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[Sanazura Doujinshi Hakkoujo (Sanazura Hiroyuki)] Mitarashi (NARUTO)
01-01 (title)
みたらし
Mitarashi
[TN: Mitarashi Anko the name of a character in the naruto universe,
and also the name of a river where people cleanse themselves before praying to the gods]
03-01
恋せじと
みたらし川にせしみそぎ
神はうけずも
成りにけるかな
After falling out of love
I went to the Mitarashi river to cleanse myself
But it seems the gods did not grant my wish
[TN: the wish was to never fall in love again, but the original japanese sucks at conveying it,
and my translation does so even more. Poetry is hard -.- metrics died too]
04-01
1- 大変ですアンコ様
死体です... 3体の!
Lady Anko, it's terrible!
Dead bodies... 3 dead bodies!
04-02
1-...それが妙なんです
There's something weird about them...
2-見ての通り顔がないんです
As you can see, they have no faces.
3-まるで溶かされた様にのっぺらぼうで...
It's like they melted into their skin...
[PR: subject (their faces) implied by the previous bubble]
04-03
1-間違いない
There's no mistaking it.
[ALT: "There's no doubt"]
2-この術はアイツの...!
This is *his* jutsu...
[PR: To the editor: typeset *his* with an appropriate font/fontstyle that emphasizes the word.]
04-04
1-あなた達はすぐにこの事を火影様に連絡
You, contact the Hokage immediately!
2-死の森へ暗部の出動 請を2部隊以上取り付けて!
And send the Anbu to Shinomori!
We'll need at least 2 units there!
[TN: The anbu are the elite unit, Shinomori is a place, probably a forest.]
05-01
SFX: ザザザザ
*dash*
05-02
1-しかし... いったい今ごろなぜアイツが...
Still... Why would *he* act now...
2-目的は何...!?
What is he after...!?
05-03
1- 大蛇丸 <オロチマル>
Orochimaru...!
SFX: ザザザ
*dash*
08-01 (title)
みたらし
mitarashi
09-01
1-ぷあ...
Gasp...
2-あふ...
Fua...
09-02
1-...ん...っ
Mhn...
2-...ふっ
Fu...
3-はふ...
Haa...
[TN: or *bahf* according to another page]
4-ククク... そうそう...
Hehehe... That's right...
SFX:はふっ はふっ
Haa... Haa...
09-03
1- もっとヨダレをまぶして...吸い付く様にね...
Smear it with droll... Try sucjing it...
2-ぷふっ...
Pfu...
[TN: or *snort*]
3-んぷっ
Mhnfu...
09-04
1-ん...っ
Mhn...
2-いいわよ
I like that...
3-アンコ...♥
Anko ♥
4-んおっ
Nyo...
5-ぷふう
Pfyuu...
[TN: or *snort* again... All these are sucking sounds]
6-ぷ
fu...
10-01
1-はふっ
*Nom*
[TN: Engulfing with mouth]
2-はふっ♥
*Nom* ♥
3-はふぅ♥
*Nom* ♥
10-2
1-ぷ...ん"っ
Fyuun-!
2-んぼっ
Mhnyo...
10-3
1-ククク
Hehehe.
2-よしよし
Good girl...
3-ズイブンと上手くなったわね...
You've gotten quite good at this...
4-んぶっ
Nyuu...
5-ぐぷっ
*slurp*
[TN: also could be *splish* apparently]
10-4
1-やっぱりお前見付みあるのかしら...?
Ah, could it be that you really have hope after all...?
[ALT: "Ah, could it be that you're expecting something from me?"
referring to her expectation of getting cum. ]
[TN: I'd go with the first one, but both are valid because of the lack of particles.
Haha, japanese.]
2-あぷ...
Afu...
3-ふあ
Fyaa...
4-はふ...
Hyaa...
5-アンコ...? ククッ
Anko...? Hehe...
11-01
1-...お...
...Lo-
2-大蛇丸さまぁ......
Lord Orochimaru...
SFX-はっ はっ
Haa... Haa...
11-02
1-クククク...
Hehehe...
2-はしたないわねぇ...
So vulgar...
11-03
SFX1-ぞく
*shudder*
SFX2-ぞくっ♥
*tremble* ♥
11-04
1-いいわよ... あげるわ
Very good... I'll let you take it.
[ALT: "Very good... I'll let you have it."]
2-さ がんばりなさいな
So, give it your best.
3-...は...♥
...Ha...♥
11-05
1-んぷっ♥
Nfyu...♥
2-ぶぷっ
Pufuh-
[TN: Sound effect, she's taking it all in one go... Could be *slurp* too]
11-06
1-はぶぶっ
*spurt*
[TN: another sound effect in the same line as the one before, it's quite violent...
