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post May 20 2019, 20:25
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Hi this is the final script for my first bounty and the gallery is this.
I'm really thanks to sapphireblade the proofreader an red piotrus for all the help. i still have to improve a lot. I keep working with you all to do it.


page 1
FGO
foot book 7

page 2
FGO NO ASHIBON 7
comic market 94
CHURAL-AN Presents

Page 3

Martha

I think I'm finally getting used to his behavior
C'mon, I'm tired. Can't you at least rub my feet?
The arcade version of Martha-san looks cute so I want to play (( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)) with her too.

Page 4

Nobu

Uwahhahaha!! What do you think of my mighty footjob?
I can jack you off way better than a princess from some puny assassination band, right?!
What's more, I have what they call a loli pussy, yes I do!!
Eh? Wai- like, didn't you cum way too much?
(I feel like) A criminal for producing erotic illustrations of Nobu.
If i remember Nobu and Abi height and weight are almost the same .(trivia)

Page 5

Okita
It seemed like you were going to explode while trying to pull my alter, master?
Normally, I'd be angry with you for being infatuated with other servants but, since it's my alter, I'll overlook it.
Now then, shall I use my feet to do what we always do?
I could not pull her after all and I gave up
Regular Okita is No.1 afterall!

Page 6

Halloween head nurse

as expected , after doing it with the feet it seems that you to let out more thick semen. thank you, master, for collaborating with the medical check

This is how I imagined it (pervert...)

I feel like I was able to draw it in a sexy way so I put it on the front cover.and now I am waiting for the swimsuit version




Page 7

Ophelia

??? Hm. Not bad. So this is the scent of a woman......
Heh heh, uh-oh, any more and you'll want to use your Command Spell. I'd better end it here...

(Ugh...I've already used one, I can't afford to spend more than this...Kirschtaria-sama...)

Ophelia-chan definitely has an aura that attracts strange men. I like her too. (top of the list)

Page 8

Sister Fuji (jaguar man)

I did it again. And I'll again refrain from commenting this time.

Page 9

Mother Elena
Tee-hee Fufu-......that tickles! After licking my armpits, you started licking my feet! Do you like places that smell strange, I wonder?
I don't mind. Since a master who always works so hard should be rewarded!
Kissy-kiss~ Muah~ I lovee mother Helena.... mommy Super duper lovey love!

Page 10

Mother Boudica

We can finally take our time doing it but, like I thought, you want to continue just like this?
But I'm drenched in sweat and I wanna fix my clothes at least..
Do you really like my scent that much?
I guess you do, since it started getting that hard.
It's kinda embarrassing but, let's do it like this
Imagining doing 'that' in an inn they found before Rayshifiting
I officially declare that I want to be pampered by a big older sister like mommy Boudica.

page 11

Martha's dakimakura

Afterword
Thanks to all your support- the 7th book!
For this year's swimsuit (gacha), I will try my best to control myself.

FGO foot book 7

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day of publication 2018/8/12
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post May 21 2019, 03:39
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post May 22 2019, 07:42
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post May 26 2019, 11:44
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post May 27 2019, 17:40
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post May 27 2019, 18:29
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post Jun 1 2019, 14:32
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And finished:

(C92) [Marin (Suzusato Rinka, mage)] Yappa Suki Yanen! | I Can’t Help Liking Him! (Ranma 1/2)
Translation by alparslan (EH user The Red Threat)
TL note: Any questions about the script are very welcome. The paging follows that of the EH gallery.

Page 1

やっぱ好きやねん!
I Can’t Help Liking Him!

Page 2

1)
うっちゃんとこのお好み焼きはおいしいなぁ~
The okonomiyaki from your place really taste good, U-chan~

いい加減今までのツケ払って欲しいわほんま
I wish you’d pay your bill for all you’ve eaten so far

2)
SFX: にか~
*grin*

4)
まったく…
Sheesh…

ほれっついてるで!
Here, you got some on your face!

5)
あの時のうちらは子供やったけど…でも…うちは…あの時からずっとずっと、乱ちゃんのこと…
Back then we were just kids… But… I… Ever since those days, my feelings for Ran-chan…

Page 3

うっちゃーん!
U-chaaan!

ずっと前から好きだから
Because I’ve Loved You for so Long

鈴里厘花
Suzusato Rinka

Page 4

1)
よっ!
Hey!

SFX: きゅん
*ba-dump*

乱ちゃん
Ran-chan!

これからうっちゃんのとこ行こうと思ってたところなんだ!
I was just thinking of heading to your place, U-chan!

2)
学校帰りでちょっと小腹空いちゃってさぁ
I got a bit hungry on my way from school you know

いいかな?
Is that alright?

もちろんや!今、少しばかり足りない食材買うてきた所なんや一緒行こ!!
I’m going to buy some ingredients that we ran out of so let’s walk together!!
Page 5

1)
じゃ
Ok

貸して
Let me take that

ひょい。
Here

あっ
Ah

2)
…乱ちゃん
…Ran-chan

3)
重いだろ?
It must be heavy?

店まで持つよ
I’ll carry it to your place

4)
あっ…
Th…

ありがと…
Thanks…

Page 6

1)
SFX: くすっ
*Snicker*

2)
乱ちゃんはいつも優しいなほんま…
You’re always so kind, Ran-chan…

え?
Eh?

たた…
*step step*

3)
女の子には当たり前だろ?
It’s only natural to be kind to girls, no?

それに…
And besides…

4)
うっちゃんは大事な幼馴染だしなっ!
You’re my precious childhood friend!

5)
あっ…
Ah…

SFX: ツキン。
*struck*

Page 7

1)
あかん…
No…

3)
そんな風に言わんといて
Don’t say it like that

5)
おじゃましまーす
Hello

うち…
How am I…

どんな顔したらええねん
Supposed to react to that?

Page 8

1)
って!!
Huh!!

うっちゃん?
U-chan?

何うじうじしてんねんっ!!
What am I hesitating about!?

うちのドアホーッ!!
Stupid meee!!

うちらしくないっ!!
This isn’t like me!!

SFX: ぴしゃっ
*slap*

2)
さっ、お腹空いたやろ?
Now, you were hungry, right?

中に入って
Come on inside

3)
乱馬!
Ranma!

こんな所で道草くって!!お姉ちゃんに買い物頼まれていたでしょっ!!
Why are you loitering about in a place like this!? You know big sis asked you to go shopping!!

4)
げっ… あかね…
Geh… (in handwriting) Akane…

ちっ 邪魔が入りよった…
Tch (in handwriting) Why did she have to show up…

Page 9

1)
こんな所で悪かったな…
Well sorry it’s a place like this…

SFX: ぴく…
*twitch…*

2)
ゴメンうっちゃん
Sorry, U-chan

じゃっ また今度寄らしてもらうわっ
See you (in handwriting) I’ll come again another time

え~!! そんなあ…
Eeeh!! You’re not serious…

SFX: ガーンッ
*shock*

3)
あっ! じゃあ、あかねお好み焼きのおみやげ
Ah! (in handwriting) I know! Get some okonomiyaki for take out, Akane

よろしくな!
Please!

4)
なっ!?
Wha!?

5)
せっかくの乱ちゃんとの二人きりの時間があ…
Our rare time alone with Ran-chan…

なによ…一緒に行くんじゃないの?
What the… so we’re not going shopping together?

SFX: むら…
*irritated*

Page 10

1)
タダなのは乱ちゃんのだけやで!!
Only Ran-chan’s is going to be free!!

…分かってるわよ
…yeah, I got it

ケチ…
You harpy…

2)
SFX: じゅううう…
*fshhh*

3)
ええな…
Akane…

あかねちゃんは…
You really have it nice…

え?
Eh?

4)
大好きな人といつも一緒に居られてなっ!
You get to always be together with the one you love!

Page 11

1)
はあー…
Haa…

はあー…
Haa…

SFX: ふらふら…
*stagger*

2)
ここはいったい…
Where on earth…

どこなん…
Am I…

3)
うっちゃん
Ucchan

4)
あ…
Ah…

ほっ…
Oh…

Page 12

1)
ど…
Wha…

どうしたのよ急に…
What’s up with you all of a sudden…?

2)
好きなんやろ?
But you are in love with him?

