Ah!
Ah!
AH!

P14
AAAHN!
Splurt
Splurt

P15
It's a draw. That's just like you, Master...
That's because... in this game, the winner doesn't get to cum... That's what you expected, right?
But thanks to you, I got to experience this. I never knew a game this wonderful actually existed...
Thank you, Jibril...
I'm honored to receive your gratitude, Master.
Now then...! Perhaps I should let every girl get a taste of my skills...!
Ooh...! That's a great idea, Master!
Hey, Steph! Let's have a sex game!!
What the hell do you take me for, you dumbass!!
All my dreams... crushed...

Sorry it took me so long to get to editing the title page. I couldn't decide on where to put the translated title, so [www.mediafire.com] here are four possibilities. I wasn't really satisfied with any of them, but if I had to choose one I'd personally go with the fourth placement.

EDIT: I'm impatient and want to claim the bounty quickly, so I'll go ahead and post [www.mediafire.com] the 'final' compilation of pages here (I'll still go back and edit them if needed after I claim the bounty). This is with the fourth suggested title page.

This post has been edited by bearsridingdolphins: May 24 2015, 05:18

Detective Collection by Black Age.
Bounty
Gallery



Note: Kinda hard to translate. This is not OCRed. Definitely need proofreading here and there, especially the non-dialogue box.

Transcribing by kdrt and litinium. Translation by kdrt
ｐ０１
探偵　コレクション　vol 1
detective collection vol 1

ｐ０３
約束通り私が一肌脱いであげるから。。。お父さんもちゃんと約束まもってよね。。。
Just like I promised... I took my clothes off... Father, you too do as you promise *she said keep your promise
収入が少ない上に 風俗キャバクラ通いを やめないヘボ探偵の父。。。 生活を脅かす惡癖を 是正すべく無垢な愛娘が 身を挺して解決に乗り出す
On top of having low income, and visiting the cabaret club... his beloved daughter volunteered her body to straighten his father's endangering bad habits
もちろんだよ！こんな良い娘を持って 俺は幸仕者だ　
Of course! I am a lucky person to have a good daughter like you
毛利　蘭
Mouri Ran
女子高生：２年生
Schoolgirl:second year
～処女～
virgin

ｐ０４
アソコみたい？私が処女かどうか確かめるの。。。？も～処女に決まってるでしょ。。。ホラ
do you want to see it? do you want to know whether I'm a virgin or not? geez of course I'm a virgin! look!
どう。。。かな。。？私のお。。。おマ。。。おマンコ。。。
how.. is it? my... pu..pussy

ｐ０５
あっ。。。ダメエエ～　裸　見せるだけって約束でしょ　っ　痛いいいいっ　抜いてえええええ！！
aahh... Dooon't, You promised you only want to see me naked, it hurts..., take it ooout...!!

ｐ０６
ふおお！蘭の初マンコ気持ち良過ぎる　やべえ！？　久々でもう我慢できねえ　月窒に出してもいいよな　ンン
ンッ　出る！！　*I did not recognize that kanji　（月窒）. but later on it has なか　furigana.
Woohoo!! Ran's virgin pussy feels too good, damn!, it's been too long I can't hold back! Cumming inside is fine right? yeah I'm cumming
ちょ！？それだけは　絶対　ダメエエエ　やあ。。。　熱いのが私の中に巻き込んでるう　妊娠しちゃうう～～
～～～っ
wai-!? that's the only thing you can't do. Doooon't. Noo... Hot things are flowing inside me.. I'll get pregnant...

ｐ０７
チョット！？おとうさん！！何やってるのよ　もうセックスは駄目私たち親子なんだよ！あっ。。。らめえ～～
～～～っ
Hey! Dad! what the hell are you doing? geez. We can't have sex! We're father and daughter ffs. Don't..
やっ。。。もう月窒に出しちゃダメ～～～ッ　今日排卵日だからあ　あっ　いっぱい出てるうっっ
No..You can't cum inside again! I'm ovulating today! Ah, You came so much

ｐ０８
酷いよ。。。お父さんっ　実の娘の処女を奪った　挙句。。。中出しする　なんて。。。妊娠したら　どうする
のよ。。。？
You're so cruel, father. You took your own daughter's virginity.. You even came inside.. What if I get pregnant!?
おマンコも閉じなく　なっちゃったでしょ　でもセックスしたい位　私の事　想ってくれてたなんて。。。嬉し
かったよ
My pussy's now open wide. but the way you think of me when you want to have sex... makes me happy

ｐ０９
こっちなら妊娠しないぞ！アナル処女も頂きだ！！蘭
If I do it here then you won't get pregnant! I'll take your anal virginity too!!
ちょ！？おとうさん　そっちは。。。お尻はホントにダメエエ！！！いやああああああああ～～～～～っっ
Wa-!? Father, that's... Don't do it in the ass!! Noooo........!!

