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post Nov 23 2021, 04:56
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Page 1
Lavie-tan no hon 2
ラヴィたんの本2

Page 3
First night
初之夜

Page 4
Lavie: Claus~ It's great that we finished our first misson successfully~
クラウス~ 初仕事も無事終ってよかったね~
Claus: Yeah...
そうだね…

Lavie: It feels like we've become vanship pilots too.
なんか私達もヴァンシップ乗りになった~って感じだよね
Claus: We're just barely able to do the one star misson
まだ星一つの仕事がやっとだけどね

Lavie: Although we just did one today, I am aiming for two star misson tomorrow
なんの今日は一つでも明日は二つを目指すのよ
Claus: Yeah, I want to fly the vanship on my own as soon as possible
そうだね、早く一人前のヴァンシップ乗りになりたいね
[rattle]
「ガラガラ」

Lavie: Apart from living expenses, we're going to save up for the race entry fee from now
生活費と別にレース参加費も今から積み立てておかないとね
Claus: You're really reliable, Lavie
ラヴィはしっかりしてるなあ

Lavie: What are you saying, we will be treated as adults from now on
何言ってるの これからは私達も大人扱いされるんだから
Claus: Ah... I see
ああ…そうか
Lavie: We can not rely on the funds from the association
協会の資金を頼っていられないよ
[clink]
「ジャラ」

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Claus: Yeah... from now on we will be treated as adults on their own...
そうだよね…これからは僕達も一人前の大人扱いされるかな…

Claus: Then we should also get along with each other like how the adults do it...
じゃあ僕達も大人の仲になんなきゃね…
Lavie: What does that mean?
なによ?それ

Claus: That's something my dad always does with my mom... Don't your parents do that, Lavi?
お父さんとお母さんがいつもしてた事だけど、ラヴィの所はしてなかった?
Lavie: I don't know... my mom passed away
知らないよウチお母さんいないもん

Claus: I see... I have no idea then...
そっか…じゃあ知らないんだ
Lavie: But that's okay
でもまあいいじゃん

Lavie: You know how to do that right, Claus?
クラウスは知ってるんでしょ
Lavie: Then teach me
私に教えてよ

Claus: Lavie... let's become adult together
ラヴィ…二人で大人になろう…
Lavie: Huh? Okay...
ああ?うん…
[slam]
「パタン」

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[cling]
「ぴたっ」(The sound when two people cling to each other)
Claus: Your body is so warm, Lavie
ラヴィの体あったかいね
Lavie: What are you saying ... what are we going to do now?
なに言って…これからどうするの?

Claus: Hmm... I will now proceed according to my memory
っん…思い出しつつ進めていくよ
Lavie: Ah... okay. Please.
あ…うん、どうぞ

Claus: First of all, chu...
まずは ちゅ…
Lavie: Hmph...mmph?
ん…ん?

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Lavie: After all ... it's embarrassing... Klaus ...
やっぱり…恥ずかしいよクラウス…

Claus: It's too late to say that...
今さらそんな事いってもダメだよ…

Lavie: ...
くう…

Claus: Lavie... it feels so good...
ラヴィ…イイ気持ち…
Lavie: Angh
あん

Lavie: Hngh...
くうっ…

Claus: Lavie's boobs...
ラヴィのおっぱい…
[lick lick]
「れろ れろ」

Page 8
Claus: Chu chu
ちゅよ ちゅよ

Lavie: Aangh
あんん

Lavie: It's tickling ... Claus ~
くすぐったいよ…クラウス~
Claus: Heh... really?
えっ…そうなの?

Claus: Dad and mom always seemed to enjoy it
お父さんとお母さんはいつも楽しそうだったけど一
Lavie: Even if you say so...
そんなこといっても

Claus: Then I will also try to play with here
じゃあココもいっぱいいじってみるね
Lavie: Haangh
はあん
[press]
「ぐにっ」

Claus: Lavie's here... gives me a feeling I never had...
ラヴィのココ、新鮮な感触だよ…
Lavie: Angh! Oh dear...Claus~
ヤン!もう…クラウス~
[press press]
「ぐに ぐに」

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Claus: I will also take this off... Lavie...
これもとっちゃうね、ラヴィ…

Lavie: Hngh
くん

[slide]
「つつ…」

Claus: Lavie's here... is completely different from mine
ラヴィのココって僕とは全然ちがうんだ
Lavie: Well...
そりやあ…

Claus: Hey...Spread your legs and show me...
ねえ…足を広げて見せてよ…
Lavie: Ehhh...
ええっ

Lavie: Oh my... you want to see that part of my body
もう…こんなところが見たいなんて…
Lavie: Claus... I don't understand why...
クラウス…訳わかんないよ…