Don't know if spurt fits the bill]
2-くぷっ
*glurp*
[TN: Sound effect, she's again taking it all in one go, but even more than before... Deepthroating maybe?
Sorry for sucking for all these onomatopoeias (IMG:[
invalid]
style_emoticons/default/sad.gif) ]
3-ぷ...♥
Fu...♥
4-んん"っ
Mnh...
SFX-ガポッ
*swoop* *swoop*
[TN: both the same, also *nom nom* would be a much better fit, but it sounds weird...]
12-01
1-...ん?...
Mnh...?
12-02
1-あぷ...っ
Haaaa...
SFX-チュルッ
*slurp*
12-03
1-...あっ...
Ah...
2-あはああっ♪
Ahahaha ♪
SFX-ビュッ ビュッ
*spurt* *spurt*
13-01
1-ハァ...
Ha...
2-ハァ...
Ha...
3-お... 大蛇丸様...もうだめ...
Lord... Orochimaru... I'm at my limit...
[ALT: "Lord... Orochimaru... I can't wait any longer..."]
13-02
1-お... お願いします...
Please... I beg you...
2-はぁ
Ha...
3-はぁ
Ha...
4-はぁ
Ha...
5-おちんちんいれてくださいいいっ
Put your dick inside meee....
13-03
1-クククッ...
Hehehe...
2-しょうがない子だわね...
What a hopeless girl you are...
13-04
1-いいわよ... ホラ
But it's fine. If you want it,
2-自分でハメなさい
do it yourself.
[TN: continued from 13-04-1]
SFX- ギシッ
*creaking*
[TN: from the bed he's sitting in]
14-01
1-ハァ...
Ha...
2-ハァ...
Ha...
3-ハァハァ
Ha... Ah...
4-ハァ...
Ha...
SFX1-ぞくっ
*Shudder*
SFX2-ぞくぞく
*tremble* *tremble*
14-02
1-あ... あ...
Ah... Ah...
2-あふ
Fua...
3-ふああああああっっ♥
Fyaaaaaaa...! ♥
SFX-ちゅく
*smack*
[TN: but a wet smack, like chewing gum]
14-03
SFX1-がくっがくっ
*shiver* *shiver*
[TN: right of the body]
SFX2- がくがく
*tremble* *tremble*
[TN: left of the body]
SFX3-ズブブ...
*smack* *smack*
[TN: also *thrust*, *penetrating*, *slam*]
15-01
SFX-ズッズッ
*shove* *shove*
15-02
1-あっ あっ ...んあっ
Ah- Mnyaa...
2-あはあ... んっ...
Ah... Ha...
3-い... っあふぁ... あはっ
Fyaa... Haa...
4-あ
Ah-
SFX1-ズッ
*thrust*
SFX2-ズッ
*thrust*
SFX3-ズプ
*penetrating*
[TN: i'm tempted to say *thrust* too -.- all of these are the same]
[PR: *push*, *slide*, sfx aren't as rigid as normal dialogue, they can be repetitive since they're more part of the art than the text.]
15-03
1-あは......
Haa...
2-あ
Ah...
3-あっ あっ...はああっ
Ah... Ah... Haaa...
SFX-がくっがくっ
*shiver* *shiver*
16-01
1-あっ あっ
Ah... Ah...
2-あ"ぁ
Gyaa-
SFX1-ぐちゅっ
*squish*
SFX2-ちゅぶっ
*sucking*
16-02
1-う...んう
Uhh... Uhhh...
2-うあ"あ...っ♥
Uhh... Nyaa... ♥
SFX- ぐちゅっ ぐちゅっ
*squish* *squash*
16-3
1-あ♥
Ha ♥
2-あ♥
Haa♥
3-いいあはあ♥ あ"あ"っ♥
Mnyaaa ♥ Haaa ♥
SFX1-ズッ
*slurp*
SFX2-ズッ
*slurp*
SFX3-ちゅぶっ
*sucking*
SFX4-ぐぷっ
*shove*
17-01
1-あ---- あ... アンコアンコアンコ......
Ah... Anko, Anko, Anko...
2-お前何度言っても分からないわねェ...
No matter how many times i tell you, you still don't understand...
17-02
1-あっ... あっ
Ha... Ha...
2-くわえ込んだとたん 自分だけ気持ちよがえちゃ
Taking it all and cumming quick... You're the only one enjoying it like that...
[TN: Not exactly the literal translation, which goes more into her doing it however she liked without caring for how the other person liked... But works]
3-あ
A-
4-ふああっ?
Fuaa...?
5-ダメでしょう?