乱ちゃんのこと
With Ran-chan

3)
なっ!?
Wha!?

SFX: ドキッ…
*ba-dump*

4)
隠さんでもええねんでっ
You don’t need to hide it

同じ男を好きな者同士やさかい
We both love the same man after all

見てたらすぐ分かるで
I could tell just by looking at you

Page 13

1)
だっ…
Wh…

誰かあんな変態なんかの事…好きですって!?
Who would love… a pervert like that!?

2)
好きで一緒にいるわけじゃないし…
It’s not like we’re together because I like him…

早く出て行って欲しいくらいよっ!!
More like, I wish he’d leave me alone!!

あんな…やつ…
That… guy…

3)
あんなやつ…
I… hate…

大…嫌いよ…
That guy…

SFX: すっ
*breathe*

Page 14

1)
SFX: ガラッ
*slide*

右京!ちょっとばかし
Ukyo! Could I bother you…

水を…
…for some water…?

2)
うそつきっ!!
Liar!!

SFX: ばんっ!!
*smash!!*

あんたのそういうトコホンマ大嫌いや!!
I really hate that side of you!!

3)
SFX: ばっ
*swing*

イライラすんねんっ!!
It makes me so irritated!!

Page 15

1)
SFX: ぱしっ!
*grab!*

2)
SFX: ぐぐ…
*tense*

3)
SFX: ぐっ
*grip*

良牙…
Ryoga…

4)
あかねさん、今日はもう帰りなさい
Akane, you should go home for now

Page 16

1)
本日は閉店しました。
We are closed for the day.

2)
どうしたんだ右京おまえらしく…
What’s wrong Ukyo? This isn’t like…

分かってる!!
I know!!

3)
ほんま…うちらしくない…
Really… This isn’t like me at all…

5)
ありがとうな
Thank you

止めてくれて…
For stopping me…

Page 17

1)
あの子見てたらな
You know, looking at her…

すんごく、羨ましくなってん…
Made me so jealous…

2)
だって、うちが欲しいものぜ~~~んぶ
Because, she has everything

持ってんねんもん!
That I want!

3)
SFX: ポロリ…
*tear up*

4)
うちの何があかんねんっ!!
Just what is wrong with me!!

SFX: びくうっ
*jump*

うわああん
Uwaaan!

Page 18

1)
あんたもあんたやっ!!あんな女のどこがええんやっ!!
And you too!! What do you like about her anyway!?

SFX: ぐずっ…
*sniff*

2)
素直じゃなくて可愛げがなくてっ!!
She’s never honest and hardly loveable!!

何がええんやっ!!
So what’s so good about her!?

3)
もうっ…
I…
SFX: ぽろっぽろっ
*cry*

嫌やぁ…
…hate this…

4)
あかねさんは
Akane is…

優しい人なんだ
A kind person

ただ…不器用なだけでさっ
It’s just that… she’s not good at expressing herself

Page 19

1)
SFX: きっ
*glare*

2)
なんでそんなに落ち着いていられんねんっ!!
How can you be so calm right now!?

SFX: ぐいっ
*grab*

3)
うちらは…
The two of us…

同類やないか…
We’re the same…

Page 20

1)
SFX: ちゅう…。
*kiss*

2)
はあ
Haa

3)
なっ…!!
Wha…!!

なっ…!!?
Wha…!!?

SFX: ぱく
*shake*

どき…
*ba-dump*

きゅ
*grab*

4)
SFX: ぎしっ
*creak*

何も怖がることあらへん…
There’s no need to be scared…

Page 21

1)
SFX: ぴくっ
*twitch*

そ...。
*touch*

3)
うちをあかねちゃんと思ってええねんで
You can think of me as Akane

SFX: ずるっ
*slip*

4)
ちょ…待って…っ
Hey… Wait…gh

う…きょぉ…
U…kyo…

SFX: きゅ
*grip*

5)
いつもしてるんやろ?あかねちゃん想って…
You always do it, right? While thinking of Akane…

SFX: どき
*ba-dump*

しゅっ
*slide*

Page 22

1)
や…やめっ う…きょぉ…っ!!
S…stop, U…kyo…gh!!

SFX: ふにふに
*rub rub*

2)
SFX: ごしゃ
*stroke*

3)
すんごいなぁっ こんなんなってもうて…
Wow, you’re already like this…

…なぁ?
…see?

どんな気分なん?好きでもない女にこんなんされてる気分は…
How does it feel? How do you like it when it’s done by a girl you don’t even love …?

くっ
Kuh!

はあ
Haa

4)
よいしょ…
Here we go…

どんなに一途でいても身体は素直やなぁ…
You may be a goody two-shoes but your body sure is honest…

SFX: むき
*boing*

5)
ど…
How…

…どない?
…how is it?

Page 23

1)
あかねちゃん…なんかよりい…
I look… way more attractive…

うち…魅力あるやろ?
Than Akane… Don’t I?

ほ…ほら、我慢せんでええねんで?
H…here, you don’t need to hold back

き…きもちぃ…やろ?
I…it must feel good…right?

SFX: どき
*ba-dump*

すとん… (big font split on both sides of her)
*thud*

2)
SFX: むにゅう
*squeeze*

あっ
Ah!


Mh!

SFX: トロォ (big, white, runny font)
*drip*

びくん びくん
*twitch twitch*

Page 24

1)
ああああああ
Aaaaaaah!

SFX: びくん
*twitch*

コリ
*rub*

コリ
*rub*

2)
あ…あかんっ!!なんなん…!?…これっ!!
N…no! What…!? …is this!?

SFX: ずリゅリゅ
*slide*

3)
ごっつうアソコがジンジンするぅっ
I’m feeling this strong tingling sensation down there

あっ
Ahh!


Ah!

4)
SFX: すっ
*reach*

5)
SFX: むにゅん
*boing*

ひゃあっ
Hyaah!

Page 25

1)
なっ!?
Wha!?

何急に揉んでんねんっ!!
Why did you grab them all of a sudden!?

SFX: むに
*fondle*

2)
好きなようにして良いんだよな?
I can do it how I want to, yeah?

SFX: 二ヤァ
*smirk*

3)
えっ?
Eh?

SFX: どき…
*ba-dump*

4)
SFX: ぴと
*press*

5)
胸でしてくれよっ
I want you to use your breasts

Page 26

1)
あかねさん ♪
Akane ♪

SFX: にこぉ
*smile*

2)
え?
Eh?

SFX: ドキッ (split in two)
*ba-dump*

3)
ああ…きもちい
Aah… This feels so good!

あかねさんのおっぱい最高!!
Your boobs are the best, Akane!!

え?…あっ ちが…あ
Eh? …ah, that’s not…ah!

…ちょ…良牙?
…hey …Ryoga?

ああ すんげえやあらけええ
Aah, they feel so soft

あかねさああん
Akaneee!

SFX: ぐちゅ
*schlip*

ぐぽぽ…
*slide…*

ぶっちゅ
*slip*

ぶにゅ
*smack*

ずリゅ
*slide*

Page 27

1)
違う…
No…

SFX: ちろ…
*lick*

2)
SFX: くぽ…
*mmh*

3)
うちは…
I’m…

SFX: じわ
*tear*

4)
…右京?
…Ukyo?

5)
SFX: がばっ
*thud*

6)
SFX: ぽろ
*cry*

…嫌や…
…no…

うちはっ
I’m…

うちやっ!
I’m myself!

SFX: ずるっ
*slide*

Page 28

1)
さ…さっきは、あかねちゃんやと想ってええって言うたけど…
E…earlier, I said you could think of me as Akane
SFX: ばんっ
*bam!*

ぐい
*grab*

2)
い…今は…右京として…見て…?
B…but now, can you see me… as myself…?

SFX: どき
*ba-dump*

3)
な?
Ok?

SFX: すっ
*swish*

4)
そして
And now

5)
二人で嫌なこと全部忘れよう…
Let’s forget all the unpleasant things together…

SFX: ぎゅっ…
*embrace*

Page 29

1)
SFX: ぴと
*slid*

…良いんだな?右京…い…挿入しても…
…are you sure it’s okay? Ukyo… to… to put is inside…

いっ…今更、何聞いてんねんっ!!
Wha…what are you asking after coming this far!!