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Claus: Lavie's pussy...
ラヴィのオマ〇コ…
Lavie: Haaa
ハアァ

Claus: Delicious, Lavie...
おいしい、ラヴィ…

Lavie: Agh
あっ

Claus: We will always be together...
ボク達ずっと一緒だよね…
Lavie: Agh

Lavie: Yes...
うん…

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Claus: Hehe... the taste of Ravie...
ぷふっ、ラヴィの味…

Claus: Well then, Ravie...
それじゃあ、ラヴィ…
Lavie: Agh...
あ…

Claus: Here...
ね…
Lavie: Wow... what's this... it's so big...
うわっ…何コレ、おッきいよ

Claus: Now I will put it in Ravie's here
これからラヴィのココに入れるんだよ
Lavie: Seriously?! Such a big thing...
ウソ!そんなこと

Claus: It will be okay, Ravie... I'm going to put it in now ...
大丈夫だよ、ラヴィ…今から入れるからね…
Lavie: Wait... wait a minute, Claus...
ちょ…ちょっと、クラウス…

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Lavie: Agh
アッ
Lavie: Aaagh
アアァッ
[thrust]
「ズブッ」

Claus: I'm getting in, Ravie...
ラヴィのココに入ったよ…
Lavie: Agh...
あ…
Claus: Ravie... it... it's amazing...
ラヴィ…す…すごいや
Lavie: Nghh
うう

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Lavie: It hurts!
イタイよ!
Lavie: Pull it out!
抜いてよ!

Claus: La... Lavie
ラ…ラヴィ
Claus: Even if you say so...
そんなこと言われても

Lavie: Aagh
ああっ
Claus: It feels too good to stop
だって気持ち良いんだモン
Lavie: Stop
いやあ
[squelch squelch squelch]
「ズチュ ズチュ ズチュ」

Claus: La... Lavie
ラ…ラヴィ
Lavie: It hurts, Claus...
イタイよ、クラウス…
Lavie: Pull it out... pull it out now!
抜いてっ…抜いてよ!
Claus: It feels so good...
気持ちイイ…

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Lavie: I said it hurts!
イタイっていってるでしょ!
Claus: Oof!
ぐげっ!
[glok]
「ゴボッ」

[pop]
「ヌプッ」

Lavie: Oh my... Claus
ああっ…クラウス

[flop]
「どべーん」

Lavie: If you're an adult, you should at least be able to wear your dad's flight suit.
大人っていうなら、せめてお父さんの飛行服を使えるくらいになんなきゃね
Claus: Tch... so I have to wait...
ちえつ…おあずけかあ…

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Night at sixteen
十六之夜

As a reward of the battle with the guild, we are offered with pretty good fiefs as reward
ギルドとの戦いの結果として私達は恩賞として結構イイ土地をいただいた
Claus the idiot wanted to reject that, but his rejection is of course ignored
クラウスのバカは断つてたみたい、だが当然無視した
Rumor has it that Claus can also enter royal palace freely, but I don't know if that's true.
クラウスに対しては王宮に使えるとか色々はなしが出てるそう、だが私の知った事じやない

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Dunya: Lavie~ Good night~
ラヴィ~おやすみ~
Lavie: Good night, Dunya
おやすみ、ドーニャ

Lavie: It's so much fun to eat dinner with them
やつは一緒に食事は楽しいね
Claus: Yes... indeed
うん…そうだね

Alvis: Lavie~ I'm going to sleep with the children tonight~
ラヴィ~ラこの子達と一緒に寝るね~
Lavie: Ah I see, alright.
あ、そう、わかった

Claus: Take good care of them!
ちゃんと面倒みるんだよ
Alvis: Tonight you are going to sleep with me together
今晩はお姉ちゃんが一緒におねんねしてあげるね

Claus: Al is really like their elder sister...
アルもすっかりおネエさんだね…
Lavie: Just like someone who is beloved by them and makes them happy... Well, isn't that good?
誰かさんみたいに慕われてテンションあがってんのよ、まあ、いい傾向じゃない

Claus: I wonder if Al did that also for us
アルも僕達に気を利かせてくれたのかな
Lavie: What do you mean?
なにか?

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Lavie: Claus... it's about time to show up in the association here
クラウス…そろそろこっちの協会にも顔を出さないとね
Claus: You are right...
そうだね…
Claus: The association is also about to get in shape soon
協会の方もそろそろ体制が整っただろうしね

Lavie: I already have the geographical information in my head
もう地理も頭に入れたしね

Lavie: Ah... yawn~
あ…ふぁああ

Lavie: So... I'm going to sleep, Claus
もう…寝るね、クラウス
Claus: Ah... okay
あ…うん

[badum]
「ドキッ」

Claus: Ah...
あ…

[grab]
「パチ」

Claus: Hey...
ねえ…
Lavie: ?