ｐ１０
いつ何処で何回見ても蘭の子宮口はエロいよなあ　今日もお父さん　頑張っちゃうぞ
No matter everywhere and everytime I look, Ran's pussy is so slutty. Today, I'll do my best too, Ran!
もう！お父さん　娘のおマンコめくり過ぎっっ　何回娘の子宮口見れば　気が済むのよ～
Geez! Father, You touch my pussy too much. How many times do you have to see until you're satisfied?

ｐ１１
お金は逆にコッチが払うからオジサンのおチンポ・・・私のおマンコにブチ込んでよ
I'll pay the room instead. uncle's dick... thrust it into my pussy
男日照りのお嬢様女子高生　鈴木　園子は出会い系サイトで逆援助交際を始めてしまう・・・
The schoolgirl who lust for men, suzuki sonoko... has started doing compensated dating at an online dating site
鈴木　園子
suzuki sonoko
女子高生：２年生
schoolgirl:second year
～処女～
virgin

ｐ１２
オジさんの野太い黒チンポ最高～❤もっと沢山　私のおマンコにドピュドピュしてぇ
Uncle's big black dick is the best~ Spray it more into my pussy
おマンコ❤　おマンコ❤　おマンコ❤　おマンコ❤
pussy pussy pussy pussy

ｐ１３
んふっ　んふん　おチンポ美味ひぃ❤ケツマンコも最高～❤２人とも私の雌穴にいっぱい出してぇ
ngh ngh your cock's derhicious, asshole is the best. Cum as much as you can into my holes!

ｐ１４
ケツマンコ❤　ケツマンコ❤
Asshole Asshole
もっとケツマンコも弄くってぇえ～いく・・・アナルフィストでイっちゃう～❤
play with my asshole some more! I'm cumming from analfisted!

ｐ１５
何よー　もう立たないの？まだたかが３発目でしょ
what's this? you can't stand anymore? we've just done it 3 times
じゃぁ・・・特別子宮口見せてアゲるから　後もう３発頑張って❤
then,.. let me show you my special pussy... Let's do it 3 more times...

ｐ１６
弁護士　妃　英理は娘の前では夫婦共々別居中で不仲を装っているが、影では互いの肉欲を満たす為、旦那との
逢引を重ねていた・・・
Lawyer kisaki. Eri always act distant with her divorced husband in front of her daughter, but to satisfy their lust, she always meet her husband..
こういう約束だけはキッチリ守るのね・・・でも嬉しいわ❤さぁ今日も時間の限りハメ倒しましょう
You actually keep your promise for this kind of thing, huh? but i'm happy. Come, let's fuck all day long.
妃　英理
kisaki eri
（３７歳）
37 y.o.
弁護士：既婚
Lawyer:married

ｐ１７
んふっ　んんっ　旦那のチンポ美味ひぃい❤おマンコにもじんじん来てる
nngh nn hubby's cock is derhicious. my pussy is itching.

ｐ１８
あはぁん❤久々の旦那の野太いおチンポ最高～いい・・・気持ちいいい
Aahahan. hubby's big cock is the best, ahh.. it feels good.
はぁ　はぁ　アナタァ　今日も私のおマンコにいっぱいザーメンブチ撒けてぇ～
Haa haa darling... Today, Pour your semen into my pussy like you always do

ｐ１９
次はケツマンコね！あっ　凄いぃ　勝手に腰まで動いちゃう～やっぱりアナタとのアナルファックが一番だわ・
・・❤
I'll do your ass next! Ah amazing! I can't stop my hips, Analfuck with you really is the best darling *waist/hip is moving on its own
ケツマンコ❤　ケツマンコ❤
Asshole, asshole
いつもはツンケンしてる癖にセックスの時は人が変わるよな～エリ❤今日もお前のメス穴に出しまくってやるぜ