2)
右京のココ…すごく…ぬるぬるして…
Ukyo, you’re… really wet… down here…

SFX: にゅるん
*slip*

にゅるる
*slide*

3)
あっ
Ah!

SFX: ズププゥゥ
*sliiide*

ぷち
*squish*

ぷちっ
*squish*

4)
は…はいっちゃっ…
It…it’s inside…

あほぉ…
Stupid…

ゆ…ゆっくり…やらんかぁっ…!
D…do it…slower…!

SFX: ぷる
*shake*

きゅ!
*clench!*

Page 30

1)
すっ…
So…

すまんっ!!き…気持ちよくて…
Sorry!! It just felt so good…

その…
Umm…

痛いか?大丈夫か?や…やめるか?
Does it hurt? Are you alright? S-should we stop?

…少し…
…a little…

はっ
Ah!

くっ…
Kuh…

2)
でも…
But…

大丈夫…
I’m okay…

このぐらいの痛みがあったほうがええんや…
It’s better that there’s a little pain like this…

SFX: がばっ
*fwap*

ふふ…
Fufu…

はあ
Haa

優しいんやな…良牙
You are kind… Ryoga

Page 31

1)
そうでもしないと嫌なこと忘れらへん…
Without that, I can’t forget all the unpleasant things…

んっ
Mh

あっ…
Ah…

あっ
Aah!

ん…
Mh…

SFX: ぐいぐい
*move*

ぐぷ
*slide*

ぐぽ
*slid*

ぱちゅん
*smack*

ぐちゅ
*schlip*

乱ちゃんのアホ…
Stupid Ran-chan…

あっあっん…あ
Ah Ahn …ah!

うちのアホ…!!
Stupid me…!!

SFX: ぐぽぽ
*slide*

ずぶう…
*squish*

Page 32

1)
こんなことしても何も変わらへんのに…
Even though this will change absolutely nothing…

う…きょ…
U…kyo…

きもち…いい…
It feels… so good…

SFX: じゅぷ
*schlip*

2)
あっ
Ahh

んっ
Mhh

SFX: ぐぽ
*slip*

3)
んっ…
Mhh…

すげぇ…しまるっ…
Wow… You’re so tight…

あん
Ahn!


Mh

SFX: にゅぴゅ
*slip*

4)
こんなんなってもうてごめんな…乱ちゃん…
Ran-chan… I’m sorry that it turned out like this…

すまんっ!!
Sorry!!

右京っ!もうそろそろイクぞっ!!
Ukyo! I’m about to cum!!

あっ
Ahh!

ああっ
Aah!

あああ
Aaah!

SFX: パンッ
*smack*

Page 33

1)
SFX: ヌポ
*slip*

とろお…
*drip*

ドピュッッ
*spurt*

びくんっ
*shiver*

2)
ほんま…
Really…

最後まで優しいやっちゃな…
You were kind till the end…

はあ
Haa

Page 34

1)
SFX: きゅっ
*squeak*

ほれっ!
Come on!

もっとちゃんと磨きぃ~!!
Clean it up properly!!

SFX: じゅううう…
*fshhh*

Page 35

1)
良かった…いつものお前だな!
Good… You’re back to normal!

やっぱり笑顔が一番似合ってるぜっ!
You look best with a smile on your face!

2)
SFX: どき
*ba-dump*

3)
おしながき
Menu

おおきに 右京
Thanks -Ukyo

あほっ!!
Stupid!!

おてもと
Chopsticks

おわり
The end

Page 36

1)
Mageさん鈴里さん
Mage and Suzusato

ゲストに呼んで頂き有難うございます!
Thank you for inviting me as a guest!

あついよ あついよ
It’s Hot, so Hot

画:MAMO
By: MAMO

2)
はあ…今日も暑いなあ
Haa… It sure is hot again today

ろくに将棋もできん…
We can’t even focus on shougi…

SFX: チリーン
*cling*

ミーンミン
*cicada cry*

ジージー
*cicada cry*

ヒュー…
*phew*

3)
あら涼し気
Oh, that looks refreshing

またこれ…
This again…

SFX: ザバーン
*splash*

4)
SFX: ザブッ
*splash*

ぷはっ!
Haa!

5)
くっそあんのジジイ…
Damn, that old geezer…

どこいきやがったっ
Where the hell did he go?

またお師匠...
Master is at it again…

ほお…前にモミモミした時より大きくなっとるのお
Oh… they’ve grown even bigger since the last time I fondled them

6)
成長期かの?ら・ん・まちゃん
Must be a growing period? Ra-n-ma-chan

SFX: もみ
*fondle*

もみゅ
*fondle*

ゾゾゾ
*shock*

7)
離れろジジイ、気色ワリィっ!
Let go of me you geezer, you make me sick!

身体はそう言うとらんがのお
Your body seems to say something different though

ちょっやめ…んっ…
Hey, stop…mh…

ほれほれ~
There, there~

こんのおお…
Why you…

SFX: もみ
*fondle*

スケベジジー
Perverted geezer!

あーれー
Uh-oh

8)
昼寝の邪魔しやがってっ
Interrupting my nap like that

10)
今年は例年より暑くなるらしいよ早乙女くん…
It looks like this year is going to be even warmer than average…

難儀だなあ…
Hard times ahead…

SFX: チリーン
*cling*

Page 37

1)
良牙―
Ryoga-

お前、ほんまにあかねのこと好きなんか?
Do you even really like Akane?

うるせえ、ほっとけ。
Shut up, just leave me alone.

2)
うちは乱ちゃんの許嫁や。
I’m Ran-chan’s fiance.

うちと乱ちゃんが結ばれるには、あんたにはもっとしっかりしてもらわなあかんねん。
For me and Ran-chan to be married, you have to do better than that.

お前に言われずとも、次こそはあかねさんに思いのたけを伝えてやるっ
You don’t have to tell me that. Next time I will certainly let Akane know my feelings

ほ~?
Oh~?

4)
そんなん言うてるけど、かわいい女子に言い寄られたら、コロシといってしまうんちゃうか?
You say that but won’t you just get swayed by the words of some cute random girl?

らん
Ran

許嫁でーす
I’m his fiancé

そ、そんなわけあるか!おれはあかねさん一筋、他の女に興味などない!
N-no way! I only have eyes for Akane, other girls are of no interest to me!

5)
そない言うたらおまえ、うちと初めて会うた時―
You can say that but remember when we first met

うちの胸見て鼻血出してたなあ~
You got a nose bleed from looking at my breasts~

いやあれはっ…その、違…
No, that was… Uhh, it wasn’t…

くやしいけどあかん mage
I Don’t Want to Admit It but It’s wrong -mage

Page 38

1)
うああっ!俺って…
Uaah! What do I…

SFX: びくっ
*jump*


*get up*

3)
なあ、良牙…
Hey, Ryoga…

4)
さっきの言葉に二言はあらへんな?
You really meant what you said just now?

あかね以外の女に興味ないって
That you have no interest in girls other than Akane?

も もちろんだ!
O-of course I meant it!

準備
Getting ready

5)
SFX: きゅ
*step*

6)
SFX: どきっ
*ba-dump*

7)
お前の気持ちがほんまもんかどうか試したる。
Then I will test whether your feelings are the real deal.

Page 39

1)
な、なんだと…?
W-what did you say…?

近い…
She’s so close…

SFX: ズキッ
*throb*

2)
うちがええと言うまで、お前からウチに指一本触れへんかったら合格や。
You pass the test if you won’t lay a single finger on me until I give the go ahead.

あんたのことこれからも応援したる。
I will root for you from now on too.

SFX: ぴっ
*point*

3)
くっ… り、
Kuh… Ri-

4)
SFX: ぐっ
*bulge*

ぎゅううう
*squeeze*

5)
はうっ
Hauh

右京……
Ukyo…

6)
SFX: ぞくっ…
*tremble*

Page 40

1)
う 右京っ…!
U-Ukyo…!

SFX: ぎゅむっ!
*squeeze!*

2)
ひゃっ!
Hyah!

3)
う、嘘っ…ほんまに手出してきよった!
N-no way… He really jumped at me!

ちょっ…良牙あかん!
Hey… Ryoga, we can’t!

4)
あっ!
Ahh!