Claus: Well, Ravie...
そうだね、ラヴィ…
Lavie: What?
なにか?
[turn]
「くいっ」

Page 18
Lavie: Claus?
クラウス?
Claus: Ah~ It always feels so good to hold Lavie tight
は~やっはりラヴィを抱き一締めると気持ちいい

Lavie: ...Well
…まあ
Lavie: Thank you...
そりゃどうも…

Claus: Since when was it... before we met Al... I've kept you waiting... for such a long time...
いつ以来かな…アルと出会う前だから…もう随分長い事お待たせしたね…
Lavie: Claus, whatever my will is, you should be able to move forward alone
クラウス、何私の意志はおかまい無しに一人話し進めてんのよ

Claus: Being able to hug Lavie like this again...
またこうしてラヴィを抱く事が出来る…
Lavie: That's how this guy is like...
こいつは一そういう奴だよ…

Claus: Really...
本当に…
Claus: I'm really happy, Ravie...
よかったよ、ラヴィ…

Page 20
Lavie: ...

Lavie: Awwww...
もう…

Claus: When I crash landed in the desert, that's what motivates me to live on
砂漠に不時着した時もそれが生きる糧だったもん
Lavie: Whoa... I don't know how to react anymore...
うわ~リアクションに困るわね~

After I go back, whatever you say, I will throw you on the bed
帰ったら、有無を言わずベッドに一押し倒して
Lavie: Whoa!
うわっ

Take everything off all at once
一気に脱がして

And bang you till you can take no more
バンバンになるまでハメまくってやるつもりだった
Lavie: Haangh
はん
Lavie: Haa


Page 20
Claus: But after I came back, Lavie was so terribly depressed, that I eventually didn't do that...
けど戻ってみたらラヴィがひどく、落ち込んでてそれどころじゃなかった…
Lavie: Whoa~ the demon is right here
うわ~外道がここにいるよ

Claus: Maybe there is some misunderstanding between us?
もしかしてアレは何か誤解してたってこと…?
Lavie: Heh?
えっ?
[blush]
「ボン」

Claus: Pooh~ Lavie doesn't believe in me~
ふふ~ん、ラヴィはボクのコト信じて無かったんだ~
Lavie: From where did you learn such a line...
アンタのどこからそんな台詞を

Claus: Surprise~!
そ~れっ!
Lavie: Whoa?!
きゃん

Claus: I have to make sure that such misunderstanding doesn't happen again
二度とろんな誤解を起こさせない様にしないとね…
Lavie: Uuum...
う…

Claus: Chu...
ちゅ…
Lavie: Awww~
も~う

Page 21

[Choo]
「ちゆ」
Lavie: Hngh
ん…
Lavie: Hngh

[Choo]
「ちゆふ」

[Choo]
「ちゆふ」

Claus: It always feels the best to make out with Lavie
やっはりラヴイとするのが一番いいよ
Lavie: Oh... thank you...
あ…どうも…

Claus: Sophia has cold lips and it's not fun at all
ソフイアさんは唇冷たくて全然楽く無いもんね
Lavie: Don't you dare to say that again!
なんだとゴルア!

Claus: Lavie's boobs have a really nice shape~
ラヴイのオッパイって形がいいんだよね~
Lavie: This guy...
こいつは...

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[squish]
「キにゆ」
Lavie: Angh
あふん
Claus: Lavie's boobs are so soft
ラヴィのオッパイってとっても柔らかいね
[squish]
「ぐにゆ」

Claus: And they're also very delicious
それにとってもおいしそう
Lavie: Wait...
ちょっと

[choo]
「ちゆ」
Lavie: Hngh
ほうん

[jiggle]
「ぷるん」
Lavie: Hngh


[lick lick]
「れろ れろ」
Lavie: Aaangh
ああん
Lavie: Angh
あん

Page 23
Claus: Haa... I can finally touch Lavie's special place again
はあ…やっとラヴィのココをまた一さわる事が出来たよ
Lavie: Angh... Oh dear...Claus~
いやん もう…クラウス~

Lavie: Hngh
ふん

Claus: Now... I will also take this off...
さあ…これもとってあげるね…

Lavie: Haaa... okay
はあ…ふうん

Page 24
Lavie: Hngh...
ふん…

[lick lick]
「れろ れろ」
Lavie: Aaagh
ああ

Claus: Hey, Lavie...
ねえ、ラヴィ…
Claus: Spread your legs, let me see it
アソコを開いて、見せてよ

Lavie: Oh my...
もう…
Lavie: I don't know why you want to see something like this
こんな所見たいなんて訳わかんないよ