You usually looks dead serious, but you changed when you have sex. Eri, Like usual I'll cum inside your ass! *Today also I'll cum inside your ass

ｐ２０
ちょっと・・・アナタッ　調子に乗り過ぎよ　マンコとアナルがまたガバガバになっちゃうでしょ
Hey, darling, you went overboard. my pussy and anal becomes this loose.
のわぁ　さすがエリ！マンコもアナルも奥までユルユル❤子宮口も直腸も中まで丸見え～❤
woohoo you're the best, eri! your pussy and anal is　so loose the inside is completely visible!

ｐ２１
あなた達・・・こんな事してどうなるか解っているの？私を犯したところでまた豚箱いくよ！
you guys... do you know what you're doing!? if you assault me I'll send you to jail!
佐藤美和子刑事は過去に逮捕した犯罪者達のワナに陥り犯り壮絶な性的復讐を受けるハメになってしまう・・・
・・・
Detective satou miwako fell to the trap laid by the criminals he caught in the past. Now she has to accept their sexual revenge.
その強がりもいつまで持つかな？死ぬまで犯してやるからよ～覚悟しな❤
How long will that attitude last? we'll mess you up until you die~ prepare yourself
佐藤　美和子
Satou Miwako
（２８歳）
28 y.o.
警視庁：女刑事
Police:Female detective
～処女～
virgin

ｐ２２
いやぁ～お願いっ処女だけは許してぇ　つっ　痛あぁあ～　裂けちゃう～！！
nooo~ i beg you don't take my virginity!! It huurts! you're tearing me!
散々粋がっておいていい年こいて　まだ処女だったのかよ～❤今までの分死ぬまで犯し倒してやるよ
You have a bad taste in fashion for a woman your age. you're still a virgin, eh? I'll rape you until you die *I totally failed to comprehend the first sentence

ｐ２３
やぁぁっ～！！お願いぃ　膣は・・・中出しだけは・・・許してぇ～ダメーッ
Nooo~!! I beg you.. don't cum inside me.. spare me.. dooon't
ケケケッ！犯罪者の濃厚なザーメン沢山注ぎ込んで孕ませてやるぜ❤
keh keh keh. You'll get pregnant with criminals' thick cum!

ｐ２４
処女に続いてケツマンコの処女まで奪ってやるぜ❤しかも３Pでなぁ！！
Following your pussy, your asshole's virginity will be taken too! In threesome!
いやぁぁあぁ　こんなのダメェ！！ホントにぃ・・・壊れちゃう～
nooooooo, don't do this!!.... I'm going to break!

ｐ２５
ハァ・・・ハァ・・・やだぁ・・・今度は何する気・・・やぁ～おマンコに力が入らないダメッそんなに拡げち
ゃ子宮口まで見えちゃう
Haa haa.... Noo... what will you do now... Nooo~ my pussy is worn out... if you spread it like that my womb will be seen.
続いて拡張タイムだ！ブヒィー❤ついにあの佐藤刑事もおマンコの奥までガバガバで子宮口まで丸見え～
We're going for extended time! Gehehe. finally detective satou's inside became loose it's completely visible

ｐ２６
やぁあ　ダメェ　私の閉じなくなったおマンコ撮影しちゃ　お願い・・・もう許して
Nooo.. Doon't... My wide open pussy is shot... I beg you.. forgive me already... *she says photoshoot
たった数時間でマンコもケツメドもガバガバになっちまったな❤子宮口まで丸見えの醜態写真の撮影会だ
in just a few hours your pussy and ass become this loose..it's loose hole's photoshoot time!


Completely unrelated: Anyone know online site to learn mandarin/cantonese? preferably free site.

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P01
Detective Collection Vol. 1


P03
There... I took all my clothes off, just as I promised... Make sure you keep your end of our agreement, Dad...

Because of her father's habit of visiting strip clubs despite his meager income... Ran, his beloved daughter, volunteered her own body in order to straighten him out...

Of course I will! I'm a lucky man to have such a caring daughter!

Mouri Ran

Schoolgirl: Second-year

Virgin


P04
You're asking to see? You want to check if I'm a virgin...? Geez! Of course I'm a virgin... Look!