SFX: ばっ!
*push!*

Page 41

1)
手出したらあかん言うたやろ!
I said that you couldn’t touch me!

もうあかねちゃんとのデートセッティングしたげへん!
I’m not going to pretend that this is another date between you and Akane!

2)
あ、あぶな~…
T-that was close…

ちょっとからかう… (partially cut out in the scans)
I only meant to tease him a little…

SFX: どきっ
*ba-dump*

3)
そ、そろそろうち店番に戻らなあかんわ
I-I have to look after the shop now

あんたももう帰り…
You should leave too…

5)
う、右京おまえ責任とれよっ!(partially cut out in the scans)
U-Ukyo, you have to take responsibility!

SFX: ばっ!
*grab*

Page 42

1)
そんな…なんの責任…
No way… what responsibility…?

あっ
Ahh

うあ
Uah

おまえにあんな風に迫られたらガマンできるわけないだろっ…
There’s no way I could hold back when you made a move on me like that…

あ…
Ah…

ご、ごめ…
S-sorry…

SFX: がばっ
*pull*

ぎゅっ
*squeeze*

ぎゅうっ
*squeeze*

2)
そっか、良牙もオトコやもんな…
I get it, Ryoga is a man too after all…

SFX: きゅ
*grab*

きゅっ
*squeeze*

ひああっ
Hyaah

Page 43

1)
右京っ…
Ukyo…!

右京…っ
Ukyo…h!

2)
良牙…
Ryoga…

奥にっ <3
Deep inside <3

良牙のが流れ込んできてるっ…<3
His seed is flowing inside me… <3

3)
良…牙 <3
Ryo…ga <3

SFX: びゅくっ
*spurt*

びゅ…
*spurt*

4)
うあっ <3
Uah <3

SFX: ぱん
*smack*

びゅ
*spurt*

5)
ん…う
Mh…u

SFX: ぷリゅっ
*drip*

Page 44

1)
す、すまん…つい
S-sorry… I couldn’t help myself

もうええよ
It’s okay

3)
それより!
More importantly!

このうちがここまでしたんや。
I went this far to help you.

おまえには絶対あかねと付き合うてもらうで。
Now you’ll have to hook up with Akane.

4)
そ、それは…あかねさんの気持ちも…
W-well, that… depends on Akane’s feelings as well…

どあほ!
You fool!

さっきみたいに男の本能で当たって砕けんかい!
Just use your manly instincts on her like you did just now!

5)
うちでよかったら何でも協力したる!
I’d be glad to help you in any way I can!

ほ、ほんとか右京!
R-really, Ukyo!?

あ…しまった何でもはあかん…
Ah… Damn, I shouldn’t have said in any way…

Page 45

おくづけ
Colophon

鈴里厘花↓ ↓
Suzusato Rinka↓ ↓

●印刷所● マツモト・コミック・サービス様
●Printing● Matsumoto・Comics・Service

ひょいっ
Hup!

(TL note: left out the usual copyright notice)

えっ!?この本オレメインじゃないの!?
Eh!? This book wasn’t about me!?

■発行■ まリん
■Publisher■ Marin

■発行日■
■Date of publication■



Edit: Made the changes suggested in proofreading.

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here is the first script for the bounty
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if someone has time and give any commentary is welcome thanks


[docs.google.com] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IIlXFHQ...TvBMXKvF3o/edit

the maids of re:zero

page 1
スバル君のためならレム何だってします!!
>For Subaru's sake, rem would do anything!!
さあ恥ずかしがらずに。。。
>come on tell me, don’t be shy♥
今日レムの愛情たっぷりなご奉仕を堪能するぜっ
>Today too, let's enjoy Rem's service filled with love!
。。。っていじまし健気さが愛らしい彼女が最初の相手だ
>She who is brave and adorable is my first partner in the day
クセになる匂いっ
>it’s a smell that become an habit for me♥♥
page 2
顔射するとメチャ喜ぶんだよ可愛いな!
> When I cum on her face she becomes very happy. so sweet!
ああっ
>ah♥
スバルくんのいき顔可愛いっ
>Subaru's face when cumming is so tender♥
っんあ
>ahn!!
精液の匂いを嗅ぐと「おちんぽ欲しい」とばかりに激しい自慰をするレム!。。。もう堪らん!!
>When she feels the smell of semen ( she wants so much a dick♥ ) that rem starts to masturbate so intensely …..I cannot stand
スバルくん スバルくん
> subaru subarrrru♥♥
page 3
興奮と恥ずかしさが交差して。。。。
> the excitement and shame get mixed (interchange)
顔から火を噴きそうなレムを堪能しつつ
>I enjoy, Rem's face that seems to emit (fling.spout) fire ….
ああっ!!
>ah!!
>!?
フィニッシュばバッグからのガン突きでえええっつ。。。。
>Finally, it is from behind that i start to penetrate her energetically…!!
page 4
うをおーーーーっ いくぞレム!!
> uh oh!, I cumming rem!!
とっても良かったです。。。!!
> it was great...♥
鬼がかった
>the ogre kept it ...
ガチ中出しっ!!!
> a tremendous cum inside!!! (creampie)
page 5
特別。。。だからね?
>this time... Is special, ok?
んっ。。。
> uhn♥。。。
んふっ。。。
> ughn♥
うをっ。。。
> Wooah...!?
でたあ!!
> ♥♥ you cummed a lot!!
スバルってば元気すぎ 続き.。。出来る?
>Subaru you have a lot of energy (vigour.stamina) ♥can you ... continue?
オレの方から土下座で頼むよ。。。!!
> I ask you, even on my knees …!!!

Page 6
。。。パネエッ
> ...it’s great ...パネェっす
くっっ!!
> *...!*; (*damn (it)*(IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
頑張ってスバル
> strive subaru ♥♥
んっっ
>uhn♥
あはアツ
> aha ♥♥
エミリアたんの極上エロマンコマジ最高オオ~~~~
>the pussy of Emilia is seriously the best, it’s really incredible!!!
ああん
>ah ♥♥
もう。。。スバルのばかぁ。。。
>Subaru you are a silly。。。
スゴイ凄いスバルっ!!
>Increíble, increíble...♥ subaru!!
あんっっ
>*ahn*♥
page 7
あっ
>ah ♥
あっっ
>ah♥
エミリアア~~~
> Emilia
射精るっっ。。。
> i’m cumming ..!!
あ。。
>ah ♥
いやぁ
> no ♥
はぁっ
>*aah* ♥
エミリアたん超エロ!!!
>Emilia is the sexiest!!!( the most erotic)
すご~~~く射精したね。。。スバル
>you cummed a … lot ….Subaru♥
はぁっ
>*aah* ♥
page 8
うわっっ。。。
>Yikes …..
何で凄い魔女の臭いなのよ
>What a horrible smell of a witch (referred to a curse)
解呪してやるから
>I'm going to free you from that curse
おとなしくしてるのよ
>Stay calm (quietly) meanwhile.
一度ばやってみたかったベア子にデコ射っっ!!
>I always wanted to do it at least once to cum on the forehead of the little bea!!(beatriz)
ひあ!?
>Hey what!? (Surprise) ひあ!? This sfx I didn’t find it but for the graphics I think can be this
ちょっ。。。何するのかしらっっ
>Wait…. What are you doing?!
page 9
ベディも限界かしらああああ
>Betty You must be in your limits ♥♥ 
くううっロリ穴最強~~~~っ
>this little pussy is incredible (the best)!!!
>どくんpounding♥/THUMPING
> pounding♥
はあ望むならもう一回シテも。。。いいかしら。。。
>Ah♥ If you wish, we could do it one more time… ♥♥

Page 10
オレの妄想の前に腸大好きエルザもエロエロお姉キャラに早変わりだぜ。。。
>Within my illusions (Inside my delusions). Elsa who likes to gut, becomes quickly in a very, very, sexy girl…!!
元気が有り余っているよね
>you have an excess of energy (stamina)
楽しませて頂戴ねっ
>Make me have fun, please ♥
page 11
ああ~~~素敵。。。

>Ah splendid
おうよ!オレのタンキタ!!メチャクチャ犯しまっくてやんよ!!
>Yes! Now is my turn!! I'll fuck you until you shatter (brake)!!
あなたの肉棒で私の腸を激しく抉ってえっっ
>Whit your dick, penetrate me strongly until you destroy me
我慢しないでいいのよっ!?中に出してえ
>You do not need to hold it? Cum all inside me
。。。って気持ち良すぎ反則だろコレ。。。
>... but this feels so good! that should be unfair… !?
マジパネエ1?出るっっ!!!
>It’s really great!? I’m cumming!!!
page 12
タップリ射精したわね.。。嬉しい
>You cum a lot ... I'm very happy ♥
うふふ。。
>Giggling (hehehe) ♥
勢いだけば認めてあげる。。。まだイケそう?
>I'm just going to recognize (acknowledge) your effort ♥♥ ... can you still do it?