Page 25
Claus: Lavie is already so wet here
ラヴィのココもうトロトロになってる
Claus: Lavie is so ecchi
エッチだなあ

Lavie: Haangh
はふん

[slurp]
「ぴちゃ」
Claus: It's so delicious, Lavie...
おいしそうだね、ラヴィ…

Lavie: Haaaangh
あはぁん
[squish squish]
「きゆ きゆ」
[slurp slurp]
「ぴちゃ ぴちゃ」
Claus: Ahh.. it's the taste of Lavie
ああ…ラヴィの味がする。

Lavie: Haa...
はん…
Lavie: Haaagh
はんっ

Claus: Ahh... Ravie's pussy...
ああ…ラヴィのオマンコ…
[slurp slurp]
「ぴちゃ ぴちゃ」

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Claus: Ha~ The feeling of the mouth~
は~入しぶりの感触~
[slurp slurp]
「ふしゅ ぷちゆ」

Claus: Lavie...
ラヴィ…
[suck suck]
「ちゅぷ ちゅぷ」

Claus: That's a nice face expression
いい表情だね
[slurp]
「ふしゅ」
Lavie: What... are you saying
何、言ってんのよ
[suck]
「ちゅ」

Lavie: You should really thank me for doing this
私にこんなことしてもらえるなんて感謝しなさいよ
[suck suck]
「ちゅ ちゅぷ」
Claus: Indeed... Lavie...
本当だね…ラヴィ…

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Lavie: Ngh

[suck suck]
「ちゅぷ ちゅぷ」
Lavie: Nngh
んん

Claus: Haa

[fap]
「ぴちや」
Claus: Haa


Lavie: Nngh
んん
[fap]
「ぴちや」

Lavie: Tell me when you are going to cum...
イクときはちゃんと言ってよね…
[suck suck]
「ちゅぷ ちゅぷ」
Claus: Haaa... Lavie...
ハアァ…ラヴィ…

Claus: It... it feels so good... Lavieee...
き…気持ちいいラヴィい

Lavie: Ngh

Lavie: Hmmm
ふむ

Claus: Lavieee...
ラヴィイ
[splat]
「ドスツ」
Lavie: Woah!
あひん

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Lavie: Look what you did~ It's sticky~
も~う、ベトベトだよ~
Claus: That's because Lavie's face is too cute...
ラヴィの顔が可愛く感じちゃってさ…

Claus: Lavie... Let's have more fun...
ラヴィ…もっと楽しもう…
Lavie: Aaangh! Awwww...
ああん、もう…

Claus: Let'make a lot of love, Lavie
いっぱい愛し合おうね、ラヴィ…
Lavie: Yea... even though it's a little bit...
もう…チビのくせに…

Lavie: Haaagh
ハアァ

Claus: Let's do it
いくよ

[insert]
「ムチュ」

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Lavie: Haaagh
ハアァ

Lavie: Haaagh
ハアァ
[thrust]
「ズヴッ」
Lavie: Aaagh
アァッ

Lavie: Aaagh
アァン
Lavie: Angh
あん

[thwop thwop]
「ヌチュ ヌチュ」

[thwop fwop thwop thrust]
「ズチュ グチュ ヌチュ ズプッ」

Page 30
Claus: Lavieee
ラヴィィ
[thwop fwop thwop fwop]
「ズチュ グチュ ズチュ グチュ」
Lavie: Haaaaagh Angh Angh Aaangh
ハアァァ アンアンアァン

Lavie: Ha
ハッ
Lavie: Agh

Lavie: Ngh


Claus: Ravie's pussy... is the best...
ラヴィのオマンコ…最高だよ…
[thwop fwop]
「ズチュ グチュ」

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Lavie: Ha
はっ
Lavie: Annngh
アンン
[fwop fwop]
「グチュ グチュ」
Lavie: Haa
ハアッ

[thwop thwop]
「ズチュ ズチュ」

[thwop fwop fwop]
「ズチュ グチュ グチュ」
Lavie: C... Claus
ク…クラウス
Claus: That's good... Ravie... move your butt more!
いいよ…ラヴィ…もっとケツをふるんだ!