And that's not good, you know?
SFX1-じゅぷっ
*joop!*
[TN: juicy fucking/shoving sound]
*schlup*
SFX2-ずぷっ
*zoop*
[TN: same as the previous one]
*schlap*
17-03
1-これは
This calls
2-おしおきね...
for a punishment.
SFX-ギュッ
*grab*
[TN: also, *squeeze*]
18-01
1-潜影蛇手!!!
Hidden Shadow Snake Hands!!!
[TN: That's the name in english... Pronounced Sen'ei Jashu, which sounds far cooler]
SFX-シュルルルルルッ
*slither*
18-02
1-ほらほら... もっともっと気持ちよくしてアゲル♥
I'll show you just how good I can make you feel ♥
2-気をしっかり持つのよアンコ♥
So please look forward to it, Anko ♥
3-お... 大蛇丸さ...
Lord... Lord Orochimaru...
SFX-ニッ
*grin*
18-03
1-ああ"あ"
Ahhhhh...!
18-04
SFX1-ゴリゴリゴリゴリ
*grind* *grind*
SFX2-ズズブブッ
*slurp* *muffled slurp*
19-01
SFX-ズッズッズッ
*slurp* *slurp* *slurp*
[TN: they won't be edited anyway, so imagine synonims here]
19-03
1-あ... あ... あ"...
Ah... Ah... Haaa...
2-あう"う"ああああ"あ"あ
Gyaaaaaaaa ♥
19-04
1-ん"あ"あ... あお"
Hyaaa... Ah...
2-おあああああ...
Gyaaaaaa...
3-あうう...ぐううああ...っっっ
Ahh... Gyaaa... ♥♥♥
SFX1-ごりゅっ
*grind*
SFX2-ぐぶっ
*spread open*
SFX3-ごりゅっ
*grind*
20-01
1-ああ♥ あおおあっ♥
Ah... ♥ Oaaa♥
2-す...すごっ♥
A... Ama- ♥
20-02
1-いあっっ
-zing... ♥
2-すごいいい♥
Amaziiing ♥
3-め......
They're...
4-めくれるっ♥ おくがめくれるうう♥♥
...tearing me up... ♥ My insides are... ♥♥♥
5-うあああおおおおっっ♥
GYAAAAAAAAA ♥♥♥
21-03
1-ん"あ"...
Nyaa...
2-ああ♥ ああああああ ♥♥
Haa... ♥ Haaaa... ♥♥
22-01
1-あらあらアンコ...
My, my, Anko...
2-悪い子だわね
You're quite a naughty child ♪
22-02
1-は...
Haa...
2-あ♥
Ah... ♥
3-...あは...♥
...Aha... ♥
4-おしおきなのにこんなにうれしそうにイッちゃって....
Even though this was a punishment, you look like you're in bliss...
[ALT: "This was supposed to be a punishment but you look like you're in bliss..."]
SFX1-びくっ...
*twitch*
SFX2-びくっ
*tremble*
SFX3-びくんっ
*shiver*
22-03
SFX-ドロリ...
*ooze*
[TN: continuous dripping]
23-01
1-ん---
Hmm...
2-年湍も行かない 自分の部下を... そのも面白かったけど...
You're still much too young, I'll leave my subordinates here... I wish I could stay and watch, but...
[TN: Could also be "Immature" instead of young, or childish... Inexperienced would be a stretch]
3-なんかそろそろアキたわね
I think I'd lose interest pretty quickly.
4-...? 大蛇丸さま...?
...? Lord Orochimaru...?
SFX1-ザザザザ
*dash* // *whoosh*
SFX2-パチっ
*snap*
23-03
1-お前達...そのコ 好きにしちゃっていいわよ...
The rest of you... Do whatever you want with this child...
23-04
1-お...
Lord...
2-大蛇丸... ...さま...?
Lord... Orochimaru...?
23-05
1-大蛇丸さまあああっ...
Lord Orochimaru...!!!
24-02
1-いったいなぜ今ごろアナタがここに......
Why in the world would *you* show yourself now...
[TN: typeset the YOU to emphasize]
24-04
1-まあいいわ
Well, I don't care...
2-この里に来たのなら今日ここで...
If you've come to this village, I'll settle this today...
3-大蛇丸...!!
Orochimaru...!!
25-01
1-穴うめアンコさん...
Anko filler page...
26-01
1-穴うめアンコさん その2...
Anko filler page
Number 2...
27-01
1-後紀
Afterword
2-時間がありませんかなりヤバいです
ホントにこの本出るのか...?
This is dangerous, I'm running out of time.
Will I actually be able to release this book...?
This post has been edited by asdier: Feb 6 2021, 18:16