(Unexpectedly, happily)? The first season in the preview of the last chapter announced the ova about Riot (disturbance fuss) of mayonnaise.
The road is very long and the wait is too (real transcription black-tailed gull.)

In the first season, even though Rem's clumsy attitude was moderated (= the tail that can’t be seen) it was incredible. W

This time, the part of the maids was just a little, is a pity. If there is a next time, the combination of frederica and petra as maids, also echidna including the fetish of referring to herself as a man (it’s no related with the maids anymore),but I will try to write about that.
Bye bye!
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Hello, here's version 2 of the script for Ofuro Days 5, after revisions from proofreading.

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I'm accepting this editing bounty

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Hi again! I've got some more time for translation work this weekend. I accepted

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18452


And finished. Sorry it took longer than usual. I didn't realize each page was actually two pages. Turned out to be a much longer script than expected.

Edit: Updated with proofreading comments.

----- Page 1 Right
ユリカらぶらぶ
Yurika Lovey Dovey

----- Page 1 Left
ユリカ…
Yurika...

私ずっとこの時を待っていたの
I've been waiting for this for a long time, you know.

だって
Because

私はアキトを愛しているから
I love you, Akito.

----- Page 2 Right
SFX: ちゅぱっ
Kiss

SFX: ぬちゅ
Lick

んあっ…
Mn..ah...

ユ…ユリカ!
Yu..Yurika!

SFX: たぷん
Jiggle

SFX: どかっ
Thud

あっ!
Ah!

----- Page 2 Left
SFX: ぐっ
Grab

あんっ…
Ah...!

どうしたのアキト焦らないで…
Hey, don't be so impatient...

何だか怖いよう…
It's a little scary...

ご…ごめんつい興奮しすぎて
So..Sorry, I was too excited just now.

----- Page 3 Right
そのとおり!ユリカを泣かすような事をしてはいかんぞ!
Exactly! Making Yurika cry is forbidden!

SFX: ずいっ
Zwim

わっ!
Wha!

お…お父様なぜここに?
Fa..Father! Why are you here?

可愛い娘が処女を失おうというのだ心配で仕方がない!
I can't help but be worried when my cute daughter intends to lose her virginity.

それが父親というものだ!
That's what it means to be a father!

処女と童貞ではいろいろわからん事もあるだろう…私がおしえるから続けなさい!
These virgins don't understand many things, do they...Continue! I'll teach you!

SFX: ささ…ずいっと
Now then, let's continue

----- Page 3 Left
あ…あの続けろと言われても…
Ah..Um, even if you tell me to continue...

アキト!早く!
Akito! Quickly!

あ…あのな!気にならないのか?
Eh? Uh, you aren't concerned by this?

だってお父様は私が着替えの時も
Well, even when I was changing my clothes

SFX: はーは!
Haha!

SFX: しゃあぁ…
Slide...

お風呂の時も心配だっていつものぞいてたよ
Even when I was in the bath, he was always worried and checking in on me.

SFX: はーはー
Haha

----- Page 4 Right
だから慣れちゃったよ!
So I've gotten used to it!

SFX: てへ
teehee

そ…それは親子として正しい関係なんだろうか
Is..Is that a proper parent-child relationship?

さあテンカワ君続けなさいユリカが待っておるぞ
Tenkawa-kun, continue! Yurika is waiting!

SFX: ささ…ずぶっと
Now then, onward!

SFX: ドキドキ
Ba-dump!

は…はい
Y...Yes

じゃ…じゃあユリカ
Well...Yurika...

うん!
Yes!

SFX: ぐっ
Pull

----- Page 4 Left
あっ…
Ah...

SFX: ぐみゅ
Rub

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

SFX: びくっ
Tug

あんっ…
Ahn...

SFX: ぐいっ
Pull

SFX: ぷるん
Jiggle

あう…
Ah....

SFX: たぷりん
Spill out

----- Page 5 Right
はあ…んっ…
Haa...mn...

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

ユリカの胸って大きくて柔らかいなあ…
Yurika, your breasts are so big and soft...

SFX: きゅっ
Tweak

とても素敵だよ
Absolutely stunning

SFX: こりこり
Stiffen

ああん…恥ずかしいよ…
Aahn...that's embarassing...

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

SFX: じーっ
Stare

ああ…ユリカのおっぱい…
Ah..your breasts...

----- Page 5 Left
んっ…
Mn....

あっ あふっ…
Ah...ohh..

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

SFX: ちゅぴ
Slick

SFX: くちゅくちゅ
Sluck Sluck

SFX: びく
Twitch

ああっ…
Aah...

はあ…
Hah...

気持ちいい?
Does it feel good?

うん。。。何か変な感じ…
Yes...I'm feeling a bit strange...

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SFX: ぐっ
Grab

あんっ…
Ahn..

SFX: するん
Slip

SFX: てれてれ
Blush

SFX: ドキドキ
Ba-dump

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SFX: ぱっくり
Spread

ああっ…
Ah...

うむ…思ったとおりピンクの美しきワレメじゃ!
Hoho..Just as I thought, what a beautiful, pink slit!

ささ…テンカワ君あそこを指で広げてみたまえ
Now then, Tenkawa-kun, try spreading her pussy!

SFX: はあ…はあ…
Hoho...

は…はい!
Y-Yes!

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SFX: ぐっ
Pull

SFX: ぴろん
Spread

ああっ!そんなにしちゃあだめえ!
Ah! Don't spread it!

SFX: ぷろん
Jiggle

SFX: かあっ
Kyah!

おおう!美しい!汚れ無き処女のおま♀こ!
Hoho! Beautiful! An unsoiled virgin pussy!

しかもピクピクしとるわい
Moreover, such reactions!

さあ…クンニをしてあげなさい
Now then...start licking her.

はい…
Understood...

----- Page 7 Left
SFX: びくっ
Jerk

あっ!
Ah!

おおう!ユリカが感じておる!
Hoho! Yurika's is feeling it!

上の皮を剥いてみなさい
Try to peel away the skin near the top.

そして中のお豆を
Then, with your fingertips

SFX: ぷりん
Squish

指先でくりくりと
Gently massage the clit

SFX: くりっ
Tug

ああん!
Aahn!

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ああん!アキト!気持ちいい!ユリカ変になっちゃう 身体が熱いよ…
Ahn! Akito! It feels good! It's strange, my body is so hot.

あっ!あああっ!
Ah! Aaaah!

SFX: ぷしゃあ
Spray

あああん!
Aaaaah!

SFX: びくっ
Jerk

SFX: ぞくぞくっ
Shiver

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はあ…はあ…
Huff...huff

はあ…
Hah...

SFX: びくっ ピクピク
Quiver Twitch

ユリカいったの?
Did you cum?

う…うん
Y..yes


Giggle

SFX: てれてれ
Blush

そうみたい
It seems so

さあ!ユリカはもうヌレヌレだ一気に処女膜を貫きまえ
Now! Quickly, while she's still wet! Pierce her hymen!

SFX: いよいよか ユリカ…
Yurika...the time has finally come

SFX: ぐっ
Grab

はっ…はい
U..Understood!

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SFX: ぐっ
Prod

ああっ…アキトが私の中に
Aah...you're going inside me

SFX: ドキドキ
Badump Badump

んっ…
Mn....

SFX: ズン
Plunge

SFX: たぷん
Jiggle

ああん!
Aahn!

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SFX: ぐちゅ
Slick

SFX: ずちゅ
Smack

SFX: たぷたぷ
Sway

SFX: ぷるぷる
Quiver

あひっ!アキト!
Ahh! Akito!

ああっ!
Ah-!