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Lavie: Oh my god
もう

Claus: What? Lavie
なに?ラヴィ

Lavie: Claus is so horny...
クラウスのスケベ...
Claus: I don't think so, Lavie...
そうかなあ、ラヴィ…

Claus: But this kind of thing is a privilege for me only
けどこんなことは僕だけの特権だしね
Lavie: Of course, it's only for Claus
当り前でしょ、クラウスじゃあるまいし

[insert]
「ぐちゅ」

Lavie: Haangh...
はん…

Claus: Lavie!
ラヴィっ!
Claus: Take this!
それっ!
[bang]
「パン」
Lavie: Haangh
ハアァン

Page 33
Claus: I... I like Ravie's pussy... It's the best...
ラ、ラヴィのオマ〇コすごいよ…最高だよ…
Lavie: Haa... Aaangh...
はあっ、アァン…

[bang bang bang]
「パン パン パン」
Lavie: Agh

Lavie: Angh
あん
Lavie: Agh
あっ

Claus: I... I'm cuming insiiiide
い、いくよ膣にぃぃ
[fwop thwop thrust]
「ぶちゅ ぐちゅ すぷン」
Lavie: Agh... Aaaaagh... Claus...
ア、アァァ、クラウス...

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Lavie: Haa

Lavie: Aaagh
あぁ

[squish]
「ぐに」

[thwop fwop fwop]
「ズチュ ぐちゅ ぐちゅ」

Claus: Ravie's pussy... gets better and better after every time
ラヴィのオマ〇コ…やればやるほどよくなるみたいだよ
[thrust thwop fwop]
「ズプッ ズチュ グチュ」
Lavie: Angh
あん
Lavie: Even... Annngh
そ…あんん

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Lavie: A~ah... I eventually fell for Claus again
あ~あ、また成行きでクラウスとしちゃったよ
Claus: What? What's wrong?
なに?どうかしたの
Lavie: I'm still too naive...
我ながら甘いなァ…

Claus: Lavie... It felt really good...
ラヴィ…すんごく気持ちよかった…
Lavie: I... I see...
あ…あっ

[lick lick]
「ちろ ちろ」

Lavie: Wait a minute! Oh my... Claus...
ちょっと、もう…クラウス…
[fwop]
「くちゅ」
Claus: But it's been such a long time
だって久しぶりなんだしさ

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Lavie: Hnghaa
んは

[thrust]
「ズッ」

Lavie: Haa Haaagh
は はあ

Lavie: Hnnngh
えいっ
[thruuust]
「ズププン」
Lavie: Ahaaagh
アハァン

[thwop thrust fwop]
「ズチュ ズッ グチュ」

Lavie: Angh
あん
[thrust thrust fwop fwop]
「ずっ じっ ぐ ぐ」
Lavie: Nngh
んん
Claus: Haa Haa
はぁ、はぁ

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[thruuust thrust]
「ズププ ズウッ」
Lavie: Hngh Angh Haaagh
んん アッ ハァ

Lavie: Haa Haaagh
はぁ はあぁ

Claus: Lavie... Lavie!
ラヴィ…ラヴィ!
[thwop thwop thrust fwop]
「ズチュ ズチュ ズッ グチュ」
Lavie: Haaaaaaagh Anhaaangh! Yaangh
ハアァアアン アンハアンン!ヤアン

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Claus: Lavie
ラヴィ
[fwop fwop fwop thruuust]
「ぐちゅ ぐちゅ ぐちゅ ズズッ」
Lavie: Haaaaannngh
ハアァアンン

Lavie: Nngh
んん
[chu]
「ちゅ」

Lavie: Anngh Haa
あんん は
[thrust fwop fwop fwop]
「ぐっ くちゅ くちゅ くちゅ」
Claus: Hngh...
うん…

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[lick thwop fwop thrust]
「ちゅぷ ブぷっ くちゅ じゅ」

Lavie: Haa
はあっ
[splurt splurt splurt]
「どっしん どっしん どっしん」
Lavie: Ahaaaaangh
アハアァァァ

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Lavie: Uuuh~ My back~
うう〜腰が〜

Dunya: Lavie... What wrong?
ラヴィ…どうしだ?
Lavie: Claus had endless energy... Thanks to him, my lower back feels so weak now...
クラウスが…結局、延々…おかげで腰が…力が入らないい…

Lavie: He is always like that... goes into heat all of a sudden
アイツはいつもそう、突然サカリつきやんの
Lavie: While normally, he doesn't react at all to my hints... it's so annoying
いつもは私がさそっても気にもとめなクセに…やんなるわよ
Dunya: It seemed like Claus really likes you...
クラウスが大好きなんだね…

Dunya: My Mullin gives me hints almost every day... but my little brothers will guard me
ウチのモランは毎日のように誘ってくるのよね…弟たちがガードしてくれるけど
Lavie: Well, well... he must be so frustrated~
それはそれで鬱陶しいれね〜

Dunya: But he is really fast
けどすごく早いんだけどね
Lavie: Whoa... that's terrible...
うわっ…最低…