Well... How is it...? My p-pussy, that is...?


P05
Aah...! Nooo! You said you only wanted to see me naked! It huuurts! Take it out!!


P06
Whoaaa! Ran, your pussy feels so damn good! It's been so long; I can't hold back! I'm cumming inside, okay? Aah... I'm cumming!!

Wha!? You can't do that! Stooop! No... I can feel something hot pouring inside me! I'll get pregnant...!


P07
Wait...!? Dad!! What the hell are you doing? We can't have sex; we're father and daughter! Ah... Nooo...!

No... You mustn't cum inside me again...! It's not a safe day! Ah, you came so much...


P08
You're so mean, Dad... You took your own daughter's virginity... You even came inside me... What if I get pregnant...?

Haah

Haah

My pussy's now gaping wide. But still, the way you thought of wanting to have sex with me... kinda makes me happy.


P09
If I cum in here, you won't get pregnant! I'll be taking your anal virginity as well!!

Wha!? Dad, that's... Don't do it in my ass!!! Nooo...!


P10
Your pussy looks so slutty no matter where or when I look, Ran. I'll do my best today as well!

Geez! You play with my pussy too much, Dad. How many times do you have to look before you're satisfied?


P11
I'll pay for the room. In exchange... stuff your dick into my pussy, Mister.

Suzuki Sonoko, a man-eating schoolgirl. She does compensated dating through the use of an online dating site...

Suzuki Sonoko

Schoolgirl: Second-year

Virgin


P12
Your big, black dick is the best, Mister... Jam it even more into my pussy!

Pussy, pussy, pussy, pussy


P13
Mmph, mmph. // Your cock'sh sho yummy. Anal sex ish the best. Cum all you want into my holes!


P14
Anal, anal

Play with my asshole even more! I'm cumming from being fisted in the ass!


P15
What!? You can't get it up any more? We've only done it three times!

In that case... take a good look at my pussy. Let's do it three more times.


P16
Ms. Kisaki, a lawyer. She puts on a distant act with her divorced husband in front of her daughter, but always meets up with him to satisfy her lust...

You actually keep your promises for things like this, huh... That makes me happy. Let's fuck all day long.

Kisaki Eri

37 years old

Lawyer: Married


P17
Mmf, mmf // Your cock'sh delicioush, darling. My pussy's twitching.


P18
Ahhn! Your huge cock's the best, darling. Ahh... It feels so good!

Haah, haah! Pump your semen into my pussy again like you always do, darling!


P19
You're doing my ass! Aah... amazing! I can't stop my hips from moving! I love having anal sex with you, darling!

Anal, anal

You're usually so serious, but you change whenever you have sex, Eri. I'll cum into your ass, like I always do!


P20
Wait, darling! You're going overboard! You're stretching my ass and pussy wide open!

Whoaaa! That's amazing, Eri! Your ass and pussy are so loose that I can see everything inside!


P21
You bastards... Do you realize what you're doing? Touch me, and I'll send you to jail!

Detective Satou Miwako was captured by criminals she caught in the past. Now they'll have their revenge...

How long will that tough act of yours last? Get ready, because we're gonna fuck you to death.

Satou Miwako

28 years old

Police: Female Detective

Virgin


P22
Nooo! I'm begging you, don't take my virginity! It huuurts! You're tearing me apart!!

Your tough-girl facade is falling apart. So you're a virgin, huh? I'm gonna rape you to death!


P23
Stooop!! I'm begging you, please... Don't cum inside me... Have mercy... Nooo!

Heh heh heh! You'll be impregnated with the thick cum of criminals!


P24
And now, we'll take your anal virginity as well! Here, have a threesome!!

Nooo! Stop iiit!! I'm going... to break!


P25
Haah... Haah... What are you doing... No! My pussy's worn out... If you spread it so much, you'll see my womb!

Time for another round! Ha ha ha! Detective Satou's insides are so loose that you can see all the way in.


P26
Nooo! Stooop! Don't take a photo of my gaping pussy! I'm begging you... please forgive me.

After just a few hours, your ass and pussy have become this loose. Let's have your gaping holes say "cheese"!

This post has been edited by meow_pao: May 27 2015, 04:16