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

あっ…
Ah...

ユリカ変になっちゃう 気持ちいいよう…
It feels good! My head is turning blank...

----- Page 10 Right
SFX: ぱん ぱん
Smack Smack

んっ…あん…
Mnn...Ahn...

アキト!
Akito!

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

SFX: ぱん ぱん
Smack Smack

ああっ
Aa-

SFX: たぷん
Jiggle

SFX: ぷるん ぷるん
Shake

いっ…ああん!
I'm going to- Ahnn!

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ああっ…ユリカいっちゃうよう! いっちゃう!
Ah...I'm going to come!

アキト!アキト~!ああん!
Akito! Akito! Ah!!

SFX: ぐちゅん
Schlip

SFX: ぱちゅん
Pound

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ああん!
Aahn!

SFX: どくん
Spurt

SFX: どく どぷっ
Spurt Spurt

あああん!
Aaaaah!

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うむ!見事だ!
Hoho! Splendid!

しかし一発で果てては男がすたるぞテンカワ君
However, being done with just one shot is shameful, Tenkawa-kun

さあユリカニ発目の準備のために口で奉仕してあげなさい
Well then, Yurika! With your mouth, please make preperatiosn for the second shot.

SFX: はにゃ
Eh?

口で?
With my mouth?

SFX: きゅっ
Grasp

アキト…
Akito...

SFX: ずっぷ
Slide

SFX: くちゅん
Suck

SFX: ちゅぷん
Smack

----- Page 12 Left
SFX: ちゅぱ ちゅっ
Slurp Kiss

うっ!
Uhn!

SFX: むくっ
Nom Nom

んっ!
Ngh!

ああっ…凄いアキトのおち♂ ♂ んこんなに大きくなって…
Wow Akito...you're so big...

SFX: ぬちゅ
Drip

ユリカの口に入らないよ…
I can't fit it in my mouth...

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裏スジを舐めたりタマをなでたりするのだ
Lick the underside and rub the head.

うん
Okay.

SFX: ぺろぺろ
Lick Lick

SFX: ちゅぱ ちゅぱ
Suck

SFX: ちゅぷ
Smack

うっ!射精っ!
Unh! I'm coming!

!?
!?

SFX: どぴゅ
Spurt

あっ!
Ah!

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はあ…
Haah...

ごめんユリカもう射精ちゃって
Sorry, Yurika, I came too quick.

こ…これが精液…
Th-This is semen...

アキトの…
Akito's semen...

ユリカ…ぱいズリしてあげなさい!きっとテンカワ君も喜ぶぞ!
Yurika! Give him a paizuri! Tenkawa-kun will definitely enjoy it!

ぱいズリ?
Paizuri?

その巨乳にはさんでしごくのだ!
It's when you put it between your chest and massage him!

SFX: ぽふん
Pomf

う…うん
O...Okay

----- Page 14 Right
SFX: しゅっしゅっしゅっ
Swish Swish

どお?アキト…気持ちいい?
How is it, Akito? Does it feel good?

SFX: しゅぽ しゅぽ
Rub Roll

うん凄いよユリカ!
Yes, it's amazing Yurika!

SFX: びくっ
Flinch

ま…また射精そうだ
I'm..I'm coming again!

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SFX: どぴゅどぴゅんどぴゅ
Splurt Splurt Splurt

SFX: ぴくっ
Startle

あっ!
Ah!

アキト…三発目なのにいっぱい射精ね!
Akito...Even though it's your third time, there's still so much!

うん…ユリカのおっぱいがあまりに気持ちよくて…
Yeah...it's because your breasts felt so good...

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テンカワ君第二ラウンドはアナルSEXでいきたまえ
Tenkawa-kun, for the second round, you should do anal sex.

えっ?アナルってお尻っすか?
Huh? Do you mean..in her butt?

SFX: がーん
Shudder

じゃ…じゃあユリカ…お尻をこっちに…
Well Yurika, turn around this way

う…うん
Y..yes

SFX: はずかしい…
This is embarassing...

SFX: ぷりん
Squish

はう…
Uuu...

----- Page 15 Left
SFX: ぐりっ
Rub

あん…
Ahn...

まいったな…きつくすぼんで指も入らない…
No good..I can't even fit my finger in...

テンカワ君このワセリンを使ってすべりを良くすると良いぞ!
Tenkawa-kun, try using this vaseline!

はい…
Okay...

SFX: ぬろっ
Rub

SFX: ずぬっ
Slide

おっ!入るぞ!
Splendid! You did it!

ああっ!
Ah-!

SFX: ぶるっ
Shake

----- Page 16 Right
んあっ…はう…
Mn..ah...uuu

SFX: ぬちゅる
Shlup

SFX: くちゅくちゅ
Sluck Sluck

あああっ…
Ahhh-...

SFX: びくっ
Flinch

ユリカもう一本入れるよ
Yurika, I'm going to try two fingers.

SFX: ぐっ
Squish

あっ!アキト!んっ!
Ah! Akito! Mn!

SFX: ぞくぞく
Shiver

ああっ!
Ah-!

----- Page 16 Left
凄いやユリカ肛門はきゅんと締まってるのに中はぷにぷにしてて柔らかいんだね
Amazing, Even though her anus is clenched, the inside is soft and squishy.

SFX: ぐっ
Pull

SFX: くぷんくぷん
Shove

あひっ ひっ!
Ahee! Eee!

そろそろ入りそうかな?
It looks about ready, hm?

SFX: ぐっ
Prod

SFX: めりめり
Wiggle

おっ!入るぞ!ちょっときついけど
Oh! It's in! Looks a bit tight, though...

あっ!
Ah!

SFX: びくっ
Flinch

ああっ!
Ah-!

SFX: ぷるる
Quiver

----- Page 17 Right
はうあん!
Eeeyaaahhhn!

SFX: びくっ
Jolt

SFX: ズン
Plunge

----- Page 17 Left
あああん!
Aaaaah!

SFX: ぱん ぱん
Smack Smack

SFX: ぱん ぱん
Smack Smack

ひっ!
Ee-!

SFX: たぷたぷ
Sway

あひっ!
Ah! Ee!

----- Page 18 Right
ああっ…痛い!
Aah, it hurts!

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

で…でも気持ちいいよアキト…
But...But it also feels good...

ユリカ凄いよおま♀こもお尻も凄く良いよ!
Yurika, it feels amazing. Your butt...your pussy...both are fantastic

SFX: もみもみ
Grope

SFX: たぷたぷ
Sway

おっぱいの揉み心地も最高だよ
Even your breasts...I love touching them!

はう
Pant

恥ずかしよ
Ah, that's embarassing.

ああん ユリカお尻でこんなに感じちゃうなんて
Aahn To think it would feel this good from my butt

はあ
Gasp

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うおっ!もう射精そうだ!
Hoh! It looks like another shot is coming!

SFX: ぱん ぱん
Smack Smack

ああん!ユリカも気持ちいい!
Aahn! I'm also feeling it!

SFX: たぷん たぷん
Jiggle Jiggle

ユリカいっちゃう!お尻でいちゃあうよう!
I'm going to come! I'm going to come from my butt!

あっ
Aah-!

SFX: ぱん ぱん
Smack Smack

アキト~!
Akito~!

----- Page 19
SFX: どくん どく どく
Splurt Spurt Spurt

SFX: びくびく
Flinch Tremble

あああああん!
Aaaaaaaaaahn!

----- Page 20 Right
はっ…
Ha...

SFX: くたっ
Limp

はあ…はあ…
Huff...huff

うむ…美しかったぞユリカ…そしてテンカワ君も合格だ!
Hoho! That was beautiful, Yurika! And Tenkawa-kun too! You passed magnificently!

ユリカも大満足だったようだしな!
You've completely satisfied Yurika!

よし!結婚までに四十八手全て習得するのだ!
Alright! Next up are all the positions from the Shijuuhatte! You need to learn it before you're married!
Note: The Shijuuhatte is the Japanese Kamasutra

うう…これが義父に…
Uh...hearing that from your father-in-law...

四十八手?
Kamasutra?

SFX: はにゃ?
What's that?