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(Something like) Afterword
後書き (のようなモノ)
That's all for the second part of Izumiya's Last Exile doujinshi
そんなわけで和泉屋のラスエグ本後編でした
About the work Last Exile, I feel like it's wasted, or like "No matter how good the ingredients are, it will not be a good dish if the chef is terrible"
ラストエグザエルという作品に対しては勿体無いなあというか『どんなに素材を厳選しても調理人がヘボならろ
くな料理にならない』という感じでしょうか
Did they run editorial meetings properly? The story doesn't connect at all
ちゃんと打ち合わせとかしてんのか?と思えるくらい物語りが全然つながらないし
No matter how elaborate the settings are, it's meaningless if they are not used in the story
なんかねえ設定にいくら凝っても、物語りに生かせなきゃ意味ないというか
(The novel version is just following the original manga)
(小説版なんか本編のフォローしっぱなしじゃん)
Solely as a Ravie fan, I am extremely dissatisfied with the treatment of the character (namely, making her just clinging to the vanship in the second half of the story)
いや単にラヴィファンで見出したもんだからあのひどい扱い(というか後半なんてヴァンシップにへばりついて
�だけでキャラとして死んでるし)に対して不満満々なわけですが
And intentionally ignoring the natural characteristics of Claus and Sophia...
特にクラウスやソフィアの自然なまでの存在無視ぶりとか…
It's just like a warehouse of excellent females.
倉にすれば単に都合のイイ女扱いで、
Really, the drawing quality of the manga is exceptionally high, in contrast to the empty plot...
なまじ作画のクオリティが異常に高いためにこの物語りとしての空っぽぶりが…
It's like a "nonsense" drama performing on a magificent stage
なんか重厚な舞台壮美のうえでひたすら『無駄』という題目が演じられていたというか

I feel like "I should add a little more of something!"
もうちょっとなんとかならんのかい!という感じです

Eventually, I drew 3 episodes, which are very good in my opinion...
結局3話までだったなあ自分にとってよかったのって…
So, if possible, see you again next time
そんなわけで機会が有りましたらまたお会いしましょう
I would appreciate hearing your comments and thoughts~
御意見御感想などいただけるとうれしいですね~



Date of issue/ 2004.4.29
発行日/ 2004.4.29

Issued to/ Izumiya
発行先/和泉屋

Contact address/ ...
連絡先/ ...


Page 42
Extra: In Lavie's warehouse
倉ラヴィでポン

Anyone who reaches out to Alvis (who is like my sister) will be killed!
Anyone who reaches out to Dunya (who is my friend) will be killed!
Anyone who breaks the vanship(which is my property) again will be beaten half to death!
(妹同然の)
アルに手を出したら殺す!
(私の友達の)
ドーニャに手を一出したら殺す!
(私のモノの)
ヴァンシップをまた壊したら半殺し!

Claus: What's that?
何?これ?
Lavie: This is my family motto...
我が家の家訓よ…

Lavie: No matter what you do in the future ... If you violate them, I will really kill you!
アンタが今後何をしでかすにせよ…コレをやぶったら本当に殺すよ!

Lavie: Stop making that "I don't understand what you're saying" face!
アンタその何を言うているのか解らないつて顔やめなさいよ!

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Last Exile hentai doujinshi 2
ラストエグザイルのエロパロ本2
Izumiya
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/ - Separate bubbles of the same panel.
// - Separated text of conjoined bubbles
Empty space denotes a new panel.
SFX translations use no formatting besides the raw text and the TL.
(( )) - TL notes, NOT TL comments, OR to help clarify a bubble.


Page 1:

Haa❤
/
Nnn...❤
/
Ah❤

Puppy
/
Puppy...

Elizabeth, are you masturbating?
/
Hyaa!?


Page 2:

M-Mecha Eli!?

Wa- Don't just barge in here!
/
How shameful; masturbating to the((/my?)) pilot candidate.
いや~!! = Nooo~!!

Well, I'm quite understanding.
((為政者?? Why is this here?? It's like a government politician or an administrator, but a PC kind of admin is a 管理者 so this makes no sense at all. Maybe something mistyped.))
/
Living things... No.
//
Living dragons may indulge themselves in pleasure.

That is why
/
Your fingers are inefficient.


Page 3)

Wai..!?
/
The heck are you doing!? Let go of-

((ッ means nothing, there's no sound I can give you to imitate this.))


Page 4)

Kiss
/
Nng...

You're already this wet?
/
ちょ = Wai- (Wait)
/
Your usual method of masturbating is half-baked, how deplorable.

I shall teach you, Elizabeth.
/
How to truly masturbate.


Page 5)

Designating ten areas to administer additional doses of stimulants.
/
チク - Sting/Stab
ちゅうう - Inject
/
It hurts!?

So hot...
/
My body is...


Page 6)

Body temperature; pulse rising.
/
Clitoral erection, confirmed.

Mhm, next.
/
Shall I attack here too, Elizabeth-

No...
//
Wait...
/
Don't - ((ウソ = You're kidding // A bit long for the bubble))
/
Stop-

I'm gonna die~~!♥
ぢゅううう - Inject


Page 7:

Ah♥ ((あ))
Nnha♥ ((ンラ))
Hyau♥ ((ひゃう))
Aaah♥ (ああ♥))

My body's... so hot, no more... ((no more is slurred))
/
I'm turning stupiiid...

How pathetic, Elizabeth.
/
Everything until now has just been the foreplay, you know?


Page 8:

Noo...
/
Whad iz thad... ((Slurred version of "What is that...))

This is a dildo that has been designed to perfectly suit the insides of your vagina.
/
Right now, you- No. This'll easily reveal all of the unexplored erogenous zones you've never discovered.


Page 9:

...It's even bigger-
/
Than before? It's-

However, I have some conditions before I can use it, Elizabeth.

Two things. The pilot candidate, and anyone else for that matter,
/
Cannot be masturbated to.

Huuh!?
/
From now on, whenever you want to masturbate you'll come to me.
//
Surrender yourself to **ME**, Elizabeth.
((Emphasis of ME, 私 is large and bold.))


Page 10:

N-No way...!
/
...I'm not just gonna do whatever you tell me to!

Kyaa!

Think it over, Elizabeth.
/
I can do this for hours.

This isn't much for me.

や = N

あ = oo ((These two are connected))


Page 11:

...I wont...do it... to... puppy...
/
...So...please...
/
Keep...doing naughty...thing...

It only took 1hour and 28 minutes for you to give in...
/
No matter how similar we are... I'd hoped you'd hold on a little longer than that...

You've degraded yourself, and now you're one of my options. ((It makes no sense even with the added context on the next page. "Option" shows up a few times after this too, and it's still weird to read. Maybe find an alternative.))


Page 12:

What we'll be doing now is maintenance for my options.
/
Such as, [Lewd stuff], there's nothing obscene about it at all.
はー = Haa ((x2))

Haaaa-
/
Ha...
/
Hurryyy-


Page 13:

Nnnuuh♥
/
Ah♥

Beginning intercourse((pistoning))-
/
Compatibility of vaginal walls confirmed.
/
Switching to rotational movements.


Page 14:

Elizabeth...
/
Elizabeth...
/
Elizabeth...!
あひ = Ahii♥
あん = Ahn♥

あ = Ah♥
あァ = Aah♥

All of this top-tier data is surging in...
/
More... More...

Signs of climax confirmed, commencing discharge


Page 15:

Haa
Haaa♥
Haa♥
Haaa♥


Page 16:

Mecha-Eli ...are you
//
In love with me?
/
-! You worthless dragon, I'll incinerate you,
//
You're merely one of my options-!

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(C85) [Kuma x Usagi (Sakura Rio)] Utsutsu Shitemasu. (GATCHAMAN Crowds)

TL: aerd & Bidon

pg. 1

痛ッ
Ow!

私にまかせて…
Leave it to me...

うつつちゃんっ!?
Utsutsu-chan!?

pg. 2

ごめん
痛かった?
Sorry
Did it hurt?

ううん
No

pg. 3

続けて
うつつちゃん
Let's continue
Utsutsu-chan

うん…
…じゃ、次はこっち
Yes...
...Then, next is this

pg. 4
私の中でるいが
ドキンドキンしてる…
His dick is throbbing deep inside me...

私たちは、今つながってるのかな?
Are we connected now, I wonder?

私、るいの役にたててるのかな?
Am I of use to Rui?

pg. 5

うつつちゃん
Utsutsu-chan

ありがとう
Thanks

うんっ:heart:
Yeah:heart:

流しても (x2)
Pouring out (x2)
中から白
でてくる
No matter how much I wash, that white stuff keeps coming out...
なにこれ?(x2)
What is this? (x2)

OD、教えてくれなかったー
OD has never told me about this---

(?)ごめん…
Sorry...

おしまい
The end

p.8

see [files.catbox.moe] https://files.catbox.moe/e9k4i1.tar for a rough idea what goes where

Title: More than 500 000 total players! Venus † Blade
Public company
Game app URL
APP version Android Version

I'd like to use this opportunity to talk a bit about my work, now that I got the permission to publicly show you illustrations I made for this game.
Having to draw full body illustrations for it each month, I've been enjoying the process of thinking about how I'll paint
the next one, what I can try next, these kinds of things. I'm thankful for this opportunity.
If you have any interest in the game, please try it!