おしまい
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----- Page Title
成年向け
For Young Men

シェリル✕ランカのレズ娘娘定食
Sheryl X Ranka Nyan Nyan Lesbian Course

成年向け
For Young Men

シェリル✕ランカのレズ娘娘定食
Sheryl X Ranka Nyan Nyan Lesbian Course

----- Page 1
うふふっ…!また一段素敵な裸になったわね。ランカちゃん
Ufufu-! What a beautiful naked body you have. Ranka, once again you've surpassed my expectations!

そ、そうですか…?シェリルさんが自信つけさせてくれたから…
Is..Is that so? It's all thanks to the confidence you gave me...

乳首もう勃ってるよ?
Your nipples are already hard, you know...

や、やだ…!
Oh, Oh no!

----- Page 2
随分前からするって約束してたのに、遅くなっちゃったわ。ごめんね?
I made this promise so long ago...Sorry, but it's long overdue, isn't it?

いえ…。ていうか、シェリルさん何もう自分の触ってるんですか!?私の前で…
Not at all! Rather, you're already touching yourself! Right in front of me, no less...

あら。する前にあそこのコンディションを確かめるのは当然じゃない?
Oh? But if I do this in front of you, it's easy for you to see what condition this place is in, right?

----- Page 3
ランカちゃんこそ、今日はコンディションどうなの?久しぶりに溜まってるんだから明日の朝まで寝かせないわ
よ?
And how is your condition, my dear? I've been waiting so long for this...I'm not going to let you sleep at all tonight, you know.

はい!バッチりです!ほら…見てください!シェリルさんに負けないように…一生懸命ついていきます!
Yes! I'm all ready to go! Look...see? I'll do my best to keep up with you! I'm not gonna lose!

そんなに股間広げちゃって…。随分無防備なのね?
With your legs spread open like that, aren't you a bit defenseless?

シェリルさんの前だからですよぉ…?
Well, you're the only one here now...

----- Page 4
じゃあ、セックスの前に穴のコンディションもチェックしておかないとね?ほら…見なさい?私のこんな穴見せ
るの…ランカちゃんだけなんだからね?
Well, before we begin, can you check this hole too? Here, look, I would only show this to you, Ranka.

こ、興奮してきました…!シェリルさんの…アソコ…は、とってもキレイで…。けど、え…エッチが始まると魔
物みたいに貪欲で…
I'm getting excited just looking at it! Sheryl, it's stunningly beautiful...! But, when we start doing naughty things, it becomes an insatiable monster...

うふふっ!なに?私のアソコはバジュラ並みってこと?
Ufufu... Are you saying this is about the same as a Vajra?

ち…違います!すみません…
N-No! Not at all! Sorry...

----- Page 5
さあ、ランカちゃんのも見せない?
Now, can you show me yours?

はい!…ど、どうですか?
Sure! ...How...how is it?

シェリフさんが来る前にちょっといじって…コンディション整えておいたんですけど…
Before you came, I tried to fiddle with it a little, make it a little more tidy.

うふふっ!嬉しい心がけだわ。…素敵。臆病そうだけど、花開きたくて疼いてる女性器…。今夜も真っ赤に満開
まで咲かせてあげる
Ufufu...I'm touched by your preparation. Exquisite. A shy flower that's just aching to bloom. And tonight, I'll help it bloom into a beautiful cherry blossom.

ありがとうございます!
Thank you very much!

それにしても…意外と毛深いのね?
Even so, it's surprisingly hairy down there...

…やだぁ…。剃った方がいいですか?
Oh no...Should I have shaved?

----- Page 6
じゃあ…そろそろ始めましょうか?2人だけの熱いライブを…
Well then, it's about time we started our very own passionate, private concert...

……
......

どうしたの?
What's wrong?

あ…。シェリルさんの裸…凄くキレイだなと思って…。わ、私なんかがシェリルさんの…相手でいいのかな…っ

Ah...I was thinking how beautiful your body is. Are you really okay with someone like me?

あら?セックスの前で卑屈になるようじゃ、いい女になれないわよ?
Oh? Such self-deprecation right before sex? You won't become a full-fledged woman like that, you know.

だ…だって…おっぱいとか違いすぎて…
But...Our bodies are so different! ...Like our breasts-!

----- Page 7
足、広げなさい?
Can you spread your legs for me?

はい!
Okay!

いい?おっぱいは大きさじゃないの。ランカの愛らしい性感帯の一つとして、私の愛を受けとめてくれればいい
んだから
See? Breasts aren't about size at all. Rather, your breasts are just another erogenous zone that can receive my love.

は…はい!恥ずかしいけど…頑張ります!
O..Okay! It's a little embarrassing, but I'll try my best!

それでも、生まれつきのおっぱいの大きさで悩むんだったらその分女性器で目一杯感じる女なりなさい?女性器
はおっぱいと違って、セックスする相手しか知る事ができない、愛を感じ合うためだけについてる穴なんだから

Also, if you're that concerned about the size of your breasts, you should instead think about becoming a sensual woman with a splendid pussy. Unlike your breasts, your pussy is something only your partner knows, since it's a place that's meant solely for exchanging love.

…シェリルさん。言ってること、エッチすぎて意味解んないです
...I don't think I get it..it was a little too lewd.

----- Page 8
仕方ないわね…。ほら、見て?これが私の女性器の中身。情熱的なのは、ランカちゃんが一番よく知ってるでし
ょ?
Well it can't be helped...Here, look at the insides of my pussy. Ranka, you know this passionate area the best, right?

は、はい…。ああ…!凄い!--見てるだけで…今すぐセックスしたくなってきました!
Y..Yes! Ah..Amazing! Just by looking at it, I'm getting so wet!

でしょ?おっぱいなんか、普段でもランカちゃんが見たいって言うなら、いくらでも見せてあげるし、触らせて
あげるけど、女性器はセックスの時だけしか晒せない、とっておきでしょ?
Right? Even though it's typical, whenever you want to touch or feel my breasts, I'll gladly let you. But, my pussy can only be experienced during sex. The pussy is special, you know.

普段触ったら、しばらく口聞いてくれなかったんですけど…
Typically, when I touch you, you don't hear anything I say for a while...

----- Page 9
ランカちゃんのも、広げて見せて覧なさい?恥ずかしくてもいいから、堂々で見せてみなさい?
Ranka, can you spread your pussy for me? Display it proudly, even if you're embarrassed.

は…はい!見せてください!
Y-Yes! Please take a look!

私に堂々と見せてると、自信が湧いてこない?
Well, look at you. All this confidence suddenly bursting forth!

た…確かに…。シェリルさんと早く愛し合いたくて…我慢できなくなってきました…!
Well, it's because I want to make love to you as soon as possible...I'm can't wait any longer!

私の女性器と比べて、卑屈になる?
When you compare our pussies, do you feel self-conscientious?

いえ…!早く…早くたくさん愛して貰いたいないなって気持ちで…いっぱいです!
Not at all! All I'm feeling right now is...I want to make love to you!

素敵…。それでこそ女よ、ランカちゃん。女性器は女が求める愛そのものの形をしてるんだから
Exquisite. That's exactly what being a woman is. Ranka, your pussy is the ideal love that women seek

----- Page 10
来なさい、ランカちゃん
Now, come, Ranka

あんっ!
Ahn!

ランカちゃん…相変わらず体温高いわね?あら…いきなりアソコをくっつけるの?
Ranka..as usual, your body is running hot. Ah...you're rubbing against that place so suddenly?

だって…シェリルさんがあんな話するから…
Well, it's because of what you were saying earlier....

----- Page 11
すっかりイヤらしくなっちゃって…。誰のせいかしら?
Oh my...it's gotten quite lewd. I wonder who's fault that is?

シェリルさんのせいですよぉ…
It's your fault....Sheryl....

私、ランカちゃんのおっぱい好きよ?精一杯寄せてるしぐさがカワイイ
I love the way you're playing with your breasts...it's very cute!

きゃっ!い、いつの間にか…対抗してました…
Kya! Why are you suddenly teasing me?

----- Page 12
ちょっとイジワルしたくなってきちゃった…。ランカちゃんの女性器、足でいじってあげるわ。広げなさい?
Hehe, I just wanted to bully you a little bit...Ranka, I'm going to rub you with my feet, can you spread your pussy for me?

えぇっ!足…ですか?舐めて貰いたかったんですけど…
Eh-! With your feet? I was hoping you could lick me but...

ランカちゃん、舐めるとすぐイッちゃうんだもの。いいから広げなさい?
If I like you, you'd cum immediately. So, can you spread yourself for me?

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はい…。あぁん!シェリルさんの足が…私の…アソコ、かき乱してるぅ…!
Okay....Aahn! Your feet are stirring me up!

その割には嬉しそうな顔してるじゃない?
Even though you say that, you're making such a wonderful face, you know?

えぇっ…!私…そんなに嬉しそうですか…?
Eeeeh?! I..I look that happy?

素敵な笑みが自然とこぼれてるわよ?うふふっ…!
Your wonderful smile is peeking through all over. Ufufu!

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もう我慢できないでしょ?ほら…来なさい?私の上に乗って、イッて見せて頂戴?
You can't hold it in any longer, right? Come, get on top of me. I want to see you cum...

は…はい!
O-Okay!

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アハァ…!感じる!シェリルさんの鼓動…!あそこが熱狂包まれてるぅ…!
Ah..hah...I'm feeling your beat..! My pussy is getting sucked into it!

私というステージの上で…ランカちゃんの熱唱を見せて!さあ…っ!
With me as your stage, please put on a wonderful performance! Go ahead...!

イキます…っ!見てて下さい…シェリルさん!私…イキそ…ぁ…イッ!イク!今イッてる…!今イッてます…私
!アハッ…アハァァァァッ!
Here I go-! Please watch, Sheryl! I.....I'm going to cum, Ah! I'm coming! Right now I'm coming! Ahh...Haah...Aaaaaah!

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あとがき!
Afterword

お疲れさまでした!
Thank you very much!

レズ萌え!の新スタイル本、記念の第一冊目は、前々からずぅぅぅぅっと出したかったシェリルxランカ本です

This is the first release of Lezmoe!'s new book style, a Sheryl X Ranka book! A memorable occasion, I've been wanting to release this for a very long time!

時期は過ぎてしまいましたが、昨今の同人市場の流行りの去るスピードは異常なので、気にせずに出すことにし
ました!
This has taken too long, but recently on the doujin market, the speed of how fast popularity goes away has been unusual. So, I threw aside my worries and just released this!

今回から白黒の漫画ではなく、フルカラーのイラスト+シナリオというスタイルになりました。
From now on, instead of white and black, we've decided to release a full-color + script style manga!

これは、イラストのお湯の香りもさる事ながら、シナリオを書いている僕にも少しは陽の目をあてて欲しい!と
いう事で実現しました。シナリオは絵に比べて、極めて地味ぃ~な仕事で、あってもなくても同じみたいな扱い
をされる事もしばしばでして…(-_-)
Not only Oyu no Kaori, the illustrator, but also me, the script writer, really wanted for this manga to see the light of day. Through those feelings, we finally made this a reality. Compared to drawing, the scenario is a fairly unobtrusive thing to work on. The work is often treated the same whether the scenario is there or not. ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sleep.gif))

同人稼業の中で管理とか営業とか色々やる事になってしまいましたが…
Doing doujin work means I had to handle various things like management and business operations.

最近はそのせいか、本末転倒な状態だったので、やっと本来やりたい事を思う存分やらせて頂きましたo(^-^)o
Because of that, I was in a state of mismatched priorities. But finally, I was able to do the things I wanted to my heart's content. o((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif))o

僕のシナリオは昔から、色々メチャクチャでぶっ飛んでいて、プロになるなら「直せ」とよく言われるのですが
(笑)、
My scripts have long been very disorganized...If I were a pro, I'd definitely be told "Fix it" a lot. But...

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プロの世界も営業を介して覗くと色々と……なそうで。
Even in the professional world, if you look at it in terms of sales, there's still quite a lot of.....ahem.

このまま自分のアクを全開に出していくのが良さそうです。
At this rate my bad habits will come back

でも、マクロスFファンの皆様。特にシェリルファンの皆様。本当にすみませんでしたm(_ _)m
However, to all the fans of Macross F. Especially to fans of Sheryl...I'm very sorry m(_ _)m

書いてるうちに、脳から変な汁が出てしまっていたようです(>_<)
When I was writing the script, it seems a weird idea popped into my brain

サークルレズ萌え!では暫くの間、社会実験の一環として、最先端の流行ではないジャンルの同人誌を出してい
きます
For the time being, Circle Lezmoe!, as part of a pilot experiment, will be publishing doujinshi that doesn't go along with the latest craze

昨今はインターネットやソーシャルメディアの普及や、東方の終わらないブームなどの影響で、同人誌のジャン
ルが一部の流行作品にのみ集中したり、流行があっという間に廃れる理想が、極めて深刻なレベルになってきた
と思っています。
Recently, through the popularization of the internet and social media, along with the influence of touhou's never-ending boom, the doujinshi genre has been focusing on only one part of what's popular. I think that the ideal that what's popular will go out of fashion in a blink of an eye has gotten to an extremely grave level.

そこで、マイナージャンルで数字や前例実績を出し、他の作家さんや企業がやりやすくなるような土壌作りを目
指してきます。
So, if you increase the numbers and previous accomplishments of the minor genres, my aim is to create a breeding ground where it would be easy to do business for other creators

皆様も、好きなジャンルの本だった時はお買い求め頂ければ幸いです。
I would be very happy if everyone would purchase books of their favorite genre

なお、詳しいことはブログにて掲載しております。
In addition, I will publish more details on my blog.

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ここまで読んでいただきたありがとうございます!
If you've read this far, thank you very much!

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お世話になっております!
We are truly grateful!

絵描きのお湯の香りです!
This is Oyu no Kaori, the artist!

この同人誌の絵を描くのは大変でした…w
Drawing this doujinshi's art was quite tough, haha

背景は真っ白、裸だけで、1ページを埋めるのはなかなかサマにならず、なんとかならないかと思い、毛を付け
足す事にしました
Since it's just naked bodies and the background is all white, filling up a single page seemed like it would never come. So, I decided to draw add in pubic hair.

存在感が増し、なかなか生生しくて気に入っています!w
It added more realism. I rather like the rather raw feeling it has! haha

ご購入いただき、本当にありがとうございました!
Thank you very much for purchasing this manga!


Kuro

中二病とも小四病とも違う、謎の電波受信中のシナリオライター。
I'm different from a "Chuunibyou" and different from a "Shouyonbyou". I'm the mysterious radio wave receiver scriptwriter
Note: Chuunibyou = Second year middle school sickness = When kids act cringy in an effort to be cool. Shouyonbyou = 4th year elementary school sickness. Radio wave receiver = He's been receiving radio waves and that's causing him to be very very strange

高校時代から行き続けた趣味の銭湯巡りが、地味に千軒を超えていた…。そんな三十路岬。
My hobby of going to Indoor bathhouses, which I've had since I was a high school student, has modestly gone beyond 1000 different places. By age 30, no less.
Note: 三十路岬 is a somewhat famous song from lucky star. He says he's 30 with the first 3 characters, then probably was reminded of the song and added the last character.

最近気になっている団地は、小田急線秦野駅からバスの下大槻団地。潰れたスーパーの2階がテラスのようにな
ているのを初めて見て、20分ほど感動していた。
Recently I've been interested in the Shimoozukidanchi bus stop, down from Hadano Station on the Odakyuu line. On the second floor of the bankrupt supermarket, a terrace of some sorts appeared. The first time I saw it, I was so impressed, I stood there for a good 20 minutes.

お湯の香り
Oyu no Kaori

サークルレズ萌え!の絵描きです!最近ハマっている事は、K○RAのお尻の振り方を、スローモーション映像でじ
っくり見ることです!
Hello, I'm the artist for Circle Lezmoe! Recently, I've been addicted to the swinging of a certain K○RA's butt. I've even carefully watched it in slow motion!

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誌名:シェリルXランカのレズ娘娘定食
Title: Sheryl X Ranka Nyan Nyan Lesbian Course

発行者:お湯の香り
Publisher: Oyu no Kaori

サークル:レズ萌え!
Circle: Lezmoe!

印刷所:母淫印刷
Printing Office: Boin Printing

発行日:2011年10月17日
Publication Date: 2011/10/17

レズ萌えコミックス59
Lezmoe Comics 59

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