Of course, these drawings are not the only ones I've drawn. I hope you'll enjoy finding the other ones I made in the game.

Seeing them aligned here feels nice. ♪
Hope I'll be able to make this kind of page next year too.

Now that I'm all cheered up, I can confess to you that I was supposed to make more illustrations on the following pages. Unfortunately, mistakes were made... ^^"
Typical of me!
I'm living in the moment, lol.
Well then, please enjoy Goma's illustrations!



p.14

14-1
うつうつしてます
Pouting
[TN: It's the title of the doujin.
Probably refers to the picture. Imagine cute big-eyed
puss in boots in Shrek 2, that's the feeling that goes here
[images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com] https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/ima...A15JKL._AC_.jpg]

14-2
Ingredients
2013.12.31発行
Issued in 2013.12.31


14-3
くまxうさぎ
[yaplog.jp] http://yaplog.jp/kumausagi3/
Kuma x Usagi
[yaplog.jp] http://yaplog.jp/kumausagi3/


14-4
.佐倉りお
.Sakura Rio
[TN: Sakura is the surname, ori is the name]


14-5
松ヰ屋
matsuiya
[TN: Doujin circle]

.ごま
gomachannel@yahoo.co.jp
.goma
gomachannel@yahoo.co.jp
[TN: Illustrator name]


14-6
印刷
printing

.graphic
.graphic

14-7
How To Make

14-8
こんにちは。 もしくははじめまして。 佐倉おりです。
Good day. Or even better, a pleasure to meet you. I'm Sakura Rio.
[TN: Sakura is the surname, rio is the name]

ご挨拶が最後になってしまってすみません。
Sorry for saying the greeting last.

クラウズは久しぶりにどばまりして、トークもいっぱいいっぱい書きたかったのですが、時間とページ数と
Blu-rayの発売がまだで、自分の中でもまだ整理できてないところもあるんで、漫画のみにしちゃいました。
Since it's been a long time since I was this addicted to Crowds,
I wanted to write a lot of dialogue but, being out of time,
and having no pages, and still waiting for the blu-ray release,
and for various reasons I've not made my mind up on yet,
I ended up doing only this manga.

立川にも行ったりしたんで、2期が始まるころには、もう一回、クラウズで描きたいですっ
I even did a trip to Tachikawa, and by the time the second term
was starting, once again, I started wanting to draw about Crowds.

私にしては珍しく、ネタのストックとかあるんです...あるんです。
Strangely, I do have some ideas in stock... I really do.

まじかる公務員じょーさんとかw
Like a magical public servant Joe ^^

...冗談ですが。
...I'm joking.

14-9
あと、こっそり艦これはじめました。こーゆーゲーム久々です。元々はゲーム好きなんで、楽しい♪
Also, I've stealthily* started playing KanKore.
I hadn't played this type of game in a long time.
I always liked this game, so it's been fun ♪
[*TN: without telling anyone]

でも、はまるとお仕事に支障でそうで怖いんで、ちょこちょこと...。
But, I was getting too deep into it and I was starting to
fear it'd become a hindrance to my job, going forward...

むしろ建造メインでやってるので、お仕事時間は長くなってる感じです。戦艦だと4・5時間待つから^^;;
If anything, since I'm building my main, my work hours felt
longer and longer. I had to wait 4~5 hours for my battleships
after all ^^ ;;

もう完全に戦艦これくしょん!状態ですw
Now I've completed my battleship collection! And that's the situation. ^^
[TN: the last sentence is like "end of report", anything military may
potentially fit better here, since talking about battleship fleets... ]

建造できる戦艦はとりあえず揃ったので、お正月は、出撃しようと思います(*´▽`*)
And since I have all the battleships I can build for the moment, for
the new year I was thinking of sending them off to attack (*´▽`*)

それでは、またどこかで。
Well then, until we meet again.

ばぁーど ごぉー
Bird, go!
[TN: Some gatchaman reference]


14-10
2013.12 佐倉りおxxx
2013.12 Sakura Rio xxx

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The TL has been inactive for few months, proof notes are posted here:

1) on page 9 there is ロンガン being translated as longans. Doing a quick search, the Japanese wiki refers to them as ロンガン(龍眼) which in the English version seems to just be translated as dragonite which is likely better

2) arse -> ass (CTRL+F, multiple instances need replacing)

3) Don't slurp me! -> Don't lick me!

4) p.18/19 -> Thousands of worms are swimming inside my body + They're wiggling around in my head. I can't think straight.
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5) You seem to have lost your words. -> You seem to be at a loss for words

6) Anne Lappan -> Anne Rapan (this romaji of her name is more common)

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